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[Anky@123]

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[Nevil singh]

Update:-76​

Shanivar ki sham thi. Sia, aaj Vyas par bijli girane ke irade se taiyar ho rahi thi. Ek to Sia ka itna khubsoorat aakarsahk chehra, aur chehre ke upar halka make-up, fir to har najar jaise Sia par khinch jaye. Kahar to tab ho gaya, jab Sia ne aaj party ke liye kale paridhan ka chunav kiya. Kale paridhan me apne aabhushno ko pahan'kar jab bahar nikli, Mishra family dang ho'kar Sia ko dekhne lagi...

Sabke muh se apne aap hi nikal gaya... "Wowww, kya dikh rahi ho Sia"… Sia muskura'kar sabka abhivadan ki aur apni bike se nikal gayi...


Sia ke jane ke thodi der baad, Chitra aur Pranshu bhi taiyar ho'kar ghumne nikle.... Chitra ke bahar nikalte hi Som ne jaise rahat ka shwans liya ho... Jaldi se ja'kar apni maa se kah aaya taiyar ho jao hum log bhi chalte hain...


Pichhe se Kapendra Mishra, Som ke kandhe par hath dete... "Kahan?"..


Lata Mishra:- Mujhe mandir jana hai..


Kapendra:- Aaj tak to main hi tumhe mandir le jata tha... Aaj tumne puchha bhi nahi.. Azi humse naraj hain kya?


Lata, Som ke ore dekhti... "Ab to iss baat ka jawab Som hi dega"..


Som:- Pitaji aap humare construction site par ja rahe ho... Wahan ka kaam dekho... Iss manglwar ko hume grih prawes bhi karna hoga na...


Kapendra:- Beta ye baat tujhe sham me yaad aa rahi jab labour mistri ja chuke honge…


Som:- Pitaji aap bhi bacchon jaisi baat kar rahe hain. Aaj din me hi aapko kah diya tha na, aap contractor Nurul Hassan se mil'kar ghar dekh lena aur koi kami rah gayi ho to ravivar aur somvar tak poora karwa lena ..


Kapendra:- Ohhh haan... Main bhi na bhulakkad hota ja raha hun... Main Nurul Hassan se mil leta hun... Haan lekin tune mujhe Nurul se milne ki baat batayi thi na, fir ye Lata ne mujhe mandir jane ke liye mujhse kyun nahi puchhi... Main manaa karta tab na ye tere sath jati..


Lata:- Suniye Mishra ji dher dimag ke ghode na dauraeye... Chup-chap ja'kar ghar ka kaam dekhiye… Chal beta tu bhi taiyar ho ja, main bhi taiyar ho'kar aayi... Aur aap bhi jaeye...


Kapendra Mishra aur Som dono lagbhag ek sath taiyar ho kar pahunche... Jaise hi unki najar Som par gayi.. Apni aankhen mij kar usse dobara dekhne lage...

Kapendra Mishra:- Beta tu mandir jane ke liye taiyar hua hai, ya fir shadi ke liye ladki dekhne ja raha hai...


Som:- Pitaji.…


Kapendra Mishra:- Areee baap ko aise aankh kyun dikha raha hai. Achha sun aaj talli honge, koi achhi jagah vayvastha kar lena...


Som:- Thik hai pitaji...


Kapendra:- Waise jach raha hai Som. Tujhe na abhi dekh'kar dil ke armaan jaag gaye... Teri shadi me to main gale tak piyunga aur ladka wala hun iss baat ka poora fayda uthaunga...


Som apne dono hath jodte.… "Pitajiiii"..


Kapendra:- Haan ja raha hun. Aaj main Nirbhay ke sath ghumne nikalta hun...


Mishra ji cottage ke bahar nikal kar sidha Nirbhay ke ghar me ghuse. Nirbhay ka jo bhi karyakarm raha ho, lekin Mishra ji ne kah diya so kah diya.


Jaise hi kisi car ke bahar nikalne ki awaz aayi, Lata Mishra bhi bahar nikli... "Tere babuji gaye kya?"..


Som:- Haan gaye, lekin maa main ab bhi kah raha hun ki aaj chhod do.


Lata:- Chup kar... Mujhe aaj hi meri Bahu se milna hai bus... Chal ab...


Ye dono bhi nikale. Lata apni bahu ko dher sara uphaar dena chahti thi isliye dono sidha shopping par chale gaye. Wahin idhar aaj Meera bhi jab taiyar ho'kar nikli, kafi khubsoorat aur pyari lag rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise apne premi ko rijhane nikli hai...

Meera ka look dekh'kar Soni Kaki aur Jignesh dono hi aaschrya me rah gaye...


Jignesh:- Tu party me hi ja rahi hai na..


Meera:- Nahi tumhare jijaji se milne ja rahi bhaiya. Kya karun main bhaiya tumhara, kisi ne jaise zahar bhar diye hon tumhari kaan me. Ab to aisa lag raha hai jaise buddhi bhi moti ho gayi hai..


Jignesh:- Kya boli..


Meera:- Kuch bhi to nahi... Tum bhi chalo party me..


Jignesh:- Party... Kiski party, kaun si Party?


Meera:- Sia didi ne bulaya hai.. Koi surprise party hai... Ho sakta hai wahan Pranshu bhaiya aur Chitra bhabhi bhi ho..


Jignesh kuch sochte... "Main aise bina bulaye gaya to kaisa lagega..."


Meera, Jignesh ko uske kamre tak khinch'kar le jati... "Nikku bhaiya (Jignesh ka Nick name) aap bahut sochte ho… Jaldi se taiyar ho'kar aa jao..."


Meera, apne bhai Jignesh ke sath nikal gayi. Sham me takriban 6 baj rahe the. Alag-alag jaghon se party ke liye kayi sare log 3 star hotel Alfanjo me pahunche... Sia aur Meera ke sath iss party me uske parivar ke kayi log the. Yahan tak ki Meera ne apni bhabhi Diksha aur Parshu ko bhi iss party ke liye invite kiya tha jiske bare me Sia ko pata nahi...


