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Fantasy The Warriors

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Jaguaar

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Aree bhai jab story start ki hai toh usse aage bhi toh badhao. Online toh roj aate ho kabhi khud ki story pe nazar de diya karo
 

Luffy

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introduction

planet's introduction

ye sare planets or yaha ke rahne wale log kitne takaatwar hai uske hissab se niche likha gaya hai

(1.)andeomeda

(2.)hell

(3.)fairyland , jinland , elves planet .
in tino me jayda power difference nahi hai

(4.)demon realm


(5.)earth


in ke alwa 5 planets aur hai jinke bare me baad me pata chalega.



characters' introduction(in respect of hero)

(1.) mr. ram thakur - father |occupation| inka company hai jiska nam hai thakur group of companies. iske under bahut sare hotel factories aur companies hai.
ye world ke top 5 company me aata hai . inka bussiness bahut desho me faila hua hai.
inka school aur colleges bhi hai jo ki world ke best schools aur colleges me no 1 pe aata hai
ye duniya ke sabse amir aadmi hai.iske alawa aur kuchi bhi hai jo baaad me pata chalega.
(2.) jyoti thakur - mother


(3.) mr narayan thakur - bade cahcha [occupation] cm of maharastra


(4.) shalini thakur - badi chachi

(5.)aryan thakur - bade chacha ka beta \age 20 years\ hero ka chota bhai

(6.)rashmi thakur - bade cahcha ki beti \age 24 years\ hero ki didi
anjali thakur - bade chacha ki bati \age 23 years\ hero ki bahan

(7.)mr laxman thakur - chote chacha [occupation] ye apne bade bhai ke india ke company ka kaam sambhalte hai aur md ke post pe hai.

ye tino bhai yani ki hero ke papa or dona ka chacha ka 2 secret hai jo ki inki patniya to janti hai lekin bache nahi jante.

(8.)mrs gita thakur - choti chachi

(9.) raj thakur - chote chacha ka beta \age 21 yrs\ hero ka chota bhai

(10.) abhi thakur - chote chacha ka beta \age 20 yrs\ hero ka chota bhai

(11.) raksha thakur - chote chacha ki beti \age 19 yrs\ hero ki choti bahan

(12.) mr jayraj rajput - fufa ji

(13.) mrs sita rajput - bua

(14.) jay rajput - bua ka beta \age 22 yrs\

(15.) ashish rajput - bua ka beta \age 21 yrs\

(16.) kajal rajput - bua ki beti \age 23 yrs\

(17.) avni rajput - bua ki beti \age 20 yrs\


ye sab bhi hero ke bhai & bahan hai.

rohan thakur - hero

siksha thakur - hero's sister

heroine family introduction

(18.) mr divyank shinghania - father [occupation] inki company India ki 2nd most position par hai.

(19.) mrs seema singhania - mother - housewife

(20.) tanisha singhania - heroine


(21.) varun singhania - brother
Nice intro
 

Naik

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introduction

planet's introduction

ye sare planets or yaha ke rahne wale log kitne takaatwar hai uske hissab se niche likha gaya hai

(1.)andeomeda

(2.)hell

(3.)fairyland , jinland , elves planet .
in tino me jayda power difference nahi hai

(4.)demon realm


(5.)earth


in ke alwa 5 planets aur hai jinke bare me baad me pata chalega.



characters' introduction(in respect of hero)

(1.) mr. ram thakur - father |occupation| inka company hai jiska nam hai thakur group of companies. iske under bahut sare hotel factories aur companies hai.
ye world ke top 5 company me aata hai . inka bussiness bahut desho me faila hua hai.
inka school aur colleges bhi hai jo ki world ke best schools aur colleges me no 1 pe aata hai
ye duniya ke sabse amir aadmi hai.iske alawa aur kuchi bhi hai jo baaad me pata chalega.
(2.) jyoti thakur - mother


(3.) mr narayan thakur - bade cahcha [occupation] cm of maharastra


(4.) shalini thakur - badi chachi

(5.)aryan thakur - bade chacha ka beta \age 20 years\ hero ka chota bhai

(6.)rashmi thakur - bade cahcha ki beti \age 24 years\ hero ki didi
anjali thakur - bade chacha ki bati \age 23 years\ hero ki bahan

(7.)mr laxman thakur - chote chacha [occupation] ye apne bade bhai ke india ke company ka kaam sambhalte hai aur md ke post pe hai.

ye tino bhai yani ki hero ke papa or dona ka chacha ka 2 secret hai jo ki inki patniya to janti hai lekin bache nahi jante.

(8.)mrs gita thakur - choti chachi

(9.) raj thakur - chote chacha ka beta \age 21 yrs\ hero ka chota bhai

(10.) abhi thakur - chote chacha ka beta \age 20 yrs\ hero ka chota bhai

(11.) raksha thakur - chote chacha ki beti \age 19 yrs\ hero ki choti bahan

(12.) mr jayraj rajput - fufa ji

(13.) mrs sita rajput - bua

(14.) jay rajput - bua ka beta \age 22 yrs\

(15.) ashish rajput - bua ka beta \age 21 yrs\

(16.) kajal rajput - bua ki beti \age 23 yrs\

(17.) avni rajput - bua ki beti \age 20 yrs\


ye sab bhi hero ke bhai & bahan hai.

rohan thakur - hero

siksha thakur - hero's sister

heroine family introduction

(18.) mr divyank shinghania - father [occupation] inki company India ki 2nd most position par hai.

(19.) mrs seema singhania - mother - housewife

(20.) tanisha singhania - heroine


(21.) varun singhania - brother
Nayi kahani shuru kerne k liye bahot bahot mubarak baad aapko
Badhiya introduction
 

ak@2133

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Aree bhai jab story start ki hai toh usse aage bhi toh badhao. Online toh roj aate ho kabhi khud ki story pe nazar de diya karo
bro hum abhi naye hai abhi to likhna chalu kiya hai so please understand hum abhi kahani padh rahe hai x forum pe aur idea le rahe hai taki apni kahani aage suru kar sake joki hogaya hai kal padso tak pahla update aa jayega.
 

ak@2133

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UPDATE 1 (Rohan and his friends.)

place - London
Thakur villa.


STORY start karne se pahle aayie jaan lete hai thakur villa akkhir hai kaisa uska scenary kaisa hai.

