Romance Tumhare Liye... (Completed)

[Raj Yadav]

Superb

 

[mashish]

Update - 10


Dusre din routine ke anusaar main subah uth kar sabse pahle fresh huyi uske baad maine chaay banaya aur fir ham dono ne chaay pi. Breakfast wagaira karne ke baad main aur nakul hall me tv dekhne lage. Ham dono ke beech pyar karne jaisi koi baate nahi ho rahi thi kyo ki ham dono hi tension me the.

Mere jor dene par nakul ne rohan ko phone karke bulaya tha. Ham yaha is flat me bhale hi safe the magar sawaal tha ki kab tak safe rah sakte the. Dusri baat ye bhi thi ki kya ham yaha par pakde jane ke dar se sirf chhupe hi rahege. Hame apni life me aage badhna tha jo ki is situation me nahi ho sakta tha. Hame apne sir se pakde jane wali tension ko door karna tha.

Dopahar ko ham dono lunch karne ke baad fursat hi huye the ki door bell baji. Nakul ne ja kar darwaja khola to dekha rohan tha. Rohan ke aane se hamne usse kaha ki hame yaha se kahi dusre shahar nikal jana chahiye kyo ki der sawer police hame khojte huye yaha bhi aa sakti hai aur agar unhone hame pakad kar hamare dad ke hawale kar diya to hamare sath achha to bilkul bhi nahi hoga.

Rohan hamari problem ko samajhta tha magar wo bhi bechara kya kar sakta tha. Wo jo kar raha tha wahi hamare liye bahut badi baat thi magar maujuda situation me hamara yaha rahna thik nahi tha. Hamne usse kaha ki agar ham kisi tarah mumbai se nikal kar kisi dusre shahar me chale jaye to pakde jane ka khatra tal jayega aur ham iske alawa bhi kuch karne ke liye free ho jayege. Rohan ne hamari baat par kaha ki use ek do din ka time chahiye. Agar kuch jugaad hota hai to wo hame batayega.

Rohan ke jane ke baad ham dono kuch der isi bare me baate karte rahe uske baad main kapde dhone chali gai jabki nakul wahi tv dekhta raha. Main soch rahi thi ki kya soch kar ham ghar se bhaag kar yaha aaye the aur ab hamare sath kya ho raha tha. Main ye maanti thi ki apne maa baap ke khilaaf ja kar hamne achha nahi kiya tha aur na hi hame is tarah bhaag kar aana chahiye tha magar apne dil ke haatho majbur the ham. Mere dad meri shadi nakul ke sath kisi bhi keemat par nahi karte jabki main nakul ke bina jindagi jine ka soch bhi nahi sakti thi.

Udhar mere dad aur sanjay uncle rohan ke dad ke sath unki company me chale jate the. Din bhar akele ghar me baith kar wo karte bhi kya. Waise bhi har gujarte din ke sath unki chinta aur pareshani badhti hi ja rahi thi. Rohan ke dad unhe dilasha de rahe the ki wo fikra na kare. Bahut jald unki beti aur us ladke ko police talaash kar legi. Dad ko yaha aaye huye hapte se jyada din gujar gaye the. Apna kaam dhandha chhod kar wo yaha jyada time tak ruk bhi nahi sakte the. Is liye wo chaahte the ki police hame jald se jald talash kar le.

Do din baad rohan ne phone kar ke bataya ki uska ek dost hai deepak naam ka. Wo pune me job karta hai aur kisi kaam se wo apne ghar mumbai aa raha hai. Rohan ne usse hamare bare me baat ki to usne kaha ki wo hame yaha se nikaal kar pune le jayega. Is liye ham taiyaar rahe. Rohan ki is baat se hame kuch raahat mili.

Is flat me hame kisi tarah ki koi taklif nahi thi magar is situation me ye hame kaid jaise lag raha tha. Normal situation hoti to ham aise flat me rahne se khush hi hote magar is haalat me kuch bhi achha nahi lag raha tha. Ye do din hamne badi mushkil se gujaare aur finally wo din aa hi gaya jab hame mumbai se nikalne ka awsar aur saadhan mil gaya.

Rohan ne phone karke kaha ki wo shaam ko aayega kyo ki hame shaam ko hi yaha se nikalna hai. Is liye wo hame yaha se le kar plan ke anusaar deepak ki bataayi huyi jagah par jayega. Us jagah se deepak hame apni car me le jayega. Ham dono hi bahut jyada utsuk the aur ghabraye huye bhi the ki sab kuch kaise hoga. Kahi aisa na ho ki yaha se nikalte hi kahi par ham police ke dwara pakad liye jaye. Agar aisa hua to hamara kya hoga ye ham soch bhi nahi sakte the.

Teesra din kisi tarah gujra aur shaam huyi. Main aur nakul puri tarah yaha se nikalne ko taiyar the. Hamare paas samaan ke roop me ham dono ke ek ek bag hi the. Shaam ko 6:30 baje ke kareeb rohan aaya aur fir ham uske sath flat se nikal kar neeche aaye. Baahar gate par security guard tha jo ki koi dusra hi tha. Usne rohan ke sath ham dono ko dekha to usne rohan se puchha. Rohan ne use yahi bataya ki ham uske dost hain. Uske baad ham waha se rohan ki car me baith kar chal diye.

Raaste me rohan aur nakul ek dusre se baate kar rahe the jabki main kisi aur hi duniya me khoi hui thi. Mujhe yaha se nikalne ka tension to tha hi magar ek tension naina ka bhi tha ki wo kaha gayab hai aur kis haal me hogi. Uske bare me jab bhi main sochti thi to mere man me dher sare khayaal aane lagte the aur main anayaas hi uske liye chintit ho jati thi.

Kuch der baad rohan ki car ek jagah ruki to main hakikat ki duniya me aai. Car rukte hi rohan aur nakul car se utarne lage to main bhi utar gai. Kuch hi faasle par ek aur car khadi thi jiski driving sheet par rohan aur nakul ki hi umar ka ek ladka baitha dikha hame. Car se utar kar ham us car ke paas pahuche. Rohan ke dost deepak ne hame car me baith jane ko kaha to ham dono apna apna bag liye car ki pichhli sheet par baith gaye. Deepak aur rohan ek dusre se baate kar rahe the. Deepak rohan se kah raha tha ki fikar ki koi baat nahi hai. Police hame nahi pakad payegi.

