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Asif aur Riaz ko jahan Meera ka ek handsome aur utna hi raehish boyfriend dikha wahin chidha hua Vyas aur bhi jyada ander se gussa ho gaya. Anterman me bus ek hi khyal aaya…. "Main kaise bhul gaya Meera apne guru ki hi cheli hai"…..


Meera aur wo ladka point of attraction bane huye the. Ek to ladka hi-fi look me upar se 1 fit pichhe 5 bodyguard usse ghere aur sath me Meera uske hath tham kar chal rahi thi... Campus se bahar darwaje tak niklane ke kram me Meera aur wo ladka aakarshan ka kendr bane huye the.


Meera poora rera bikher rahi thi. Yun to yahan bahut se karodpati ke bacche padhte the, lekin show off ka aisa najara pesh kiya ja raha tha ki sabhi mud kar dekhne ko vivash the.


Meera campus ke darvaje ke bahar aayi. 3 kaali gadiyan wahan se ek sath nikli. Jaise hi kuch dur gadi aage badhi.… "Sorry maim, wo boss ne bola isliye thoda close ho kar khada ho gaya"…


Meera:- Boss yani mere superstar saiyyan na...


Ladka:- Haan aap ke superstar saiyyan.


Meera:- Aapka naam kya hua sir... Aur thodi pahchan bhi bataeye...


Ladka:- Maim mera naam Gautam Kumar hai. Asian games me national shooting team ka captain hun aur sena me bhi cpatain hun.


Meera:- Mil kar achha laga captain sir. Lekin kya aap mujhe bhabhi bulayenge. Mujhe aisa lagega jaise apno ke bich hun..


Gautam:- Maim bura na maane to...


Meera:- Main abhi se hi bura maan gayi...


Gautam hanste huye... "Sorry bhabhi, bura na mane to ek baat puchhun"..


Meera:- Puchhiye dever ji poore haq se Puchhiye ..


Gautam:- Bhabhi aap ko Boss ne propose kiya ya aapne…


Meera:- Dever ji aap ke sawal bahut kuch ishara kar rahe hain. Apake boss dilfek to nahi...


Gautam:- Nahi kuch jyada hi shakt hain. Kayi trainee ladkiyan unpar dil bichhaye hai, lekin boss sab ko aise ghurte hain ki kisi kee himmat hi nahi hoti kuchh kahne ki..


Meera:- Iss baat se dilfek nahi hai wo kaise sabit hota hai… Kahin tumhare boss sab ke samne shakt hone ki acting karte ho...


Gautam:- Yadi aisi baat hui, fir to aapko jyada mehnat ki jaroorat hogi bhabhi, kyonki un par marne wali ki koi kami nahi hai... Yadi parde ke pichhe koi kahani chal rahi hai to uska mujhe pata nahi...


Meera:- Bahut napi tuli baten karte hain devar ji. Kya har waqt formal rahna jaroori hai?


Gautam:- Bhabhi hum Army wale casual bhi formal tarike se hi rahte hain. Abhi main casual baten hi kar raha hun... Meri manjil aa gayi... Aage mod se aap ke sath aap ke superstar saiyyan honge.. Ho sake to unhe thoda casual bana dijiye...


Meera:- Chahte to hum bahut kuch hain captain sir. Kuch chahten adhuri hi poori hoti hai to kuch chahten mahaj chahat ban kar rah jati hai... Kya samjhe...


Gautam:- Yahi ki aap ko medical classes nahi philosophy ki class join karni chahiye... Aap achhi philosopher ban sakti hai. By the way aap se mil kar achha laga bhabhi. Lijiye boss bhi aa gaye...


Car sadak ke ek kinare ruki. Car poori tarah khali. Som driving seat sambhala aur Meera bhi pichhli seat se utar kar aage ki seat par baith gayi.… "Looking gorgeous Meera".


"Love you Saiyyan"…

"Hmmmm …. Mujhe thoda waqt lagega feeling ko uss ore le jane me aur tumahre love you ka jawab dene me Sajni"

"Hmmmmm"….


Chhoti si baat-chit ke baad dono khamosh ho kar samne dekhne lage. Som baar-baar tirchhi nigahon se Meera ko dekh raha tha. Meera ka khamosh muskurata chehra dil me utar raha tha. Som ka mann bilkul prafullit aur kahin na kahin khyal dil me gudguda raha tha... "Meri hone wali pyari jivan sangani"…


Haan ye khyal pyara tha. Dil me ajib si khushi thi aur shayad issi wajah se gambhir sa dikhne wala Som, aaj smiley face banaye ghum raha tha. Lucknow
Airport ke parking me car lagi, aur dono car ke bahar aaye.…


Som ek jhalak upar se niche Meera ko dekha.… "Meera, kahan khoyi ho"…


Meera, pyari si muskaan apne chehre par laati... "Kuch nahi Som sir. Shayad hum Delhi jane ke liye airport par aaye hain"..