6 baje sham ke karib kafi sare surprise ke sath party hall me sab shirkat kiye. Mahol hi poora puzzle bana hua tha. Jahan ek ore Diksha aur Pranshu ke liye yah surprise tha ki Sia ne party ke bare me kuch nahi bataya... Wahin gajab tab ho gaya jab Sia yah bol'kar cover kar rahi thi ki unka (Diksha aur Pranshu) aana Sia ke liye bhi surprise hai, kyunki yah party to Meera ne di hai. Lekin tabhi Jignesh ne kah diya ki ye Sia ki di hui party hai...


Ab to mamla Sia aur Chitra ke bich phans gaya. Sia, Diksha ko thoda shant khade rahne ka ishara karti.… "Kuku tum 2 minute ke liye aao"..


Diksha:- Nahi jo baat hogi wo sabke samne hogi, warna hum ja rahe hain iss party se...


Sia, Diksha ke samne hath jodti... "Bus 2 minute de do... Pleaseeeee... Apni ladli ke liye itna kar do... Please, please, please..


Diksha:- Achha thik hai sirf 2 minute..


Sia, had'badi me Meera ko kinare le gayi... "Kuku, duffer, in dono ko yahan kyun bula lee. Ab kya apne mayke tak shadi ki baat pahunchaogi"…


Sia, chinta jahir karte sawal to kar rahi thi lekin Meera thi ki idhar-udhar dekh rahi thi. Uske haav-bhav aise the mano wo Sia ki baat ko ansuni kar rahi ho...


Sia, Meera ko hilati... "Kukuuuu.. duffer ye kya harkat hai"..


Meera:- Mujhe aapke dwara Kuku pukara jana akhad raha hai...


Sia:- Ohhh thik hai ab teri... Sorry teri bhi kyun... Ab aapki shadi ho gayi hai maim. To main aapko maim kahun ya Meera ji..


Meera:- Inme se koi nahi, call me bhabhi...


Sia bilkul chaunkti... "Kyaaaaa????"


Sia ko aisa mehsus hua jaise usse chakkar aa jayega… Wo to bilkul nishabd ho gayi. Bolne ke liye kuch tha hi nahi... Wo chup-chap Chitra ke pass aa'kar khadi ho gayi... Bilkul gum apne khyalon me...


Chitra, Sia ko hilati... "Tujhe kya hua, aisa kya bol diya jo tu khyalon me hain"..


Sia ka koi jawab nahi. Chitra usse jor se hilati... "Siaaaaa, kya hua?"..


Sia:- Tum dono (Chitra aur Pranshu) aao mere sath...


Chitra:- Hua kya wo to bol...


Sia:- Meri tabiyat kuch thik nahi lag rahi. Mujhe chakkar aa rahe hain Chitra..


Chitra aur Pranshu dono chintit hote... "Chalo hum doctor ke pass chalte hain."


Sia:- Nahi aap sham barbaad mat karo... Mujhe bus 15-20 minute kahin letna hai.. Yahin kahin let jati hun..


Chitra gusse me Sia ko ghurti... "Kahan let jayegi. Pranshu aap room book kar do"..


Jignesh:- Bhaiya main room book kar deta hun... Tum Sia ko dekho..


Meera ko sun'ne ke baad idhar Sia chakkar kha rahi thi udhar Neerav, Meera ke pass chala puchhne ki usne aisa kya bomb phod diya...


Neerav:- Aisa kya kah di Sia didi se jo unhe chakkar aane laga...


Meera:- Yahi ki wo mujhe Kuku, Meera ityadi na bole...


Neerav:- Haan tere lakshan dekh kar pagal bulana hi justify karta hai..


Meera:- Nana, Neeru... Mere lakshan dekh kar Sia didi mujhe bhabhi bulayegi…


Shocking newa.. Neerav bilkul chaunkte huye... "What????"..


Meera pyari si muskan apne chehre par laati... "Yesss, Neeru... Ab ja cover kar iss baat ko"..


Neerav:- Baat ko cover karte hai duffer... Blast ko nahi... Bhagwan jaane ab kya hoga.. Tu kya bomb phodne idhar aayi hai...


Dono iss bare me aage kuch baat karte uss se pahle dono ne Jignesh ko aate dekh liya aur unki baaten band ho gayi... "Kya hua aise chillaye kyun"..


Meera, kuch bolne wali thi, lekin uss se pahle hi Neerav Meera ke muh par hath rakhte.… "Kuch nahi bhaiya.. ye to bus..."


Jignesh:- Hath hata... Hath hata apna.. Aur thoda dur khade rah...


Meera aur Neerav ke bare me sab jante huye bhi Jignesh ne Neerav ko daant diya. Ye baat Meera ko akhad gayi. Ab Meera to Meera thehri. The mello drama queen... Ghurti najron se wo Jignesh ko dekhti...


"Nikku bhaiya, ab se Neeru ko aap nahi datoge, kyunki main iss se pyar karti hun aur ye bhi mujhse pyar karta hai, samjhe tum"….


Meera apni baat kah'kar Neerav ka hath tham lee. Idhar Neerav ki hichki thi jo ek baar aayi, fir to rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Kabhi wo najar ghuma'kar Meera ko to kabhi Jignesh ko dekh raha tha…


Girlfriend-boyfrend ke new trend arthat kaan me chhota sa bluetooth device lagakar 24 ghante phone line sewa ki to baat hi nahi ho rahi. Wo isliye kyunki Neerav bhi apni girlfriend ke sath issi padhatti ke tahat connect tha. Neerav ki najren to Meera aur Jignesh ko dekh rahi thi lekin dimag me gunj sirf Paali ke awaz ki thi... Neerav, Meera ko dhime se kahne laga... "Le lee tune meri.. poora rayta faila dee"…


Udhar, Sia ko le'kar Chitra aur Pranshu hotel ke ek kamre me pahunche. Chitra Pranshu ko wapas se party hall me bhej di aur khud Sia ke pass baith gayi... Chitra pani ka glass Sia ke aage badhate... "Le pani pi le, achha lagega"..


Sia:- Ruko pahle mujhe kuch batana hai..


Chitra:- Kya?


