Fantasy TUSHAR EK YODHA 《Incest, Thrill, Magical》

[Iron Man]

UPDATE-16


Savana- (ik room ki taraf ishara kar) vo uss room mein chair se bandha hai, kab kar rahe ho usse mukt..?

Tushar- (muskura k) jald hi..

Savana- (muskurati hui) matlab mein camera taiyar rakhu na..?

Tushar- (hasta hua) hahaha haan haan, kyu nahi.. akhir game toh record karni hi padegi na..

Savana- sahi kaha boss…


|AB AGGE|

Tushar- (Shivan ki taraf dekh) Shivan muje kuch baat karni thi tumse..

Shivan- yahi na ki yeah Sword Man wala kya seen hai mera.? Toh suniye..

Tushar- (bich mein) haan bhai, or kabhi toh muje kuch khud se push lene diya karo, mere Sawal se pehle hi tumhara Jawab taiyar hota hai, khair batao kya tha vo sab or akhir kon ho tum..

Savana- batana kya hai boss, bas itna jaan lo ki world ke best Top5 Sword Fighters mein se ik iska naam atta hai..

Tushar- (herani se) What!!..

Safal- haan boss, yeah bahut paunchi hui cheez hai, asse hi thori mask lagaye ghumta hai, ik baar mask hata de toh lakho log isse gher k khade ho jaye.. pata hai yeah pehla mission hai jisme yeah baat karta hai, warna toh yeah bolta hi nahi tha, Chehre pe mask, muh pe khamoshi, aakho mein gussa, chutkiyo mein mission ko yuu khatam kar dene wala banda, yeah badle mein apne liye bas ik cheej mangta hai..

Tushar- kya..?

Safal- Vishwas! App isse duniya ka koi bhi kaam sonp do, apke diye hue time se pehle yeah usse pura kar dega..

Tushar- thik hai, Waqt anne par isse bhi azma lenge, or tumhare guruji a gaye kya.?

Savana- (Safal k kaan mein) yeah boss guruji ko bahut yaad kar rahe hai..

Safal- (dhire se) jab ayenge tab pata chalega inhe, lakin boss k sath sath hamari bhi khair nahi..

Savana- sahi kaha.. hamari bhi achi khasi band bajne wali hai..

Shivan- jab chahe azma lena boss, or boss mere guruji a gaye hai apko training dene, batao kab unhe leke ayu yaha..?

Tushar- Kal, Kal subhe unhe bula lena, kal se shuru karte hai.. ajj muje kuch kaam nipta lene do, pehle muje iss Haweli ko uss dhang k liye Set karne do jiss kaam k liye maine isse kharida hai, waise kitne ki mili tumhe yeah Haweli..?

Shivan- 15Crore..

Tushar- hmm! Laga hi tha.. toh kaha hai iska asli malik, mere naam kab hogi Haweli..

Shivan- mein usse phone kar bula leta hu..


(Fhir karib 1 ghante baad ik 30 saal ka admi suit boot mein ik suitcase k sath Haweli mein enter karta hai..)


Shivan- boss yahi hai Haweli k malik, Mr. Rajesh..

Tushar- (hath milata hua) hello sir..

Mr.Rajesh- hello beta, to app kharidna chahte ho iss Haweli ko..

Tushar- ji sir, apki Haweli bahut khubsurat hai, bahut shandar hai jaise muje chahiye thi bilkul waise hi hai..

Mr.Rajesh- shukriya beta, lakin app karte kya ho..

Tushar- ji mein abhi student hu..

Mr.Rajesh- kya! Lakin apko pata hai na iski kimaat kitni hai..

Tushar- ji sir lakin app fikar mat kijiye, paise apko mere Papa se mil jayenge..

Mr.Rajesh- (bag se papers nikalta hua) ohh toh fhir thik hai, kal Shivan ji ne 1Lakh rupe mere account mein transfer kiye or bola ki unke dosto ko Haweli urgently chahiye toh maine guard ko bol inhe Haweli ki keys de di..

Tushar- ohh Shukriya Shivan, tumhe tumhare paise mil jayenge..

Shivan- koi baat nahi boss, jab chahe aram se dena..

Mr.Rajesh- toh beta cash, check, card kaise payment karoge.?

Tushar- filhal toh mere pas inmese kuch bhi nahi hai, app apna account number muje send kar dijiye, mein Papa se bol paise transfer karwa deta hu..


(Fhir Mr.Rajesh usse apna account number send karta hai toh Tushar usse agge apne Papa ko forward kar deta hai or Call lagata hai, 2 Ring k baad hi Papa call utha lete hai vo abhi office mein the..)

Tushar- hello Papa..

Papa- haan bolo beta..

Tushar- Papa apse ik kaam tha, muje 15Crore rupe chahiye..

Papa- hmm, or vo kyu chahiye..

Tushar- Papa ik account number maine apko send kiya hai app usme paise transfer kardo please bina koi sawal kiye, apko muje par vishwas hai na..

Papa- pura vishwas hai beta, thik hai mein karta hu.. or muje apna location send kar 3,4 card bhi bej deta hu, khub masti kar, enjoy kar, jitna paisa udhana hai udha.. akhir shukhar hai tuje meri baat samaj toh ayi, nahi toh muje laga itna paisa kamane ka kya fayda agar mere bache hi usse khul k na udhaye..

Tushar- thik hai Papa apki yeah icha bhi puri kar deta hu.. thankyou.. love you. Papa..


(Kuch der baad Papa account mein paise bej dete hai, or Mr.Rajesh ke mobile par bhi message a jata hai..)


