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[Kajal...]

UPDATE - 61
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Lucky (man me) : ab is halat me kaise niklu in sab ke samne se...bc me apne aap ko control kar sakta hu...saala ye lund mere sochne samaj ne ki sakti band kar deta hai...

lucky apni ankhe band karke apne mind ko shant karta hai or sari soch ko apne mind mese nikal deta hai ise uska lund bhi apne aap shant ho jata hai..

Lucky ko apne mind ko control karna bhi uske master ne sikhaya tha..so aaj vo kam aa gaya..

Lucky(man me) :- thank you master...

Lucky phir aage chal kar hall me aa jata hai ..

Lucky :- papa me mama logo ko leker aata hu tab tak aap log nasta kar ke ready ho jana or bittu thodi der me yaha par aa jayega aap sab ko hotel le jane..

Mohan :- Hmmm.. thik hai..

Maahi - sweety ( dono ek sath):- me sath me chalu?

lucky :- no.. Sweety tujhe taiyar bhi hona hai na..hum dono no party me tu jaise taisi taiyar hokar aayega?

Sweety :- haan nahi aati me..mujhe taiyar hona hai vo bhi sabse best tarike se ok..tu ja..

Sweety thoda muh chhad kar boli to baki sab hasne lage..

Maahi :- mujhe taiyar hone me jyada time nahi lagta me wapis aake ready ho jaungi to mujhe to sath le chal..

Lucky :- thik hai chalo aap..

or lucky sweety ke pas jake uske gaal ghis kar bhag jata hai bahar..

Sweety marne me liye uth mar bhagi par lucky jaldi bahar nikal gaya...


Papa :- aree beti ruk ruk...kahi gir jaogi...vo lout kar ghar hi aayega tab pit lena...

Sweety apne papa ki baat man kar wapis sofe ke pas aake beth jati hai..

Lucky or maahi dono car leke nikal gaye bus stand ki taraf..

Maahi :- vaise sweety ko kya gift dene wale ho tum..?

" surprise hai..tujhe nahi bata sakta.." lucky car drive karte hue bola.

" tum ne sweety ke proposal ke bare me kya socha phir?." music system on karte hue boli or song chalu laga diya..

" sweety tujhe sab bata deti hai Kya? " lucky thoda sock hote hue bola..

" tumhe pata to hai hum dono bachpan se behne kam best friend jyada hai to hum dono ki koi bhi baat ek dusre se chupi nahi hai ek dusre se.." haste hue maahi boli or " Let me love you " Justin bieber ka song play kar diya..

" mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai jaise tum bhi kuch chahti ho mujhse ? " maahi ki ankho me dekh kar bola or wapis samne same road par dhyan laga ke drive karne laga...

Maahi :- nahi me kuch nahi chahti...bas shayad me bhi tujhse pyaar kar bethi hu..i don't know..ki ye kaise hua ..

Lucky ye sun kar break mar kar gadi rod deta hai..

" kyaa...tumhe pata hai na sweety mujhe kitna pyaar karti hai? Or Ye jante hue bhi tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho.. " lucky maahi ki taraf dekh kar bola..


" chil ...tum bhi na kitna fattu ho..are mene kaha me pyaar karti hu ye to nahi kaha na ki tum mere pyaar ko accpet kar lo.. Is pyaar se jyada mere liye sweety ki friendship jyada important hai. To me tum dono ke bich nahi aungi..vo to mene aise hi bata diya ..tension mat lo ab or car chalu karo.. " maahi lucky ko samjate hue boli..

Lucky: - sweety ko pata hai ye baat?

Maahi :- haan..

Lucky :- to usne kya kaha tha tumhe?

Maahi: - use to koi problem nahi hai mere sath tumhe share karne me but me nahi aaungi tum dono ke bich okk..ab car chalao hume der ho rahi hai..

Lucky car start kar ke road par wapis doda deta hai..

Lucky :- tum dono ki Dosti to gazab ki hai..tere liye vo mujhe bhi share karne ko taiyar ho gay ..or uske liye tu mere or sweety ke bich nahi aana chahti..vaise sweety to mujhse bhi koi baat nahi chupati par teri bat mujhe nahi batay..

Maahi :- mene hi mana kiya tha use batane se.. or aaj me apne aap ko tujhse batane se rok nahi payi..

dono bate karte hue bus stand pahoch gaye..car ko ek side park kar ke bus stand ke under gaye ..or un dono ke under pahoch te hi vaha bus aayi usme se lucky mama mami or prachi tino niche utar kar lucky ke pas aa gaye..

" Namaste mama mami "lucky dono ke pair chu kar bola to lucky ke mama ne use gale laga liya..

" pehle se bahot badal gaye tum to beta. " lucky ke mama ne lucky ke mathe par hath ferte hue bole..

