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UPDATE 16


MORNING MAIN SONU KE GHAR

Sonu ab subha uth jata Hai Neetu ne Jo call ki thi usko 2 din ho chuke the sonia bhi aaj vapis aane lagi thi to sonu subha uthakr tiyar Hota Hai vo job ki chutti leleta Hai or Neetu ke batayee address pe jata Hai 1 ghante ka rasta th jaha sonu ne jana th sonu vaha pohchta Hai to dekhta Hai vo ek costume ki dukaan thi vo vaha andar jata Hai shop ka Malik usko dekhta Hai shop ke Malik se bolta Hai..

Sonu : hello sir mujhko Neetu ne bheja Hai
Shop ka Malik : aaree ha ajao ajao...
Sonu : okk
Shop ka Malik : Acha tum ruko main abhi ata hu..
Sonu vaha wait karne lagta Hai thodi Der main shop ka Malik ata Hai or Sonu ko ek bag pakdata Hai...
Sonu : isme kya Hai...
Shop ka Malik : bass ye jaake Neetu ko dedena...
Sonu : OK..

Fir sonu vaha se ghrki taraf nikal padta Hai fir vo sochta Hai
Sonu : aaj sonia se to baat he nhi hui or na he usko msg zarur apni mummy ki seva main lagi hui hogi...
Chlo main he karleta Hu or fir sonu usko good afternoon ka msg kardeta Hai or ggr ki taraf badne lagta Hai...

Vo jese he ghr pohochta Hai vo seedha upper Neetu ke pass jata Hai...

Sonu : lo tumhara saaman..
Neetu : aree mera thodi Hai

Sonu : fir kiska Hai..?

Neetu : aree tum betho yaha...

Sonu : nhi pehle mujko sab Janna Hai..

Neetu : aree bethoo chupchap pehle fir sab btatii hu..

Ye bolkar Neetu sonu ko room main ek chair pe bitha deti hai or vo bag kholti Hai to usme se ek costume nikalti Hai or ke nakli adhar card . neetu fur sonu ka mackup shuru karti Hai or usko ek sardar bana deti hai or usko ek white kurta pajama pehna deti hai or usko pocket main kuch Daal deti hai or bolti Hai nikalte time pocket main hath dalna isse tumko madad milegii...

Sonu : okkk bolta Hai

Fir Neetu bhi ready hojati hai or Sonu ko leke hotel ki taraf nikal padti Hai hotel pohochkar sonu neetu alag hojate Hai sonu vaha jaake nakli naam se room leleta Hai or vo wait karne lagta Hai jese he uska moka lagta Hai vo room se nikal padta Hai or lift main jaake basement ka botton daba deta Hai jab vo basement main pohoch jata Hai vo dekhta Hai vaha kuch nhi Hai bass vaha pe kuch faltu ka saman Hota Hai vo nirash hojata hai fir usko yaad ata Hai ki hotel main to 2 basement Hai or vo doosre basement ka rasta dhundne lagta Hai fir usko ek sidi mil jaati Hai Jo niche ki taraf ja rahi hoti Hai vo niche jata Hai vo dekhta Hai ki niche bhi kuch ni th vo niraash hoke vapis jaane lagta Hai tabhi usko door ek dewar k pass thodi light dikhti Hai vo vaha jata Hai or dekhta Hai ki ek or niche jaane ka rasta th Jo ki lock th tabhi sonu vaha padi lohe ki road se us lock ko tod deta Hai or gate kholkar niche jaane lagta Hai vo dekhta h ki ye rasta doosre basements ki tarha Ganda andhere wala nhi balking saaf suthra th or light bhi kaafi thi vo niche niche jaane lagta Hai vo dekhta Hai ki vaha pe 3 chair rooms the vo dekhta room k bahr ek chokidar soo raha Hota Hai vo us some chowkidar ke sir main rod markar usko vahi behosh kar deta Hai or us chokidar ki gun ko utha leta Hai vo room ke andar dekhta Hai vaha kuch awardee aa rahi hoti Hai.. Sonu andar jata Hai or boht heran Hota Hai ki vo Or koi cheenu thi cheenu ke sharir pe ek bhi kapda nhi th or halat boht kharab hogayiii thi sonu uske pass jata Hai..

Sonu: utho cheenu...

Cheenu : konnn ho tum...

Sonu : cheenu main hu sonu..

Cheenu : soo..sonu ye tum hoo...

Sonu : haa cheenu...

Cheenu : sonu tum yaha kese...

Sonu : vo sab choro ye btao tum ki ye sab kese hua...

Cheenu fir saari baat sonu ko bta deti hai sonu boht heran Hota Hai or Cheenu ko utha leta Hai or usko sath leke chalne lagta Hai...
Fir usko Neetu baat yaad aati Hai or vo pocket main hath dalta hai or dekhta Hai usme ek gol topi thi vo sab samajh jata Hai or apne sardar look ko Badal kar kr vo topi laga leta Hai or much ko hata deta Hai or room se cheenu ko leke nikalne lagta Hai

Vo jese he room se Bahr ata Hai to vaha gaurd agaya th vo dekhte he sonu pe Goliya chalane lagta Hai or Sonu bhi Goli chala deta Hai gaurd ki goli to miss hojati hai lekin sonu ki goli nishane pe lag jaati ha..

Vo gaurd vahi niche gir jata Hai or vo us time he cheenu ko leke bahr basement ke exit se Bahr chala jata hai..

THODI DER BAAD RAGHAV KE GHAR

Raghav : vo ladki ko koi kese leke ja sakta hai..

Amit : pta nhi Malik vo banda kese andar ghus gya...