Som:- Haan tum sahi soch rahi ho...


Meera:- Som sir main aapko chahti hun. Ye meri chahat hai. Lekin chahat itni bhi baiman nahi ki aap ko jabardasti paaun. Rahne dete hain...


Som aaschrya se Meera ka chehra dekhte... "Lekin Meera"…


Meera:- Koi baat nahi hai sir... Apni chahat haq se batana mera haq tha. Lekin aap ko jabardasti shadi ke liye raji karna galat hai...


Som, thik Meera ke samne khada ho kar apni baanh failaye…. "Pata nahi kyun apni hone wali biwi ko ek baar tightly hug karne ki ikchha si ho gayi hai. Thoda waqt lagega mujhe apni Meera ke rang me rangne mein. Lekin haan jaisa bhi rahun rahunga kewal tumhara hi"…


Iss baar chauankne ki bari Meera ki thi. Wah aaschrya se Som ko dekhti.… "Kya???"


Som, shayad kisi ladki ko dekh kar pahli baar itne pyar se muskura raha tha. Meera ko utne hi hasrat bhari najron se dekhte.… "Aa bhi jao.… iss se jyada romantic nahi ho sakta main"..


Som ki baat sunkar Meera ke murjhaye chehre par achanak se hansi phoot gayi. Wah poori tarah se Som ki bahon me simat kar apni aankhen mundti.… "Som sir, dil dukhta tha jab ye ehsas hota hai ki aap mujhe nahi chahte. Ajib khinchi si rahti par kisi ko bol nahi paati. Upar se shadi ke liye aapke sath jabardasti kar rahi thi. Yah ehsas ander se guilt feel karwata tha"…


Som, Meera ko baajuon me samet kar uske mathe ko chumte.… "Purusom Malhotra ko poorn karti hai ek nirbhik kshtriya Meera ki ye komal bhavna. Rahi baat jabardasti ki to duniya me swarth chalta hai Meera. Kisi ki baat maan kar kiya gaya kaam ya to hum uske pyar ki wajah se karte hain, ya fir apne niji fayde ki vajah se. Dono hi shoorton me jabardasti hoti nahi, kewal hum khud ko safe karne ke liye jabardasti shabd ka istamal kar dete hai"…


Meera:- Chalo Som sir... Apni philosophy to mujhe umr bhar sunate hi rahenge pahle chal kar shadi kar le...


Som, Meera ki baat par khul kar hanste sochne laga... "Meera ka to mood aur facial expressions kitni jaldi swing karta hai. Ek pal me gambhir aur agle hi pal utni hi natkhat. Iski adaa janlewa hai..."


Som khyalon me hi Meera ka kayal hota ja raha tha. Aur idhar Meera apni baton ka koi jawab na sun kar... "Khud se aise chipkaye hain jaise pahle kabhi ye feel na liya. Mr Purusom Malhotra feel baad me le lena, abhi chaliye bhi... Flight udan bhar di to shadi cancel ho jayegi"…


Som, Meera ko khud se alag karte.… "Kya boli tum?"…


Meera khilkhila kar hansti.… "Yahi ki feel baad me lena"…


Som, ghurkar dekhte... "Aan haan feel... Tumse gale lag kar feel le raha... Khair apni patni ke sath feel le liye to kaun si big deal ho gayi, lekin sawal ye hai ki uss se pahle kya boli?"…


Meera:- Thik se nahi sune to fir se kahe deti hun... Na jane kitni ladkiyon ke sath aise chipkane ka feel liye honge… Anubavi husband...


Som:- Areeee hadd hai... Ye kya bakwas kar rahi ho. Tumhare dimag me chal kya raha hai?


Meera:- Had hai... Mazak kar rahi hun buddhu... Kahin aisa to nahi ki apne gusse ke pichhe apni kartut chhipa rahe...


Som:- Offf oooo !!! Ye kya sab bakwas karne lag gayi... Abhi kaun se kartut ki baat humare bich ho rahi thi...


Meera, Som ke hanth khinchti... "Chaliye chup chap... Ye sab discussion hum kal karenge. Aaj shadi karte hai."


"Ye poora pagal hai"…. Meera ki baat par Som hanste huye socha aur uske sath airport nikal gaya.