Kuch der rohan se baat karne ke baad deepak ne car ko start kiya. Rohan aur nakul ne ek dusre se hath milaya aur baad me phone karne ko kaha. Uske baad deepak ne car ko aage badha diya. Raaste me deepak nakul se beech beech me baate karta raha jabki main ek baar fir se khayaalo me gum ho gai thi. Mujhe pata hi nahi chala ki main kitni der tak socho me gum rahi thi. Mujhe hosh tab aaya jab car ek jagah ruki aur nakul ne mujhe pukara.

Maine dekha ki nakul aur deepak car se utar chuke the aur mere side khade the. Main unhe dekh kar sochne lagi ki itni jaldi pune aa gaya kya. Mere chehre ke bhaav dekh kar nakul ne kaha ki abhi ham pune nahi pahuche hain balki kisi jaruri kaam se yaha ruke hain. Nakul ke kahne par main car se baahar utri. Uske baad main aur nakul deepak ke peeche peeche chalne lage.

Ek taraf kai saari shops thi. Deepak ek shop ke paas ruka aur fir palat kar hame andar aane ko kaha to ham dono uske peeche chal diye. Shop ke andar ek aadmi mila to deepak ne usse kuch baat ki jisse us aadmi ne hamari taraf dekha aur fir deepak ki taraf dekhte huye sir hilaya.

Us aadmi ne ham dono ko apne peeche aane ko kaha to ham dono deepak ki taraf dekhne lage. Deepak ne nakul se kaha ki yaha par hamara huliya badla jayega taaki raaste me kahi agar police wale mile bhi to pahchaan na sake. Deepak ki ye baat sun kar hame samajh aaya ki ham yaha kyo aaye hain. Main deepak ki is baat se hairaan bhi hui aur khush bhi. Kya sahi dimaag lagaya tha usne.

Main aur nakul thodi hi der me us aadmi ke sath shop ke andar ki taraf aaye to ek jagah ek ladki mili. Us ladki se us aadmi ne kuch kaha jisse wo ladki mujhe apne sath le gayi jabki nakul us aadmi ke sath dusri taraf chala gaya.

Wo ladki mujhe ek kamre me le aai jaha par aur bhi ladkiya thi jo alag alag chairs par baithi ladkiyo ka make up kar rahi thi. Chairs ke saamne bada sa sheesha laga hua tha aur uske chaaro taraf white bulb jal rahe the. Us ladki ne mujhe ek khaali chair par baithaya aur fir wo mera huliya badalne ke kaam me lag gayi. Jaise jaise wo mera huliya badalti ja rahi thi waise waise main saamne sheeshe me khud ko dekh kar hairaan hoti ja rahi thi. Maine filmo me hi ye sab dekha tha magar aaj jab ye sab mere sath ho raha tha to main chakit thi.

Ek ghante baad situation ye thi ki main saamne sheeshe me apne aapko hi pahchaan nahi pa rahi thi. Main samajh gai ki jab main khud hi apne aapko nahi pahchaan pa rahi hu to police kya mujhe pahchanegi. Huliya badalne ke baad wo ladki mujhe le kar baahar aayi. Baahar wo aadmi pahle se maujud tha. Us aadmi ke sath jab maine ek aur aadmi ko dekha to main chaunki. Wo aadmi bhi mujhe dekh kar chaunka tha aur fir mujhe dekhte huye muskurane laga tha. Main samajh gai ki ye nakul hi hai jo ab badle huye huliye me dikh raha tha.

Deepak ne us aadmi ko hamara huliya badalne ke liye paise diye. Uske baad ham sab car me aa gaye. Raaste me deepak ne kaha ki ab koi police wala hame nahi pahchaan payega aur ab ham befikra ho kar pune ja sakte hain. Itne dino me main pahli baar apne andar khushi mahsoos kar rahi thi. Maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki meri jindagi me kabhi aisa bhi din aayega jab mujhe apna huliya is tarah se badalna padega aur ek shahar se dusre shahar bhaagna padega.

Deepak ne raaste me nakul se kaha ki wo jis company me job karta hai us company me wo uski bhi job lagwa dega aur wahi kahi rahne ka intjaam bhi karwa dega. Deepak ki is baat se nakul ne khush ho kar use thanks kaha aur ye bhi kaha ki wo uska ye ahsaan kabhi nahi bhulega. Nakul ke aisa kahne par deepak ne kaha ki insaan ek dusre ki madad ke liye hi hota hai. Wo to use apna dost samajh kar apna farj ada kar raha hai.

Idhar main soch rahi thi ki wakt bhale hi hamare liye bura chal raha tha magar hamari madad ke liye jo log mil rahe the wo kisi farishte se kam nahi the. Aaj ke wakt me aise log bahut kam hi milte hain jo kisi ajnabi ke liye itna kuch bina kisi swaarth ke karte hain. Main ye soch soch kar upar wale ko thanks kah rahi thi.

Nakul deepak ke sath uski bagal wali sheet par baitha tha aur deepak se baate kar raha tha. Main pichhli sheet par baithi pahle to khayaalo me gum thi aur fir jane kab meri aankh lag gai thi. Dono aapas me baate kar rahe the. Baat karte karte wo is baat par pahuche ki ham dono ka huliya to badal gaya hai lekin agar police walo ne hamse hamara ID card dikhane ko bola tab ham kya karege. ID card ki baat se jaise problem khadi ho gai thi. Kuch der sochne ke baad solution ye nikala gaya ki main aur nakul apna apna ID card nikaal kar deepak ko de de. Agar kahi police wale milte hain aur hamse hamara ID card maagege to ham ye bol dege ki ham apna ID card lana bhool gaye hain. Police ko talaashi me hamare paas koi ID card nahi milega. Halaaki huliya badalne ke baad aisa hona to nahi chahiye tha lekin durbhaagyawas agar aisa hua to yahi ek raasta tha.

Mumbai se pune ka raasta by car lagbhag teen ghante se kam ka hi tha magar fir bhi ham teen ghante se upar ke time par hi pahuche. Kuch jagaho par police wale mile bhi magar waisa kuch bhi na hua jaise ka hame dar tha. Idhar hamari jaan me jaan bhi tabhi aai jab ham bina kisi baadha ke pune pahuch gaye. Raat ke gyaarah se upar ka time ho gaya tha. Deepak jaha rahta tha waha ke makaan maalik ko usne phone kar ke bata diya tha ki use aane me der ho jayegi is liye makaan ke andar jane me koi problem nahi hui. Waise bhi bade bade shahro me itna wakt koi maayane nahi rakhta tha.

