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[nain11ster]

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Update 88 (A & B) is posted on 537.. Must give your valuable feedback...

End Of The Chepter:-1 is posted on 542...

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[mashish]

bda hi khatarnak laddu h ye to

lagta hai abi tak aapne nahi khaya

 

[Naina]

are to phir wait kiska kr rhe ho
lagao inhe kaam pr

Fikar nat... online aate hi lag jaayenge kaam par

 

[ragish7357]

lagta hai abi tak aapne nahi khaya

naah abhi to iss laddu se bhut door h apun
itni jldi esa khatarnak laddu pachega nhi

 

[mashish]

naah abhi to iss laddu se bhut door h apun
itni jldi esa khatarnak laddu pachega nhi

to aap bin laddu khaye hi pachtao tab tak

 

[11 ster fan]

Ab to 11 ster fan sir ji ya phir Xabhi sahab ya SANJU ( V. R. ) sahab hi la sakte hai yaha
Btw khas Kar 11 ster fan ki baat jarur maanege.. after all no 1 fan jo thehre

Bahut dino baad Gaye hai nain sir chhutti par...Jane do abhi 1 month aur chhutti katane do...aur shadi ho gayi hai to udhar bhi thoda romance hone do Naina mam , aakhir itne achchhe romantic story likhate hai , aur bhabhi ko apna romance na dikha paye to phir... beijjti ho Jani hai unki....

 

[11 ster fan]

to aap bin laddu khaye hi pachtao tab tak

Hajama kharab ho jayega regish ka agar abhi kha liya to...

 

[11 ster fan]

Fikar nat... online aate hi lag jaayenge kaam par

Lagata hai kuchh karna parega...

 

[Xabhi]

Lagata hai kuchh karna parega...

Kuchh nhi Bahut kuchh karna padega Tabhi update aayenge

 

[mashish]

Hajama kharab ho jayega regish ka agar abhi kha liya to...

ha ha ha tabhi to kha ki bin khaye pachtao

 

[Tiger 786]

Update:-1 ​

Aadhi raat ka waqt tha. Tej bijli ki gargarahat charo ore se sunai de rahi thi. Ek to amavasya ki raat upar se aasman me kale badal chhaye huye the. Bilkul kaali ghanghore andheri raat.


Ek kataar me khadi kayi street lamp post ki bulbs me se koi bulb raushni de rahi thi tou kayi bulb kharab pade the. Sadak par aati hui raushni kuchh jyada hi ajib dikh rahi thi. Charo ore ki sadken khali aur bilkul sunsaan sa mahol bana hua tha...


Ghanghore kaali raat ke iss prahar me teen dost sadak ke kinare, kataar lagaye halka ho rahe the.


"Tujhe kya lagta hai, kaam ho jayega Vyas"

"Shastri se hi puchh raha hai... Wo jabtak sure na hota, itna bada risk nahi leta"…


Teeno paint ki zip band kar ke jaise hi 2 kadam sadak ke ore badhe. Ek car unke pass aa'kar ruki. Car jaise hi ruki teeno hi 2 kadam pichhe huye. Ek dusre se najar milate, bilkul khamosh khade the.


Dur se street light ki dhimi raushni aa rahi thi. Uss jagah par halka andhrea tha aur bundabandi shuru thi. Khattt ki dhimi awaj aayi aur car ka darvaja khol kar ek ladki bahar aayi…. Car se jaise hi ek ladki ko utarte dekhe, 3 me se 2 ladkon ki aankhon me chamak saaf dekhi ja sakti thi....


Dono utsukta ke sath ek kadam aage aaye. Ek najar upar se niche uss ladki ko dekhe. Andheri raat me aati halki raushni me bhi uska chehra unhe kisi bulb ki tarah chamkta najar aa raha tha. Un dono ke chehre ki bhavna badli si najar aa rahi thi…..


"Aalambag road".. Ladki ne kuchh puchha aur pucchne ke baad dono ke ore khamoshi se dekhne lagi. Barshat ki iss kaali raat me wah ladki bilkul ghabrayi si nahi dikh rahi thi. Haan bus in dono ladkon ki khamoshi usse chidha rahi thi... Chidh'kar wo ek baar aur puchhi.… "Aalambag bus stand"..