[description :- ek bada sa unique design wala main gate joki bhawayata ka pratik hai, uske upar likha huwa hai thakur villa.usse andar jane ke baad ek rasta jo ki villa tak jata hai. uske dono taraf bahut hi sundar garden hai jiske bich me dono taraf ek bada sa fountain hai. fir uske baad aata hai villa joki do floor ka bana huwa hai.uski sundarta ko dekh ke koi bhi use aise dekhne lage jaise ladke ladkio ko dekhte hai :laugh:.villa ke andar first floor par bich me dining hall hai jaha pe bada sa dining table hai.dining hall ke dono taraf se sidhiyan second floor tak jaati hai.hall ke left side me bada sa kitchen hai ,fir uske bagal me drawing room.hall ke aage do room hai aur ek store room hai.hall ke right side me do kamre hai, ek ram thakur aur jyoti thakur ka hai ek ram ka study room hai. second floor do hisso me bata huwa hai ek hisse me chat bana huwa hai jisme swimming pool bhi hai dosre hisse ke left side me ek room hai joki apen dashing hero ka hai aur aage wale area ka pehla room apne hero ki pyari si jaan (bahan) ka hai in dono ka room baht bada hai , aur second room me gym bana huwa hai. second floor ke right wale hisse me ek guest room aur do khali room hai. villa ke piche bahut bada field hai jaha ye log kabhi kbahi khelte hai jaise (cricket , badminton , football etc. ) , villa ke bagal me servant quarter bhi tha .ye tha pure villa aur uske aaspas ka description]

Ab start karte hai story.

time : 5:00 a.m.

tring... tring.... tring..... alarm bajta hai aur
,
ek ladka utha hai angrai lete huwe aur aankh ek bar band karke phir kholta hai fir utha hai aur jake khidki kholta hai tab hame uske handsome mukhde ke darshan hote hai ek dum smart and sweet se face.jab smile karta hai to jo dimple dikhata hai uske kya kahne. (lekin kahte hai na dikhta hu bade sweet and swami type ka magar hu bade harami type ka.) khair wo to apko aage pata chal hi jayega in ke bade me.wo uthke jata hai fresh hone uske baad jake gym me apni t-shirt utarta hai tab iski body dikhti hai ( ek dum fit and sakht body aur 6 pack abs , khatarnak triceps aur biceps ). t shirt utarne ke baad pahle yoga karta hai phir lag jata hAI apne body ko aur sakht banane me. ek ghante ke baad ye apna kam khatam karke jata hai apne kamre ke bagal wale kamre jaha ek cute si larki apne sapno me khoi hui thi wo muskurate huwe uske pass jake usko gaal pe kiss karke uthata hai.

ladka - siksha betu chalo uth jao subah ho gayi hai.

ladki kasmaste hue apni aank kholti hai aur apne samne wale shaks ko dekh ke

ladki : good morning bhai.

ladki : good morning meri pyari angel. chalo jaldi se utho jake fresh ho jao.hame college bhi to chalna hai apna result lene.

ye sunke wo ladki

ladki : omg! bhai aaj humara result hai.mai to bhul hi gayi thi. he bhagwan ji please mai pass ho jaun.

ladka: ye kya bol rahi ho betu tumhe to pure college me top aana hai.

ladki: bhai top to aap karoge jaise har saal karte aarahe ho ............top.

ladka: ye kya betu tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise tum har saal fail ho jati ho. tum bhi to top hi karti ho.

ladki : lekin bhai phir bhi dar to lagta hai.

ladka : are daro mat mai janta hu tum top hi karogi. aacha ye sab chodo jao naha ke aao tab tak mai tumhara aur apna room thik kar deta hoo aur mai bhi naha leta hoon. tum naha ke jaldi aana mere room me. phir hum dono saath me niche chale ge.

ladki : ok bhai.

ab ladka uska room thik karke apne room me jake apna room thik karta hai , aur nahane chala jata hai jab nahe ke aata hai to dekhta hai wo ladki uske bed pe baithi hui hoti hai.

ladka : betu ruko mai kapde pahan kar aata hun.

ladki : thik hai.

phir wo kapde pehan ke aata hai.
usne ek jeans ek shirt aur upad se denim jacket pahna huwa tha.

ladka: chalo betu.

phir dono sidhiyo se niche ate hai us samay time ho raha tha 6:30 a.m.

jaise hi ye sidhiyo se niche aate hai unheek aadmi baitha news paper padh raha tha unko dekh ke kahta hai

aadmi : good morning rohan good morning siksha.

dono : muskurake good morning dad.

{to aaiye jaan lete hai ye tino kon kon hai

ladka hai Rohan thakur , ladki hai Siksha thakur , inke dad hai Mr Ram thakur.}

mr ram thakur : acha ek baat batao ye chamatkar kaise hogaya.

siksha : kaisa chamatkar dad.

ram thakur : are aaj hamari gudiya itni jaldi uth gayi ye to chamatkar hi hua na.

ye sunke to rohasne laga. wahi siksha muh fulake gusse se kahti hai

siksha : dad

tabhi jyoti thakur kitchen se hall me aati hui kahti hai, jinhone ye saree baate sun li thi.

jyoti thakur :(jhute gusse se) aap kehna kya chahte hai ki meri beti roj late se uthti hai.

ram thakur : (sakpakate hue) nhi nhi mere kahne ka matlab hai aaj thodi jaldi uth gayi hai.. kyun rohan

rohan : ab isme mai kya bolun.

ram thakur : wah beta.

rohan : (baat badalte hue) wo sab choryie mom dad aap logo ko pata hai na ki aaj mera aur gudiya ka result hai.

dono : haa bata.

rohan : to aap dono hame aashirwad dijiye ki hum do no ka aacha %age aaye.

siksha: ha dad app to jante hai ki bhaiya hamesha first aate hai, bas aap dono mujhe itna aashirwad dijiye ki mai pass ho jaun.

jyoti thakur: are nahi gudiya tum bhi first jarur aaogi ye hum dono ka aasdhirwad hai

ye bolke dono un dono ke sar pe haath rakhte hai.
aur ye dono jhuk ke unke pair choote hai.

(ab yaah se kahani hero narrate karega.aur jab jab naarration bdlega mai uske upar title me likh dunga aise;)


hero:---(narration)

fir mai , skisha aur dad baat karne lag jate hai aur mom breakfast taiyar karne lag jati hai.(ghar me khana yahi banati thi naaki servants ye log ghar ka baaki kaam dekhte the.)

tab tak time 7:30 am ho jaya hai.

fir ham baith ke break fast karte hai.
dad ko 8 baje office (london wali company) jana tha to wo jake taaiyar hone lagte hai aur
hame 8:30 me college jana tha to ham aur siksha college ke baare me baat karne lag jate hai.

abhi 10 minute hi huwa tha ki gate ka bell bajta hai aur ek servant jake darwaja kholta hai.

aur gate se padharti hai hero ki friend mandli.(yaha mai baata du ki siksha abhi 19 yrs ki hai aur college me hai 11 standard me.)


ab time hai hero ki mandli ke introduction ka.



intro time(2)


ankit aggarwal (ye Indian hai apne family ke sath yaha rahta hai iske papa london ke jaane mane business man hai. Ye lono ke top 3 bussines man me gine hane jate hai. ) ye rohan ka jigri hai .ye apne dosto ke liye jaan de bhi sakta hai aur le bhi sakta hai .



maichel diaz (ye martial art champion hai.)


Samantha larrusoo

Robby keene

Tori Nichols

(ye charo London ke hi resident hai . inke pita bhi london ke jane mane bussines man hai).ye sab bhi rohan ke paake dost hai. In charo ka story me jayda role nhi hai.