Deepak ne apne makaan maalik se hamare bare me bata diya tha. Makaan maalik achha aadmi tha aur uski biwi bhi is liye usne mujhe raat me rukne ke liye ek alag kamra de diya. Deepak ne unse hamare bare me yahi bataya ki ham yaha kisi kaam se aaye the magar raat jyada ho jane ki vajah se yaha rukna pad raha hai. Deepak ne bhi hame raaste me samjha diya tha ki ham unke saamne aisa show na kare jisse unhe hame dekh kar kisi baat ka shak ho jaye.

Raat ka khana ham sab ne makaan maalik ke yaha hi khaya. Uske baad ham sab sone chale gaye. Nakul deepak ke sath uske room me chala gaya tha jabki main ek alag kamre me. Mujhe nahi pata ki deepak aur nakul ke beech kya baate hui room me magar main to sukoon se so gai thi. Nai jagah par aane wali subah kaisi hogi iska pata hame nahi tha magar itna jarur tha ki man me ab pakde jane ka dar nahi tha.

good update

 

[Raj Yadav]

Superb

 

[mashish]

Update - 11


Subah jaldi hi meri aankh khul gai thi. Jabki baaki sab log soye huye the. Shayad bade bade shahro me der se uthne ki aadat thi in logo ki. Kal raat thakaan ki vajah se gahri need me so gai thi main. Bed par pade huye maine idhar udhar dekha to pata chala ki kamre me hi attach bathroom tha. Kamra kaafi achha tha. Kuch der tak main bed me hi sochti padi rahi. Mumbai se to ham aa gaye the magar abhi hamare thikane ka kuch pata nahi tha. Deepak ne to kaha tha ki wo nakul ko job bhi dilwa dega aur yaha kahi rahne ki jagah bhi magar main soch rahi thi ki kya ye sab itna jaldi ho payega. Makaan maalik ko hamare bare me sirf itna hi bataya tha deepak ne ki ham yaha apne kisi kaam se aaye hain aur der raat hone ki vajah se hame yaha rukna pad raha hai. Iska matlab raat gujaarne ke baad aaj din me yaha rukne ke liye hamare paas koi bahana nahi tha.

Sochte sochte mujhe feel hua ki hamare saamne fir se ek problem khadi ho gai hai. Kafi der tak main isi bare me sochti rahi fir maine ye soch kar apne dimaag se in baato ko hataya ki dekhte hain kya hota hai. Bed se uth kar maine bag se apne kuch kapde nikaale aur unhe le kar bathroom me ghus gai.

Bathroom se main puri tarah fresh ho kar aur naha dho kar hi baahar nikli. Pahle wale kapdo ko paani me ye soch kar nahi dala tha maine kyo ki agar hame yaha se jana pada to geele kapde jaldi sookhege nahi. Kamre me aa kar maine thoda bahut khud ka make up kiya aur bed par baith gai. Har taraf khamoshi thi aur main soch rahi thi ki nakul deepak ke kamre me kya kar raha hoga is wakt. Kya un dono ke beech hamare thikane ko le kar baat cheet hui hogi ya wo dono bhi abhi so rahe hoge. Mujhe kisi tarah nakul se milna tha aur aage ke bare me baat karni thi. Is liye main bed se uthi aur kamre ke darwaje ko aahista se khol kar kamre se baahar ki taraf dekha.

Baahar ek gallery thi jo sunsaan padi thi. Gallery me ek taraf ek aur kamra tha jo ki band hi tha. Mujhe nahi pata ki us kamre me kaun hoga magar main dabe paav gallery se chalte huye seedhiyo ke paas aai. Abhi main seedhi ke paas aai hi thi ki meri najar upar se aate huye nakul par padi. Nakul ko dekh kar main khush ho gai aur maine raahat ki saans li. Nakul ne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha. Usne mujhe hath ke ishare se upar aane ko kaha to main bina kuch bole seedhiyo par chadhti chali gai.

Thodi hi der me main nakul ke sath deepak ke kamre me thi. Deepak ka kamra us kamre se alag tha jis kamre me raat main soi thi. Maine dekha ki dono hi abhi fresh nahi huye the balki bed par hi baithe huye the. Kamre me ek taraf ek chair rakhi thi jis main baith gai thi.

"Hamne raat aapas me is bare me baat ki thi ki hame yaha kahi par rahne ki jagah mil jaye to jyada achha hoga. Kyo ki yaha ham ruk nahi sakte aur na hi hamare paas rukne ka koi bahana hai." Nakul ne mujhse kaha.

"To kya aaj hi hame kahi par rahne ke liye koi kamra mil jayega." Maine utsuktawas pucha usse.
"Deepak bhai ka kahna hai ki agar inhe pahle se pata hota to ye kahi par hamare rahne ke liye kamra talaash kar dete. Ek din me kahi par kamre ka intjaam hona mushkil hai." Nakul ne kaha.

"Maine nakul bhai ko suggestion diya hai ki jab tak kahi rahne ka jugaad nahi hota tab tak aap log kisi hotel me ruk sakte hain aur fir jaise hi kahi rahne ka intjaam ho jayega to aap log hotel se waha par shift ho jana." Deepak ne meri taraf dekhte huye kaha tha. Main samajh sakti thi ki kahi par bhi itna jaldi rahne ka intjaam nahi ho sakta. Makaan maalik ki jaankari me deepak hame apne yaha rakh bhi nahi sakta tha. Hamare paas yahi ek raasta tha ki ham kisi hotel me ek do din ke liye ruk jaye.

Maine nakul ki taraf dekhte huye kah diya ki jaisa thik lage karo. Uske baad yahi faisla hua ki jab tak hamare liye kahi rahne ka intjaam nahi hota tab tak ham hotel me rukege. Nakul ne deepak se kaha ki agar possible ho to wo aaj chhutti le kar hamare liye kahi par kamra talaash karwane me uski madad kare. Deepak bhi samajhta tha ki hamare liye ye jagah ajnabi hi hai is liye wo nakul ki baat maan gaya aur apne boss ko phone karke chhutti le li.