Sia:- Meera ne shadi kar lee..


Chitra:- Kyaaaaa???


Sia:- Abhi itna hi shocked hui. Aage suno...


Chitra ka dil joron se dharakte... "Please ab ye mat kahna please, please, please bhagwan... Meri aasanka galat ho..


Sia:- Tu bilkul sahi soch rahi hai...


Sia ki baat par Chitra ka dil baitha ja raha tha... Dharkane jaise sunn par gayi thi... "Kya Siaaa"..


Sia:- Wahi... Meera ne na... Meera ne...


Chitra:- Heart attack se marwayegi kya... Bol naaa... Itna ghabra kyun rahi hai..


Sia:- Main kya bolun... Som aur Meera ne...


Chitra, wahi pani ka glass apne sir par dalti... "No, nooo, nooooo, noooooo... Kah de ye prank tha... Tu bus kah de ki tum log aaj sabke sir ghumane yahan bulaye the... Iss aat me koi sacchai nahi hai...


Sia:- Meri haalat dekh'kar tumhe lag raha hai ki main jhuth bol rahi hun???


Chitra:- Pagal ho gaya hai wooo.... Hum kya uski shadi Meera se nahi karwate jo usne aisa kaam kiya... Kahan hai wo pagal (Som). Phone laga'kar abhi usse yahan bulao...


Sia:- Thand rakh... Ghar par chal'kar baat karte hain. Aur iss budhiya ko bhi sari baaten pata hai... Som ne jaroor bataya hoga…


Chitra:- Yep... Aaj subah dono maa bete me yahi khichdi pak rahi hogi...


Sia:- Abhi kya karen?


Chitra:- Filhaal isse Som ki reception party samjh'kar enjoy karte hain... Ghar par poora hisab-kitab hoga...


Ye dono bhi niche chale aaye. Niche aane ke baad yahan alag hi scene chal raha tha... Pranshu aur Jignesh, Neerav par chadhe ja rahe the, aur Meera, Neerav ko apne pichhe khadi kar, usse bachane me lagi thi...


Diksha, Pranshu ko ja'kar pakdi, aur Sia, Jignesh ka haanth khinch'kar usse pichhe kari... "Ye kya tamasha chal raha hai yahan"… Diksha unche swar me puchhne lagi...


Jignesh aur Pranshu dono ek sath... "Ye ladka (Neerav) humari Kuku ko dhoka de raha hai. Iski pahle se Paali naam ki ek girlfriend hai fir ke Meera se pyar kaise kar sakta hai..."


Sia, Meera ko ghur'kar dekhti... "Aap dono ko ye baat Meera ne batayi kya?"


Pranshu aur Jignesh ek sath.… "Haan !!!"


Sia:- Matlab dono ke dono akl se paidal ho. Meera kitni natkhat hai ye kya pata nahi dono ko... Dono me se kisi ne jaroor Neerav ke sath kuch aisa kiya hoga jo Meera ko buri lagi hogi aur fir le liya usne badla...


Pranshu, Meera ko ghurte... "Kuku, Sia sach bol rahi hai kya?"


Meera:- Tab se kya main chinies me bol rahi thi. Kah to rahi thi ki jitna waqt aap sab ke sath bita hai, uss se kahin jyada main Neerav, Akansha aur Paali ke sath rahi hun... Fir bhi Nikku bhaiya ne Neerav ko daant diya...


Chitra, ek champagne ke bottol par chammach se toast karti… "Deviyon aur sajjano… Yadi aap logon ki bahas samapt ho gayi ho to kya hum party enjoy kar sakte hain..."


Pranshu:- Haan lekin ye party kis khushi me di ja rahi hai wo to abhi tak bataya hi nahi kisi ne...


Chitra:- Mangalvar ki subah humare naye ghar ka grih prawes hoga... Humare naye ghar jaane ki khushi me aaj ki raat party...


Itna kah'kar Chitra, Pranshu ke hath me champagne ki bottol thama kar usse kholne ke liye kahne lagi... Pranshu bechara bolna chah raha tha, naye ghar ki party aur yahan ghar ke baki log nahi hain.. lekin usse bolne kaun deta hai…


Champagne khuli. Party ka mahol bana aur gaane ki dhun par sabhi jhumne lage... Sia ko dekh'kar to Jignesh bavla hua ja raha tha. Upar se Sia ne sath dance karne ka offer de diya... Fir to wo sari baaten bhul'kar Sia ke sath nachne laga...


Wine ke peg chal rahe the. Party dhire-dhire apne suroor me chalne laga. Sab log party enjoy kar rahe the, issi bich party hall ka darwaja khula aur samne Som aur Lata Mishra...


Jaise ho dono ka aagman hua, Sia aur Chitra ka para apne uffan par tha. Idhar Som itni jyada bhid dekh'kar khud se kahne laga... "Meera ye tumne kya kiya"?


Lata Mishra bhi samne ka najara dekh'kar ek baar to dang rah gayi.… "Beta tera aur teri biwi ka pahnava dekh'kar mujhe lag to nahi raha ki iss shadi ko tum dono raaj rakhna chahte. Filhaal yahan se chalne me hi apni bhalai hai.."


Dono jaldi se uss hall se nikle. Lekin darwaje se 2 kadam aage gaye honge ki dayen kandhe par Chitra to bayen kandhe par Sia ka hath. Som pichhe mud'kar fiki si muskaan dete... "Tum dono yahan kya kar rahe?"…


Pahle dayen gaal par Chitra ka fir bayen gaal par Sia ka ek jordar thappad padne ke baad, dono ek sath shrink me boli... "Abhi to party shuru hui hai"…


"Tum dono to mandir ja rahe the na fir ye party"…. Pichhe se pitaji bhi pahunch gaye aur pahunchte hi sawal karne lage. Som jab najar utha'kar dekha... Mishra ji ke sath Contractor Nurul Hassan, Vyas ke pitaji Pandit Ram Swaroop Shashtri, Aisf ka sasoor bole to Pandit Ram Swaroop Shashtri ke muhbola samdhi Mujib Khan, Padosi Mashroof aur sath me Nirbhay Singh to the hi...


