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Bahot shaandaar mazedaar update bhai keep posting waiting your next update
Thanks for lovely update
Thanks for lovely update
UPDATE-14
Arushi- muje sab pata hai tera, acha vo sab chhod ghar se phone aya tha ki tum dono kaha ho, ab jaldi se ghar ki or nikalo, mamma-papa pareshan ho jayenge, or ajj jo kuch bhi hua ghar mein batana mat. Ok?..
Annika- (sad hoke) thik hai didi, lakin fhir bhaiya ke sath kon rahega?..
Arushi- are pagal ladki mein a rahi hu na waha..
Annika- ohh thik hai didi, mein or Tania didi ghar chale jate hai..
Arushi- hmm good girl, chal bye..
Annika- bye didi..
|AB AGGE|
Annika- (Tania ki Taraf dekh) chalo Tania didi ghar chalte hai..
(Tania ka toh jaise man hi udas ho gaya yeah baat sun k, vo to kab se Tushar ke chehre ko dekh muskura rahi thi lakin ab usse door jane ki baat se uske chehre par udasi se bhaw a gaye the..)
Tania- (sad hoke) lakin kyu?..
Annika- vo Arushi didi keh rahi thi ki ghar pe Mumma, Papa tension mein hai ki ham dono kaha hai, toh hame jane chahiye..
Tania- toh tu chali ja na, or ghar pe keh dena ki mein apni kisi friend k ghar ruki hu..
(Tania ke iss jawab ne Annika ke dimag mein kai sare sawal chod diye, lakin nadan dil-dimag kya hi samaj leta, lakin Tushar sab samaj chuka tha or muskura raha tha..)
Annika- par kyu didi?, app kya karogi yaha pe, muje toh laga tha app bologi- ha ha jaldi chal mein pak gayi hu iss gadhe ka chehra dekh k..
Tania- kya bol rahi hai tu, mein assa kyu bolungi, haan mera matlab mein bolti agar yeah gadha thik hota toh or agar hamare jane k baa...
Annika- (bich mein) didi pehli baat toh mein herain hu ki apko bhaiya ki fikar ho rahi hai, ho sakta hai bhaiya ne apko bachiya toh apke ander ki insaniyat jaag gayi, agar yahi baat hai toh acha hai, or dusri baat Arushi didi yaha a rahi hai vo bhaiya ka dhaiyan rakh legi, abhi hamara ghar jana jaruri hai nahi toh Mamma-Papa fikar karenge chalo jaldi...
Tushar- (usse gale lagata hua) are wah gudiya tu toh badi samajdar ho gayi hai..
Annika- haan bhaiya jab bade hi nasamaj ho jaye toh choto ko samajdar hona hi padta hai.. (uthti hui) chale didi..
(Tania apna murajhaaya hua chehra leke room se bahar chali jati hai, Annika bhi uske piche-piche chal deti hai, uske jane k baad Tushar apne man mein sochta hai or has deta hai ki-
~ afasos to hai tumhare badal jaane ka,
kyuki tumhari kuch baaton ne mujhe jeena sikha diya.. ~
(thori hi der mein Arushi or Harshika hospital paunchti hai or jaldi se Tushar ke room pata kar uske room k pas paunch jati hai, Arushi ne door khola to samne apne bhai ko bed par ik side face kar kuch sochte paya, Arushi aakho mein aasu liye dhire dhire Tushar ke pas jati hai or uske face par pyar se hath ferti hai..)
Tushar- oh didi app..
Arushi- haan bhai, thik hai ab tu?..
Tushar- (uski aakho se assu saaf karke) bilkul thik hu mein, app rooya mat karo didi, achi nahi lagti app asse..
Arushi- hmm..
Harshika- hii Tushar..
Tushar- (Harshika ki taraf dekhta hua) ohh app bhi ayi ho..
Harshika- (muskurati hui) ji, apne dost ka haal chaal dekhne ayi hu, lakin app muje batayege ki akhir baat kya hui hai or apko goli lagi kaise?...
Tushar- ji meri behan Tania ko kuch gunde utha k le gaye the, ussi ko bachate- bachate ik goli mere lag gayi..
Harshika- kya!! Apki behan k sath kitna galat ho raha hai na 2baar uske sath chedkhani ki gayi hai..
Tushar- (udas ho k) haan sahi kaha ajj agar mein waqt pe na paunchta toh.. aahhhhh (gusse se) nahii vo sale ne Tania ke hoth chuse the, mein chhodoonga nahi uss haramzade ko, khatam kar dunga usse..
Arushi- (uske gale lagti hui) shant, shant hoja Tushar..
Tushar- (apne appa sambhalta hua) chalo didi chalte hai abb yaha se..
Arushi- nahi Tushar abhi nahi, abhi tumhe rest ki jarurat hai..
Tushar- (Arushi ki aakho mein dekhata hua) didi apko toh pata hai na mera raaz..
