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Fantasy The War Of Magical World

andyking302

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Update 4

WO ladki phone pe bat karne ke bad jaldi jaldi se kapde pahni aur apne room se nikal gayi fir usne apne garage se apna gadi nikali aur nikal gayi fir thodi der bad uski gadi ek hospital ke samne ja kar ruka aur wo gadi se nikal kar jaldi se hospital me chali gayi fir wo recipienists ke pass ja kar ek room ke bare me puchati hai aur wo se sidha us room ke taraf chali jati hai waha jakar dekhti hai waha par char panch ladke bed par behos pade huye hai aur unke pass ek ladki baithi huyi thi fir jaise hi us ladki ka dhayan is ladki par gaya to wo turant hi uth gayi aur boli.

Ladki- Are Supriya tum aa gayi aao yaha baitho. (Ye ladki aur koi nahi balki Supriya hai)

Supriya- Ye sab chhodo pahle ye batao Kaise huya ye sab aur kisne kiya tum pata lagayi.

Ladki- Ha maine pata lagaya wo ladka usi collage me naya naya addmission liya hai jaha par ranjeet padhta hai aur usi ne inlogo ka aisa halat kiya hai isse jayada uske bare me mujhe nahi pata chala.

Supriya- Us ladke ne mere pyar meri jan ranjeet par war kiya mai use jinda nahi chhodunga use hi kya mai uske khandan me kisi ko bhi jinda nahi chhodungi mujhe subah tak uski sari janamkundali chahiye tum chahe kuchh bhi karo mujhe nahi pata mujhe subah ka subah uske bare me sari jankari chahiye samajh gayi.

Ladki- thik hai mai subah tak uske bare sab pata laga lungi.

(Ab mai thoda Supriya aur ranjeet ke bare me bata du ye log bachpan se hi ek dusre se pyar karte hai yaha is sahar me inke aur koi nahi hai ye log apne maa bap ko markar ghar se bhag kar yaha aa gaye hai ye log apne maa bap ko is liye mara ki inke parents inke sadi ke khilaaf the ye log yaha aakar alag alag collage me addmission karwa liya aur us collage me drags ke dhandha karne lage ye log yaha dhire dhire apna shika jama liya aur ye mafiya bhi join kar liya hai lekin inke bare me itne detail se koi nahi janta hai)

Idhar mai khana khane ke bad sone chala gaya fir subah uth kar fresh huya aur apna martial arts ki traning karne laga 2 ghante traning karne ke bad waha se sidha apne room me gaya aur collage jane ke liye taiyar hone laga fir thodi der me taiyar ho kar khana khaya aur collage nikal gaya.

Idhar wo ladki bhi Adarsh ke bare me sari jankari nikal li aur sidha Supriya ke pass ja pahuchi.

Supriya- Uske bare me kuchh pata chala

Ladki- Ha mai uski sari janamkundali nikal li hai.

Supriya- To tum meri muh kya dekh rahi ho jaldi batao kon hai wo aur kaha rahta hai.

Ladki- Thik hai batata hu us ladke ka name Adarsh hai aur wo ek anath hai wo xxx anath asram me rahta hai aur ye lo uski photo bhi layi hu.

Supriya- Adarsh ek anath hai sale ki na maa ka pata na bap ka ek gandi nali ke kora hai wo aur usne.. huh bahut badi galati ki launde jo tune meri jan ko mara mai tumhe itni dardnak maut dungi ki upar wale bhi kap jayenge.

Fir usne apna mobile nikali aur ek no. Par coll ki aur boli

Supriya- Shera mai ek photo bhej rahi hu dhyan se dekh lena mujhe aaj kisi bhi kimat par is photo wale ki lash chahiye

Shera- Thik hai madam apka kam ho jayega

Idhat maine apne anath ashram se nikal kar sidha collage chala gaya jab mai waha gaya to sare student mujhe hi ghur rahe the jaise mai koi ajooba hu mai unlogo ko ignore karte huye sidha class me chala gaya fir hamari class start huyi thodi der bad ek peon mere class me aaya aur usne mujhse bola ki principal bula rahe hai mai waha se naikal kar sidha principal office pahucha to principal ne mujhse kal ke bare me puchha to maine use sab sach sach bata diya to usne mujhe last warning dekar chhod diya fir mai waha se nikal kar sidha canteen me gaya waha jakar thoda time pass kiya aur fir apne job par chala gaya waha par 6 pm tak rukne ke bad mai apne anath ashram ke liye nikal gaya abhi mai thoda hi dur gaya tha ki tabhi mujhe ek awaj sunayi diya mai piche mud kar dekha to waha uncle jon khade the mai yaha uncle jon ko dekh kar surprise ho gaya aur unse puchha.

Mai- Are uncle jon aap.. Aap yaha kya kar rahe hai

Jon- Mai yaha kisi kam se aaya tha aur jab mai wapas jane laga to tumhe dekha to sochha ki tumhare sath chala jata hu hamari raste bhi kat jayenge aur ham muchhe bate bhi kar lenge.

Mai- Apne thik kiya uncle mai bhi akele hi jaa raha tha ab ek se bhale do hahhhh

Jon- Waise kal kyu nahi aaye tum

Mai- wo kya hai na uncle jon ki kal mai kuchh jyada hi thak gaya tha isliye ashram jate hi so gaya tha.


Hamlog isi tarah bat karte huye ja rahe the ki tabhi ek gadi aakar hamare samne ruki aur usme se 10 gunde nikale aur hame charo taraf se gher liye aur hamare taraf badhne lage.

Mai- wo bhai log aapne hamara rasta kyu roka hai hato hamare raste se.

Un gundo me se ek gunda jo dekhne me in logo ka boss lag raha tha wo samne aaya aur bola.

G boss - Hamlog yaha tumhara raste roke isliye nahi khade hai hai ham yaha se hat jaye.