Rohan ke sare dosst padne me intelligent hai .

jaise hi maine unhe DEKHA mai turant khada ho gaya aur ankit jaldi se aake mere gale lag gaya aur bola.


ankit : mere bhai kaesa hai tu.
mai : thik hu tu kesa ahi.
mujhe alag karke tu mujhse itne dino se nahi milne aya to kaisa hounga.mera poora mood kaharab thA pura hafta.

mai: chal thik hai ab to tu khush hai na.

tabhi maichel ye dekho ise to dikh hi nhi raha hai ki hm bhi yahi hai yaar ye dono apne me magan hai (inhe hindi bolna maine hi sikhaya hai kyunki mai 5 saal ki umar se londo me raha raha hu aur ye pacho mere bachapan ke dost hai isliye maine inhe hindi saikhaya.)

tabhi mai unki taraf dekh ke
mai : aisi baat nhi hai yaar aao aao tum log bhi aa jao
phir mai sabke gale laga
tabhi siksha : wah wah abhi aplog bahiya ko kah rahe the ki ye apne me magan hai aur khud mare taraf dekha bhi nhi akele bhai se baat kiyr jaa rahe ho.

tabhi ankit : oo to tum bhi yahi par ho mujhe laga ki yaha pe koi nhi hai you know na tum kitni patli aur choti ho.

siksha: you .....
bhaiya ise bol do mai ise kuch nhi bol rahi iska mtlb ye kuch bhi bol dega aur tum se kon bol raha hai mai to maichel , tori , samantha , robby ko bol rahi thi.
phir kya dono apne muh sr tir , bhale , talear aur na jane kon kon se hatiyar chalane lage ye dekh ke mai,

mai : tum dono phir mat suru ho jao.
agar tum dono ko yahi karna hai to karte raho hum log chale clg .

mai un charo se : chalo tum log inhe larne do jab dekho larte rehte hai .

dono : nhi bhai hm log nhi larenge chalo college.
phir hm log bahar gaye
robi aur tori ek car me, mai aur siksha aur deepak ek car me(deepak apna car laya tha magar yahi chod ke hamari car me baith gaya.) , smantha aur miguel ek car me.
hm baith ke chal pade clg....
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sayonara.......

to be continued




 

Jaguaar

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UPDATE 1 (Rohan and his friends.)

place - London
Thakur villa.


STORY start karne se pahle aayie jaan lete hai thakur villa akkhir hai kaisa uska scenary kaisa hai.

[description :- ek bada sa unique design wala main gate joki bhawayata ka pratik hai, uske upar likha huwa hai thakur villa.usse andar jane ke baad ek rasta jo ki villa tak jata hai. uske dono taraf bahut hi sundar garden hai jiske bich me dono taraf ek bada sa fountain hai. fir uske baad aata hai villa joki do floor ka bana huwa hai.uski sundarta ko dekh ke koi bhi use aise dekhne lage jaise ladke ladkio ko dekhte hai :laugh:.villa ke andar first floor par bich me dining hall hai jaha pe bada sa dining table hai.dining hall ke dono taraf se sidhiyan second floor tak jaati hai.hall ke left side me bada sa kitchen hai ,fir uske bagal me drawing room.hall ke aage do room hai aur ek store room hai.hall ke right side me do kamre hai, ek ram thakur aur jyoti thakur ka hai ek ram ka study room hai. second floor do hisso me bata huwa hai ek hisse me chat bana huwa hai jisme swimming pool bhi hai dosre hisse ke left side me ek room hai joki apen dashing hero ka hai aur aage wale area ka pehla room apne hero ki pyari si jaan (bahan) ka hai in dono ka room baht bada hai , aur second room me gym bana huwa hai. second floor ke right wale hisse me ek guest room aur do khali room hai. villa ke piche bahut bada field hai jaha ye log kabhi kbahi khelte hai jaise (cricket , badminton , football etc. ) , villa ke bagal me servant quarter bhi tha .ye tha pure villa aur uske aaspas ka description]

Ab start karte hai story.

time : 5:00 a.m.

tring... tring.... tring..... alarm bajta hai aur
,
ek ladka utha hai angrai lete huwe aur aankh ek bar band karke phir kholta hai fir utha hai aur jake khidki kholta hai tab hame uske handsome mukhde ke darshan hote hai ek dum smart and sweet se face.jab smile karta hai to jo dimple dikhata hai uske kya kahne. (lekin kahte hai na dikhta hu bade sweet and swami type ka magar hu bade harami type ka.) khair wo to apko aage pata chal hi jayega in ke bade me.wo uthke jata hai fresh hone uske baad jake gym me apni t-shirt utarta hai tab iski body dikhti hai ( ek dum fit and sakht body aur 6 pack abs , khatarnak triceps aur biceps ). t shirt utarne ke baad pahle yoga karta hai phir lag jata hAI apne body ko aur sakht banane me. ek ghante ke baad ye apna kam khatam karke jata hai apne kamre ke bagal wale kamre jaha ek cute si larki apne sapno me khoi hui thi wo muskurate huwe uske pass jake usko gaal pe kiss karke uthata hai.

ladka - siksha betu chalo uth jao subah ho gayi hai.

ladki kasmaste hue apni aank kholti hai aur apne samne wale shaks ko dekh ke

ladki : good morning bhai.

ladki : good morning meri pyari angel. chalo jaldi se utho jake fresh ho jao.hame college bhi to chalna hai apna result lene.

ye sunke wo ladki

ladki : omg! bhai aaj humara result hai.mai to bhul hi gayi thi. he bhagwan ji please mai pass ho jaun.

ladka: ye kya bol rahi ho betu tumhe to pure college me top aana hai.

ladki: bhai top to aap karoge jaise har saal karte aarahe ho ............top.

ladka: ye kya betu tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise tum har saal fail ho jati ho. tum bhi to top hi karti ho.

ladki : lekin bhai phir bhi dar to lagta hai.

ladka : are daro mat mai janta hu tum top hi karogi. aacha ye sab chodo jao naha ke aao tab tak mai tumhara aur apna room thik kar deta hoo aur mai bhi naha leta hoon. tum naha ke jaldi aana mere room me. phir hum dono saath me niche chale ge.

ladki : ok bhai.

ab ladka uska room thik karke apne room me jake apna room thik karta hai , aur nahane chala jata hai jab nahe ke aata hai to dekhta hai wo ladki uske bed pe baithi hui hoti hai.

ladka : betu ruko mai kapde pahan kar aata hun.

ladki : thik hai.

phir wo kapde pehan ke aata hai.
usne ek jeans ek shirt aur upad se denim jacket pahna huwa tha.

ladka: chalo betu.

phir dono sidhiyo se niche ate hai us samay time ho raha tha 6:30 a.m.

jaise hi ye sidhiyo se niche aate hai unheek aadmi baitha news paper padh raha tha unko dekh ke kahta hai

aadmi : good morning rohan good morning siksha.

dono : muskurake good morning dad.

