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thodi der me bittu bhi taiyar hoke niche aa gaya or phir hum sab ne sath me khana khaya or phir me or bittu ghar se nikal gaye bittu ke flat ki taraf....

thodi der me hum dono bittu ke flat ke under bethe huve the...

Bittu:-
Le bhosdike cigrate piyega kya?..me to itne din ki bharpay karne wala hu.....

Lucky:-
laa behenchod...mujhe bhi pini hai cigrate...

bittu mujhe ek cigrate deta hai or liter bhi me cigrate jala ke kus lagane lagta hu or bittu ki taraf dhyan diya to saala kabir singh ki tarah ek sath 2 cigrate jala ke pi raha tha....

Me:-
abe bc...marna hai kya ek sath do kyu khis raha hai....saale jyada talab mat laga...nacha karna achi baat nahi hai be....

Bittu: -
abhe kuch nahi hota or itne din ciggrate nahi mili thi to aaj uska bharpay kar raha hu...waise bhi ab chudai ki bhi jaroorat pad gay hai..sala college me chodne layak mal patana padega....

me:-
Tu nahi sudharne wala...abe prachi didi ke sath chudai to ki thi tune itne din tak...3,4 din hi huve hai bina chudai kiye huve tujhe or abhi se bechain ho gaya bhosdike...

bittu:-
abe sale mujhe chudakkad bol raha hai be...sala tu school me roj medam ki chudai karta tha sala ek din bhi bina chudai kiye huve raha tha tu...?

Me: -

abe woh to medam hi roj chudai karvati thi to me kya karta mana bhi to nahi kar sakta tha...

bittu:-
abe maje to tu bhi bahot karta tha na..or vo apni class ki lakdi thi na kya name tha..? ...haa rima..usko bhi bahot choda tune sale...

Me:-
Vo to khud ek chudakkad lakdi thi...ek bar mere lund se chud jane ke bad mere lund ki deewani ho gay or phir to jab bhi moka milta washroom me bula ke chudva leti thi...

Bittu:-
tu us time to bahot chudai karta phirta tha ab kaise control karta hai apne lund ko be

me:-
mujhe training me apne aap par control karna bhi sikhaya gaya hai or kisi ko kaise out of control karna hai ye bhi sikhaya hai...kabhi aisa time bhi aata hai ki dusman ladki ya orat ho to have sedeul kar ke bhi mar sakti hai ya koi hame sex ki goli khia kar kuch galat bhi karva sakta hai is liye mene aisi cheezo ko apne upar havi na ho is liye uski poori training li hai...naa jane kon kon se enjection lagate the roj to ab mujhpur kisi bhi cheez ka nacha nahi hota...

bittu:-
Ye to achi baat hai...aage teri hepl karegi ye training bhi...

Me:-
Vo sab chod or ye bata ki prachi didi ke sath sex karne se pehle kya karta tha... mujhe itna to malum hai ki tu uske pehle bhi chudai karta hi hoga...to bata or kon hai jiske sath sex kiya hai?

Bittu:-
sale bahot intelegint ho gaya hai tu... to sun isi building me niche wale flor par ek bhabhi hai..uska husband job par chala jata hai subhahse to raat ko let aata hai or uska lund bhi chota hai or 2min me jhad jata hai to bhabhi pyasi reh jati hai to mujhe line de rahi thi to mene bhi moke ka fayda utha ke pata liya or chod liya tab se uski jab bhi moka milta hai thukai kar deta hu....abhi vo akeli hi hogi bula lu kya..? Sath me chudai karenge..

Me:-
abe vo mujhe aise hi chudai karne degi kya?...

Bittu:-
bahot garam mal hai bhabhi bhai...thoda natak karegi par man jayegi..bahot din se chudai nahi ki mene uski is liye...

Me:-
Nahi bc.. majbur kar ke fayda nahi uthana...sirf use bat karna agar wo apni marji se sex karvana chahe to hi bulana...

Bittu:-
okk...me baat karta hu...

phir bittu call karta hai us bhabhi ko or baat karne lagta hai...or thodi der me call cut karke mere pass aata hai...

Bittu:-
abe man gay hai...mene bol diya hai ki mera friend sath me he use bhi sex karna hai kya tum karne ko taiyar ho? To usne thodi der sochne ke baad haa kar diya hai 10 min me wo uper apne room me aa rahi hai..

Me:-

thik hai phir to ek saal bad sex karne ko mil raha hai to aaj to uski jam kar thukai karunga...

Bittu:-
bc aaj tujhe apna mal de raha hu chudai karne to kabhi mujhe bhi koi mal patai to shere karna bhe..

Me:-
haa be koi mal set hogi to shere kar lunga abhi to tere mal ka bend bajana hai... wiase dono ka le to legi na?

