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Adultery The Villain System

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Chapter 01: killer


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Main Rahul Singh hu. Abhi tak aapne padha hai ki main rebirth se hokar ek kahani ki plot me aa gaya hu jisme main ek villain hu.

Rebirth ke sath sath hi mujhe Villain system mili. Jisme mujhe kayi saare option mile.
  1. Agar main kahani ki kisi bhi plot ko change karta hu to mujhe points milenge.
  2. Main in points se skills kharid sakta hu ya jo skills hai usko badha sakta hu.
  3. Main kahani me aaye supporting heroine aur kisi dusri heroine ko agar apni herem me samil karta hu to mujhe rupay milenge har ek minute ke hisab se.
  4. Herem ka rule hai ki Wife ki face value 95+, concubine ki face value 90+, Partner ke liye 85+ aur maids ke liye 80+ face value chahiye.
  5. Main jis bhi ladki ke sath sex karu usko main apne herem ki kisi bhi category me daal sakta hu.
  6. Mujhe wife se 5 rs/minute, concubine se 3, partner se 2 aur maids se 1 rs/minute milenge.
  7. Grand Mission: Mujhe heroine, Shreya Malhotra ko puri tarah apne muthi me karna hai.
Ye ho gayi system ke baare me. Ab aata hu kahani kaha tak pahuchi hai. To original writer ke anusar kahani apne pace se aage badh rahi. Hero ke liye pahla stage set ho chuka hai - Ms. Shreya Malhotra ki bodyguard.

Agle din jab main so kar utha to mere bagal me Juhi di leti hui thi. Unke chehre par mujhe sukoon se dikhai diya. Abhi unke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi.

Maine Juhi di ke sar par hath fera. Bahar dekha to bhor ho chuka tha. Mujhe aaj Shreya ke ghar bhi jana tha. Usse contract khatm karne ke liye.

Main uth kar fresh hua. Naha dhokar taiyar ho gaya. Maine maa papa se apni marriage contract paper bhi le liya tha. Use apni bag me daal diya.

Mujhe bhookh bhi lagi thi. Khana banana to mujhe aata nahi tha. Halaki maggi bana sakta tha. Wo to sabhi ko aata hai.

Maine Pari ko yaad kiya. “Yaar Pari, good morning”

“Good morning Raahul” Pari replied di.

“Pari skill list me cooking skill hai kya?” Miane Pari se puchha.

“Haa Rahul, cooking skill hai. Kya kharidna hai. 1000 points lagenge. Aur entry proficiency milegi.” Pari jawab di.

Maine jhat se ha kar diya. Mujhe jaldi hi system se notification sunai di sath hi sath mere dimag me cooking skills ki sari jankari aa gayi, jo ki kisi bhi entry level cook ke paas hoti hai.

[*Ding* aapne cooking skill kharida. 1000 points kam kiya ja raha hai. Total Points: 900]

Maine apne sar me aaye sari jankariyo ko padha to isme sari skills hai. Jaise ki chaku kiase chalaye. Kis chij ko kaise kata jaye. Lekin koi recipe nahi thi.

Khair bread omelet banane me koi recipe nahi lagti maine apne liye aur Juhi didi ke liye bread omelet banayi. Sath me doodh bhi garam kar diya.

Maine note likh kar chipka diya. Uske baad main apni car se Shreya ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaya.

Shrey ke ghar pahuch kar main sabse pahle uske dada ji Satyajeet Malhotra se mila.

Halaki mere aur Shreya ke bich kitni bhi galatfahmi ho. Uske dadaji mujhe pasand karte the. Aur baar baar mere aur Shreya ke bich mauka bana dete the.

Main: pranam dada ji.

Satyajit: aao Rahul beta baitho. Kaise ho.

Main: bhala changa hu dadaji. Aap kaise hai.

Satyajit: arey beta wahi ghutne aur kamar dard ki problem. Ab main buddha ho gaya hu. He he he.

Dadaji ko shuru se hi ghutno me problem thi. Sath hi sath kamar dard ki bhi problem aane lagi.

Main: dada ji maine ek baba se massage karna sikha hai. Agar aap kahe to main massage karta hu.

Dada ji ko mere kahne ka vishwas nahi hua. Fir bhi woh mujhe kuch nahi bole. Main waha khade maids ko garam sarso ka tel lane ko bola sath me ek kapda bhi lane ko bola.

Kuch der me hi maids ne mujhe garam tel ka katora diya. Aur kapde ko sofe pe bichha diya.

Main: dadaji yaha sofe par let jaiye.

Dadaji sofe par let gaye. Main unke paon ki massage karne laga. Dhire dhire maine unke paon ki talwe se lekar jangho tak massaj kiya.

Jab pair me baki sab jagah massage ho gayi tab main ghutno par tel dalkar massage karne laga. Mere hatho ki gati kabhi dhire kabhi tej kabhi jod se kabhi kam dabav dal rahi thi.

Isi bich Shreya bhi aa gayi thi. Lekin usne mujhe disturb nahi kiya.

Meri ghutne ki malish se dada ji ko bahut aram mil raha tha.

Maine uske baad unki pith aur kamar par bhi massage kiya. Jisse unko kafi rahat mili.

Main: dada ji ho gayi massage. Ab khada hokar dekh kar bataiye ki aapko kaisa feel ho raha hai.

Satyajeet: beta aaj jaisa maine pichle kuch salo me nahi feel kiya tha. Tumhare massage technique bahut hi achhi hai.

Main: darasal, abhi aapka dard thik nahi hua hai. Puri tarah thik karne ke liye mujhe 4 baar aur massage karna padega. Main agli baar aunga to kar dunga.

Shreya: tumhe massage karna bhi aata hai. Maine to kabhi nahi jana.

Main: Aapne kabhi nahi pucha.

Meri baato me ek tarah ka algawpan tha aur kataksh bhi tha.

Shreya meri baat sunkar chup ho gayi. Haa usne mujhse kabhi puchha nahi tha.

Dadaji hamare bich ki batchit sunkar unhe kuchh ajib laga.

Satyajit: Rahul beta, tum aaj kyun aaye the. Kuchh kaam tha kya?

Main: ha dadaji. Darasal main apne aur Shreya ki marriage contract ke baare me baat karne aaya tha.

Satyajit: kya baat hai beta, jo bhi bolna hai bolo.

Main: dadaji darasal, main aur Shreya shadi ke liye fit nahi baithte. Isliye main chahta hu ki aap iss marriage contract ko radhh karne ki anumati dijiye.

Satyajit: Shreya beta tumhe kuchh kahna hai.

