Adultery The Villain System

[सुमन]

Ab se Volume II start hogi. Volume 1, pichhle chapte ke sath khatm ho gayi thi.
main aaj ek chapter aaj post kar raha hu.

Chapter 01: Killer​

 

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[RAAZ]

Chapter 07: Juhi-Rahul​

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Juhi

Idhar main apne room se bahar aaya aur guest room me taiyar hone chala gaya. Main chahta to Juhi ke sath jabardasti bhi kar sakta tha. Aur Juhi bhi Suraj se badla lene ke chakkar me mujhse sab kuch kar baithati. Lekin main nahi chahta tha ki kisi ki nafrat ka fayda uthao.

Jab main taiyar hokar apne room me gaya tab tak Juhi naha li thi aur apne kal wale kapde pahan kar taiyar ho gayi thi.

Main wahi sofe par baith gaya. Wo mere samne bed par baith gayi. Wah nervous hokar apni anguliyo ko madod rahi thi. Uski nervousness dekh maine bola, “tum jo puchhna chahti ho wo puch sakti ho.”

“Ummm haaa…” mere achanak se bolne se wo ghabra gayi. Wah sambhalte hue boli, “tum mujhe yaha kyu laye?”

“Kuchh jaldi nahi pucha tumne. Ye sawal?” main hanste hue usse bola. “Sach sunana chahti ho ya jhut?”

“Sach” bina kuch soche samjhe Juhi bol uthi. Main muskuraya. “Soch lo sach bahut kadwa hota hai.

“Baad me jakhm to nahi deta.” Juhi boli. Main ha me apna sar hilaya. Juhi ne sahi bola tha. Sach kadwa jarur hota hai. Lekin thodi der ke liye. Lekin jab wahi sach baad me pata chale to bahut gehra dard deta hai. Jaise ki Juhi ke sath jo Suraj ne kiya tha. Nafrat karne lagi thi wo ab.

Main sochte hue bola, “do karan hai. Pahla mujhe Suraj se badla lena tha. Aur dusra...”

“Main samjhi nahi” Juhi bich me hi boli. “Tum Suraj se badla lena chahte to mujhe kyu laye.”

Main Juhi ki chehre ko dekha. Jab usne Suraj ka naam liya tha to uski ankho me dard aur nafrat dono bhare hue the. Maine kuch socha aur bola, “Suraj meri mangetar par gandi nazar daal raha tha. Isliye maine uski GF, yani ki tumko utha kar laya. Lekin kal raat tumhari aansu dekh main ruk gaya. Jo pahle hi tut gaya main usko aur todna nahi chahta tha.”

Meri baat sunkar Juhi ek tak mujhe dekhti rah gayi. Main akhir munh par hi uski r*pe karne ki baat kar raha tha. Wo bhauchakki si dekhti reh gayi. Lekin system ke notification se mujhe pata chal gaya ki mera impression uske upar achha hai.

[*ding* Aapne Side heroine Juhi par achha impression jamaya. Aapko 2000 points milte hai. Total Points: 2000, Juhi Affection: 20%]

Juhi bahut der tak shant baithi rahi. Usne baad me puchha, “aur dusri baat kya thi?”

Main sidhe hokar sofe par baith gaya. Aur gambhir awaj me bola, “meri aur tumhari kahani lagbhag same hai. Tumhari kadra Suraj nahi karta, aur meri kadra meri mangetar nahi karti.”

Juhi meri baat sunkar chauk gayi. “Aap to apni mangetar se bahut pyar karte ho. Akhir usse badla lene ke liye mujhe utha laya tha yaha.”

Main khali hansi hanste hue bola, “haa main hi bas pyar karta hu. Wo nafrat karti hai mujhse. Pichle 15 saalo se uske nakhre utha raha hu. Wo bhav bhi nahi deti mujhe.”

Usko meri baat sunkar dukh hua. Wah mere paas aakar baith gayi. Aur meri hath ko pakad kar bolne lagi. “Sab thik ho jayega. Bharosa rakhiye apne aap par.”

“He he he… kya bharosa rakhe. Kal maine shadi todne ki baat ki. To uske chehre par bahut khushi dekhi. Mujhe apne aap par daya aa rahi thi.” main thoda udas hote hue bola. Aur mere kano me system ki notification baji.

[*ding* Side heroine Juhi is impressed by you. Aapko 500 points milte hai. Total Points: 2500, Juhi Affection: 25%]

Wah aage kuch bolti ki doorbell baji. Maine Juhi ko apne se alag karte hue, gate kholne gaya. Mere samne maid kapde ka ek bag leke khadi thi. “Young master! Ye lijiye kapde. Jaise size aapne bola tha waisa hi hai.”