Bittu:-
6 month se uski chudai kar raha hu me uski chut or gand ka bhosda bana diya hai mene to aaram se le legi..tu tension mat le..agar nahi jel pay dono ka to me side me hat jaunga tu kar lena chudai okk ab to khus...

Me:-
okk..
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wahi dusri jagah par jo ek city se bahar jungle ilake me ek gufa thi uske under dhananjay ka hadda tha khufya waha par 500 lakdiya under kidnap kar rakhi thi or un sab ko ek jali wali ked me pur rakha tha or waha par dhananjay or uske aadmi ek room me bethe baat kar rahe the..

dhananjay:-
kal in sab lakdiyo ko ek Turner me bhar ke ×××× is jagha par le jana hai waha se jahaj me sift kar dena or lout ana okk..

Aadmi:-
sir..waha tak to hum pohcha denge in lakdiyo ko par jahaz me kon le jayega...?

dhananjay: -
waha se jahaz me boss ke aadmi hai wo unhe videsh le jayege is liye hamara kam sirf un tak ladkiya pahocha na hai okk..

Aadmi:-
okk sir..

Dhananjay sab ko samja ke waha se nikal jata hai....
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Wahi saher ke har ek police station me ladkiyo ke kidnap hone ki report likhva ja rahi thi pichle 3 dino me har police station me yahi complen ho rahi thi...or acp aditi ki police station me bhi yahi chal raha tha unho ne bhi har jagah chanbhin kari par ladkiyo ka koi pata nahi chala kisne kidnap kiya ye bhi pata nahi chala is liye acp aditi bhi Pareshan thi uper se order aa rahe the ki jaldi ladkiyo ke bare me pata karo aise... is liye acp aditi abhi apni office me bethi yahi sab soch rahi thi...

acp aditi:-
inspector..kuch pata chala..? Koi clue mila ya nahi..?

acp aditi ke office me abhi ek inspector aaya use acp aditi ye sab puch rahi thi..

inspector:-
Nahi madem kuch pata nahi chala...lagta hai full planing ke sath night me kidnapping huvi hai...is liye kuch pata nahi chal raha...

Acp aditi:-
Lagta hai iske piche koi bahot bada hath hai...aise full planing ke sath kidnapping karna kisi are gere ka kam nahi hai... bina kisi camere me aaye or kisi ko bhi pata lage kidnapping karna bahot muskil kam hai...

inspector:-
Ab kya kare medam..? Commissioner sir ka bhi order bar bar aa raha hai...kaise bhi karke lakdiyo ko thundna hoga nahi to sab ki nokri bhi chali jayegi...

Acp aditi:-

Ha kuch karna hi padega.... chalo bahar saher me dubara khojbin karte hai...kuch pata chal jaye to acha hai...waise let night tak kon konsa club chalu rehta hai?

Inspector:-
5 club hai jo let night tak chalu rehte hai medam...

Acp aditi:-

Chalo phir waha par khojbin karte hai...

Phir acp aditi or dusre kuch police wale gaadi leke nikal jate hai club ki or...
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Naughtyrishabh

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Thodi der me hamari car ek badi building ke gate samne ruki...or watchman get khola to papa under car chala di or parking me lake roj di or phir hum log car se bahar nikal gaye...


MAA :- beta ye kaha le aaya tu hame ? Yaha to ye puri building shangari hue hai koi function hai shayad...tu game you laya yaha?


ME :- are maa aap ek bar under to chalo phir sare sawalo ke javab mil jayenge apko..


DIDI :- haan maa chotu keh raha hai to chalo under chalte hai...


Phir hum log parking main se chal kar building ke samne aa gaye or tabhi sweety ki nazar building ke uper chali gay upar name likha hua tha use padhne lagi or name padh kar kuch der sochne lagi or phir 2 min bad hi khushi se uchal ne lagi..


SWEETY :- maa...maa...mujhe pata chal gaya bhai hume yaha kyu laya hai ye..


MAA :- are pehle ye pagal jaise uchalna band kar or bata Kyu laya hume yaha?..


mujhe pata chal gaya ki jaroor sweety ne name padh kiya hoga to use pata chal gaya hoga to me sweety ko bata ne se rokne ke liye bola...


ME :- sweety abhi kuch mat batana ...under sab ko pata chal jayega na ...


SWEETY :- okk thik hai bhai....maa chalo an under apko under sab pata chal jayega...


phir hum pancho dor as under aa gaye ...under bahot sare log pehle se aaye hue the or sab chair par bethe hue the or samne ek stage laga hua tha jaya par mike laga hua tha or kuch vip log bethe hue the...


hum log bhi sabse aage chair khali thi us par gaye...( maine pehle hi aage ki chair khali rakhne ko kaha tha msg karke)


DIDI :- wow... chotu ye to teri company ki opening function hai na..


