Sci-FI Treasure ~~ "The Invisible Hunt" {Completed}

[harshit1890]

3.5 Saal se kahani ki tayari kar raha tha, Pichla platform chhuta to kabhi likhne ke barre mein socha nahi par jab kahani ka plot bana aur corona ka asar dunia mein badha to zindagi ki bhag daudh se kuch rahat mili aur mene is kahani ko sabke bich lane ka faisla kiya. Ek aisa chetra tha jisme mene abhi tak koi kahani nahi likhi thi aur ye meri lekhan ki ek akhri script aur genre hai jise mein kosish karunga ki ache se likh sakun. Umeed karunga kuch purane sathi yahan milenge aur kuch naye judhenge.

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[Ammienida]

Ye to padh chuka hu..:lptpot:

 

[Kiraak Hyderabadi]

Nice story bhai.
Behad shandar tarike se likha hai.

 

[harshit1890]

Nice story bhai.
Behad shandar tarike se likha hai.

Thanks

 

[harshit1890]

Where is moderator??
It is important.
Thank.

 

[Ristrcted]

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[The_InnoCent]

Harshit is a brand name and treasure story is a masterpiece of that brand. Incredible, amazing, unimaginable and mind-blowing story. A story that kept the mind engrossed till the end and did not let the readers reach any conclusion. The treasure was nothing but an incredible part of the time loop in which the same person traveled with two personalities.

Aakhir kaise itna kuch soch lete ho bhai?? I cannot express in words how much this story confused me and how much it shakes my mind.....Unbelievable harshit bhai. Aisi masterpiece story likhne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya aur aise branded writer ko koti koti pranaam

Kabhi kabhi kuch cheeze achhe ke liye hoti hain. Do din se meri tabiyat kharaab hai aur is vajah se maine job se chhutti le rakhi hai...socha bed par lete huye xf ke kisi writer ki story read ki jaye aur yakeen maaniye mere zahen me sabse pahle aapka hi naam aaya. Bas uske baad aapke signature me ja kar treasure story par click kiya aur padhna shuru kar diya. Nahi jaanta tha ki ye story mujhe itna zyada uljha kar rakh degi...lekin aakhir ke updates padhne ke baad jab treasure ka asal matlab samjha to dil se bas yahi awaaz nikli....what a story and what a writer. Kasam se dil khush ho gaya. Zahen me ek khayaal ubhra ki kya isi liye meri tabiyat kharaab huyi thi taaki main harshit bhai ki is masterpiece story ko padh saku??? Ye sochte hi main muskura utha


Akshad ne jab pratiksha se vikrant ko hire karne par zor diya tha tab mujhe laga tha vikrant me yakeenan koi to khoobi hogi lekin vikrant ka tharkipana dekh anayaas hi muskura uthta tha aur socha ye kaisa Banda hai.?? Matlab kya gazab banda tha yaar...pratiksha ko apni ashleel harkato se kitna frustrate kiya usne. Main us case ke aakhir tak nahi samajh paaya ki aakhir vikrant aisa kya karega akshad ko bachane ke liye??? Uske baad jab ye pata chala ki asal me usi ne to akshad ko us case me fansaya tha tab ye bhi aakhir tak samajh me nahi aaya ki aakhir akshad ko fansa kar jail me daalne ke peeche uska kya maksad tha? Kahne ka matlab ye ki chaahe akshad wala matter ho ya treasure wala jab tak aapne khud nahi bataya tab tak samajh me aaya hi nahi ki vikrant aakhir chaahta kya tha? Security agency, yaha tak ki khud CBI wale bhi kavya ke asal kaatil ka pata nahi laga sake aur end me akshad case se bari bhi ho gaya. Ye saara kissa bahut hi zyada zabardast tha aur bahut hi zyada dimaag ko hila dene wala bhi. Kya planning thi harshit bhai bole to master stroke. Kahi se koi bhi leakage nahi aur aisa tabhi hota hai jab likhne wala aapke jaisa master mind ho...speechless