Som, Mishra ji ke itni badi mandli ko dekh'kar.… "Pitaji hum mandir se ho'kar aa rahe hain, lekin aap yahan"..


Pandit Ram Swaroop Shashtri:- Baki baaten to baad me hongi.. lekin in dono (Sia aur Chitra) ne tumhe thappad kyun maara.…


Sia:- Kya hai na uncle ji ye humare pyar jatane ka tarika hai.. Jab hum dono ka pyar over flow karta hai to aise hi dikhta hai... Kyun Som tum bhi kuch bolo..


Som:- Pandit ji aap bhi aaj apne bete ke sath gala gila karenge kya? Lagta hai wo bhi party manane aaya hai...


Som ki baat sun'kar sabhi Shastri Nagar wasiyon ki najar Vyas par... Ek aur aashiq ban sanwar ke nikla tha apne mehbooba ko rijhane...

Aise look me tha jise dekh har kisi ko lag jaye ki banda tabiyat se taiyar ho'kar kisi ko rijhane nikla hai. Upar se Shashtri ji ke samne hi Vyas nikla tha, lekin tab usne aam sa dikhne walaa poshak pahna hua tha aur chehre par cream powder bhi nahi laga tha... Kul mila'kar Shashtri ji ki najar jab Vyas par gayi, unki aankhen badi ho gayi... Upar se Ram Swaroop Shashtri ji ke doston ke comment... "Pandit ji lagta hai Nirali se pahle Vyas ki shadi ho jayegi"…


Mamla yahin khatm ho tab na... Idhar Shahstri ji ka dimag ghuma tha to udhar Mishra ji apni karastani sunane pahunche apni patni Lata Mishra ke pass aur phusphusate huye kah gaye...


"Aaj mera beta (Som) aise taiyar hua, ki lagaa koi ladki wala mil jaye to aaj hi apne bete ko shadi ke liye dikha dun... Aur dekho mujhe Pandit ji ki beti Nirali pasand aa gayi... Nirali ki maa apne beti ke sath thodi der me humare yahan pahunch jayegi aur hum log bhi 2 peg laga'kar wahan pahunchenge… Yadi Nirali ko Som pasand aa jata hai to aaj hi sab final"


Syappe... Syappe... Aur syappe... Aaj ka sajna-swarna to jaise har couple ke liye shrap sa ho gaya tha. Unke roop ko dekh'kar tarif to hoti lekin poora rayta aise failte ja raha tha mano aaj to rayta-barish me sabke hot aur dashing look ka koi mol hi nahi. Mehfil badi si thi jisme dher sare log, aur kiski kitni band bajegi kaun jane...

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Ishq ki mauj mein aa
Aaja behne ke liye
Tu zaroori, zaroori sa hai
Mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
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Bahut badhiya update bhai
Meera ne bina khanjar ke hi kaleje ko chhalni kar diya kaiyo ke Sia to bhabhiji ke dhamake se uberi hi nahi saath me lipat gai Chitra naari
Som ko uphaar Mila do raipto ka
Aur bhochakke rah gaye Mishra ji ki baato se Mishrayin ji v Som aur Pandit ji to Vyas Babu ke lachhan ko dekhkar dang rah gaye phir jale per namak chhidak diya Nirali ki shaadi se pahle Vyas Babu ki shaadi ho jaayegi jaishe taano se.

Bahut bada jhol macha Diya bandhu

Begani shaadi me Abdullah dewana

Ek naari sabpe bhari
Bach na sake ishke jhole se
Kaya nar kaya naari
Dekh lo bhiya Meera ki do dhaari katari

 

[Mbindas]

Aapne to ek dum rayta wala update diya hai bhai har jagah rayta failaya hua hai. Ab next update me dekhte hai ki kitna rayta saaf ho sakta hai.

 

[nain11ster]

Ek update ki jugad ho payegi kya ,man ho rha h likha hua ho to chap do

Sorry anky bhai... Likha hua hota to jaroor post kar deta... But likha hua nahi hai... Aur subah main likhna shuru karunga ..

 

[Rawat@7]

Update:-76​

Shanivar ki sham thi. Sia, aaj Vyas par bijli girane ke irade se taiyar ho rahi thi. Ek to Sia ka itna khubsoorat aakarsahk chehra, aur chehre ke upar halka make-up, fir to har najar jaise Sia par khinch jaye. Kahar to tab ho gaya, jab Sia ne aaj party ke liye kale paridhan ka chunav kiya. Kale paridhan me apne aabhushno ko pahan'kar jab bahar nikli, Mishra family dang ho'kar Sia ko dekhne lagi...

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Sabke muh se apne aap hi nikal gaya... "Wowww, kya dikh rahi ho Sia"… Sia muskura'kar sabka abhivadan ki aur apni bike se nikal gayi...


Sia ke jane ke thodi der baad, Chitra aur Pranshu bhi taiyar ho'kar ghumne nikle.... Chitra ke bahar nikalte hi Som ne jaise rahat ka shwans liya ho... Jaldi se ja'kar apni maa se kah aaya taiyar ho jao hum log bhi chalte hain...


Pichhe se Kapendra Mishra, Som ke kandhe par hath dete... "Kahan?"..


Lata Mishra:- Mujhe mandir jana hai..


Kapendra:- Aaj tak to main hi tumhe mandir le jata tha... Aaj tumne puchha bhi nahi.. Azi humse naraj hain kya?


Lata, Som ke ore dekhti... "Ab to iss baat ka jawab Som hi dega"..


Som:- Pitaji aap humare construction site par ja rahe ho... Wahan ka kaam dekho... Iss manglwar ko hume grih prawes bhi karna hoga na...


Kapendra:- Beta ye baat tujhe sham me yaad aa rahi jab labour mistri ja chuke honge…


Som:- Pitaji aap bhi bacchon jaisi baat kar rahe hain. Aaj din me hi aapko kah diya tha na, aap contractor Nurul Hassan se mil'kar ghar dekh lena aur koi kami rah gayi ho to ravivar aur somvar tak poora karwa lena ..