Meera, Som ka baju tham kar uske sath kadam badhati.… "Main pahle bata deti hun Som sir, lover aur patni me bahut anter hota hai. Fir mujhe kabhi tane mat dena ki tum pahle aise thi ab aisi ho."


Som, hanste huye.… "Tum mujhe dara rahi ho kya?"..


Meera:- Nahi apni baat saaf kar rahi hun. Aap mere har sawal ka jawab dene ke liye badhya honge aur chhod kar bhagne ka to sochna mat, jaise pahle bhagte firte the...


Som:- Aur kuchh sajni... Ya itna hi commitment chahiye... .


Meera:- Haan aur bhi hai na... Mujhe aap jaise 2 bacche chahiye. Kosis karenge to 2 sal me ye ho jayega... Family planning uske baad sochenge...


Som, hanste huye chehra ghuma kar ek baar Meera ko dekha.… "Achha 2 sal me 2 bacche... Wo bhi secret shadi se. Jarra batayengi madam ye kaise hoga"…


Meera:- Ohhh haann jaan... Main bhul gayi thi hum chori ki shadi kar rahe... Kamal hai na... Logon ke chori ki love story hoti hai.. lekin humare bich love story ka to pata nahi lekin chori ki shadi ho rahi.


Som, Meera ka gaal khinchte.… "Chori aur orignal shadi ke bich hum ek love story creat karenge na... Tum upset kyun hoti ho sajni"..


Meera jhatke se apni paun unchi karti Som ke gaal chumti.… "Wowwww !!! What an idea sir ji"…


Som:- Meera kuch to khyal karo hum airport par hain...


Meera:- Oopsss !!! Sorry.….


Dono subah ke 9 baje Delhi pahunch chuke the. Som ne Meera ka chehra cover karwaya aur Delhi me apne dad ke sarkari aawas pahunch gaya… Kafi bada sarkari aawas tha jiske darwaje par kayi prashikshit surakshakarmi pahra de rahe the. Som ko dekhte hi uss kade suraksha wale aawas ka darwaja khol diya gaya. Som, Meera ko le'kar ander dakhil hua...


Meera, Som ke hath ko khinch kar usse rokti…. "Shadi se pahle hi, Ye kiske bunglow me le aaye"…


Som:- Matlab...


Meera:- Matlab shadi se pahle hi suhagraat ki planning... Pahle shadi to ho jane dijiye...


Som, Meera ke sar ko thokte…. "Pagal.. Dad ka sarkari aawas hai. Kya sab soch leti ho"…


Meera:- Nahi ji wo baat nahi... Wo maine suna tha ki shadi ko lekar ladke kuchh jyada hi utsahit ho jate hain... Isliye yahan ka mahol dekh kar mera kaleja dharkne laga...


Som apna hath bunglow ke ore dikhate… "Ab chalen… ya yahin khadi rahogi taki dad ke sare staff hume ghurte rahe"..


Meera teji se kadam bunglow ke ore badhati... "Chaliye chaliye jaldi ander chaliye"..


Meera lagbhag daur hi padi. Som uski harbarahat par hanste huye sochne laga... "Kitni pyari hai ye. Haan lekin ab tak ruki kyun nahi. Sidha chali hi ja rahi hai"…


Khayalat hasane wale the aur Som, Meera ki baton par hansta hua aage badha. Meera bunglow ke mukhya dwar ke pass pahunchi hi thi ki uske kadam achanak se ruk gaye. Apne aas-pass wo Som ko dekhne lagi. Fir pichhe mudti… "Areee aap wahin hai abhi tak"…


Som, hanste huye uske pass pahuncha. Meera usse hanste dekh, ghurti najron se... "Aise hans kyun rahe hain ji"..


Som:- Nahi bus yun hi... Kya hua ander kyon nahi ja rahi...


Meera, apne sar par hath rakhti.… "Oh no... Aap ki hansi me to main bhul hi gayi... Ander to aapke dad honge aur hum secret shadi karne wale hain. Fir aap mujhe yahan kyun le kar aaye"…


Som:- Ohhh khyal aa gaya tumhe in baton ka. Mujhe to laga ki aaj poore din tumahre dimag me suhaagraat hi chhaya rahega...


Meera, Som ko ghurti.… "Tane dena band karo Som sir. Sorry.… Ab nahi sochungi uss bare me... Lekin yahan le kar aane ka to bata dijiye…"


Som:- Dad abhi yahan nahi hain... Tumne to sab ko bata diya ki tumhara ek boyfriend hai. Main bhi jarra sab ko bata dun ki ek girlfriend meri bhi hai..


