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Update 21...
To aakhir mein ek ladki ki bali dekar apne pran mukt karwayega jaggu
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To aakhir mein ek ladki ki bali dekar apne pran mukt karwayega jaggu
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Readed upto update 8 pehle se padhe hue update
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Update 11...
To quasar ne apna kila taiyaar karwa liya h....
Lekin tusar ke raaz ????
. Lagta h quasar bhi tusar ka kahot bada khooni hissa h
Aage dekhtein h hamari didi ne kya plan kiya h
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Update 14
Kafi dino baad mera mhi man ho gaya kuch likhne ka isko padhkar...
'badle hai kuch is kadar unse milne ke baad,
Ki ab raaston mein he manzil nazar aane lagi h.
Zindagi jine ka dhang badla ho ya na badla ho,
Lekin manzil ab mukamal nazar aane lagi h.'
Update 21...
To aakhir mein ek ladki ki bali dekar apne pran mukt karwayega jaggu
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Update 25,
Superb update bhai....
Yeh last update mein gadbad h...
Aisa lag raha hai jaise dono ke saath dhokha hua tha.
Dekhtein h aage ke update kya rang laate h
Kafi dino baad mera mhi man ho gaya kuch likhne ka isko padhkar...
'badle hai kuch is kadar unse milne ke baad,
Ki ab raaston mein he manzil nazar aane lagi h.
Zindagi jine ka dhang badla ho ya na badla ho,
Lekin manzil ab mukamal nazar aane lagi h.'
Vo toh karwayega hi bhai. Koi shak hi nhi Tushar ki taiyari joro-shoro se chl rhi hai...To aakhir mein ek ladki ki bali dekar apne pran mukt karwayega jaggu
Yeh last update mein gadbad h...
Aisa lag raha hai jaise dono ke saath dhokha hua tha.
Bas Rahul bhai raat ko Update mil jayega...waiting new update
Shukriya janu bhai...
Wah bhai mast likha..
Vo toh karwayega hi bhai. Koi shak hi nhi Tushar ki taiyari joro-shoro se chl rhi hai...
Last Update mein bahut kuch gadabad hai bhai.. shayd aaj k Update mein kuch malum pad jaye...
Shukriya bhai apke comments k liye.. asse hi sath banaye rakhe....
Annika ne tania or tushar ko cake se rang diyyaUPDATE-25
Guruji- (muskura ke) bas yahi niche beth jao.. (Tushar niche yoga pose mein beth jata hai) ankhen band karo.. (Tushar ankhen band kar leta hai) apne bachpan se lekar ab tak kya kya hua hai, shuru se ab tak sab kuch dhire-dhire socho.. ek baar vapis apni beeti jindgi ko dekho, koshish karo vo har ek yaad vapis mehsus karne ki.. (Tushar sochne lagta hai.. apne bachna ki jo dhundhli-dhundhli yaaden thi usme khota chala jata hai....)
|AB AGGE|
(Tushar Apni yaadon mein khoiya hua tha.. apne bachpan ke kuch khushi ke pal.. jab vo pehli baar school gaya tha rota hua.. Tania ne jab usse marna toh Arushi ne Tania ko pakadke khichna lakin Annika ne usse kas ke gala laga taki kahi usse chhot na paunch jaye.. jab uska school mein ek baar ek ladke se jhagada hua tha toh teeno behano ne kaise uski dhulai ki thi.. dhire-dhire bachpan se lekar aab tak Tushar unn sabhi yaadon ko yaad kar raha tha jo usse yaad thi.. lakin inn yaadon ko yaad karte-karte usse mehsus hua ki jaise uski yaadon mein koi chhed-chhad ho rahi hai.. usse kuch or bhi dikh raha tha.. jaha uska chehra apni yaadon ko yaad kar muskura raha tha aab uss chehre ke bhaav kabhi gambheer, kabhi herani, gussa, dard, khushi mein badal rahe the.. band aakhon se bhi kuch aasu bahar akar niche tapak rahe the.. or yeh sab ho raha tha jo vo dekh raha tha.. apni yaadon ke sath-sath vo kisi or ki bhi yaaden dekh raha tha.. vo khud toh tha unn yaadon mein lakin vo ghatna kab kaha ghati uss kuch yaad nahi a raha tha.. apni yaadon ke sath vo bich-bich mein inn anjaan yaadon ko mein dekh raha tha.. jisme vo khud tha ek assi jagha jo usne pehle kabhi nahi dekhi thi…)
|Tushar’s House|
(Tania apne room mein leti kuch soch rahi thi…
Annika- (roti hui ayi) bhaiya.. bhaiya…
Tushar- kya hua meri gudiya.. roo kyu rahi hai tu.. haan..?
