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jarur dost kuch review aur aabhai continue karo kabse waiting per hai log...
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jarur dost kuch review aur aabhai continue karo kabse waiting per hai log...
bhai first part ka link ya pdf dedo
thanxxx dosto apke pyare comment ke liye janta hu bahut dinno baad aaya hu yaha par par kafi mujhe pm aaye jis karne isko suru karne kaa dil hua
toh dosto aap sabhi mujhe comment kar ke baatye yeh story ko restart karo ke nhi apke comment ke baad hi dubra suru karo gaa
agar postive response mila toh kal se yaha update suru kar duga
so apni pratikriya jarur d
thanku dost aap bahut purne reader hai story par apki sabhi baato se sehmat hu par apni kuch baate rakhna chahta hu reader ke passawaradil bhai is waqat aap ki 3 stories chal rahi hai lekin kisi pe bhi regular update nahi mil rahe. Zindagi ka safar story ko takreeban 3-4 saal ho gai hai lekin woh abhi bhi incomplete hai. Bas itni guzarish hai ke pehle kisi ek story pe focus karo aur isi trah 3no ko complete karo. Aap ne Awara story ka bhi jo end kiya tha woh bhi zara bhi pasand nahi aya, story incest thi lekin phir bhi kisi behen ke sath koi sex scene nahi dikhaya aur jaldi me hi story ko end kar diya. Bhai behter to yahi hai ke pehle jo new story (Dil Dimag aur Sazish) start ki hai usi ko complete karo kahin aisa na ho dusri stories ki trah woh story bhi beech me hi latki rahe.
Jarur start kijiye Bhai hum to kbse aapki raah dekh rahe hain.thanxxx dosto apke pyare comment ke liye janta hu bahut dinno baad aaya hu yaha par par kafi mujhe pm aaye jis karne isko suru karne kaa dil hua
toh dosto aap sabhi mujhe comment kar ke baatye yeh story ko restart karo ke nhi apke comment ke baad hi dubra suru karo gaa
agar postive response mila toh kal se yaha update suru kar duga
so apni pratikriya jarur de
bhai mil nhi rha link 1 part kadost first page par iska link hai
bhai mil nhi rha link 1 part ka
thanku dost aap bahut purne reader hai story par apki sabhi baato se sehmat hu par apni kuch baate rakhna chahta hu reader ke pass
kuch problem ke karam main aksar bich bich me jata raha hu par story ko kabhi close nhi karta
rahi story ki baat toh tu mera pyar Tu meri zindgi aur zindgi ka safar ek sath hi start ki thi aur kafi ache update bhi deta raha par tu mera pyar par mera jada dhyan hone se ache update uss par aate rahe
rahi regular update ki baat toh aap dekh sakte hai jab maine iss baar waaps aaya tha toh bola tha regular update duga but jab reader read karne ke baad response nhi dete toh bahut bura lagta hai... Response ka matlb yeh nhi postive hi bolo aap negative ponit v baata sakte hai koi toh pratikriya milni chahiye
jab ek writer apna 2 ghante laga kar ek update likhta hai uss par view toh 3000 se 4000 hai par comment muskil se 10 bhi nhi toh socho writer ko kaisa mehsus hota hoga
aap agar thoda waqt de sath denge toh writer bhi khushi khushi update dega
main apse vada karta hu ek week main iss story par regular update duga kal se but aap v dekh lena padh kar jane wale jada hoge pratikriya dene wale bahut hi jada kam iske liye aap dil dimag aur sajish dekh sakte hai
app meri galtiya hi baato par baato toh sahi yeh apke manoranjan ke liye hai kon saath hame yaha paise milne hai par baki reader sath hi nhi denge toh writer kyo mehnat kare gaa
main apke comment suru se padhta raha hu aur app hamesa sath rahe hai par bakiyo ka kya