ME :- dheere boli didi kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki me owner hu ye..


PAPA - MAA :- congrats beta..


SWEETY- DIDI :- congrats Bhai..


ME :- thank you maa papa and thank you choti and didi.... to kaisa laga mera surprise?

SWEETY :- ek dam jakkas bhai...


hum log baat kar hi rahe the ki stage par supriya didi aay or mike par bolne lagi...


SUPRIYA :- ledies and gentlemen... aap sabka dil se Shukriya jo aap log hamari company ki opening event me aaye...
hamari company ka name AJS SHARMA LIMITED COMPANY. Hai jise hamari puri team or worker ki mehnat se aaj bahot achi chal rahi hai..
ab jyada bore na karte hue .. ribbon cutting karte hai...jiske liye me hamare gest mese hi kisi ko chunugi..


sare log taliya baja ne lage or hum bhi taliya bajane lage...


Phir supriya didi sab gest me dekhne lagi or sweety ki taraf dekh kar mike me boli..


SUPRIYA :-aap yaha aaiye stage par..


SWEETY: - bhai me akeli nahi jaungi aap log bhi sath aaoge tabhi jaongi..


me :- okk chal me aata hu tere sath..


phir me or sweety uth kar stage par pahoch gaye..


SUPRIYA :- aapka name ?


SWEETY :- Sweety..


SUPRIYA :- to gys sweety ke hatho ribbon cutting hogi..


sab log taliya baja ne lage..


phir supriya ke sath hum log stage par se niche utare or company me under se bahar nikle ye hall function ke liye tha or men office or worker ke liye jo tha vo alag dor tha to us taraf hum gaye or sare gest bhi bahar aa gaye the..


phir sweety ko kenchi di or camera wala photo pad raha tha sab ki or me maa ,papa ,didi , supriya, sweety ke sath khade the...phir sweety ne ribbon cutting ki to sab ne taliya bajay or ...fatakde bhi fode...


phir yaha ka sara kam khatam hone ke bad sab logo ko khane khane ke liye dusri taraf bhej diya supriya ne..


hum log phir ek side me khade the or hamare sath supriya didi bhi khadi thi..


SUPRIYA :- Happy birthday sweety and happy birthday lucky..


Hum dono :- thank you didi..


MAA :- supriya beti...tumhara bahot bahot dhanywaad ..mere bete ki itni madad karne ke liye business me..


SUPRIYA :- usme dhanywaad kehne ki koi baat nahi aunty...mene lucky ko apna bhai mana hai to mere bhai ki company hai to mere bhi hue na to apni company is liye kam karne me thank you kaisa?


MAA :- vo to hai beti ...vaise Anjali beti nahi aay kya ?


SUPRIYA :- use aaj college me koi project submit karna tha to college gay hai..


SWEETY :- party me to vo aayegi na didi ?


SUPRIYA :- haan..jaroor ayegi..


PAPA :- beti company is owner ka name log puchenge to kya name batayenge tum dono?


ME :- papa abhi to koi kuch nahi puchega or agar koi puchega ya janne ki koshish karega to supriya didi hi owner hogi.. ye media wale sawal karege baki to koi kuch nahi puchega..


PAPA :- Hmmm thik hai phir..


SUPRIYA :- chalo aap log bhi khana kha lo ...


Hum log phir khana khane aa gaye jaya khane ka intjam kiya hua tha...


khana khane ke bad hum log supriya didi se vida leke ghar nikal gaye ..raat ki party me invite kar ke..

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[ To Be Continued ]
Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
 

Badshah Khan

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Bohut hi badhiya story hai Lucky..
Concept normal hi hai but jis tarah se tumne likha hai is story wo kabil e tarif hai.
Kahani mai sabse best chiz hai ki kahi bhi writer nai bekari mai sex scenes dalne ki koshish nahi ki jo ki normal hi incest stories mai bohut se log karte hai.
Lucky ko trained isliye kiya gaya ki wo apni family ka badla le jo ki khud ki step bua se hai but lagta hai America mai training ke dauran lucky ko koi high level kaam ke liye hi trained kiya gaya.
Kahani ab tak jis hisab se chal rahi hai kahi bhi aisa nahi laga ki koi scene sirf kahani ko khinch ne ke liye likha gaya ho everything is up to the mark and I hope it goes like this only.
You have such good writing skills keep it up.
Waiting for next.
 

Lib am

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mene dubara ghadi me dekha to 12:59 time ho gaya to mene dheere se sweety ke uper se sadar ko pakad kar hatane laga or puri sadar sweety ke upar se hatane ke bad mene uska cute sa face dekha to vo abhi bhi ankhe band kar ke so rahi thi..