Shreya: dada ji main main…

Dadaji ne dekha ki Shreya hi iss sadi se naraj hai. Dadaji mujhko bahut chahte the. Unhone hi meri shadi ka prastav mere papa ke samne rakha tha. We gahri sans lete hue bole.

Satyajit: Rahul beta, abhi tumhari shadi me char mahine ka samay baki hai. Tab tak tum dono aapas me ek dusre se baat karo. Agar tumhara rishta in teen mahino me nahi sudhra to main iss contract ko raddh kar dunga.

Main: thik hai dadaji. Waise main chalta hu. Mujhe company me bhi jana hai.

Satyajit: thik hai beta. Shreya beta, Rahul ko bahar tak chhod kar aa jao.

Main aur Shreya bahar ki taraf chal diye. Maine ghadi me samay dekha. Bas 20 second aur killer Shreya par hamla karne wala tha.

Maine aas paas najar daudayi to mujhe ek servant kaam karta hua dikha jisne apni munh dhank rakhi thi. Main samajh gaya ki yahi wo killer hai.

Jaise hi hum dono uske paas se gujre, usne chaku se Shreya par hamla kar diya.

Main us killer par nazar banaye hue tha. Jiase hi usne hamla kiya maine Shreya ko apni bahon me khinch liya. Mujhe uski soft chhatiya apne seene me lagti mehsoos hui.

Shreya: aahhhh… Tummm…

Sath hi sath maine ek hath se killer ki chaku wali kalai par waar kiya.

“Chhannnn”

Mere war se killer ki hath ki chaku dur ja kar giri. Maine Shreya ko chhod diya aur ghum kar killer ke munh par ek laat de mari.

Maine itni furti se killer ke munh par laat mari thi ki uske paas bachne ka samay nahi tha. Jaise hi killer niche girta maine uski ghutne par jod se laat se war kiya.

“aaaarrrrgggghhhh”

Meri war se killer chikh utha. Uske ghutne ki haddi tut chuki thi. Maine use bhagne ka koi rasta nahi chhoda tha.

Maine usse pucha “batao tumhe kisne bheja hai.”

Meri sawal sunkar killer hasa, “he he he, ek baar laundiya ko bacha liya. Agli baar to nahi bacha payega.”

Main: saale, madarchod, tumlogo ne pahli baar attack nahi kiya hai. Har baar main hi bachata hu ise. Chal bol tumhe kisne supari di.

Meri baat sunkar Shreya ekda se chauk gayi. Halaki killer meri baat sunkar apne munh me rakhi hui jahar ki goli ko nigal gaya.

Main use sahi samay par rok nahi paya aur woh jaldi hi mar gaya.

Main: Miss Shreya aap par kisi ki nazar hai. Kisi ne aap ki supari killer ko di hai. Aap sambhal kar rahiye ga. Ye teesra hai jisne aap ko marne ki koshish ki hai.

Main ye bolkar waha se jane laga, tabhi mujhe kuch yaad aaya.

Main: aur ek baad, shadi se aap itna darti kyun ho. Main nahi to koi aur tumse shadi karega hi. Khair apna khyal rakhiyega.

Main waha se nikal gaya. Uske baad kya hua pata nahi. Main waha se nikal kar sidha company pahucha jaha Juhi didi aa gayi thi. Seema bhi sath hi thi.

Main aur Juhi didi fir se purani file me bhid gaye. Main purane projects ko dekh raha tha aur sikh raha tha.

Halaki mujhe purane Rahul ki memory mili thi, lekin maine koi actual practice nahi ki thi. Isliye maine purane file se sikhne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Wahi Juhi didi, finance ko check kar rahi thi. Kal sone se pahle maine kuch projects ki finance report par dhyan dene ki baat ki thi. Didi usi par dhyan lagaye hue thi.

Juhi didi ne sabhi ghaple ko likh kar rakha tha. Chhoti se badi sabhi tarah ki finance ki hadkato ko likha.

Maine bhi apni file check kar li thi. Maine Seema ko bulaya.

Seema aaj kali stocking pahan kar aayi thi. Yani ki meri kahi hui baat use yaad thi.

Usne white shirt aur black miniskirt pahni thi, jo ghutno se upar aa rahi thi. Uski skirt stocking ke upar hi khatam ho rahi thi.

Jiske karan uske chalne se uske jangho ke bich ki kuch skin dikhai de rahi thi. Jo ladko ke lund khada karne ke liye kafi tha.

Seema ke aate hi Juhi didi nikal gayi. Sayad unhe bathroom jana tha. Unke jaate hi maine Seema ko apni taraf khicha aur god me bitha liya.

Seema ka chehra sharm se laal ho gaya. Halaki usne koi virodh nahi kiya. Bas munh se hi mana kar rahi thi. Main uski jangho par hath ferne laga.

Seema: sir, aap kya kar rahe ho. Koi dekh lega.

Main: to tumko ye dar hai ki koi dekh lega.

Seema: sir sir wo wo..

Main: haa bolo..

Seema: sir… (shy)

Main: yaar itna kyun sharma rahe ho?

Seema: sir I like you. But aap to Shreya mam se pyar karte ho na?

Main: chinta mat karo. Agar hum dono use nahi batayenge to usko pata kaise chalega.

Seema: sir lekin..

Main ek baar aur uski jangho par hath fera aur fir usko apni god se niche utar diya.

Main: thik hai iske baare me sochna. Agar tum na sahi to koi aur hogi.

Seema meri baat sunkar mujhe dekhne lagi. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki main itna kaise badal gaya.

Pahle main Shreya ke alawa kisi aur ladki par aankh utha kar bhi nahi dekha tha. Lekin ab main kisi ladki ke paas jane ke liye bol raha tha.

Ab Seema ko kaun samjhaye ki uske Rahul sir ab purane wale Rahul sir nahi rahe. Unke sharir me dusre ki aatma hai.

Seema: ji sir main aapko soch kar bataungi. Sir aapne kisi kaam ke liye bulaya tha.

Main: haa dekho, abhi tum city police ko 5 lakh donation de do company ke naam se. Aur kal ek board meeting rakho.


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Chapter 01: killer


ch-01
Main Rahul Singh hu. Abhi tak aapne padha hai ki main rebirth se hokar ek kahani ki plot me aa gaya hu jisme main ek villain hu.

Rebirth ke sath sath hi mujhe Villain system mili. Jisme mujhe kayi saare option mile.

