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[nain11ster]

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Update 88 (A & B) is posted on 537.. Must give your valuable feedback...

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[Indrajeet]

Sab se pahle to aap ko dher sari badhaeyan... SSB clear karne ke baad ek chhota sa info jaroor den...

Baki thanks for your so lovely comment... Aap aaram se udhar taiayri karen... Jab entertainment ki ikchha ho aa jayen... Aur jab bhi aaye 2 min ruk kar apna chehra dikhate jayen

Dhanyawad nain bhai ....mood fresh karne bich bich me aate rhta hu .......chalo aa hi gya hu to review bhi dedu ......sia aur vyas ki najdikiya ...ufff dimag kaha kaha le jata h past me ...khair sia aur diksha ko sak to ho hi gya h ki apne som ki life me koi aa chuki h ...ab dekhti raaj kb khulta h sadi se pahle ya sadi ke baad ....ye college wala jo scene tha realistic tha ye aaj bhi kai jagaho pe hota h ...bs koi sia jaisi unho unki aukat dikhane wali nhi milti ....baki to apne som bhai sahab raaj pe raaj kholte ja rhe aur sia bhi km nhi arbon ki malkin h ...aur apna som ek shooting institute ka director.....kya baat h ...ye abhi ka update bhi majedar tha bichara aqsa ke hath ka thappad kha hi gya...aur vyas ko pahle se sb pata tha ...vaise laga hi tha uske hi area me koi kand ho aur use pata na ho aisa ho nhi sakta ...ab dekhte ki ye action scene kitna thrilling hoga ......dua karna nain bhai mujhe bhi real life me action karne mile ......aur ha aaj ka action scene please complete kar dena raat me sone se pahle ek baar padhna jarur aaunga .... waiting for your next update

 

[nain11ster]

Awesome fabulous update
Keep posting

Thankooo soo much Arjun ji... Waise 2-3 dino se dikhe nahi... Hain kahan

 

[Naina]

Aapne bahut sari tatha bahut lambi baten ki hai.. shukriya itne vistrit aur pyare se revoo ka... Situation ko aapne kafi pyara realise kiya hai...

Main ek chhota sa clue de deta hun... Sia ki jo achievement hai aur company ko le kar jo bhi Meera ne bataya wo jhoot bhi to ho sakta hai...

Agar iss baat par gaur karengi to payengi... Upar jab Nanda se baat hui thi ... Tab usse laga tha ki Sia abhi UK me hai... Jabki Meera business rivelary ki ghatna bata rahi thi... Ho sakta hai ki ye fanstasy creat ki gayi ho kyonki Meera ko sun'ne ke baad Neerav bhi thank God kar raha tha aur Meera se kah raha tha haan sahi kee...

Soooo kahani me bahut sare hint hai... Har anpach chij ho sakta hai ek clue liye ho isliye aise likha gaya ho...

Khair aap ne itna pyara likha tha to maine bhi iss baat ko open kar diya...

Sari baten uss sadme ke ird gird hi hain aur aap ko jaisa ki pata hai main iss kahani me suspence continue karne me viswas nahi rakhta isliye turant hi pata bhi chal gaya hoga ki wo Sadma kyun hua...

Baharhaal aap ki samiksha aur aap ki najariya dono hi pyare rahe... Lekin kuchh jyada nahi suna gayi Vyas ko.... Matha hi to thoka tha... Aise dost to karte rahte hain ... Aisa bhi kya bair ki ek pyare bhavna ko aapne chid phad kar rakh diya ..

Baharhaal atulniya tha ye comment pahle panne par added...

Thankooo sooo much ☺☺☺☺

Are wo chhodiye... are Kingfisher ke sath bahot bura ho gaya
Mumbai gaya tha par study related sabhi documents ghar bhool aaya... abhi phir se ghar ke liye laute waqt kuch logo ne lift maang liya... Kingfisher ne bhi unhe apni car mein lift de di par yahin galti kar baitha... unlogo ne kuch der baad hi lutpat suru kar diya....