Mr.Rajesh- (message padhta hua) thik hai beta, paise toh a gaye, (paper uski taraf karta hua) ab inn papers par sign kar iss shandar Haweli ki malik ban jayo…


(Tushar sabhi papers par signature kar deta hai, kuch der baat-vaat karne k baad Mr.Rajesh bhi nikal jata hai, kuch der baad ik ladka Haweli atta hai or ik package Guard ko Saunp deta hai, isme credit cards the jo Papa ne Tushar k liye beje the…)


Savana- congratulations boss, kanuni taur par yeah Haweli ab apki hui.. Or Ab agge kya karna hai..

Tushar- (katil muskin k sath) tum jake camera ready karo..

Savana- (muskura k) ji boss..

Tushar- Safal tum gunde ko bahar Garden mein leke jao.. or guard ko chuti de do...

Safal- ok boss..

Tushar- Shivan tumhe kuch saman lene jana padega market..

Safal- haan boss. Bolo kya lana hai..


(Fhir Tushar kuch saman likh k ik list usse de deta hai or ik credit card bhi nikal k pakda deta hai, or khud bahar Garden mein chala jata hai, yaha Savana camera fit kar rahi thi or Safal gunde ke pas khada tha jo filhal kal se bhukha-pyasa hone k karan koi hosh-o-awaj mein nahi tha..)


Tushar- pane maro iske muh pe..


(Shivan ik gilas pani uske muh pe marta hai..)


Gunda- (hadbada k hosh mein atta Hua) aahhu ahhmm hhhmm bhai!! Bhai! Kuch khane ko dedo bhai.. mein mar jayunga nahi to..

Tushar- or jinda reh k tu konse sone k ande dega.. Savana Haweli mein jo phal-fruits pade hai lake isse do, sale ko bukhe pet maar kahi hame paap na lag jaye..


(Savana usse kuch fruits lake deti hai, Safal uski rassiya khol deta hai or gunda paglo ki tarah khane lagta hai..)


|Harshika’s House|


(Tushar ko gaye 2 ghante ho chuke the.. Harshika or Arushi dono haal mein bethi thi, inhe bhi abhi thori der pehle hi pata chala tha Sword Man or Quasar wala kaant..)


Harshika- yaar akhir yeah dono hai kon..

Arushi- (mazak se) kyu tereko kya RashanCard banwana hai inka..

Harshika- Arushi!! Yaar mein koi serious baat kar rahi hu idher..

Arushi- are toh mere se kya puch rahi hai.. mere konse mausi ke ladke hai yeah dono..

Harshika- (muh bana k) chhod tere se baat karna bekar hai..

Arushi- (uske pas jake bethti hui) are meri jaan gussa ho gayi, (kaan pakad k) sorrly.. (uski kamar pe gudgudi karti hui..)

Harshika- (uchal k hasti hui) aahahaahh ahaha Arushiii ahhahihi hihi maat karrr ahaha aaahhaha Aruuuu… (Arushi usse chhod deti hai) Chhod muje, pagal kahi ki..

Arushi- heheh kyu ab toh nahi naraj na.. hai toh bata de.. ik assi jagha gudgudi karungi ki fhir kabhi tu mere se naraj nahi hogi..

Harshika- (na samajti hui) matlab.? Kya kehna chahti hai tu, konsi jagha gudgudi karegi..?

Arushi- (apna hath uski skirt ke uper chut par rakh batati hui) yaha par..

Harshika- (uski pori baat ka matlab samaj) hatt beshram.. gandi kahi ki.. muje nahi karwani gudgudi-vudgudi tere se..

Arushi- (smile k sath) kyu kisi or se karwayegi..? (Jhuthe gusse se) Sun le meri baat isper sirf mere Tushar ka Haq hai, samaji..

Harshika- (usse muh phade dekhti hui) Arushi!..


(Harshika bas itna hi bol payi or apna sir niche kar liya.. usse bahut sharam a rahi thi.. vo utth k jane lagi toh Arushi ne usse pakad k wapis bitha liya..)


Arushi- kaha ja rahi ho Madam.. app toh bahut sharmati ho.. dekho shadi k baad assa nahi chalega.. bhabiji…

Harshika- hmm!!! Door hatt.. mein kyu banugi tumhari bhabi.. haan. Assa kya khas hai tumhare bhai mein, ki mein usse shadi karu.. muje nahi pasand tera bhai.. haan vo ik acha ladka hai.. ik acha dost hai.. lakin tumhe kisne kaha ki mein usss pasand karti hu.. shakal dekhi hai uski.. mein nahi karti usse pyar-wyar, toh tu kyu muje uski wife banane pe tuli hui hai.. chal chhod muje jane de..


(Harshika ne yeah bol toh diya lakin ik baar bhi Arushi ki aakho mein behti nadiya nahi dekhi jo ab samandar mein bhi tabdil ho chuki thi.. Harshika itna bol uthi or apne room mein chali gayi..)


Arushi- (roti hui man mein) kya Harshika sach mein Tushar ko pyar nahi karti.. shayad mein hi galat thi jo samaj na payi.. or kya kaha tune Harshika shakal dekhi uski..? Mere bhai jitni pyara or handsome ladka tuje kabhi kahi nahi milega.. agar mein teri jagha hoti na toh puri duniya ko ik side rakh sirf mere Tushar ko chunti.. galti kar rahi hai tu.. uski aakho mein maine tere liye jo mohabbat, jo pyar dekha hai vo tuje shayd hi koi or de…)


(Issi baat pe mein kuch kehna chahunga ki-

~ Tuje mila hai Pyar, Moka, or Sacha Jivansathi lakin tu kar rahi hai usse inkar! Kya yeah teri koi majburi hai ya tere assul hai jo kisi cheez se bandhe hue hai.?