{to aaiye jaan lete hai ye tino kon kon hai

ladka hai Rohan thakur , ladki hai Siksha thakur , inke dad hai Mr Ram thakur.}

mr ram thakur : acha ek baat batao ye chamatkar kaise hogaya.

siksha : kaisa chamatkar dad.


ram thakur : are aaj hamari gudiya itni jaldi uth gayi ye to chamatkar hi hua na.

ye sunke to rohasne laga. wahi siksha muh fulake gusse se kahti hai

siksha : dad

tabhi jyoti thakur kitchen se hall me aati hui kahti hai, jinhone ye saree baate sun li thi.

jyoti thakur :(jhute gusse se) aap kehna kya chahte hai ki meri beti roj late se uthti hai.

ram thakur : (sakpakate hue) nhi nhi mere kahne ka matlab hai aaj thodi jaldi uth gayi hai.. kyun rohan

rohan : ab isme mai kya bolun.

ram thakur : wah beta.

rohan : (baat badalte hue) wo sab choryie mom dad aap logo ko pata hai na ki aaj mera aur gudiya ka result hai.

dono : haa bata.

rohan : to aap dono hame aashirwad dijiye ki hum do no ka aacha %age aaye.

siksha: ha dad app to jante hai ki bhaiya hamesha first aate hai, bas aap dono mujhe itna aashirwad dijiye ki mai pass ho jaun.

jyoti thakur: are nahi gudiya tum bhi first jarur aaogi ye hum dono ka aasdhirwad hai

ye bolke dono un dono ke sar pe haath rakhte hai.
aur ye dono jhuk ke unke pair choote hai.

(ab yaah se kahani hero narrate karega.aur jab jab naarration bdlega mai uske upar title me likh dunga aise;)


hero:---(narration)

fir mai , skisha aur dad baat karne lag jate hai aur mom breakfast taiyar karne lag jati hai.(ghar me khana yahi banati thi naaki servants ye log ghar ka baaki kaam dekhte the.)

tab tak time 7:30 am ho jaya hai.

fir ham baith ke break fast karte hai.
dad ko 8 baje office (london wali company) jana tha to wo jake taaiyar hone lagte hai aur
hame 8:30 me college jana tha to ham aur siksha college ke baare me baat karne lag jate hai.

abhi 10 minute hi huwa tha ki gate ka bell bajta hai aur ek servant jake darwaja kholta hai.

aur gate se padharti hai hero ki friend mandli.(yaha mai baata du ki siksha abhi 19 yrs ki hai aur college me hai 11 standard me.)


ab time hai hero ki mandli ke introduction ka.



intro time(2)


ankit aggarwal (ye Indian hai apne family ke sath yaha rahta hai iske papa london ke jaane mane business man hai. Ye lono ke top 3 bussines man me gine hane jate hai. ) ye rohan ka jigri hai .ye apne dosto ke liye jaan de bhi sakta hai aur le bhi sakta hai .



maichel diaz (ye martial art champion hai.)


Samantha larrusoo

Robby keene

Tori Nichols

(ye charo London ke hi resident hai . inke pita bhi london ke jane mane bussines man hai).ye sab bhi rohan ke paake dost hai. In charo ka story me jayda role nhi hai.




Rohan ke sare dosst padne me intelligent hai .

jaise hi maine unhe DEKHA mai turant khada ho gaya aur ankit jaldi se aake mere gale lag gaya aur bola.


ankit : mere bhai kaesa hai tu.
mai : thik hu tu kesa ahi.
mujhe alag karke tu mujhse itne dino se nahi milne aya to kaisa hounga.mera poora mood kaharab thA pura hafta.

mai: chal thik hai ab to tu khush hai na.

tabhi maichel ye dekho ise to dikh hi nhi raha hai ki hm bhi yahi hai yaar ye dono apne me magan hai (inhe hindi bolna maine hi sikhaya hai kyunki mai 5 saal ki umar se londo me raha raha hu aur ye pacho mere bachapan ke dost hai isliye maine inhe hindi saikhaya.)

tabhi mai unki taraf dekh ke
mai : aisi baat nhi hai yaar aao aao tum log bhi aa jao
phir mai sabke gale laga
tabhi siksha : wah wah abhi aplog bahiya ko kah rahe the ki ye apne me magan hai aur khud mare taraf dekha bhi nhi akele bhai se baat kiyr jaa rahe ho.

tabhi ankit : oo to tum bhi yahi par ho mujhe laga ki yaha pe koi nhi hai you know na tum kitni patli aur choti ho.

siksha: you .....
bhaiya ise bol do mai ise kuch nhi bol rahi iska mtlb ye kuch bhi bol dega aur tum se kon bol raha hai mai to maichel , tori , samantha , robby ko bol rahi thi.
phir kya dono apne muh sr tir , bhale , talear aur na jane kon kon se hatiyar chalane lage ye dekh ke mai,

mai : tum dono phir mat suru ho jao.
agar tum dono ko yahi karna hai to karte raho hum log chale clg .

mai un charo se : chalo tum log inhe larne do jab dekho larte rehte hai .

dono : nhi bhai hm log nhi larenge chalo college.
phir hm log bahar gaye
robi aur tori ek car me, mai aur siksha aur deepak ek car me(deepak apna car laya tha magar yahi chod ke hamari car me baith gaya.) , smantha aur miguel ek car me.
hm baith ke chal pade clg....
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sayonara.......

to be continued




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Zatchx

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UPDATE 1 (Rohan and his friends.)

place - London
Thakur villa.


STORY start karne se pahle aayie jaan lete hai thakur villa akkhir hai kaisa uska scenary kaisa hai.

[description :- ek bada sa unique design wala main gate joki bhawayata ka pratik hai, uske upar likha huwa hai thakur villa.usse andar jane ke baad ek rasta jo ki villa tak jata hai. uske dono taraf bahut hi sundar garden hai jiske bich me dono taraf ek bada sa fountain hai. fir uske baad aata hai villa joki do floor ka bana huwa hai.uski sundarta ko dekh ke koi bhi use aise dekhne lage jaise ladke ladkio ko dekhte hai :laugh:.villa ke andar first floor par bich me dining hall hai jaha pe bada sa dining table hai.dining hall ke dono taraf se sidhiyan second floor tak jaati hai.hall ke left side me bada sa kitchen hai ,fir uske bagal me drawing room.hall ke aage do room hai aur ek store room hai.hall ke right side me do kamre hai, ek ram thakur aur jyoti thakur ka hai ek ram ka study room hai. second floor do hisso me bata huwa hai ek hisse me chat bana huwa hai jisme swimming pool bhi hai dosre hisse ke left side me ek room hai joki apen dashing hero ka hai aur aage wale area ka pehla room apne hero ki pyari si jaan (bahan) ka hai in dono ka room baht bada hai , aur second room me gym bana huwa hai. second floor ke right wale hisse me ek guest room aur do khali room hai. villa ke piche bahut bada field hai jaha ye log kabhi kbahi khelte hai jaise (cricket , badminton , football etc. ) , villa ke bagal me servant quarter bhi tha .ye tha pure villa aur uske aaspas ka description]

Ab start karte hai story.

time : 5:00 a.m.