 

[nain11ster]

Dhanyawad nain bhai ....mood fresh karne bich bich me aate rhta hu .......chalo aa hi gya hu to review bhi dedu ......sia aur vyas ki najdikiya ...ufff dimag kaha kaha le jata h past me ...khair sia aur diksha ko sak to ho hi gya h ki apne som ki life me koi aa chuki h ...ab dekhti raaj kb khulta h sadi se pahle ya sadi ke baad ....ye college wala jo scene tha realistic tha ye aaj bhi kai jagaho pe hota h ...bs koi sia jaisi unho unki aukat dikhane wali nhi milti ....baki to apne som bhai sahab raaj pe raaj kholte ja rhe aur sia bhi km nhi arbon ki malkin h ...aur apna som ek shooting institute ka director.....kya baat h ...ye abhi ka update bhi majedar tha bichara aqsa ke hath ka thappad kha hi gya...aur vyas ko pahle se sb pata tha ...vaise laga hi tha uske hi area me koi kand ho aur use pata na ho aisa ho nhi sakta ...ab dekhte ki ye action scene kitna thrilling hoga ......dua karna nain bhai mujhe bhi real life me action karne mile ......aur ha aaj ka action scene please complete kar dena raat me sone se pahle ek baar padhna jarur aaunga .... waiting for your next update

Main apni prathna me rakhe hun... Captain se aap shurwat karen... In case yadi non technical hai... Ab hum jis jagah hain uss jagah ke hisab se kah diya... Vises to aap ki bata sakte hain.. aur, water or land...

Mau me hi jayen ye bhi kamna karunga... Achhi jagah hai aur maza bhi khub aayega... Baki jaldi se khushkhabri sun lu taki ek party ka jugad bane

Baki thankooo so much for your cumulative review... Aap ne itne pyar se kaha baki nakayak aur nakayikiyon ne aaj aisa thenga dikhaya hai... Khair Istak ke action ka couter action aaj main complete kiye deta hun... Smile plz

 

[SHADOW KING]

Update:-62​

Kapendra Mishra ki najar pahle to bike par nahi gayi thi, lekin heavy dialoges ne Asif ye bhed khol chuka tha… "To tum Asif ho... Tumhara wo dost Riaz kidhar hai. Wo bhi kisi ladki ke sath yahan aane wala hai kya?"


"Aap log bhi yahan aane wale the. Pahle bata dete to sath chali aati. Aur ye Som ki servicing me gayi bike yahan kya kar rahi hai. Ye ladka bhi na apni ek chij sambhal kar nahi rakh sakta."…. Pichhe se Lata Mishra pahunchi Pranshu ke sath...


Kapendra:- Lata inse milo ye hai Asif aur ye Asif ki girlfriend aur beta Asif aap jis bike ko maang kar ghum rahe ho, wo mere hi bete ki hai...


Aqsa to Asif ke heavy dialoges par hi kab se tadap rahi thi usse tamacha maarne ke liye. Sidha jawab de kar nikal leta lekin nahi.. Hero ban'ne ka bhoot sawar tha. Asif bechara kabhi Aqsa ke gusse se laal chehra dekhta to kabhi samne khade in middle age logon ko jo pata na aaj grahan ban kar kahan se aa gaye...


Wahin jab Aqsa chillayi aur boundry ke darwaje se Kapendra Mishra aur Makhan Lal ko Vyas ne aate huye dekha... Teji se piller ke pichhe chhipte, Sia ko sawaliya najron se dekhte... "Kya tumhare pitaji ka bhi koi second set up hai. Makan Lal ke sath yahan pahunch gaye"…


Sia gusse me daant pisti... "Ye meri jagah hai. Aur pitaji ghar ka kaam dekhne aaye hinge. Thanks Shashtri, pahle to property aur ladki par comment ke liye aur mujhe iss situation me lane ke liye"…