Kyuki jo karni chahti hai usse pyar, uske hath toh ik Rishte ki janjiro se bandhe hue hai.. ~


|BACK TO TUSHAR|


(Gunde ne pet bhar k khana kha liya tha, abhi vo apni jindgi ki last rest le raha tha.. Kuch der mein Shivan bhi a gaya ik mini truck mein Tushar ka mangawaya hua saman leke..)

Savana- (truck ko dekh k) yeah sab kya hai boss..?

Tushar- yeah mere, nahi haam sab k liye kuch jaruri saman hai.. iski hame agge jarurat padegi..


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[Iron Man]

UPDATE-17


(Gunde ne pet bhar k khana kha liya tha, abhi vo apni jindgi ki last rest le raha tha.. Kuch der mein Shivan bhi a gaya ik mini truck mein Tushar ka mangawaya hua saman leke..)

Savana- (truck ko dekh k) yeah sab kya hai boss..?

Tushar- yeah mere, nahi haam sab k liye kuch jaruri saman hai.. iski hame agge jarurat padegi..


|AB AGGE|


Safal- par Boss isme hai kya..

Tushar- baad mein batauga, Shivan yeah sare boxes ander rakhwado..


(Shivan sara saman truck k sath aye hue admiyo ko leke Haweli mein utar deta hai.. saman rakhwane k baad truck wala bhi nikal jata hai..)


Gunda- (taras bhari najro se) bhai!! aye bhai.. chhod de na muje.. jane de bhai.. mein agge se assa kuch bura kaam nahi karunga..

Tushar- (usse ik thappar marta hua) chal sale!.. chhod du tuje.. meri behan k honth chusta hai.. (ik or thappar mar k) tere yeah kale honth ko toh koi sooar bhi na muh lagaye.. (apna Quasar mask pehanta hua) Savana camera fit karo.. iss sale ko jaldi mukt kare.. hame or bhi kaam hai..


(Savana camera ka angel Quasar or gunde ki taraf kar camera ON kar deti hai..)


Safal- (khush hota hua) ab ayega maja.. boss assi darindgi dikhana k video dekh sehar k sare gunde kaamp jaye.. kisi ko ladki ko choone bhi jaye toh unhe yeah video yaad a jaye..

Quasar- (gunde k pas jake uski aakho mein aakhe milata hua) ajj ham khelenge Agg mein churiyo ka khel.. Shivan!!

Shivan- yes boss..

Quasar- khel ka aayojan kiya jaye..

Shivan- ji maharaj..


(Shivan Haweli jata hai or laye hue saman mein se ik bada sa box or kuch chote boxes ik ik karke bahar le atta hai.. or fhir sare boxes khol saman ik jagah rakh deta hai.. Safal or Savana toh bas herain khade the..)


Savana- boss yeah sab ho kya raha hai..

Gunda- haan bhai.. kya ho raha hai muje bhi dikhao..

Safal- eeh sale tu chup beth.. yeah sari mehnat tere hi liye ki ja rahi hai…



(Shivan jo sara saman laya tha usse fit karne mein laga hua tha, saman kuch assa tha ki ik lohe ki chair jo karib ik sofe ki jitni moti-chodi thi.. puri chair kuch chote kuch mote cheedo se bhari hui thi.. kuch chaku, churi, ik choti ungli se lekar karib ik pure hath jitni teekhi-teekhi Pins.. inn sab ko Shivan chair mein fit kar raha tha.. yeah ek advance Chair thi.. kuch der mehnat karne k baad Shivan sari pins, sui, chaku-churi sab chair mein fit kar deta hai..)


(gunde abhi dusri chair se banda hua tha.. Shivan ne abhi kya kiya hai usse nahi pata tha kyuki vo sara saman utha uske piche le gaya tha..)


Quasar- Safal khol do isse jane do.. ja bhai tu ajad hai…


(Safal uske hath pao ko rasiyo se ajad kar deta hai.. gunda ajad hoke kafi khush lag raha tha.. lakin abhi toh usse apne anne wali maut ka daravna najara dekhna tha..)


Gunda- (khushi se) bhai ajj ke baad sare bure dhande band.. chalo chalta hu bhai...

Quasar- are sir rukiyo toh.. Savana jake ik gilaas thanda juice leke ayo.. sir bethiye 2mint juice peke jana.. Shivan tum bhi jayo...


(Savana or Shivan chale gaye Haweli k ander.. gunda bhi vapis ussi chair par bethne laga toh Quasar ne usse rok liya..)


Quasar- are are sir waha nahi.. (dusri chair ki or ishara kar) yaha bethiye.. khas apke liye mangwayi hai..

Gunda- (dusri chair par bethta hua) are itni badi chair.. iski kya jarurt thi..


(thori der mein Savana bhi a gayi juice leke.. or juice ka gilaas gunde ko pakda diya..)


Quasar- pijiye-pijiye sir.. yeah bhi khass apke liye banaya hai.. (dhire se) behosh jo karna tha…


(gunde juice ka pora gilaas gatak jata hai or kuch hi der mein behosh bhi ho jata hai.. karib 15mint baad usse hosh aya toh vo hill tak nahi pa raha tha.. yeah kaam tha chair ka.. jo abhi uski puri body ko jakdi hui thi.. hath, pair, kamar, gardan...)


Gunda- (gabhrata hua) yea.h.. yeah sab kya hai bhai..? Bhai muje chhod do.. galti ho gayi…

Quasar- (kas k ik thappar uske muh pe marta hua) sale!..
Bina maut tuje chhod du, apne assolo ko mein asse hi tood du..

Safal- ab dekh Gainde ki gand, kaise nikalte hai boss teri jaan..

Savana- beta ab tu maan le haar, kaise tuje marenge yeah teri samaj k hai paar..

Quasar- Shivan start kar jadli..