  1. Agar main kahani ki kisi bhi plot ko change karta hu to mujhe points milenge.
  2. Main in points se skills kharid sakta hu ya jo skills hai usko badha sakta hu.
  3. Main kahani me aaye supporting heroine aur kisi dusri heroine ko agar apni herem me samil karta hu to mujhe rupay milenge har ek minute ke hisab se.
  4. Herem ka rule hai ki Wife ki face value 95+, concubine ki face value 90+, Partner ke liye 85+ aur maids ke liye 80+ face value chahiye.
  5. Main jis bhi ladki ke sath sex karu usko main apne herem ki kisi bhi category me daal sakta hu.
  6. Mujhe wife se 5 rs/minute, concubine se 3, partner se 2 aur maids se 1 rs/minute milenge.
  7. Grand Mission: Mujhe heroine, Shreya Malhotra ko puri tarah apne muthi me karna hai.
Ye ho gayi system ke baare me. Ab aata hu kahani kaha tak pahuchi hai. To original writer ke anusar kahani apne pace se aage badh rahi. Hero ke liye pahla stage set ho chuka hai - Ms. Shreya Malhotra ki bodyguard.

Agle din jab main so kar utha to mere bagal me Juhi di leti hui thi. Unke chehre par mujhe sukoon se dikhai diya. Abhi unke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi.

Maine Juhi di ke sar par hath fera. Bahar dekha to bhor ho chuka tha. Mujhe aaj Shreya ke ghar bhi jana tha. Usse contract khatm karne ke liye.

Main uth kar fresh hua. Naha dhokar taiyar ho gaya. Maine maa papa se apni marriage contract paper bhi le liya tha. Use apni bag me daal diya.

Mujhe bhookh bhi lagi thi. Khana banana to mujhe aata nahi tha. Halaki maggi bana sakta tha. Wo to sabhi ko aata hai.

Maine Pari ko yaad kiya. “Yaar Pari, good morning”

“Good morning Raahul” Pari replied di.

“Pari skill list me cooking skill hai kya?” Miane Pari se puchha.

“Haa Rahul, cooking skill hai. Kya kharidna hai. 1000 points lagenge. Aur entry proficiency milegi.” Pari jawab di.

Maine jhat se ha kar diya. Mujhe jaldi hi system se notification sunai di sath hi sath mere dimag me cooking skills ki sari jankari aa gayi, jo ki kisi bhi entry level cook ke paas hoti hai.

[*Ding* aapne cooking skill kharida. 1000 points kam kiya ja raha hai. Total Points: 900]

Maine apne sar me aaye sari jankariyo ko padha to isme sari skills hai. Jaise ki chaku kiase chalaye. Kis chij ko kaise kata jaye. Lekin koi recipe nahi thi.

Khair bread omelet banane me koi recipe nahi lagti maine apne liye aur Juhi didi ke liye bread omelet banayi. Sath me doodh bhi garam kar diya.

Maine note likh kar chipka diya. Uske baad main apni car se Shreya ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaya.

Shrey ke ghar pahuch kar main sabse pahle uske dada ji Satyajeet Malhotra se mila.

Halaki mere aur Shreya ke bich kitni bhi galatfahmi ho. Uske dadaji mujhe pasand karte the. Aur baar baar mere aur Shreya ke bich mauka bana dete the.

Main: pranam dada ji.

Satyajit: aao Rahul beta baitho. Kaise ho.

Main: bhala changa hu dadaji. Aap kaise hai.

Satyajit: arey beta wahi ghutne aur kamar dard ki problem. Ab main buddha ho gaya hu. He he he.

Dadaji ko shuru se hi ghutno me problem thi. Sath hi sath kamar dard ki bhi problem aane lagi.

Main: dada ji maine ek baba se massage karna sikha hai. Agar aap kahe to main massage karta hu.

Dada ji ko mere kahne ka vishwas nahi hua. Fir bhi woh mujhe kuch nahi bole. Main waha khade maids ko garam sarso ka tel lane ko bola sath me ek kapda bhi lane ko bola.

Kuch der me hi maids ne mujhe garam tel ka katora diya. Aur kapde ko sofe pe bichha diya.

Main: dadaji yaha sofe par let jaiye.

Dadaji sofe par let gaye. Main unke paon ki massage karne laga. Dhire dhire maine unke paon ki talwe se lekar jangho tak massaj kiya.

Jab pair me baki sab jagah massage ho gayi tab main ghutno par tel dalkar massage karne laga. Mere hatho ki gati kabhi dhire kabhi tej kabhi jod se kabhi kam dabav dal rahi thi.

Isi bich Shreya bhi aa gayi thi. Lekin usne mujhe disturb nahi kiya.

Meri ghutne ki malish se dada ji ko bahut aram mil raha tha.

Maine uske baad unki pith aur kamar par bhi massage kiya. Jisse unko kafi rahat mili.

Main: dada ji ho gayi massage. Ab khada hokar dekh kar bataiye ki aapko kaisa feel ho raha hai.

Satyajeet: beta aaj jaisa maine pichle kuch salo me nahi feel kiya tha. Tumhare massage technique bahut hi achhi hai.

Main: darasal, abhi aapka dard thik nahi hua hai. Puri tarah thik karne ke liye mujhe 4 baar aur massage karna padega. Main agli baar aunga to kar dunga.

Shreya: tumhe massage karna bhi aata hai. Maine to kabhi nahi jana.

Main: Aapne kabhi nahi pucha.

Meri baato me ek tarah ka algawpan tha aur kataksh bhi tha.

Shreya meri baat sunkar chup ho gayi. Haa usne mujhse kabhi puchha nahi tha.

Dadaji hamare bich ki batchit sunkar unhe kuchh ajib laga.

Satyajit: Rahul beta, tum aaj kyun aaye the. Kuchh kaam tha kya?

Main: ha dadaji. Darasal main apne aur Shreya ki marriage contract ke baare me baat karne aaya tha.

Satyajit: kya baat hai beta, jo bhi bolna hai bolo.

Main: dadaji darasal, main aur Shreya shadi ke liye fit nahi baithte. Isliye main chahta hu ki aap iss marriage contract ko radhh karne ki anumati dijiye.

Satyajit: Shreya beta tumhe kuchh kahna hai.

Shreya: dada ji main main…

Dadaji ne dekha ki Shreya hi iss sadi se naraj hai. Dadaji mujhko bahut chahte the. Unhone hi meri shadi ka prastav mere papa ke samne rakha tha. We gahri sans lete hue bole.

Satyajit: Rahul beta, abhi tumhari shadi me char mahine ka samay baki hai. Tab tak tum dono aapas me ek dusre se baat karo. Agar tumhara rishta in teen mahino me nahi sudhra to main iss contract ko raddh kar dunga.

Main: thik hai dadaji. Waise main chalta hu. Mujhe company me bhi jana hai.