Annika- (apni ankhen malti hui) bhaiya Tania didi ne mara…
Tushar- are meri gudiya ko mara Tania ne.. chal a abhi khabar lete hai uski…
(Tania abhi apni 1saal purani yaadon ko yaad kar rahi thi...)
Tushar- (Tania k room mein ghusta hua) aye chudail.. kyu mara tune meri gudiya ko..?
Tania- maine kaha mara hai isse.. jhuth bol rahi hai yeah…
Annika- (Tushar ko side se gale laga ke) nahi bhaiya.. didi ne mara…
Tushar- (Annika ke gaal sehlate hue) dekha.. meri gudiya kabhi jhuth nahi bolti…
Tania- (bed se khadi hoti hui) haan mara maine isse ek kass ke thapper…
Tushar- (shock se) kya.. tune meri gudiya ko thapper mara.. tum pagal ho kya Tania.. ajj tera birthday hai isliye chhod raha hu tujhe.. warna…..
Tania- warna.. warna kya..? Tu bhi bacha hua hai kyuki tera bhi ajj hi birthday hai… or halka sa mara tha maine teri gudiya ko yeah toh pata nahi kaise itna roo padi...
Tushar- meri gudiya bahut najuk hai.. halka sa bhi usse lag jaye toh usse kya mujhe bhi dard hota hai.. (Annika ko dekh) haina meri pyari si jaan…
Annika- (chalang maar Tushar se lipat.ti hui) haan pyare bhaiya…
Arushi- (room mein enter karti hui) tum teeno idher gappe laga rahe ho.. chalo niche sab mehman a gaye hai cake katne ka time ho gaya hai...
(Charo niche paunchte hai toh niche bas aas-pados ke log the.. karib 20-25 log hi honge jo aye the vo bhi Tushar ki family ko jada ache se nahi jante the lakin invite karne par a gaye the… jaisa ki story ki starting mein kaha tha ki Tushar ki family walo ko koi nahi janta.. Tushar ke Papa kitne bade businessman hai, vo kya business karte hai kisi ko nahi pata.. India ke Top5 businessman mein se ek hone ke karan hamesha unpar or unki family par koi na koi khatra mandrane ka dar tha.. isliye unhone apni family ko duniya walo ke samne hide rakha.. yaha tak ki jo log unke liye kaam karte hai unhone bhi apne boss ko or unki family ko nahi dekha bas secretary ko chhod kar...)
(Tushar or Tania ne ek sath do bade-bade cake kata or pehla tukda dono ne ek dusre ko khilaya or ek-ek kiss dono ne ek-dusre ke gaal pe kiya..fhir dono ne Arushi, Mummy, Papa ko cake khilaya or ek alag cake baki mehmano mein bant diya… Annika abhi bachi hui thi.. kabhi idhar toh kabhi udhar dekh rahi thi ki kab uski bari ayegi cake khane ki.. fhir jab thak har ke usse laga ki uska number bina bole nahi anne wala toh boli…)
Annika- meko bhi khilao na cake…
Arushi- yeah bhukar abhi tak bhukhi bethi hai…
Annika- (masoomyat se) meko koi cake nahi khila didi.. sabko cake khilaya Mujhe nahi khilaya…
Tushar- are abhi khila dete hai meri gudiya ko…
(fhir Tushar or Tania dono ne milkar ek-ek bada wala cake ka tudka Annika ko khilaya.. usne bhi bina der kiya apna chota sa muh pura khol liya or dono cake ke tukde uske muh mein dal diye.. tukde itne bade bhi nahi the. Annika karib 1mint tak tukdo ko muh mein idher udhar karti finally nigal hi gayi..)
