Fantasy The War Of Magical World

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Shi kh rhe ho bhai
Kyoki ab tak bhot kuch us story jaisa hi hua hai or pocket Fm ki story me hero k sath bar bar bura hi hua

Pr shyd is story me kuch change ho

Bhai aapko meri ye story us story se bilkul alag milegi aap padho aur enjoy kro aur apna bahumulya comment jarur de dhanyawad

 

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Superb update

Nice update

superbb behatrin update bro

very nice update bhai

Great update bhai

Nice update

Zabardast awesome interesting

Superb Update

Thanks for comment bas aise hi sath bane rahe aur apna bahumulya review dete rahe

 

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Ye update to school of megic se bohat milta h
Acchi story h ye bas original story ke jaise boring nhi likhna
Bhai apne tarike se likho
Bura laga ho to sorry

Bhai apko meri story school of magic se bilkul alag milegi

 

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To apna adarsh Ki atma ko locket ne is duniya ke adarsh ke sarir me dal diya Or is duniya ke adarsh ki sari yade apni yado ke sath marge kr li to yha ek baba or bahan hai Apne adarsh ke pass subah ka wakt hai baba ne magic school me admission krva diya hai to radha ki ek bua bhi hai magical creatures bhi hai...
Superb update bhai sandar

Thanks for review bhai..
adarsh ke ek bua to hai lekin uska jyada roll nahi hai is story me

 

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Awesome update bro

Thanks for comment bro..

 

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Matlab Adarsh ki life mein nayi jindagi ke sath sath nayi duniya aur ek safar ki suruwat ho chuki hai..
Adarsh to pehle jaisa hi hai bas bahri taur se matlab parthiv taur pe badal chuka hai....
Waise us magical duniya mein wo Sab mil gaya hai jo is duniya mein nasib mein nahi tha.... apna pariwar milne se Adarsh bahot khush hai.. aur sabse zyada khush isliye ki wo magical school jaane wala hai kal se..
writer sahab ne waha ke States, levels, elements ke baare mein ek details ke sath explain kiye hai ...

Well shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Ek sawal hai.... kya kabhi Adarsh is duniya mein laut ke nahi aayega .? .

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Pahle to dhanyabad apko jo apne itni achhi review diya uske liye..
Rahi bat apki sawal ke bhi to ye hame bhi pata hai hai ki adarsh wapas apne duniya me jata hai ya nahi ye to jaise jaise story aage badhegi waise waise hi pata chalega.
agar aage chal ke story ka mang hoga to adarsh jarur jayaga wapas anyatha nahi jayega

 

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Haa school jane ki khushi to hai. Lekin baad me pta chlega ki is k papa ne ise school me bhejne k liye apne ghar ko bech diya . Isliye ye school me rhega or Radha iski bua k ghar .

Normal duniya me Adarsh mar chuka hai ( wha na koi uska apna hai ) or magic ki duniya wala adarsh bhi shyd mar gya tha isliye us locket ki vjjh se uski soul isme aagyi . Ab is k pas wapas jane ka koi rasta to hai nhi kyoki normal duniya me koi iska wait nhi kar rha lekin yha ise ek family milgyi . Isliye mujhe lagta hai ab iski life yhi se suru hogi .

Ye to galat bat hai bhai mai apko pahle hi bola tha ki ye story alag hai is liye aisa kuchh bhi nahi hoga jo apne bola hai..
Rahi bat normal duniya ki to ye sach hai ki adarsh waha mar gaya hai lekin ho sakta hai ki aage chal ke story ka mang hi ki adarsh wapas jaye apne real duniya me to jaa bhi sakta hai.

Apne ye sahi bola ki yaha uski family mil gaya hai to uska real life yahi se start hoga lekin may be waha jaa bhi sakta hai ya nahi bhi

 

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AWESOME UPDATE BHAi

Thanks

 

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Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Dekhte h Adarsh ko yeh nayi zidagi or kia kia badlao lati h
Lajawab

Thanks for comment bhai aise hi sath bane rahe

 

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nice update bro

Thanks bro..