Som ki baat sun kar Meera chahki lekin turant hi Som harkat me aate.… "Nahi... Jo bhi tum soch rahi ho wo bilkul bhi mat karna"..


Meera:- Aur kya soch rahi hun main...


Som:- Uchhal kar gale lagne ki… chalo pahle ander... Yahan se fresh ho kar hum beautician ke pass jayenge aur wahan se marriage ragistar office. 12.30 baje ka samay liya hua hai...


Meera:- Main prabhavit hui Som sir... Kya baat hai shadi ki poori taiyari kar rakhe hain…


Dono ek sath hi ghar me dakhil huye. Jaise hi pahla kadam pada, samne 2 house maid... Anupriya aur Mithlesh... dono sofe par ek dusre ke aalingan me gum ho kar tv dekh rahe the. Poora hall hi pack tha aur poori light band hone ke karan andhera jaisa mahol tha. Jaise hi darwaja khula ander poori raushni...


Dono house maid ki najar darvaje se aa rahe Som aur Meera par gayi. Anu aur Mithlesh harbara kar khade hote... "Sir aap aane wale hain hume pata nahi tha"…


Som:- Mithlesh ye sab kya hai... Poora hall andhera...


"Sorry sir wooo, hummm.. ye.. wooo to yahan akele hi hote hain..." Anu thodi harbarahat aur thode ghabrahat ke sath jawab di.


Som:- Akele hone se kya matlab hai...


Som itna tej bola ki dono saham gaye. Meera pass me hi khadi thi. Gale ki khadas se usne apne hone ka anubhav karwati... "Dono par chilla kyun rahe hain?"


Som pass me khadi Meera ko dekha. Khud ko thoda shant kiya. Iss bich Anu aur Mithlesh ne poore hall ki light jala dee. Anu kitchen me chali gayi. Mithlesh Som ke samne sar jhuka kar khade hote… "Sir wo humari nayi-nayi shadi hui hai aur yahan jyada kaam bhi nahi hota"…


Som:- Hmmmm !!! Sambhu ji kahan hai..


Mithlesh:- Sambhu sir to Malhotra sir ke bunglow se jate hi chale jate hain.


Som:- Aur yahan ke staff bhi mujhe kam dikh rahe hain...


Meera, fir se gale ki khadas se Som ka dhyan khinchti.… "Jarra waqt par dhyan dijiye sir. Hume jana bhi hai?"…


Som:- Yad dilane ka dhanywad... Mithlesh, Anu ko bolo kuch mitha hi banaye. Hum log jyada der nahi rukenge... Sona tum first floor ke left me jao, wahan mera bedroom me tum fresh ho jana...


Mithlesh thoda ghabrate... "Sir wo"..


Som sawaliya najron se dekhte... "Ab kya hai?"…


Mithlesh:- Sir wo aap ka bedroom..


Som:- Bhagwan ke liye ab ye mat kahna ki tum dono staff quater ke badle mera bedroom istamal kar rahe...


Mithlesh, apni najren niche kar ke "Haan" me sar hila diya. Som usse ghur kar dekhte... "Meera samne guest room hai, tum wahan fresh hone chali jao. Mithlesh tum mere sath aao"…


Meera Guset room me chali gayi. Som Mithlesh ke sath baitha aur cheque sign karte uske ore badhate... "1 hafte ki chutti lo aur dono kahin ghum aao. Lekin Mithlesh agli baar kaam ke sath mazak karte maine dekh liya to tum samjh jana"…


Mithlesh:- Sorry sir... Sir waise ye ladki kaun hai..


Som:- Tumhe kya lagta hai kaun hogi...


Mitlesh:- Aap ki girlfriend…


Som:- Nahi... Meri lover... Tum jao aur driver ko bolo car ready kar ke rakhne... Hum aadhe ghante me aate hain..


Aadhe ghante me dono fresh ho kar wahan se nikle. Car sidha ek Beauty parlour me ja kar ruki. Som aur Meera taiyar hone chal diye...


Fatfat dono ko taiyar kiya gaya... Som pahle taiyar ho kar waiting lounge pahuncha. Uske lambe baal ko bade hi shandar tarike se set kiya gaya tha. Halki dadhi trim ki hui. Sharir par paramparik paridhan, dhoti aur kurta. Aankhon par kala chasma.


Som bilkul kisi model ki tarah dikh raha tha. Uske lambe kad kathi par yah paramparik paridhan kafi jach raha tha. Parlour ke waiting lounge me Som ke kuch jaan'ne wale bhi khade the. Som ka yah look dekh kar sabhi ek sath hooting ke sath seetiyan bhi bajane lage...