Mai- To tumlog yaha aise G**d marane ke liye khade ho hato yaha se.

g boss- Ham yaha tumhari G***d marne ke liye ( Apna jibh dat tar dabate huye) Auchh mai yaha tumhe parlok bhejne ke liye khade hai.

Mai- ham to sayad tumse kabhi mile bhi nahi hai aur mujhe aisa lagta hai tum pahle mujhse mile nahi ho to fir the m hame kyu marna chahte ho.

G boss- Tumne sahi kaha ham kabhi nahi mile hai agar mile hote to tum abtak jinda nahi hote waise mai ek bat bata du mujhe tumhe marne ke liye supari mili hai.

Mai- Kya... Mujhe marne ke liye supari lekin mujhe jaha tak yad hai mujhe kisi se koi dusmani bhi nahi hai to mujhe koi kyu marna chahega.

G boss- Mai ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhe kon marna chahta hai lekin mai tumhe ek bat bata deta hu tum aaj jarur maroge ( apne ek gunde se) Jao re mar dalo aur ha aram se marna jyada dard na ho wo kya hai na ki mujhe kisi ko dard me dekhna achha nahi lagta hahhhh

Mai- Are ruko bhai ek minat ruko mujhe apne uncle se bat karne hai Ha to uncle aap sath aa rahe hai ya aap side me ho kar tamasa dekhiyega.

jon- nahi mai nahi aaunga mai to waha par baith kar tamasa dekhunga aur mujhe aaj ye bhi dekhna hai ki tum mujhse kya kya sikhe ho aur uska use kaise karte ho.

mai- Thik hai uncle aap side ho jaiye ( un gundo se ) ha to ab tum waha khade khade kya kar rahe ho aao aur maro mujhe

mera bat sun kar wo gunda bhagte huye mere pass aaya aur uske hath me ek hocky stick thi usne jaise hi mujhe apne hocky stick se marna chaha waise hi maine ek kick uske pet me de mara wo wahi gir kar behos ho gaya.

Mai- are are are ye kya ho gaya kahi jyada kas ke to nahi lag gaya sorry bhai wo kya hai na ki mai marte huye dhyan hi nahi de pata ki jor se lagi ya dhire ha sorry bhai so sorry hahhahh

Idhar g boss ne jab dekha ki uska ek banda ek hi kick se behos ho gaya to usne do gunde ko aur mere pass bheja maine un dono ka bheja bhi tod diya isi tarah mai abhi tak 8 gundo ko nipta diya tha aur 9ve se bhida huya tha mai abhi use mar ke behos kiya hi tha ki ek goli chalne ki awaj aayi aur sath me ek chikh ki bhi maine palat kar dekha to mera hoss hi ud gaya aur gusse se mera chehra lal ho gaya kyuki goli g boss ne chalayi thi aur wo goli uncle jon ke shine me lagi thi to huya ye ki mai use 9ve gunde ko mar mar kar behos kar raha tha tabhi g boss ne mere upar goli fire kar diya jise uncle jon ne dekh liya aur wo mujhe bachane ke liye mere samne aa gaye mai jab unhe khoon se lathpath dekha to mere aankho se aansu girne lage aur mera chehra guse se lal ho gaya maine waha aas pass dekha to mujhe ek gunde ki talwar dikhi mai jaldi se us talwar ko uthaya aur us g boss ke taraf phek diya jo sidhe jakar uske shine ke aar par ho gaya fir mai bhagkar uncle jon ke pass gaya aur unhe pakad kar rone laga.


--- To kya jon uncle mar jayenge kya jon uncle ka adarsh ke jiwan me itna hi bhumika tha aur in gundo ko kisne bheja tha kya ye Supriya ke gunde the ya koi aur
Ye sab janne ke liye padhte rahiye THE WAR OF MAGICAL WORLD



शानदार bhai
 

Xabhi

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Update 4

WO ladki phone pe bat karne ke bad jaldi jaldi se kapde pahni aur apne room se nikal gayi fir usne apne garage se apna gadi nikali aur nikal gayi fir thodi der bad uski gadi ek hospital ke samne ja kar ruka aur wo gadi se nikal kar jaldi se hospital me chali gayi fir wo recipienists ke pass ja kar ek room ke bare me puchati hai aur wo se sidha us room ke taraf chali jati hai waha jakar dekhti hai waha par char panch ladke bed par behos pade huye hai aur unke pass ek ladki baithi huyi thi fir jaise hi us ladki ka dhayan is ladki par gaya to wo turant hi uth gayi aur boli.

Ladki- Are Supriya tum aa gayi aao yaha baitho. (Ye ladki aur koi nahi balki Supriya hai)

Supriya- Ye sab chhodo pahle ye batao Kaise huya ye sab aur kisne kiya tum pata lagayi.

Ladki- Ha maine pata lagaya wo ladka usi collage me naya naya addmission liya hai jaha par ranjeet padhta hai aur usi ne inlogo ka aisa halat kiya hai isse jayada uske bare me mujhe nahi pata chala.

Supriya- Us ladke ne mere pyar meri jan ranjeet par war kiya mai use jinda nahi chhodunga use hi kya mai uske khandan me kisi ko bhi jinda nahi chhodungi mujhe subah tak uski sari janamkundali chahiye tum chahe kuchh bhi karo mujhe nahi pata mujhe subah ka subah uske bare me sari jankari chahiye samajh gayi.

Ladki- thik hai mai subah tak uske bare sab pata laga lungi.