Raghav : koi to hoga he jisne usko btaya hoga..

Amit : magar kon Malik us teesre basement ka to kisiko nnhi pta Hai bass kuch he log Hai jinko Pata Hai

Raghav : ha ab sab ke upper nazar rakhni hogii..

Amit : ji Malik main jaldi se jaldi Pata karke btata hu..

Raghav : vese usko drugs ki doses kitani di thi...

Amit : Malik itnai to de he di thi ki vo Har 3-4 ghante main sex ke liye pagal hojati thi...

Raghav : yani ki Jo usko bacha ke le gya Hai vo to usko chod chod kar he pagal hojayega..

Amit : ji Malik

Raghav : magar suno amit shak ke ghere main tum ho amit agar mujhe pta chala ko info tumse leak hui Hai to dekhlena fir tum apna

Amit : Mallik meri itni Himmat kaha Hai..

Raghav : ek baat or...

Amit : ji Malik

Raghav : vo Sonia kaha Hai vese
Amit : Malik vo apni ma ke ghar gayi hui Hai.

Raghav : vaha ky karnee..?

Amit : ji uski ma bimar Hai..

Raghav : Acha or uska vo Ashiq kaha Hai kahi uske sath to nhi bhag gayii....

Amit : nhi malik Ashiq to yahi city delivery ka kaam kar raha Hai..

Raghav : dekhna kahi bhag na Jaye uske sath he bohot nuksaan hojayega..

Amit : ha Malik uska poora dhyan Hai..



ALISHAN HOTEL MAIN SHAKTI SINGHANIA KE ROOM MAIN


shakti or vo ladki ab vapis jaane ki tiyari kar Rahe the vo ladki bathroom se naha ke nangi nikali or kapade pehhne lagii..

Shakti : tumse door jaane ka Mann nhi bilkul bhi meri jaan

Ladki : Mann to Mera bhi ni Hai lekin ky kare abhi zindagii main mushkile boht Hai..

Shakti : bass samjho ab mushkile khatam hone vali Hai..

Ladki : hmm aap Jo sath Hai mere...

Ye bolkar vo ladki aage badkar shakti ko kiss karne lagti Hai..

Shakti : bass ek baat or Jo humare beech hua Hai uske baad bohot chance Hai ki tum pregnant hojaooo..

Ladki : ha vo to Hai he jitni chudai apne in dino main kar di Hai usse pregnant hone k boht jyada chance Hai..
Shakti : to dhyan rakhna ki ab koi or tumko hath na lagayee..

Ladki : ji ye kese ho sakta hai apko pta hai ki Mera kaam ky Hai usme to log ayenge he par ek kaam kar sakti hu ki main un logo se condom use karva lungi

Shakti : uski chinta mat karoo main Sambhal lunga kaam to bass ye dhyan rakhna ki job se Bahr kuch hua to merese bura koi ni hogaa

Ladki : ji bahr kuch nhi hogaa ab sirf apke bachche ki Maa he banana sapna Hai mera ye bolkar ladki fir shakti k kareeb ajati Hai....

Shakti : ab humko chalna chahiyee..
Ladki : haa chalo

Or vo dono room se Bahr nikal jaate Hai..

SHAHAR MAIN EK TAXI MAIN


Sonu cheenu ko leke ek taxi main Beth jata hai or sochta Hai ki ab vo cheenu ko leke kaha Jaye vo apne ghr to nhi jaa sakta th kyuki vaha Camaras Hai to usne Neetu ko phone kiyaa..

CALL PAR

Sonu : hello Neetu
Neetu : ha sonu btaooo
Sonu : tumse ek baat puchni thi..
Neetu : pehle ye btao ki tum kaha ho
Sonu : call pe nhi tum ye btao ki tumhare Boyfriend ka flat Khali Hai kyaa...
Neetu : haa Khali to Hai magar kyuu...
Sonu : mujhe abhi uski zarurat Hai..
Neetu : haa to tum us hotel ki reception pe chale jana main baat karlungii or chabi lelena..
Sonu : thanks Neetu

Sonu cheenu ko leke hotel room main pohoch jata Hai or usko Lita deta Hai or fir uspe sonia ki call aati Hai...

Sonia : hlo

Sonu : hie

Sonia : kaha ho sonuu

Sonu : main yahi hu Shahr main kyu kya hua sonia...

Sonia : aree hua kuch ni Maine to ye btana th ki main agayii hu yaha vapis..

Sonu : ohh achi baat hai..

Sonia : ha sonu..ab main ghr ja rahi hu .

Sonu : sonia main tumko ek address bhej raha hu seedha yaha aoo abhi ghr mat jao

Sonia : kyu sonu..

Sonu : tum aao to fir sab btata hu..

Sonia fir seedha us address pe pohoch jaati h vo room gate knock krti h sonu gate kholta h..

Sonia : yaha kyu bulaya h..

Sonu : andar aoo pehle

Ye bolkr sonu aage agee sonia uske piche chl padti h sonu room main jab jata Hai to sonia dekhti Hai bed pe cheenu padi hoti Hai..
Sonia : aree cheenu ye KY huaa tume sonu btaoo cheenu ki esi halat kese hui..?

Sonu : ye sab Raghav ka Kiya dhara Hai

Sonia : main us Raghav ko nhi chorungiii

Sonu : ha hum usse Har cheez ka badla lenge...

Sonia : Haa..

Itne main Neetu bhi ajati Hai uspe ek extra kye thi to vo seedha room main ajati Hai..

Neetu : kya huaa Sonu room kyu chahiye th..

Tabhi vo Neetu ko dekhtii Hai ki cheenu bed pe behal padi Hai..