Lucky :- pehle jaisa hi to hu mama... or aap safar kaisa raha kuch problem to nahi hue na?

lucky ke mama lucky se alag hote hue bole " nahi beta aaram se aaye hai. Koi taklif nahi hue "

Lucky phir apni mami se bhi gale mila or halchal pucha phir prachi se bhi gale mil kar halchal pucha or maahi ka intro to prachi ne hi kara diya.. phir vaha as car ke pas aa gaye or lucky ne bag utha li or car ki diki me rakh di..or sab car me beth vaye..lucky ke mama lucky ke pas aage bethe or tino mahila piche wali sheat par..

phir car ghar ki taraf doda di lucky ne...or thodi der me ghar pahoch gaye..

" mama mami "..sweety kushi se jorr se chillate hue dodi darvaje ko taraf jaha se mama mami abhi hi enter hue the..sweety darvaje ki taraf nazar karke hi bethi thi to sabse pehle mama mami par uski nazar padi..
Mama :- meri gudiya...happy birthday...

or mama sweety ko gale laga kar pyaar se sar par hath ferte hue bole... sweety ki avaj chun kar baki sab bhi vaha aa gaye..

Sweety: - thank you mamu..

Phir sweety alag hoke mami se gale milti hai..

mami :- Happy birthday gudiya..

Sweety :- thank you mami..

phir sweety prachi se bhi gale milti hai..

prachi: - happy birthday choti..

Sweety: -thank you didi..

phir janvi, aasha or mohan bhi milte hai or halchal pucha hai or phir hall me aa jate hai ..aasha pani la kar deti hai pine ko or phir coffee banane chalo jati hai..

Sweety :- mamu aap to mujhe bhul hi gaye the...pure ek saal bad milne aaye aap..agar mera birthday na hota to aap ko me shayad hi yaad aati hai na..

Sweety naraz hote hue boli..

Mama :- are meri gudiya naraz ho gay..me kaise apni pyari se beti ko bhul sakta hu..vo to job par se chutti nahi mil pati is liye nahi aaya milne...

Sweety: - aap or papa dono hi kuch bhi ka ho to job ka hi bana lete ho..

Sab hasne lage...

aise hi bate karte rahe or phir aasha coffee or nasta leke aa gay or tino ko diya.. phir coffee or nasta khatam hone ke bad sab taiyar hone alag alag kamre me chale gaye...

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next update birthday party ka aayega..

To Be Continued.....

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[Kajal...]

UPDATE - 62
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AB TAK -

maahi or lucky bus stand jate hai car leke or raste me dono ke bich bate bhi hue kafi sari phir..

bus stand se mama mami or prachi ko leke ghar aate hai or phir sab ek dusre se milte hai or phir party ke liye taiyar hone kamro me chale gaye the..


AB AAGE :-

Thodi der me sab mard taiyar hoke hall me aa jate hai sirf lucky ko chhod kar..

Lucky abhi taiyar ho raha tha....

wahi sabhi ledies bhi taiyar ho rahi thi abhi...vaise bhi ledies o ko vaise bhi jyada time lagta hi hai..

khair thodi der ledies bhi taiyar hoke niche aa gay..
Aasha ,sandhya or lucky ki mami... priya, maahi , janvi or prachi .. sab itni jyada hot or Khubhsurat lag rahi thi ki sare mardo ke unhe dekh kar hosh hi us gaye..

Lucky ke papa ,mama or fufa bhi apne ghar se yaha aa gaye the to vo bhi hall me the ... tino mardo ki aakhe fati ki fati reh gay...

" bas kariya or kitna ghuro ge tum sab..? " sab ladies unke pas pahoch gay or sofe par beth gay or aasha apne pati ke pas jake boli..

" tum sab to bahot hi jyada Khubhsurat lag rahi go ask to " mohan ne sab ki tarif karte hue kaha.

" haan sach me bahot hi jyada Khubhsurat lag rahi ho tum sab.." lucky ke mama bole or unka haan me han fufaji ne bhi milay..

tabhi chidiyo se niche utarta hua aane laga tha to sab ki nazar lucky par padi to.. maahi or janvi dono hi sitti banane lagi...ir sab taliya padne lage...

Lucky chidiyo se niche utar kar hall me aa gaya..lucky black shut but pehna hua tha to bahot hi handsome lag raha tha..



Ek dam hero jaisa lag raha tha lucky in kapdo me..

sab tarif karne lage to lucky ne sab ko thank you kaha...
aasha ne apne bete ko gale lagaya or phir apni ankho se kajal ek ungli se leke lagne lagi..

" mere raja beta ko kisi ki nazar na lag jaye.." lucky ke kan niche kaajal laga deti hai aasha...

Sandhya :- hato bhabhi mujhe bhi mere beto ko kajal laga dene do mera beta bahot hi jyada Khubhsurat lag raha hai party me kisi ki nazar lag gay to..

Aasha :- haan ..laga de Tu bhi tere bete ko..

phir Sandhya bhi Kajal ka tika kar deti hai or phir mami bhi lucky ko kajal ka tika laga deti hai...

Janvi :- chotu tujhe to tin tin maa ka aashirvad mil gaya ab to tujhe kisi ki bhi nazar nahi lagne wali..

Lucky :- vo to hai meri tino pyaari2 or cute si maao ke hote hue kiski itni himmat ki mujh par buri nazar dale..

