Update 2
Tapu ne dhere se ankheen kholi. Hospital ke kamre main pehli baar woh itna shant aur akela tha, lekin uske andar ek nayi tarang uth rahi thi. Uske chehre par ab dard ya dar nahi, balki ek ajeeb sa sukoon tha. Uski family abhi bahar thi, doctor se baat kar rahi thi. Tapu ne mann hi mann main System se baatcheet shuru ki.
Tapu (Mann main) : Toh yeh sab sach hai? Main sach main ek mission par hoon?"
System : [Bilkul, Master. Aapka safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ab aapke saamne do raaste hain: ya toh ap apni purani, kamzor zindagi main wapas chale jaayen, ya phir mere saath milkar ek nayi shuruaat karen.]
Tapu ko apni zindagi ke woh saare lamhe yaad aaye jab uski kamzori ne use rok diya tha. Woh bachpan ke din jab woh apne doston ke saath cricket khelta tha,Lekin Jan usko woh bemari hua uske bad se usko har chize se darne Laga use heights se dar lagta tha, ya phir jab woh society ke kisi function main saare logon ke saamne ghabra jaata tha. Ab uske paas mauka tha, yeh sab badalne ka.
Tapu (Mann main) : Toh mujhe is 'Dar ko jeeto' wale mission ko kaise pora karna hai?
System : [ Yeh mission kisi ek bade kaam ke baare main nahi hai. Yeh chote-chote kadam uthane ke baare main hai. Sabse pehle, apko apne andar ke us dar ko pehchan na hoga, jo apko aapke sapno se door rakhta hai.]
Tabhi, kamre ka darwaza khula aur papa mummy aur Dada Ji andar aaye. Unke chehre par abhi bhi chinta thi.
Papa : Tapu Tu sach main theek hai na? Doctor ne kaha ki tumhari chot zyada gehri nahi hai, lekin phir bhi...
Tapu : Main thek hoon, Papa. Ap log pareshan mat hoiye
Dada Ji : Beta, tu ghabra mat. Hum sab tere saath hain.
Mummy : Tapuda, tu hamari jaan hai. Tere bina hum adhoore hain.
Tapu ne unki baatein suni aur uske dil main ek ajeeb sa sukoon mehsoos hua. Tabhi uske dimag main System ki awaz gonji.
System : [ Yeh hai tumhara pehla mission, Tapu. Tumhe apne dar ko jeetna hai aur un sab ko dikhana hai ki tum thek ho. Tabhi unka dar bhi khatam hoga ]
Tapu : Main bilkul thek hoon mummy Ap log please itna pareshan mat hoiye. Aur Dada Ji, ap fikar mat kijiye. Main ab aage se dar se nahi, balki himmat se jiyunga."
Tapu ke in shabdon ne un sabko chaukaya. Unhein laga ki Tapu bemari ke asar se bol raha hai, lekin Tapu ne pehli baar unki ankhoo main ankh dalkar baat ki thi
Abhi tapu aur Kuch kehta use pahle uske samne system ki ek notification AA gayi
[ Ding ]
System : [ Mission Progress: 10% Apne apni family ke samne apne dar ka saamna kiya hai.]
Tapu ke mann main ek notification aaya. Woh us progress ko dekhkar khush hua. Usne socha,
Tapu & Toh yeh aise kaam karta hai?
System : [ Haan, Master. Har ek chota kadam jo ap apne dar ke khilaaf uthayenge, woh aapke mission progress ko badhayega. Abhi aapka agla kadam hai, aapke doston ka samna karna ]
Tapu ke chehre par ek halki si ghabrahat aayi. Woh sochne laga ki Goli, Gogi, Sonu, aur Pinku uske bare main kya sochenge. Uske doston ko abhi bhi lag raha hoga ki woh ek kamzor ladka hai.
System : [ Apko darne ki zaroorat nahi hai. Agar aapne yeh mission poora kar liya, to apke pas 500 System Points aur ₹2 lakh rupees honge. Unse ap apne stats badha sakte hain, aur phir kisi ko bhi yeh nahi pata chalega ki ap ab kamzor nahi hain ]
Tapu ke mann main paiso ka khayal aate hi, uski aankhoo main chamak aa gayi.
Tapu (Mann main) : Lekin, ₹2 lakh ka main kya karunga? Woh kahan aayenge?"
System : [ Woh aapke bank account main transfer ho jayenge. Is System se aapke bank account ka link jud jayega ]
Tapu ne lambi saans li
Tapu : Theek hai. Main taiyaar hoon. Mujhe apne doston se milna hain
Phir Tapu ne Apne papa ko gale laga kar kaha
Tapu : Papa, main abhi thek hoon. Par main apko ek secret batana chahta hoon
Papa ne hairan hokar pucha
Papa : Kya hua?
Tapu ne mann hi mann main socha,
Tapu ( man ma ) : System, kya main inko tumhare bare main bata sakta hoon?