Neetu : cheenu ye sab kese

Sonu : vaha basement se ye mili mujhe isko keid Kiya hua th..

Neetu : mujhe nhi pta th ye hotel wale inta gir sakte Hai..

Tabhi cheenu bolti Hai...

Cheenu : mujhe bachane k liye shukriya sonu..

Sonu : nhi cheenu shukriya Wali baat nhi Hai Mera farz th ye

Fir cheenu saari baate in teeno ko bta deti hai...
Sonu : to is drugss ka ilaaj ky Hai
Cheenu : vo to pta nhi mujhe sonu..

Sonu : iska Matlab Hai jabtak ilaaj nahi milega tab tak Har 5-6 ghante main tumhe sex chahiye nhi to tumharii dimagi halat kharab ho sakti Hai..

Cheenu : haa sahi kaha sonuu..

Tabhi sonu thoda soch main pad jata Hai or Sonia bolti Hai koi baat nhi tab tak sonu tumhare sath sex karta rahegaa...

Sonu sonia ki taraf dekhta Hai..

Sonu : par kese Sonia...
Sonia : cheenu ki jaan bachana jaruriii Hai kyukii...
Neetu : haa sonu sonia sahi bol rahi Hai..
Sonu kuch nhi bolta bass unki baate suntan rehta Hai ese he raat hojati hai or neetu cheenu ek room main or Sonia Sonia ek room main hote Hai..
Sonu sonia k pass Jake usko kiss karne lagta Hai sonia usko rok deti hai or bolti Hai ki abhi cheenu ko uski jyada zarurat Hai or usko cheenu k pass jane ko bolti h itne main Neetu unke room main aati Hai or bolti Hai..
Neetu : sonu vo cheenu pe drugss ka Asar dobara ho raha Hai..
Sonu thik Hai bolkar uske room main chale jata Hai..

Sonu jese he room main jata vo dekhta hai ki cheenu apne kapde khol kar nangi bethi hoti Hai or bolti Hai..

Cheenu : sonu ajaoo meri madad Karo..

Sonu bhi cheenu ki taraf badta hai cheenu sonu ko gale lagake kiss karne lagti Hai sonu bhi uska sath de raha Hota Hai kyuki vo cheenu ko bachana chahta th fir cheenu alag hoke sonu ki pent niche karne lagti Hai or uska land bahr nikal leti Hai fir vo sonu ka land tez tez choosne lagti Hai Sonu ko bhi maza aane lagta Hai...

Sonu : ahh ha cheenu aram se ...

Sonu cheenu Ka sir pakad kar tez tez dhakke marne lagta Hai cheenu ke muh ki chudai karne lagta Hai fir thodi Der baad vo cheenu ko bed pe Dhaka deta Hai or uski choot main apna ghusa deta hai..

Cheenu : aahaaha aaah sonu aaahaa pijaa is choot ko aaaj aah aahha sonu aahaaa..

Ese he thodi der chosne k baad sonu upper ata Hai or apna land cheenu ki choot main ghusa deta Hai or dhakke marne shuru kardeta Hai...

Cheenu : aahaaha aaah sonu aaahaa maaza aara Hai aahaaha aaah sonu aaahaa..

Sonu : haa cheenu aah maza ah to boht ara Hai..

Cheenu : ese ahh ahh ahhh aa aaaa hahe maza ab ahh ahh ahhh aa aaaa hum karenge jab tabahh ahh ahhh aa aaaa meri medicine ahh ahh ahhh aa aaaa nhi milti Hai...

Sonu : ahh ahh ahhh aa aaaa mujhe aa nhi pta umm th ki tum itani garam ho chinuu...

Cheenu : aah aaa ummmm zor se karoo ummmmm aaahhhhh aahhhh..

Fir sonu cheenu ki choot main jhadd jata Hai or uske upper he gir jata or doosre room main neetu or Sonia bhi so chuke the..
Fir sonu bhi cheenu k pass he soo jata Hai


NEXT DAY MORNING


Sonia or Neetu Dono he subha hotel jaane k liye tiyar hoti Hai sonu bhi room se Bahr ata Hai aaj vo late utha Hota Hai..

Sonia : sonu hum log job pe jaa Rahe h jisse un logo ko shak na ho..

Sonu : ha thik Hai sonia..

Neetu : sonu tum cheenu ka dhyan rakhna..

Sonu : thik Hai..

Fir vo dono hotel k liye nikal jaati Hai hotel main jaate hai unko reception pe amit milta Hai vo un dono ko bulata Hai or hotel ki dress dedeta hai..

Neetu : aree ye KY Hai amit..

Amit : ye dress pehno jaldi se tum

Sonia : kyu aajtak to pehni nhi humne ye dress ab kyuu..


Amit : kyuki bade malik hotel main he Hai or unko nhi pta ki is hotel main chote Malik kya kaam karte h..

Sonia : to btado unko bhi jesa beta h Vesa he baap bhi hoga usko ye sab galat thodi lagega...

Neetu haskar : haa sahi kaha tumne....

Amit : esa nhi Ho sakta bade Malik boht sakt haii..

Neetu : Acha main dekhna chahungi kitne sakt Hai ye bolkar dono hasne lagti Hai..

Amit : esa nhi Hai bass abi thode din hotel m normal kaam Karo bdia baad main jab Malik jayenge to kaam shuru karenge dobara se or kaam rokna he thik Hai kyuki aajkl hotel main time kuch thik nhi chal raha....

Tabhi gate se shakti andar aaata Hai or Sonia ko dekhta Hai.

Shakti : aare beti kesi ho

Sonia : thik hu uncle..