Mohan :- are beta choti nahi taiyar hua kya abhi tak ?

Lucky :- papa or maa aap sab log hotel niklo sab log ek sath vaha hotel ke bahar hi Bittu apko mil jayega...mehman aane lage hai to aap log jake unhe sambhalo tab tak me or choti aate hai bike par..

Mohan :- haan ye thik rahega hum log nikalte hai tum dono jaldi aa jana okk..

Aasha :- jaldi aana or aaram se bike chalna varna hawa lagne s choti ke bal bigad jayenge to dhyan se aana okk..

Lucky :- thik hai maa...

phir sab nikal gaye ghar se or car me beth kar hotel ki taraf nikal gaye...

Ab ghar me sirf lucky or sweety akele hi the...

Lucky apne kamre me taiyar hote hue hi ye plan banaya tha or sweety ko msg kar ke kah diya ki jab tak mera msg na aaye tab tak kamre se bahar nikalna mat..

Lucky chidiyo se uper aa jata hai..

" knock..knock.... sweety "..

lucky ne darvaje par knock karte hue sweety ko avaj lagay..

" ek min ruko .." Sweety Darvaja ke Paas Aate Hue Boli...

darvaja khulte hi sweety par nazar padi lucky ki to vo dekhta hi reh gaya... bahot hi Khubhsurat or cute lag rahi thi sweety black colour ki dress pehni hue thi jo sahi main sweety ke liye hi banay gay ho...shayad sweety pahene se dress bhi Khubhsurat ho gaya tha...


Khubhsurat baal or phir cute sa shehra ...pyaari si do ankhe or phir gulab ki pankhudiyo jaise gulabi hoth...jise dekh kar chumne ka man kare... or phir niche perfect figer jo black dress me laajawab lag raha tha...

Lucky uper se leke niche tak sweety ko dekhta hai...

Sweety :- shiv under bhi aaoge ya bahar khade khade hi mujhe scan karte rahoge?..

" hhhaann..vvoo..me." lucky sweety ki avaj sun kar hadbada jata hai...

Sweety :- under aa jao...

Lucky phir under aa jata hai sweety ke sath...

Sweety :- haan to ab bol kyu rukne ko kaha tha msg karke mujhe ?

sweety ne under aate hi lucky ko sawal puchne lagi..

Lucky :- tune mujhe kuch kaha tha na kuch din pehle uska jawab birthday par dunga kaha tha na.... to bas vahi javab dene tha is liye tujhe roka..

sweety khush ho gay ki finally aaj uske proposal ka jawab use milne wala hai ye chun kar...

Lucky farch par ek per ka ghutna rakh kar bethta hai or sweety ka hath pakad leta hai...

or sweety ki taraf uski aankho me dekh kar Bolta hai.!!

" Kaise Kahu Ki Apna Bana Lo Mujhe..,

Bahon Me Apni Sama Lo Mujhe..,

Aaj Himmat Kar Ke Kehta Hu Ki..,

Main Tumhara Hu Ab Tum Hi Sambhalo Mujhe..

I Love You So Much Sweetie ..
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Itna keh kar lucky apne dusre hath se apni jeb mese Ring nikalta hai or sweetie ke hath ki ungli me pehna deta hai...

" I Love You Too Shiv... " sweetie niche lucky ke samne beth jati hai or lucky ko gale laga kar boli thi..

bahot hi khush ho gay thi sweetie lucky ko apna pyaar accpet kar lene se ...

Lucky bhi sweetie ko apni baho me sama leta hai or dono hi kaafi khush the aaj apna pyaar kabool ka ke..

Sweetie :- thank you so much shiv mera pyaar accpet karne ke liye...agar Tum mera pyaar accpet nahi karte to shayad hi me zinda rehti...Me ye zindagi sirf or sirf tumhare sath jina chahti hu... I am so happy..finally mujhe mera best gift mil gaya...i love you so much...

Lucky :- pagal tere pyaar ko kaise accpet na karta...tere pyaar hi mera wajood hai ..tum meri life ho tere bagair me ek second bhi jee nahi sakta samji pagal...?

" haan samaj gay third magaj ".. sweetie apna sar lucky ke kandhe se hata ke apna sar lucky ke samne le aati hai or lucky ki ankho me dekhne lagi..

Lucky bhi sweetie ki ankho me dekh raha tha dono hi ek dusre ki ankho me dekhne me khoye hue the..!

Ek dusre ki ankho me apne apne liye beintaha pyaar dikh raha tha dono ko..

dekhte hi dekhte dono ke both kab mil gaye apas me pata hi nahi chala or dono ek dusre ko kiss karne lage ...
Sweety ki ankhe ab band ho gay thi or vo ab bas lucky ke hotho ko chusne lagi thi or lucky sweetie ke hotho ko chus raha tha...

Tabhi Lucky Ke Mobile Ki Ring Baji Tab Dono Ne Kiss Toda Or Alag Hue...

Sweetie Ko ab sharam aane lagi thi to wo blush karne lagi thi... or uth kar bed par jake beth gay...

Lucky ne apna mobile jeb me se nikala or call uthaya..