Vyas upar aasman ke ko dekhte, dono hath se bhagwan ko sawaliya ishara dete... "Matlab koi dosti nahi. Poora maarne par tul gaye"…


Udhar Sia kya karegi uss se Vyas parehan, idhar Asif in logon me fasa.… "Sala ye Vyas ka baccha Sia ko le kar chhip gaya hai. Ruko abhi batata hun"… mann me khyal aur agle hi pal chillate huye.… "Vyas, Sia... Hume bula kar kahan reh gaye"…


Itni tej aawaj ki dono ke kaan me pad rahi thi... Sia, Vyas ko ghurti.… "Aur kuchh baki rah gaya hai aaj dikhane... Shashtri, abhi hum sab ke samne honge. Wahan chup hi rahna. Ek chu shabd bhi nikla na to samjh lena..."


Vyas bechara chhota sa muh banaye… "Solly"..


"Ye Huch wale PUG kutte ki tarah cute cry look ki jaroorat na hai. Shashtri tumhare facial expressions ne yadi fasaya na"..


"Bus karo kitne warning dogi... Chalo bhi ab... Tumhare maa pitaji bhi to chhod na rahe honge Asif ko. Ab bechara kya kare? Situation sambhalo abhi pahle. Jhagra baad me bhi kar sakte hain"…


Sia, Vyas ko kha jane wali najron se ghurti hui... "Piller ki aad me pichhe chalo... Kisi ko najar mat aana".. Dono pillar ke pichhe chhip kar kafi pichhe gaye, fir Sia khud ko jahir karti dur se hi hath hilati sabko pass bulane lagi... Bayen se Vyas bhi uske pass pahuncha.. aur Sia hath ka aisa ishara kar rahi thi mano ghar ke bare me samjha rahi ho…


Sabhi log unhi ke ore chal diye. Aqsa, Asif ka hath khinch kar pichhe karti…. "Dobara kisi ki maangi bike par mujhe bithaya na to samjh lena. Aur wo ladki kaun hai"…


Asif:- Sia…


Aqsa, Chaunkti hui... "Aur ye dono uske parent hai."…


Jaise hi Asif ne haan kaha, Aqsa idhar udhar dekhi aur khinch kar ek thappad laga di. Ungliyon ke nishan Asif ke gaal par chhape the. Sabhi pichhe mude... "Kuchh nahi macchar tha wahi maar raha tha"… Lata, Asif ke gaal par rakhe hath ko dekh kar hansti... "Haan machhar tha…"..


Aqsa fusfusati.… "Ek ladki ke maa pitaji ko kya khub najare dikhaye ho. Uski beti kisi ladke ke sath hai aur bina koi khyal laaye tum ne jor se chilla diya... Asif aaj ke baad apni kukurmutte si shakl dikhayi na to jis se bhi pahle nikaah ka paratav aayega uss se nikaah kar lungi. Aur halke me mat lena meri baat ko"…


Sabhi under construction makan ke niche the... Sia ab bhi Vyas ko Makan me kaun chij kahan hogi samjha rahi thi.… "Maa, Pitaji aap sab kyun aa gaye"..


Lata:- Kyun nahi aana tha kya? Ya fir yahan hum jaise logon ka aana allowed nahi hai...


Lata ki baton se gusse ki bu aa rahi thi. Sia samjh gayi ki maa ko bura lag raha hai. Sia muskurati... Aur afsos se bhada chehra bana kar Lata ke kandhe se latakti… "Main to bus yahan ka kaam jald se jald finish karwa kar aap sab ko surprise karna chahti thi, isliye nahi chahti thi makan complete hone se pahle aap aao. Aaj Sunday poora free thi to sabhi doston ko bula kar issi par baat karne wali thi.."


Lata:- Contractor kya ghar me sone ke paise le raha hai...


Kapendra:- Lata Sia ko bolne bhi dogi. Tum to darane par tuli ho. Sia maa ki baat ka jawab do...