Shakti : or ghrme sab thik Hai mummy papa..

Sonia : hnji vo mummy ki tabiyat thodi kharab chalri h abhi toh...

Shakti : koi ni jab Mann ho chutti leke mummy se mil ana

Sonia : ji uncle..

Shakti : aree amit ye Mera Saman upper room main pohochaoo


Amit : ji Malik bolkar shakti ka bag utha leta Hai or room ki taraf chal padta Hai..
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UPDATE 17


Sonia or neetu ka poora din ese he hotel ke kaam main chala jata hai or fir vo Shyam ko ghr jaati Hai Sonu gate kholta hai..

Sonu : agaii tum dono

Sonia : ha

Sonu : chlo thik ho

Sonia : sonu aajka din kesa raha

Sonu : bass pucho mat..

Sonia : kyuu..

Sonu : ptani kesi drug di Hai isko Har 3-4 ghnte main pagal hojatiii Hai..

Sonia : koi baat nhi sonu thode din ese he rehna padega jabtak iska elaj nhi milta hai humko

Sonu : haa vo to Hai he...

Sonia : aaj khana bahr se mangate Hai chalooo..

Sonu : kyuu...

Sonia : yr vo hotel main boht kaam th..

Sonu : esa ky hogya aaj ..

Fir sonia hotel ka poora seen sonu ko btati Hai...

Sonu : Acha ye to boht Achi baat Hai yani security bhi nhi hogiii hotel main

Sonia : Haa shayad..

Sonu : to ab main hotel main jaake koi proof la sakta hu...

Tabhi vaha Neetu aati Hai or bolti hai

Neetu : nhi sonu tum ab hotel nhi jaogee

Sonu : kyu kya hua abb...

Neetu : tumko koi proof chahiye to vo proof main dedungii tumko lakeee..

Sonu : nhi neetu is kaam main khatra Hai...

Neetu : isliye he to bol rahi huu pichli baar bhi tumhare upper Goli chali hai is baar kuch galat hogya to Acha nhi hogaa..

Sonu: pr tum kese...

Neetu : kyuki main poora time hotel main he rehti hu or hotel main moka dekhkr main proof Katha kar sakti hu..

Sonu : par vo moka milega Kab...

Neetu : Maine kuch socha Hai vo hote Hai moke he moke milege...

Sonia : kya socha Hai btao to...

Neetu : jab hogaa tab pta chaljayega tumko chinta mat karoo..

Or ye bolkar neetu vaha se apne room main chali jaati hai..

Sonu : pta ni ky karna chahti Hai ye..

Sonia : Jo bhi karee bass apna dhyan rakhe..

Sonu : or tum Mera... ye bolkar sonia ko kiss karne aagee badta Hai.. lekin Sonia usko rok deti hai ..

Sonu : kya hua...

Sonia : abhi nhi sonu..

Sonu : kyu..

Sonia : abhi main Chahti hu ki tum sirf cheenu pe dhyan do mere upper nhi..

Sonu : ek kiss se ky hoga fir bhi..

Sonia : ye ek kiss bhi cheenu ko he do abhii jab tak humko ilaj nhi milta hai..

Sonu : chalo jesa tum bolo..


Or fir vo log khana khate Hai or Sonia or Neetu ek room main or sonu cheenu ek room main chale jaate hai...

SONU KE ROOM MAIN


Cheenu : sonu aajaooo jaldi se abb wait nhi ho raha Hai...

Sonu aagee badkar cheenu ko kiss karne lagta Hai dono 5 mint tak kiss karte rehte Hai...
Fir cheenu sonu ko bed pe dhakka deti hai or uska lower niche kar deti hai sonu ka land bilkul tight hogya Hota Hai cheenu usko hath main leke sehelane lagti Hai..
Cheenu : tumhara land kamaal ka Hai sonu..

Or ye bolkar sonu ka land muh main lene lagti Hai or tez tez choosne lagti Hai beech beechme sonu ka poora land apne gale tak utar leti Hai sonu ko boht maza aa raha Hota Hai...

Sonu : aaah cheenu ky choosti ho yr.. aaaa maza agya yrrr...

Fir sonu cheenu ke baal pakad leta Hai or uski muh main tez tez dhakke marne lagta Hai cheenu ko drugs ki vaja se ese sex karne main maza aane laga th or vo Chahti thi ki sonu or tez dhakke maree pr Josh main hone ke karan sonu thodi he der main cheenu ke muh main apna saara paani nikaal deta Hai..

Dono thodi derke liye sans lete Hai cheenu ke muh se sonu ka maal bHar tapakne lagta Hai... cheenu uthkar bathroom main chali jaati Hai sonu bhi thodi Der ke baad so jata hai....

NEXT DAY IN HOTEL

Neetu or Sonia apna apna kaam kar rahi hoti Hai tabhi vaha amit ata Hai or Neetu ko bulata Hai..

Amit : aree Neetu baat suno...

Neetu : haa bolo amit..

Amit : ek mint chalo mere sath...

Neeti bhi sath chal deti hai amit usko ek room main lejakr piche se pakad leta Hai or uske garden pe kiss karne lagta Hai..
Neetu : aahh amit ky kar Rahe ho

Amit : boht din hogyee neetu..

Neetu : ha to ky huaa hato tum ...

Amit : saali Randi ese bhao mat Khao

Or ye bolkar neetu ki pent niche kar deta hai or uski choot main unglii Dalne lagta Hai...

Neetu : aahh ahh rehnee Do amitt abhi tumhare bade Malik bhi hotel main he Hai...

Amit : ab mere se ruka nhi jayegaa...