Kapendra:- Ohhh haan... Main bhi na bhulakkad hota ja raha hun... Main Nurul Hassan se mil leta hun... Haan lekin tune mujhe Nurul se milne ki baat batayi thi na, fir ye Lata ne mujhe mandir jane ke liye mujhse kyun nahi puchhi... Main manaa karta tab na ye tere sath jati..


Lata:- Suniye Mishra ji dher dimag ke ghode na dauraeye... Chup-chap ja'kar ghar ka kaam dekhiye… Chal beta tu bhi taiyar ho ja, main bhi taiyar ho'kar aayi... Aur aap bhi jaeye...


Kapendra Mishra aur Som dono lagbhag ek sath taiyar ho kar pahunche... Jaise hi unki najar Som par gayi.. Apni aankhen mij kar usse dobara dekhne lage...

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Kapendra Mishra:- Beta tu mandir jane ke liye taiyar hua hai, ya fir shadi ke liye ladki dekhne ja raha hai...


Som:- Pitaji.…


Kapendra Mishra:- Areee baap ko aise aankh kyun dikha raha hai. Achha sun aaj talli honge, koi achhi jagah vayvastha kar lena...


Som:- Thik hai pitaji...


Kapendra:- Waise jach raha hai Som. Tujhe na abhi dekh'kar dil ke armaan jaag gaye... Teri shadi me to main gale tak piyunga aur ladka wala hun iss baat ka poora fayda uthaunga...


Som apne dono hath jodte.… "Pitajiiii"..


Kapendra:- Haan ja raha hun. Aaj main Nirbhay ke sath ghumne nikalta hun...


Mishra ji cottage ke bahar nikal kar sidha Nirbhay ke ghar me ghuse. Nirbhay ka jo bhi karyakarm raha ho, lekin Mishra ji ne kah diya so kah diya.


Jaise hi kisi car ke bahar nikalne ki awaz aayi, Lata Mishra bhi bahar nikli... "Tere babuji gaye kya?"..


Som:- Haan gaye, lekin maa main ab bhi kah raha hun ki aaj chhod do.


Lata:- Chup kar... Mujhe aaj hi meri Bahu se milna hai bus... Chal ab...


Ye dono bhi nikale. Lata apni bahu ko dher sara uphaar dena chahti thi isliye dono sidha shopping par chale gaye. Wahin idhar aaj Meera bhi jab taiyar ho'kar nikli, kafi khubsoorat aur pyari lag rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise apne premi ko rijhane nikli hai...

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Meera ka look dekh'kar Soni Kaki aur Jignesh dono hi aaschrya me rah gaye...


Jignesh:- Tu party me hi ja rahi hai na..


Meera:- Nahi tumhare jijaji se milne ja rahi bhaiya. Kya karun main bhaiya tumhara, kisi ne jaise zahar bhar diye hon tumhari kaan me. Ab to aisa lag raha hai jaise buddhi bhi moti ho gayi hai..


Jignesh:- Kya boli..


Meera:- Kuch bhi to nahi... Tum bhi chalo party me..


Jignesh:- Party... Kiski party, kaun si Party?


Meera:- Sia didi ne bulaya hai.. Koi surprise party hai... Ho sakta hai wahan Pranshu bhaiya aur Chitra bhabhi bhi ho..


Jignesh kuch sochte... "Main aise bina bulaye gaya to kaisa lagega..."


Meera, Jignesh ko uske kamre tak khinch'kar le jati... "Nikku bhaiya (Jignesh ka Nick name) aap bahut sochte ho… Jaldi se taiyar ho'kar aa jao..."


Meera, apne bhai Jignesh ke sath nikal gayi. Sham me takriban 6 baj rahe the. Alag-alag jaghon se party ke liye kayi sare log 3 star hotel Alfanjo me pahunche... Sia aur Meera ke sath iss party me uske parivar ke kayi log the. Yahan tak ki Meera ne apni bhabhi Diksha aur Parshu ko bhi iss party ke liye invite kiya tha jiske bare me Sia ko pata nahi...


6 baje sham ke karib kafi sare surprise ke sath party hall me sab shirkat kiye. Mahol hi poora puzzle bana hua tha. Jahan ek ore Diksha aur Pranshu ke liye yah surprise tha ki Sia ne party ke bare me kuch nahi bataya... Wahin gajab tab ho gaya jab Sia yah bol'kar cover kar rahi thi ki unka (Diksha aur Pranshu) aana Sia ke liye bhi surprise hai, kyunki yah party to Meera ne di hai. Lekin tabhi Jignesh ne kah diya ki ye Sia ki di hui party hai...


Ab to mamla Sia aur Chitra ke bich phans gaya. Sia, Diksha ko thoda shant khade rahne ka ishara karti.… "Kuku tum 2 minute ke liye aao"..


Diksha:- Nahi jo baat hogi wo sabke samne hogi, warna hum ja rahe hain iss party se...


Sia, Diksha ke samne hath jodti... "Bus 2 minute de do... Pleaseeeee... Apni ladli ke liye itna kar do... Please, please, please..


Diksha:- Achha thik hai sirf 2 minute..


Sia, had'badi me Meera ko kinare le gayi... "Kuku, duffer, in dono ko yahan kyun bula lee. Ab kya apne mayke tak shadi ki baat pahunchaogi"…


Sia, chinta jahir karte sawal to kar rahi thi lekin Meera thi ki idhar-udhar dekh rahi thi. Uske haav-bhav aise the mano wo Sia ki baat ko ansuni kar rahi ho...


Sia, Meera ko hilati... "Kukuuuu.. duffer ye kya harkat hai"..


Meera:- Mujhe aapke dwara Kuku pukara jana akhad raha hai...


Sia:- Ohhh thik hai ab teri... Sorry teri bhi kyun... Ab aapki shadi ho gayi hai maim. To main aapko maim kahun ya Meera ji..


Meera:- Inme se koi nahi, call me bhabhi...


Sia bilkul chaunkti... "Kyaaaaa????"


