Update 11
Kuch din yun hi beet gaye, jaise waqt apne aap ko dheere-dheere thaka raha ho.
Avani ka ghar ab ek sannate ka makaan ban gaya tha—Chamanlal ke bina avani ki subah ek khali si kahani lagti thi, chahe uski shaitani se woh kitna hi tang kyun na hoti thi.
Kuchh din chhotu aur chamanlal Avani ke ghar nahi aaye toh Avani ne socha, "Shayad chamanlal bimar ho gaya, ya gaon mein kisi kaam mein fas gaye honge."
Usne dil ko samjhaya aur din guzar diya. Par do din, teen din, aur woh wapas nahi aaya. Avani ke dil mein ek ajeeb si khaliyat si chha gayi—jaise uski zindagi se ek gandi si hansi chhin gayi ho.
Idhar Gaon mein garmi badhti hi jaa rhi thi aur avani shehar mein rehne waali rich aurat jo kabhi AC se bahar nahi nikalti thi aaj usko iss garmi mein jalna padta tha.
Kuchh dino se avani ko chadar mein ek nami si....kuchh geela geela sa ehsas ho raha tha.
Avani ko laga shayad yeh garmi aur paseene ki wajah se hi uski chadar geeli aur chipchipi hai, aur usne ek nayi chadar nikaal li
Par jaldi hi usse ehsaas hua ki baat kuch aur thi. Uski vagina se safed, chipchipa discharge shuru ho gaya—pehle toh thodi si baat thi, jaise kuch bhi nahi, par har din woh badhta gaya.
Discharge mein ek halki si badboo thi, aur kabhi-kabhi jalan bhi hoti thi. Avani pareshan ho uthi—woh samajh gayi ki usse garmi se yaa iss loo se infection ho gaya hai.
Usne Ghar mein hi kuchh nuskhe try karne ko socha aur neem ke patte ubaal kar nahaya, dahi ko cotton mein lagakar panty ke andar rakha taki thandak mile. Par kuch bhi asar nahi hua.
Discharge itna badh gaya ki din mein 4-5 baar panty badalni padti thi. Kapde dhone mein sharamindagi hoti—woh chipchipa daag saree aur panty pe saaf dikhayi deta tha. Usne ek purani saree ka tukda kaat kar pad banaya, par woh bhi jaldi bheeg jata. Garmi aur infection ne uska chehra utaar diya—woh din bhar chupchap baithi rehti, aankhon mein ek udaasi aur dil mein bechaini liye.
Ek din dopahar ka waqt tha—suraj aag ugal raha tha, aur Avani darwaze pe khadi ek glass paani haath mein liye soch rahi thi, “Yeh zindagi ab kyun itni bhaari lag rahi hai?” Tabhi Chamanlal chalte hue uske ghar ki taraf aata dikhayi diya. Lungi aur ek purani shirt mein woh waisa hi besharam lag raha tha—chehre pe wahi shaitani muskaan, haath mein ek chhota sa jhola latka hua.
Avani ne dur se hi chamanlal ko dekha aur uske chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi- itne mein chamanlal avani ke darwaze ke paas aa khada hua tabhi avani banawati gusse se boli,
“Chamanlal ji, yeh kya hai? Itne din kahan gayab ho gaye? Koi khabar tak nahi di aapne!”
Uski awaaz mein shikayat thi, par dil mein ek chhupi si khushi bhi jag rahi thi.
Chamanlal ne apni jeebh nikalte hue bola, “Arre madam, gaon mein zameen ka chakkar tha, thodi si ladai ho gayi thi wahan.
Par aapke bina dil nahi laga, toh wapas aa gaya! Yeh chehra kyun utra hua hai, koi lafda ho gaya kya?”
Avani ne baat talne ki koshish ki, “Kuch nahi, bas garmi se hai. Aaiye aap andar baithiye, main paani lati hoon.”
Woh jaldi se kitchen ki taraf gayi, par uski awaaz mein ek thakan thi jo chamanlal se chhup nahi payi. Chamanlal living room mein ek sofe pe baith gaya aur Avani ko ghoorte hue bola,
“Madam, humse kya chhupana? Aapki yeh shakal dekhkar lag raha hai kuch bada gadbad hai. Batao na, kya baat hai?”
Avani ek glass paani lekar wapas aayi aur uske saamne rakh diya. Thodi der chup rahi, fir sharam se nazar jhukate hue boli, “Chamanlaal ji, pata nahi kuchh din se kuchh takleef ho rahi hai… wahan.”