Aath baje sab so kar uthe. Makaan maalik subah das baje apne job par jata tha. Is liye tab tak makaan maalkin uske liye breakfast taiyar kar deti thi. Is ghar me makaan maalik apni biwi ke sath hi rahta tha. Deepak ne bataya tha ki uske ek beta hai jo dusre shahar me apni biwi ke sath rah kar job karta hai. Das baje ham sabne breakfast kiya. Deepak ke liye khana pina yahi par banta tha. Yaani use apne liye khud nahi banana padta tha. Breakfast ke dauraan makaan maalik ne hamse puchha ki ham yaha kis kaam se aaye the to hamne wahi bataya jo hamne pahle hi socha hua tha.

Das baje makaan maalik ghar se chala gaya. Uske jane ke thodi der baad ham bhi ghar se nikle. Ghar se baahar aa kar hamne ek taxi li aur us taxi se ham kisi saste hotel me gaye. Nakul ke paas jyada paisa nahi tha ye main bhi jaanti thi magar mere paas the. Lekin jis tarah ke halaat the usme ham paisa bachane ki koshish kar rahe the.

Deepak ke liye ye shahar ajnabi nahi tha is liye sasta hotel khojne me jyada mushkil nahi hui. Hamne ek hotel do din ke liye book kiya aur fir apne liye kahi rahne ke liye koi achha sa kamra khojne lage. Nakuk ne mujhe hotel me rukne ko kaha tha magar main akele hotel me nahi rukna chaahti thi. Is liye main bhi un dono ke sath hi yaha se waha ghoom rahi thi. Sara din ham isi kaam me idhar se udhar bhatakte rahe. Rahne ke liye jagah to kayi jagah mili magar wo hame pasand nahi aai. Ham koi aisi jagah khoj rahe the jaha par shaanti ho aur kisi ke dwara hame uncomfortable feel na ho.

Shaam tak ham bahut jyada thak gaye the. Mera to bura haal tha. Aisa lag raha tha ki koi chalne ko na kahe balki bistar par lambi taan kar let jaau aur yahi haal nakul ka bhi tha. Deepak bhi thak gaya tha. Wo bechara hamare liye kitna kuch kar raha tha. Aaj ka din aise hi gujar gaya. Shaam ko deepak hame hotel me chhodne ke baad waapas apne room chala gaya tha. Main to hotel ke kamre me bed par let'te hi behosh si ho gai thi. Shaam ko aath baje ke kareeb nakul ne mujhe jagaya. Mera bed se uthne ka jara bhi man nahi kar raha tha magar usne kaha ki kuch kha pi lete hain uske baad so jayege.

Maine bathroom me ja kar thande paani ka shower liya to bahut achha laga. Mere baad nakul ne bhi shower liya. Uske baad taiyaar ho kar ham dono kamre ko lock kar ke neeche aaye. Hotel me hi hamne bhar pet khana khaya. Khana khane ke baad nakul ne mujhse kaha ki agar baahar tahalne chalna ho to chale magar maine jane se inkaar kar diya. Asal me aaj sara din idhar udhar bhatakte huye main bahut jyada thak gai thi is liye mujhe bas bed hi dikh raha tha.

Apne room me aa kar hamne apne kapde change kiye aur bed par aa gaye. Ham dono ek hi bed par lete huye the. Main nakul ki taraf karwat le kar leti hui thi jabki nakul seedha lete huye kuch soch raha tha.

"Kya soch rahe ho jaan." Maine pyar se pucha usse.
"Soch raha hu ki hamari ye saari problems kab door hogi." Nakul ne meri taraf karwat le li.
"Bahut jald saari problems door ho jayegi jaan aur fir ham dono apni ek alag duniya basayege." Maine kaha.

"Kya pata kabhi aisa wakt aata bhi hai ki nahi." Nakul ne mayusi se kaha to main uske aur kareeb khisak aai.
"Kyo nahi aayega nakul balki jarur aayega. Dekhna sab thik ho jayega. Tumhari job lag jayegi aur hame kahi par rahne ke liye achhi si jagah bhi mil jayegi. Uske baad ham shadi kar lege aur yahi rahege." Maine nakul ke gaal par apni ungli firate huye kaha.

"Kahna aur sochna bahut asaan hai neelam magar hakikat me aisa hona bahut mushkil hota hai." Nakul ne kaha.
"Tum itni mayusi bhari baate kyo kar rahe ho jaan. Sab kuch bahut jaldi thik ho jayega. Khud socho ki kya abhi tak sab kuch thik nahi hua. Dekho ham kitni asaani se yaha aa gaye hain. Aise hi aage bhi sab thik hi hoga." Maine kaha.

"Main mayusi bhari baate nahi kar raha neelam balki ek sach bata raha hu. Ye sahi hai ki ham mumbai se yaha badi asaani se aur bina kisi baadha ke aa gaye hain magar main ye bhi soch raha hu ki maan lo agar kisi din aisa hua ki police hame khojti hui is shahar me bhi aa gai to kya hoga. Aakhir police bhi to ye soch sakti hai ki agar ham mumbai me khojne par unhe nahi mil rahe to ho sakta hai ki ham kisi tarah mumbai se nikal kar yaha aa gaye ho. Bhala mumbai se pune hai hi kitna door." Nakul ne ye kaha to main soch me pad gai.

Sach hi to kah raha tha nakul. Aisa to sach me ho sakta tha. Iska matlab ye hua ki ham yaha bhi jyada dino tak mahfooj nahi hain. Pal bhar me mujhe aisa lagne laga jaise meri saari khushi aur ummido par paani fir gaya ho. Nakul ki baato se mujhe jhatka sa lag gaya tha. Main sochne lagi ki ab yaha se ham kaha jaye.

Raat me is sabke bare me sochte huye jane kab meri aankh lag gai thi. Subah jab nakul ka phone baja tabhi ham dono ki aankh khuli. Nakul ke mobile par deepak ka call aaya hua tha. Nakul ne usse baat ki aur fir mujhe bataya ki deepak ne das baje ham dono ko bulaya hai. Deepak aaj bhi ham dono ke rahne ke liye kahi achhi jagah ki talaash karne ki baat kar raha tha.

Ham dono baari baari se bathroom me nahaye aur fir taiyar ho kar room se nikle. Deepak hotel se kuch hi doori par hamara intjar karta hua mila. Usne bataya ki usne apne boss se aaj bhi chhutti ki baat ki magar boss gussa karne laga tha. Aakhir badi mushkil se usne use chhutti di.

Ham teeno ne sabse pahle naasta kiya uske baad fir se apne liye rahne ke liye jagah ki khoj me nikal pade. Kal ki thakaan jo thoda tham gai thi wo fir se ubharne lagi thi magar ham kahi na ruke. Aakhir dopahar baad ek jagah hame rahne ke liye jagah mil hi gai. Wo jagah waisi hi thi jaisi ham chaahte the magar abaadi se hat kar thi. Makaan do floor ka tha aur usme do buddha buddhi rahte the. Baaki sara makaan khaali tha.