Satyajit: thik hai beta. Shreya beta, Rahul ko bahar tak chhod kar aa jao.

Main aur Shreya bahar ki taraf chal diye. Maine ghadi me samay dekha. Bas 20 second aur killer Shreya par hamla karne wala tha.

Maine aas paas najar daudayi to mujhe ek servant kaam karta hua dikha jisne apni munh dhank rakhi thi. Main samajh gaya ki yahi wo killer hai.

Jaise hi hum dono uske paas se gujre, usne chaku se Shreya par hamla kar diya.

Main us killer par nazar banaye hue tha. Jiase hi usne hamla kiya maine Shreya ko apni bahon me khinch liya. Mujhe uski soft chhatiya apne seene me lagti mehsoos hui.

Shreya: aahhhh… Tummm…

Sath hi sath maine ek hath se killer ki chaku wali kalai par waar kiya.

“Chhannnn”

Mere war se killer ki hath ki chaku dur ja kar giri. Maine Shreya ko chhod diya aur ghum kar killer ke munh par ek laat de mari.

Maine itni furti se killer ke munh par laat mari thi ki uske paas bachne ka samay nahi tha. Jaise hi killer niche girta maine uski ghutne par jod se laat se war kiya.

“aaaarrrrgggghhhh”

Meri war se killer chikh utha. Uske ghutne ki haddi tut chuki thi. Maine use bhagne ka koi rasta nahi chhoda tha.

Maine usse pucha “batao tumhe kisne bheja hai.”

Meri sawal sunkar killer hasa, “he he he, ek baar laundiya ko bacha liya. Agli baar to nahi bacha payega.”

Main: saale, madarchod, tumlogo ne pahli baar attack nahi kiya hai. Har baar main hi bachata hu ise. Chal bol tumhe kisne supari di.

Meri baat sunkar Shreya ekda se chauk gayi. Halaki killer meri baat sunkar apne munh me rakhi hui jahar ki goli ko nigal gaya.

Main use sahi samay par rok nahi paya aur woh jaldi hi mar gaya.

Main: Miss Shreya aap par kisi ki nazar hai. Kisi ne aap ki supari killer ko di hai. Aap sambhal kar rahiye ga. Ye teesra hai jisne aap ko marne ki koshish ki hai.

Main ye bolkar waha se jane laga, tabhi mujhe kuch yaad aaya.

Main: aur ek baad, shadi se aap itna darti kyun ho. Main nahi to koi aur tumse shadi karega hi. Khair apna khyal rakhiyega.

Main waha se nikal gaya. Uske baad kya hua pata nahi. Main waha se nikal kar sidha company pahucha jaha Juhi didi aa gayi thi. Seema bhi sath hi thi.

Main aur Juhi didi fir se purani file me bhid gaye. Main purane projects ko dekh raha tha aur sikh raha tha.

Halaki mujhe purane Rahul ki memory mili thi, lekin maine koi actual practice nahi ki thi. Isliye maine purane file se sikhne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Wahi Juhi didi, finance ko check kar rahi thi. Kal sone se pahle maine kuch projects ki finance report par dhyan dene ki baat ki thi. Didi usi par dhyan lagaye hue thi.

Juhi didi ne sabhi ghaple ko likh kar rakha tha. Chhoti se badi sabhi tarah ki finance ki hadkato ko likha.

Maine bhi apni file check kar li thi. Maine Seema ko bulaya.

Seema aaj kali stocking pahan kar aayi thi. Yani ki meri kahi hui baat use yaad thi.

Usne white shirt aur black miniskirt pahni thi, jo ghutno se upar aa rahi thi. Uski skirt stocking ke upar hi khatam ho rahi thi.

Jiske karan uske chalne se uske jangho ke bich ki kuch skin dikhai de rahi thi. Jo ladko ke lund khada karne ke liye kafi tha.

Seema ke aate hi Juhi didi nikal gayi. Sayad unhe bathroom jana tha. Unke jaate hi maine Seema ko apni taraf khicha aur god me bitha liya.

Seema ka chehra sharm se laal ho gaya. Halaki usne koi virodh nahi kiya. Bas munh se hi mana kar rahi thi. Main uski jangho par hath ferne laga.

Seema: sir, aap kya kar rahe ho. Koi dekh lega.

Main: to tumko ye dar hai ki koi dekh lega.

Seema: sir sir wo wo..

Main: haa bolo..

Seema: sir… (shy)

Main: yaar itna kyun sharma rahe ho?

Seema: sir I like you. But aap to Shreya mam se pyar karte ho na?

Main: chinta mat karo. Agar hum dono use nahi batayenge to usko pata kaise chalega.

Seema: sir lekin..

Main ek baar aur uski jangho par hath fera aur fir usko apni god se niche utar diya.

Main: thik hai iske baare me sochna. Agar tum na sahi to koi aur hogi.

Seema meri baat sunkar mujhe dekhne lagi. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki main itna kaise badal gaya.

Pahle main Shreya ke alawa kisi aur ladki par aankh utha kar bhi nahi dekha tha. Lekin ab main kisi ladki ke paas jane ke liye bol raha tha.

Ab Seema ko kaun samjhaye ki uske Rahul sir ab purane wale Rahul sir nahi rahe. Unke sharir me dusre ki aatma hai.

Seema: ji sir main aapko soch kar bataungi. Sir aapne kisi kaam ke liye bulaya tha.


Main: haa dekho, abhi tum city police ko 5 lakh donation de do company ke naam se. Aur kal ek board meeting rakho.


Yaha tak padhne ke liye sukriya. please like and comment.
Mamla thoda pechida hota jaa raha hai. Shreya pe attack tez ho gaye hai aur sahi kaha thaa killer ne ki woh har jagah maujood to nahi reh sakta. Ab inko 3 month ka time Mila hai shayad aaj ke episode se uske bartaw me kuch badlaw aaye.
Aap likhtey raho hum aapke sath hai but concentrate on your studies also.
 

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Chapter 01: killer


ch-01
Main Rahul Singh hu. Abhi tak aapne padha hai ki main rebirth se hokar ek kahani ki plot me aa gaya hu jisme main ek villain hu.