Sia ko aisa mehsus hua jaise usse chakkar aa jayega… Wo to bilkul nishabd ho gayi. Bolne ke liye kuch tha hi nahi... Wo chup-chap Chitra ke pass aa'kar khadi ho gayi... Bilkul gum apne khyalon me...


Chitra, Sia ko hilati... "Tujhe kya hua, aisa kya bol diya jo tu khyalon me hain"..


Sia ka koi jawab nahi. Chitra usse jor se hilati... "Siaaaaa, kya hua?"..


Sia:- Tum dono (Chitra aur Pranshu) aao mere sath...


Chitra:- Hua kya wo to bol...


Sia:- Meri tabiyat kuch thik nahi lag rahi. Mujhe chakkar aa rahe hain Chitra..


Chitra aur Pranshu dono chintit hote... "Chalo hum doctor ke pass chalte hain."


Sia:- Nahi aap sham barbaad mat karo... Mujhe bus 15-20 minute kahin letna hai.. Yahin kahin let jati hun..


Chitra gusse me Sia ko ghurti... "Kahan let jayegi. Pranshu aap room book kar do"..


Jignesh:- Bhaiya main room book kar deta hun... Tum Sia ko dekho..


Meera ko sun'ne ke baad idhar Sia chakkar kha rahi thi udhar Neerav, Meera ke pass chala puchhne ki usne aisa kya bomb phod diya...


Neerav:- Aisa kya kah di Sia didi se jo unhe chakkar aane laga...


Meera:- Yahi ki wo mujhe Kuku, Meera ityadi na bole...


Neerav:- Haan tere lakshan dekh kar pagal bulana hi justify karta hai..


Meera:- Nana, Neeru... Mere lakshan dekh kar Sia didi mujhe bhabhi bulayegi…


Shocking newa.. Neerav bilkul chaunkte huye... "What????"..


Meera pyari si muskan apne chehre par laati... "Yesss, Neeru... Ab ja cover kar iss baat ko"..


Neerav:- Baat ko cover karte hai duffer... Blast ko nahi... Bhagwan jaane ab kya hoga.. Tu kya bomb phodne idhar aayi hai...


Dono iss bare me aage kuch baat karte uss se pahle dono ne Jignesh ko aate dekh liya aur unki baaten band ho gayi... "Kya hua aise chillaye kyun"..


Meera, kuch bolne wali thi, lekin uss se pahle hi Neerav Meera ke muh par hath rakhte.… "Kuch nahi bhaiya.. ye to bus..."


Jignesh:- Hath hata... Hath hata apna.. Aur thoda dur khade rah...


Meera aur Neerav ke bare me sab jante huye bhi Jignesh ne Neerav ko daant diya. Ye baat Meera ko akhad gayi. Ab Meera to Meera thehri. The mello drama queen... Ghurti najron se wo Jignesh ko dekhti...


"Nikku bhaiya, ab se Neeru ko aap nahi datoge, kyunki main iss se pyar karti hun aur ye bhi mujhse pyar karta hai, samjhe tum"….


Meera apni baat kah'kar Neerav ka hath tham lee. Idhar Neerav ki hichki thi jo ek baar aayi, fir to rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Kabhi wo najar ghuma'kar Meera ko to kabhi Jignesh ko dekh raha tha…


Girlfriend-boyfrend ke new trend arthat kaan me chhota sa bluetooth device lagakar 24 ghante phone line sewa ki to baat hi nahi ho rahi. Wo isliye kyunki Neerav bhi apni girlfriend ke sath issi padhatti ke tahat connect tha. Neerav ki najren to Meera aur Jignesh ko dekh rahi thi lekin dimag me gunj sirf Paali ke awaz ki thi... Neerav, Meera ko dhime se kahne laga... "Le lee tune meri.. poora rayta faila dee"…


Udhar, Sia ko le'kar Chitra aur Pranshu hotel ke ek kamre me pahunche. Chitra Pranshu ko wapas se party hall me bhej di aur khud Sia ke pass baith gayi... Chitra pani ka glass Sia ke aage badhate... "Le pani pi le, achha lagega"..


Sia:- Ruko pahle mujhe kuch batana hai..


Chitra:- Kya?


Sia:- Meera ne shadi kar lee..


Chitra:- Kyaaaaa???


Sia:- Abhi itna hi shocked hui. Aage suno...


Chitra ka dil joron se dharakte... "Please ab ye mat kahna please, please, please bhagwan... Meri aasanka galat ho..


Sia:- Tu bilkul sahi soch rahi hai...


Sia ki baat par Chitra ka dil baitha ja raha tha... Dharkane jaise sunn par gayi thi... "Kya Siaaa"..


Sia:- Wahi... Meera ne na... Meera ne...


Chitra:- Heart attack se marwayegi kya... Bol naaa... Itna ghabra kyun rahi hai..


Sia:- Main kya bolun... Som aur Meera ne...


Chitra, wahi pani ka glass apne sir par dalti... "No, nooo, nooooo, noooooo... Kah de ye prank tha... Tu bus kah de ki tum log aaj sabke sir ghumane yahan bulaye the... Iss aat me koi sacchai nahi hai...


Sia:- Meri haalat dekh'kar tumhe lag raha hai ki main jhuth bol rahi hun???


Chitra:- Pagal ho gaya hai wooo.... Hum kya uski shadi Meera se nahi karwate jo usne aisa kaam kiya... Kahan hai wo pagal (Som). Phone laga'kar abhi usse yahan bulao...


Sia:- Thand rakh... Ghar par chal'kar baat karte hain. Aur iss budhiya ko bhi sari baaten pata hai... Som ne jaroor bataya hoga…


Chitra:- Yep... Aaj subah dono maa bete me yahi khichdi pak rahi hogi...


Sia:- Abhi kya karen?


Chitra:- Filhaal isse Som ki reception party samjh'kar enjoy karte hain... Ghar par poora hisab-kitab hoga...


Ye dono bhi niche chale aaye. Niche aane ke baad yahan alag hi scene chal raha tha... Pranshu aur Jignesh, Neerav par chadhe ja rahe the, aur Meera, Neerav ko apne pichhe khadi kar, usse bachane me lagi thi...