Makaan ka maalik apni biwi ke sath akela hi rahta tha. Usne bataya ki uske do bete hain jo dusre shahar me apni biwiyo ko le kar rahte hain. Yaha par unka kharcha unki sarkari pension se chalta hai. Kabhi kabhi unke bachche bhi unhe paisa bhejwa dete hain.

Makaan is shahar ke hisaab se waisa nahi tha jaisa ki bade bade shahro me hote hain magar hamare liye bahut behtar tha. Hamne jab maalik se rahne ki baat ki to unhone inkaar nahi kiya balki yahi kaha ki hamare rahne se unhe bhi sahara rahega. Uske baad deepak ne unhe pahchaan ke taur par hamari ID ki photo copy di. Kiraye ki baat huyi to unhone kaha ki jo man kare de dena. Deepak ke kahne par maine advance me unhe teen hazaar rupaye nikaal kar de diye.

Hamare rahne ka intjaam ho gaya tha. Ground floor par buddha buddhi rahte the. Unhone hamare liye upar ke floor par kamra de diya. Hamne upar aa kar apna kamra dekha. Usme kram se do kamre the. Jis me se ek kamra kitchen ke liye banaya gaga tha. Bathroom kamre ke bagal se dusri side me tha. Upar ke floor me aur bhi do kamre the jo ki usi design me bane the. Ek taraf khaali jagah thi jo ki chhat hi tha. Chhat par boundary bani thi. Boundary ke peeche door door tak khaali jameen najar aa rahi thi. Dusri taraf aise hi type ke kuch makaan najar aa rahe the.

"Jagah to thik hai deepak bhai magar yaha se market aur city door hai." Nakul ne deepak se kaha.
"Door to hai bhai magar city me aisi jagah nahi milegi aur na hi itne saste me milegi. Dekha nahi makaan maalik kya kah raha tha. Kah raha tha ki jo dena ho de dena. Matlab ki yaha kiraye ki tension bhi nahi hogi tumhe. City se hat ke hai to yaha par shaanti bhi hai aur sabse badi baat ye ki yaha par pakde jane ka jyada dar bhi nahi hoga." Deepak ne samjhate huye kaha.

"Haa ye baat to hai deepak bhai." Nakul ne kaha.
"Yaha par neelam bhabhi ji ko akelapan mahsus nahi hoga. Kyo ki sahare ke liye makaan maalkin hai aur tumhe bhi tension nahi hogi. Main to kahta hu ki kismat wale ho bhai jo aisi jagah mil gai hai. Sochta hu main bhi yahi shift ho jaau. Uske baad ham dono sath me hi job par jaya karege." Deepak ne kaha.

"Ye bhi theek kaha deepak bhai lekin meri to abhi job lagi hi nahi hai uska kya kare. Job lag jaye to baaki ka sara tension bhi door ho jaye." Nakul ne kaha.
"Chinta mat karo bhai. Main kal hi company me tumhare job ke liye baat karta hu. Mujhe puri ummid hai ki tumhe waha par job mil jayegi." Deepak ne kaha.

"Kaash aisa hi ho deepak bhai." Nakul ne kaha.
"Aisa hi hoga nakul bhai. Bas ye samjho ki tumhari job lag gai hai. Ab chalo hotel se apna samaan yaha shift kar lo. Waise bhi abhi tum logo ko yaha ki saaf safaai aur sab kuch byawasthit karne me time lagega." Deepak ne kaha.

"Sahi kaha bhai aur abhi hame kuch samaan bhi market se kharidna padega. Jaise ki raashan aur khaana banane ka samaan wagaira." Nakul ne kaha.
"Ruko paise le lo aur sara samaan le aana. Tab tak main yaha ki saaf safaai karti hu." Maine kaha aur apne bag se apna parsh nikaal kar usme se kuch paise nakul ki taraf badha diye.

Paisa lete wakt nakul ke chehre par aise bhaav the jaise use ye paise lene me jhijhak aur sharm mahsus ho rahi ho magar majburi thi. Is liye usne mere hath se paise liye aur fir deepak ke sath chala gaya. Uske jane ke baad main kaafi der tak is sabke bare me sochti rahi. Fir maine apne dimaag se saari baato ko nikala aur kamre ki saaf safaayi me lag gai.

awesome update

 

[zopion]

Update - 11


Subah jaldi hi meri aankh khul gai thi. Jabki baaki sab log soye huye the. Shayad bade bade shahro me der se uthne ki aadat thi in logo ki. Kal raat thakaan ki vajah se gahri need me so gai thi main. Bed par pade huye maine idhar udhar dekha to pata chala ki kamre me hi attach bathroom tha. Kamra kaafi achha tha. Kuch der tak main bed me hi sochti padi rahi. Mumbai se to ham aa gaye the magar abhi hamare thikane ka kuch pata nahi tha. Deepak ne to kaha tha ki wo nakul ko job bhi dilwa dega aur yaha kahi rahne ki jagah bhi magar main soch rahi thi ki kya ye sab itna jaldi ho payega. Makaan maalik ko hamare bare me sirf itna hi bataya tha deepak ne ki ham yaha apne kisi kaam se aaye hain aur der raat hone ki vajah se hame yaha rukna pad raha hai. Iska matlab raat gujaarne ke baad aaj din me yaha rukne ke liye hamare paas koi bahana nahi tha.

Sochte sochte mujhe feel hua ki hamare saamne fir se ek problem khadi ho gai hai. Kafi der tak main isi bare me sochti rahi fir maine ye soch kar apne dimaag se in baato ko hataya ki dekhte hain kya hota hai. Bed se uth kar maine bag se apne kuch kapde nikaale aur unhe le kar bathroom me ghus gai.

Bathroom se main puri tarah fresh ho kar aur naha dho kar hi baahar nikli. Pahle wale kapdo ko paani me ye soch kar nahi dala tha maine kyo ki agar hame yaha se jana pada to geele kapde jaldi sookhege nahi. Kamre me aa kar maine thoda bahut khud ka make up kiya aur bed par baith gai. Har taraf khamoshi thi aur main soch rahi thi ki nakul deepak ke kamre me kya kar raha hoga is wakt. Kya un dono ke beech hamare thikane ko le kar baat cheet hui hogi ya wo dono bhi abhi so rahe hoge. Mujhe kisi tarah nakul se milna tha aur aage ke bare me baat karni thi. Is liye main bed se uthi aur kamre ke darwaje ko aahista se khol kar kamre se baahar ki taraf dekha.