Me Sweety ke karib Beth kar Apna sar Sweety ke shehre Par jhuka Ne Laga ..

or me apne shehre ko sweety ke shehre ke pas le jake uske sar par ek kiss kar di or phir uske kaan ke pas muh le jake kaan me bola...

ME :- HAPPY BIRTHDAY MERI PRINCESS...

Mere Itna Bolte Hi Sweety Ne Anpi Ankhe Kholi Or Mere Gaal Par Ek Kiss Kar Di or Mere Kaan Me Boli..

SWEETY :- Thank You Mere Shiv... And " HAPPY BIRTHDAY PRINCESS KE PRINCE "..

or phir mujhe gale laga liya or mene bhi sweety ko apni baho me leke uske sath let gaya...
vaise SHIV name sweety ne rakha hua hai mera bachapn se ...jab bhi vo bhai nahi kehti or name se bulati hai to Shiv keh kar hi bulati hai..

Shiv name America me babot famous hai ...is name ko sun kar america ke har criminal ki mut nikal jati hai...abhi tak India me shiv ka tandav hua nahi hai is liye India me shiv name ka kaher hona baki hai..

Vaise bhi shiv name mere ghar ke logo ko hi pata hai..bahar walo me sirf Bittu ke alava kisi ko pata nahi hai..

me sweety ko pakad kar apni baho me bhar liya

" sone ka natak kyu kar rahi thi. " mene sweety ko apni baho me hi sama kar pucha..

SWEETY :- bas aise hi...mujhe pata tha ki sabse pehle aap hi aayege mujhe wish karne ke liye is liye me apke darvaja kholne ki avaj sun kar hi sadar odh kar sone ki acting karne lagi thi.. vaise mera gift kaha hai???

ME :- gift to baad me deta hu par pehle ye bata ki ye aap aap kyu bolne lagi Tu wapis ..??

SWEETY :- ( apna sar uper ki taraf kar ke meri ankho me dekhte hue) aaj apka janm din hai is liye ijjat de rahi hu..agar tujhe nhi pasand to tu keh kar hi bolungi ok..

SWEETY :- or haan..gift kya dega vo to bata de mujhe..

ME :- Thodi der ruk abhi maa papa or didi bhi aate hi honge hum dono ko wish karne to unhe wish kar ke chale jane de phir deta hu gift ok..

SWEETY :- Thik hai..

"are lucky beta tu yaha hai..? " maa papa or didi room me enter hote hi mujhe yaha dekh kar pucha..

me or sweety alag hue or uth kar beth gaye or papa maa or didi ki taraf dekha ...

DIDI :- Happy birthday chotu or choti...

DONO :- Thank you Didi..

or didi hamare pas aake pehle mujhe hug kiya or sar par kiss kar ke alag hue or phir sweety ko hug karke sweety ko bhi sar par kiss kar diya or alag hoke boli..

DIDI :- maa chotu bachpan se sabse pehle choti wish karta hai..aap bhul gay kya..??

maa or papa hum dono ke pass aaye or ek sath bole :- Happy birthday mere dono hire jaise bacho... bhagwan tumhare har sapne ko pura kare or tumhare har kam me safalta pradan kare...

DONO :- Thank you maa papa...i love you so much.. hume bahot kismat wale hai jise aap jaise maa papa mile..jo hume bahot pyaar karte hai...thank you maa papa ..

maa ne mujhe gale laga liya or sweety ko papa ne..

Maa :- love you too beta.. or thank you kehne ki jaroorat nahi hai samja ..thank paray logo se kehte hai apne ko nahi..

PAPA :- bilkul sahi kaha bhagywan apne ...

papa sweety ko alag kar ke sar par kiss kar dete hai ..
Maa bhi mujhe alag hokar mujhe sar par kiss kar deti hai or phir me maa ke pair suke ashirwad leta hu or sweety papa ke pair chu kar ...

phir me papa ke gale mila or papa ke ashirwad liya or sweety ne maa ko gale laga kar ashirwad liya..phir me or sweety didi ke pas jake unke bhi pair chu kar ashirwad liya..phir sab bed par Beth gaye...

tabhi mere or sweety ke mobile ki ring bajne lagi..sandhya bua ka call tha mere mobile par or sweety ke mobile me mama ka call tha... sab ne birthday wish kiya hume or phir Bittu ka bhi call aaya usne bhi hum dono ko wish kiya.. aditi ka call bhi aaya usne bhi mujhe or sweety dono ke sath bat kari or wish kiya..
mere mobile me or bhi bahot logo ka msg aaye hue the par mene bad me reply dene ka soch kar mobile rakh diya jeb me..