Ek banda us stone ki vajah se time travel kar 1985 me pahuch gaya. Use apna pichhla kuch bhi yaad nahi rahta. Neelam naam ki ek ladki uski life me accidentally aati hai aur fir aage chal kar usi se wo shadi kar leta hai. Kaagaz ka wo tukda hi saare fasaad ki jad tha jiski vajah se wo uske bare me janne ke liye jununi ho kar idhar udhar bhatakta hai. Neelam ke dwara usko ek beta hota hai jiska naam wo khud vikrant rakhta hai. Sawaal hai ki vikrant hi kyo? Well ek baar fir se wahi kissa dohraya jata hai jo pahle bhi 69 baar dohraya ja chuka tha. Neelam ke liye thoda bura laga. Matlab ki jisne use sahara diya aur jiske dwara uski har tarah se help huyi usi ko wo bhula baitha tha apni khoj ke chalte. Khair niyati ko shayad yahi manjoor tha kyoki wo stone shayad usse har baar yahi karwa raha tha. Aage chal kar use pata chalta hai ki wo alok nahi balki khud vikrant hi hai jo 70vi baar time travel kar 1985 me aa gaya tha aur waha se uski life fir se shuru ho gayi thi. End me jab wo present me aata hai to mutth maarta hua dikhta hai aur akhbaar me use president ki beti ke katl ki khabar chhapi huyi milti hai. Ye chakkar bada hi gazab ka tha. I think us khabar ke chalte aage fir se yahi kissa dohraya jane wala tha lekin story end ho gayi....sach kahu to yaha tak padhne ke baad apna dimaag hi hang ho chuka tha harshit bhai...zahen me sawaal ubhra ki itni zabardast imagination koi kaise kar sakta hai lekin harshit naam ek brand hai...har sawaal ka ek hi jawaab harshit bhai....the great person

Kahani ke bare me kahne ke liye to bahut kuch hai man me lekin sochta hu ki kahi mere kisi shabd se aisi masterpiece kahani ki garima aur shaan me dhabba na lag jaye. Is liye itna hi kahuga ki is kahani ne ek baar fir saabit kar diya ki harshit name ek brand hai aur branded name jo bhi likhega wo brand ke siva kuch nahi ho sakta

Waise ek sawaal hai....Akshad ke revenge ka kya hua? Jaisa ki aapne story me bataya tha ki akshad ne pratiksha se kaha tha ki vikrant ne jo kuch uske sath kiya hai uska wo badla lega aur iske liye usne kisi assassin ko hire karne ki baat kahi thi. Uske baad wo treasure ki khoj me nikal padte hain. Yaani akshad treasure ko vikrant se khud kabja lena chaahta tha. Khair mujhe lagta hai ki akshad ko is sabka mauka hi nahi mila hoga kyoki har baar time travel ka chakkar ho jata tha aur har baar shayad akshad yahi sochta tha. Well once again thanks harshit bhai itni khubsurat kahani likhne ke liye...aur ummid karta hu ki is tarah ki kahani se aap aage bhi hame rubaru karayenge

 

[Babasarkar]

" tumne sirf ek dabbe par likhe saal ki wajah se mujhe fansa diya jabki tumhe ye nahi pata ki vo sach hai ya juth ? " akshad chid-chidate hue bola.

" sirf yahi ek clue tha mere pas jo us jagah se mila tha aur dad ko khojne mein madad kar sakta tha " vikrant ne uske sawal ka jawab diya aur shant ho gaya.

" tumhara dimag theek nahi hai " akshad chillaya " tumhe lagta hai ki un books mein kuch hoga bevakuf ho tum "

" lagta hai tumne meri baat shayad dhang se samjhi nahi " vikrant ek dum shant tha " jawab books mein nahi balki us basement mein hai " vikrant chup hua.

" basement mein hai matlab ? "

" Jaisa mene tumhe bataya ki mughal ka akhri shashak Aurangjeb usne ek khufia jagah ka nirman kiya tha taki vo apni kitabein usme rakh sake, zahir hai kufai banane ke piche uska koi maksad hoga " vikrant uski taraf jhuka " Akshad, tumhe wahan sirf books nahi milegi, balki vo kufia jagah milegi jise usne kuch chupane ke liye banaya tha aur vo jagah isi basement mein hai "

" tum ye baat kaise jante ho ? "

" kyun ki us kamre ka deisgn khud aurangjeb ne banaya tha aur vo nahi chahta tha ki jo chizen vo vahan rakh raha hai uske bare mein kisi ko pata chale, iska matlab samjhte ho? "

" agar aisa hai to usme kuch bhi ho sakta hai koi book, map ? " akshad vikrant ki baat samjhte hi bola. Vikrant ne hami bharte hue use bataya ki vo sahi hai.