Som sab ko hath dikhate.… "Shant ho jao tum sabhi."


"Ye Akdu kabhi nahi sudhar sakta. Ji to karta hai iske shadi ki khabar all India viral kar dun. Aaj bhi akad kar hi order dega"… Ek ladki chidhti hui kahne lagi...


"Anjila ke comment par koi reaction nahi"… wahin khada dusra ladka chuki lene laga...

"Man me to boss ke bhi shadi ke laddu fut rahe honge. Upar se kitne bhi akde kyun na rahe ander se hans hi rahe honge"… Ek aur kisi ladke ne kaha...

"Just shut up. Boss tum sab se baad me badla lega"… Ek aur kisi ladke ne kaha...

Som:- Maar bhi khate ho fir bhi tum sab ke bolne ki bimari nahi jati na...

Anjila:- Meera ke aane se boss aaj kuch normal ho kar baat kar rahe hain na... Kyon Praveen…

Comments par comments ho rahe the issi bich wahan khade log shant khade ho gaye. Achanak hi wahan ka poora mahol shant ho gaya. Har koi Som ki najar aur uske chehre ki bhavna ko dekh raha tha...


Samne passage se poori tarah se taiyar ho kar Meera aa rahi thi. Rang saumya, poori dulhan ki tarah saji hui. Chehra aankhon ko khinch le. Hoton ke laali dil me suroor bhar de. Aankhon ki gahri kajal naino ko aise uljha de ki najar hate hi nahi. Jhuki palken aur sharm se laal chehra aisa manmohak lag raha tha ki mano samne se mohini chali aa rahi hai.


Itne aakarshak tarike se taiyar hui thi ki har najar thehar jaye. Gahre laal rang ki lahnga-choli. Sar se lekar paun tak jewar me saji. Chham-chham karti payal ki khanak aur poorn saji hui dulhan ke vesh me Meera har najar ko khinch rahi thi.


Ek suroor sa dhima nasha aankhon ke raste chadha...
Man aise moh lee manmohini ne ke ab to sudh-budh khoye.…
Roop naino me baste ja rahe the aur dharkane thi bekabu
Pahle jhalak ki Prem ras bauchhar aur chal gaya poora jadoo...


Meera ke mann me bhi hazar bhavnayen thi. Khushiyon ne jaise uske dar tak khud dastak di thi. Mann ka meet aankhon ke samne khada, jise apne dulhe ke roop me dekhne ke liye na jane kitne jatan kiye. Na jane kitne prayatn kiye. Meera ek najar utha kar Som ko dekhi aur bus dekhti hi rah gayi.


Meera aur Som ki najren ek dusre se aise uljhi fir to palak jhapkne ka naam na liya. Dono ke chehre par pyari si muskaan aur aankhon se ek dusre ka abhivadan kar rahe the.…


Jo haal dil ka idhar ho raha tha, wahi haal dil ka udhar ho raha tha aur dono ki dhadkane.....


"Dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak dhak-dhak

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Ishq ki mauj mein aa
Aaja behne ke liye
Tu zaroori, zaroori sa hai
Mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
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[nain11ster]

Ohhh to ye tha mamla ....

Tabhi me sochu ki aag lagne ke bad dhua kyo nhi nikla ...par ek jab apka mingal hone Ka time aa Jayega tab es signal man ko bhi invite Kar dena kya pta vha akar me bhi mingal ho jau

Kya pta koi off topic ke name se report Kar de

Itne dino baad mil rahe apka kuch hua ki nahi...

nain11ster sir hi Kara ye love triangle Kuch smjaoo Nahi to main triangle hi bhul jaunga kisko Shadi kisse hogi ekbbarr jlk dedo

Update 70 me bahut se sawalon ke jawab hai...

Loveria nhi hua bhaya vo hmare chacha shree Airforce me hai to jald aa nhi pate or yha 2 saal se corona ki vajah se pura camp hi sheel kiya hua tha Hyderabad ka no in no out to jb pta chla vo aa rhe hai to unko lene chle gye unki family bhi sath thi to vhi bhing gya tha isliye tabiyat khrab ho gyi...