“Hmmm! Thik hai. Aaj yaha ka pura kamra saaf kar dena aur ek bedroom second floor par sahi kar dena.” main maid ko instruction dete hue bola.

“Yes young master.” maid boli aur apne kaam par lag gayi. Main kapda le jakar Juhi ko thama di. “Jao taiyar ho jao main tumhe kahi aur le kar chalta hu.”

Juhi bina kuch bole taiyar ho gayi. Main Maid ko kuch baate bata kar Juhi ke sath car se apne ghar ki or nikal gaya.​

Car me baith jab maine Pari se baat karne laga. “Pari status dikhao to.”

[Ok Rahul.]

Meri mind me ek window open ho gaya. Yah to maine pahle bhi dekhi thi. Antar ye tha ki isme ek Martial arts skill add ho gayi thi. Aur Juhi ke baare me bhi ek row ban gaya tha. Maine Pari se puchha. “Asli kahani me to Juhi kewal supporting character thi. Usse points kyon mile.”

[Rahul, tumhe abhi main yah jankari nahi de sakti. Kyunki tumhara level bahut kam hai. Bas itna kah sakti hu.]

“It’s okay Pari. koi baat nahi.” maine baad me baat karne ka bol apni driving par dhyan dene laga.

System based yah third story pad raha hoon aur aap sab acchi likh rahey hai. Apka concept thoda change hai ki kahani me as a villian act kar rahay hai aur story ko naya dimension me start kia hai . Dekhtay hai aage aisay hi punctuality and interesting rahegi. Anyway zabardast likh rahey ho

 

[Dragon.]

Waiting suman ji

 

[Mk1]

Waiting bro

 

[dev61901]

Chapter 05: Juhi, Rahul ke ghar​

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Main car se bahar nikla. Abhi ek baar phir club me jane ka soch hi raha tha ki mujhe Juhi bahar aati hui dikhai di.

Usne apne kapde badal liye the. Aur makeup bhi hata li thi. Wah Shreya ki tarah to nahi lekin bahut sundar thi. Aise hi Suraj ne ise 9 points nahi diye the. Usne apne balo ki choti bana li thi.

Dance practice ki wajah se uski sharir par koi bhi charbi nahi thi. Uski breasts medium size ke the. Aur gand bhi perfect gol shape me thi. Sabse badi baat uske chehre par masumiyat jhalak rahi thi. Nili aankhe raat me taro ki tarah timtima rahi thi. Usko dekh kar aisa nahi lag raha tha ki uska abhi abhi break up hua hai.

Juhi ne mujhe dekh liya. Maine usko haath dekar apne paas bulaya. Wah mere paas aa gayi aur boli, “Sir, Kya baat hai?”

Uski awaz bahut hi mithi thi. Ek pal ke liye main to kho sa gaya. Maine apne aap ko sambhalte hue bola, “hii, mera naam Rahul Singh hai. Umm mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai. Lekin ye sahi jagah nahi hai. Kya hum car me baith kar baat kar sakte hai.”

Juhi ek baar mujhko upar se niche tak dekhi. Main samajh raha tha ki kisi ko pahli baar me hi pasand nahi karega. Wah kuch der tak ghuri aur fir apni gardan hila kar haami bhadi, “thik hai”

Maine copilot wali sit ki taraf ka gate khola aur usko baithaya. Wahi dusri taraf main driver wali sit ke bagal me baith gaya. Mai baith kar Juhi se baat karne ka sochne laga. Mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki main baat kaise shuru karu.

Hamari chuppi ko todte hue Juhi boli, “boliye kya baat hai.”

Main hich kichaya aur bola, “Tum abhi kaisi ho?”

Juhi: (hairat se) umm…

Main: abhi abhi tumhara breakup hua hai. To tum kaise feel kar rahi hi?

Juhi: *silent*

Main: umm sorry. Darasal jab main apni mangetar ke sath club se nikal raha tha to Suraj meri mangetar ko gandi nazro se ghur raha tha. Isliye maine uska pichha kiya. Tabhi maine tum dono ki baate sun li.

Meri baat ko sunkar Juhi ne rahat ki saans li. Use samajh aa gaya ki main uska pichha nahi kar raha hu. Sath hi sath uski ankho me aanshoo bahne lage.

Jab maine dekha ki wah subak rahi hai. To maine kuchh nahi bola. Maine driving karni suru kar di. Juhi abhi bhi break up se nahi ubhari thi. Main car ko sahar ki sadko par ghumata raha. Halaki speed bahut slow thi. Maine aadhe ghante tak car chalai. Tab jakar wah apne aap ko sahi kar ke bahar ki or dekhne lagi.

Jab maine dekha ki wah sahi ho gayi hai to maine gadi ko apni personal villa ki taraf ghuma diya. Villa sahar se bahar ek pahadi par bani hui thi. Waha ki chhat se pura sahar ka najara dikhta hai.