Vyas:- Ye kya jawab degi uncle ye to bewakoof hai...


Sia Vyas ko aankh dikhati… "Chup ho jao"..


Lata:- Siaaaa…

Sia:- Maaaa..


Lata:- Sia bilkul aawaj nahi aani chahiye. Tum bolo Vyas…


Vyas:- Ye jagah Zerul Imam ne capture kar liya hai. Maine Asif ko bhi isliye bulaya taki Sia ko samjha sake...


Jaise hi Vyas ne Zurul Imam aur capture ka naam liya, Sia swaliya najron se Vyas aur Asif ko dekhne lagi. Vyas aur Asif ne aankhon ke ishare se hi jata diya ki usse yahan ke bare me sab pata hai. Issi bich Lata Mishra, Vyas ke jawab ko bhi aade hath leti...


Lata:- Uski girlfriend ke sath discuss karne ek disputed site par khade ho ... Kamal hai ye to...


Vyas:- Sunday hai, ek din to chutti ka milta hai. Ek pant 2 kaaj ho gaye, bura kya hai? Dekhiye bechare masoom ko, 4 sal se to ye ladka iske ghar ke samne chay ki dukan par chay pita tha aur Aqsa khidki par aati thi. Dono bus aise hi najron se pyar jatate the.


Kapendra:- To kya wo nukkad ki chay ki dukan par tumhare pitaji apne doston ke sath baith'te hain...


Asif roni shoorat banate.… "Kyun pichhe pade ho. Gristhi toot jayegi. Hum sach me ek dusre ko chahte hain. Abhi iske Abba haan kah de to abhi nikaah kar lun. Fir to koi samasya nahi hogi...


Lata:- Tab samasya nahi hogi lekin wo hua to nahi na. Bina shadi ke hi liye ghum rahe.


Vyas:- Aap log ka aashirwad raha to wo bhi ho hi jayega. Haan lekin aaj jo main yahan aaya tha aur Asif ko bulaya tha, uss par baat kar le. Achha hua aap sab aa gaye, warna ye Sia to ulte kaam karne wali thi.


Kapendra aur Lata, Sia ko ghurte... "Kaisa ulta kaam"…


Vyas, Asif ek dusre ko dekhne lage... Ab bol to diya lekin kahe kya… "Wo Sia 2 din me makan complete karwana chahti thi, jiske liye usse 200 majdoor ko ek sath kaam par lagana tha. Jabki kabje ke iss site par Zerul Imam khun kharabe ko bhi taiyar hai. Makhan chacha bhi ye baat jante hain.. Ab Sia ko kaun samjhaye… kahti hai 1,2 din me kaam khatm kar ke jaldi se grih prawes kar lenge..."


Asif:- Yahan ka jab kaam shuru hua tab aap sab me se koi Lucknow me nahi tha. Sia se puchho construction ka theka lene wala pahla thekedar kyun kaam chhoda?


Sia:- Wo Zerul Imam ka us par kafi dawab tha, lekin fir bhi wo kaam karta raha. Anth jab baat uski family par aa gayi fir usne kaam chhod diya..


Asif:- Tumhe to bus itna hi pata hai, poori sachai main batata hun. Aur haan hum ladke tumhare iss site se dur rahe iski ek warning Makhan chacha bhi hume bade pyar se de kar gaye the..


Vyas:- Asif rahne de... Inhe kuchh nahi pata...


Asif chillate huye.… "Nahi pata to pata hona chahiye. Sia ko pata hona chahiye... Unke gardian ko pata hona chahiye ki jitna wo iss jagah ke bare me nahi jante uss se kahin jyada hum jante hai..."

"Iska pahla contractor humare mohalle ka hi tha. Thik mere ghar ke samne unka makan hai... Nurul hassan... Uss bechare ko 2 carore ka ghata hua iss site se hua... Lekin juban ke khatir wo nuksan karwa kar bhi yahan kaam karwata raha. Takriban 300 ladke hum hafte 10 din me yahan aa kar khade hote the tab Zerul ke aadmi ne fatkna band kiya tha..."