Abhi tabiyat thik hai na

sir ye thoda confusing update tha pahli baar padhne se thoda sir ke upar se gaya lagta hai 3-4 baar read karna padega is update ko samjhne me
par iss baat se ye to samajh aa raha hai ki 3 idiots ki jodi me darar aane wali hai
abb mera personally aisa manna hai ki 3 didots jki jodi me koi na koi darar dalne ki koshis kar raha hai
ho sakta hai main galat houngi but ye meri rai hai

iss update se ek aur point clear hota hai ki jo log bura karte hai ya logo ke sath bura karne ki soch rakhte hai unke sath aur unke pariwar ke sath bhi bura hona hi hota hai aur yahi destiny hoti hai jaisa ki huma ke sath hua uske baap bhaiyon ki galti ki saja unko to mili hi but abb lagta hai huma ke sath bhi bura hua.

iss update me jo sbse jyada confusing point hai aur jo mere samajh me nahi aaya wo baat ye hai ki vyas, sia se naraj kis baat par hua jo use bina bat ke hi suna diya
ab possibility to ye bhi ho sakti hai ki yaha bhi kisi ne koi game khela hai
aur agar aisa hai to bahut jld hi shayad confusion bhi mit jaye
dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

Lagta hai main iss comment ka jawab de chuka. Nitya ji ab main nitya aaunga... Sorry for your inconvenience...

Superb update bhai

Thankoooo sooo much

Nice update

Thankooo

Kabhi kabhi nain11ster sahab kuch ho jata hai kya jo itne achhe update post kar dete hai..
Ek khushi ki lahar daud jaaye dilo dimag pe.. aha kitne achhe aur khushnuma pal honge wo jab vyas aur sia alag ho gaye shabbash..... Sia aise hi door chali jaaye... aur huma aur kareeb ho jaaye vyas ki...

Are to Bichare riaz kya galti usme.. usne jo dekha suna mehsoos kiya wohi to bola...


Haan ab aaye na point ki baat pe....
dekho, dekho kaise do dosto ke bich darar par gayi hai
aur iski wajah sirf aur sirf sia som & family hai
Abhi kadam thik se rakhe bhi nahi vyas ki life mein dosto ke bich jhagde suru...
kal ko jab vyas ko gulam bana lenge to jaane asif aur riaz ka kya hoga vyas ki family ka kya hoga...
Actually kishi family ko, dosto ko khushi khushi mil jhul ke rahe... aur usko dekh jsom & sia aur unke PARIWAR walo hazam nahi hoti ye baat ki kaise family ya dost is kadar khush ho sakte hai... jaise hum bhikhde huye hai unki life bhi bhikhad diyo..
jealous peoples

Ishe KAHTE hai.. ki baaki sab sapne hote hai, apne to apne hote hai...
dekha kaise vyas dukh gham ko bhool Gaya... achhi nind bhi aayi... Bas sia door rahe isse

great jo riaz
Thik aise hi karte raho aur udhar vyas aur Sia door hote jaayenge..
phir huma aur vyas ki jodi superhit, aur nain11ster sahab hath malte reh jayenge ye soch kar ki ye kya ho gaya

Bilkul sathik aankalan kar raha tha vyas..
Waise galti Meera ki hai... jabse Nischal door hoke is story pe aayi hai.. uski to chaal chalan hi badal gayi hai
Khair...
Kaafi dilchasp update tha sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Bahut lamba revoo hai par bhavna dekh kar samajh me aa raha hai ki aap doston ke alag hone ko kafi enjoy kar rahi... Khair swagat na karegi humara

To confusion ka daur suru ho gya hai jaha ek or riaz asif or sia ko gussa dila gya to vhi dusri or vyas meera ke aise achanak kisi or ke sath chale Jane pr yah soch baitha ki jaisi guru Vaisi cheli sia ko Lagta hai vyas ne apne dosto ko uske relation ke bare me bta diya... kya galatfahami suru Hui hai maza hi aa gya padh kr superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Thankooo xabhi bhai... Kahani yad hai ya bhul gaye

 

[nain11ster]

Typical couple ....ek misunderstanding aur sb satyanas .....baith ke baat kr le ye bhi nhi......khair vyas ki soch thodi si bevkufo wali h jo dekha uspe yakin kar liya aur suna diya samne wale ko ....same meera ke sath bhi uska bachpana sb jante h but uske baad bhi uske character pe sak kar liya.....khair aaj raat intejar rahega update....firse gayab na ho jana nain11ster bhai

Na jane kya likhna chate ho nahi kuch palle pad rha hai na hi dimag me ghus rha hai ...