(Shivan apne hath mein padke ik remote ko ON kar deta hai..)



|Harshika’s House|


(Harshika abhi apne room mein bethi kuch soch kar muskura rahi thi..)


Harshika- (man mein) kitna pyara hai vo.. mera toh pehli najar mein hi dil le gaya.. pehle din jab aya kaise muje dekhe ja raha tha.. kya aakhe thi uski.. handsome bhi toh kitna hai.. khud mein chahe Jaan na ho lakin apni behano ki Jaan k liye apni Jaan pe khel gaya.wahh..
Lakin kya maine abhi sahi kiya Arushi k sath.? Haan chota sa majak hi toh kiya hai.. vo bhi toh muje kitna satati hai.. ab se muje pareshan nahi karegi.. or agar vo naraj ho gayi hogi toh.? Khair usse baad mein manna lenge.. toh kaha thi mein..
hayee.. mein usse kaise batau ki mein use kitna pyar karti hu..? Aakhir mein kyu batau use vo bhi toh karta hai pyar mujhse, vo khud bolega. Mere pas itni himmat nahi hai… lakin kya vo sachme mujhse pyar karta hai..? Pata nahi.. lakin jaise vo muje pyar se dekhta hai. Muje toh yeah uska pyar hi lagta hai.. kab karoge apne pyar ka izhar Mere Tushar.. mein tumhari baho mein lipatna chahti hu.. tumhe chumna chahti hu.. tumhe apni aakho ke samne rakhna chahti hu… vo kya bol rahi thi Arushi ki (apni Chut ki taraf dekh) ispe sirf Tushar ka haq hai. Pagal.. bilkul sharam nahi hai usse (Sharmati hui) hihi.. asse bhi koi bolta hai bhala.. ab yeah dil hi usse de diya toh yeah jism kyu kisi or ko dungi.. ispe sirf mere pyare Tushar ka haq hai…


(Harshika apne khyalo mein khoyi najane kya kya sapne dekh rahi thi... Dusri taraf school ki chutti ho chuki thi or Tania or Annika ik sath parking ki taraf ja rahe the…)


Annika- didi muje bhi car chalana sikhao na..

Tania- nahi Annu tu abhi choti hai…

Annika- (muh bana k) kaha choti hu didi.. ab mein 18saal ki ho gayi hu.. or apse bas 1 saal hi choti hu…

Tania- (hass k) mein umar ki nahi tere dimag k baat kar rahi hu.. vo toh chota sa hi hai na…

Annika- (bura sa face karke) huuhhh!!.. didi jao app.. mein nahi ayungi apke sath…

Tania- toh kiske sath ayegi.. Apne rajkumar k sath.. haan.?

Annika- (sochti hui) lakin bhaiya toh yaha nahi hai na..

Tania- (herani se) kya! Tere bhaiya tere Rajkumar hai..?

Annika- (khush hoke) haan.. or mein unki Rajkumari.. hihi

Tania- (apne mathe pe hath rakh) yeah teri baate meri samaj toh na atti bhai.. (car ki or ishara kar) chal beth abb..



(Dono car mein beth jati hai lakin Tania ke dimag mein kuch chal raha tha…)


Tania- (car sadak ki or daudati hui) Annu!..

Annika- haan didi..

Tania- tuje tere Rajkumar se milna hai..?

Annika- (khush hoke) bhaiya se.. haan milna hai na.. chalo na didi bhaiya se mil k atte hai.. mera bahut man kar raha hai.. dekhho na mera dil yeah sun k kitna khush ho gaya.. app chaho toh unse na milna.. car mein hi rehna lakin please muje unse milwa do…



(Tania Annika ke baat se pehle toh bahut khush thi lakin jaise usne kaha ki app unse na milna toh yeah sun uska chehra murjha gaya... kuch der baad Tania car ko Harshika k ghar k samne khadi kar deti hai.. Annika jaldi se car se utarti hai or bagh k Ghar ki doorbell baja chali jati hai.. Tania toh bas khamosh car mein dekhti reh gayi.. lakin vo bahar bhi nahi a sakti thi.. kis haq se vo Tushar se milti… Annika doorbell bajati hai toh thori hi der mein Arushi aake door kholti hai…)


Annika- (smile k sath) haye didu.. kaise ho..?

Arushi- Annu tu..?

Annika- haan mein.. maine socha apko or bhaiya ko surprise dedu.. bhaiya kaha hai.. (uchi awaj lagati hui) Bhaiyaaa!.. Bhaiyaa!...

Arushi- tu school dress mein.. kiske sath ayi hai.. or school se sidha idher hi a gayi.. bahut maar padegi ghar se…

Annika- uffhoo didu kya app bhi dhant rahi ho.. or Tania didi k sath ayi hu.. muje bhaiya se milna tha iss liye…

Arushi- (darwaje k taraf dekhti hui) Tania.. Tania k sath ayi hai.. kaha hai vo…

Annika- vo bahar car mein hi hai.. unhone muje kaha ki bhaiya se milna hai toh maine haan kyu nahi or fhir vo muje yaha le ayi… app kab se baate kya kar rahi ho.. bhaiya ko bulao na.. vo aa hi nahi rahe hai…



(Arushi sari baat samaj gayi ki Annika ko Tushar se milana toh bas ik bahana tha.. vo toh khud Tushar se milna chahti thi.. uske andar ki aag ab shant ho chuki hai.. lakin kya vo Tushar se baat kar payegi.. ik line uske dimag mein ayi jisse soch vo muskura di.. k

~ Ab saja de hi chuki ho to uska haal na poochhana,
Agar vo begunaah nikala to tumhe afasos bahut hoga.. ~



Annika- (uski baju se pakad hilati hui) Didu!.. didu kya hua.. kaha khoyi hui ho.. app bhaiya ko kyu nahi bula rahi.. please jaldi bulao na muje unko surprise dena hai…

Arushi- (uski gaal sehlati hui) are meri doll.. tere bhaiya ghar par nahi hai.. vo subhe se kahi gaya hua hai.. pata nahi kaha gaya hai.. bola ki kaam hai didi sham tak a jayunga…

Annika- (udas hoke) ohh bhaiya ghar par nahi hai…


Arushi- (usse side se gale laga k) are udas kyu ho gayi.. Tushar ayega toh mein usse bol dungi ki teri gudiya ayi thi tere se milne.. ik baar jake usse mil k aa…

Annika- (smile k sath) thik hai didu.. lakin app yaad se bolna please unhe..