"Lekin bechare ki bacchi ka accident me poora ek paun chala gaya. Uske baad Zerul Imam ka call aaya tha ki site ka kaam nahi chhoda to abhi uske 2 bacche aur hain. Kaam ke bich jab parivar aa gaya tab hum sab bhi haar gaye."

"Nange log hain sir, aur humari apni ek limit. Hum sabhi padhne likhne wale aur rojgar wale log hain. Bahut jyada se jyada unka sar phod sakte hain. Fir ye hai ki wo saaf kahte hain tumhara matter nahi hai to bich me kyun kud rahe. Tumhare gharon par to najar nahi dali na. 8 sal ki badi pyari bacchi hai, ab chal nahi sakti..."


Chatakkk, thappad ki ek kadada awaj … Lata Mishra khinch kar Sia ko ek thappad maarti... "Lafda koi kar raha hai ye suchna hume kyun nahi? Ek bacchi ka paun chala gaya tumhari chuppi ke karan, lauta sakti ho uske paun kya?"


Sia:- Maa mujhe itni baaten nahi pata thi... Mujhe nahi bataya gaya. Bus itna pata tha ki koi local gundey hain aur Hassan ji kahte the koi issue nahi hai bus gundon ki wajah se kaam me thoda delay ho raha hai...


Sia apni baat kah bhi rahi thi aur Som ko ek emergency msg dalne ke baad uss se connect bhi ho chuki thi...


Kapendra:- Bahut galat ho gaya idhar. Mujhe abhi Zerul Imam yahan chahiye... Abhi matlab abhi... Lata Kripa Shankar ko phone lagao aur kaho apne sath uss Zerul Imam ko baandh kar laye...


Sia:- Pitaji shant ho jao... Som aa raha hai. Maa kisi ko call mat lagao...


Lata:- Nahi lagati... Lekin badle me Zerul Imam ka paun chahiye. Hoga ki nahi hoga. Mere kaleje me aag lagi hai..


Sia, Harbara kar Lata ke paas pahunchti... "Hoga, sab hoga. Yahin aap ke aankho ke samne hoga...


Kapendra:- Naah itne se mera kaleja shant nahi hoga. Sia tum jao yahan se... Aaj iss Imam ke jamin capture ka bhoot utarta hun...


Sia, Chillati hui... "Dono ko boli na shant ho jao. Kha-m-kha bp badha rahe ho. Som ko emergency msg bheja hai. Wo pahunch raha hoga. Vyas tum in sab ko le kar niklo..


Vyas:- Bus kya Sia, naam ke dost kya? Rahenge hum bhi... Kyon Asif... Haan Aqsa ko bhej de...


Aqsa:- Sare dost jamin ke matter me jama huye the na... Jo hoga dekhenge...


Sia:- Hmmm !!! Jaise Tumhari marji lekin apna khyal rakhna...


Makhan Lal:- Bhaiji, yahan logon ki jaroorat hogi... Main unhe le kar aata hun..


Kapenda:- Haan aur tujh jaise dogle neta ki yahan jaroorat na hai... Nikal le chup chap kahin tera naam aaya isme to tu bhi jayega… chal bhag..


Vyas:- Abe ye hai kaun… Makhan Lal ko uske muh par...


Asif:- Wo chhod gate par dekh… ye to poori tarah se taiyar ho kar aaye hain...


Vyas:- Sia sab ko le kar ek kinare ho jao... Main baat karta hun...


Samne se Zerul Imam ka beta takriban 8-10 bandook dhari aur 30-35 lathait ke sath ghusa. Jaise hi wo boundry ke ander ghusa, Sniper, Som se..