Annika- bhaiya.. didi.. main mar jati tohhh.. itna bada tukda khilaya mujhe.. mere pe reham nahi karte aap log.. main choti hu sab mujhe pareshan karte...
Tania- are abhi kaha pareshan kiya hai.. chal Tushar...
(Tushar bhi thora sa muskuraya or apne cake ko pura ka pura niche se pakad liya or chal diya Annika ki taraf.. udhar Tania ne bhi same hi kiya hath mein cake liye Annika ki taraf badne lagi.. Annika bechari dari dari si piche hatne lagi..)
Annika- bhaiya yeah kya karne wale ho aap log.. mujhe cake se maroge.. Mumma.. yeah dekho na yeah bhaiya or didi ka birthday or yeah log mujhe cake laga rahe hai.. apne birthday pe toh main waise hi cake se nahati hi hu or inke birthday pe bhi mujhe hi cake lagaya ja raha hai.. meko ganda nahi hona.. Papa please help...
Papa- (muskurate hue) sorry beta.. aaj inka birthday hai toh dant bhi nahi sakta...
Annika- Papa aap bure ho... (reham bhari najro se) didi aap help karogi…
Arushi- are camera kaha hai mein video nikalti hu…
Annika- aap bhi bure didi.. main kisi se baat nahi karungi…
Tania- (ek dum uske najdek jati hui) kitna bolti hai yeah ladki.. ek baar wapis tera muh cake se band karungi... chal Tushar rang de isse cake se...
(Tushar bhi uske sath agge badha Annika abhi piche jati jati diwar ke sath lagi hui thi.. vo corner wali diwar thi toh dono taraf se ghiri hui thi or samne ek taraf Tushar toh dusri or Tania.. Tushar thora or najdek gaya or jaise hi Tania Annika pe cake dalne wale thi Tushar teji se Annika ke aage khada ho gaya.. Tania ko kuch samaj aye usse pehle hi Tushar ne apna wala cake Tania ke muh pe de mara.... moka dekh Annika piche se ayi or Tania ke hatho cake pakad usse Tushar ke muh pe de mara.... dono abhi muh latkaye khade the or Mummy, Papa, or Arushi or bakki party mein aye logo ka has-has ke pet dard karne laga tha.. Papa or Arushi ne alag-alag angles se video bhi bana li thi...)
Annika- (khil-khila k hasti hui) hehehehheh.... are bhaiya bas.. ab or nahi dekha jayega apka itna funny face... or didi.. oh sorry sorry joker didi.. maja aya apko.. bhaiya hamesha mere sath hi hai.. (nachti hui) mujhe pata tha bhaiya palat jayenge... hehehe
Tania- (gusse se face banake) mil gayi na saja palatne ki..
Tushar- (apna latka hua muh liye cake saaf karta hua) waah gudiya waah.. acha sila diya tune mere pyar ka, yaar ne hi kharab kiya chehra yaar ka...
Annika- (hasti hui) heheh.. sorry bhaiya.. aaj aap dono ka hi birthday tha isliye aap dono ko hi cake se rangna jaruri tha...
Arushi- sahi kaha Annu.. or bilkul thik kiya tune.. tere sath bhi toh yahi hua hai.. (sada sa muh bana ke) or mere sath kya nahi hua hai.. bahut acha kiya tune.. (angutha dikhati hui) great job...
Annika- Thanks didi...
(Tania jo kab se garam ho rahi thi gusse se fatak se boli..)