PAPA :- tum dono ko gift to kal raat ki party me hi milenge okk..

DONO :- thik hai papa...

MAA :- to ab hum chalte hai sone or tum dono bhi so jana okk..

ME :- papa aap ko kal din ki chutti mil sakti hai kya job par se?

PAPA :- chutti to mil jayegi par party to raat ko hai na to phir din me kya kam hai?

ME :- vo to kal din me hi pata chalega...aap sab ke liye surprise hai...sweety ke birthday ke din kuch to surprise banta hai..

SWEETY : - tera bhi birthday hai mere akeli ka nahi..

ME :- Haan par me apni taraf se kuch surprise to de hi sakta hu na..?

SWEETY :- haan..

PAPA :- thik hai phir me chutti le lunga kal ki...subhah office me call kar lunga...

MAA :- okk chalo ab sone or tum dono bhi so jana....goood night...

phir papa or maa kamre se nikal gaye or niche apne kamre me chale gaye.. didi ,Me or sweety the ab kamre me..

DIDI :- tum dono ko nind to nahi aa rahi na?

DONO :- nahi...

DIDI :- mujhe bhi nind nahi aa rahi abhi to ..to kuch time pas ke liye game ho jaye?

SWEETY :- kamre me kon si game khelenge didi ?

ME :- haan didi kamre me kya game khele?

DIDI :- are hum log truth and dare khelte hai...

ME :- tin jan me maja nahi aayega didi..ye game hum kal khelenge party khatam hone ke bad..kya kehti ho aap tum dono?

DIDI :- haan vaise teri baat bhi sahi hai... par ab time pas kaise kare phir??

SWEETY :- didi ek kam karte hai hum horror movie dekhte hai..bhai tum jake apna laptop le aao jaldi..

DIDI :- konsi movie dekhenge?

SWEETY :- A Quiet place.. is movie ko bahot din ho gaye dekhe hue aaj ek sath dekhne me maja aayega..

DIDI :- ye to mene bhi dekhi hue hai par tum dono ke sath dekhne me maja aayega..

me apne kamre me se laptop le aata hu or phir tino bed par beth jate hai god me takiye leke or samne laptop rakh kar movie start kar di mene..

movie dekhte hue daravana seen aata to sweety mujhe pakad leti or ankhe band kar leti or phir wapis dekhti...

sweety ko horror movie bahot pasand hai...haan use darr bhi bahot lagta hai phir bhi use horror movie hi sabse jyada pasand hai...ek bhi aise horror movie or web series nahi hogi jo usne dekhi na ho..

aise hi puri movie me sweety mujhe pakad kar dekhti rahi ...mujhe or didi ko to utna darr nahi lagta tha horror movie dekh kar... movie khatam hote hi bahot nind aane lagi thi to hum tino sweety ke bed par hi so gaye ...sweety bich me thi or me or didi dono side me..

mujhe sweety ko gift dena tha abhi par didi thi sath me to nahi diya or nind bhi bahot jor ki aa rahi thi is liye so gaye ..

subhah ke 6 baj rahe the or hum tino mast so rahe the abhi tak...or tabhi kamre ka dor khulta hai ...dor par or koi nahi maa hi thi...hum tino ko uthane hi aay thi..

" bachho chalo utho subhah ke 6 baj gaye hai... " maa hamare pas aake didi ko hilte hue boli ..

" maa sone do naa..." didi karvat badal te hue boli..

" uth beta aaj bahot sara kam bhi hai ghar me " maa ne wapis didi ko hila kar kaha..

is bar didi ki nind khul gay or didi ankhe malte hue uth kar beth gay.. or phir ankhe khol kar maa ko dekha ..

DIDI :- Good Morning maa..

MAA :- Good Morning beti..

Phir didi ne hamari taraf dekha to sweety meri baho me sama kar so rahi thi..

DIDI :- dekho maa dono kitne cute lag rahe hai is tarah sote hue.. so sweet...

Maa :- haan dono judwa hai do nahi ek hi lagte hai ... or cute to dono hi bahot jyada hai...ek dusre ki copy hai.... bas isi tarah tum tino khush raho isase jyada hume or kuch nahi chahiye...

vaise tum tino let tak jage the kya?

DIDI :- vo raat me nind nahi aa rahi thi to tino mil kar movie dekhi thi to let soye the..

MAA :- tabhi aaj lucky beta bhi nahi utha vara 4 baje daily uth jata hai... achha in dono ko Tu jaga dena ..me chai nasta ready karti hu..

DIDI :- thik hai maa...

maa kamre se nikal kar niche kitchen me chali gay or didi ne hum dono ko utha diya or didi fresh hone chali gay hum dono nind se uth kar bed par gaye..