“Jakar naha lo. Main chhat par hu. Khana chhat par arrange ho jayega. Tum naha kar chhat par aa jana.” maine usko bathroom ka darwaja dikhate hue bola. Sath me hi maine apni ek t-shirt aur lower de di.

Wah kuchh nahi boli. Sayad wah aaj main uske sath thoda sa force bhi karta to wo chudai ke liye maan jati lekin main koi uska fayda nahi uthana chahata tha.

Main apne kamre me jakar nahane laga. Maine Pari se puchha, “Pari meri strength me 3, agility me 4 aur physique me 3 point add kar do.”

[*Ding* strength increases by 3 points. Strength:11]

[*Ding* Agility increases by 4 points. Agility:11]

[*Ding* Physique increases by 3 points. Physique:12]

[*Ding* transaction completed. 1000 points deducted. Total points: 0]

[Host aapka Status iss prakar hai.] [Physique:12] [Agility:11] [Strength:11] [Wisdom:12] [Charm:15]

Iske sath hi mere sharir me badlaw aane lage. Halaki kuchh jyada badlaw nahi aaya tha. Lekin dhyan se dekhne par malum chal raha tha. Uske sharir se kuchh chipchipa badbudar chij nikalne laga. Wah samajh gaya ki ye uske sharir ki gandagi hai. Jo body change hone ki wajah se bahar aa gayi hai.

Wah jaldi jaldi nahane laga. Idhar Juhi, jo ab naha kar taiyar hokar apne aap ko aine me nihar rahi thi. Aaj pehli baar wah kisi ladke ke ghar par aayi thi, yaha tak ki usne uske kapde bhi pahan rakhe the. Lekin aaj Juhi ke man ekdam shant tha. Wah Rahul par ek baar vishwas karna chah rahi thi.

Wah Rahul ke bataye anusar chhat par chali gayi. Railing ke sahare tikkar sahar me raat ko jal rahi battiyo ko dekhn kar Juhi ko maja aa raha tha.

Maine khana order kar liya tha. Kuch der baad hi order delivery ho gaya. Maine delivery boy se kah kar khana chhat par bhijwa diya. Sath hi maine do wine ki glass bhi apne sath layi. Sath me ek purani wine ki bottle bhi le kar aaya. Maine bahut achhe se khane ki plate laga di. Juhi ye sab bade gaur se dekh rahi thi.

Jab maine sab thik se laga diya to usko bulaya. Wah abhi bhi chup chap mujhe observe kar rahi thi. Usne kuch bolne ki himmat tak nahi uthai thi.

Hum dono chup chap khana khane lage. Jab dono khana kha liye. To maine uske aur apne liye wine ki glass bhari. Dono sath sath wine pine lage. Aadhe ghante tak hum dono ne wine ki bottle khatam kar di.

Juhi ki nashe me aankhe band ho rahi thi. Uske gaal gulabi ho gaye the. Bilkul kisi seb ki tarah lag rahi thi. Man kar raha tha ki abhi kaat khau. Lekin maine koi bhi jald bazi nahi dikhai. Agar sex karna hota to kab ka kar chuka hota. Lekin main Juhi ko puri tarah se apna banana chahta tha. Isliye maine koi jaldbazi nahi dikhai.

Mujhe ya yu kahe ki purane Rahul ki wine pine ki aadat thi. Isliye mujhe nasha nahi hui thi. Maine bartan aur baki sab kuchh utha kar sink me rakh diya. Jab main chhat par aaya to Juhi sapno ki duniya me chali gayi thi.​

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[dev61901]

Chapter 07: Juhi-Rahul​

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Juhi

Idhar main apne room se bahar aaya aur guest room me taiyar hone chala gaya. Main chahta to Juhi ke sath jabardasti bhi kar sakta tha. Aur Juhi bhi Suraj se badla lene ke chakkar me mujhse sab kuch kar baithati. Lekin main nahi chahta tha ki kisi ki nafrat ka fayda uthao.

Jab main taiyar hokar apne room me gaya tab tak Juhi naha li thi aur apne kal wale kapde pahan kar taiyar ho gayi thi.

Main wahi sofe par baith gaya. Wo mere samne bed par baith gayi. Wah nervous hokar apni anguliyo ko madod rahi thi. Uski nervousness dekh maine bola, “tum jo puchhna chahti ho wo puch sakti ho.”

“Ummm haaa…” mere achanak se bolne se wo ghabra gayi. Wah sambhalte hue boli, “tum mujhe yaha kyu laye?”

“Kuchh jaldi nahi pucha tumne. Ye sawal?” main hanste hue usse bola. “Sach sunana chahti ho ya jhut?”