(Ab mai thoda Supriya aur ranjeet ke bare me bata du ye log bachpan se hi ek dusre se pyar karte hai yaha is sahar me inke aur koi nahi hai ye log apne maa bap ko markar ghar se bhag kar yaha aa gaye hai ye log apne maa bap ko is liye mara ki inke parents inke sadi ke khilaaf the ye log yaha aakar alag alag collage me addmission karwa liya aur us collage me drags ke dhandha karne lage ye log yaha dhire dhire apna shika jama liya aur ye mafiya bhi join kar liya hai lekin inke bare me itne detail se koi nahi janta hai)

Idhar mai khana khane ke bad sone chala gaya fir subah uth kar fresh huya aur apna martial arts ki traning karne laga 2 ghante traning karne ke bad waha se sidha apne room me gaya aur collage jane ke liye taiyar hone laga fir thodi der me taiyar ho kar khana khaya aur collage nikal gaya.

Idhar wo ladki bhi Adarsh ke bare me sari jankari nikal li aur sidha Supriya ke pass ja pahuchi.

Supriya- Uske bare me kuchh pata chala

Ladki- Ha mai uski sari janamkundali nikal li hai.

Supriya- To tum meri muh kya dekh rahi ho jaldi batao kon hai wo aur kaha rahta hai.

Ladki- Thik hai batata hu us ladke ka name Adarsh hai aur wo ek anath hai wo xxx anath asram me rahta hai aur ye lo uski photo bhi layi hu.

Supriya- Adarsh ek anath hai sale ki na maa ka pata na bap ka ek gandi nali ke kora hai wo aur usne.. huh bahut badi galati ki launde jo tune meri jan ko mara mai tumhe itni dardnak maut dungi ki upar wale bhi kap jayenge.

Fir usne apna mobile nikali aur ek no. Par coll ki aur boli

Supriya- Shera mai ek photo bhej rahi hu dhyan se dekh lena mujhe aaj kisi bhi kimat par is photo wale ki lash chahiye

Shera- Thik hai madam apka kam ho jayega

Idhat maine apne anath ashram se nikal kar sidha collage chala gaya jab mai waha gaya to sare student mujhe hi ghur rahe the jaise mai koi ajooba hu mai unlogo ko ignore karte huye sidha class me chala gaya fir hamari class start huyi thodi der bad ek peon mere class me aaya aur usne mujhse bola ki principal bula rahe hai mai waha se naikal kar sidha principal office pahucha to principal ne mujhse kal ke bare me puchha to maine use sab sach sach bata diya to usne mujhe last warning dekar chhod diya fir mai waha se nikal kar sidha canteen me gaya waha jakar thoda time pass kiya aur fir apne job par chala gaya waha par 6 pm tak rukne ke bad mai apne anath ashram ke liye nikal gaya abhi mai thoda hi dur gaya tha ki tabhi mujhe ek awaj sunayi diya mai piche mud kar dekha to waha uncle jon khade the mai yaha uncle jon ko dekh kar surprise ho gaya aur unse puchha.

Mai- Are uncle jon aap.. Aap yaha kya kar rahe hai

Jon- Mai yaha kisi kam se aaya tha aur jab mai wapas jane laga to tumhe dekha to sochha ki tumhare sath chala jata hu hamari raste bhi kat jayenge aur ham muchhe bate bhi kar lenge.

Mai- Apne thik kiya uncle mai bhi akele hi jaa raha tha ab ek se bhale do hahhhh

Jon- Waise kal kyu nahi aaye tum

Mai- wo kya hai na uncle jon ki kal mai kuchh jyada hi thak gaya tha isliye ashram jate hi so gaya tha.


Hamlog isi tarah bat karte huye ja rahe the ki tabhi ek gadi aakar hamare samne ruki aur usme se 10 gunde nikale aur hame charo taraf se gher liye aur hamare taraf badhne lage.

Mai- wo bhai log aapne hamara rasta kyu roka hai hato hamare raste se.

Un gundo me se ek gunda jo dekhne me in logo ka boss lag raha tha wo samne aaya aur bola.

G boss - Hamlog yaha tumhara raste roke isliye nahi khade hai hai ham yaha se hat jaye.

Mai- To tumlog yaha aise G**d marane ke liye khade ho hato yaha se.

g boss- Ham yaha tumhari G***d marne ke liye ( Apna jibh dat tar dabate huye) Auchh mai yaha tumhe parlok bhejne ke liye khade hai.

Mai- ham to sayad tumse kabhi mile bhi nahi hai aur mujhe aisa lagta hai tum pahle mujhse mile nahi ho to fir the m hame kyu marna chahte ho.

G boss- Tumne sahi kaha ham kabhi nahi mile hai agar mile hote to tum abtak jinda nahi hote waise mai ek bat bata du mujhe tumhe marne ke liye supari mili hai.

Mai- Kya... Mujhe marne ke liye supari lekin mujhe jaha tak yad hai mujhe kisi se koi dusmani bhi nahi hai to mujhe koi kyu marna chahega.

G boss- Mai ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhe kon marna chahta hai lekin mai tumhe ek bat bata deta hu tum aaj jarur maroge ( apne ek gunde se) Jao re mar dalo aur ha aram se marna jyada dard na ho wo kya hai na ki mujhe kisi ko dard me dekhna achha nahi lagta hahhhh

Mai- Are ruko bhai ek minat ruko mujhe apne uncle se bat karne hai Ha to uncle aap sath aa rahe hai ya aap side me ho kar tamasa dekhiyega.

jon- nahi mai nahi aaunga mai to waha par baith kar tamasa dekhunga aur mujhe aaj ye bhi dekhna hai ki tum mujhse kya kya sikhe ho aur uska use kaise karte ho.

mai- Thik hai uncle aap side ho jaiye ( un gundo se ) ha to ab tum waha khade khade kya kar rahe ho aao aur maro mujhe

mera bat sun kar wo gunda bhagte huye mere pass aaya aur uske hath me ek hocky stick thi usne jaise hi mujhe apne hocky stick se marna chaha waise hi maine ek kick uske pet me de mara wo wahi gir kar behos ho gaya.