SWEETY :- bhai aap pehle jaoge fresh hone ya me jau?

ME :- Tu jaa me apne room me chalta hu ..didi fresh hoke aa jaye phir jaunga me fresh hone..

sweety phir chali gay fresh hone or me apne kamre me aa gaya or mobile nikal kar msg cheak karne laga..

WAHI DUSRI TARAF..

Shivani apna mobile leke hi bethi thi usne mujhe mere number par raat me hi msg kar ke wish kiya tha par abhi tak koi reply nahi aaya tha uske msg ka is liye ...apne msg ke reply ke liye mobile leke bethi hue thi Subhah subhah hi....

SHIVANI :- lucky ne abhi tak mera msg dekha hi nahi ...mera msg dekhe ga bhi ya nahi... ek msg dekhne ka time bhi nahi hai khadus ke pas...mobile me dekhna to chahiye ki nahi..me reply ke wait me raat bhar soy nahi or use msg dekhne ka bhi time nahi hai.. haan me janti hu ki unknown number hoga mera par phir bhi kya likha hai msg me ye to dekhna chaiye ki nahi..

shivani mobile pakad kar akeli hi badbada rahi thi...ki tabhi uske mobile me msg ki tone baji..

msg dekha to mera hi msg aaya tha..

msg :- thank you so much ...

Shivani msg dekh kar khush ho gay...

Shivani :- ( sochne lagi.. good morning ka msg karu ya nahi )

phir shivani socha ki good morning ka msg kar hi deti hu.. or usne good morning ka msg kar diya..

WAHI ME APNE ROOM ME..

unknown number ka good morning wala msg dekh kar mene bhi good morning likh kar send kar diya ...

or me dusre msg dekhne laga or jisne bhi wish kiya tha msg me sab ko reply dene laga...jisme Rashmi bhabhi ,shivvu, ananya, Master or kuch or logo ke msg the unhe reply diya..

or phir mobile bed par rakhne hi wala tha ki msg aaya phir se unknown number se..

Unknown :- kaise ho aap...chai nasta kar liya?

me sochne laga saala me use janta bhi nahi ki kon hai or mene pucha bhi nahi..

ME :- nahi abhi hi utha hu to chai nasta nahi kiya ... vaise aap kon ?

UNKNOWN :- me apki fan hu bas ...apki insta id par apki photo dekh kar apki fan ban gay hu...kitne cute or handsome hai aap..and mene Insta par hi dekha ki aaj apki birthday hai to insta par se apki I'd se number nikala or wish kar diya..

me msg padh kar sochne laga ...saala ye Insta par meri itni fan following badh gay kya..ki log sidha msg karne lage..

ME :- thank you tarif karne ke liye...and byyy...fresh hone jana hai mujhe..

Unknown :- byyy...

me phir mobile rakh kar towel leke bathroom ki taraf gaya to uper wale bathroom me sweety naha rahi thi to me niche wale me gaya kyu ki didi ab tak naha kar apne room me chali gay hogi to vo bathroom khali hi hoga yahi soch kar me niche aaya to papa hall me sofe par bethe hue the..mujhe dekh kar bole..

PAPA :- Good morning beta..

ME :- Good Morning papa..

PAPA :- jao jaldi fresh hoke aao ...

me phir bathroom me chala gaya or 10 min me naya ke towel se sharir ko pocha or phir towel lapet kar bahar nikla to ab hall me didi,sweety or papa bethe hue the..

to me jaldi jaldi se sidiyo ki taraf gaya or jaldi se sidiya chad kar apne kamre me chala gaya kyuki mere sharir par sirf ek towel hi tha to mujhe thodi sharm aane lagi thi..or niche didi sweety or papa mujhe aise jaldi bhagte hue dekh kar hasne lage...

me kamre me aake kapde pahene or ready hoke niche nikal gaya..

Niche aake me didi ke pas beth gaya sweety papa ke pas bethi thi... maa ne phir table par bethne ko kaha to hum charo table par aake chair par beth Beth gaye or maa hamare liye chai nasta leke aa gay kitchen mese...or hum sab ko diya to humne chai nasta kiya or phir hall me beth kar bate karne lage...

PAPA :- jise party me invite karna ho unhe call kar ke bata dena kitne baje or kaha aana hai vo tum dono okk..

ME - me dekh lunga vo sab papa...or aap sab ready hone jao hume 9 baje ek jagah par jana hai aaj.. mera surprise dekhne...or phir vaha se aake party ki taiyari bhi karvani hai hotel me..

PAPA :- thik hai...chalo bhai sab ready hoke aa jao jaldi..