Rebirth ke sath sath hi mujhe Villain system mili. Jisme mujhe kayi saare option mile.
  1. Agar main kahani ki kisi bhi plot ko change karta hu to mujhe points milenge.
  2. Main in points se skills kharid sakta hu ya jo skills hai usko badha sakta hu.
  3. Main kahani me aaye supporting heroine aur kisi dusri heroine ko agar apni herem me samil karta hu to mujhe rupay milenge har ek minute ke hisab se.
  4. Herem ka rule hai ki Wife ki face value 95+, concubine ki face value 90+, Partner ke liye 85+ aur maids ke liye 80+ face value chahiye.
  5. Main jis bhi ladki ke sath sex karu usko main apne herem ki kisi bhi category me daal sakta hu.
  6. Mujhe wife se 5 rs/minute, concubine se 3, partner se 2 aur maids se 1 rs/minute milenge.
  7. Grand Mission: Mujhe heroine, Shreya Malhotra ko puri tarah apne muthi me karna hai.
Ye ho gayi system ke baare me. Ab aata hu kahani kaha tak pahuchi hai. To original writer ke anusar kahani apne pace se aage badh rahi. Hero ke liye pahla stage set ho chuka hai - Ms. Shreya Malhotra ki bodyguard.

Agle din jab main so kar utha to mere bagal me Juhi di leti hui thi. Unke chehre par mujhe sukoon se dikhai diya. Abhi unke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi.

Maine Juhi di ke sar par hath fera. Bahar dekha to bhor ho chuka tha. Mujhe aaj Shreya ke ghar bhi jana tha. Usse contract khatm karne ke liye.

Main uth kar fresh hua. Naha dhokar taiyar ho gaya. Maine maa papa se apni marriage contract paper bhi le liya tha. Use apni bag me daal diya.

Mujhe bhookh bhi lagi thi. Khana banana to mujhe aata nahi tha. Halaki maggi bana sakta tha. Wo to sabhi ko aata hai.

Maine Pari ko yaad kiya. “Yaar Pari, good morning”

“Good morning Raahul” Pari replied di.

“Pari skill list me cooking skill hai kya?” Miane Pari se puchha.

“Haa Rahul, cooking skill hai. Kya kharidna hai. 1000 points lagenge. Aur entry proficiency milegi.” Pari jawab di.

Maine jhat se ha kar diya. Mujhe jaldi hi system se notification sunai di sath hi sath mere dimag me cooking skills ki sari jankari aa gayi, jo ki kisi bhi entry level cook ke paas hoti hai.

[*Ding* aapne cooking skill kharida. 1000 points kam kiya ja raha hai. Total Points: 900]

Maine apne sar me aaye sari jankariyo ko padha to isme sari skills hai. Jaise ki chaku kiase chalaye. Kis chij ko kaise kata jaye. Lekin koi recipe nahi thi.

Khair bread omelet banane me koi recipe nahi lagti maine apne liye aur Juhi didi ke liye bread omelet banayi. Sath me doodh bhi garam kar diya.

Maine note likh kar chipka diya. Uske baad main apni car se Shreya ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaya.

Shrey ke ghar pahuch kar main sabse pahle uske dada ji Satyajeet Malhotra se mila.

Halaki mere aur Shreya ke bich kitni bhi galatfahmi ho. Uske dadaji mujhe pasand karte the. Aur baar baar mere aur Shreya ke bich mauka bana dete the.

Main: pranam dada ji.

Satyajit: aao Rahul beta baitho. Kaise ho.

Main: bhala changa hu dadaji. Aap kaise hai.

Satyajit: arey beta wahi ghutne aur kamar dard ki problem. Ab main buddha ho gaya hu. He he he.

Dadaji ko shuru se hi ghutno me problem thi. Sath hi sath kamar dard ki bhi problem aane lagi.

Main: dada ji maine ek baba se massage karna sikha hai. Agar aap kahe to main massage karta hu.

Dada ji ko mere kahne ka vishwas nahi hua. Fir bhi woh mujhe kuch nahi bole. Main waha khade maids ko garam sarso ka tel lane ko bola sath me ek kapda bhi lane ko bola.

Kuch der me hi maids ne mujhe garam tel ka katora diya. Aur kapde ko sofe pe bichha diya.

Main: dadaji yaha sofe par let jaiye.

Dadaji sofe par let gaye. Main unke paon ki massage karne laga. Dhire dhire maine unke paon ki talwe se lekar jangho tak massaj kiya.

Jab pair me baki sab jagah massage ho gayi tab main ghutno par tel dalkar massage karne laga. Mere hatho ki gati kabhi dhire kabhi tej kabhi jod se kabhi kam dabav dal rahi thi.

Isi bich Shreya bhi aa gayi thi. Lekin usne mujhe disturb nahi kiya.

Meri ghutne ki malish se dada ji ko bahut aram mil raha tha.

Maine uske baad unki pith aur kamar par bhi massage kiya. Jisse unko kafi rahat mili.

Main: dada ji ho gayi massage. Ab khada hokar dekh kar bataiye ki aapko kaisa feel ho raha hai.

Satyajeet: beta aaj jaisa maine pichle kuch salo me nahi feel kiya tha. Tumhare massage technique bahut hi achhi hai.

Main: darasal, abhi aapka dard thik nahi hua hai. Puri tarah thik karne ke liye mujhe 4 baar aur massage karna padega. Main agli baar aunga to kar dunga.

Shreya: tumhe massage karna bhi aata hai. Maine to kabhi nahi jana.

Main: Aapne kabhi nahi pucha.

Meri baato me ek tarah ka algawpan tha aur kataksh bhi tha.

Shreya meri baat sunkar chup ho gayi. Haa usne mujhse kabhi puchha nahi tha.

Dadaji hamare bich ki batchit sunkar unhe kuchh ajib laga.

Satyajit: Rahul beta, tum aaj kyun aaye the. Kuchh kaam tha kya?

Main: ha dadaji. Darasal main apne aur Shreya ki marriage contract ke baare me baat karne aaya tha.

Satyajit: kya baat hai beta, jo bhi bolna hai bolo.

Main: dadaji darasal, main aur Shreya shadi ke liye fit nahi baithte. Isliye main chahta hu ki aap iss marriage contract ko radhh karne ki anumati dijiye.

Satyajit: Shreya beta tumhe kuchh kahna hai.

Shreya: dada ji main main…

Dadaji ne dekha ki Shreya hi iss sadi se naraj hai. Dadaji mujhko bahut chahte the. Unhone hi meri shadi ka prastav mere papa ke samne rakha tha. We gahri sans lete hue bole.

Satyajit: Rahul beta, abhi tumhari shadi me char mahine ka samay baki hai. Tab tak tum dono aapas me ek dusre se baat karo. Agar tumhara rishta in teen mahino me nahi sudhra to main iss contract ko raddh kar dunga.

Main: thik hai dadaji. Waise main chalta hu. Mujhe company me bhi jana hai.

Satyajit: thik hai beta. Shreya beta, Rahul ko bahar tak chhod kar aa jao.