Usne pet ke neeche dheere se ishara kiya, aur uska chehra laal ho gaya.Chamanlal ne paani ka glass uthaya, ek ghunt piya, aur bola, “Arre madam, yeh toh serious baat hai! Doctor ke paas gayi thi?”
Uski aankhon mein shararat thi, par awaaz mein thodi chinta bhi.“
Avani dheere se boli, apne haathon ko ragadte hue. Gayi thi, dawai li, par kuch farak nahi pada. Yeh discharge rukta hi nahi, jalan bhi hoti hai,” aur apna sar niche jhuka liya.
Chamanlal ne glass table pe rakha aur bola, "Madam, gaon mein ek vaid hai, aurton ki bimaari ka pakka ilaaj karta hai. Do din mein aaram de deta hai. Humare saath chaliye aap hum aapko bilkul thik karwa denge".
Avani ne hichkichate hue kaha, "Chamanlal ji , lekin papa ko kya bolungi? Aur gaon kaise jaungi?"
Chamanlal ne muskura kar bola, Arre madam, bas bol do Bengaluru ja rahi ho kaam se. Hum aur Chhotu saath rahenge, koi dikkat nahi hogi. Chalo na, aapki yeh takleef humse dekhi nahi jati!
Usne thodi si naatakiya ada dikhayi, aur Avani ka dil thoda pighal gaya.
Avani ne thodi der socha, fir maan gayi.
Usne papa ko phone kiya, " Hello Papa, woh mujhe Bengaluru jana tha, actually wahan office se call aaya tha office join karne ko...aur main yahan Kuchh kaam bhi nahi kar Rahi hun toh main chali jaaun kya??
Papa ne bola, "Theek hai beta, par sambhal ke jana."
Avani ne ek chhota sa bag pack kiya aur Chamanlal ke saath nikalne ko taiyaar ho gayi.
Chamanlal bola, Madam, safar se pehle thodi chai ho jaye?
Garmi mein bhi humein aapke haath ki chai ka maza hi alag hai aur itna kehkar has deta hai!
Avani ne aankhen ghumayi, Chamanlal ji, abhi bhi mazak? Theek hai, bana deti hoon. Aur halki si muskaan lekar kichen mein chali gayi
Woh kitchen mein gayi, gas pe kettle chadhaya, aur chai banane lagi. Chamanlal living room se chillaya, "Madam, thodi si adrak daal dena, wahi wali jo aapki khushboo jaisi hai!"
Avani ne kitchen se jawab diya, "Chamanlal ji, chup rahiye warna saari adrak chai mein daalkar aapke muh pe daal dungi!"
Par andar hi andar woh muskura rahi thi.
Chai banakar woh dono ke liye cup le aayi—ek apne liye, ek Chamanlal ke liye
Chamanlal ne ek sip liya aur bola, "madam, yeh chai toh aapki tarah garam aur naram hai. Ek baar humein apne haath se pila do toh safar ka maza dugna ho jayega!"
Avani ne usse ghoora, "Chamanlal ji, chai pijiye aur chup rahiye. Safar pe nikalna hai na?
Chai khatam karte hi dono ghar se nikle—bus stand par chhotu khada tha usee chamanlal ne bulaya tha...
Chamanlal avani ke bagal mein baith gya aur Chhotu driver ke paas waali seat par.
Chamanlal ne raste mein thodi shaitani karne ki Sochi. "Madam, aapke pati Africa mein kya karte honge? Wahan ki garmi mein bhi aap jaisa nasha nahi milega unhein! Aur jor se has deta hai
Avani ne muh banakar jawab diya, Chamanlal ji, apni bakwas band kijiye, warna bus se utar jaaungi main!
Dopahar se Shaam dhalte-dhalte teeno Chamanlal ke ghar pahunch gaye- sehar se dur ek chhota sa kaswa jahan chaaro taraf bas khet hi khet they.
Kuchh chhote kachhe ghar bane huye they jo bohot duri duri par they.
Chamanlal ka ghar toh pakka tha par thoda saa chhota sa tha. Ghar mein koi nahi rehta tha. Lekin Ghar saaf suthra tha bus kuchh ped ke sukhe patte aur thodi dhul-mitti thi jise chamanlal aur chhotu ne milkar saaf kar diya.
Ek chhota sa aangan, 2 chhote chhote kamre jisme shayad anaaj rakha hua tha aur kitchen kamre ke bagal se. Ek chhoti si toilet aur nahaane ke liye ek chhota sa Panara jiski deewaarein kamar tak hi aati hain.