ME :- party vale kapde hi pahenna sab okk..

sab okk bol kar ready hone chale jate hai..or me apne mobile se msg kar ne laga surprise ki taiyari hue ki nahi vo janne ke liye...

phir me bhi apne room me aake ready hua or Phir niche hall me aa gaya...papa ready hoke aa gaye the bas tino deviya abhi ready ho rahi thi...ab sabko pata hai ki ladies logo ko jitne der kagti hai ready hone me..vah haal yaha bhi tha..

1 ghanta or 30 mi band tino deviya taiyar hoke aay...

or ek pal ke liye to me bhi pehchan nahi paya...bahot hi Khubhsurat lag rahi thi tino hi or mekup kiya tha is liye pehle se jyada Khubhsurat lag rahi thi tino hi..

Maa ne pink colour ki Saari pehni thi or didi ne jeans or top pehna tha or sweety ne Salwar shut pehna tha..


MAA NE AISI SAARI PEHNI THI
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Me :- papa lagta hai hamre ghar pari lok se koi pariya aa gay hai..

PAPA: - mujhe bhi aisa bhi laga raha hai..

Maa or dono behne hamare pas aa jati hai or maa papa or meri bat sun kar kehti hai

MAA :- ab ghurna band karo me apki hi wife hu..

hum tino bhai bahen hasne lage...

PAPA :- chalo ab dekho 9 baj gaye ...hume to 9 baje pahoch na th na..?

MAA :- Haan beta time to go gaya tune kaha tha 9 baje pahochna hai...ab kya kare..?

ME :- hume 10 baje pahochna hai vo to mujhe pata tha ki aap log taiyar hone me vakt lagao gi is liye 9 baje ka time kaha taki aap tino 9 baje tak ready ho jao..

SWEETY :- jutha kahi ka...ab chalo varna me wapis taiyar hone chali jaongi room me...

ME :- haan chalo...

phir hume sab bahr aa gaye or maa ne ghar lock kiya or papa ne car nikali start ki to hum tino piche beth gaye gay or maa papa ke pas baju vali shit par...

phir car raste par aage badh gay or me papa ko address de diya kaha jana hai vo..

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TO BE CONTINUED....

( vaise mujhe mega update likhne ka koi idea nahi hai..first time mega update likhne ki koshish ki hai .. So friends Like Kar Dena Update Ko)
Ye surprise kya hai, mere hisaab se to naya ghar hona chahiye. Lucky ne to sweety ka proposal ka answer bhi nahi diya. Mast update.
 

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Thodi der me hamari car ek badi building ke gate samne ruki...or watchman get khola to papa under car chala di or parking me lake roj di or phir hum log car se bahar nikal gaye...


MAA :- beta ye kaha le aaya tu hame ? Yaha to ye puri building shangari hue hai koi function hai shayad...tu game you laya yaha?


ME :- are maa aap ek bar under to chalo phir sare sawalo ke javab mil jayenge apko..


DIDI :- haan maa chotu keh raha hai to chalo under chalte hai...


Phir hum log parking main se chal kar building ke samne aa gaye or tabhi sweety ki nazar building ke uper chali gay upar name likha hua tha use padhne lagi or name padh kar kuch der sochne lagi or phir 2 min bad hi khushi se uchal ne lagi..


SWEETY :- maa...maa...mujhe pata chal gaya bhai hume yaha kyu laya hai ye..


MAA :- are pehle ye pagal jaise uchalna band kar or bata Kyu laya hume yaha?..


mujhe pata chal gaya ki jaroor sweety ne name padh kiya hoga to use pata chal gaya hoga to me sweety ko bata ne se rokne ke liye bola...


ME :- sweety abhi kuch mat batana ...under sab ko pata chal jayega na ...


SWEETY :- okk thik hai bhai....maa chalo an under apko under sab pata chal jayega...


phir hum pancho dor as under aa gaye ...under bahot sare log pehle se aaye hue the or sab chair par bethe hue the or samne ek stage laga hua tha jaya par mike laga hua tha or kuch vip log bethe hue the...


hum log bhi sabse aage chair khali thi us par gaye...( maine pehle hi aage ki chair khali rakhne ko kaha tha msg karke)


DIDI :- wow... chotu ye to teri company ki opening function hai na..


ME :- dheere boli didi kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye ki me owner hu ye..


PAPA - MAA :- congrats beta..


SWEETY- DIDI :- congrats Bhai..


ME :- thank you maa papa and thank you choti and didi.... to kaisa laga mera surprise?

SWEETY :- ek dam jakkas bhai...


hum log baat kar hi rahe the ki stage par supriya didi aay or mike par bolne lagi...