Baahar ek gallery thi jo sunsaan padi thi. Gallery me ek taraf ek aur kamra tha jo ki band hi tha. Mujhe nahi pata ki us kamre me kaun hoga magar main dabe paav gallery se chalte huye seedhiyo ke paas aai. Abhi main seedhi ke paas aai hi thi ki meri najar upar se aate huye nakul par padi. Nakul ko dekh kar main khush ho gai aur maine raahat ki saans li. Nakul ne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha. Usne mujhe hath ke ishare se upar aane ko kaha to main bina kuch bole seedhiyo par chadhti chali gai.

Thodi hi der me main nakul ke sath deepak ke kamre me thi. Deepak ka kamra us kamre se alag tha jis kamre me raat main soi thi. Maine dekha ki dono hi abhi fresh nahi huye the balki bed par hi baithe huye the. Kamre me ek taraf ek chair rakhi thi jis main baith gai thi.

"Hamne raat aapas me is bare me baat ki thi ki hame yaha kahi par rahne ki jagah mil jaye to jyada achha hoga. Kyo ki yaha ham ruk nahi sakte aur na hi hamare paas rukne ka koi bahana hai." Nakul ne mujhse kaha.

"To kya aaj hi hame kahi par rahne ke liye koi kamra mil jayega." Maine utsuktawas pucha usse.
"Deepak bhai ka kahna hai ki agar inhe pahle se pata hota to ye kahi par hamare rahne ke liye kamra talaash kar dete. Ek din me kahi par kamre ka intjaam hona mushkil hai." Nakul ne kaha.

"Maine nakul bhai ko suggestion diya hai ki jab tak kahi rahne ka jugaad nahi hota tab tak aap log kisi hotel me ruk sakte hain aur fir jaise hi kahi rahne ka intjaam ho jayega to aap log hotel se waha par shift ho jana." Deepak ne meri taraf dekhte huye kaha tha. Main samajh sakti thi ki kahi par bhi itna jaldi rahne ka intjaam nahi ho sakta. Makaan maalik ki jaankari me deepak hame apne yaha rakh bhi nahi sakta tha. Hamare paas yahi ek raasta tha ki ham kisi hotel me ek do din ke liye ruk jaye.

Maine nakul ki taraf dekhte huye kah diya ki jaisa thik lage karo. Uske baad yahi faisla hua ki jab tak hamare liye kahi rahne ka intjaam nahi hota tab tak ham hotel me rukege. Nakul ne deepak se kaha ki agar possible ho to wo aaj chhutti le kar hamare liye kahi par kamra talaash karwane me uski madad kare. Deepak bhi samajhta tha ki hamare liye ye jagah ajnabi hi hai is liye wo nakul ki baat maan gaya aur apne boss ko phone karke chhutti le li.

Aath baje sab so kar uthe. Makaan maalik subah das baje apne job par jata tha. Is liye tab tak makaan maalkin uske liye breakfast taiyar kar deti thi. Is ghar me makaan maalik apni biwi ke sath hi rahta tha. Deepak ne bataya tha ki uske ek beta hai jo dusre shahar me apni biwi ke sath rah kar job karta hai. Das baje ham sabne breakfast kiya. Deepak ke liye khana pina yahi par banta tha. Yaani use apne liye khud nahi banana padta tha. Breakfast ke dauraan makaan maalik ne hamse puchha ki ham yaha kis kaam se aaye the to hamne wahi bataya jo hamne pahle hi socha hua tha.

Das baje makaan maalik ghar se chala gaya. Uske jane ke thodi der baad ham bhi ghar se nikle. Ghar se baahar aa kar hamne ek taxi li aur us taxi se ham kisi saste hotel me gaye. Nakul ke paas jyada paisa nahi tha ye main bhi jaanti thi magar mere paas the. Lekin jis tarah ke halaat the usme ham paisa bachane ki koshish kar rahe the.

Deepak ke liye ye shahar ajnabi nahi tha is liye sasta hotel khojne me jyada mushkil nahi hui. Hamne ek hotel do din ke liye book kiya aur fir apne liye kahi rahne ke liye koi achha sa kamra khojne lage. Nakuk ne mujhe hotel me rukne ko kaha tha magar main akele hotel me nahi rukna chaahti thi. Is liye main bhi un dono ke sath hi yaha se waha ghoom rahi thi. Sara din ham isi kaam me idhar se udhar bhatakte rahe. Rahne ke liye jagah to kayi jagah mili magar wo hame pasand nahi aai. Ham koi aisi jagah khoj rahe the jaha par shaanti ho aur kisi ke dwara hame uncomfortable feel na ho.

Shaam tak ham bahut jyada thak gaye the. Mera to bura haal tha. Aisa lag raha tha ki koi chalne ko na kahe balki bistar par lambi taan kar let jaau aur yahi haal nakul ka bhi tha. Deepak bhi thak gaya tha. Wo bechara hamare liye kitna kuch kar raha tha. Aaj ka din aise hi gujar gaya. Shaam ko deepak hame hotel me chhodne ke baad waapas apne room chala gaya tha. Main to hotel ke kamre me bed par let'te hi behosh si ho gai thi. Shaam ko aath baje ke kareeb nakul ne mujhe jagaya. Mera bed se uthne ka jara bhi man nahi kar raha tha magar usne kaha ki kuch kha pi lete hain uske baad so jayege.

Maine bathroom me ja kar thande paani ka shower liya to bahut achha laga. Mere baad nakul ne bhi shower liya. Uske baad taiyaar ho kar ham dono kamre ko lock kar ke neeche aaye. Hotel me hi hamne bhar pet khana khaya. Khana khane ke baad nakul ne mujhse kaha ki agar baahar tahalne chalna ho to chale magar maine jane se inkaar kar diya. Asal me aaj sara din idhar udhar bhatakte huye main bahut jyada thak gai thi is liye mujhe bas bed hi dikh raha tha.

Apne room me aa kar hamne apne kapde change kiye aur bed par aa gaye. Ham dono ek hi bed par lete huye the. Main nakul ki taraf karwat le kar leti hui thi jabki nakul seedha lete huye kuch soch raha tha.