tring... tring.... tring..... alarm bajta hai aur
,
ek ladka utha hai angrai lete huwe aur aankh ek bar band karke phir kholta hai fir utha hai aur jake khidki kholta hai tab hame uske handsome mukhde ke darshan hote hai ek dum smart and sweet se face.jab smile karta hai to jo dimple dikhata hai uske kya kahne. (lekin kahte hai na dikhta hu bade sweet and swami type ka magar hu bade harami type ka.) khair wo to apko aage pata chal hi jayega in ke bade me.wo uthke jata hai fresh hone uske baad jake gym me apni t-shirt utarta hai tab iski body dikhti hai ( ek dum fit and sakht body aur 6 pack abs , khatarnak triceps aur biceps ). t shirt utarne ke baad pahle yoga karta hai phir lag jata hAI apne body ko aur sakht banane me. ek ghante ke baad ye apna kam khatam karke jata hai apne kamre ke bagal wale kamre jaha ek cute si larki apne sapno me khoi hui thi wo muskurate huwe uske pass jake usko gaal pe kiss karke uthata hai.

ladka - siksha betu chalo uth jao subah ho gayi hai.

ladki kasmaste hue apni aank kholti hai aur apne samne wale shaks ko dekh ke

ladki : good morning bhai.

ladki : good morning meri pyari angel. chalo jaldi se utho jake fresh ho jao.hame college bhi to chalna hai apna result lene.

ye sunke wo ladki

ladki : omg! bhai aaj humara result hai.mai to bhul hi gayi thi. he bhagwan ji please mai pass ho jaun.

ladka: ye kya bol rahi ho betu tumhe to pure college me top aana hai.

ladki: bhai top to aap karoge jaise har saal karte aarahe ho ............top.

ladka: ye kya betu tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise tum har saal fail ho jati ho. tum bhi to top hi karti ho.

ladki : lekin bhai phir bhi dar to lagta hai.

ladka : are daro mat mai janta hu tum top hi karogi. aacha ye sab chodo jao naha ke aao tab tak mai tumhara aur apna room thik kar deta hoo aur mai bhi naha leta hoon. tum naha ke jaldi aana mere room me. phir hum dono saath me niche chale ge.

ladki : ok bhai.

ab ladka uska room thik karke apne room me jake apna room thik karta hai , aur nahane chala jata hai jab nahe ke aata hai to dekhta hai wo ladki uske bed pe baithi hui hoti hai.

ladka : betu ruko mai kapde pahan kar aata hun.

ladki : thik hai.

phir wo kapde pehan ke aata hai.
usne ek jeans ek shirt aur upad se denim jacket pahna huwa tha.

ladka: chalo betu.

phir dono sidhiyo se niche ate hai us samay time ho raha tha 6:30 a.m.

jaise hi ye sidhiyo se niche aate hai unheek aadmi baitha news paper padh raha tha unko dekh ke kahta hai

aadmi : good morning rohan good morning siksha.

dono : muskurake good morning dad.

{to aaiye jaan lete hai ye tino kon kon hai

ladka hai Rohan thakur , ladki hai Siksha thakur , inke dad hai Mr Ram thakur.}

mr ram thakur : acha ek baat batao ye chamatkar kaise hogaya.

siksha : kaisa chamatkar dad.


ram thakur : are aaj hamari gudiya itni jaldi uth gayi ye to chamatkar hi hua na.

ye sunke to rohasne laga. wahi siksha muh fulake gusse se kahti hai

siksha : dad

tabhi jyoti thakur kitchen se hall me aati hui kahti hai, jinhone ye saree baate sun li thi.

jyoti thakur :(jhute gusse se) aap kehna kya chahte hai ki meri beti roj late se uthti hai.

ram thakur : (sakpakate hue) nhi nhi mere kahne ka matlab hai aaj thodi jaldi uth gayi hai.. kyun rohan

rohan : ab isme mai kya bolun.

ram thakur : wah beta.

rohan : (baat badalte hue) wo sab choryie mom dad aap logo ko pata hai na ki aaj mera aur gudiya ka result hai.

dono : haa bata.

rohan : to aap dono hame aashirwad dijiye ki hum do no ka aacha %age aaye.

siksha: ha dad app to jante hai ki bhaiya hamesha first aate hai, bas aap dono mujhe itna aashirwad dijiye ki mai pass ho jaun.

jyoti thakur: are nahi gudiya tum bhi first jarur aaogi ye hum dono ka aasdhirwad hai

ye bolke dono un dono ke sar pe haath rakhte hai.
aur ye dono jhuk ke unke pair choote hai.

(ab yaah se kahani hero narrate karega.aur jab jab naarration bdlega mai uske upar title me likh dunga aise;)


hero:---(narration)

fir mai , skisha aur dad baat karne lag jate hai aur mom breakfast taiyar karne lag jati hai.(ghar me khana yahi banati thi naaki servants ye log ghar ka baaki kaam dekhte the.)

tab tak time 7:30 am ho jaya hai.

fir ham baith ke break fast karte hai.
dad ko 8 baje office (london wali company) jana tha to wo jake taaiyar hone lagte hai aur
hame 8:30 me college jana tha to ham aur siksha college ke baare me baat karne lag jate hai.

abhi 10 minute hi huwa tha ki gate ka bell bajta hai aur ek servant jake darwaja kholta hai.

aur gate se padharti hai hero ki friend mandli.(yaha mai baata du ki siksha abhi 19 yrs ki hai aur college me hai 11 standard me.)


ab time hai hero ki mandli ke introduction ka.



intro time(2)


ankit aggarwal (ye Indian hai apne family ke sath yaha rahta hai iske papa london ke jaane mane business man hai. Ye lono ke top 3 bussines man me gine hane jate hai. ) ye rohan ka jigri hai .ye apne dosto ke liye jaan de bhi sakta hai aur le bhi sakta hai .



maichel diaz (ye martial art champion hai.)


Samantha larrusoo

Robby keene

Tori Nichols

(ye charo London ke hi resident hai . inke pita bhi london ke jane mane bussines man hai).ye sab bhi rohan ke paake dost hai. In charo ka story me jayda role nhi hai.




Rohan ke sare dosst padne me intelligent hai .

jaise hi maine unhe DEKHA mai turant khada ho gaya aur ankit jaldi se aake mere gale lag gaya aur bola.


ankit : mere bhai kaesa hai tu.
mai : thik hu tu kesa ahi.
mujhe alag karke tu mujhse itne dino se nahi milne aya to kaisa hounga.mera poora mood kaharab thA pura hafta.

mai: chal thik hai ab to tu khush hai na.

tabhi maichel ye dekho ise to dikh hi nhi raha hai ki hm bhi yahi hai yaar ye dono apne me magan hai (inhe hindi bolna maine hi sikhaya hai kyunki mai 5 saal ki umar se londo me raha raha hu aur ye pacho mere bachapan ke dost hai isliye maine inhe hindi saikhaya.)

tabhi mai unki taraf dekh ke
mai : aisi baat nhi hai yaar aao aao tum log bhi aa jao
phir mai sabke gale laga
tabhi siksha : wah wah abhi aplog bahiya ko kah rahe the ki ye apne me magan hai aur khud mare taraf dekha bhi nhi akele bhai se baat kiyr jaa rahe ho.

tabhi ankit : oo to tum bhi yahi par ho mujhe laga ki yaha pe koi nhi hai you know na tum kitni patli aur choti ho.