"Boss tumhare family wale yahan panchayat karte rah gaye aur wo log aa gaye. 2 nali ke sath hai"…


Som:- 2 nali hai na, unhe najdik pahunchne do, moving target mat lena. 1 fit ki duri se 2 nali se target nahi kar sakte. Hum dur se unka rasta kate to ho sakta hai wo cover le aur apne logon par firing shuru kar de... Jaise hi wo settle ho aur sab ki najar meri family par, bina soche sab ko gira do"…


"Aap kahan ho boss"…


Som:- Najar utha kar dekho.. aur dhyan udhar lagao"….


Idhar Istak kafi teji ke sath unke karib pahunch kar sabko ghurte... "Yahan ka har neta humari baat maanega. Kya re nawa doctors, padhne ke badle yahan kya kar raha hai. Kahin jamin bachane ke badle iski beti ko to nahi maang liya"..


Kapendra Mishra poore aawesh me aa kar ek jhannatedar thappad Istak ke gaal par chipka diye.… Apne logon ke jod par ahankar me chur, Istak, ne thappad ke jawab me, Kapendra Mishra ka collor pakad kar dhakka de diya.

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nice update ..jaisa laga tha lata ji bhi aa gayi ..kapendr ji ne asif ke baare me bata diya ki apni gf ke saath aaya hai aur asif ne khudko fansa dekhkar sia aur vyas ko bhi awaj laga di ..
bechari sia ka to waqt hi bura nikal gaya aaj ..
aur asif ke gaal ka machchar bhi uda diya aqsa ne .

vyas aur asif ne love matter se nikalne ke liye us jameen ki saari sachchai bata di sabko .
kaise zerul imam ne thekedar ko dhamkaya aur uski beti ka accident karwaya ,,aur ye sab sunkar lata ji ne sia ko thappad maar diya .
lata ji aur kapendr ji kafi gusse me hai aur wo zerul imam ko sabak sikhane ki baat kar rahe the tabhi waha istak aa gaya apne gundo ke saath .
kapendr ji ke thappad ke jawab me usne collar pakad liya hai ab iska natija usko kaise bhugatna padega dekhte hai ..

 

[Arjun Sharma]

Bhai ab vyas ka bhi thoda jalwa dikhao
Aakhir uske sasur ka collar pakda hai

Waiting for action ..

 

[nain11ster]

Bhai ab vyas ka bhi thoda jalwa dikhao
Aakhir uske sasur ka collar pakda hai

Waiting for action ..

Vyas ka action ek seperate chepter hoga... Aise mixed action me maza khatm ho jayega... Uska bhi poora intzam hua hai... Filhaal chal rahe mahol ka action lijiye ... Yahan to bhai bahan hi chhaye rahenge

 

[nain11ster]

nice update ..jaisa laga tha lata ji bhi aa gayi ..kapendr ji ne asif ke baare me bata diya ki apni gf ke saath aaya hai aur asif ne khudko fansa dekhkar sia aur vyas ko bhi awaj laga di ..
bechari sia ka to waqt hi bura nikal gaya aaj ..
aur asif ke gaal ka machchar bhi uda diya aqsa ne .

vyas aur asif ne love matter se nikalne ke liye us jameen ki saari sachchai bata di sabko .
kaise zerul imam ne thekedar ko dhamkaya aur uski beti ka accident karwaya ,,aur ye sab sunkar lata ji ne sia ko thappad maar diya .
lata ji aur kapendr ji kafi gusse me hai aur wo zerul imam ko sabak sikhane ki baat kar rahe the tabhi waha istak aa gaya apne gundo ke saath .
kapendr ji ke thappad ke jawab me usne collar pakad liya hai ab iska natija usko kaise bhugatna padega dekhte hai ..

Uska natija kaisa hoga... Aag lagegi bawandar uthega aur ek beti ka action aap ke aankhon ke samne hoga... Bahut jyada der na karte main 10.30 baje tak ek aur update ka soch raha hun jo aaj ke din ka final hoga...

 

[nain11ster]

Awesome update bhai

Thankoooo sooo much

 

[nain11ster]

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Thankooo sooo much king bhai