Arushi- haan lakin abhi tu pure tarike se thik nahi hua hai..
Tushar- didi mein thik ho chuka hu, please...
Arushi- nahi Tushar, abhi mein tuje kahi jane nahi de sakti..
Tushar- lakin didi..
Arushi- (dandti hui) kuch lakin wakin nahi, ab chup chap let ja aram or aram kar, mein kal tuje yaha se discharge karwa dungi, fhir tuje jo karna hai kar..
Tushar- ok didi..
(Tushar fhir shant hoke beth jata hai, vo bich bich mein najre chura k Harshika ko dekh raha tha, Harshika ki har harkat vo bade payar se apne dil mein utar raha tha, uske dil mein ghantiya jorro-shoro se baj rahi thi..)
(udhar jab Savana or Safal uss gunde ko leke Shivan ki batai hui jagha paunche, toh samne ka najara dekh khush ho jate hai,, samne ik bahut badi or khubsoorat haweli thi, jo charo or se ik bahut bade ground mein ghiri hui thi, haweli ke samne ik swimming pool bhi tha..
Savana- (excited hoke) woww! Kya haweli hai yaar..
Safal- sahi kaha bahut sundar hai..
(Safal car ko haweli ke ander le jata hai or ik guard bahar hi unhe haweli ki keys de deta hai, Shivan ke pehle hi guard ko unke chehre dikha diye the, iss liye usne koi sawal-jawab nahi kiya, haweli paunch sabse pehle Safal car ki diggi mein se behosh padi gunde ki body ko utha ke ander le jata hai, or ander lejake ik lakdi ki chair se bandh deta hai..)
(haweli sahi mein kafi badi thi, ik badi sa hall, karib 25 rooms ki yeah haweli har jarurat ke saman se bhari hui thi, jisme kai sare khufiya kamre bhi the, ab haweli ho usme secret rooms na ho toh vo haweli hi kya hui, kafi der tak haweli ko uper se niche or puri jagha ko achi tarah se dekhne k baad...)
Safal- haweli toh badi mast hai yaar..
Savana- haan! Sahi mein assi haweli toh pehli baar dekh rahi hu mein, chal ik baar boss ka haal chal puch lete hai, ab tak toh unhe hosh a hi gaya hoga..
Safal- hm or unhe yeah bhi batana ki unki batai hui jagha bhi dhund li hai..
(Savana Tushar ko call lagati hai, kuch der mein Tushar phone pick karta hai..)
Tushar- hello! Haan Savana bolo..
Savana- boss kaise ho app..
Tushar- mein thik hu yaar muje kya hoga, tum log batao kaha ho or uss gunde kya kiya..
Savana- boss apne jo haweli dhunde ko bola tha ham dono usse mein khade hai..
Tushar- (herani se) ohh tum log ne dhund bhi li haweli, bade fast ho yaar, har kaam yuu nipta dete ho..
Savana- are nahi boss yeah haweli hamne nahi dhundi, Shivan ne dhundi hai..
Tushar- kya lakin vo toh mere sath hai hospital mein..
Savana- usne shyad pehli se hi dhund li hogi, or uss gunde ko ham yaha haweli le aye hai, app jo karna chaho kar lena..
Tushar- yeah toh bahut badiya kiya tum log ne, acha kya Shivan ne in sabke boss ko maar diya tha kya, vo gaya tha na uske piche..
Savana- haan boss inn gundo ka boss mar chuka hai, lakin Shivan ne kaise mara yeah sab muje nahi pata..
Tushar- hmm thik hai, mein kal haweli ayunga, uss gunde ki khabar lene, or ab se tum log haweli hi raha karoge..
Savana- thik hai boss, lakin muje ab bhi ik baat samaj nahi ayi ki apko yani Quasar ko ik alag jagha lene ki kya jarurat padh gayi?..
Tushar- (muskura k) tumhara yeah sawal tume waqt bata dega, chalo bye..
Savana- bye boss..
(Savana se baat karne k baad Tushar phone mein kuch videos dekhne lagta hai, iktak uski najar ik video par gayi jiske 5ghanto mein 100million views the or lagatar badte hi ja rahe the, Tushar ne uss video par click kiya toh uski aakhe bahar ko a gayi, uske dekha ki sakad k bicho-bich Shivan kahda ha talwar leke, jaise jaise vo video dekh raha tha har pal vo or herain hota ja raha tha, puri video dekhne k baad toh uska rang hi udha hua tha..)
Tushar- (man mein) yeah Shivan hai kya cheez?.., mere toh pasine nikal gaye yeah video dekh, isne car ko toh piyaz ki tah kaat diya, har waqt mask pehne ghumta hai, iska koi toh raaz hai jo muje jald hi pata lagana padega..
Arushi- (gabharati hui) kya hua Tushar?.. (uske mathe pe hath rakh) tu thik to hai, dard badh raha hai kya?, mein doctor ko bulaon..