Lucky :- haan didi bolo...

call janvi ka aaya tha.

Janvi :- chotu kitni kaha tak pahoche tum dono? Yaha sab guest aa gaye..sab wait kar rahe hai tum dono ka jaldi aao...

Lucky :- haan...bas raste me hi hai...thodi der me aa jayenge hum okk..

Janvi :- okk..byyy..

Lucky :- byyy..

call rakh kar lucky sweetie ki taraf dekhta hai to vo sharma rahi thi or dusri taraf dekh rahi thi..lucky ye dekh kar smile karte hue sweetie Ke pas ja kar uske side me beth jata hai...

Lucky :- vaise mujhe aisi sharmili Gf bilkul pasand nahi hai...

Sweetie :- me kaha sharama rahi hu..?

Sweetie fatak se jawab dete hue boli...

Lucky :- haan tum kaha sharmati ho..vo sab chhodo or ab chalte hai birthday party me sab wait kar rahe hai hum dono ka... vaise mujhe tumhe or bhi bahot kuch batana hai but abhi time nahi hai to baad me batauga..

Sweetie :- thik hai...chalo phir chalte hai..

Lucky :- pehle apni lipstick to thik kar le...

Sweetie phir se apne lips par lipstick laga leti hai or lucky ke hotho par jo lipstick lagi hue thi use lucky bhi saaf kar leta hai..

Phir dono ghar se bahar aa jate hai or lucky bike start karta hai or sweetie apne dono per ek taraf kar ke piche beth jati hai or apna ek hath lucky ke per par rakh kar apna sar lucky ki pidh par rakh deti hai...

phir lucky bike road par chala deta hai...
thodi der me dono hotel pahoch jate hai ..


Dono ek sath under jate hai sweetie ne lucky ke hath ko pakad kar chal rahi thi..

Dono ki entry hote hi sab ki nazar dono par hi thaher jati hai...dono ke same colour ke kapde me dono beautiful couple lag rahe the ek sath me... To sab ek sath taliya laga kar welcome kar ne lage..

Dono chalte hue hall me sabke pas aa gaye ...

" mere dono bachhe bahot hi pyaare lag rahe hai.." Aasha dono ko bari bari gale laga kar bolti hai...

Aditi lucky or sweetie ke pas aati hai ..

Aditi :- Happy birthday sweetie...happy birthday lucky..

Dono :- thank you...

aditi sweetie ko gale laga kar milti hai or phir lucky no bhi gale lagati hai..

Phir aise hi baki sab bhi wish karne aate hai...hamare padoshi ghar se ho jo log aaye the vo phir Shivvu bhi lucky or sweetie ko milti hai or wish karti hai..

Janvi :- maa sab guest bhi aa gaye hai or birthday girl or birthday boy dono bhi aa gaye hai to pehle cake cutting kar lete hai..

Aasha :- haan .. bachho chalo ab cake cutting kar lete hai...

Lucky :- thik hai maa..

Phir lucky or sweetie dono cake rakhi thi us table ke pas khade ho jate hai or unke aaju baju sab khade ho jate hai...

Dono ke liye ek hi cake thi jis par dono ke name likhe hue the... cake kaafi badi thi..

Dono ek sath mombbati ko fuk mar kar bhujate hai ..

Sab :- Happy birthday to you...happy birthday to you Lucky....Happy birthday to you Sweetie...

Aise hi sab log jor jor se ek sath bolte hai or balloon fodne lagte hai...

Sweetie or lucky dono phir cake cutting shaku ek sath pakad kar cake cutting karte hai...
Phir lucky sweetie ko sabse pehle cake khilata hai or sweety lucky ko...phir dono apne maa papa ko khilate hai or aise hi bari bari sab logo in dono ko khilate hai or te dono bhi sab ko khilate hai..

ye log so dusre ko cake khilane me busy the ki tabhi Hall me ek avaj aati hai...

" Swagat Nahi karoge kya Mera ?..."

hall ke dor ki taraf sab dekhte hai avaj chun kar or vaha par jise dekha use dekh kar sab ko pehle to sock laga....

Lucky or sweetie dono ko bahut hi gussa aane laga tha...
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To Be Continued.....

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AB TAK -

" swagat nahi karoge kya Mera?.."

ye avaj chun kar sab ne avaj ki taraf dekha to sab ko sock laga...

Lucky or Sweetie ke hatho ki muthiya kadad ho gay thi or ankho me angare aa gaye the gusse me..


AB AAGE :-


Sab log uss avaj wale vyakti ki taraaf dekh rahe the...

lucky ke papa aage badh kar us avaj wale vyakti ke paas gaye ..

" Ragini tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?."

Ragini or uska beta Sanjay sath me aaya hua tha..

Ragini Mohan ki baat ko ignore kar ke aage badh kar baki sab khade the cake wale table ke baju me vaha par chali gay...

Ragini :- mujhe pata chala ki fatichar log hotel me party mana rahe hai to socha me bhi dekhu kaise party hai..is liye chali aay yaha.. vaise kis khushi me party manaye ja rahi hai...?