Mai- are are are ye kya ho gaya kahi jyada kas ke to nahi lag gaya sorry bhai wo kya hai na ki mai marte huye dhyan hi nahi de pata ki jor se lagi ya dhire ha sorry bhai so sorry hahhahh

Idhar g boss ne jab dekha ki uska ek banda ek hi kick se behos ho gaya to usne do gunde ko aur mere pass bheja maine un dono ka bheja bhi tod diya isi tarah mai abhi tak 8 gundo ko nipta diya tha aur 9ve se bhida huya tha mai abhi use mar ke behos kiya hi tha ki ek goli chalne ki awaj aayi aur sath me ek chikh ki bhi maine palat kar dekha to mera hoss hi ud gaya aur gusse se mera chehra lal ho gaya kyuki goli g boss ne chalayi thi aur wo goli uncle jon ke shine me lagi thi to huya ye ki mai use 9ve gunde ko mar mar kar behos kar raha tha tabhi g boss ne mere upar goli fire kar diya jise uncle jon ne dekh liya aur wo mujhe bachane ke liye mere samne aa gaye mai jab unhe khoon se lathpath dekha to mere aankho se aansu girne lage aur mera chehra guse se lal ho gaya maine waha aas pass dekha to mujhe ek gunde ki talwar dikhi mai jaldi se us talwar ko uthaya aur us g boss ke taraf phek diya jo sidhe jakar uske shine ke aar par ho gaya fir mai bhagkar uncle jon ke pass gaya aur unhe pakad kar rone laga.


--- To kya jon uncle mar jayenge kya jon uncle ka adarsh ke jiwan me itna hi bhumika tha aur in gundo ko kisne bheja tha kya ye Supriya ke gunde the ya koi aur
Ye sab janne ke liye padhte rahiye THE WAR OF MAGICAL WORLD
Oh to Vo ladki supriya hi thi or usne ek ladki se adarsh ki info niklne ka bola hai usne apna kaam kiya or supriya ko bta diya usne apne ek gunde ko supari de di Jisne adarsh pr apne sathiyo ke sath hamla kiya adarsh ne 9 ko behosh kr diya pr ledar ne goli chla Di jo uncle jon ne dekh li or adarsh ko bchane ke liye vo goli Apne sine me le li jisko dekh adarsh ne ek talwar se gboss ke sine ke Paar kr diya... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
 

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har kahani ka 1 hi start hota he maro ya hospital me last condition me pahocho uske baad flackback start kiu? Agar flackback dikhana hi tha to suruse dikhana thana maja aajata hero ko maar kar flackback start karenge to jitna excited surume laga tha badme nailagega agar bura laga hoto sorry adarsh bhai .
 

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Ek ladka ek jangal me bhage ja raha tha jo dikhne me karib 5 feet 11 inch ka hoga uske gale me ek locket (pendant) latak raha tha aur uske sath me ek ladki bhi thi wo ladka us ladki ke hath pakade huye bhag raha tha un dono ke pichhe bahut se gunde type ladke pade huye the jo unke pichhe kuchh hi duri par unka pichha kar rhe the wo dono bhag hi rahe the ki tabhi piche se ek mota lakdi aakar un dono ke pair par laga aur wo dono wahi gir gaye fir kisi tarah wo dono uth kar bhagne hi wale the ki tabhi ek awaj sunayi di.

-Are ab bas bhi karo Adarsh kitna bhagoge aaj tum dono ko bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakta fir kyu faltu me mera samay barbad kar rahe ho
(Wo ladka jo bhag raha tha wo hai hamare story ka hero Adarsh)

Wo gunde Adarsh ko charo taraf se gher liye to Adarsh ne jab dekha ki ab aur bhagna byarth hai to wo chupchap khada ho gya aur apne muh se khoon thukte huye bola.

Adarsh- Tumne sahi bola Ranjeet ab bhagne se koi fayda nahi hai ab ya to aar ya par aa jao sab aaj dekhte hai kon bachta hai aur kon marta hai (Fir Adarsh ne us ladki ko dekhte huye bola) Supriya tum ek taraf ho jao aaj ya to mai nahi rahunga ya fir ye log.
Supriya- Nahi Adarsh tum ye log se mat lado chalo ye log bahut sare hai chalo yaha se bhag jate hai.
Adarsh- Nhi ab aur nahi bhag sakte bahut bhag liye aur ye log ka atyachar bhi bahut sah liya ab aur nahi sahenge Aa jao ranjeet khud aaoge ya fir apne chamcho ko bhejoge aaj yaha se koi bhi bach kar nahu jayega.

Itna bol kar adarsh ranjeet ke taraf isara kar ke apne taraf bulane laga ranjeet to pahle se hi guse me tha ab wo adarsh ka ishara dekh kar aur aag babula ho gaya aur guse se apne sathiyo ko bola.

Ranjeet- Jao re aaj isko maja chakha do jo usko pahle marega usko 1 lakh rupya dunga.