Avani ne ghar dekha toh thodi si ghabrahat hui, par Chamanlal ne bola,
Madam, baithiye, yeh humara ghar hai. Thoda sa chhota hai, par aapke liye sukoon bhara hai, Usne ek purani kursi pe Avani ko bithaya aur paani diya.
Avani ne paani piya aur apna bag side mein rakha. Uska discharge abhi bhi chal raha tha—panty gili thi, aur woh baar-baar saree theek kar rahi thi. Chamanlal ne bola, "Madam, safar se thak gayi hongi. Raat bhi hone waali hai aap yahin araam karo, hum khatiya bichha denge aur fir kal subah vaid ke paas chalenge.
Avani ne sar hilaya, par uska dil bechain tha.
Kuchh der baad andhera ho gya lagbhag raat ke 9 baj rhe they avani ne hath-pair dho kar raat kaa khana khaya aur chamanlal dwara bichhayi khatiya par woh jaakar let gayi.
Raat gehri ho chuki thi. Chhotu ek kone mein charpai pe soya hua tha, aur Chamanlal aangan ke darwaze ke paas mein leta tha. Avani ko ek chhoti si khatiya di gayi thi jo angan ke bichh mein thi.
Aadhi raat ko avni ki dard se ankh khuliti hai, ek toh infection ka dard aur upar se veginal discharge usse sone nahi de rahe the.
Uski panty ab poori tarah bheeg chuki thi—woh chipchipa sa daag uske jism pe ek bojh ban gaya tha. Woh sochti hai, “Yeh gili panty mein kaise soungi? Badalni padegi shayad. Andhera tha, par khatiya pe letkar hi usne faisla kiya.
Woh dheere se bistar pe baith gayi, apni saree aur petticoat ko thoda upar kiya—uski gori taangein halke se dikhayi di, aur woh sharam se kaanp rahi thi.
Bag se ek nayi panty nikali, par khada hona mushkil tha—Chhotu ke jagne ka dar tha, aur Chamanlal bhi gate ke saamne hi so rha tha.
Usne chadar ke andar hi apni purani panty ko dheere-dheere neeche khiskaya—woh chipchipi panty uski tango se alag hui, aur usmein se aati badboo ne uska chehra sikod diya. “Chhi, itni gandi badboo-woh sochti hai, aur jaldi se purani panty ko bag mein chhupa di.
Fir usne nayi panty ko chadar ke andar hi pehenne ki koshish ki—saree aur petticoat ko ek haath se upar pakde hue, doosre haath se panty ko tango pe chadhaya. Uska sharir paseene se tar tha, aur discharge ki wajah se panty thodi si geeli ho gayi.
Woh dheere se let gayi, saree neeche ki, aur razai se dhak liya. “Kal ilaaj ho jaye, bas yahi dua hai,” woh sochti hai, par neend usse koson door thi.Raat dheere-dheere gehri hoti gayi, aur Avani ke dil mein bechaini badhti gayi—infection ka dard, Chamanlal ka saath, aur agle din ka safar. Yeh kahani ab ek naye mod pe thi, aur readers ke liye maza abhi baaki tha…
Raat Ka Gehra Andhera Aur Avani Ki BechainiRaat apne poore shabab pe thi—Chamanlal ke chhote se ghar mein sannata chhaya hua tha, sirf bahar se jhinguron ki awaaz aur kabhi-kabhi Chhotu ke kharrate sunai de rahe the.
Avani khatiya pe leti hui thi, razai se dhaki hui, par uski aankhon mein neend ka naam nahi tha.
Nayi panty pehenne ke baad bhi discharge ruk nahi tha—woh chipchipa sa geelapan ab uski taangon ke beech ek saza ban gaya tha. Usne razai ke andar haath dalkar panty ko thoda adjust kiya, par jalan aur badboo usse pareshan kar rahi thi. “Yeh kab khatam hoga?” woh sochti hai, aur ek thandi saans leti hai.
Tabhi bahar aangan se Chamanlal ki dheemi si awaaz aayi, “Madam, so gayi kya?” Avani chaunk gayi—usne socha shayad woh usse baat karne ke liye aayega. Woh jaldi se razai theek karti hai aur dheere se bolti hai, “Nahi Chamanlal ji, so nahi rahi abhi main.
Aap kyun jag rahe ho?” Uski awaaz mein thakan thi, par ek ajeeb si uttejana bhi chhupi hui thi.
Chamanlal aangan se hi bola, “Arre madam, yeh raat aapke bina sunsaan lag rahi hai. Socha thodi baat kar lun, dil halka ho jaye. Waise, ek baat kahein humein aapki khushboo yahan tak aa rahi hai!”