" 1 mahina hai tumhare pas " vikrant ne akshad se kaha aur vo soch mein padh gaya. Uske dimag mein tarah-tarah ke sawal chal rahe the aur unhi mein se ek sawal uske zehan mein aya.

" tum chahte ho ki mei us map ko dhundun aur tumhe dun aur yahan pade-pade mar jaun? " akshad ka sawal khud ke liye tha. Vo janta tha ki ye kahani vikrant ke matlab ke liye bani hai aur vo bas use istemal kar raha hai lekin vikrant janta tha ki ye sawal ayega.

" agar tumhe marne ke liye hi chhodna hota to tumhe bachata kyun ? " vikrant ne phir sawal par apni baat roki aur aage batane laga " tumhe lagta hai ki vo ittefak tha jisne tumhe us chair par marne se bachaya ? " usne dusre sawal par baat khatam ki " Ghani aur shinde ka naam to suna hi hoga ? " ye sawal akshad ke liye tha. Dono ka naam sun akshad chaunk pada.

" un dono ka mere bachne se kya matlab ? "

" Shinde aur Ghani dono mil kar kaam karte the "

" the ? " akshad ne vikrant ko bich mein roka.

" han kyun ki ab vo mar chuke hain "

" what ? " akshad chaunka " kisne mara unhe ? " sawal par vikrant ne jawab nahi dia aur akshad ko jawab ki jarurat nahi padhi vo vikrant ka chehra dekh samajh gaya.

" un dono ko tumne maar dala, kyun ? "

" mene? " vikrant jawab dekar khilli wali hansi hansa " nahi akshad unhe unke karma ne maara mei to sirf apna dharam nibha raha tha. Mei janta hun tum shocked ho kyun ki Ghani hi tumhare drugs ko hindustan ki zameen par supply kiya karta tha aur vo insan shinde hi tha jisne tumhe Standard club mein use milwaya " vikrant ne akshad ka chitta khol kar uske samne rakha to uske chehre ki rangat badal gayi. " fikar mat karo meri dilchaspi tumhare kaam mein nahi hai aur mene un dono ko is wajah se nahi mara. Maarne ki piche ki ek kahani hai sunna chahoge ? " akshad kuch nahi bola.

" Jaisa ki tumhe malum hai ki Ghani drug ke sath human trafficking ka dhanda bhi karta tha, desh ke alag-alag hisson se vo ladkiyun ko utha kar dunia ke alag-alag shehron mein bech dia karta tha unme usne Sharda naam ki ek aurat uthai aur use dunia ke kisi kone mein bech dia " vo ek pal chup hua. Gusse ka ubal uske man mein uchalne laga. " choti beti thi uski lekin us bachi ko aaj tak ye pata nahi chala ki uski maa kahan gayi, is jaise na jane kitne hi pariwaron ko aur un ladkiyun ki zindagi kharab kar chuka tha vo admi " usne ek sans khinchi " aur jante ho Ghani ko sharda kisne lakar di thi ? " akshad jawab janta tha.

" shinde ne, lekin sirf itna hi nahi usne sharda ke sath ek hafte tak uska balatkar kiya aur phir use ghani ko bech dia. Ab tum batao ki aise logon ki kya saza honi chahie ? " akshad phir kuch nahi bola " isliye mene ghani ko mara aur uska ilzam shinde par lag gaya jise ghani ke admiyun ne kutte ki tarah kaat dala. " vikrant ek pal shant hua aur akshad ke man mein chal rahe sawal ko samjhte hue bola.