Lucky ko apni family ke bare me fatichar word chun kar gussa aaya to gusse me Ragini ko marne ke liye aage badhne laga to aasha ne use rok liya..

Aasha :-ruk jao beta ...hamare sare mehman hai abhi yaha...to abhi koi tamasha nahi karna hame...shant ho ja beta..

Lucky ne apni maa ki baat man kar ruk gaya or Ragini ki taraf gusse se dekha to vo has rahi thi..
jise dekh kar lucky ko gussa to bahot aa raha tha par apni maa ki baat man apne gusse ko control kar lete hai..

Lucky : - Bittu jaa jake music system on karva or full volume kar dena..

Bittu vaha se music system rakhi hue thi vaha jake full volume me song play kar diya..

Idhar phir sab log lucky or sweetie ke liye gift laye the vo dene lage bari bari...

Aasha Ragini ke pas jati hai..

Aasha :- Ragini aaj mere bachho ke bahot khas din hai to kuch drama mat karna...ab aay ho khana khake jana..khane ma intjam bhi kiya hua hai humne...

Ragini :- tum fatichar logo ka khana khau me ...mere ghar ke kutte ko bhi na khane du tumhara khana..

Mohan bhi aasha or Ragini ke paas aa gaya tha..

Mohan :- Ragini tum yaha se chuchap nikal jao...humne tumhe invite nahi kiya to yu bina bulaye muh uthaye kyu aay ho..?

Ragini :- avaj niche....varna 1 min ne tere pure parivar ko sadak par le aungi....janta hai na Tu jis ghar me reh raha hai vo ghar bhi mere name par hai..

Mohan or aasha kuch bol hi nahi paye ... or unse thodi si duri par lucky or sweetie ye dekh rahe the song baj raha tha to kuch chunay nahi de raha tha par apne maa papa ko dekh kar samaj gaye ki Ragini unhe dara rahi hai...

Sweetie ( lucky ke kaan me boli) :- bhai iss kamini ko yaha aay hai to kuch sabak to sikha na hi padega yu khali hath to nahi bhejenge..

Lucky :- thik hai kuch plan bana phir..

Sweetie :- thik hai me kuch sochti hu..

" tum dono kya baat kar rahe ho so dusre ke kaan me ?.. chalo dance karne chalte jate hai. "

janvi or maahi dono in dono ke paas aake ..in dono ke baat karte dekh kar janvi bolti hai..

Sweetie :- are didi ye sare gift kaha rakhe?

Janvi :- are unhe yahi rehne de baad me car me rakh denge...

Sweetie :- okk didi aap log jao me or bhai 5min me aate hai...

Maahi :- jaldi aana ..

Janvi or maahi dono phir dance karne ke liye stage banaya hua tha vaha chali gay or sab ko dance karne ke liye bulya to phir Bittu, prachi, mama, mami, bua-fufa or Priya or maahi or janvi sab dance karne lage ..

Sweetie :- bhai ek plan aaya hai mere dimang ne ..iss kamini ko sabak sikhana ke liye..

Lucky :- jaldi batao phir...

Sweetie phir lucky ke kaan me plan batati hai..

Lucky :- plan to mast hai choti...

Sweetie :- ye sweetie ka plan hai to mast to hoga hi na.. heeheehee..

Lucky :- haan vo to hai ...chal me intjam karta hu tere plan ko success karne ke liye..

Phir lucky vaha se hotel ke dor ke pas jake apna mobile nikal kar call karta hai.. or kuch baat kar ke phir mobile rakh deta hai jeb me.. or vahi dor par idhar udhar chalte hue wait karta hai kisi ka..

wahi Ragini aasha or mohan ko abhi bhi kuch bate chuna rahi thi...


Aditi lucky ko hotel ke dor par yu akela idhar udhar chalte dekh kar... vo lucky ki taraf chalte hue aa jati hai..

" yu chakar kyu laga rahe ho idhar? "..

Aditi paas aake bolti hai lucky ko..lucky aditi ki avaj chun kar uski taraf dekhta hai or smile karte hue bolta hai..

Lucky :- kuch nahi bas kisi ko sabak sikhana hai to uske liye kuch chiz mangay hai to uska hi intzaar kar raha hu..

Aditi: - hmm...Ragini Roy ko hi sabak sikhana hai na ?

Lucky :- bilkul sahi...

Aditi :- phir to me bhi tere sath hu ..mujhe bhi bata Kya plan hai..?

Lucky phir aditi ko bhi kaan me sara plan samja deta hai...
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To Be Continued.....

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Brilliant update bhai

 

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Mast update

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Aaj hi sabhi Updates padhe aur I must say you've really nice writing skills... Lucky ki life mein lagta hai ke kayi saare raaz chhippe hain... Especially uske Master se related... College mein huyi ladaayi ke Dauraan seedhe CM ka call aana iss baat ko pukhta bhi karta hai... Zaroor America mein kuchh ghatnaaye huyi hongi jinke kaaran Lucky ki life mein changes aaye honge... Aur jo wo khud ko sabke saamne dikha raha hai asliyat mein wo kaafi alag hai... Lage ki uske Master koyi badi hasti hain jinke kaafi oonche connections bhi hain...