Diksha, Pranshu ko ja'kar pakdi, aur Sia, Jignesh ka haanth khinch'kar usse pichhe kari... "Ye kya tamasha chal raha hai yahan"… Diksha unche swar me puchhne lagi...


Jignesh aur Pranshu dono ek sath... "Ye ladka (Neerav) humari Kuku ko dhoka de raha hai. Iski pahle se Paali naam ki ek girlfriend hai fir ke Meera se pyar kaise kar sakta hai..."


Sia, Meera ko ghur'kar dekhti... "Aap dono ko ye baat Meera ne batayi kya?"


Pranshu aur Jignesh ek sath.… "Haan !!!"


Sia:- Matlab dono ke dono akl se paidal ho. Meera kitni natkhat hai ye kya pata nahi dono ko... Dono me se kisi ne jaroor Neerav ke sath kuch aisa kiya hoga jo Meera ko buri lagi hogi aur fir le liya usne badla...


Pranshu, Meera ko ghurte... "Kuku, Sia sach bol rahi hai kya?"


Meera:- Tab se kya main chinies me bol rahi thi. Kah to rahi thi ki jitna waqt aap sab ke sath bita hai, uss se kahin jyada main Neerav, Akansha aur Paali ke sath rahi hun... Fir bhi Nikku bhaiya ne Neerav ko daant diya...


Chitra, ek champagne ke bottol par chammach se toast karti… "Deviyon aur sajjano… Yadi aap logon ki bahas samapt ho gayi ho to kya hum party enjoy kar sakte hain..."


Pranshu:- Haan lekin ye party kis khushi me di ja rahi hai wo to abhi tak bataya hi nahi kisi ne...


Chitra:- Mangalvar ki subah humare naye ghar ka grih prawes hoga... Humare naye ghar jaane ki khushi me aaj ki raat party...


Itna kah'kar Chitra, Pranshu ke hath me champagne ki bottol thama kar usse kholne ke liye kahne lagi... Pranshu bechara bolna chah raha tha, naye ghar ki party aur yahan ghar ke baki log nahi hain.. lekin usse bolne kaun deta hai…


Champagne khuli. Party ka mahol bana aur gaane ki dhun par sabhi jhumne lage... Sia ko dekh'kar to Jignesh bavla hua ja raha tha. Upar se Sia ne sath dance karne ka offer de diya... Fir to wo sari baaten bhul'kar Sia ke sath nachne laga...


Wine ke peg chal rahe the. Party dhire-dhire apne suroor me chalne laga. Sab log party enjoy kar rahe the, issi bich party hall ka darwaja khula aur samne Som aur Lata Mishra...


Jaise ho dono ka aagman hua, Sia aur Chitra ka para apne uffan par tha. Idhar Som itni jyada bhid dekh'kar khud se kahne laga... "Meera ye tumne kya kiya"?


Lata Mishra bhi samne ka najara dekh'kar ek baar to dang rah gayi.… "Beta tera aur teri biwi ka pahnava dekh'kar mujhe lag to nahi raha ki iss shadi ko tum dono raaj rakhna chahte. Filhaal yahan se chalne me hi apni bhalai hai.."


Dono jaldi se uss hall se nikle. Lekin darwaje se 2 kadam aage gaye honge ki dayen kandhe par Chitra to bayen kandhe par Sia ka hath. Som pichhe mud'kar fiki si muskaan dete... "Tum dono yahan kya kar rahe?"…


Pahle dayen gaal par Chitra ka fir bayen gaal par Sia ka ek jordar thappad padne ke baad, dono ek sath shrink me boli... "Abhi to party shuru hui hai"…


"Tum dono to mandir ja rahe the na fir ye party"…. Pichhe se pitaji bhi pahunch gaye aur pahunchte hi sawal karne lage. Som jab najar utha'kar dekha... Mishra ji ke sath Contractor Nurul Hassan, Vyas ke pitaji Pandit Ram Swaroop Shashtri, Aisf ka sasoor bole to Pandit Ram Swaroop Shashtri ke muhbola samdhi Mujib Khan, Padosi Mashroof aur sath me Nirbhay Singh to the hi...


Som, Mishra ji ke itni badi mandli ko dekh'kar.… "Pitaji hum mandir se ho'kar aa rahe hain, lekin aap yahan"..


Pandit Ram Swaroop Shashtri:- Baki baaten to baad me hongi.. lekin in dono (Sia aur Chitra) ne tumhe thappad kyun maara.…


Sia:- Kya hai na uncle ji ye humare pyar jatane ka tarika hai.. Jab hum dono ka pyar over flow karta hai to aise hi dikhta hai... Kyun Som tum bhi kuch bolo..


Som:- Pandit ji aap bhi aaj apne bete ke sath gala gila karenge kya? Lagta hai wo bhi party manane aaya hai...


Som ki baat sun'kar sabhi Shastri Nagar wasiyon ki najar Vyas par... Ek aur aashiq ban sanwar ke nikla tha apne mehbooba ko rijhane...

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Aise look me tha jise dekh har kisi ko lag jaye ki banda tabiyat se taiyar ho'kar kisi ko rijhane nikla hai. Upar se Shashtri ji ke samne hi Vyas nikla tha, lekin tab usne aam sa dikhne walaa poshak pahna hua tha aur chehre par cream powder bhi nahi laga tha... Kul mila'kar Shashtri ji ki najar jab Vyas par gayi, unki aankhen badi ho gayi... Upar se Ram Swaroop Shashtri ji ke doston ke comment... "Pandit ji lagta hai Nirali se pahle Vyas ki shadi ho jayegi"…


Mamla yahin khatm ho tab na... Idhar Shahstri ji ka dimag ghuma tha to udhar Mishra ji apni karastani sunane pahunche apni patni Lata Mishra ke pass aur phusphusate huye kah gaye...


