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Nah perfect I feel, no need of sex scenes. It was nice, emotional and satisfyingStory ka sequence of events theek tha?
Anything you feel should be changed or more detailed?
Maine sex scenes almost poori tarah se kaat diye the
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Nah perfect I feel, no need of sex scenes. It was nice, emotional and satisfying
Udhar post karna hai to daalna padega
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Accha one more thing
Pankh's decision about "Punish her, but let her live" this coming before Armaan's final confrontation with Meera, i feel it dampens the thrill. I think i should keep Pankh's decision mystery till end. What you say?
Pankh's decision about "Punish her, but let her live" this coming before Armaan's final confrontation with Meera, i feel it dampens the thrill. I think i should keep Pankh's decision mystery till end. What you say?
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You can do that, make it a bit more sadistic and let the electric shock make believe Meera that it's over
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Qais aur Meera ka daal do
yeh Qais ko improve kiya jaa sakta hai kya? Chutiya lag raha hai poori story mein 
BC har koi uska kaat raha hai
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You can do that, make it a bit more sadistic and let the electric shock make believe Meera that it's over
Matbal? Elaborate please.
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Qais ki halat dekh bas wo cuckold wala reference hi yaad aa raha hai bc kya bolu
BC har koi uska kaat raha hai
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Cut the part where Pankh say it, make Arman tease Meera a bit and give her electric shocks which will remind her the hospital incidents and when she is paralysed and ready to die, bam let her live
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Qais ki halat dekh bas wo cuckold wala reference hi yaad aa raha hai bc kya bolu
Man he is supposed to be dangerous character. Joker bana daala maine
Kuch improve karna padinga