Pichhe khada teesra ladka aage aaya.. hath ke ishare se... "Aage se left"


Ladki usse ek najar dekhi aur thanks kah'kar car ka darwaza jaise kholne lagi... "Suno itni raat ko kisi se pata puchhne se achha hai Google map dekh lo"…


Ladki car ka darwaza kholti hui ruki, pichhe palti... Jaise hi wo palti, jordar bijli kadki. Us ladka aur ladki ki najren ek pal ke liye uljhi aur...

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Wo uski pahli jhalak aur wo ladka apne sine ke bayen hisse me hath rakh kar, achanak se badhi dhadkano ko kabu karne ki kosis kar raha tha. Chamakti bijli kab ki ek chhan ko chamak kar poorn andhera kar gayi lekin uss ladke ki aankhon me ab bhi chamak thi. Yun to wapas se andhera chha chuka tha, lekin uske palatne par jab bijli chamki aur uska chehra samne aaye... Lovely, cute, hot, adorable girl ki ultra HD wallpaper ladke ke dimag me download ho gayi, jo aankhon ke home screen par jaa kar save ho gayi thi.


Wah ladki palti thi kuchh javab dene lekin uss ladke ki haalat dekh kar wo bina kuch kahe wahan se nikal gayi... Car ja chuki thi, lekin wo ladka ab bhi apne sine par hath rakhe, wahin khada tha...


"Shastri beta tu to gaya. Waise sach kahun kamal ki ladki thi. Poore lucknow ke Nawabon ke ghar me dundh le fir bhi aisa kohinoor Hira nahi milegi. Main to soch liya hun, yahi tum dono ki bhabhi hogi"… Pahle aage aaye 2 me se pahla dilfek ladke ne bola.


"Madarchod, pahle kaam par dhya de harami. Tu duniya bhar ki ladkiyon ko humari bhabhi hi banana aur hum muth marte rahenge"… Uske sathi dusre ladke ne apne dilfek dost ko harkaya.


"Sala jalata hai harami. Waise bhi Navab Riaz Abdullah Khan ki kam se kam 8 Begum to hongi hi"… Pahle Dilfek dost ne kaha..


"Baap ko 10 hazar na dega to puncher ki dukan pe tujhse puncture lagwayega... Madarchod khud ko nawab kahta hai".. Wapas se dusre dost ne usse sacchai se avgat karvaya.


"Asif, Riaz, dono kya kar rahe ho? Chalo chalte hain"… Maun khada ladka apni chuppi todte huye kahne laga..


Teen pakke yaar, Pandit Vyas Prasad Shastri, Asif Zafar Shiekh aur Riaz Abdullah Khan. Yun to in teeno ke hi apni-apni alag duniya hai, aur alag-alag bada sa mitr mandli, lekin cricket khelte-khelte teeno khasam khas ho gaye aur ab teeno hi apne career banane me lage the...


Middle class jindgi ne jaise teeno ko jhulsaya tha aur teeno hi lagbhag haalaat ke maare the. Kuchh dur baat karte huye paidal chalne ke baad teeno ek ghar ke pass ruke. Riaz ne ghar ki bell bajayi. Aadhi raat se upar ka waqt tha shayad sab so rahe the. 10 minute me 5-6 baar ghanti bajane ke baad ek aurat jamhai leti hui darvaja kholi aur samne teen ladkon ko dekh'kar pahle to ghuri fir chidhte huye bell bajane ka karan puchne lagi.


Asif:- Khala, khaalu hai kya?