Ranjeet ke bat sun kar uska sare chamche khus ho gaye aur Adarsh ko marne ke liye apne hatho me hathiyar leke uske taraf bhagne lage sabse aage jo gunda tha uske hath me ek hammer wo apne hammer wale hath ko lahrate huye Adarsh par ek war kiya jisse adarsh ne niche jukte huye bach gaya aur apne hath ko muka banate huye uske jabde me ek gusa mara jisse wo wahi ke wahi dher ho gaya fir adarsh ne us gunde ke hath se hammer ko apne hath me leta hai aur sare gundo ke taraf bhagne lagta hai aur fir hota hai ek ghamasan ladayi jisme adarsh ne sare gundo ko mar mar kar bharta bana diya itne sare gundo se nipatane ke bad adarsh bhi thoda thak sa gaya tha lekin fir bhi apne sanso ko durust karte huye wo ranjeet ke taraf badha ranjeet ko to pahle hi halat khara ho gaya tha jab usne dekha ki uske sare gunde jamin par dher ho gaye hai aur jab usne dekha ki ab Adarsh uske taraf badh raha hai to uska halat aur kharab ho gaya lekin kute ka dum kabhi sidha nahi hota aisa hi iske sath bhi tha itna sab kuchh hone ke bad bhi wo apne hath me ek chaku lekar adarsh ke badhne laga Adarsh ne jab dekha ki ranjeet bhi chaku lekar uske taraf hi aa raha hai to Adarsh ne apne hath me pakde huye hammer ko aur tightly pakad liya aur uske taraf bad gaya abhi wo ranjeet ke kareeb pauchne hi wala tha ki tabhi kisi ne pichhe se uske pith me chaku mar diya jisse Adarsh dard me chilate huye jamin par gir gaya aur apne sar ko pichhe kar ke jab usne dekha ki use piche se kisne mara hai to uska hos ud gaya aur uske aankho se aansu girne laga kyuki chaku marne wala nahi wali thi aur wo aur koi nahi balki Supriya thi jo piche khadi hokar muskura rahi thi fir wo muskurate huye aage jakar ranjeet ke gale lag gayi aur uske hoth par kiss karne lagi.

Adarsh- (dard me kaharte huye) Kyu akhir tumne aisa kyu kiya mai to yaha tumhe bachane aaya tha lekin tumne mere sath aisa kyu kiya.
Supriya- Hahahahhh tumhe kya laga mai tumhe phone kar ke yaha mujhe bachane k liye bulayi thi chu... Chu...chu..chu.. tu kitna na samajh hai re mai tumhe yaha mujhe bachane ke liye nahi balki tumhe marne ke liye bulayi thi

Jab Adarsh ne ye suna to uska sar guse se phatane laga aur wo kisi tarah bal lagakar apne pair par khada huya aur apne hath me pakde huye hammer ko Supriya ke sar par de mara jisse uske sar ka kachumar nikal gaya aur wo wahi dher ho gayi jab ranjeet ne ye dekha to wo guse me paglo ki tarah chilane laga.

Ranjeet- Supriya nahi ye kya ho gaya nhi ye tumne thik nahi kiya adarsh ab tumhe iska phal bhogna hoga tume meri Supriya ko mar dala mai tumhe jinda nahi chhodunga.

Itne bolne ke bad ranjeet Adarsh ke taraf paglo ki tarah bhagte huye gaya aur adarsh ke pet me apna chaku mar diya lekin is bar dard me chilane ki awaj ek nahi do aayi thi ek to Adarsh ki thi aur dusri ranjeet ki kyoki ranjeet ke chhati me jis side me dil rahta hai waha ek chaku gusa huya tha lekin ye kab huya to aaiye jante hai jab ranjeet paglo ke tarah apne hath me chaku liye Adarsh ki taraf bhagte huye jaa raha tha tabhi adarsh ne jo chaku Supriya ne use mari thi wo nikal liya tha aur jaise hi ranjeet ne apne chaku adarsh ke pet me gusaya waise hi adarsh ne bhi apna chaku ranjeet ke dil me utar diya jisse ranjeet wahi gir kar apna dam tod diya fir adarsh bhi gir gaya aur upar asman ke taraf dekhte huye bola.

Adarsh- Kyu bhagwan akhir kyu apne mere sath aisa kyu kiya apne na mujhe maa bap ka pyar diya mujhe bachpan se anath banaya aur na hi kabhi koi sacha dost diya akhir meri galti kya thi mai to is ladki ko apna sacha dost mana tha aur yaha ise bachane aaya tha lekin kya huya isne hi mujhe chaku mar kar meri jan lene ki kosish ki akhir kyu mere hi sath aisa kyu hota hai.

itna bol kar adarsh Rone lagata hai aur apne jiwan me bite abhi tak ke samay ko yad karne lagta hai....

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WO ladki phone pe bat karne ke bad jaldi jaldi se kapde pahni aur apne room se nikal gayi fir usne apne garage se apna gadi nikali aur nikal gayi fir thodi der bad uski gadi ek hospital ke samne ja kar ruka aur wo gadi se nikal kar jaldi se hospital me chali gayi fir wo recipienists ke pass ja kar ek room ke bare me puchati hai aur wo se sidha us room ke taraf chali jati hai waha jakar dekhti hai waha par char panch ladke bed par behos pade huye hai aur unke pass ek ladki baithi huyi thi fir jaise hi us ladki ka dhayan is ladki par gaya to wo turant hi uth gayi aur boli.

Ladki- Are Supriya tum aa gayi aao yaha baitho. (Ye ladki aur koi nahi balki Supriya hai)

Supriya- Ye sab chhodo pahle ye batao Kaise huya ye sab aur kisne kiya tum pata lagayi.

Ladki- Ha maine pata lagaya wo ladka usi collage me naya naya addmission liya hai jaha par ranjeet padhta hai aur usi ne inlogo ka aisa halat kiya hai isse jayada uske bare me mujhe nahi pata chala.

Supriya- Us ladke ne mere pyar meri jan ranjeet par war kiya mai use jinda nahi chhodunga use hi kya mai uske khandan me kisi ko bhi jinda nahi chhodungi mujhe subah tak uski sari janamkundali chahiye tum chahe kuchh bhi karo mujhe nahi pata mujhe subah ka subah uske bare me sari jankari chahiye samajh gayi.

Ladki- thik hai mai subah tak uske bare sab pata laga lungi.

(Ab mai thoda Supriya aur ranjeet ke bare me bata du ye log bachpan se hi ek dusre se pyar karte hai yaha is sahar me inke aur koi nahi hai ye log apne maa bap ko markar ghar se bhag kar yaha aa gaye hai ye log apne maa bap ko is liye mara ki inke parents inke sadi ke khilaaf the ye log yaha aakar alag alag collage me addmission karwa liya aur us collage me drags ke dhandha karne lage ye log yaha dhire dhire apna shika jama liya aur ye mafiya bhi join kar liya hai lekin inke bare me itne detail se koi nahi janta hai)

Idhar mai khana khane ke bad sone chala gaya fir subah uth kar fresh huya aur apna martial arts ki traning karne laga 2 ghante traning karne ke bad waha se sidha apne room me gaya aur collage jane ke liye taiyar hone laga fir thodi der me taiyar ho kar khana khaya aur collage nikal gaya.

