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Aap jesha likh rahe ho wesa hi likho
Jo apka dil kahe
Hajar munh hajar bante hogi
Or sirf confused hi hoga
Nice n fantastic update
Thanks Rocky2602 bhai for Reading nd Comnting..
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Aap jesha likh rahe ho wesa hi likho
Jo apka dil kahe
Hajar munh hajar bante hogi
Or sirf confused hi hoga
Nice n fantastic update
Superb update sir
Gunde ka khatarnak tarike se apne the end kar diya
Arushi ne apne pyar ka izhar kar diya tushar vo bbi usse pyar karta hai lakin dono ki hi majburi hai. Tushar khud roo raha hai waha vo Quasar banke ik darinda wahi vo tushar bankr ik emotional banda hai.
~Waqt ne Halato ne kuch Baaton ne Majboor kar rakha hai,
Muje Tujhse or Tuje Mujhse ik Rishte ne Door kar rakha hai..~
Bahut mast likhi hai line bhai. Sahi mein apki writing skill upper level ki hai..
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Dosto ik question hai muje ap sabse. Ki kya app Quasar ko pasand karte ho i mean kya uski darindgi, uska torture krna psnd hai apko..?
Mein torture seen ko bahut lamba khich leta hu.. shayd kuch log yeah bhi kahe ki ik goli maar admi ko khatam kr na.. asse seen likhne mein muje mja ata hai. Lakin kya apko ise padh k mja ata hai.. mujhe yeah janna hai.. app sabhi readers se or mere silent readers se bhi ik request hai ki ap bataye ki kya main asse seens ko thora kaam kardu? Ya fhir khatam hi kardu?...
Abhi story k 2 plot nikal sakte hai. Toh mein iss liye apse puch rha hu.. mein 1,2 readers se sehmat hoke plot change nhi krna chta kyuki isse baki log naraj ho sakte hai.. iss note ko padhne wale sabhi readers se request hai ki apni raay de..
Thanks...
I agree with youRead Please...
Dosto ik question hai muje ap sabse. Ki kya app Quasar ko pasand karte ho i mean kya uski darindgi, uska torture krna psnd hai apko..?
Mein torture seen ko bahut lamba khich leta hu.. shayd kuch log yeah bhi kahe ki ik goli maar admi ko khatam kr na.. asse seen likhne mein muje mja ata hai. Lakin kya apko ise padh k mja ata hai.. mujhe yeah janna hai.. app sabhi readers se or mere silent readers se bhi ik request hai ki ap bataye ki kya main asse seens ko thora kaam kardu? Ya fhir khatam hi kardu?...
Abhi story k 2 plot nikal sakte hai. Toh mein iss liye apse puch rha hu.. mein 1,2 readers se sehmat hoke plot change nhi krna chta kyuki isse baki log naraj ho sakte hai.. iss note ko padhne wale sabhi readers se request hai ki apni raay de..
Thanks...
Bahut shukriya Sona madam for Reading nd Comnting..Fantastic update sir![]()
Suspense .......
Wah bhai ye to or badiya baat hui he.....
Majja hi aayega aage....
Keep writing bro....
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Bhai aaj kal pakode kon khata he ..
Aajkal to log mangoes hi kahte he....
Pakode to ladkiya khati he....
Hahahahahh
Thanks Mahaveer bhai for Reading nd Comnting..nice update bro