Or vo apna land Neetu ki choot main Dal deta Hai or tez tez dhakke marne lagta Hai jisse vo jaldi se jhadd jayeee...

Amit : aah Neetu bade din k baad aaj choot mil rahi h aahh ahhh

Neetu : aah aarammse aaah aahh kaha ki jaldi Hai aah aaa aa ummmaaa a aaa

Ese he 5 mint ki chudai ke baad Neetu jhadd jaati h

Amit bhi jhadd jata Hai amit ko tab he ek msg ata Hai vo mobile main dekhta Hai or us msg ka reply krke bathroom ki taraf badd jata Hai is baat ka fayda uthakr Neeti jaldi se uska phone leti Hai amit jaldi main phone lock karna bhool gaya th or vo amit ki whtapp ko scan krleti Hai fir amit ata Hai or kapde pehnkr room ke Bahar ki or chala jata hai..

Neetu whtapp check kartii Hai or usko usme boht kuch milta Hai jisko dekhkr vo boht heran hojati hai vo jaldi se sonu ko call krti Hai
Call pe .
Sonu : ha Neetu..

Neetu : sonu kaha ho tum

Sonu : bass yahi Bazar tak Aya hu

Neetu : jaldi ghr jaoo

Sonu : ha ja raha hu..

Neetu: sonu tum jaldi se ghr pohocho bss..

Sonu : kyu kya hua Hai..

Neetu : mujhe Raghav ki barbadi ka saboot mil gya Hai...

Sonu : ye to boht achi baat Hai...

Neetu : haa main jaldi se sonia ko leke ghr aati hu ..

Fir call cut krke Neetu seedha sonia k pass jati hai vo reception pe dekhkti Hai vaha sonia nhi dikhti vo usko dhundne lagtii Hai Sare floor check krti Hai usko sonia kahi nhi dikhtiii neetu ko sonia ki fikar hone lagii thi ki kahi Raghav ko inke plan ka pehle he to nhi Pata chl gya Hai tabhi vo dekhti Hai sonia ek room se Bahr aa rahi Hai...

Neetu : aree sonia

Sonia Neetu ki avaj sunkr usko dekhti Hai

Sonia : Haa Neetu bolo

Neetu : kya kr rahi thi tum room main

Sonia : kuch nhi yrr vo shakti uncle ka bathroom ka tap Kam nhi kr raha th to undone reception pe call Kiya th koi th nhi to main chali gayii check krneee ab plumber ko bulaungiii..

Neetu : okok

Sonia : vo chor tu bta kyu dhoond rahi th mujhe

Neetu : ek khushkhabrii Hai...

Sonia : kya btao mujhee bhiii

Neetu : yaha nhi...

Sania : kyuu...

Neetu : bass yaha sahi nhi h ghr chalo fir btatii hu


FIR THODI DER BAAD SONU KE GHR MAIN

Sonu: kya baat Hai cheenu itni jaldi main kyu Bulaya

Sonia : Haa yrr tumne ekdum se bulaliyaa mujhkoo...

Neetu: tum baat sunkar khush hojaogeee

Sonu: ky baat Hai..

Neetu : mujhko cheenu ki dawaii mil gayi Hai jisse vo thik hojayegii

Sonu : magar kese mili tumko..

Neetu : amit k mobile se dekhiii Raghav ki 3 din baad ek meeting Hai Jo ki pehle hotel main honi thi lekin ab shahr ke bahr ek godown main honi Hai...

Sonu : Acha to isse to hum police ko ye news deke Raghav or uske saare business ko barbaad kar sakte Hai...

Neetu: haa..

Sonu : kyu sonia main sahi bol raha hu naa...

Sonia ka dhyan kahi or he Hota Hai...
Sonia : huhh... Haa Haa sonu bilkul sahi lekin karogee kese agar police ko pehle btaogee to raghav unko pese dedega or Bach jayega or at a time btayenge to vo nikal kar bhag sakte hai...

Neetu : baat to sahi bol rahi Hai ye..

Sonu : to mujhko he rokna hoga fir jab saare proof mil jayenge to hum usko police main dedenge ..

Neetu : haa bilkul sahi lekin vaha ese Khali hath jana sahi nhi Hai

Sonu : vo gaurd ki pistol Hai mere pass...

Sonia : ha to sonu tum vo sath leke zarur jana

Sonu : par usme Goliya nhi Hai..
Neetu : vo tumko main lake dedungi...

Sonu : kaha se..

Neetu : vo tum choro ab or plan pe focus karo..

Sonu : okk.....


UPDATE 18


3 DIN BAAD

Neetu aati Hai or sonu ko goliya pakda deti hai

Sonu :ye kaha se laayi tum

Neetu : Hai mere kuch contacts

Sonu : hmm thik Hai chlo ab main chalta hu ..

Neetu : hmm OK

Sonia : sonu..

Sonu : hmm sonia

Sonia : apna dhyan rakhna sonu..

Sonu : hmm ok sonia..

Or vo dono fir ek doosre ko kiss karte Hai or sonu bahr ki or chala jata hai


MEETING WALI JAGA PE


sonu waha pehle he pohoch gya th vo Raghav ka wait Kar raha th vo ek kone main jaga dekhkr Beth gya th jaha usko koi na dekhke..

Sonu thoda wait karta Hai itne main do gaadi aajati Hai un mese ek gaadi se kuch angrej nikalte Hai or ek gaadi se Raghav or amit nikalte Hai dono party appas main kuch baat krke apne bag change krlete Hai..

Itne main sonu thoda side hoke Goli chalata Hai...