Idhar wo ladki bhi Adarsh ke bare me sari jankari nikal li aur sidha Supriya ke pass ja pahuchi.

Supriya- Uske bare me kuchh pata chala

Ladki- Ha mai uski sari janamkundali nikal li hai.

Supriya- To tum meri muh kya dekh rahi ho jaldi batao kon hai wo aur kaha rahta hai.

Ladki- Thik hai batata hu us ladke ka name Adarsh hai aur wo ek anath hai wo xxx anath asram me rahta hai aur ye lo uski photo bhi layi hu.

Supriya- Adarsh ek anath hai sale ki na maa ka pata na bap ka ek gandi nali ke kora hai wo aur usne.. huh bahut badi galati ki launde jo tune meri jan ko mara mai tumhe itni dardnak maut dungi ki upar wale bhi kap jayenge.

Fir usne apna mobile nikali aur ek no. Par coll ki aur boli

Supriya- Shera mai ek photo bhej rahi hu dhyan se dekh lena mujhe aaj kisi bhi kimat par is photo wale ki lash chahiye

Shera- Thik hai madam apka kam ho jayega

Idhat maine apne anath ashram se nikal kar sidha collage chala gaya jab mai waha gaya to sare student mujhe hi ghur rahe the jaise mai koi ajooba hu mai unlogo ko ignore karte huye sidha class me chala gaya fir hamari class start huyi thodi der bad ek peon mere class me aaya aur usne mujhse bola ki principal bula rahe hai mai waha se naikal kar sidha principal office pahucha to principal ne mujhse kal ke bare me puchha to maine use sab sach sach bata diya to usne mujhe last warning dekar chhod diya fir mai waha se nikal kar sidha canteen me gaya waha jakar thoda time pass kiya aur fir apne job par chala gaya waha par 6 pm tak rukne ke bad mai apne anath ashram ke liye nikal gaya abhi mai thoda hi dur gaya tha ki tabhi mujhe ek awaj sunayi diya mai piche mud kar dekha to waha uncle jon khade the mai yaha uncle jon ko dekh kar surprise ho gaya aur unse puchha.

Mai- Are uncle jon aap.. Aap yaha kya kar rahe hai

Jon- Mai yaha kisi kam se aaya tha aur jab mai wapas jane laga to tumhe dekha to sochha ki tumhare sath chala jata hu hamari raste bhi kat jayenge aur ham muchhe bate bhi kar lenge.

Mai- Apne thik kiya uncle mai bhi akele hi jaa raha tha ab ek se bhale do hahhhh

Jon- Waise kal kyu nahi aaye tum

Mai- wo kya hai na uncle jon ki kal mai kuchh jyada hi thak gaya tha isliye ashram jate hi so gaya tha.


Hamlog isi tarah bat karte huye ja rahe the ki tabhi ek gadi aakar hamare samne ruki aur usme se 10 gunde nikale aur hame charo taraf se gher liye aur hamare taraf badhne lage.

Mai- wo bhai log aapne hamara rasta kyu roka hai hato hamare raste se.

Un gundo me se ek gunda jo dekhne me in logo ka boss lag raha tha wo samne aaya aur bola.

G boss - Hamlog yaha tumhara raste roke isliye nahi khade hai hai ham yaha se hat jaye.

Mai- To tumlog yaha aise G**d marane ke liye khade ho hato yaha se.

g boss- Ham yaha tumhari G***d marne ke liye ( Apna jibh dat tar dabate huye) Auchh mai yaha tumhe parlok bhejne ke liye khade hai.

Mai- ham to sayad tumse kabhi mile bhi nahi hai aur mujhe aisa lagta hai tum pahle mujhse mile nahi ho to fir the m hame kyu marna chahte ho.

G boss- Tumne sahi kaha ham kabhi nahi mile hai agar mile hote to tum abtak jinda nahi hote waise mai ek bat bata du mujhe tumhe marne ke liye supari mili hai.

Mai- Kya... Mujhe marne ke liye supari lekin mujhe jaha tak yad hai mujhe kisi se koi dusmani bhi nahi hai to mujhe koi kyu marna chahega.

G boss- Mai ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhe kon marna chahta hai lekin mai tumhe ek bat bata deta hu tum aaj jarur maroge ( apne ek gunde se) Jao re mar dalo aur ha aram se marna jyada dard na ho wo kya hai na ki mujhe kisi ko dard me dekhna achha nahi lagta hahhhh

Mai- Are ruko bhai ek minat ruko mujhe apne uncle se bat karne hai Ha to uncle aap sath aa rahe hai ya aap side me ho kar tamasa dekhiyega.

jon- nahi mai nahi aaunga mai to waha par baith kar tamasa dekhunga aur mujhe aaj ye bhi dekhna hai ki tum mujhse kya kya sikhe ho aur uska use kaise karte ho.

mai- Thik hai uncle aap side ho jaiye ( un gundo se ) ha to ab tum waha khade khade kya kar rahe ho aao aur maro mujhe

mera bat sun kar wo gunda bhagte huye mere pass aaya aur uske hath me ek hocky stick thi usne jaise hi mujhe apne hocky stick se marna chaha waise hi maine ek kick uske pet me de mara wo wahi gir kar behos ho gaya.