nain11ster भाई ये सिया और व्यास का लफड़ा समझ नही आ रहा, यहा बुद्धि का थर्मामीटर 100 से ऊपर है और व्यास बाबु सिया जैसी प्रेमिका को ही गलत समझ रहे है

beautiful update

lovely update

good update

कहीं सच में ही तो आपने ब्याह तो नहीं कर ली ? भुलने लगे हैं और यह शादी ब्याह के बाद अक्सर होता है ।
आपके प्रत्येक अपडेट पर रेभो दिया है मैंने । अगर एक बार में एक अपडेट आया हो या एक ही बार में दो , तीन अपडेट्स आया हो मैंने रेभो बराबर दिया है । हां , लेकिन दो तीन अपडेट्स वालों का भी एक बार में ही लिखकर दिया है ।

वैसे शर्मिली और ऋतु की जुगलबंदी जरूर कयामत लायेगी । इंतजार रहेगा ।

very nice update

awesome update

nice update ..ye jhagda jyu hua sia aur vyas ke bich pata nahi par vyas kuch jyada hi bol gaya aisa lagta hai ..
riaz ne galat waqt pe mooh khola jabki usko pata hi nahi vyas aur sia ke baare me par nirali aur jannat ke kaan khade ho gaye ..
asif ne apni taraf se matter sambhal liya ..

nirali aur jannat ne huma ko party me bulake sahi kiya tha ,,uska baap galat hai to jaruri nahi ki wo bhi galat ho ,,nirali ne uske dukh me uske saath rehne ka sochkar sahi faisla kiya hai .

ye riaz ko crore ke plan na batane par wo naraj hai vyas aur asif se aisa lagta hai ..
kuch jyada hi rutha hua hai riaz kyunki usko plan me shamil nahi kiya hai ..

sia ko propose kar diya senior ladke roopak ne par sia ne usko naa kehkar baat khatm kar di .
par riaz har baar galat jagah mooh khol deta hai waise sia ke saath bhi kar diya vyas ke baare me aur paiso ke baare me bolkar ..

aur ye meera ka boyfriend kaun aa gaya jo bahut jyada rahis lag raha hai ..

Aap sabhi ka dhanywad... Update aane shuru ho gaye hain

 

[nain11ster]

Sab to thik hi chal raha tha ye achanak se vasya ko kya ho gaya...
Meera jiske sath gayi wo uska bhai wagerah hoga aise bhi bahut bada pariwar hai uska ..
Dekhte hai nainu bhai aage kiska introduction karwa rahe hai

पहले लगा था व्यास ने हुमा पर तंज कसा था लेकिन ये अपडेट पढ़कर तो कुछ और ही लग रहा है । लेकिन क्यों कहा ऐसा व्यास ने ?
" पहले ब्रेक अप करना फिर किसी को जाल में फंसाना " इन शब्दों से तो लगता है सिया पहले किसी से प्यार करती थी और उससे ब्रेकअप होने के बाद व्यास को अपने हुस्न के जाल में फंसाई ।
व्यास साहब को इतनी इन्फोर्मेशन मिली कहां से ?
और अगर मिली भी तो सिया से इसके बारे में बात क्यों नहीं की ? ये तो कच्चे कान वाला लड़का साबित हो गया । बिना जांचे परखे और बिना सिया से बात किए अपनी राय बना गया ।
यदि व्यास का शादी से पहले ऐसा हाल है तो शादी के बाद क्या करेगा ! शक की बिमारी सबसे घातक होती है और इसका कोई इलाज भी नहीं होता ।
मुझे लगता है सिया को व्यास से दूरियां बना लेना चाहिए ।

रियाज अहमद के लिए पहले भी मैंने अपने खयालात जाहिर किए थे । वो आसिफ अली नहीं है । वो कभी भी इन्हें धोखा दे सकता है । उसके विचार और व्यवहार मुझे हमेशा से संदिग्ध लगा । फिलहाल तो वो भी अपने दोस्त " व्यास " की ही तरह गलतफहमी का शिकार बना बैठा है ।

मीरा ने भी अंतिम पैराग्राफ में रीडर्स को भौंचक्का करवा दिया । लगता है यहां भी एक और गलतफहमी का दौर शुरू होने वाला है ।

काफी गलतफहमियां इस अपडेट से शुरू हो गई है और देखना है इसका असर किरदारों पर क्या प्रभाव डालता है । कुछ नये किरदारों ने भी एंट्री लिया है । देखते हैं वो लोग औपचारिकतावश ही एंट्री लिए है या कोई इम्पोर्टेंट रोल भी है ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग अपडेट नैन भाई ।

update wagerah to sb accha tha
but lgta h ye update sir ne apni wali se hui ladai ke gum m likh dala
or sb ldkiyo ko bewafa bnane pr tule h
batao phle sia or ab meera
chal kya rha h ye kuch smjh na aa rha
upar se ye riaz konsi khichdi pka rha h
sala hr trf aag lga rha h
dekhte h ye suspence kb khtm hoga

.