Main aur Shreya bahar ki taraf chal diye. Maine ghadi me samay dekha. Bas 20 second aur killer Shreya par hamla karne wala tha.

Maine aas paas najar daudayi to mujhe ek servant kaam karta hua dikha jisne apni munh dhank rakhi thi. Main samajh gaya ki yahi wo killer hai.

Jaise hi hum dono uske paas se gujre, usne chaku se Shreya par hamla kar diya.

Main us killer par nazar banaye hue tha. Jiase hi usne hamla kiya maine Shreya ko apni bahon me khinch liya. Mujhe uski soft chhatiya apne seene me lagti mehsoos hui.

Shreya: aahhhh… Tummm…

Sath hi sath maine ek hath se killer ki chaku wali kalai par waar kiya.

“Chhannnn”

Mere war se killer ki hath ki chaku dur ja kar giri. Maine Shreya ko chhod diya aur ghum kar killer ke munh par ek laat de mari.

Maine itni furti se killer ke munh par laat mari thi ki uske paas bachne ka samay nahi tha. Jaise hi killer niche girta maine uski ghutne par jod se laat se war kiya.

“aaaarrrrgggghhhh”

Meri war se killer chikh utha. Uske ghutne ki haddi tut chuki thi. Maine use bhagne ka koi rasta nahi chhoda tha.

Maine usse pucha “batao tumhe kisne bheja hai.”

Meri sawal sunkar killer hasa, “he he he, ek baar laundiya ko bacha liya. Agli baar to nahi bacha payega.”

Main: saale, madarchod, tumlogo ne pahli baar attack nahi kiya hai. Har baar main hi bachata hu ise. Chal bol tumhe kisne supari di.

Meri baat sunkar Shreya ekda se chauk gayi. Halaki killer meri baat sunkar apne munh me rakhi hui jahar ki goli ko nigal gaya.

Main use sahi samay par rok nahi paya aur woh jaldi hi mar gaya.

Main: Miss Shreya aap par kisi ki nazar hai. Kisi ne aap ki supari killer ko di hai. Aap sambhal kar rahiye ga. Ye teesra hai jisne aap ko marne ki koshish ki hai.

Main ye bolkar waha se jane laga, tabhi mujhe kuch yaad aaya.

Main: aur ek baad, shadi se aap itna darti kyun ho. Main nahi to koi aur tumse shadi karega hi. Khair apna khyal rakhiyega.

Main waha se nikal gaya. Uske baad kya hua pata nahi. Main waha se nikal kar sidha company pahucha jaha Juhi didi aa gayi thi. Seema bhi sath hi thi.

Main aur Juhi didi fir se purani file me bhid gaye. Main purane projects ko dekh raha tha aur sikh raha tha.

Halaki mujhe purane Rahul ki memory mili thi, lekin maine koi actual practice nahi ki thi. Isliye maine purane file se sikhne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Wahi Juhi didi, finance ko check kar rahi thi. Kal sone se pahle maine kuch projects ki finance report par dhyan dene ki baat ki thi. Didi usi par dhyan lagaye hue thi.

Juhi didi ne sabhi ghaple ko likh kar rakha tha. Chhoti se badi sabhi tarah ki finance ki hadkato ko likha.

Maine bhi apni file check kar li thi. Maine Seema ko bulaya.

Seema aaj kali stocking pahan kar aayi thi. Yani ki meri kahi hui baat use yaad thi.

Usne white shirt aur black miniskirt pahni thi, jo ghutno se upar aa rahi thi. Uski skirt stocking ke upar hi khatam ho rahi thi.

Jiske karan uske chalne se uske jangho ke bich ki kuch skin dikhai de rahi thi. Jo ladko ke lund khada karne ke liye kafi tha.

Seema ke aate hi Juhi didi nikal gayi. Sayad unhe bathroom jana tha. Unke jaate hi maine Seema ko apni taraf khicha aur god me bitha liya.

Seema ka chehra sharm se laal ho gaya. Halaki usne koi virodh nahi kiya. Bas munh se hi mana kar rahi thi. Main uski jangho par hath ferne laga.

Seema: sir, aap kya kar rahe ho. Koi dekh lega.

Main: to tumko ye dar hai ki koi dekh lega.

Seema: sir sir wo wo..

Main: haa bolo..

Seema: sir… (shy)

Main: yaar itna kyun sharma rahe ho?

Seema: sir I like you. But aap to Shreya mam se pyar karte ho na?

Main: chinta mat karo. Agar hum dono use nahi batayenge to usko pata kaise chalega.

Seema: sir lekin..

Main ek baar aur uski jangho par hath fera aur fir usko apni god se niche utar diya.

Main: thik hai iske baare me sochna. Agar tum na sahi to koi aur hogi.

Seema meri baat sunkar mujhe dekhne lagi. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki main itna kaise badal gaya.

Pahle main Shreya ke alawa kisi aur ladki par aankh utha kar bhi nahi dekha tha. Lekin ab main kisi ladki ke paas jane ke liye bol raha tha.

Ab Seema ko kaun samjhaye ki uske Rahul sir ab purane wale Rahul sir nahi rahe. Unke sharir me dusre ki aatma hai.

Seema: ji sir main aapko soch kar bataungi. Sir aapne kisi kaam ke liye bulaya tha.

Main: haa dekho, abhi tum city police ko 5 lakh donation de do company ke naam se. Aur kal ek board meeting rakho.


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Update bhadiya tha👌👌

Kahani ka pace mein speed hua jo ki kharab nai hai kyuki yeh event important nai Lage plot ke liye lekin purana pace bhi accha tha kyuki Thora detail mein tha plot mein events aur characters ke actions explanation (mujhe Thora details pasand hai isliye bol Raha hu, agar kisi ko ye baat galat Lage toh sorry😅), hero bhi apne akal se aage bhad raha bhale uske paas takat aa rahi hai dheere dheere system ke jariye wo bhi acchi baat hai 👍
 

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Chapter 01: killer


ch-01
Main Rahul Singh hu. Abhi tak aapne padha hai ki main rebirth se hokar ek kahani ki plot me aa gaya hu jisme main ek villain hu.

Rebirth ke sath sath hi mujhe Villain system mili. Jisme mujhe kayi saare option mile.