Wah aurat Asif ko kaccha chaba jane wali najron se ghurne lagi. Vyas usse picche karte... "Noor Mirza ko kahiye Vyas aaya hai. Sath me ye bhi kahiyega, kisi ko samay diye ho to samay ka khyal rakhe"


Karib 2 minute baad jamhai lete huye ek adher umr ka aadmi darwaje tak aaya aur teeno ko ander aa'kar baithne kaha. Mirja sahab apne panvatti se ek paan ka patta nikal kar uspar chuna aur kattha lagate huye... "Maaf karna dhyan hi nahi raha ki tumhe waqt diya hai. Tumhare walid kaise hain"


Vyas:- Raat ke waqt hum yahan punchayat nahi karne aaye hain Mirja sahab. Na to aap mere pitaji ko jante hain aur na hi humara koi gharelu sampark. Kaam ki baat kar len...


Noor:- Dekho bina paise ke kaam to hone se raha. Ek ke 1 carore 10 lakh rupye lagenge. Wo bhi kewal tum teeno ke marks ke wajah se itne kam me seat offer kar raha hun, warna ek seat ke 2 carore tak mil rahe hain.


Asif:- Tum log yadi paise le'kar admission ka dhandha nahi karte to humara kabka medical me admission ho gaya rahta. Thuuu hai tum jaise logon par.


Noor:- To baithe kyon ho jao.. Shauk se jao aur aandolan karo. Bhrastachar mitao aur admission lo...


Vyas, Asif ko hath dikhate... "Asif, khamosh rah. Noor Mirza hum paise laye hain"


Noor:- Lao do paise...


Vyas ne ishara kiya, Riaz apne hath ki badi troli ko ludka diya. Noor uss troli ko pakda aur lita kar usse khola.... "Kitne hain"


Vyas:- Kitne maange the...


Noor:- Ye to kamal ho gaya, tum chindi logon ke pass 3 carore 30 lakh kahan se aa gaye...


Noor Mirja ne jaise hi apne muh ka shutter khola waise hi Vyas ne chaku ki nok itna tej uski gardan par rakha ki gardan se khun nikalne laga. Noor Mirja ki chinkh nikal gayi. Vyas usse shant rahne ka ishara kiya, lekin tab tak ander ke kamron ki light jal gayi. Darwaje se lage 15 by 12 fit ke hall me uske 3 bete aur 2 betiyan "kya hua abbu" kahte pahunche.


Hall ka najara dekh kar Noor ke bacche kuchh jawabi pratikriya dete uss se pahle hi Asif aur Riaz samne se desi katta tan diya….


Noor:- Tum teeno pagal ho kya? Ye mera ghar hai... Tum jante bhi ho iska anjaam..


Vyas:- Pahal tumne ki thi Noor. Humari koi galti nahi...


Vayas ne apni chaku hatayi. Wo dono bhi apna gun hataye. Noor ne apne bacchon ko wapas apne kamre me bhejne ke baad…. "Tum kya yahan taiyari ke sath aaye ho"


Asif:- Chacha kaam ki baat karo bus... Faltu ki baton me mahol kharab ho sakta hai. Humne puchha tha kya medical ki seat ki fees jahan 80 lakh hai, tum 1 carore 10 lakh kyon maang rahe… Waise hi tumhe bhi paise ke bare me nahi puchhna chahiye tha..


Noor:- Hmmmm !! Galti ho gayi..


Vyas:- Sun lo Noor… iss paise ke bare me hum char logon ko pata hai. Kisi panchve tak khabar pahunchi to jaise iss paise ke bare me 4 logon ko pata hai, thik waise hi tumhare gayab hone ki khabar sirf 3 logon ko pata hogi.. Chal ab jaldi kaam kar.


Kaam hote-hote subah ke 4 baj gaye the. Aankhen jab khuli to ek ladki aawaz de rahi thi. Ek ladki tray me chay liye teeno ko jagaa rahi thi.


Aisf aur Vyas ne chup chap cup utha liya, wahin Riaz ki ghoorti najar uss ladki par thehar gayi. Ladki thodi uncomfortable mehsus karne lagi. Gusse me tray wahin pass ke table par rakhne ke liye jaise hi jhuki, apne chhati ke ore ghurti najron ko dekh kar, 2-4 galiyan bad'badati hui nikal gayi...


Vyas ek thappd khinch kar diya. Shayad thappad ki gunj dusre kamre tak bhi sunai de raha ho. Hasne ki awaj aa rahi thi.… "Kisi ke ghar jao to salikhe se raha kar."