" Ab tum soch rahe hoge ki is kahani se tumhare bachne ka kya matlab, haina ? " vikrant ne uske man ki baat pakad li thi aur vo akshad ke chehre par saaf dikh raha tha. " Har insan ki ek kamjor nas hoti hai aur mujhe wo kamjor nas khojni thi. Isliye jab mene tumhe yahan bhejne ka plan banaya tab mene us kamjor nas ko dhunda. Aur jab ye suchna mene is officer ko di ki shinde aur ghani dono mar chuke hain " vikrant ne bahar khade officer ki taraf ishara kiya. Akshad ne ek pal us officer ki taraf dekha phir apni nazrein samne kar li " tab us raat isne hi us chuhe ko bizzli ki taron mein chhoda jiski wajah se tum bache " vikrant chup hua aur phir bola " isliye Mr. Akshad Walia tumhari kahani mein koi ittefak nahi hai, tum pichle 6 saalon se wahi kar rahe ho jo mei tumse karwana chahta tha aur abhi bhi wahi karoge jo mei tumse chahta hun " vikrant ek sans mein bolta hua chup aur akshad ko ghurne laga. Akshad ko pura khel samajh aa gaya kyun ki ye wahi officer tha jo use Virkant se milwane ke liye yahan lata tha, jail mein vikrant ki parchi bhi usi ne di thi. " kisi ki zindagi mein acha karo to vo tumhara ehsan jarur utarta hai mr.walia " vikrant ki baat ne akshad ko uski soch se bahar nikala lekin vo kuch bola nahi.

" 1 mahina hai tumhare pas tab tak tumne vo nahi khoja jo mei tumse cha raha hun to CBI ko sab sabut mil jayenge aur khel khatam " vikrant apni jagah se khada hua.

" yani tum mujhe ek mahine ki talwar par latka rahe ho "

" nahi mr. walia mei apni ki hui planning mein ched-chad nahi karta. Ek mahine ke andar CBI ko vo jawab mil jayenge jise ye case aur tumhari kismat dono palat jayegi "

" kya tum ye keh rahe ho ki mei chhut jaunga ? " akshad hairani mein uski taraf jhuka lekin vikrant ne jawab nahi dia. " aur agar mei tumhari madad na karun tab ? "

" tab bhi kuch nahi badlega lekin ek baat tumhe kehna chahunga, mei jitna apne dad ki khoj mein nikla hun utni hi shidadt se us invisible treasure ko bhi " vikrant ek pal ke liye chup hua aur phir bola " tumne aaj tak jo kaam kiye hain uske hissab se tum bilkul theek jagah ho lekin kehte hain na hamare karam hamari pehchan banate hain shayad tumhare pas yahi ek mauka hai " vikrant kamre se jane laga lekin akshad ne apni baat se rok liya.

" Devraj dutta ko tumne kese mara vikrant ? kyun mara ye mein jaan chuka hun par kaise ? " akshad ki baat sun vikrant ghuma. " tum ise jhutla nahi sakte. Mei janta hun tumne hi use mara hai "

" tumhare sawalon ka jawab mei jarur dunga par us din jis din hum bahar milenge " itna keh kar vo jane laga par use kuch yaad aya " 15 din mein ek din tumhe apni jail se 30 minute ke liye nikala jayega us din mei tumhara intezar karunga "

" aur agar mei nahi mila to ? " vikrant akshad ki baat ka jawab diye bina kamre se nikal gaya aur nikalte hi vo Pratiksha se takra gaya.

" did i miss something ? " pratiksha ne dhayan nahi diya ki vikrant ka hath uske sine par hi hai.

" not a bit " vikrant ka jawab sun vo use ghurne lagi aur phir uska dhayan apni chatiyun par gaya jispar vikrant ka hath tha " you " vo chillati use pehle vikrant ne apna hath hataya aur apna lund pajame mein adjust karta hua vahan se chal dia. Pratiksha gusse se aag babuli hui aur andar jane lagi lekin officer ne use rok dia.

Vikrant jail ke bahar khada angadiyan le raha tha tab use pratiksha ate hue dikhi vo uske piche chal diya aur jaise hi pratiksha gaddi mein baithi dusra darwaja khol vikrant bhi gaddi mein ja baitha.

" hey, what the fuck ? out " pratiksha usko dekhte hi chillai " i said out "

" lift mere ghar tak " vikrant aram se baithe hue bola.

" are you out of your fucking mind ? " pratiksha chillai par ise jada kuch kehti use pehle vikrant ne bich mein rok dia.