Khair, baat karen Sweety ki to uska kirdaar mujhe kaafi pasand aaya... College mein pahunchne ke baad bhi kaafi bachpana jhalakta hai uski baaton aur harkaton mein... Wahin kabhi kabhar kaafi suljhi huyi aur samajhdaari bhari baatein bhi karti hai wo... Sweety aur Lucky ke beech Pyaar ka izhaar bhi ho chuka hai... Pyaar joki bhai – behen se kuchh oopar hai... I think Sweety hi Lucky ki life partner hogi along with Shivvu... Shivvu yaani Lucky ki College Classmate jisse dekhte hi Lucky uske pyaar mein gir gaya... Inke beech huyi ek – do baar ki mulaakat se yahi lagta hai ke Shivvu bhi Lucky ki taraf attracted hai... Of course wo abhi Lucky ke pyaar mein nahi padi hogi but Mere hisaab se uski taraf attract zaroor huyi hogi... Jo bhi ho, in dono ke alawa abhi Maahi bhi Lucky ke samaksh apne Pyaar ka Izhaar kar chuki hai par Lucky ne abi ke liye usse taal diya par future mein...

Btw. In teeno ke alawa ek aur important kirdaar hai Jaanvi... Lucky ki badi behen... Ek baat kehna chahunga, ke abhi tak Jaanvi aur Lucky ke beech kuchh bhi Romantic ya Erotic scene nahi bana hai par Lucky ka uski taraf nazariya batata hai ke future mein Jaanvi aur Lucky bhi Romantic Relationship mein aa sakte hain... To mere hisaab se agar aesa hota hai to in dono ka rishta bhi Lucky aur Sweety jaisa hi hona chahiye... I mean sirf Sex tak seemit nahi balki shuddh pyaar... Of course Sex bhi hoga hi... Par aesa naa ho ke sex ho jaaye & then Jaanvi ki shaadi kisi aur ke saath ho jaaye... Baaki jaisi lekhak saahab ki ichhaa...

Aditi urf ACP madam bhi Lucky ke pyaar mein girne waalon ki list mein shaamil hain... Par wo Lucky se Shaadi ki ummeed nahi lagaaye baithi... Ab unki umra ka fark bhi inke raste mein aa jaata hai... Aese mein Aditi ka ye faisla kaafi achha laga aur usne apni samajhdaari ka bhi parichay diya...

Baat karen Villain Party ki to, abhi tak Ragini aur Dhananjay main villains ke roop mein aage aayen hain... Par jahaan tak mujhe lagta hai, abhi asli Villain ka kahani mein aana shesh hai joki Maybe in dono ka hi Boss hoga... Ragini & Party ka kya plan hai Desh ke khilaaf ye jaan na bhi exciting rahega aur kya Lucky inhe rok paayega...

Idhar College mein bhi wo ladki, I don't remember the name, par shayad MLA ki ladki thi wo... Wo bhi Lucky ke peechhe hai taaki usse nuksaan pahuncha sake...Par kitni kaamyab hogi wo... Wahin Lucky ki Bhabhi ka Lucky ko Kiss karna inke aage chalkar badalte rishte ki aur ishaara karta hai... Maybe unka husband unhe sahi se prem naa de paata ho... After all Ragini ka beta hai kameena to hoga hi aur sambhav hai ke uska baahar bhi affair chaalu ho...

Wahin Shivani kaafi samay se Lucky ko pyaar karti hai but dono families ke beech chal rahi problems ke kaaran kabhi keh nahi paayi... Dekhte hain ke aage uske pyaar ka kya anjaam hoga... Wahin Aasha ke saath bhi shaaririk sambandhon ki shuruaat ho chuki hai Lucky ki... Aur Aasha ke mann mein uss sabko lekar duwidha bhi thi joki lagta hai ab clear ho chuki hai...

Baat karen Bittu ki to wo apni behen Prachi se ke saath sexually active hai jabki jald hi uski shaadi ke charche shuru hone waale hain... But kya ye ek doosre se pyaar karte hain ya sirf Sex tak hi seemit hain... Meanwhile dekhna hoga ke in dono ka kya hota hai aage chalkar...

Btw. kuchh suggestions dena chahunga... Aap gaur farmaayiega...

# Update ka size : Nischit hi aap regular updates dete hain... Ismein koyi shakh nahi hai... Par Updates ka size kuchh chhota lagta hai kabhi – kabhi... Aap lekhak hain aap bhi behtar jaante hain... Main yahi kahunga ke jab aapko lage ke Update thoda chhota hai to usse post karne ki jagah aap ek din ka delay bhi kar sakte hain taaki aapko usmein aur cheezen add karne ka samay mil sake... Reason – Maan lijiye aap ek update likhte hain 3000 Words ka aur usse post kar den to reader bhi Update se connect kar paata hai... jabki yadi aap 1500 words ke do update pst karenge to kahin naa kahin Reader connection nahi bana paata... Baaki jaisa aap behtar samjhe...