Mai- are are are ye kya ho gaya kahi jyada kas ke to nahi lag gaya sorry bhai wo kya hai na ki mai marte huye dhyan hi nahi de pata ki jor se lagi ya dhire ha sorry bhai so sorry hahhahh

Idhar g boss ne jab dekha ki uska ek banda ek hi kick se behos ho gaya to usne do gunde ko aur mere pass bheja maine un dono ka bheja bhi tod diya isi tarah mai abhi tak 8 gundo ko nipta diya tha aur 9ve se bhida huya tha mai abhi use mar ke behos kiya hi tha ki ek goli chalne ki awaj aayi aur sath me ek chikh ki bhi maine palat kar dekha to mera hoss hi ud gaya aur gusse se mera chehra lal ho gaya kyuki goli g boss ne chalayi thi aur wo goli uncle jon ke shine me lagi thi to huya ye ki mai use 9ve gunde ko mar mar kar behos kar raha tha tabhi g boss ne mere upar goli fire kar diya jise uncle jon ne dekh liya aur wo mujhe bachane ke liye mere samne aa gaye mai jab unhe khoon se lathpath dekha to mere aankho se aansu girne lage aur mera chehra guse se lal ho gaya maine waha aas pass dekha to mujhe ek gunde ki talwar dikhi mai jaldi se us talwar ko uthaya aur us g boss ke taraf phek diya jo sidhe jakar uske shine ke aar par ho gaya fir mai bhagkar uncle jon ke pass gaya aur unhe pakad kar rone laga.


--- To kya jon uncle mar jayenge kya jon uncle ka adarsh ke jiwan me itna hi bhumika tha aur in gundo ko kisne bheja tha kya ye Supriya ke gunde the ya koi aur
Ye sab janne ke liye padhte rahiye THE WAR OF MAGICAL WORLD
Bhai update thoda jldi jldi diya kro
 

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Ek ladka ek anath asram ke ground me running kar raha tha wo ladka karib 2 ghante se us ground me running kar raha tha jisse ek sarir pasine se lathpath ho gaya tha tabhi use ek awaj sunayi di.

-Adrash tum aur kitne der tak running karoge tumne to allready is ground ka 20 chakar laga liya hai ab bas bhi karo aaj tumhe collage bhi jana hai yad hai na ki aaj tumhare collage ka pahla din hai.

(Adarsh ke jagah par ab mai likhunga ab ye kahani adarsh ke jubani chalegi)
Ye awaj lagane wale aur koi nahi balki is anath ashram ke warden hai wo mujhe apne bete ki tarah mante hai is liye mai unhe baba kah kat bulata hu mai is anath ashram me bachpan se hi rah raha hu

Mai- Baba aap yaha aap kab
aaye.

Baba- Jab se tum yaha running kar rahe ho tab se mai tumhe hi dekh raha hu waise aaj collage jana hai ya nahi ya collage ke pahle din hi leave lena hai.

Mai- Baba aaj tak kabhi aisa huya hai ki mai bina koi emergency ke leave liya hu.

Baba- Bat to tumhari sahi hai tumne aaj tak kabhi bhi apne school se leave nahi liya hai lekin mujhe lag raha hai aaj tumhara ye record tut jayega kyuki ab tymhare pass one hour ka time bachha hai aur tum itne time me sab manage kaise karoge.

MAi- (mai apne hath me pahne ghadi me dekhte huye) Oh teri... Itna time ho gaya mujhe to pata hi nahi chala thanks baba ye yad dilane ke liye.

Fir mai waha se jaldi se bhag kar apne room me gaya aur apna chadi baniyan aur towel lekar bathroom me bhaga jo Anath ashram ka common bathroom tha fir mai jaldi se nahaya aur apne room me jakar apna kapda change kiya aur jaldi se collage ke liye nikal gaya raste me mujhe ek adami ne awaj lagaya ye jon uncle the.
Jon uncle ye uncle mujhe aaj se karib 5 sal pahle mile the tab ye bhi mujhe apne bete ki tarah mante hai inke sath bhi ajab bat hai jab bhi mai inke pass jata hu ye mujhe jaduyi duniya aur jaduyi beast ke bare me bolte rahte hai halaki mujhe unke batho par Biswas to nahi hota lekin ha unke bat sunane me mujhe bahut maja aata hai. Is liye mai har roj inke pass jata rahta hu aur ha ye mujhe martial arts bhi sikhate hai ye mujhe martial arts me itna mahir kar diye ki mai akele hi 5 logo ko sambhal sakta hu.

Jon- Adarsh wo Adarsh

Mai- Are uncle jin aap Good morning uncle.

Jon- Good morning my child tum itne jaldi jaldi me kidhar jaa rahe ho aur 2 dino se mujhse mile bhi nahi.

Mai- uncle jon bat aisi hai ki aaj mera collage ka first day hai aur mai allready late ho chuka is liye jaldi jaldi se jaa raha hu aur mai 2 dino se kuchh jyada hi busy tha is liye apse nahi mila sorry uncle jon mai wapas aakar apse jarur milunga.

Itna bolkar mai jaldi se waha se nikal gaya sayd uncle jon kuchh aur bhi bol rahe the lekin mai jaldi jaldi me unke bato par dhyan nahi diya mai waha se nikal kar sidha apne collage gaya ye collage is city ke sabse bada collage tha yaha par admission ya to scholarship basis par hoti ya moti rakam donation ke roop me dekar hoti thi aur aap log to ye jan hi gaye honge ki mere jaisa ladka yaha par moti rakam dekar to addmission nahi le sakta kyuki mere pass itna paisa hai to nahi ki mai moti rakam de saku ha mai part time job karta hu taki mai apna jarurat puri kar saku lekin usse to mai yaha addmission nahi le sakta na mera addmission yaha scholarship basis par huya tha
mai sidha collage ke gate par karte huye andar gaya to dekha ki andar bahut sare senior ladke ladiya junior ladke ladkiyo ki ranging ke rahe the mai ye dekh kar thoda dar gaya waise to mai darpok ladka nahi hu lekin mai janboojh kar kisi lafde me nahi phasta hu lekin koi samne se aakar ungali Kare to mai use chhodta bhi nahi hu isliye mai waha se sabke najro se bachte huye apne class ki or ja hi raha tha ki tabhi hay re meri futi kismat ek senior group ki najar mere upar pad gayi aur wo bhi aisi waisi group ki nahi is collage ke sabse bigdail grop ki najar mujh par padi.