“Sach” bina kuch soche samjhe Juhi bol uthi. Main muskuraya. “Soch lo sach bahut kadwa hota hai.

“Baad me jakhm to nahi deta.” Juhi boli. Main ha me apna sar hilaya. Juhi ne sahi bola tha. Sach kadwa jarur hota hai. Lekin thodi der ke liye. Lekin jab wahi sach baad me pata chale to bahut gehra dard deta hai. Jaise ki Juhi ke sath jo Suraj ne kiya tha. Nafrat karne lagi thi wo ab.

Main sochte hue bola, “do karan hai. Pahla mujhe Suraj se badla lena tha. Aur dusra...”

“Main samjhi nahi” Juhi bich me hi boli. “Tum Suraj se badla lena chahte to mujhe kyu laye.”

Main Juhi ki chehre ko dekha. Jab usne Suraj ka naam liya tha to uski ankho me dard aur nafrat dono bhare hue the. Maine kuch socha aur bola, “Suraj meri mangetar par gandi nazar daal raha tha. Isliye maine uski GF, yani ki tumko utha kar laya. Lekin kal raat tumhari aansu dekh main ruk gaya. Jo pahle hi tut gaya main usko aur todna nahi chahta tha.”

Meri baat sunkar Juhi ek tak mujhe dekhti rah gayi. Main akhir munh par hi uski r*pe karne ki baat kar raha tha. Wo bhauchakki si dekhti reh gayi. Lekin system ke notification se mujhe pata chal gaya ki mera impression uske upar achha hai.

[*ding* Aapne Side heroine Juhi par achha impression jamaya. Aapko 2000 points milte hai. Total Points: 2000, Juhi Affection: 20%]

Juhi bahut der tak shant baithi rahi. Usne baad me puchha, “aur dusri baat kya thi?”

Main sidhe hokar sofe par baith gaya. Aur gambhir awaj me bola, “meri aur tumhari kahani lagbhag same hai. Tumhari kadra Suraj nahi karta, aur meri kadra meri mangetar nahi karti.”

Juhi meri baat sunkar chauk gayi. “Aap to apni mangetar se bahut pyar karte ho. Akhir usse badla lene ke liye mujhe utha laya tha yaha.”

Main khali hansi hanste hue bola, “haa main hi bas pyar karta hu. Wo nafrat karti hai mujhse. Pichle 15 saalo se uske nakhre utha raha hu. Wo bhav bhi nahi deti mujhe.”

Usko meri baat sunkar dukh hua. Wah mere paas aakar baith gayi. Aur meri hath ko pakad kar bolne lagi. “Sab thik ho jayega. Bharosa rakhiye apne aap par.”

“He he he… kya bharosa rakhe. Kal maine shadi todne ki baat ki. To uske chehre par bahut khushi dekhi. Mujhe apne aap par daya aa rahi thi.” main thoda udas hote hue bola. Aur mere kano me system ki notification baji.

[*ding* Side heroine Juhi is impressed by you. Aapko 500 points milte hai. Total Points: 2500, Juhi Affection: 25%]

Wah aage kuch bolti ki doorbell baji. Maine Juhi ko apne se alag karte hue, gate kholne gaya. Mere samne maid kapde ka ek bag leke khadi thi. “Young master! Ye lijiye kapde. Jaise size aapne bola tha waisa hi hai.”

“Hmmm! Thik hai. Aaj yaha ka pura kamra saaf kar dena aur ek bedroom second floor par sahi kar dena.” main maid ko instruction dete hue bola.

“Yes young master.” maid boli aur apne kaam par lag gayi. Main kapda le jakar Juhi ko thama di. “Jao taiyar ho jao main tumhe kahi aur le kar chalta hu.”

Juhi bina kuch bole taiyar ho gayi. Main Maid ko kuch baate bata kar Juhi ke sath car se apne ghar ki or nikal gaya.​

Car me baith jab maine Pari se baat karne laga. “Pari status dikhao to.”

[Ok Rahul.]

Meri mind me ek window open ho gaya. Yah to maine pahle bhi dekhi thi. Antar ye tha ki isme ek Martial arts skill add ho gayi thi. Aur Juhi ke baare me bhi ek row ban gaya tha. Maine Pari se puchha. “Asli kahani me to Juhi kewal supporting character thi. Usse points kyon mile.”

[Rahul, tumhe abhi main yah jankari nahi de sakti. Kyunki tumhara level bahut kam hai. Bas itna kah sakti hu.]

“It’s okay Pari. koi baat nahi.” maine baad me baat karne ka bol apni driving par dhyan dene laga.

Juhi impress hoti ja rahi ha shayad rahul ke pyar me pad jayegi or rahul use suraj ke khilaf istemal karega

 

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[सुमन]

Bhai,
Next update kal post karunga..
abhi mai busy hu...