Tania- (Tushar ka coller pakad) budhu kahi ke. Sari raat soch ke plan banaya or jab anjaam dene ka waqt aya toh gaddari karli tune.. mil gayi na gaddari ki saja.. lakin ab asli saja tujhe mein dungi dekh tu...
Tushar- (hath jod uper dekhta hua) hey uper wale.. shayad aaj tere se mulakat karne a raha hu.. kuch mangwa ke rakhna.. mein bas abhi aya.. (ek taraf ishara karta hua) vo dekh Tania. Kitna mota mendak hai..
Tania, Annika- (dar ke ek sath uchal ke uss taraf dekhti hui) aah Mumma mendak...
(moke ka fyada dekh Tushar bagh liya.. Tania bhi uske piche-piche baghne lagi.. Tushar apne room mein pauncha Tania ne bagh ki uske uper chlang maar di dono bed pe gir gaye.. abhi Tushar niche pitth ke bal leta hua tha or uske sine par Tania bethi hui thi jo ab jor-jor se mukke uske sine par jadh rahi thi.. kuch der maar khane or maar khilne ke baad dono thak ke bed par hafte hue let jate hai…)
Tushar- (halke dard mein) bahut mara hai tune.. birthday boy hu mein.. mere pas power hai aaj mujhe koi hath nahi laga sakta.. tune toh mukke pele hai jo.. aaahhh..
Tania- (hasti hui) birthday girl toh mein bhi hu toh power toh mere pas bhi hui na…
Tushar- haan mujhe marne ki…
(Tania aage kuch bolti Tushar ka phone ring hone laga..)
Tushar- (sidha hoke phone uthata hua) Hello..
Dusri taraf- ……….
Tushar- (bed se utth pareshan hota hua) kyaa… nahi.. assa nahi karna.. mein abhi usse leke a raha hu.. please Ishita ke sath kuch mat karna..
Dusri taraf- ………..
Tushar- par tumhe usse kya kaam hai…
Dusri taraf- ………...
Tushar- (aakhon mein aasu liye) nahi nahi.. assa kuch mat karna.. mein abhi aata hu…
(Tushar dara, ghabara apni aakhen saaf kar Tania ki taraf dekhta hai jo badi pareshan hui usse dekh rahi thi..)
Tania- (chinta mein) kya hua Tushar.. itna pareshan kyu hai.. roo kyu raha hai.. kiska phone tha…
Tushar- vo vo.. Tania…
Tania- (uske pas jake assu saaf karti hui) kya hya Tushar.. bata na please.. mujhe bahut chinta rahi hai.. kya baat hui hai..?
Tushar- Vo Tania.. yeah baat kisi or ko pata nahi lagni chahiye.. (uska hath pakdta hua) tu chal mere sath…
Tania- (uske piche-piche chalti hui) par kaha…
Tushar- sab pata chal jayega pehle chal mere sath…
(Niche paunch ke Tushar ne koi bahana bana liya or Tania ko sath liye ghar se bahar chala gaya or car mein Tania ko sath liye kahe jane laga… karib ek ghante baad Tushar car ko ek sunsan se raste par mood deta hai.. thori hi aage jake samne ek chota sa ghar dikhai deta hai.. Tushar car ko ghar ke samne rokta hai or jaldi se car ka darwaja khol ghar ki or chal deta hai.. Tania bhi bhagti hui Tushar ke pichle chal deti hai…)
Tania- (uski baju pakadti hui) Tushar!! Idher kyu leke aya hai mujhe.. konsi jagha hai yeh…
(Tushar kuch nahi bolta or aage chalne laga jaha samne 4 guards black kapdo mein khade the.. ghar ke 2 main door the.. 2 guards Left or 2 guards Right wale door ke samne khade the.. Tushar unke samne jake khada ho gaya Left taraf wale guards ne Tushar ko apni orr ishara kiya toh Tushar uski taraf chala gaya.. Tania Tushar ke thora piche pareshan khadi thi…)
Guard.1- kuch bataya toh nahi isse..?