siksha: you .....
bhaiya ise bol do mai ise kuch nhi bol rahi iska mtlb ye kuch bhi bol dega aur tum se kon bol raha hai mai to maichel , tori , samantha , robby ko bol rahi thi.
phir kya dono apne muh sr tir , bhale , talear aur na jane kon kon se hatiyar chalane lage ye dekh ke mai,

mai : tum dono phir mat suru ho jao.
agar tum dono ko yahi karna hai to karte raho hum log chale clg .

mai un charo se : chalo tum log inhe larne do jab dekho larte rehte hai .

dono : nhi bhai hm log nhi larenge chalo college.
phir hm log bahar gaye
robi aur tori ek car me, mai aur siksha aur deepak ek car me(deepak apna car laya tha magar yahi chod ke hamari car me baith gaya.) , smantha aur miguel ek car me.
hm baith ke chal pade clg....
..
..
..
..
..
..
..
sayonara.......

to be continued




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Zatchx

New Member
81
262
53
UPDATE 1 (Rohan and his friends.)

place - London
Thakur villa.


STORY start karne se pahle aayie jaan lete hai thakur villa akkhir hai kaisa uska scenary kaisa hai.

[description :- ek bada sa unique design wala main gate joki bhawayata ka pratik hai, uske upar likha huwa hai thakur villa.usse andar jane ke baad ek rasta jo ki villa tak jata hai. uske dono taraf bahut hi sundar garden hai jiske bich me dono taraf ek bada sa fountain hai. fir uske baad aata hai villa joki do floor ka bana huwa hai.uski sundarta ko dekh ke koi bhi use aise dekhne lage jaise ladke ladkio ko dekhte hai :laugh:.villa ke andar first floor par bich me dining hall hai jaha pe bada sa dining table hai.dining hall ke dono taraf se sidhiyan second floor tak jaati hai.hall ke left side me bada sa kitchen hai ,fir uske bagal me drawing room.hall ke aage do room hai aur ek store room hai.hall ke right side me do kamre hai, ek ram thakur aur jyoti thakur ka hai ek ram ka study room hai. second floor do hisso me bata huwa hai ek hisse me chat bana huwa hai jisme swimming pool bhi hai dosre hisse ke left side me ek room hai joki apen dashing hero ka hai aur aage wale area ka pehla room apne hero ki pyari si jaan (bahan) ka hai in dono ka room baht bada hai , aur second room me gym bana huwa hai. second floor ke right wale hisse me ek guest room aur do khali room hai. villa ke piche bahut bada field hai jaha ye log kabhi kbahi khelte hai jaise (cricket , badminton , football etc. ) , villa ke bagal me servant quarter bhi tha .ye tha pure villa aur uske aaspas ka description]

Ab start karte hai story.

time : 5:00 a.m.

tring... tring.... tring..... alarm bajta hai aur
,
ek ladka utha hai angrai lete huwe aur aankh ek bar band karke phir kholta hai fir utha hai aur jake khidki kholta hai tab hame uske handsome mukhde ke darshan hote hai ek dum smart and sweet se face.jab smile karta hai to jo dimple dikhata hai uske kya kahne. (lekin kahte hai na dikhta hu bade sweet and swami type ka magar hu bade harami type ka.) khair wo to apko aage pata chal hi jayega in ke bade me.wo uthke jata hai fresh hone uske baad jake gym me apni t-shirt utarta hai tab iski body dikhti hai ( ek dum fit and sakht body aur 6 pack abs , khatarnak triceps aur biceps ). t shirt utarne ke baad pahle yoga karta hai phir lag jata hAI apne body ko aur sakht banane me. ek ghante ke baad ye apna kam khatam karke jata hai apne kamre ke bagal wale kamre jaha ek cute si larki apne sapno me khoi hui thi wo muskurate huwe uske pass jake usko gaal pe kiss karke uthata hai.

ladka - siksha betu chalo uth jao subah ho gayi hai.

ladki kasmaste hue apni aank kholti hai aur apne samne wale shaks ko dekh ke

ladki : good morning bhai.

ladki : good morning meri pyari angel. chalo jaldi se utho jake fresh ho jao.hame college bhi to chalna hai apna result lene.

ye sunke wo ladki

ladki : omg! bhai aaj humara result hai.mai to bhul hi gayi thi. he bhagwan ji please mai pass ho jaun.

ladka: ye kya bol rahi ho betu tumhe to pure college me top aana hai.

ladki: bhai top to aap karoge jaise har saal karte aarahe ho ............top.

ladka: ye kya betu tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise tum har saal fail ho jati ho. tum bhi to top hi karti ho.

ladki : lekin bhai phir bhi dar to lagta hai.

ladka : are daro mat mai janta hu tum top hi karogi. aacha ye sab chodo jao naha ke aao tab tak mai tumhara aur apna room thik kar deta hoo aur mai bhi naha leta hoon. tum naha ke jaldi aana mere room me. phir hum dono saath me niche chale ge.

ladki : ok bhai.

ab ladka uska room thik karke apne room me jake apna room thik karta hai , aur nahane chala jata hai jab nahe ke aata hai to dekhta hai wo ladki uske bed pe baithi hui hoti hai.

ladka : betu ruko mai kapde pahan kar aata hun.

ladki : thik hai.

phir wo kapde pehan ke aata hai.
usne ek jeans ek shirt aur upad se denim jacket pahna huwa tha.

ladka: chalo betu.

phir dono sidhiyo se niche ate hai us samay time ho raha tha 6:30 a.m.

jaise hi ye sidhiyo se niche aate hai unheek aadmi baitha news paper padh raha tha unko dekh ke kahta hai

aadmi : good morning rohan good morning siksha.

dono : muskurake good morning dad.

{to aaiye jaan lete hai ye tino kon kon hai

ladka hai Rohan thakur , ladki hai Siksha thakur , inke dad hai Mr Ram thakur.}

mr ram thakur : acha ek baat batao ye chamatkar kaise hogaya.

siksha : kaisa chamatkar dad.


ram thakur : are aaj hamari gudiya itni jaldi uth gayi ye to chamatkar hi hua na.

ye sunke to rohasne laga. wahi siksha muh fulake gusse se kahti hai

siksha : dad

tabhi jyoti thakur kitchen se hall me aati hui kahti hai, jinhone ye saree baate sun li thi.

jyoti thakur :(jhute gusse se) aap kehna kya chahte hai ki meri beti roj late se uthti hai.

ram thakur : (sakpakate hue) nhi nhi mere kahne ka matlab hai aaj thodi jaldi uth gayi hai.. kyun rohan

rohan : ab isme mai kya bolun.

ram thakur : wah beta.

rohan : (baat badalte hue) wo sab choryie mom dad aap logo ko pata hai na ki aaj mera aur gudiya ka result hai.

dono : haa bata.

rohan : to aap dono hame aashirwad dijiye ki hum do no ka aacha %age aaye.

siksha: ha dad app to jante hai ki bhaiya hamesha first aate hai, bas aap dono mujhe itna aashirwad dijiye ki mai pass ho jaun.

jyoti thakur: are nahi gudiya tum bhi first jarur aaogi ye hum dono ka aasdhirwad hai

ye bolke dono un dono ke sar pe haath rakhte hai.
aur ye dono jhuk ke unke pair choote hai.