" Kishore mishra ke barre mein janna nahi chahogi ? "

Nice story

 

[harshit1890]

Harshit is a brand name and treasure story is a masterpiece of that brand. Incredible, amazing, unimaginable and mind-blowing story. A story that kept the mind engrossed till the end and did not let the readers reach any conclusion. The treasure was nothing but an incredible part of the time loop in which the same person traveled with two personalities.

Aakhir kaise itna kuch soch lete ho bhai?? I cannot express in words how much this story confused me and how much it shakes my mind.....Unbelievable harshit bhai. Aisi masterpiece story likhne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya aur aise branded writer ko koti koti pranaam

Kabhi kabhi kuch cheeze achhe ke liye hoti hain. Do din se meri tabiyat kharaab hai aur is vajah se maine job se chhutti le rakhi hai...socha bed par lete huye xf ke kisi writer ki story read ki jaye aur yakeen maaniye mere zahen me sabse pahle aapka hi naam aaya. Bas uske baad aapke signature me ja kar treasure story par click kiya aur padhna shuru kar diya. Nahi jaanta tha ki ye story mujhe itna zyada uljha kar rakh degi...lekin aakhir ke updates padhne ke baad jab treasure ka asal matlab samjha to dil se bas yahi awaaz nikli....what a story and what a writer. Kasam se dil khush ho gaya. Zahen me ek khayaal ubhra ki kya isi liye meri tabiyat kharaab huyi thi taaki main harshit bhai ki is masterpiece story ko padh saku??? Ye sochte hi main muskura utha


Akshad ne jab pratiksha se vikrant ko hire karne par zor diya tha tab mujhe laga tha vikrant me yakeenan koi to khoobi hogi lekin vikrant ka tharkipana dekh anayaas hi muskura uthta tha aur socha ye kaisa Banda hai.?? Matlab kya gazab banda tha yaar...pratiksha ko apni ashleel harkato se kitna frustrate kiya usne. Main us case ke aakhir tak nahi samajh paaya ki aakhir vikrant aisa kya karega akshad ko bachane ke liye??? Uske baad jab ye pata chala ki asal me usi ne to akshad ko us case me fansaya tha tab ye bhi aakhir tak samajh me nahi aaya ki aakhir akshad ko fansa kar jail me daalne ke peeche uska kya maksad tha? Kahne ka matlab ye ki chaahe akshad wala matter ho ya treasure wala jab tak aapne khud nahi bataya tab tak samajh me aaya hi nahi ki vikrant aakhir chaahta kya tha? Security agency, yaha tak ki khud CBI wale bhi kavya ke asal kaatil ka pata nahi laga sake aur end me akshad case se bari bhi ho gaya. Ye saara kissa bahut hi zyada zabardast tha aur bahut hi zyada dimaag ko hila dene wala bhi. Kya planning thi harshit bhai bole to master stroke. Kahi se koi bhi leakage nahi aur aisa tabhi hota hai jab likhne wala aapke jaisa master mind ho...speechless

Ek banda us stone ki vajah se time travel kar 1985 me pahuch gaya. Use apna pichhla kuch bhi yaad nahi rahta. Neelam naam ki ek ladki uski life me accidentally aati hai aur fir aage chal kar usi se wo shadi kar leta hai. Kaagaz ka wo tukda hi saare fasaad ki jad tha jiski vajah se wo uske bare me janne ke liye jununi ho kar idhar udhar bhatakta hai. Neelam ke dwara usko ek beta hota hai jiska naam wo khud vikrant rakhta hai. Sawaal hai ki vikrant hi kyo? Well ek baar fir se wahi kissa dohraya jata hai jo pahle bhi 69 baar dohraya ja chuka tha. Neelam ke liye thoda bura laga. Matlab ki jisne use sahara diya aur jiske dwara uski har tarah se help huyi usi ko wo bhula baitha tha apni khoj ke chalte. Khair niyati ko shayad yahi manjoor tha kyoki wo stone shayad usse har baar yahi karwa raha tha. Aage chal kar use pata chalta hai ki wo alok nahi balki khud vikrant hi hai jo 70vi baar time travel kar 1985 me aa gaya tha aur waha se uski life fir se shuru ho gayi thi. End me jab wo present me aata hai to mutth maarta hua dikhta hai aur akhbaar me use president ki beti ke katl ki khabar chhapi huyi milti hai. Ye chakkar bada hi gazab ka tha. I think us khabar ke chalte aage fir se yahi kissa dohraya jane wala tha lekin story end ho gayi....sach kahu to yaha tak padhne ke baad apna dimaag hi hang ho chuka tha harshit bhai...zahen me sawaal ubhra ki itni zabardast imagination koi kaise kar sakta hai lekin harshit naam ek brand hai...har sawaal ka ek hi jawaab harshit bhai....the great person