Arushi- dekho toh kitna miss kar rahi hai.. abhi kal hi toh mili hai usse.. thik hai mein bol dungi.. ab tu ghar ja.. Mumma pareshan na ho kahi ghar par…

Annika- (uski gaal pe kiss kar) ok didu mein chalti hu.. Bye…

Arushi- (usse bhi kiss kar) Bye mera bacha…



(Annika ghar se bahar aake car mein beth jati hai…)


Tania- kya hua.. mil liya apne Rajkumar se..?

Annika- (sad face karke) are kaha didi.. bhaiya ghar par hi nahi hai.. vo kahi bahar gaye hai.. mera surprise dena wala plan hi fail ho gaya.. ulta muje hi surprise mil gaya…

Tania- (hass k) acha.. yeah toh bahut bura hua Rajkumari ji.. koi na app agli baar mil lena…

Annika- haan didi.. maine Arushi didu ko bol diya hai ki bhaiya aye toh unhe mujhse milwane bej dena...

Tania- ohhh matlab Rajkumar khud ayenge apni Rajkumari se milne..?


Annika- or nahi toh kya.. agar vo nahi aye toh haam krodhit ho jayenge.. or aas-pass k sabhi ilaake jala k bhasm kar denge... hehe…

Tania- hahaha.. chal ab chale ghar…

Annika- haan chalo didi…


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UPDATE-18


Annika- haan didi.. maine Arushi didu ko bol diya hai ki bhaiya aye toh unhe mujhse milwane bej dena...

Tania- ohhh matlab Rajkumar khud ayenge apni Rajkumari se milne..?


Annika- or nahi toh kya.. agar vo nahi aye toh haam krodhit ho jayenge.. or aas-pass k sabhi ilaake jala k bhasm kar denge... hehe…

Tania- hahaha.. chal ab chale ghar…

Annika- haan chalo didi…


|Ab AGGE|


|Back to Tushar|


Quasar- Shivan start kar jaldi..


(Shivan apne hath mein pakde ik remote ko ON kar deta hai.. or chair mein lagi machine apna kaam karna start kar deti hai.. vo lohe ki chair dhire-dhire ab garam hone lagi thi.. karib or 2mint baad chair kafi garam ho chuki thi, ab gunde ke chootad garam hone lage the. Usse ehasas ho chuka tha ki uske sath kya hone wala hai..)


Gunda- (darta hua) bha.i.. yeah kursi bahut garam hoti ja rahi hai.. ahhhhahh bhai.. bhaii mein jal jayunga…

Quasar- na na itni jaldi nahi jalega tu.. abhi toh game shuru bhi na hua.. bas thori der or thahar…


(Chair mein lagi machine ne apna kamaal dikhate hue chair ko or garam karna shuru kar diya.. gunde ki puri body niche se dhire dhire jalne lagi.. or uske kapde iss waqt uski body se chipak chuke the or unn mein se dhua nikalne laga tha.. gunda ab bardasht karne ki had mein na tha or chilaye ja raha tha…)


Gunda- (rota hua) aaaahhhbbhaii aaahhh naahiii bhaii mujee chod dee bhaii maf krdee... janee de kuttee.. mar jayunga.. rakh ban jayunga meinnnnn…


(Gunda tadaf raha tha.. uthne ki nakaam koshish kar raha tha lakin hil tak nahi pa raha tha...)


Quasar- Shivan!.. rok do…


(Shivan Remote ka switch OFF kar deta hai.. ab chair dhire-dhire thandi honi chalu ho gayi thi.. lakin gunde ki toh pehle hi fat chuki thi.. uski pith, chootad, tango or baju ke chair se dabe hue hisse ke kapde jal k uski body se chipak chuke the…)


Gunda- (dard se tadafte hue) bhai.. bhai mujhe police k hawale karde.. chahe muje umer kaid ki saja dilwade. Par yeh atyaachaar mujh par maat kar bhai.. tum ik nihathe pe war kar rahe ho..

Quasar- or jo tu kar raha tha kya vo atyaachaar Nahi tha.. 10 admiyo ko lekar school mein ghus gaya meri maasoom behan ko school ke bicho bich chuma.. usse sabke samne jaleel kiya.. usse utha k le gaya apni power k dam par. kya vo sahi tha.. or tuje toh 60 admiyo mein se nikal k laya hu mein. Taaki tuje tadpa-tadpa k maar saku tabhi mere man ko sakoon milega…

Gunda- bhai assa julam na kar.. bagwan kasam agge se kuch bura kaa…


(Gunda agge kuch bolta Quasar ne ik lambi niddle uske honth pakad nichle honth se uperwale honth se nikal fassa di.. uske kale honth lal rang mein tabdeel hone lage.. niddle uske hontho mein hi ataki thi toh chilla pane ka sawal hi peda nahi hota…)


Quasar- (ik thapper usse marta hua) badnaam maat kar bagwan ko apni gandi juban se… Shivan!! ON kar sale ko tadapte dekhna hai muje…


(Shivan vapis Switch ON kar deta hai lakin iss baar remote ke 2 button ON karta hai.. dhire dhire chair wapis garam hone lagi.. karib 5mint baad chair itni garam ho chuki thi ki ab chair halke-halke lal rang mein dikhne lagi thi.. gunde ki halat batane layak nahi thi.. vo jor jor se naak se saas se raha tha.. lakin cheekh nahi pa raha tha.. ab chair ne apna asli kamaal dikhna shuru kiya.. chair k holes mein se lambi-lambi garam needles bahar ko anna shuru ho gayi.. vo holes se bahar ayi or gunde ke chootad, hatho, paav or kamar mein dhire se half inch ander ghus k wapis nikal gayi… gunda itni jor se tadap k cheekha ki uske hotho mein fassi needle bhi uske hotho ko fadti hui nikal k gir gayi...)