Or vo goli jaake ek angrej ko lag jaati Ha Or vo vahi gir jata Hai sab ye dekhkr ghabra jaate hai or sab log gaadi ke piche chupp jate Hai raghav dekhta Hai ki goli kaha se chali Hai usko ek parchaii dikh jaati Hai vo Or us parchai pe vo Goli chala deta hai sonu waha se time pe hat jata Hai sonu apni jaga badlata Hai or doosri side se aake goli chalata Hai is baar goli amit ko lagtii Hai raghav fir Bach jata Hai but Raghav jaldi se goli chala deta Hai or goli sonu k side main lagtii Hai sonu bhi Bach jata..

Ese he thodi dertak ladaii chalti rehti Hai or fir aakhir ek goli..

Raghav ko lag he jaati Hai raghav ko goli lagte Hai vo ek bacha angrej vaha se gaadi leke bhag jata Hai..

Ab sonu Raghav ke pass Ata Hai raghav zameen pe pada sonu ko dekhta Hai or bolta Hai..

Raghav : akhir tumne apna badla le he liya..

Sonu : nhi abhi vo poora nhi huaaa..

Or sonu Raghav pe bandook tan deta Hai or uske Sar main goli marke uska khel khatam kardeta Hai...

Sonu tabhi phone nikalkr sonia ko call krta Hai uska phone switch off ata Hai or fir try karta Hai..Itne main police aati Hai or sonu ko arrest karletii Hai..

Ab kuch din beet jaate hai or sonu jail main Hota Hai Neetu or cheenu ka kuch ata Pata nhi hota Hai ki vo kaha Hai or Sonia ka bhii...

Ab is baat hui ko 7 month beet jate Hai..

Goa ke ek hotel main Sonia Jo ki ab pregnant Hai or uska 6 month chl raha Hai shakti ke land pe bethkr uchal rahi hoti Hai

Shakti : ha bss ahh ahh ahh sonia jaan ese he karooo..

Sonia : Haa jaan ohhh aahh aahh apni biwi hu jese ahhh ahh bolo ge vese he karungiii

Shakti : jaldi se bass merko Mera Asli varis dedo soni meri jaan

Sonia ji ha apko varis main jaldi he dungii 3 month ke baad meri jaan I love u..



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UPDATE 17


Sonia or neetu ka poora din ese he hotel ke kaam main chala jata hai or fir vo Shyam ko ghr jaati Hai Sonu gate kholta hai..

Sonu : agaii tum dono

Sonia : ha

Sonu : chlo thik ho

Sonia : sonu aajka din kesa raha

Sonu : bass pucho mat..

Sonia : kyuu..

Sonu : ptani kesi drug di Hai isko Har 3-4 ghnte main pagal hojatiii Hai..

Sonia : koi baat nhi sonu thode din ese he rehna padega jabtak iska elaj nhi milta hai humko

Sonu : haa vo to Hai he...

Sonia : aaj khana bahr se mangate Hai chalooo..

Sonu : kyuu...

Sonia : yr vo hotel main boht kaam th..

Sonu : esa ky hogya aaj ..

Fir sonia hotel ka poora seen sonu ko btati Hai...

Sonu : Acha ye to boht Achi baat Hai yani security bhi nhi hogiii hotel main

Sonia : Haa shayad..

Sonu : to ab main hotel main jaake koi proof la sakta hu...

Tabhi vaha Neetu aati Hai or bolti hai

Neetu : nhi sonu tum ab hotel nhi jaogee

Sonu : kyu kya hua abb...

Neetu : tumko koi proof chahiye to vo proof main dedungii tumko lakeee..

Sonu : nhi neetu is kaam main khatra Hai...

Neetu : isliye he to bol rahi huu pichli baar bhi tumhare upper Goli chali hai is baar kuch galat hogya to Acha nhi hogaa..

Sonu: pr tum kese...

Neetu : kyuki main poora time hotel main he rehti hu or hotel main moka dekhkr main proof Katha kar sakti hu..

Sonu : par vo moka milega Kab...

Neetu : Maine kuch socha Hai vo hote Hai moke he moke milege...

Sonia : kya socha Hai btao to...

Neetu : jab hogaa tab pta chaljayega tumko chinta mat karoo..

Or ye bolkar neetu vaha se apne room main chali jaati hai..

Sonu : pta ni ky karna chahti Hai ye..

Sonia : Jo bhi karee bass apna dhyan rakhe..

Sonu : or tum Mera... ye bolkar sonia ko kiss karne aagee badta Hai.. lekin Sonia usko rok deti hai ..

Sonu : kya hua...

Sonia : abhi nhi sonu..

Sonu : kyu..

Sonia : abhi main Chahti hu ki tum sirf cheenu pe dhyan do mere upper nhi..

Sonu : ek kiss se ky hoga fir bhi..

Sonia : ye ek kiss bhi cheenu ko he do abhii jab tak humko ilaj nhi milta hai..

Sonu : chalo jesa tum bolo..


Or fir vo log khana khate Hai or Sonia or Neetu ek room main or sonu cheenu ek room main chale jaate hai...

SONU KE ROOM MAIN


Cheenu : sonu aajaooo jaldi se abb wait nhi ho raha Hai...

Sonu aagee badkar cheenu ko kiss karne lagta Hai dono 5 mint tak kiss karte rehte Hai...
Fir cheenu sonu ko bed pe dhakka deti hai or uska lower niche kar deti hai sonu ka land bilkul tight hogya Hota Hai cheenu usko hath main leke sehelane lagti Hai..
Cheenu : tumhara land kamaal ka Hai sonu..

Or ye bolkar sonu ka land muh main lene lagti Hai or tez tez choosne lagti Hai beech beechme sonu ka poora land apne gale tak utar leti Hai sonu ko boht maza aa raha Hota Hai...