Nice update bhai par jald se jald ye sabhi logo ki galat fahmi ko dur kar do waiting for next update

Nice update bro..pyar thik se suru huya nahi aur apne galat fehmi paida karwa diya.

Ye nain sir ke shadi ki afwah kisane urai thi

Tu tha afwah udane min

Mai , Kya majak Kar rhe ho Bhai...

Jab raat ko bijli kadak rhi hoti hai to bahut bura Hall hota hai.Meine khud dekha hai bijli ko girte huye jab wapis jaati hai to ekdum se roshni kar deti jaise din chad aaya ho.

Aap sab ko dhanywad 69 update me kya aur kyun hua wo 70th me clear hai... Jald hi kahani bhi clear ho jayegi... Aap sab sath bane rahe

BTW Guri006 aapne pahla update hi padha ya poora padh chuki

 

[nain11ster]

Beshkimti update dost
Ek chhoti I galatfahmi sab per bhari pad rahi hai hansho ka joda juda hone per vyakul hai
Vahin ek aur Meera ki Corban copy Riaz miya apni hi dhun me adhkachre gayan ka vyakhyaan kar ke apne ish badbolepan ka parichay de rahe hai bilkul nat ke jaishi bhavbhangimao ko darshakar

Intjaar rahega bhai agle update ka

waiting for next

Update posted

Badhiya umdaaaa behtreen update

Very nice very good update

Wah wah bara zabardast update mara h Maza a gawa

Excellent fantastic shandar update

Ary wah som ka action sacne badhiya dikhaya

Ye to tiger sherof ki movie ka sacne jese tha

Wawoooo Meri shadi krwao Meri shadi krwao
Ahaha kitna sakoon mil raha Meri shadi ho gi wawoooo Maza ay ga

Badhiya awesome interesting update

Asif bhai, Nevil bhai aapka shukriya sath bane rahe

 

[nain11ster]

Ary Yar 10 lakh heart attack dilwo gy kia

waiting

Is shastri k bache ki to itni cute doll sia ko rulay dia gadha kahi ka apni girlfriend se ese koi mazaq kerta h kia

Ab apne naino bahi ko ly lo kitna piyar kerta h wo apni girlfriend se

Intjaar

Waiting bhai

Galatfehmi bahut khatarnaak hota hai.....
Or kya apko sasural me khatir fari acchi tarah kar rahe jo update dene me itna wakt lagta hai

Waiting bhai

Waiting

Naino bahi kahi apni girlfriend k 7 date to nahi kr rahe

Aap sab ke comment ka shukriya... Intzar karwane ke liye maafi... Update post ho chuka hai

 

[nain11ster]

waiting

teen mahine baad aayenge nain11ster sahab... bas Yun hi haal chaal puchne sabhi se..
aur baaki yun samajh lijiye ki next year se restart karenge ye kahani...
..... yakin na ho to THE FIGHTER sahab ya rgcrazyboy sahab ya piyanuan puch lijiyega...

busy hain nainu abhi

Som k jate hi story ka rang thoda fika hua he

Revo de do som aa jayega....

इतने दिन तो नहीं लगते थे अपडेट्स आने में । सब कुछ ठीक है न nain11ster bhai.

jo 6 likhe huai hai wo pahle post kar do or 30 update 2 din baad post kar dena

Bas Yun hi

Btw rumors ke mutabik nain11ster sahab ne haalhi mein shaadi kar li hai...isliye busy hai wo... kya ye sach hai..

Laut aaya hun... So ab intzar ki ghadi samapt hoti hai...

 

[nain11ster]

ye kab huaa

Unhone ne hi bulletin board par likha tha ye baat.....

August first week mein... readers ko bulaya tak nahi..

Waiting nainu bhai

Nayi nayi Shaadi huyi hai unki.. ab kaha yahan aane wale hai
Btw aapne congratulations tak nahi kaha nain saheb ko...

nain11ster

ju ko bhi nahi bataya kya nain saheb ne

Ok mitr pyare
Bahut bahut shukriya aapka
Kabutar to uda hi diya
Id ke chaand ho gaye ho aap to
Chalo jo hai achchha hai do diwash aur sahi intjaar kar lenge

I am back

 

[The king]

लगता है काफी लंबा इंतजार करवाया मैंने। आप सबसे माफी चाहूंगा और जहां से कहानी रुकी थी वहीं से पोस्टिंग शुरू करता हूं।

Welcome back bhai

 

[Prince Sahil]

nain11ster welcome back sir, i hope you have had a good time