(2mint tak chair ne apne app ko shant rakha lakin thandi nahi hui waise hi gunde ko garam karti rahi.. or karib 2mint baad, garam hone k karan chair ab gehre lal rang mein chamak rahi thi.. issi bich na jane gunda kitna cheekhta chilata rota raha.. gunda ki back side jal k khakh ho gayi thi.. or jaise ab vo sunn ho gayi thi.. ki achanak holes mein se garam needles vapis nikali or gunde ki body mein 1 inch ander daans gayi.. asse hi niddles vapis holes mein chali gayi or fhir speed se akke gunde ko chubh gayi.. Yeah process repeat hota gaya..jale pe namak to suna tha lakin gunde ko jale pe garam-garam sui chubh rahi thi.. gunde ki halat dekhne layak nahi bachi thi.. kyuki ab vo shant ho chuka tha.. apni jindgi k kuch aakhri pal hi jee raha tha.. kapde dhire-dhire jal rahe the ki achanak unme bhayaanak agg lag gayi.. or sath mein gunde ki cheekhe bhi nikal gayi. Jaise abhi vo behoshi se jagha ho.. Gunda jo piche se jal raha tha ab agge se bhi jalne laga…


Quasar- bas bahut hua.. Shivan jaldi isse Yamraj se milwao…

Shivan- ok boss…


(Shivan remote ka ik last button daba deta hai.. button dabate hi ik lamba garam teekha chaku gunde ki gardan k piche se nikal agge ko a jata hai… gunda maar chuka tha. vo bahar se utna dikha nahi paya jitna vo ander se tadapa tha. Yeah toh bas wahi janta tha. Shyad ab shaitan bhi usse narak mein saja na de kyuki ik bhayaanak saja vo jite ji bhugat chuka tha.. Quasar or Agents kuch der usse yuhi dekhte rahe.. Shivan Chair ko OFF kar deta hai.. Savana Jake camera band kar deti hai…)


Safal- Boss…

Quasar- (mask nikalta hua) hmm..

Safal- ab kya karna hai..

Tushar- kuch nahi.. iski lash ko uthao or jungle mein jake dafhana do…


(Kuch der baad Tushar vapis Harshika k ghar ki or nikal jata hai.. ghar paunch kar Tushar doorbell bajata hai toh samne Harshika door kholti hai. Or vo Tushar ko dekh ik smile kar deti hai.. Tushar k jo gunde ko maar ke chehre k haav-bhaav badle hue the ab Harshika ki pyari smile dekh Tushar ka chehra khil gaya tha.. vo bhi Muskurata hua andar a jata hai.. or sofe par beth jata hai…)


Harshika- (uske samne wale sofe pe bethti hui) kaha gaye the ap subhe se..?

Tushar- bas asse hi thora kaam tha.. didi kaha hai…

Harshika- vo shyad apne room mein hai..(par jaise hi usse yaad atta hai ki Arushi usse naraj hai toh uska face sad ho jata hai.. lakin vo Tushar ko iss baat ka ehsaas nahi hone deti…)

Tushar- (uthta hua) thik hai mein jara mil k atta hu didi se.. muje kuch baat karni hai unse…

Harshika- Okay…


(Tushar jake Arushi ke room ke samne khada ho jata hai.. darwaja band tha lakin lock nahi tha.. Tushar darwaja ko dhaka deke ander chala jata hai.. samne Arushi bed pe leti fan ko ghur rahi thi…)


Tushar- hello didi..

Arushi- (utth k bethti hui) are Tushar tu a gaya.. kabhi aya..?

Tushar- (bed pe bethta hua) bas abhi abhi.. or ap kya yaha akeli bethi chhat ko dekh rahi ho...

Arushi- bas asse hi.. vaise gaya kaha tha tu subhe se..?

Tushar- Vo kuch nahi didi bas Agents k sath hi tha.. kuch plan samjane gaya tha…

Arushi- (ungli dikhati hui) pakka na..? Dekh agar tu khud kisi se bhidne gaya na toh bahut bura haal karungi tera samja…

Tushar- (uski ungli pakad niche karta hua) uffo didi.. mein nahi jayunga kisi se bhi bhidne-vhidne.. mein toh bas unhe agge kya karna hai. Sehar mein kaise gundo ka raj khatam karna hai vo batane gaya tha.. or Agents k sath unka ik boss bhi toh aya hai. Vo sab sambhal lega app meri fikar mat karo…

Arushi- hmm.. fhir thik hai…

Tushar- vo sab chhodo didi. Muje apse ik jaruri baat karni hai…

Arushi- haan bol kya baat karni hai…

Tushar- didi kal apne muje hospital mein kiss kiya tha…

Arushi- (muskura k) haan kiya tha. Toh..?

Tushar- didi ap samaj nahi rahi ho.. mera kehna ka matlab hai ki ap muje kiss kaise kar sakti ho. I mean…

Arushi- (bich mein. Serious hoke) dekh Tushar! Meri baat sun. Ja Pehle darwaja band karke aa..