System : [ Nahi, Tapu. Tumhe is system ke bare main kisi ko nahi batana hai. Agar tumne bataya, toh iske baad tumhari body main koi bhi badlaav nahi hoga, aur tumhare pas jo points hain, woh sab zero ho jayenge ]
Tapu ne ghabra kar papa se kaha
Tapu : Nahi, kuch nahi. Bas... bas yahi. Main apko batana chahta tha ki main abhi thek hoon
Papa ne use gale laga kar kaha
Papa : Tu hi meri jaan hai, Tapu
Tapu ne papa ko gale lagaya aur uske mann main ek naya dar paida hua. Usne socha
Tapu : Kya main is system ko control kar sakta hoon?
System : [ Tapu, tum is System ko control nahin kar sakte. Abhi tak nahin. Lekin tum hi mere Master ho ]
Tapu ne hairan hokar pucha
Tapu : Toh... toh kya tum mujhe control karogi?
System : [ Nahi, main tumhe control nahi karungi Main tumhe guide karungi. Tumhe missions dongi. Unhe pora karne par tumhe rewards milenge ]
Tapu ne muskuraya Use laga ki woh ab ek naya insan ban gaya hai. Usne dil main socha
Tapu ( man main) : Main ab darpok nahi rahonga. Main apne dar ko jeetunga. Main ek naya leader banunga
( Note abse .main tapu ki jagha main likhoga okay)
Papa jab mujhe Ghar laye to poori society dekhne aayi. Har koi mere chehre par woh naya confidence dekh kar hairan tha. Par sabse zyada hairan woh log the jo hamesha meri kamzori se chintit rehte the
Dupher ko main apne kamre main tha
Tabhi mere dimaag main System ki awaaz goonj rahi thi
System : [ Ab apko apne doston se milna hai. Woh apko bahar intezar kar rahe hain ]
Mere haath pair kaampne lage main janta tha ke mere dost mere baare main kya sochenge
Main ( maan main ) : Agar main unko milne gaya, toh woh log mujhpar hasenge. Main unse kuch keh nahi paunga
System : [ Apko darne ki zarorat nahi hai. Apke pas ab main hoon. Ap bas unse baat kijiye Unko dikhaiye ki ap ab thek hain ]
Main ( ne dil hi dil main socha ) : Thek hai. Main ja raha hoon. Lekin agar unhone mera mazaak udaya, toh main unse kabhi baat nahi karunga
Maine darwaza khola aur niche society compound main aa gaya. Mere maan main abhi bhi dar tha, par Maine Apne chehre par ek muskurahat layi mere dost (Goli, Gogi, Sonu aur Pinku) mujhe dek kar daud kar mere pass aaye.
Goli : Tapu, tu sach main thek hai? Hum sab bohut dar gaye the
Gogi : Tapu, tu itni tez dauda kyu? Tu jaanta hai na ki tu kitna bemar Hain phir bi
Sonu : Tapu, please aage se aisa mat karna. Hum sab bohut dar gaye the
Maine unki batein suni aur mere dil main ek ajeeb sa sukon mehsos hua.maine socha
Main ( man main) : Yeh log mera mazak nahi uda rahe hain, yeh log sach main mere baare main chinta karte hain
System : [ Dekha, Tapu. Apka dar bekaar tha. Ab apko sirf unse baat karni hai ]
Maine doston se baat karna shuru kiya. Maine unhe bataya ki main ab thek ho aur aage se cricket match main aur bhi acche se kheluga maine unhe bataya ki ab apne dar ko jeetega
Sonu : Tapu, tu sach main thek hai?
Tapu : Haan, sonu Main bilkul thek hoon. Aur ab main Tum sab ke saath cricket khelunga
Maine cricket bat uthaya aur phir ball ko zor se mara. Ball society ke bahar nikal gayi. Sab log hairan reh gaye. Unhe pata tha ki main itni zor se ball nahi maar sakta tha
System : [ Tapu, aapka pehla mission complete ho gaya hai. Aapne time limit se pehle ise pora kiya hai
Ding!
Ek aur window mere mann main khuli
[ Mission Complete : Apne dar ko jeeto.]
[Reward : 500 System Points + 1 Money Point' (₹2 lakh)]
[ Bonus Reward: Mission time se pehle pora karne ke liye, apko 1 extra 'Money Point' diya jata hai (₹2 lakh)]
Main : Do lakh aur do lakh... char lakh?
System : [ Ab apke pass total 2 'Money Points' aur 500 'System Points' hain. Ab ap apne stats badha sakte hain
Maine jaldi se 'Status' kaha.
[ Name - Tapu
Age - 18
Status - Owner of the System
Stats:
Strength - 10/100
Intelligence - 8/100
Agility - 7/100
Endurance - 11/100
Appearance - 10/100
Talents - 0
Points - 500 ]
Tapu ne 500 points se apne stats badhaye. Usne 100-100 points har stats par lagaye.
[Stats Updated:
Strength: 20/100
Intelligence: 18/100
Agility: 17/100
Endurance: 21/100
Appearance: 20/100
Points: 0 ]
Maine dekha mere stats bad gaye the aur mere chehre par ek muskurahat aayi aur maine dil hi dil main socha
Main ( maan main) : Main ab darpok nahi rahonga
. Main apne dar ko jeetunga. Main ek naya leader banunga
~~ to be continue ~~
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