Ladka1- Bhai wo dekho ek ladka hamse bachke bhagne ke firak me hai

Ek ladke ne us group ke ek ladke se bola jo dekhne me us group ke boss lag raha tha (us ladke ko boss hi likhunga Aur baki ladke ko ladka1 ladka2 )

ladka2- Bhai sale ne aapse hosiyari karne ki kosish ki hai us sale ko chhodenge nahi aaj.

Fir un ladko ke boss ne unhe awaj lagayi lekin mai apna sar niche kiye huye bina unki bat sune apne class ki or chala ja raha tha.

Ladka3- Bhai wo to apka bat sun hi nahi raha hai.

Ladka1- Lagta hai usko kuchh jyada hi charbi chadhi hai uska charbi nikanla padega.

Ladka2- Bhai mai jakar usko pakad ke lata hu sale ko yaha lakar achhe se maja chakhayenge

Un ladko ke boss jo kab se mujhe awaj laga raha tha lekin mai uski bat sun hi nahi raha tha jisse use bahut jyada gussa aane laga to usne ladka 2 ko ishara kiya mujhe waha lekar aane ke liye fir wo ladka2 mere pass aaya aur mujhse bola.

Ladka2- Wo tumhe sunayi nahi deta hai kya kab se bhai tumhe bula rahe hai.

Mai- Aap mujhse bat kar rahe hai kya.

Ladka2- Tumhare shiwa aur yaha tumhe koi dukh raha hai kya jo mai tumse nahi kisi aur se bolunga.

Mai-( Mai Apna najar charo taraf ghumate huye ) Nahi yaha to koi aur nahi hai lekin apke bhai mujhe kyu bula rahe hai mujhe abhi class ke liye deri ho rahi hai apne bhai se bolna bad me aakar unse mil lunga.

Itna bol kar mai aage ke taraf jane laga to wo ladka fir se mere samne aakar bola.

Ladka2- Tumhe ek bar me samajh me nahi aata hai kya chalo yaha se chup chap bhai bula rahe hai.

Mai- mujhe to samajh me aa raha hai lekin mujhe lagta hai apko samajh me nahi aa raha mai bola na ki class khatam hone ke bad apke bhai se mil lunga.

Itna bol kar fir se mai apne class ki or jane laga lekin is bar to us ladke ne had hi kar diya usne pichhe se hi me collar pakad liya aur bola.

Ladka2- Lagta hai tum aise nahi sunoge tum sale bahanchod 2 kodi log lath ke bhoot hote ho bat se kaha se samjhoge.

Mujhe to jab usne mera collar pakda tha tabhi se uspe gusa aa raha tha lekin uska bat sun ki mera blood pressure high ho gaya aur mai pichhe ghumke ek karara tamacha ek chatak ke sath uske gal pe rakh diya ye awaj kuchh jyada hi jor ki aayi thi jisse sare student ka dhyan hamare taraf aa gya aur wo ladka Ho jaise sun hi ho gaya use to abhi kya huya ye samajh me hi nahi aaya lekin jab samajh me aaya to bahut der ho chuka tha kyuki mai waha se apne class ke taraf nikal gaya.
Mai jab apne class ke darwaje ke pass pahucha to dekha ki hamari class ke teacher pahle hi aa chuki hai jo ek madhyam age ki ek mahila thi.

Mai- May I come in mam

Mam- Nahi pahle tum ye batao ki tum itne late kyu huye ye koi time hai collage aane ki.

Mai- Mam wo mai traffic me fas gaya tha aap to jante hi honge ki is sahar ke traffic kaisa hai.

Mam- Tum aaj kal ke ladko ko aur koi bahana nahi milta hai chalo aa jao andar aaj tumhara pahla class hai is liye tumhe chhod rahi hu lekin aainda yad rakhna mere class me kabhi bhi late mat aana.

Mai- Ok mam mai ye dhyan rakhunga.

Mam- Ha to yahi tumhare liye behtar hoga.

fir mai class me andar aaya aur charo taraf ghum kar dekha to piche ki row ek sit khali tha mai wahi jakar baith gaya abhi mai baita hi tha ki mujhe fir se madam ki awaj aayi

Mam- Hey you stand up

Mai- Aap mujhe bol rahi hai mam

Mam- Ha ha mai tumhe hi bol rahi hu yaha sare student apna intro de chuke hai lekin tumhara baki rah gaya hai apna intro do

Mai- Ok Mam mere name Adarsh hai mai abhi abhi xxx school se tenth 98.2 % se pass kiya hu.

Mai itna bol kar charo taraf ghum kar dekha to sab aankhe fad kar mujhe hi dekh rahe the jaise mai ko alien hu.

Mam- Tum kahi wahi adarsh to nahi ho jisne pure stat top kiya hai.

Mai- Jee mam mai wahi hu

Mam- bahut achhe adarsh tumhe stat top karne ke liye bahut bahut badhayi aur ha tum yaha bhi isi tarah man laga kar padhna aur hamare collage ka name raushan karna ab baith jao.

Idhar bahar ke taraf collage campus me hangama machha huya tha ki kisi ne is collage ke sabse khatarnak group ke ek ladke ko mara hai.


- uncle jon kya bolna chah rahe the jo adarsh ne nahi suna aur kya is collage ke khatarnak group apne ladke ke liye Adarsh se badla lenge ya use chhod denge janne ke liye padhte rahiye THE WAR OF MAGICAL WORLD.
Nice update bro 🤠🤠🤠
 
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