(ab yaah se kahani hero narrate karega.aur jab jab naarration bdlega mai uske upar title me likh dunga aise;)


hero:---(narration)

fir mai , skisha aur dad baat karne lag jate hai aur mom breakfast taiyar karne lag jati hai.(ghar me khana yahi banati thi naaki servants ye log ghar ka baaki kaam dekhte the.)

tab tak time 7:30 am ho jaya hai.

fir ham baith ke break fast karte hai.
dad ko 8 baje office (london wali company) jana tha to wo jake taaiyar hone lagte hai aur
hame 8:30 me college jana tha to ham aur siksha college ke baare me baat karne lag jate hai.

abhi 10 minute hi huwa tha ki gate ka bell bajta hai aur ek servant jake darwaja kholta hai.

aur gate se padharti hai hero ki friend mandli.(yaha mai baata du ki siksha abhi 19 yrs ki hai aur college me hai 11 standard me.)


ab time hai hero ki mandli ke introduction ka.



intro time(2)


ankit aggarwal (ye Indian hai apne family ke sath yaha rahta hai iske papa london ke jaane mane business man hai. Ye lono ke top 3 bussines man me gine hane jate hai. ) ye rohan ka jigri hai .ye apne dosto ke liye jaan de bhi sakta hai aur le bhi sakta hai .



maichel diaz (ye martial art champion hai.)


Samantha larrusoo

Robby keene

Tori Nichols

(ye charo London ke hi resident hai . inke pita bhi london ke jane mane bussines man hai).ye sab bhi rohan ke paake dost hai. In charo ka story me jayda role nhi hai.




Rohan ke sare dosst padne me intelligent hai .

jaise hi maine unhe DEKHA mai turant khada ho gaya aur ankit jaldi se aake mere gale lag gaya aur bola.


ankit : mere bhai kaesa hai tu.
mai : thik hu tu kesa ahi.
mujhe alag karke tu mujhse itne dino se nahi milne aya to kaisa hounga.mera poora mood kaharab thA pura hafta.

mai: chal thik hai ab to tu khush hai na.

tabhi maichel ye dekho ise to dikh hi nhi raha hai ki hm bhi yahi hai yaar ye dono apne me magan hai (inhe hindi bolna maine hi sikhaya hai kyunki mai 5 saal ki umar se londo me raha raha hu aur ye pacho mere bachapan ke dost hai isliye maine inhe hindi saikhaya.)

tabhi mai unki taraf dekh ke
mai : aisi baat nhi hai yaar aao aao tum log bhi aa jao
phir mai sabke gale laga
tabhi siksha : wah wah abhi aplog bahiya ko kah rahe the ki ye apne me magan hai aur khud mare taraf dekha bhi nhi akele bhai se baat kiyr jaa rahe ho.

tabhi ankit : oo to tum bhi yahi par ho mujhe laga ki yaha pe koi nhi hai you know na tum kitni patli aur choti ho.

siksha: you .....
bhaiya ise bol do mai ise kuch nhi bol rahi iska mtlb ye kuch bhi bol dega aur tum se kon bol raha hai mai to maichel , tori , samantha , robby ko bol rahi thi.
phir kya dono apne muh sr tir , bhale , talear aur na jane kon kon se hatiyar chalane lage ye dekh ke mai,

mai : tum dono phir mat suru ho jao.
agar tum dono ko yahi karna hai to karte raho hum log chale clg .

mai un charo se : chalo tum log inhe larne do jab dekho larte rehte hai .

dono : nhi bhai hm log nhi larenge chalo college.
phir hm log bahar gaye
robi aur tori ek car me, mai aur siksha aur deepak ek car me(deepak apna car laya tha magar yahi chod ke hamari car me baith gaya.) , smantha aur miguel ek car me.
hm baith ke chal pade clg....
..
..
..
..
..
..
..
sayonara.......

to be continued




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Lucky..

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UPDATE 1 (Rohan and his friends.)

place - London
Thakur villa.


STORY start karne se pahle aayie jaan lete hai thakur villa akkhir hai kaisa uska scenary kaisa hai.

[description :- ek bada sa unique design wala main gate joki bhawayata ka pratik hai, uske upar likha huwa hai thakur villa.usse andar jane ke baad ek rasta jo ki villa tak jata hai. uske dono taraf bahut hi sundar garden hai jiske bich me dono taraf ek bada sa fountain hai. fir uske baad aata hai villa joki do floor ka bana huwa hai.uski sundarta ko dekh ke koi bhi use aise dekhne lage jaise ladke ladkio ko dekhte hai :laugh:.villa ke andar first floor par bich me dining hall hai jaha pe bada sa dining table hai.dining hall ke dono taraf se sidhiyan second floor tak jaati hai.hall ke left side me bada sa kitchen hai ,fir uske bagal me drawing room.hall ke aage do room hai aur ek store room hai.hall ke right side me do kamre hai, ek ram thakur aur jyoti thakur ka hai ek ram ka study room hai. second floor do hisso me bata huwa hai ek hisse me chat bana huwa hai jisme swimming pool bhi hai dosre hisse ke left side me ek room hai joki apen dashing hero ka hai aur aage wale area ka pehla room apne hero ki pyari si jaan (bahan) ka hai in dono ka room baht bada hai , aur second room me gym bana huwa hai. second floor ke right wale hisse me ek guest room aur do khali room hai. villa ke piche bahut bada field hai jaha ye log kabhi kbahi khelte hai jaise (cricket , badminton , football etc. ) , villa ke bagal me servant quarter bhi tha .ye tha pure villa aur uske aaspas ka description]

Ab start karte hai story.

time : 5:00 a.m.

tring... tring.... tring..... alarm bajta hai aur
,
ek ladka utha hai angrai lete huwe aur aankh ek bar band karke phir kholta hai fir utha hai aur jake khidki kholta hai tab hame uske handsome mukhde ke darshan hote hai ek dum smart and sweet se face.jab smile karta hai to jo dimple dikhata hai uske kya kahne. (lekin kahte hai na dikhta hu bade sweet and swami type ka magar hu bade harami type ka.) khair wo to apko aage pata chal hi jayega in ke bade me.wo uthke jata hai fresh hone uske baad jake gym me apni t-shirt utarta hai tab iski body dikhti hai ( ek dum fit and sakht body aur 6 pack abs , khatarnak triceps aur biceps ). t shirt utarne ke baad pahle yoga karta hai phir lag jata hAI apne body ko aur sakht banane me. ek ghante ke baad ye apna kam khatam karke jata hai apne kamre ke bagal wale kamre jaha ek cute si larki apne sapno me khoi hui thi wo muskurate huwe uske pass jake usko gaal pe kiss karke uthata hai.

ladka - siksha betu chalo uth jao subah ho gayi hai.

ladki kasmaste hue apni aank kholti hai aur apne samne wale shaks ko dekh ke

ladki : good morning bhai.