"Kya soch rahe ho jaan." Maine pyar se pucha usse.
"Soch raha hu ki hamari ye saari problems kab door hogi." Nakul ne meri taraf karwat le li.
"Bahut jald saari problems door ho jayegi jaan aur fir ham dono apni ek alag duniya basayege." Maine kaha.

"Kya pata kabhi aisa wakt aata bhi hai ki nahi." Nakul ne mayusi se kaha to main uske aur kareeb khisak aai.
"Kyo nahi aayega nakul balki jarur aayega. Dekhna sab thik ho jayega. Tumhari job lag jayegi aur hame kahi par rahne ke liye achhi si jagah bhi mil jayegi. Uske baad ham shadi kar lege aur yahi rahege." Maine nakul ke gaal par apni ungli firate huye kaha.

"Kahna aur sochna bahut asaan hai neelam magar hakikat me aisa hona bahut mushkil hota hai." Nakul ne kaha.
"Tum itni mayusi bhari baate kyo kar rahe ho jaan. Sab kuch bahut jaldi thik ho jayega. Khud socho ki kya abhi tak sab kuch thik nahi hua. Dekho ham kitni asaani se yaha aa gaye hain. Aise hi aage bhi sab thik hi hoga." Maine kaha.

"Main mayusi bhari baate nahi kar raha neelam balki ek sach bata raha hu. Ye sahi hai ki ham mumbai se yaha badi asaani se aur bina kisi baadha ke aa gaye hain magar main ye bhi soch raha hu ki maan lo agar kisi din aisa hua ki police hame khojti hui is shahar me bhi aa gai to kya hoga. Aakhir police bhi to ye soch sakti hai ki agar ham mumbai me khojne par unhe nahi mil rahe to ho sakta hai ki ham kisi tarah mumbai se nikal kar yaha aa gaye ho. Bhala mumbai se pune hai hi kitna door." Nakul ne ye kaha to main soch me pad gai.

Sach hi to kah raha tha nakul. Aisa to sach me ho sakta tha. Iska matlab ye hua ki ham yaha bhi jyada dino tak mahfooj nahi hain. Pal bhar me mujhe aisa lagne laga jaise meri saari khushi aur ummido par paani fir gaya ho. Nakul ki baato se mujhe jhatka sa lag gaya tha. Main sochne lagi ki ab yaha se ham kaha jaye.

Raat me is sabke bare me sochte huye jane kab meri aankh lag gai thi. Subah jab nakul ka phone baja tabhi ham dono ki aankh khuli. Nakul ke mobile par deepak ka call aaya hua tha. Nakul ne usse baat ki aur fir mujhe bataya ki deepak ne das baje ham dono ko bulaya hai. Deepak aaj bhi ham dono ke rahne ke liye kahi achhi jagah ki talaash karne ki baat kar raha tha.

Ham dono baari baari se bathroom me nahaye aur fir taiyar ho kar room se nikle. Deepak hotel se kuch hi doori par hamara intjar karta hua mila. Usne bataya ki usne apne boss se aaj bhi chhutti ki baat ki magar boss gussa karne laga tha. Aakhir badi mushkil se usne use chhutti di.

Ham teeno ne sabse pahle naasta kiya uske baad fir se apne liye rahne ke liye jagah ki khoj me nikal pade. Kal ki thakaan jo thoda tham gai thi wo fir se ubharne lagi thi magar ham kahi na ruke. Aakhir dopahar baad ek jagah hame rahne ke liye jagah mil hi gai. Wo jagah waisi hi thi jaisi ham chaahte the magar abaadi se hat kar thi. Makaan do floor ka tha aur usme do buddha buddhi rahte the. Baaki sara makaan khaali tha.

Makaan ka maalik apni biwi ke sath akela hi rahta tha. Usne bataya ki uske do bete hain jo dusre shahar me apni biwiyo ko le kar rahte hain. Yaha par unka kharcha unki sarkari pension se chalta hai. Kabhi kabhi unke bachche bhi unhe paisa bhejwa dete hain.

Makaan is shahar ke hisaab se waisa nahi tha jaisa ki bade bade shahro me hote hain magar hamare liye bahut behtar tha. Hamne jab maalik se rahne ki baat ki to unhone inkaar nahi kiya balki yahi kaha ki hamare rahne se unhe bhi sahara rahega. Uske baad deepak ne unhe pahchaan ke taur par hamari ID ki photo copy di. Kiraye ki baat huyi to unhone kaha ki jo man kare de dena. Deepak ke kahne par maine advance me unhe teen hazaar rupaye nikaal kar de diye.

Hamare rahne ka intjaam ho gaya tha. Ground floor par buddha buddhi rahte the. Unhone hamare liye upar ke floor par kamra de diya. Hamne upar aa kar apna kamra dekha. Usme kram se do kamre the. Jis me se ek kamra kitchen ke liye banaya gaga tha. Bathroom kamre ke bagal se dusri side me tha. Upar ke floor me aur bhi do kamre the jo ki usi design me bane the. Ek taraf khaali jagah thi jo ki chhat hi tha. Chhat par boundary bani thi. Boundary ke peeche door door tak khaali jameen najar aa rahi thi. Dusri taraf aise hi type ke kuch makaan najar aa rahe the.

"Jagah to thik hai deepak bhai magar yaha se market aur city door hai." Nakul ne deepak se kaha.
"Door to hai bhai magar city me aisi jagah nahi milegi aur na hi itne saste me milegi. Dekha nahi makaan maalik kya kah raha tha. Kah raha tha ki jo dena ho de dena. Matlab ki yaha kiraye ki tension bhi nahi hogi tumhe. City se hat ke hai to yaha par shaanti bhi hai aur sabse badi baat ye ki yaha par pakde jane ka jyada dar bhi nahi hoga." Deepak ne samjhate huye kaha.

"Haa ye baat to hai deepak bhai." Nakul ne kaha.
"Yaha par neelam bhabhi ji ko akelapan mahsus nahi hoga. Kyo ki sahare ke liye makaan maalkin hai aur tumhe bhi tension nahi hogi. Main to kahta hu ki kismat wale ho bhai jo aisi jagah mil gai hai. Sochta hu main bhi yahi shift ho jaau. Uske baad ham dono sath me hi job par jaya karege." Deepak ne kaha.