(Tushar utth k darwaja band kar deta hai or vapis akar bed par beth jata hai…)

Arushi- (uski aakho mein dekhti hui) Tushar dekh! maine dekh wahi kiya hai jo mere dil mein tha.. toh maine tumhe kiss kar liya…

Tushar- (confuse hoke) didi apki koi baat muje samaj nahi ayi.. thora detail mein batao please…

Arushi- Tushar mein tujhse pyar karti hu. Or tu bhi mujhse karta hai. Haina..?

Tushar- haan didi. Karta hu.. bahut pyar karta hu…

Arushi- (uske dono kandho pe hath rakhti hui) meri baat sun.. mein tuje pyar karti hu. Tu muje pyar karta hai..

Tushar- maine abhi wahi bola didi…

Arushi- (lambi saas ander leti hui) haaashhh.. Dekh Tushar mein tuje pyar karti hu.. bahut pyar karti hu.. As a lover pyar karti hu.. or tu janta hai vo kiss jo maine tuje kiya tha vo koi behan apne bhai ko nahi kar sakti.. maine tuje hamesha apne lover ki tarah hi dekha hai.. mein tujhse beinteha mohabbat karti hu.. kab se karti hu muje nahi pata.. yeah feelings kab mere ander jaag gayi yeah muje bhi nahi pata. Lakin tere bina akela rehna soch k hi mere ander kuch kuch hone lagta hai tu samaj raha hai na… (aakhe gili karti hui) dekh Tushar muje pata hai tu bhi mujhse pyar karta hai. Nahi toh koi bhai ik behan se assa chedkhani nahi karta jo tu karta hai. Or tune toh khud hi manna tha kal ki tu muje pyar karta hai ik lover ki tarah.. or ab sab jante hue bhi tu muje kal kiye hue kiss ke bare mein puch raha hai…


(Arushi ki baat sun Tushar ko kuch jhatke lage the. Lakin ab uske bhi dil mein dabe hue armaan jaag gaye the…)


Tushar- didi.. yeah nahi ho sakta.. haan mein apse pyar karta hu.. ik premi wala pyar karta hu.. lakin..

Arushi- lakin kya.. majboori kya hai teri.. mein hu na tere sath…

Tushar- didi app shayad pyar mein itna bhul chuki ho ki apko hamara Rishta bhi yaad nahi raha.. ham ik bhai behan hai.. or bhai behan kabhi Premi Premika nahi ban sakte... didi mein apse pyar Ishita se bhi pehle ka karta tha.. lakin iss samaj ke bandhano ke aage mein nahi lad sakta. Iss liye maine apne jajbaato ko kab ka apne dil mein daba liya tha.. or Ishita ko apni life mein le aya. (Rote hue) lakin kudrat ka khel toh dekho vo bhi chali gayi muje chhod k…


(Tushar atna bola or Apne assu ponchte hue utha or darwaja khol bahar chala gaya.. roo toh Arushi bhi rahi thi Tushar k jane k baad vo or jor se bed pe let takiye mein apna sir de rone lagi...)


(Issi baat pe mein yani yeah Quasar kuch kehna chahta hai ki-

~Waqt ne Halato ne kuch Baaton ne Majboor kar rakha hai,
Muje Tujhse or Tuje Mujhse ik Rishte ne Door kar rakha hai..~


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UPDATE-40


Rudra utha aur uske pass mein pade towel se Kaira ki chut ko ache se saaf kiya aur ek patli si chaddar uske uper dal diya...)


Rudra- (khidki ke pass jakar, shetani muskan ke sath) hahahaha…


|AB AGGE|

|Back To Tushar|

(Tushar abhi Siya ke pass hi betha tha ki Shivan bahar se aata hai unke pass..)


Shivan- Boss.. Guruji aye hai.. chaliye…

Tushar- (pyar se Siya ka gaal sehlata hua) Siya beta jao Mumma ke pass…

Siya- Okay bhaiya.. par yeh Guruji kon...

Tushar- vo main apko baad mein batunga...

Siya- Okay bhaiya...


(Tushar Shivan ke sath bahar garden mein chala jata hai jaha ek lambi table lagi hui thi, aur Guruji uss table par hathiyar aur aujaar set karke rakh rahe the…)


Tushar- (sab samajta hua, unke pass jakar) hmm toh lagta hai Guruji waqt a gaya hai apke Shishya ka aujaaro ke sath khelne ka…

Guruji- (piche mud, muskurate hue usse dekh) bilkul.. (waha padi bahut sari Talwaro ki aur ishara kar) yeh rahi Talware.. jo pasand ho uthale…


(Tushar sari Talwaro ko dhayan se dekh raha tha.. waha Ninja, Assassin, Modern, Alag-Alag Country se layi gayi Alag-Alag parkar ki aur bhi kaafi sari Talware thi.. Tushar aage badha aur unn Talwaro ek bich mein padi Ek Jung lagi Talwar ko utha liya.. yeh dekh Shivan aur Guruji dono muskura diye…)


Tushar- (Talwar ko dhayan se dekhta hua) yeh Talwar kaisi…..