# Doosra ye ki kuchh scenes lagta hai ke thoda zyada khinch jaate hain...Fir example, agar aap shopping par jaane ka scene likhte hain ya fir mehmaano ke ghar aane ka ya fir kahin baahar outing par jaane ka bhi... To aap alag alag sabke aane ke scenes naa likhen... I mean jaise – “sabhi taiyaar hokar neeche hall mein pahunch gaye”... Iss ek line se sab log cover ho jaate hain... Wahin agar aap sabko alag se mention karenge to Update ke matter par fark padta hai... Thoda slowish saa lagbe lagti hai kahani...

Iske alawa spellings mistakes par halka sa dhyaan den to nischit hi kahani ka level aur bhi badh jaayega...

Dekhiye bhai Maine ye Review genuinely diya hai... Aur jo suggestions hain wo bhi kewal Kahani ko aur behtar banane ki soch ke saath diye hain... Isiliye iske baare mein koyi bhi bura vichaar mat laaiyega mann mein... Main seedhe se tareef karke bhi nikal sakta tha but I thought ke Kahani ke baare mein ek genuine feedback dena behtar hoga... Ab in baaton mein se jo sahi lage unhe kahani mein adopt kar lijiyega aur jo galath lage unko bhool jaane ka...

So, kaafi behatreeen kahani chali hai ab tak to... Aam taur par writers Incest kahani mein Sex thoonsne lagte hain, matlab bahut jaldi hi bhai behen ke beech sex hone lagta hai... Par aapki kahani mein abhi tak aesi koyi bhi cheez nahi huyi hai... Jaanvi ke saath abhi bhi behen waala rishta hai wahin Sweety ke saath Pyaar ki shuruaat hi huyi hai... Aur ye cheez mujhe bahut achhi lagi aapke lekhan ki... Suspense, Thrill ki maatra bhi kaafi sahi hai kahani mein... Fight Scenes bhi aapne badhiya likhe hain... Overall, ek badhiya mixture hai ye kahani Romance, Incest , Little bit Adultery, Suspense aur Thrill ka... And I really appreciate you for that...

Awesome Story Men & Waiting For Next Update...

 

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Lucky ke ghar me lucky ke papa,maa, mama,mami or bittu itne uth kar fresh ho gaye the or niche hall me bethe hue chai pee rahe the..or baate kar rahe the chai pite hue...

Janvi, sweety, prachi, priya,or maahi...ye pancho bhi uth gay thi or bari bari bathroom me jake fresh ho rahi thi..

lucky ki ghar ke under enter hota hai to uska mami ki nazar pas jati hai pehle to vo use awaz laga ke bulati hai pane paas..

(lucky ki mami or Bittu ki maa ka name Sumitra Agrawal Hai.or Bittu ke papa ka Bharat Agrawal. )

Sumitra :- aree lucky beta idhar aao.. Aasha ja or mere bete ke liye dudh garam kar ke la or sath me kuch khane ko bhi le aana..


Lucky :- good morning everyone...

phir lucky apni sab bado ke pair chu kar ashirwad leta hai or apni mami ke baju me beth jata hai sofe par..or aasha kitchen me chali gay thi dudh lene ...lucky ke liye dudh to usne pehle se hi garam mar rakha tha..

Sumitra :- ( Bittu ki taraf ichara kar ke ) is nalayak ko bhi saath le jata jogging karne ...iski bhi sehat achhi rahegi..

Bittu :- kya maa aap bhi me bhi roj gym jata hu..bas aaj hi let utha is liye nahi gaya gym..

aise hi halki fulki masti bhari bate chalti rahi ..

Or lucky ki maa lucky ke liye dudh or nasta le aay or jab lucky ko dudh dene ke liye niche jhuki to aasha ke blouse ke uper se halki si chuchiyo ki gehray dikhne lagi thi jaha par lucky ki nazar pad hi gay...


Or apni maa ki chuchiya ke bich ki gehray dekh kar lucky ka lund hard hone laga tha..
Thodi der pehle rashmi bhabhi ko kiss karke garam ho gaya tha or ab apni maa ki chuchiya ki bich ki line dekh kar phir se garam hone laga tha...par apne aap ko kabu me kar ke dudh ka glass le liya lucky ne or naste ki plat bhi le li..


Aasha ne bhi lucky ko apne blouse me dekhte hue dekh liya tha ...to aasha ke chehre par halki si muskan aa gay..or aasha wapis kitchen me chali gay to lucky be apni maa ki mast moti gand par ek nazar dali...bahot hi mast gand thi aasha no to lucky ki to halat hi kharab kar di thi..
Aasha ne kitchen ke darvaje ke paas jake piche dekha lucky taraf to lucky ko apni gand dekhte hue dekh liya aasha ne or muskura kar vo kitchen me chali gay...

Baki sare apni hi bato me lage hue the to kisi ko kuch pata hi nahi chala ...


Phir pancho ladkiya bhi fresh hoke aa gay hall me..

pancho :- good morning everyone .

sab ne good morning kaha pancho ko... Janvi sidha kitchen me chali gay or pancho ke liye chai nasta le aay..or pancho dining table par beth kar chai nasta karne lagi .