Uske lehje mein wahi gandi si shaitani thi, aur Avani ka chehra sharam se laal ho gaya.
“Chamanlal ji, yeh gandi baatein band karo aur so jao. Kal subah vaid ji ke paas jana hai na?” Avani ne thodi sakhti se kaha, par uska dil thoda sa dhadak raha tha.
Chamanlal ne haskar jawab diya, “Theek hai madam, aapki marzi. Par sapne mein toh aap humein rok nahi paogi!” Woh fir charpai pe let gaya, aur thodi der mein uski ankh lag gayi aur woh so gaya.
Avani bistar pe palti, ek taraf karwat li, par uska dimaag abhi bhi Chamanlal ki baaton mein ulajha hua tha. “Yeh besharam har waqt aisi baatein kyun karta hai? Aur main kyun sunti hoon?” woh sochti hai, aur aankhen band karke neend bulane ki koshish karti hai.
Par discharge ki wajah se uski panty fir se gili ho chuki thi, aur woh bechaini mein khatiya pe idhar-udhar hilti rahi. Raat dheere-dheere guzri, aur avani ki ankh bhi lag gayi.
Subah ka suraj abhi poora ubhra nahi tha, par uski halki roshni ghar ke aangan mein fail gayi thi. Chhotu sabse pehle utha—woh charpai se utra, haath-muh dhoya, aur Avani ko jagane aaya.
“Didi, subah ho gayi. Utho na, vaid ke paas jana hai,” usne masoomiyat se bola.
Avani ne aankhen kholi, thodi der khatiya pe baithi rahi, aur fir uthkar boli,
Haan Chhotu, bas taiyaar ho jati hoon. Woh bathroom ki taraf gayi—mitti ka chhota sa bathroom tha, jismein ek balti paani aur ek mugga rakha hua tha. Avani ne idhar udhar dekha, apni saree aur petticoat upar kiya, aur panty neeche khiskayi. Discharge ab thoda zyaada tha—safed, chipchipa, aur badboo wala.
Usne balti ke paani se apne aap ko saaf kiya, par jalan se uska chehra sikud gaya. “Yeh kab khatam hoga?” woh sochti hai, aur ek purani panty pehen leti hai—nayi panty ab bachi nahi thi, aur uska dil baith gaya.
Wapas aakar usne Chamanlal ko awaaz di, Chamanlal ji, uthiye! Kitna soyenge aap? Vaid ke paas bhi chalna hai. Chamanlal aangan se utha, apni lungi theek ki, aur bola, Arre madam, aapki awaaz sunte hi neend udd gayi. Chalo, taiyaar ho jata hoon!
Woh bhi haath-muh dhone chala gaya, aur Avani ne apni saree thodi si sambhali—woh maroon saree abhi bhi uspe thi, par garmi aur discharge ki wajah se uska pallu paseene se chipak gaya tha.
Teeno paidal hi vaid ke paas ke liye nikle—gaon ke chhote se raste pe chalte hue, jahan mitti udd rahi thi aur garmi abhi bhi chubh rahi thi.
Chamanlal aage-aage chal raha tha, Chhotu uske peeche, aur Avani thodi dheeme chal rahi thi—uski taangon ke beech ka geelapan har kadam pe mehsoos ho raha tha.
Chamanlal ne mudkar bola, “Madam, thodi jaldi chalo na, vaid ka ghar ab door nahi hai. Wahan aapki yeh takleef ekdum khatam ho jayegi!”Avani ne thodi jhujhlaahat se kaha,
“Chamanlaal ji, main jaldi nahi chal sakti. Yeh garmi aur… yeh problem mujhe pareshan kar rahi hai.”
Chhotu ne masoomiyat se bola, Didi, hum aapka bag le len? Aapko araam milega. Avani ne muskurate hue bag Chhotu ko de diya.
Vaid ka ghar ek purani si jhopdi thi—bahar ek chhota sa board laga tha jismein likha tha, Vaid Ramdeen—Har Bimari Ka Ilaaj.
Chamanlal ne darwaza khatkhataya, aur ek budha aadmi bahar aaya—lambi safed daadhi, ek kurta-pajama, aur haath mein ek chhoti si peti. Usne Avani ko dekha aur bola,
“Kya takleef hai beti?”
Avani sharam se sar jhuka leti hai, aur Chamanlal bola, Vaid ji, inhe wahi aurton wali problem hai. Wahi safed paani ki bimaari, jalan bhi hai. Aap kuch dawai do na! Vaid ne Avani ko andar bulaya aur bola, Beti, yahan baitho, main dekhta hoon.