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krish:*loda mera kuch hota aaj se pehle kuch hua hai sale kutte hoge hai paise par bikne wale bas bhokk ke chle jate
amit:*woh toh teek hai par yeh sala joker hai kon
krish:*iski bhi talsh karte hai kyoki yeh bhi anna ke piche pada hai iss se hamme anna mil sakta hai
amit:*teek hai toh tum devid ko follow kar main iss jokar kis talas karta hu
krish:*teek hai
Ab aage....................
mohit jana toh devid ke chahta tha par jo halat banne the uss hisab se devid ke pass nhi jaa sakta tha iss liye woh kavita ke sath chl deta hai
kavita ka chehra jo thodi der pehle murjha gya tha woh fir se khilne laga tha
kavita:*aap jante hai main party ko kyo keh rhi thi
mohit:*(mann me) itna bewkuf thodi hu meri nanhi gudiya ka janamdin hai bhala yeh bhoolne wali baat hai
mohit:*(anjan ban) mujhe kaise pata hoga
kavita:*main bhi naa apko kaise pata hoga vaise main hi baata deti hu iss party ki wajh ek yeh hai suhana ka birthday aa raha hai iss sunday ussi din kare gye aur haa uski maa besak nhi rahi par woh meri bhi beti hai aur apki bhi
mohit:*maine bola naa main krishna hu fir meri kyo beti huyi
kavita:*acha maaf kar do mujhe yeh toh naa yeh yaadasht pata nhi kyo chali jati hai
mohit:*aap kya bol rahi hai
kavita:*)(khijh kar) kuch nhi lijiye ghar aa gya
dono ghar ke aage ruk gye the kavita mohit se pehle utar ke ander chl deti hai
mohit:*(mann me) yeh toh waqt ka khel hai jaan varna iss dil se pocho kitni tadap hoti hai tumhe yu mere liye tadapta dekh par kya karo majburi hai.... Besak door hai tum se par dil aaj bhi tumhre pas hi toh hai
mohit bhi ander aa jata hai kavita sab ko hall me tab tak bula li thi
kavita:*mummy ji meri beti ka janamdin hai iss ravivaar iss liye main soch rhi thi choti c party kar du aap kya kehti hai
mummy:*beta suhana toh iss ghar ki Laxmi hai usse toh khush karna hoga naa iss se baki sab bhi khush ho jaye gye
kavita:*haa mummy ji bas parivar ke log hi hoge thode bahut office ke log hoge
alka:*yeh acha kiya kavita iss se koi tension bhi nhi hogi
kavita:*haa didi yehi soch kar maine faisla liya
joyti:*(khushi se) woww fir toh shopping karni hogi party ke liye
jab joyti yeh bolti hai toh sab uski tarf dekhne lagti hai
madhu:*are wahhh meri choti behan fir wapas apni zindagi zine lagi
joyti:*(mohit ko dekh) jab safar itna suhana ho toh kya harj hai zeene me
rahul:*wahhh Chipkali tu toh sayar ho gyi
joyti:*maar naa kha liyo bandar
rahul:*chipkali chipkali
joyti:*bandar bandar bandar
jab joyti yeh bolti hai toh sab joyti ki tarf bagte hai aur usse gale se laga dete hai
komal:*bahut miss kiya tere bachpane ko meri behan
joyti:*bas halat ne badal diya tha komal varna udass kon rehna chahta hai
komal:*ab maat rehna udass behan
joyti:*bilkul nhi rahu gyi aur fir tum sab ho naa khush karne ko
rahul:*woh toh hai hi chipkali
pooja:*kitni pyari behne ho aap sab kitna ek dusre ko samjhte hai
alka:*yeh sab mohit ki wajh se uss ne ham sab ek dage me bandh rakha tha pyar ke dhage me...