Sonu : aaah cheenu ky choosti ho yr.. aaaa maza agya yrrr...

Fir sonu cheenu ke baal pakad leta Hai or uski muh main tez tez dhakke marne lagta Hai cheenu ko drugs ki vaja se ese sex karne main maza aane laga th or vo Chahti thi ki sonu or tez dhakke maree pr Josh main hone ke karan sonu thodi he der main cheenu ke muh main apna saara paani nikaal deta Hai..

Dono thodi derke liye sans lete Hai cheenu ke muh se sonu ka maal bHar tapakne lagta Hai... cheenu uthkar bathroom main chali jaati Hai sonu bhi thodi Der ke baad so jata hai....

NEXT DAY IN HOTEL

Neetu or Sonia apna apna kaam kar rahi hoti Hai tabhi vaha amit ata Hai or Neetu ko bulata Hai..

Amit : aree Neetu baat suno...

Neetu : haa bolo amit..

Amit : ek mint chalo mere sath...

Neeti bhi sath chal deti hai amit usko ek room main lejakr piche se pakad leta Hai or uske garden pe kiss karne lagta Hai..
Neetu : aahh amit ky kar Rahe ho

Amit : boht din hogyee neetu..

Neetu : ha to ky huaa hato tum ...

Amit : saali Randi ese bhao mat Khao

Or ye bolkar neetu ki pent niche kar deta hai or uski choot main unglii Dalne lagta Hai...

Neetu : aahh ahh rehnee Do amitt abhi tumhare bade Malik bhi hotel main he Hai...

Amit : ab mere se ruka nhi jayegaa...

Or vo apna land Neetu ki choot main Dal deta Hai or tez tez dhakke marne lagta Hai jisse vo jaldi se jhadd jayeee...

Amit : aah Neetu bade din k baad aaj choot mil rahi h aahh ahhh

Neetu : aah aarammse aaah aahh kaha ki jaldi Hai aah aaa aa ummmaaa a aaa

Ese he 5 mint ki chudai ke baad Neetu jhadd jaati h

Amit bhi jhadd jata Hai amit ko tab he ek msg ata Hai vo mobile main dekhta Hai or us msg ka reply krke bathroom ki taraf badd jata Hai is baat ka fayda uthakr Neeti jaldi se uska phone leti Hai amit jaldi main phone lock karna bhool gaya th or vo amit ki whtapp ko scan krleti Hai fir amit ata Hai or kapde pehnkr room ke Bahar ki or chala jata hai..

Neetu whtapp check kartii Hai or usko usme boht kuch milta Hai jisko dekhkr vo boht heran hojati hai vo jaldi se sonu ko call krti Hai
Call pe .
Sonu : ha Neetu..

Neetu : sonu kaha ho tum

Sonu : bass yahi Bazar tak Aya hu

Neetu : jaldi ghr jaoo

Sonu : ha ja raha hu..

Neetu: sonu tum jaldi se ghr pohocho bss..

Sonu : kyu kya hua Hai..

Neetu : mujhe Raghav ki barbadi ka saboot mil gya Hai...

Sonu : ye to boht achi baat Hai...

Neetu : haa main jaldi se sonia ko leke ghr aati hu ..

Fir call cut krke Neetu seedha sonia k pass jati hai vo reception pe dekhkti Hai vaha sonia nhi dikhti vo usko dhundne lagtii Hai Sare floor check krti Hai usko sonia kahi nhi dikhtiii neetu ko sonia ki fikar hone lagii thi ki kahi Raghav ko inke plan ka pehle he to nhi Pata chl gya Hai tabhi vo dekhti Hai sonia ek room se Bahr aa rahi Hai...

Neetu : aree sonia

Sonia Neetu ki avaj sunkr usko dekhti Hai

Sonia : Haa Neetu bolo

Neetu : kya kr rahi thi tum room main

Sonia : kuch nhi yrr vo shakti uncle ka bathroom ka tap Kam nhi kr raha th to undone reception pe call Kiya th koi th nhi to main chali gayii check krneee ab plumber ko bulaungiii..

Neetu : okok

Sonia : vo chor tu bta kyu dhoond rahi th mujhe

Neetu : ek khushkhabrii Hai...

Sonia : kya btao mujhee bhiii

Neetu : yaha nhi...

Sania : kyuu...

Neetu : bass yaha sahi nhi h ghr chalo fir btatii hu


FIR THODI DER BAAD SONU KE GHR MAIN

Sonu: kya baat Hai cheenu itni jaldi main kyu Bulaya

Sonia : Haa yrr tumne ekdum se bulaliyaa mujhkoo...

Neetu: tum baat sunkar khush hojaogeee

Sonu: ky baat Hai..

Neetu : mujhko cheenu ki dawaii mil gayi Hai jisse vo thik hojayegii

Sonu : magar kese mili tumko..

Neetu : amit k mobile se dekhiii Raghav ki 3 din baad ek meeting Hai Jo ki pehle hotel main honi thi lekin ab shahr ke bahr ek godown main honi Hai...

Sonu : Acha to isse to hum police ko ye news deke Raghav or uske saare business ko barbaad kar sakte Hai...

Neetu: haa..

Sonu : kyu sonia main sahi bol raha hu naa...

Sonia ka dhyan kahi or he Hota Hai...
Sonia : huhh... Haa Haa sonu bilkul sahi lekin karogee kese agar police ko pehle btaogee to raghav unko pese dedega or Bach jayega or at a time btayenge to vo nikal kar bhag sakte hai...