  1. Agar main kahani ki kisi bhi plot ko change karta hu to mujhe points milenge.
  2. Main in points se skills kharid sakta hu ya jo skills hai usko badha sakta hu.
  3. Main kahani me aaye supporting heroine aur kisi dusri heroine ko agar apni herem me samil karta hu to mujhe rupay milenge har ek minute ke hisab se.
  4. Herem ka rule hai ki Wife ki face value 95+, concubine ki face value 90+, Partner ke liye 85+ aur maids ke liye 80+ face value chahiye.
  5. Main jis bhi ladki ke sath sex karu usko main apne herem ki kisi bhi category me daal sakta hu.
  6. Mujhe wife se 5 rs/minute, concubine se 3, partner se 2 aur maids se 1 rs/minute milenge.
  7. Grand Mission: Mujhe heroine, Shreya Malhotra ko puri tarah apne muthi me karna hai.
Ye ho gayi system ke baare me. Ab aata hu kahani kaha tak pahuchi hai. To original writer ke anusar kahani apne pace se aage badh rahi. Hero ke liye pahla stage set ho chuka hai - Ms. Shreya Malhotra ki bodyguard.

Agle din jab main so kar utha to mere bagal me Juhi di leti hui thi. Unke chehre par mujhe sukoon se dikhai diya. Abhi unke chehre par ek pyari si muskan thi.

Maine Juhi di ke sar par hath fera. Bahar dekha to bhor ho chuka tha. Mujhe aaj Shreya ke ghar bhi jana tha. Usse contract khatm karne ke liye.

Main uth kar fresh hua. Naha dhokar taiyar ho gaya. Maine maa papa se apni marriage contract paper bhi le liya tha. Use apni bag me daal diya.

Mujhe bhookh bhi lagi thi. Khana banana to mujhe aata nahi tha. Halaki maggi bana sakta tha. Wo to sabhi ko aata hai.

Maine Pari ko yaad kiya. “Yaar Pari, good morning”

“Good morning Raahul” Pari replied di.

“Pari skill list me cooking skill hai kya?” Miane Pari se puchha.

“Haa Rahul, cooking skill hai. Kya kharidna hai. 1000 points lagenge. Aur entry proficiency milegi.” Pari jawab di.

Maine jhat se ha kar diya. Mujhe jaldi hi system se notification sunai di sath hi sath mere dimag me cooking skills ki sari jankari aa gayi, jo ki kisi bhi entry level cook ke paas hoti hai.

[*Ding* aapne cooking skill kharida. 1000 points kam kiya ja raha hai. Total Points: 900]

Maine apne sar me aaye sari jankariyo ko padha to isme sari skills hai. Jaise ki chaku kiase chalaye. Kis chij ko kaise kata jaye. Lekin koi recipe nahi thi.

Khair bread omelet banane me koi recipe nahi lagti maine apne liye aur Juhi didi ke liye bread omelet banayi. Sath me doodh bhi garam kar diya.

Maine note likh kar chipka diya. Uske baad main apni car se Shreya ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaya.

Shrey ke ghar pahuch kar main sabse pahle uske dada ji Satyajeet Malhotra se mila.

Halaki mere aur Shreya ke bich kitni bhi galatfahmi ho. Uske dadaji mujhe pasand karte the. Aur baar baar mere aur Shreya ke bich mauka bana dete the.

Main: pranam dada ji.

Satyajit: aao Rahul beta baitho. Kaise ho.

Main: bhala changa hu dadaji. Aap kaise hai.

Satyajit: arey beta wahi ghutne aur kamar dard ki problem. Ab main buddha ho gaya hu. He he he.

Dadaji ko shuru se hi ghutno me problem thi. Sath hi sath kamar dard ki bhi problem aane lagi.

Main: dada ji maine ek baba se massage karna sikha hai. Agar aap kahe to main massage karta hu.

Dada ji ko mere kahne ka vishwas nahi hua. Fir bhi woh mujhe kuch nahi bole. Main waha khade maids ko garam sarso ka tel lane ko bola sath me ek kapda bhi lane ko bola.

Kuch der me hi maids ne mujhe garam tel ka katora diya. Aur kapde ko sofe pe bichha diya.

Main: dadaji yaha sofe par let jaiye.

Dadaji sofe par let gaye. Main unke paon ki massage karne laga. Dhire dhire maine unke paon ki talwe se lekar jangho tak massaj kiya.

Jab pair me baki sab jagah massage ho gayi tab main ghutno par tel dalkar massage karne laga. Mere hatho ki gati kabhi dhire kabhi tej kabhi jod se kabhi kam dabav dal rahi thi.

Isi bich Shreya bhi aa gayi thi. Lekin usne mujhe disturb nahi kiya.

Meri ghutne ki malish se dada ji ko bahut aram mil raha tha.

Maine uske baad unki pith aur kamar par bhi massage kiya. Jisse unko kafi rahat mili.

Main: dada ji ho gayi massage. Ab khada hokar dekh kar bataiye ki aapko kaisa feel ho raha hai.

Satyajeet: beta aaj jaisa maine pichle kuch salo me nahi feel kiya tha. Tumhare massage technique bahut hi achhi hai.

Main: darasal, abhi aapka dard thik nahi hua hai. Puri tarah thik karne ke liye mujhe 4 baar aur massage karna padega. Main agli baar aunga to kar dunga.

Shreya: tumhe massage karna bhi aata hai. Maine to kabhi nahi jana.

Main: Aapne kabhi nahi pucha.

Meri baato me ek tarah ka algawpan tha aur kataksh bhi tha.

Shreya meri baat sunkar chup ho gayi. Haa usne mujhse kabhi puchha nahi tha.

Dadaji hamare bich ki batchit sunkar unhe kuchh ajib laga.

Satyajit: Rahul beta, tum aaj kyun aaye the. Kuchh kaam tha kya?

Main: ha dadaji. Darasal main apne aur Shreya ki marriage contract ke baare me baat karne aaya tha.

Satyajit: kya baat hai beta, jo bhi bolna hai bolo.

Main: dadaji darasal, main aur Shreya shadi ke liye fit nahi baithte. Isliye main chahta hu ki aap iss marriage contract ko radhh karne ki anumati dijiye.

Satyajit: Shreya beta tumhe kuchh kahna hai.

Shreya: dada ji main main…

Dadaji ne dekha ki Shreya hi iss sadi se naraj hai. Dadaji mujhko bahut chahte the. Unhone hi meri shadi ka prastav mere papa ke samne rakha tha. We gahri sans lete hue bole.

Satyajit: Rahul beta, abhi tumhari shadi me char mahine ka samay baki hai. Tab tak tum dono aapas me ek dusre se baat karo. Agar tumhara rishta in teen mahino me nahi sudhra to main iss contract ko raddh kar dunga.

Main: thik hai dadaji. Waise main chalta hu. Mujhe company me bhi jana hai.

Satyajit: thik hai beta. Shreya beta, Rahul ko bahar tak chhod kar aa jao.