pooja:*kash main bhi mohit bhaiya se mil pati
alka:*mil lo naaa pooja
pooja:*kya didi kaha hai mohit
kavita:*yeh hai naa (nakul aur suhana ko pakad) yeh bhi toh mohit ke hi hai ham toh issi ko dekh itnzar kar rahe hai varna iss saaso ko kab ka tut jana tha
mummy:*aisi nhi kehte beti inn bacho ko tune bahut pyar diya hai aur bahut pyar dene hai
mohit:*aur nhi toh kyaa
mohit ke iss tarh bolne se sab mohit ko dekhne lagte hai komal aur joyti mohit ko dekh muskura rahe tha
mohit:*mummy main naha kar aata hu
komal;*bhaithiye naa bhaiya baad me fresh ho jana
joyti:*haa bhaiya baith jaiye naa abhi kon sa waqt hua hai
madhu:*main chai bana lati hu
sangita:*main bhi aati hu didi
madhu:*bilkul nhi tum baitho mummy ke pas aur amar kaha hai
sangita:*didi room me gya fresh hone
madhu:*jao usse bhi bula lai
madhu khud chai banne lagti hai baki sab pyar bhari baate karne lagti hai iss bich mohit ek baat note kar raha tha
yeh baat usse thodi preshan kar rhi thi usse aisa lag raha tha kahi uss ne koi galti toh nhi kar di
uski herat beat tezz chl rhi thi par fir bhi uss ne apni beat ko khosis kar raha tha
madhu sabke liye chai lekar aa jati hai aur sab mil kar baate karte hai iss baat me komal joyti aur rahul sab se jada enjoy kar rahe the jis se sab ke chehre par khushi thi
thodi der aur rehne ke baad sab apne room me chl dete hai aur dinner tyar karne wale kitchen chl dete hai
mohit ko ab bhi woh baat khaa rhi thi woh issi baat me duba hua apne room me jata hai
mohit sabse pehle fresh hota hai aur iss baat par raat ko baat karne ka soch kar apne aap ko relex karta hai taki woh koi galti naa kar de kyoki ek toh baat pehle hi dara rahi thi
mohit relex hota hai toh usse sahil ki yaad aa jati hai
mohit devid ko call kar deta hai
devid:*tum ab tak nhi aaye mohit
mohit:*free time nhi mila tha devid... Sahil kaha hai
devid:*woh apne pas hai kya karna hai
mohit:*abhi toh main waha nhi aa sakta tum ek kaam karo mera naam aaye bina uski poch tach karo jaise woh yaha kyo aaya tha
devid:*kahi tumhe sakk toh nhi
mohit:*ho sakta hai woh pehle hi bigda hua tha usse bigaadna koi badi baat nhi hai tum apni tarf se jankari lo agar sab baat teek huyi toh main bhi baat kar luga aur haa tumhe pata laga tha woh kis se mila tha
devid:*jada kuch toh nhi par mere admiyo ne usse ek ladki ke sath dekha tha
mohit:*uski wife toh nhi thi
devid:*pata nhi par uska naam sayad tina hai
mohit:*tina par yeh toh uski biwi ka naam nhi hai ek kaam karo usse bhi apne admi se keh kar uthwa lo aur usse alag trike se pocha jaise woh sahil ko kyo fassa rahi thi
devid:*matlb dono ke sath duble game khelna hai
mohit:*haa bilkul... Acha tum yeh sab dekho main phone rakhta hu agar koi baat huyi toh mujhe msg kar dena
devid:*teek hai mohit
uske baad mohit call cut kar deta hai thodi der room me reh kar sochta hai aur uske baad dinner ke time niche chl deta hai
mohit sab se mil kar dinner karta hai uske baad fir wapas apne room me aa jata hai ab bhi usse woh baat preshan kiye huye thi
woh thodi der itnzar kar ke jane ki sochte hai iss liye room me hi intzar karta hai
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idher room me bahut gusse me Lucifer baitha tha aur uske samne hi tina baitha tha
Lucifer:*aakhir gya kaha woh
tina:*tum mujhe kyo poch rahe ho mujhe toh yeh bhi nhi pata ke woh gya kab hai
Lucifer:*sale chutiye ne pure plan par pani fer diya woh tere bass me tha bhi ke nhi
tina:*agar woh mere kabu me nhi hota toh kya woh apne bagwan jaise bhai ke khilaf jata
Lucifer:*toh behanchhod ab kon c chut me chla gya
tina:*tum baar baar mujhe kyo dekh rahe ho Maine thodi gyab kiya hai
Lucifer:*sale ka phone tak nhi lag raha
Lucifer abhi baat kar raha tha ke uska phone bajne lagta hai
Lucifer:*haa bol
dusri tarf se:-************
Lucifer:*yeh kya bak raha hai aise kaise ho sakta hai
dusri tarf wala:**********
Lucifer:*par koi aisa kare ka kon
dusri tarf wala:*************
Lucifer:*iski maa ki toh iss behanchhod ne alag hi dukhi kar rakha hai tum sab aas pass hi raho aur dekho waha se kuch mila kya
Lucifer apna phone rakh deta hai
tina:*kya hua kiska phone tha
Lucifer:*mere admiyo ka tha woh keh rahe hai unhe ek car mili hai sehar ke bahar aur uss me blast hua hai aur car sahil ki lag rahi hai
