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THnx for suggestion naughty lover tareef kay liyay shukriya ek alag Andaz dala hay story me baqi or stories me yahi character chal rhaay Hein isliyay is story Me Thora Alag Karnay ki koshish ki hayJack bhaau Bhaai writing bahot achi hai ek dum superb mindblowing...
But bhaai ye naye character (Rahul) k saath Daya ka scene mat dikhaao bhaai achaa feel nahi hota hai uska tapu k saath hi rehne do...
Or mai to chahta hu aap original characters hi rehne do Rahul ko dhire dhire story se bahaar kr do...Jethalal and tapu hi main heroes rahe to padhne mai ek alag hi mazaa aata hai..
Jitna original rahe utna jyada mazaa aata hai koi or limelight lele to padhne mai utna mazaa nahi aata...
Please bhaai ho sake to ispe ghaur kariyega..
Damn sure kaafi readers iss baat se agree karenge...
Wesay baqi readers Kiya Chahtay Hein RAhul ko rehna chahiyay na nahi plz feedback