Riaz, apne gal par hath ferte... "Ab main to salikhe se hi tha, bc kutti najar galti se par gayi. Usse bhi to samjhna."..


Asif:- Bc aankh ki galti ko aankh nikal kar samjha dun. Mc kisi ke ghar me dobara aisi harkat ki na to... Vyas, Noor ko awaj laga kahan hai, kaam hua ki nahi...


Teeno baat kar hi rahe the, ussi waqt Noor bhi hall me pahuncha aur Vyas ke hath me 80 lakh ke 3 check dete huye.… "Admission ho gaya hai. Loan ke liye apply kar do bank me. College account me paise jama hote hi cash le jana. Security ke apne check rakho"…


Vyas:- Abhi jo ladki chay le'kar aayi thi, wo kaun thi...


Noor:- Meri chhoti beti, Zoya. Abhi 12th kar rahi hai..


Vyas:- Humare ladke ko ladki kabool hai. Tumhe ladka pasand ho to bolo..


"Bhag Bsdk"… Noor ke muh se pahli pratikriya nikli. Fir Noor apni badi najron se Vyas ko ghurne laga. Usse ghurte dekh Asif uske aankhon ke aage chutki bajate.… "Neet ke exam me kabhi 2 to kabhi 1 marks se rah gaya tha apna Riaz. Padha likha aur poora khandani ladka hai. Kam se kam tumhare khandan me kisi se bhi jyada talented hoga"…


Noor:- Dekho netaji ka phone aaya tha isliye chup hai warna... Raat ko dikha tha teeno ka talent. Chay khatm karo aur niklo yahan se...


Asif:- Hum sarif to hain Noor Mirza, lekin itne nahi ki koi hume chutiya bana'kar chala jaye... Hum shanti se jine wale wo launde hai jiski shanti bhang karne par utne hi ashant ho jate hai... Tum na samjhoge... Bhej dena nikaah kar ke kisi NRI ke sath... Khuda hafij... Chhod uske ghar ki bakwas chay ko, chal..


Vyas aur Riaz dono chay ke cup wahan rakh'kar hanste huye nikal gaya. Noor Mirja teeno ka chehra dekhte hi rah gaya.


Raat ke uss andhere me jo car inse pata puchh'kar aage badhi thi wo bataye raste par chalti hui ek road side bus stop par ruki. Wahan pahle se ek car khadi thi aur bus stop par ek admi uska intzar kar raha tha.


Wah ladki car se utar kar uske pass phunchi, aur apna hath aage badhati... "Hello Nirbhay ji"…


Wah aadmi Nirbhay, ek baar uss ladki ko ghurte huye dekha. Apna hath aage badha kar hath milate... "Hello Sia"


Sia:- Kya hua Nirbhay ji, aap ke chehre se lag raha hai mujhe dekh kar thode wired feel kar rahe ho...


Nirbhay:- Culture badal raha hai suna tha, itna badal jayega aaj dekh raha hun. Ajib to lagega na.


Sia:- Chalen kya??... Ab to apne desh laut aayi hun, culture bhi sikh jaungi, dhire-dhire...


Nirbhay apne driver ko car lane kaha aur khud Sia ke sath baith kar nikala. Dono kuchh dur aage badhe the...


"So Nirbhay ji, mere aane se aap ko padesani to nahi hogi. Yadi aisa ho to bata dena main arrangements dekh lungi"…


"Tum mujhe chacha, kaka, bade bhai kuch bhi kah sakti ho. Bahut sernior hun. Aise naam se pukara jana ajib lag raha hai"…


Ek chhote se vartalaap ke baad bilkul khamosi pasar gayi. Car duplex bunglow ke darwaje se ander ghusi. Charo ore halki raushni thi. Sia ek najar wahan ke charo ore ka lee. Lambi chaudi boundry thi. Boundary ke dono kinare se 3-4 cottage bane huye the aur bich me double storey building thi.

Wow superb update.intro hi dhmakedaar diya hero ka