Tushar- nahi maine kuch nahi bataya.. par isse tumhe kya matlab hai.. or Ishita kaha hai..? Please mujhe jaldi batao…
(Guards usse Left wala door open karke dikhate hai jisse dekh Tushar ke aasu jhar-jhar bahne lagte hai.. vo vo jor se cheekhta hua ander enter kar jata hai.. Tania ko abhi nahi dikha tha ki Tushar ne kya dekha vo bhi uske piche jane lagi toh guards ne door band kar diya..)
Tania- (pareshan hoke) kya hua.. mujhe jane do ander.. Kya hai ander jisse dekh mera bhai jor-jor se rone laga or ander bagh gaya..?
Guard.1- (dusre door ki taraf ishara karte hue) aap waha se jaiye…
(Tania ne bhi jada nahi socha.. usse fikar ho rahi thi Tushar ki vo jaldi se uss taraf gayi toh guards ne door khol diya Tania ander chali toh door band ho gaya.. Tania ne ander jakar dekha toh charo taraf andhera chaya hua tha.. or fhir ek-dam se room mein roshni phel gayi.. abhi room mein ek bed laga hua tha or bed ke pas 4 hate-kate admi khade the.. charo admi dhire-dhire Tania ki taraf badhne lage.. Tania ko dar lagne laga ek anjaan jagha par ek band kamre mein 4 admiyo se sath vo akeli thi.. vo dhire-dhire piche kadam badhane lagi…)
Tania- kon ho tum log.. kya chahte ho mujhse..?
(Koi admi kuch nahi bola or charo ne aakar Tania ko pakad liya.. unhone Tania ko pakda or lakar bed par patak diya…)
Tania- (roti hui) Tusharrr… kaha gaya tu… chhodo mujhe tum log….
(Ek admi ne rassi li or Tania ke hath-pau kas kar bed se bandh diye.. Tania toh bas roye chhekhe ja rahi thi.. khud ko chudane ki nakam koshish kiye ja rahi thi.. Tania ke samne wali jo diwar thi vo ek-dam se ek mirror mein badal gyi.. usne dekha mirror ke uss par Tushar ek-dam shant khada usse dekh raha hai…)
Tania- Tusharr.. dekh kya raha hai… yaha kyu leke aya mujhe..? Yeh log kya kar rahe mere sath.. bol na.. bolta kyu nahi tu.. khada kya hai.. (roti hui) Tushar.. yeh log mera rape kar rahe hai kya..? Tu apni behan ka rape karwane idhar laya hai…
(Tushar bhutt bana bas dekh raha tha.. ek admi ne Tania ki skirt ko pakada or thora sa uper kar diya jisse uski gori jaanghe dikhne lagi.. fhir uss admi ne Tania ki top ko bhi thora khiska ke uper kar diya jisse uski black bra thori-thori dikhne lagi or uska gora soft pet samne a gaya.. Tania roo rahi thi unn admiyo ke samne gidagida rahi thi.. Tushar ko cheekh-cheekh ke pukar rahi thi jo bas usse mirror se shant khada dekh raha tha.. uske chehre par koi bhau nahi the.. na dukh ke na khushi ke jaise kisi sadme mein ho ja shayad vo Tushar tha hi nahi.. idhar ek admi ne pas mein rakhe ek table par se ek bottle uthai jisme kuch liquid tha.. usne bottle ka dhakkan khola toh usme se white smoke nikalne lagi.. admi ne vo liquid. shayad vo koi chemical tha.. usse lekar vo Tania ke karib anne laga………
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Char lino mein 6 emojiAnnika ne tania or tushar ko cake se rang diyya
Tushar ki family chhipkr kyu rhti hai
Ye tushar ko kya huya wo tania ko bacha kyu nhi rha shyad isiliye tania usse nafrat krti thi
By the way fantastic update