ladki : good morning meri pyari angel. chalo jaldi se utho jake fresh ho jao.hame college bhi to chalna hai apna result lene.

ye sunke wo ladki

ladki : omg! bhai aaj humara result hai.mai to bhul hi gayi thi. he bhagwan ji please mai pass ho jaun.

ladka: ye kya bol rahi ho betu tumhe to pure college me top aana hai.

ladki: bhai top to aap karoge jaise har saal karte aarahe ho ............top.

ladka: ye kya betu tum to aise bol rahi ho jaise tum har saal fail ho jati ho. tum bhi to top hi karti ho.

ladki : lekin bhai phir bhi dar to lagta hai.

ladka : are daro mat mai janta hu tum top hi karogi. aacha ye sab chodo jao naha ke aao tab tak mai tumhara aur apna room thik kar deta hoo aur mai bhi naha leta hoon. tum naha ke jaldi aana mere room me. phir hum dono saath me niche chale ge.

ladki : ok bhai.

ab ladka uska room thik karke apne room me jake apna room thik karta hai , aur nahane chala jata hai jab nahe ke aata hai to dekhta hai wo ladki uske bed pe baithi hui hoti hai.

ladka : betu ruko mai kapde pahan kar aata hun.

ladki : thik hai.

phir wo kapde pehan ke aata hai.
usne ek jeans ek shirt aur upad se denim jacket pahna huwa tha.

ladka: chalo betu.

phir dono sidhiyo se niche ate hai us samay time ho raha tha 6:30 a.m.

jaise hi ye sidhiyo se niche aate hai unheek aadmi baitha news paper padh raha tha unko dekh ke kahta hai

aadmi : good morning rohan good morning siksha.

dono : muskurake good morning dad.

{to aaiye jaan lete hai ye tino kon kon hai

ladka hai Rohan thakur , ladki hai Siksha thakur , inke dad hai Mr Ram thakur.}

mr ram thakur : acha ek baat batao ye chamatkar kaise hogaya.

siksha : kaisa chamatkar dad.


ram thakur : are aaj hamari gudiya itni jaldi uth gayi ye to chamatkar hi hua na.

ye sunke to rohasne laga. wahi siksha muh fulake gusse se kahti hai

siksha : dad

tabhi jyoti thakur kitchen se hall me aati hui kahti hai, jinhone ye saree baate sun li thi.

jyoti thakur :(jhute gusse se) aap kehna kya chahte hai ki meri beti roj late se uthti hai.

ram thakur : (sakpakate hue) nhi nhi mere kahne ka matlab hai aaj thodi jaldi uth gayi hai.. kyun rohan

rohan : ab isme mai kya bolun.

ram thakur : wah beta.

rohan : (baat badalte hue) wo sab choryie mom dad aap logo ko pata hai na ki aaj mera aur gudiya ka result hai.

dono : haa bata.

rohan : to aap dono hame aashirwad dijiye ki hum do no ka aacha %age aaye.

siksha: ha dad app to jante hai ki bhaiya hamesha first aate hai, bas aap dono mujhe itna aashirwad dijiye ki mai pass ho jaun.

jyoti thakur: are nahi gudiya tum bhi first jarur aaogi ye hum dono ka aasdhirwad hai

ye bolke dono un dono ke sar pe haath rakhte hai.
aur ye dono jhuk ke unke pair choote hai.

(ab yaah se kahani hero narrate karega.aur jab jab naarration bdlega mai uske upar title me likh dunga aise;)


hero:---(narration)

fir mai , skisha aur dad baat karne lag jate hai aur mom breakfast taiyar karne lag jati hai.(ghar me khana yahi banati thi naaki servants ye log ghar ka baaki kaam dekhte the.)

tab tak time 7:30 am ho jaya hai.

fir ham baith ke break fast karte hai.
dad ko 8 baje office (london wali company) jana tha to wo jake taaiyar hone lagte hai aur
hame 8:30 me college jana tha to ham aur siksha college ke baare me baat karne lag jate hai.

abhi 10 minute hi huwa tha ki gate ka bell bajta hai aur ek servant jake darwaja kholta hai.

aur gate se padharti hai hero ki friend mandli.(yaha mai baata du ki siksha abhi 19 yrs ki hai aur college me hai 11 standard me.)


ab time hai hero ki mandli ke introduction ka.



intro time(2)


ankit aggarwal (ye Indian hai apne family ke sath yaha rahta hai iske papa london ke jaane mane business man hai. Ye lono ke top 3 bussines man me gine hane jate hai. ) ye rohan ka jigri hai .ye apne dosto ke liye jaan de bhi sakta hai aur le bhi sakta hai .



maichel diaz (ye martial art champion hai.)


Samantha larrusoo

Robby keene

Tori Nichols

(ye charo London ke hi resident hai . inke pita bhi london ke jane mane bussines man hai).ye sab bhi rohan ke paake dost hai. In charo ka story me jayda role nhi hai.




Rohan ke sare dosst padne me intelligent hai .

jaise hi maine unhe DEKHA mai turant khada ho gaya aur ankit jaldi se aake mere gale lag gaya aur bola.


ankit : mere bhai kaesa hai tu.
mai : thik hu tu kesa ahi.
mujhe alag karke tu mujhse itne dino se nahi milne aya to kaisa hounga.mera poora mood kaharab thA pura hafta.

mai: chal thik hai ab to tu khush hai na.

tabhi maichel ye dekho ise to dikh hi nhi raha hai ki hm bhi yahi hai yaar ye dono apne me magan hai (inhe hindi bolna maine hi sikhaya hai kyunki mai 5 saal ki umar se londo me raha raha hu aur ye pacho mere bachapan ke dost hai isliye maine inhe hindi saikhaya.)

tabhi mai unki taraf dekh ke
mai : aisi baat nhi hai yaar aao aao tum log bhi aa jao
phir mai sabke gale laga
tabhi siksha : wah wah abhi aplog bahiya ko kah rahe the ki ye apne me magan hai aur khud mare taraf dekha bhi nhi akele bhai se baat kiyr jaa rahe ho.

tabhi ankit : oo to tum bhi yahi par ho mujhe laga ki yaha pe koi nhi hai you know na tum kitni patli aur choti ho.

siksha: you .....
bhaiya ise bol do mai ise kuch nhi bol rahi iska mtlb ye kuch bhi bol dega aur tum se kon bol raha hai mai to maichel , tori , samantha , robby ko bol rahi thi.
phir kya dono apne muh sr tir , bhale , talear aur na jane kon kon se hatiyar chalane lage ye dekh ke mai,

mai : tum dono phir mat suru ho jao.
agar tum dono ko yahi karna hai to karte raho hum log chale clg .

mai un charo se : chalo tum log inhe larne do jab dekho larte rehte hai .

dono : nhi bhai hm log nhi larenge chalo college.
phir hm log bahar gaye
robi aur tori ek car me, mai aur siksha aur deepak ek car me(deepak apna car laya tha magar yahi chod ke hamari car me baith gaya.) , smantha aur miguel ek car me.
hm baith ke chal pade clg....
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sayonara.......

to be continued




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