SUPRIYA :- ledies and gentlemen... aap sabka dil se Shukriya jo aap log hamari company ki opening event me aaye...
hamari company ka name AJS SHARMA LIMITED COMPANY. Hai jise hamari puri team or worker ki mehnat se aaj bahot achi chal rahi hai..
ab jyada bore na karte hue .. ribbon cutting karte hai...jiske liye me hamare gest mese hi kisi ko chunugi..


sare log taliya baja ne lage or hum bhi taliya bajane lage...


Phir supriya didi sab gest me dekhne lagi or sweety ki taraf dekh kar mike me boli..


SUPRIYA :-aap yaha aaiye stage par..


SWEETY: - bhai me akeli nahi jaungi aap log bhi sath aaoge tabhi jaongi..


me :- okk chal me aata hu tere sath..


phir me or sweety uth kar stage par pahoch gaye..


SUPRIYA :- aapka name ?


SWEETY :- Sweety..


SUPRIYA :- to gys sweety ke hatho ribbon cutting hogi..


sab log taliya baja ne lage..


phir supriya ke sath hum log stage par se niche utare or company me under se bahar nikle ye hall function ke liye tha or men office or worker ke liye jo tha vo alag dor tha to us taraf hum gaye or sare gest bhi bahar aa gaye the..


phir sweety ko kenchi di or camera wala photo pad raha tha sab ki or me maa ,papa ,didi , supriya, sweety ke sath khade the...phir sweety ne ribbon cutting ki to sab ne taliya bajay or ...fatakde bhi fode...


phir yaha ka sara kam khatam hone ke bad sab logo ko khane khane ke liye dusri taraf bhej diya supriya ne..


hum log phir ek side me khade the or hamare sath supriya didi bhi khadi thi..


SUPRIYA :- Happy birthday sweety and happy birthday lucky..


Hum dono :- thank you didi..


MAA :- supriya beti...tumhara bahot bahot dhanywaad ..mere bete ki itni madad karne ke liye business me..


SUPRIYA :- usme dhanywaad kehne ki koi baat nahi aunty...mene lucky ko apna bhai mana hai to mere bhai ki company hai to mere bhi hue na to apni company is liye kam karne me thank you kaisa?


MAA :- vo to hai beti ...vaise Anjali beti nahi aay kya ?


SUPRIYA :- use aaj college me koi project submit karna tha to college gay hai..


SWEETY :- party me to vo aayegi na didi ?


SUPRIYA :- haan..jaroor ayegi..


PAPA :- beti company is owner ka name log puchenge to kya name batayenge tum dono?


ME :- papa abhi to koi kuch nahi puchega or agar koi puchega ya janne ki koshish karega to supriya didi hi owner hogi.. ye media wale sawal karege baki to koi kuch nahi puchega..


PAPA :- Hmmm thik hai phir..


SUPRIYA :- chalo aap log bhi khana kha lo ...


Hum log phir khana khane aa gaye jaya khane ka intjam kiya hua tha...


khana khane ke bad hum log supriya didi se vida leke ghar nikal gaye ..raat ki party me invite kar ke..

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[ To Be Continued ]
To lucky ab businessman ban hi gaya. Fantastic update
 

Lucky..

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Bohut hi badhiya story hai Lucky..
Concept normal hi hai but jis tarah se tumne likha hai is story wo kabil e tarif hai.
Kahani mai sabse best chiz hai ki kahi bhi writer nai bekari mai sex scenes dalne ki koshish nahi ki jo ki normal hi incest stories mai bohut se log karte hai.
Lucky ko trained isliye kiya gaya ki wo apni family ka badla le jo ki khud ki step bua se hai but lagta hai America mai training ke dauran lucky ko koi high level kaam ke liye hi trained kiya gaya.
Kahani ab tak jis hisab se chal rahi hai kahi bhi aisa nahi laga ki koi scene sirf kahani ko khinch ne ke liye likha gaya ho everything is up to the mark and I hope it goes like this only.
You have such good writing skills keep it up.
Waiting for next.
Dil Se Shukriya Bhai..:thank_you:

lucky ne apni bua se badla lene ke is liye training karne gaya tha par vaha par kuch or bhi sikhaya gaya use jo aage apko pata chal jayega...

and bahot sare reader ne sex scene dalne ko kaha par kahani jis tarah chal rahi thi uske bich jabarjasti sex dalna Thik nahi laga mujhe..is liye sex kahani me jaha jaroorat hoga vahi hi hoga...

mujhe khushi hue ki aap sirf sex story padhne nahi ek achhi kahani padhne aaye yaha .. aage bhi is tarah sath bane rahiye ga and koi bhi kami ho story me to batana jaroor PM me.. ye meri first story hai to kuch galtiya hogi story me..
 
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Lucky..

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Nice update
Shukriya bhai
 
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