Kahani ke bare me kahne ke liye to bahut kuch hai man me lekin sochta hu ki kahi mere kisi shabd se aisi masterpiece kahani ki garima aur shaan me dhabba na lag jaye. Is liye itna hi kahuga ki is kahani ne ek baar fir saabit kar diya ki harshit name ek brand hai aur branded name jo bhi likhega wo brand ke siva kuch nahi ho sakta

Waise ek sawaal hai....Akshad ke revenge ka kya hua? Jaisa ki aapne story me bataya tha ki akshad ne pratiksha se kaha tha ki vikrant ne jo kuch uske sath kiya hai uska wo badla lega aur iske liye usne kisi assassin ko hire karne ki baat kahi thi. Uske baad wo treasure ki khoj me nikal padte hain. Yaani akshad treasure ko vikrant se khud kabja lena chaahta tha. Khair mujhe lagta hai ki akshad ko is sabka mauka hi nahi mila hoga kyoki har baar time travel ka chakkar ho jata tha aur har baar shayad akshad yahi sochta tha. Well once again thanks harshit bhai itni khubsurat kahani likhne ke liye...aur ummid karta hu ki is tarah ki kahani se aap aage bhi hame rubaru karayenge

I read ur revuew 3 times ye dekhne ke liye ki apne kuch chhoda hoga.. lekin aisa hua hi nahi... apne review ko ek sakchep mein likh kar dil prafulit kar diya bhai... This is one of the best review this story is having right now. I am speechless literally... I thought ki ab ye kahani purani ho chuki hai. Aur page list se hatt gayi hogi par kai baar aap jaise readers dastak dekar kahani ko wapis se zinda kar dete hai. Aur jaise aapki bimari apko yahan le ayi mein khud bmar WFH kar rha tha aur leave par tha Par apki bimari apko yahan kinch layi that is why i always say ki kisi ko story par bulane ki jarurat nahi, kahani aisi ho ki khud ba khud log pade and you have set an example... Bhai brand reader hota hai jo kahani mein apna samay dekar usko darshata hai...

Scnd part laya tha is kahani ka mein.. par samay kam milne ki wajah se vo adhuri reh gayi.. Filal Girls Hostel puri hui to usko dubara se zinda karunga... Vikrant wapis ayega

Thank you so much bhai... Sahi mein dil prafulit ho gaya apkareview padh kar... Is kahani se judi kuch memories flash ho gayi wapis se.. Akhir lockdown mein jo likhi thi... Thanks a lot and i wish you will be well Tc...

 

[harshit1890]

Nice story

Thanks bhai

 

[The_InnoCent]

Scnd part laya tha is kahani ka mein.. par samay kam milne ki wajah se vo adhuri reh gayi.. Filal Girls Hostel puri hui to usko dubara se zinda karunga... Vikrant wapis ayega

Girls hostel ke kuch update padhe the maine lekin fir busy ho gaya jisse aage padhne ka mauka hi nahi mila. Waise aapki stories ek hi baar me saari padhna majboori ban jaati hai kyoki iske alawa koi chara hi nahi rahta...yaani readers ko aisa uljha ke rakh dete ho Well time mila to Girls hostel ko ek hi baar me padh ke complete karuga.

Treasure ke 2nd part ka besabri se intzaar rahega bhai...aisi kahani yaha aapke alawa koi dusra kabhi nahi likh sakega. Aaj kal to waise bhi classic wala trend khatam kar diya hai logo ne....ab to bas har taraf ghapaghap hi chalu hai