"Ye bhi theek kaha deepak bhai lekin meri to abhi job lagi hi nahi hai uska kya kare. Job lag jaye to baaki ka sara tension bhi door ho jaye." Nakul ne kaha.
"Chinta mat karo bhai. Main kal hi company me tumhare job ke liye baat karta hu. Mujhe puri ummid hai ki tumhe waha par job mil jayegi." Deepak ne kaha.

"Kaash aisa hi ho deepak bhai." Nakul ne kaha.
"Aisa hi hoga nakul bhai. Bas ye samjho ki tumhari job lag gai hai. Ab chalo hotel se apna samaan yaha shift kar lo. Waise bhi abhi tum logo ko yaha ki saaf safaai aur sab kuch byawasthit karne me time lagega." Deepak ne kaha.

"Sahi kaha bhai aur abhi hame kuch samaan bhi market se kharidna padega. Jaise ki raashan aur khaana banane ka samaan wagaira." Nakul ne kaha.
"Ruko paise le lo aur sara samaan le aana. Tab tak main yaha ki saaf safaai karti hu." Maine kaha aur apne bag se apna parsh nikaal kar usme se kuch paise nakul ki taraf badha diye.

Paisa lete wakt nakul ke chehre par aise bhaav the jaise use ye paise lene me jhijhak aur sharm mahsus ho rahi ho magar majburi thi. Is liye usne mere hath se paise liye aur fir deepak ke sath chala gaya. Uske jane ke baad main kaafi der tak is sabke bare me sochti rahi. Fir maine apne dimaag se saari baato ko nikala aur kamre ki saaf safaayi me lag gai.

wonderful update dear
to rahne ka intjam ho gaya
ab job ka bhi intjam ho gaya
lagta hai ab inki life patri par aa chuki hai
bas ab ek hi guthi uljhi huyi bachi hai bewdi naina ki

 

[kamdev99008]

chalo sab achchha-achcha hi ho raha hai

dekhte hain abhi aur kya hona hai

 

[Mr. Pandit]

Hello friends main yaha par ek story likhne ja rahi hu magar mujhe likhne ka koi idea nahi hai ki kaise likhte hain. Maine yaha par as a silent reader bahut si stories padhi but mujhe sabse jyada love and sad type ki stories achhi lagti hain. Unhi stories se samajhne ki koshish ki hai ki kaise likha jata hai. Main nahi janti jaanti ki meri story aur meri writing kisi ko pasand ayegi ki nahi but fir bhi likhne ja rahi hu. I hope ki aap sab log meri help karege aur mujhe suggestion dege ki mujhe kaise likhna chahiye. Main kafi time se soch rahi thi ki likhu but samajh nahi aata tha ki kaha se shuruaat karu. Fir socha likhna start karti hu aage jo bhi hoga dekha jayega.

Kisi bhi platform par ye meri first story hai aur main pahli baar likh rahi hu is liye mujhe time bhi lagega. Anyway ye story kuch real aur kuch fantasy based hogi aur isme aapko intimate scenes shayad bilkul hi na mile. Ye story totally love story hai. Baaki aage aap log jaisa suggest karege main likhugi. Aap sabke motivations ki jarurat hamesha rahegi is liye sabse request hai ki aap log sath banaye rakhna.

Friends story ka first update likh rahi hu abhi aur aaj hi post kar dugi.

For the new story.... ​

 

[mashish]

waiting for next update

 

[Mr. Pandit]

Awesome story neelam ji....
Starting se le kar abhi tak ke sare update padh liye. Laga hi nahi ki aapne pahli baar writing ki hai....

Ek ladki apni maa baap ki ummido aur unke pyar ko thokar maar kar ek aise ladke ke sath ghar se bhaag gayi jise wo pyar karti thi. Sabse pahle to ghar se is tarah bhaagna hi sahi nahi tha aur agar apne pyar ke liye bhaagna hi tha to kam se kam itne to kaabil ho jate ki kisi dusre par depend to na hona padta....

Chaar dino ka pyar maa baap ke pyaar par bhaari pad jata hai. Waah ri mohabbat. Insaan ko dukh dene ke liye kitni badhiya situation create kar deti hai....

Ghar se bhaage to fir na ghar ke rahe aur na hi ghaat ke waali haalat ho gayi. Waise ek cheez achhi bhi thi aur sochne wali bhi ki madad karne wale dost had se zyada achhe mile. Ab ye neki kitne dino ki mehmaan hogi bhagwan hi jane. Kyo ki is kaliyug me insaan itna to achha nahi ho sakta....

Neelam ke dad apni ijjat ko bachane ke liye mumbai tak aa gaye aur chaahte hain ki kisi tarah beti mil jaye to use aisi jagah band kar ke rakh de ki fir dubara nikalna namumkin hi nahi balki asambjav ho jaye. Aulaad kabhi kabhi itni dushman ban jaati hai ki bas puchho hi mat. Becharo ne maamla police ke haatho supurd kiya hai. Ab dekhte hain ki police apna kaam kitni imaandari se aur kitni jaldi karti hai....

Ek dost aur thi Naina. Pata nahi uske sath aisa kya hua hai ki uska kahi pata hi nahi hai. Lagta hai use ye zameen kha gayi hai ya wo asmaan nigal gaya hai bhagwan jane. Dosti jaise shabd me ek isi ki neki abhi nazar nahi aayi hai magar ummid hai kisi din to aayegi hi so intzaar hai us din ka. Waise bhagwan se prarthna hai ki wo jaha bhi ho sahi salmat hi ho....

Aasmaan se gire to khajoor par atak gaye. Matlab ki mumbai se kisi tarah huliya badal kar bhage to pune pahuche. Deepak sahab ne badi help ki dono ki aur help ka nateeha ye nikla ki badi bhaag daud ke baad aakhir unhe rahne ki jagah mil gayi. Dhanya ho deepak sahab aap. Badi kripa ki aapne. Aapse bas isi baat ka dar hai ki is help ke badle koi aisi cheez na maag lena jo ye bechare de na sake....

Neelam sahiba ne to dikha hi diya hai ki wo apne pyar ke liye apne maa baap ko thukra kar bhaag bhi sakti hain magar nakul bhaya aap itne bechare kyo hain. Ye bechaargi kahi aapko koi nuksaan na pahucha de. Meri bas ek hi salaah hai ki dost zarur banaaiye magar un par ankh band kar ke bharosa na karna. Balki apne dimaag ke ghode bhi daudate rahiyega....

Neelam ji main bas yahi kahuga ki aap bahut achha likh rahi hain. Aise hi likhti rahe. Aage ka intzar rahega....​

 

[mashish]

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