"Aaj mera beta (Som) aise taiyar hua, ki lagaa koi ladki wala mil jaye to aaj hi apne bete ko shadi ke liye dikha dun... Aur dekho mujhe Pandit ji ki beti Nirali pasand aa gayi... Nirali ki maa apne beti ke sath thodi der me humare yahan pahunch jayegi aur hum log bhi 2 peg laga'kar wahan pahunchenge… Yadi Nirali ko Som pasand aa jata hai to aaj hi sab final"


Syappe... Syappe... Aur syappe... Aaj ka sajna-swarna to jaise har couple ke liye shrap sa ho gaya tha. Unke roop ko dekh'kar tarif to hoti lekin poora rayta aise failte ja raha tha mano aaj to rayta-barish me sabke hot aur dashing look ka koi mol hi nahi. Mehfil badi si thi jisme dher sare log, aur kiski kitni band bajegi kaun jane...

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Ishq ki mauj mein aa
Aaja behne ke liye
Tu zaroori, zaroori sa hai
Mujhko zinda rehne ke liye
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Kya hi rayta phailaya hai waah padh kar maja aa gaya.
Well situation kaphi complicated hogayi hai ab dekhna ye hai ki ye rayta kaise simatega ya phir phailata hi jayega who knows (Apart from nainu bhai).
Vaise Meera ko dekh kar lagta nahi hai ki vo apani sadi ko secret rakhana chahati hai. Lagta hai use officially Mrs Malhotra banne ki kuchh jyada hi jaldi hai.

Ab to lagta hai ki Som aur Meera ke sath-sath Vyas aur Sia ki bhi pol sabhi ke samne khulne wali hai.
Kair! Dekhate hain Meera ki ye party aage aur kya rang lati hai.

Fantastic Update brother.
Really enjoyed it.

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट था पार्टी वाला । बिल्कुल नेचुरल कामेडी । इस अपडेट को लिखने के लिए न जाने कितने अपडेट्स लिखने पड़े होंगे ! न जाने कितनी प्लानिंग की होगी आपने ! न जाने कितने घटनाओं को आपस में पिरोया होगा !

ह्रिषिकेश मुखर्जी की फ़िल्मों की तरह एक ऐसा शमां बांधा आपने कि एक अलग ही फिलिंग आने लगी थी । बहुत , बहुत , बहुत ज्यादा कठीन होता है नेचुरल कामेडी प्रस्तुत करना । एक्टर ही नहीं राइटर्स के पसीने छूट जाते हैं । लेकिन आपने इतनी खूबसूरती और सहजता से इसे दर्शाया है कि कुछ कहते नहीं बन रहा है । आउटस्टैंडिंग ।

मीरा ने सच में कमाल कर दिया । उसकी बातें ही नहीं उसकी हरकतें भी हर क्षण हमें आश्चर्यचकित कर देती है । पहले किर्ति के सर पर गर्म काफी उड़ेल देना फिर जम कर तमाचे लगा देना और उसके बाद उसकी बोल्ड बातें ... मेरे तो होशो-हवास उड़ा दिया इस लड़की ने ।

यह लड़की तो सिया पर भी भारी पड़ने लगी है जो कहानी की प्रमुख किरदार है । वैसे तो मीरा भी प्रमुख किरदार है लेकिन अब सिया पर वो भारी पड़ने लगी है ।
जिग्नेश को भी अच्छा खासा उल्लू बना दिया था उसने । और वही क्यों सोम साहब को भी दिन में तारे दिखने के लिए मजबूर कर दिया । बाकी लोगों का कहना ही क्या !

दो पैरेलल लव स्टोरी चल रही है और दोनों लव बर्डस का एक दूसरे के साथ कनेक्शन भी है और सच कहूं तो दोनों की लवस्टोरी पढ़ने में मजा आ रहा है । बहुत खुबसूरत लिख रहे हैं नैन भाई !

एक किरदार के बारे में कन्फ्यूज़न है । चित्रा । कौन है यह लड़की ?

सभी अपडेट्स बेहद ही खूबसूरत थे । एवरी थिंग वाज आउटस्टैंडिंग । चाहे किसिंग सीन हो , चाहे मीरा और सिया का उग्र रूप हो , चाहे बीच बीच में थ्रीलर हो , चाहे रोमांस हो और या चाहे कामेडी हो । बहुत ही बेहतरीन लिखा है आपने ।

 

[Chinturocky]

बेहतरीन अपडेट,
क्या माहौल बनाया है,
सब असमंजस में हैं, और देखना है कि किसकी कैसे बैंड बजती हैं।

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

maja aa gaya ,,aaj to sachme bada wala rayta fail gaya ..
pehle to som ne mandir jaane ka bahana banaya jo mishra ji ki najar me galat tha ,aur mandir jaane ke liye itna sajna sawarna ..

meera ne to bada kaand kar diya jo sabko invite kar diya ,jignesh ko bhi saath le aayi .

 

[Monty cool]

बिचारा सोम बिन बात फटके खा रहा है और अभी तो पार्टी सुरु हुई है और आज तो मिश्राइन के भी लग गए क्योंकि सोम के झूठ मे उसका साथ जो दिया है और अब लगता है सबको सच पता चल ही जायेगा की सोम और मीरा की शादी हो चुकी है

और इधर मिश्रा जी अलग ही सोम की लेने पे तुले है और सोनी पे सुहागा व्यास के पापा भी साथ है तो अब सोम के साथ साथ व्यास की भी लग गई

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

sab ek dusro ko dekhkar shocked ho rahe hai .
meera ne kuch ulta hi kar diya ye batakar ki party sia ki hai ,kisiko lagta hai party sia ki hai kisiko meera ki lagti hai .

sia ke upar wakai bomb gira diya meera ne usko bhabhi bulane ka kehkar .
dhire dhire sab padhar rahe hai party me .sia ne chitra ko bhi bata diya som aur meera ke baare me jisse wo bhi shock ho gayi .som ke dono gaal laal kar diye aur ye pyar overflow hone se hota hai .

vyas ko bhi dekh liya hero bane huye sabne ,aur shastri ji bhi achambhe me pad gaye ki ghar se to normal nikla tha par yaha uska roop kuch aur hi hai .

mishra ji to nirali se shadi ki baat karne ki soch rahe hai par unko kaha pata ki som ne kabki shadi kar li .

dekhte hai aur kitne logo ko yaha aakar surprise milta hai .