Neetu : baat to sahi bol rahi Hai ye..

Sonu : to mujhko he rokna hoga fir jab saare proof mil jayenge to hum usko police main dedenge ..

Neetu : haa bilkul sahi lekin vaha ese Khali hath jana sahi nhi Hai

Sonu : vo gaurd ki pistol Hai mere pass...

Sonia : ha to sonu tum vo sath leke zarur jana

Sonu : par usme Goliya nhi Hai..
Neetu : vo tumko main lake dedungi...

Sonu : kaha se..

Neetu : vo tum choro ab or plan pe focus karo..

Sonu : okk.....


UPDATE 18


3 DIN BAAD

Neetu aati Hai or sonu ko goliya pakda deti hai

Sonu :ye kaha se laayi tum

Neetu : Hai mere kuch contacts

Sonu : hmm thik Hai chlo ab main chalta hu ..

Neetu : hmm OK

Sonia : sonu..

Sonu : hmm sonia

Sonia : apna dhyan rakhna sonu..

Sonu : hmm ok sonia..

Or vo dono fir ek doosre ko kiss karte Hai or sonu bahr ki or chala jata hai


MEETING WALI JAGA PE


sonu waha pehle he pohoch gya th vo Raghav ka wait Kar raha th vo ek kone main jaga dekhkr Beth gya th jaha usko koi na dekhke..

Sonu thoda wait karta Hai itne main do gaadi aajati Hai un mese ek gaadi se kuch angrej nikalte Hai or ek gaadi se Raghav or amit nikalte Hai dono party appas main kuch baat krke apne bag change krlete Hai..

Itne main sonu thoda side hoke Goli chalata Hai...

Or vo goli jaake ek angrej ko lag jaati Ha Or vo vahi gir jata Hai sab ye dekhkr ghabra jaate hai or sab log gaadi ke piche chupp jate Hai raghav dekhta Hai ki goli kaha se chali Hai usko ek parchaii dikh jaati Hai vo Or us parchai pe vo Goli chala deta hai sonu waha se time pe hat jata Hai sonu apni jaga badlata Hai or doosri side se aake goli chalata Hai is baar goli amit ko lagtii Hai raghav fir Bach jata Hai but Raghav jaldi se goli chala deta Hai or goli sonu k side main lagtii Hai sonu bhi Bach jata..

Ese he thodi dertak ladaii chalti rehti Hai or fir aakhir ek goli..

Raghav ko lag he jaati Hai raghav ko goli lagte Hai vo ek bacha angrej vaha se gaadi leke bhag jata Hai..

Ab sonu Raghav ke pass Ata Hai raghav zameen pe pada sonu ko dekhta Hai or bolta Hai..

Raghav : akhir tumne apna badla le he liya..

Sonu : nhi abhi vo poora nhi huaaa..

Or sonu Raghav pe bandook tan deta Hai or uske Sar main goli marke uska khel khatam kardeta Hai...

Sonu tabhi phone nikalkr sonia ko call krta Hai uska phone switch off ata Hai or fir try karta Hai..Itne main police aati Hai or sonu ko arrest karletii Hai..

Ab kuch din beet jaate hai or sonu jail main Hota Hai Neetu or cheenu ka kuch ata Pata nhi hota Hai ki vo kaha Hai or Sonia ka bhii...

Ab is baat hui ko 7 month beet jate Hai..

Goa ke ek hotel main Sonia Jo ki ab pregnant Hai or uska 6 month chl raha Hai shakti ke land pe bethkr uchal rahi hoti Hai

Shakti : ha bss ahh ahh ahh sonia jaan ese he karooo..

Sonia : Haa jaan ohhh aahh aahh apni biwi hu jese ahhh ahh bolo ge vese he karungiii

Shakti : jaldi se bass merko Mera Asli varis dedo soni meri jaan

Sonia ji ha apko varis main jaldi he dungii 3 month ke baad meri jaan I love u..




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bhai bass Badi mushkil se story complete ki Hai mere se Khichdi pakk gayi uske liye sorry..
अभी the end मत करो, कुछ आगे बढ़ाओ, वरना टाइटल और कहानी दोनो से अन्याय होगा।
 
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अभी the end मत करो, कुछ आगे बढ़ाओ, वरना टाइटल और कहानी दोनो से अन्याय होगा।

DOST DEKHO AB COMPLETE KARDI HAI ISKO AB MAIN OR NHI LIKH PAYA ISKE LIYE MERE IDEA KHATAM HOGYE HAI YE UPDATE MAIN DEC MAIN LIKHE THE TABSE KOI IDEA NHI MILRA TH AAGE KA LIKHNEKA AB MERI NEW STORY HAI USPE APNA REVIEW DO
NEW STORY

 

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अभी the end मत करो, कुछ आगे बढ़ाओ, वरना टाइटल और कहानी दोनो से अन्याय होगा।
Or ye naam ke niche story kese show hori Hai merko bhi krvani Hai yrr
 

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DOST DEKHO AB COMPLETE KARDI HAI ISKO AB MAIN OR NHI LIKH PAYA ISKE LIYE MERE IDEA KHATAM HOGYE HAI YE UPDATE MAIN DEC MAIN LIKHE THE TABSE KOI IDEA NHI MILRA TH AAGE KA LIKHNEKA AB MERI NEW STORY HAI USPE APNA REVIEW DO
NEW STORY

जब लिखना शुरू किया होगा इसे तो कुछ तो सोचा होगा न, टाइटल के हिसाब से?

उसी थीम पर चलना था न, सोनिया को पूरी तरह से नेगेटिव दिखाया, तो उसका भी कुछ हिसाब करना था न
 
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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


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