Tushar- are nahi nahi didi, vo toh bas asse hi..
Harshika- asse kaise dekho apko kitna pasina a raha, kuch toh problem hui hogi na mein bulati hu doctor ko...
Tushar- uski koi jarurat nahi ha Harshika ji mein thik hu, vishwaas kijiye..
Harshika- (muskurati hui) vo toh mein karti hi hu app par..
Tushar- (muskurata hua) acha ji, itni jaldi nahi karna chahiye kisi pe vishwaas..
Harshika- nahi! Maine toh kar liya, ab app par hai ki app mera vishwaas todte hai ja isse banaye rakhte hai..
Tushar- (uski aakho mein dekhta hua) toh fhir thik hai, kyuki haam na toh kabhi kisi ka dil todte hai or na hi vishwaas..
(Arushi jo kabhi Tushar ko toh kabhi Harshika ko dekh unki baate sun rahi thi, or vo dono toh jaise apne mein hi khoye hue the, Arushi ko badi khujli ho rahi thi ki vo unke batto mein kaanta bane toh vo bol hi padi..)
Arushi- (khasti hui) aahhu aahuu, ohh toh tera dil itni jaldi jud bhi gaya haan, jo tu todega nahi, hmm?
Tushar- (hadbadta hua) are nahi didi vo toh mein usse apne vishwaas ki paribhaasha samja raha tha..
Arushi- (muskurati hui Harshika ko dekh) vishwaas ki paribhaasha ya pyar ki paribhaasha?..
Tushar- vo vo, didi kya bol rahi ho app, mein samja nahi..
Arushi- lakin mein sab samaj rahi hu jo tum log tab se lage hue ho, ab muje sach sach bata do ki akhir tum dono mein chal kya raha hai..
Tushar- kuch nahi chal raha ha yaar didi, app asse hi baat lambi kar rahi ho..
Arushi- thik hai bhai, agar tum log muje nahi batana chahte toh tumhari marji..
Harshika- (gusse se) ehh Arushi!.. kya bake ja rahi hai tu kab se, chup reh tu samji..
Arushi- are bhabiji ko toh dekho, kaise garam ho gayi hai, unke pati ko jara sa kuch keh diya toh..
(Harshika Arushi ke muh se apne liye bhabi word sun sharm se pani-pani ho gayi, usne ik baar Tushar ko aakh utha k dekha jo uski taraf dekh muskura raha, vo jaldi se utthi room se bahar dhood gayi..)
Arushi- (hasti hui) are ruko toh bhabiji, kaha ja rahi ho..
Tushar- didi kya app bhi kuch bhi bolti ho, chali gayi na meri Haru..
Arushi- kaha mein kuch bh... (achanak se) kya kaha tune meri Haru?..
Tushar- (pachtata hua) vo,.. vo didi.. mera matalb tha..
Arushi- haan haan bol kya matlab tha tera, tune uska nick name bhi rakh liya, wah chote, bada tej hai tu toh, (uthti hui) abhi usse bata k atti hui ki tere pati ne tera nick name Haru rakha hai.. haha.
Tushar- (uski baju pakad bithata hua) rukjao didi kya kar rahi ho, vo toh maine asse hi rakh diya pyar se..
Arushi- (uski aakho mein dekhi hui) acha bahut pyar karta hai usse?..
Tushar- (Harshika ki yaado mein khota hua) bahut!.. a aa mera matalb as a friend..
Arushi- but I think you love her as a lover..
Tushar- acha didi chhodo na inn batto ko, mein toh apse pyar karta hu, bas..
Arushi- vo toh mein bhi tere se bahut pyar karti hu..
Tushar- haan lakin mein apse waise hi pyar karta hu jaise..
Arushi- (smile ke sath uski aakho mein dekhti hui) jaise?...
Tushar- are kuch nahi, chodo didi vo sab..
Arushi- (uska hath pakadti hui) bata na please, kaisa pyar karta hai tu mere se..
Tushar- nahi didi vo mein nahi bata sakta, app gussa karogi..
Arushi- (apna chehra uske karib karti hui) bata mera babu, kaise pyar karta hai tu apni didi se..
Tushar- (uske gille gulabi hotho mein khota hua) same waisa hi jaisa Haru se karta hu..
Arushi- (ik dam uske hotho ke karib apne hoth karti hui) you mean as a lover?...
Tushar- (apne hoth uske honth se jara sa touch karwata hua) haan didi, i love you as a lover..
(Arushi uski baat sun itna khush hoti hai ki ikdam se uske hotho pe ik kiss kar deti hai, karib 5sec tak kiss kiya or jab Arushi ko hosh aya ki usne abhi kya kiya hai toh sharmati hui room se bahar bhag gayi, Tushar toh jaise sadme mein tha ki usne yeah kya bol diya or uski didi ne yeah kya kar diya..)
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