Mohan :- bachho Tum sab aaj college nahi jane wale kya...? 8 bajne wale hai..

Sweety nasta karte hue :- papa 9 baje class chalu hogi tab tak hum log college pahoch jayenge...

Bharat :- aap ko bhi job par jana hoga na ?

Mohan :- aaj ki bhi chutti li hue hai Maine to aaj to kahi nahi jane wala or vaise bhi aap log pure ek saal baad aaye ho hamare ghar to abhi to apki seva karni hai ..

Bharat :- hum aaj wapis ghar jana hoga ..kal se job par jana padega mujhe or Bittu ki maa ko bhi NGO me jana hoga to is baar to hum ruk nahi sakte jyada din ...agli baar ayenge to jyada din ki chuttiya leke aayenge tab khub seva karvayenge..

Mohan :- ( haste hue) apki pyaari bahen jane degi tab jaoge na..

Bharat :- haan ye baat to hai aasha ko mana padega varna vo jane nahi degi..

ye log aise hi baat karte rahe or Aasha ne sab ke liye khana bana rahi thi kitchen me to sumitra bhi kitchen me chali gay aasha ki help karne

phir 8:30 baje sab log dining table par khane ke liye beth gaye ...aasha or janvi ne sab ko khana parosh diya..to sab log khana khane lage..or thodi der me khana finish kar ke wapis se hall me beth gaye..

Lucky ,Sweety,janvi ,priya ,maahi or Bittu ye sab log college ke liye ready hoke aa gaye the...

Lucky :- mama mami aap log hum college se aa jaye phir hi jana hai okk.. or prachi didi aap bore to nahi ho jaogi na yaha?

Prachi :- nahi ...kyuki me bhi aa rahi hu tum sab ki college dekhne ..

Lucky :- phir to achhi baat hai...

phir ye log ghar ke bahar aake college ke liye nikal jate hai .. lucky ne car li thi aaj college jane ke liye kyuki bike se sab nahi ja pate.. to car me maahi or sweety dono beth gaye lucky ke sath or..bitty or prachi bike par nikal gaye or janvi or priya vo dono activa par..

Thodi der me college pahoch gaye ...or phir sab jaldi me apni apni class me jane lage kyuki class start ho gay thi..
sab chale gaye the ab sirf lucky, Bittu or prachi tino hi abhi college ke bahar parking me hi khade the..

Bittu lucky ko ichara kar ke side me aane ko Kehta hai to lucky or Bittu dono prachi se thodi dur chale jate hai..

Lucky :- haan bol ab..

Bittu :- me class me nahi aa raha hu ..me or didi mere room par ja rahe hai..to kisi ko kuch batana mat college ki chutti se pehle aa jayenge hum dono thik hai..

Lucky :- ( haste hue ) kamine Tu nahi sudhrega...koi baat nahi tere maze hai abhi to kar le chutiye...or Me kisi ko bhi kuch nahi bataunga okk..ab jaa prachi didi hum dono hi dekh rahi hai..

Bittu :- okk chal byy me chalta hu.. or tu sidha class me chale jana okk..

Lucky :- okk..

phir lucky or Bittu prachi ke paas aate hai..

Lucky :- Bittu Tu didi ko shaher ghuma la ...aaj class me nahi aayega to chalega...varna hum dono class me chale jayenge to didi akeli kya karegi yaha..

Lucky ne prachi or Bittu ka Rasta clear karne ke kiya kaha taki prachi or Bittu ko jane ka bahana mil jaye..

Bittu :- haan ye thik rahega...chalo didi apko me shaher ghuma lata hu..

Prachi :- okk chal phir...byy chotu...

Bittu or prachi phir wapis bike leke college se nikal jate hai bahar or Bittu ke flate ki taraf chale jate hai..

Bittu or prachi ke chale jane ke baad lucky bhi college ke get ke taraf chalte hue jane lagta hai or apna mobile nikal kar call lagata hai kisi ko..

Lucky :- Jaldi se koi achhi car bhej .. me college ke bahar khada hu road par hi okk..

Samne se :- okk sir..

phir call cut karke lucky mobile jeb me rakh kar college ke get se bahar aa jata hai or road ke side me aake khada hoke car ki wait karta hai..

Apne master ko airport par pickup karne jana tha is liye alag se car mangay thi lucky ne apne liye kam karne wale aadmiyo se.. cause to 10 baje tak master plane land karne wali thi jisme master bher kar aa rahe the vo..

par lucky time se phele pahoch kar dekh lene chahta tha ki koi khatra to nahi kisi dushman ka is liye security ka bandobas pehle se kar lena ka socha lucky ne..

khair thodi der me do car lucky ke paas aake ruki aage wali car lucky ke liye thi or piche wali me 4 aadmi the lucky ke security ke liye..

" airport le chal.." lucky aage wali car me beth gaya or jo gadi chala raha tha lucky ka admi use kaha lucky ne ..

phir dono car chal padi ..or thodi der me airport pahoch gaye..

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To Be Continued...

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