tina:*par sahil ko yaha kon janta hai jo uski car me blast kare gaa
Lucifer:*aur kon kare gaa ek hi toh hamra dusman hai mohit ho naa ho yeh kaam ussi ka hai
tina:*par woh aisa kyo kare gaa woh uska bhai tha aur fir usse sahil ke bare me pata kaise chla
Lucifer:*woh yaha ke don se panga lekar ab tak zinda hai toh chutiya toh hoga nhi aur woh koi sant nhi hai jo apne khilaf ho rahe sajish ko jaan kar usse maaf dega
tina:*ab toh pura plan hi fail ho gyavwoh baher gya bhi kyo gadha kahi kaam
Lucifer:*maine hi bejha tha komal ke pass taki woh family me jaa sake aram se par yaha pura plan hi ulta padd gya
tina:*tumne jald waji nhi kar di
Lucifer:*ab jada gyan naa chhod aur jaa yaha se tera kaam ho gya ab tum mere kisi kaam ki nhi
tina:*mere paise
Lucifer vaise tang aa gya tha woh kuch lekar tina ke muh par marta hai tina bhi apne paise lekar waha se chl deti hai
wahi Lucifer abhi bhi zakhmi sher ki tarh ghurrrraaaa raha tha ab yeh dekhna tha woh vaar kare gaa ke nhi
Lucifer janta tha yeh baat anna ko pata lagi toh woh fir uski bezti kare gaa iss liye woh dusra plan sochne lagta hai taki woh gussa hone se pehle hi sab sambhal sake
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raat ke 10 baj gye the mohit bechain saath bed par leta tha aakhir kar uss se bardast nhi hota
woh apne bed se uth kar apne room se bahar aa jata hai aur chl deta hai ek room ki aur uska dil jor se dhadkta hai
jab mohit uss room par pochta hai toh woh ek baar apni aakhe band kar ke dua karta hai aisa naa ho jaisa uska dil keh raha hai
aakhir kar mohit door knock kar hi deta par dhire se jis se 2 mint tak darwaja nhi open hota tab mohit thoda jor se door knock karta hai aur iske sath hi ek mint me darwaja khul jata hai par jaise hi khulta hai ander se aaya sakas haka baka ho jata hai
mohit:*kya main ander aa sakta hu mohit
amita ko jab se pata laga tha Krishna uska bhai nhi raha woh bahut udas rehne lagi thi kisi se baat nhi karti thi yaha tak ke mohit ki tarf dekhti tak nhi thi
krishana(mohit) ki tarf dekhna bhi band kar diya tha
amita:*bhaiya aap iss waqt soye nhi
mohit:*kyo nhi aa sakta apni behan ke pss
amita iss baaat ka koi jawab nhi deti aur palat kar apne room me aa jati hai room khula chhod deta hai
mohit iss tarh se amita ke chle jane se samjh jata hai koi badi hai yaa fir amita ko sach pata lag gya hai
mohit:*amita koi jawab nhi diya tumne
mohit room ke ander aa jata hai
amita:*kuch tha hi nhi bolne ko toh kya bolti bhaiya
mohit:*baat kya hai amita tum aise baat kyo kar rahi ho
amita;*bhaiya mujhe nind aa rhi hai
mohit:*mujhse koi galti ho gyi hai kya amita jo tu meri tarf dekh bhi nhi rahi hai
amita:*aisa kuch nhi hai bhaiya bas nind aa rhi hai
mohit:*amita dekh koi baat hai toh bol de naa main teek kar duga
amita:*(bhari gale se) kash ke aisa ho pata bhaiya
mohit:*amita Tu roo rahi hai dekh baata naa kya baat hai tu kuch din se mere se baat hi nhi kar rahi naa meri tarf dekh rahi hai
amita:*bhaiya kuch sawal ke jawab nhi hote apke sawal bhi aise hi hai agar aap khud koi jawab dund sakte hai toh samjh lijiye
mohit:*mtlb koi baat hai dekh mujhe baata naa amita kahi tu komal wali baat par gussa nhi hai naa dekh maine uss din bhi maffi mangi thi naa
amita:*bhaiya maine kaha naa koi baat nhi hai aur koi baat bhi hai toh uss baat ko koi teek nhi kar sakta sayad bagwan bhi nhi
mohit:*aisi kya baaat hai
amita;*hoti hai aisi kuch baate bhaiya jise jaan lene ke baad bahut taklif hoti hai rone ka dil karta hai par ashu nhi aate.. Marne ka dil karta hai par maut nhi aati hai bhaiya kuch baate bahut taklif deti hai bhaiya deti hai taklif
mohit ab samjh gya tha baat ho naa ho yahi jo uska dil keh raha tha
mohit yeh kabhi nhi chahta tha aisa ho jab ab yeh ho gya tha tab woh aise amita ko rota hua chhod nhi sakta tha
mohit ek lambi saas leta hai aur chhod deta hai
mohit:*tum iss liye mujhe nhi dekhti ho naa ke main tumhra krishna nhi hu iss liye nhi baat karti ho naa kyoki main tumhra bhai nhi hu
mohit ke itna kehte hi amita mohit ki tarf palat jati hai mohit ki aakho me halke aasu the dukh tha amita hairani se mohit ko dekh rahi thi par mohit bilkul sant khada tha
kamre me puri tarh se santi thi