Main aur Shreya bahar ki taraf chal diye. Maine ghadi me samay dekha. Bas 20 second aur killer Shreya par hamla karne wala tha.

Maine aas paas najar daudayi to mujhe ek servant kaam karta hua dikha jisne apni munh dhank rakhi thi. Main samajh gaya ki yahi wo killer hai.

Jaise hi hum dono uske paas se gujre, usne chaku se Shreya par hamla kar diya.

Main us killer par nazar banaye hue tha. Jiase hi usne hamla kiya maine Shreya ko apni bahon me khinch liya. Mujhe uski soft chhatiya apne seene me lagti mehsoos hui.

Shreya: aahhhh… Tummm…

Sath hi sath maine ek hath se killer ki chaku wali kalai par waar kiya.

“Chhannnn”

Mere war se killer ki hath ki chaku dur ja kar giri. Maine Shreya ko chhod diya aur ghum kar killer ke munh par ek laat de mari.

Maine itni furti se killer ke munh par laat mari thi ki uske paas bachne ka samay nahi tha. Jaise hi killer niche girta maine uski ghutne par jod se laat se war kiya.

“aaaarrrrgggghhhh”

Meri war se killer chikh utha. Uske ghutne ki haddi tut chuki thi. Maine use bhagne ka koi rasta nahi chhoda tha.

Maine usse pucha “batao tumhe kisne bheja hai.”

Meri sawal sunkar killer hasa, “he he he, ek baar laundiya ko bacha liya. Agli baar to nahi bacha payega.”

Main: saale, madarchod, tumlogo ne pahli baar attack nahi kiya hai. Har baar main hi bachata hu ise. Chal bol tumhe kisne supari di.

Meri baat sunkar Shreya ekda se chauk gayi. Halaki killer meri baat sunkar apne munh me rakhi hui jahar ki goli ko nigal gaya.

Main use sahi samay par rok nahi paya aur woh jaldi hi mar gaya.

Main: Miss Shreya aap par kisi ki nazar hai. Kisi ne aap ki supari killer ko di hai. Aap sambhal kar rahiye ga. Ye teesra hai jisne aap ko marne ki koshish ki hai.

Main ye bolkar waha se jane laga, tabhi mujhe kuch yaad aaya.

Main: aur ek baad, shadi se aap itna darti kyun ho. Main nahi to koi aur tumse shadi karega hi. Khair apna khyal rakhiyega.

Main waha se nikal gaya. Uske baad kya hua pata nahi. Main waha se nikal kar sidha company pahucha jaha Juhi didi aa gayi thi. Seema bhi sath hi thi.

Main aur Juhi didi fir se purani file me bhid gaye. Main purane projects ko dekh raha tha aur sikh raha tha.

Halaki mujhe purane Rahul ki memory mili thi, lekin maine koi actual practice nahi ki thi. Isliye maine purane file se sikhne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Wahi Juhi didi, finance ko check kar rahi thi. Kal sone se pahle maine kuch projects ki finance report par dhyan dene ki baat ki thi. Didi usi par dhyan lagaye hue thi.

Juhi didi ne sabhi ghaple ko likh kar rakha tha. Chhoti se badi sabhi tarah ki finance ki hadkato ko likha.

Maine bhi apni file check kar li thi. Maine Seema ko bulaya.

Seema aaj kali stocking pahan kar aayi thi. Yani ki meri kahi hui baat use yaad thi.

Usne white shirt aur black miniskirt pahni thi, jo ghutno se upar aa rahi thi. Uski skirt stocking ke upar hi khatam ho rahi thi.

Jiske karan uske chalne se uske jangho ke bich ki kuch skin dikhai de rahi thi. Jo ladko ke lund khada karne ke liye kafi tha.

Seema ke aate hi Juhi didi nikal gayi. Sayad unhe bathroom jana tha. Unke jaate hi maine Seema ko apni taraf khicha aur god me bitha liya.

Seema ka chehra sharm se laal ho gaya. Halaki usne koi virodh nahi kiya. Bas munh se hi mana kar rahi thi. Main uski jangho par hath ferne laga.

Seema: sir, aap kya kar rahe ho. Koi dekh lega.

Main: to tumko ye dar hai ki koi dekh lega.

Seema: sir sir wo wo..

Main: haa bolo..

Seema: sir… (shy)

Main: yaar itna kyun sharma rahe ho?

Seema: sir I like you. But aap to Shreya mam se pyar karte ho na?

Main: chinta mat karo. Agar hum dono use nahi batayenge to usko pata kaise chalega.

Seema: sir lekin..

Main ek baar aur uski jangho par hath fera aur fir usko apni god se niche utar diya.

Main: thik hai iske baare me sochna. Agar tum na sahi to koi aur hogi.

Seema meri baat sunkar mujhe dekhne lagi. Use samajh nahi aa raha tha ki main itna kaise badal gaya.

Pahle main Shreya ke alawa kisi aur ladki par aankh utha kar bhi nahi dekha tha. Lekin ab main kisi ladki ke paas jane ke liye bol raha tha.

Ab Seema ko kaun samjhaye ki uske Rahul sir ab purane wale Rahul sir nahi rahe. Unke sharir me dusre ki aatma hai.

Seema: ji sir main aapko soch kar bataungi. Sir aapne kisi kaam ke liye bulaya tha.


Main: haa dekho, abhi tum city police ko 5 lakh donation de do company ke naam se. Aur kal ek board meeting rakho.


Yaha tak padhne ke liye sukriya. please like and comment.
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Mamla thoda pechida hota jaa raha hai. Shreya pe attack tez ho gaye hai aur sahi kaha thaa killer ne ki woh har jagah maujood to nahi reh sakta. Ab inko 3 month ka time Mila hai shayad aaj ke episode se uske bartaw me kuch badlaw aaye.
Thankyou...
Aap likhtey raho hum aapke sath hai but concentrate on your studies also.
Ji jarur...
 

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Update bhadiya tha👌👌

Kahani ka pace mein speed hua jo ki kharab nai hai kyuki yeh event important nai Lage plot ke liye lekin purana pace bhi accha tha kyuki Thora detail mein tha plot mein events aur characters ke actions explanation (mujhe Thora details pasand hai isliye bol Raha hu, agar kisi ko ye baat galat Lage toh sorry😅), hero bhi apne akal se aage bhad raha bhale uske paas takat aa rahi hai dheere dheere system ke jariye wo bhi acchi baat hai 👍

Thankyou... red_devil_98

Waise abhi daily basis PE nahi likh Raha hu to kahani ka pace flactuate karega..

Koi nahi jab daily likhne lagunga to ye problem nahi hogi...
 
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