Guruji- (bich mein bolte hue) sadiyon purani Talwar hai yeh.. kehte hai kisi Yodha ki yeh pehli Talwar thi, jo usne khud hi banai thi.. iss Talwar se lakho gardne kaati thi usne.. Jung laga hua hai ispar, par aaj bhi iska ek tej dhaar war achi se achi Talwar ko 2 hisso mein kat ke phek dega…

Tushar- hmm.. fhir toh yahi hui aaj se meri Talwar.. Chalo Guruji sikhao mujhe ki isse gale kaise kaate jaate hai…

Guruji- Shivan sikhaega tumhe…

Tushar- thik hai Guruji.. (Shivan ko dekhta hua, pata nahi kaha se par abhi Shivan ke hath mein uski Talwar thi) Chal bhai Shivan aaja, bahut Talwarbaji dekhli teri ab meri bari hai…


(Tushar yeh bolta hua khali jagha ki aur ja raha tha, usne apni jung lagi Talwar ko left hand se righ hand ki aur apne piche se ghamate hue pakad liya.. usne assa kiya hai yeh baat ka ehsaas usse shayad hua hi nahi…)


Tushar- (pich mud Shivan aur Guruji ko dekhta hua) Muskura kyu rahe ho Guruji..? Shivan chal a, aaj teri Talwar ko kaat ke phekuga…

Shivan- (uski aur badhta hua, muskura ke dhire se bola) ek hi lohe se bani hai Dono Talware, kya kaatoge aap…


(Abhi dono aamne-samne khade the.. Tushar Talwar ko dono hatho mein pakde Shivan ki aankho mein dekh raha tha, Shivan ki Talwar uske right hand mein lataki jameen ko chuu rahi thi.. ekdum se Tushar ne apni Talwar ko Shivan ki garden ki aur chala diya lakin ek jhatke mein Shivan ki Talwar utth gayi aur Tushar ki Talwar ke samne a gayi.. Tushar ne apni Talwar wapis li aur isbar teji se usne Shivan ke left kande par chalani chahi lakin yeh koshish bhi uski naakaam rahi…)


Tushar- waah yaar.. man gaya teri Talwarbaji…


(Fhir Shivan usse Talwar chalni sikhne lagta hai.. uski dhar ko marte waqt kab aur kaise sidhi rakhi jati hai, Handle kis waqt uper se aur kis waqt neeche se pakadna hai, kis raftaar se Talwar ka war karna hai, aur kaise apne aap ko Talwar se Defend karna hai.. dhire-dhire Tushar sikkh raha tha Actually vo jaldi-jaldi har cheez ko sikkh raha tha.. ek ajeeb baat jo ho rahi thi vo thi ki Talwar par Talwar ki lag rahi ragad se Tushar ki Talwar par laga Jung ab kuch hisso se utar chuka tha, aur ander se chamakti hui Talwar bahar a rahi thi…)


(Karib 2 Ghante Talwarbaji sikkhne ke baad Guruji ne unhe rok diya, aur Tushar ko kasrat karne ko bola like, Pushups, Running, Weight uthana...)


(Raat ho chuki thi Tushar subhe ke 10 baje se Training le raha tha, Abhi tak usne breakfast, lunch tak kuch bhi nahi khaya tha.. Na usse bhukh lag rahi thi na usse thakawat ho rahi thi.. vo sab kuch bula ke bas training kar raha tha.. Guruji ja chuke the lakin Shivan uske sath hi tha.. Tushar ke kapdo mein ek bhi assa hissa nahi thi jaha vo pasine se bhigha na ho, yaha tak ke uske baalo se pasina asse tapak raha tha jaise abhi vo talaab mein dubki laga ke aya ho…)


(Raat ho chuki thi aur Haweli mein Priyal subhe se bhuki apne room mein bethi roo-roo kar thak chuki thi aur tension aur bukhe pet hone ke karan usse thakawat ho rahi thi toh vo soo rahi thi.. Siya subhe se PC room mein bethi thi, waha lage Computers mein vo cheed-chaad kar rahi thi, najane vo kya dekh rahi thi tab se, lakin usne bhi subhe hi khana khaya tha toh usse bhukh lagi thi aur yeh bhukh usse uski Mumma ke pass le gayi…)


Siya- (door khol ander aati hui) Mumma..!!

Priyal-- (apni beti ki awaj sun uthi hui) haan.. kya, kya hua beta…

Siya- (bed par bethti hui) Mumma bhukh lagi…

Priyal- Bhukh lagi hai.. acha vo apke bhaiya. Kya naam tha unka…

Siya- Tushar bhaiya…

Priyal- haan Tushar, unhone bhi nahi khana khaya hoga na shayad…

Siya- (apne dono hath sar pe rakh) haan Mumma, yeh toh main bhul hi gayi.. bhaiya ne mujhe khilaya aur khud nahi khaya…

Priyal- acha jao tum unhe bula lao main khane ki taiyari karti hu…

Siya- Okay Mumma…


(Dono uthi aur Priyal kitchen mein aur Siya Tushar ko dhundhti-dhundti bahar garden mein a gayi…)


Siya- (Tushar ke pass aati hui) are o pyare bhaiya.. kya kar rahe ho…

Tushar- (Siya ko dekh Muskurata hua) Siya.. kuch nahi bacha.. thori exercise kar rahe raha hu…

Siya- (dono hath apne kamar pe rakh) bhaiya subhe se kuch nahi khaya na apne..?

Tushar- vo….

Siya- (bich mein) haan mujhe pata apne nahi khaya.. chalo yeh sab baad mein karna pehle khana kha lete.. Mumma bana rahi hai.. (Tushar ka hath pakad khichti hui) ayo chalooo…

Tushar- thik hai- thik hai chalo…

Siya- (piche mud Shivan ko dekh) areee.. aap nahi ayenge bhaiya.. khade kya ho chalo…


(Siya dono ko thora-thora dant kar le gayi Haweli.. Siya jakar dinning table ke uper chadkar beth gayi aur Shivan aur Tushar fresh hone chale gaye.. karib adhe ghante baad dono akar Siya ke pass beth gaye…)


Siya- (Table par bethi dono ko ghurti hui) aap dono ne khana nahi khaya subhe se…

Tushar- vo main.. mujhe pata nahi chala kab raat ho gayi.. (aur side ko muh kar setti bajane laga)

Siya- waahh kya bahana hai apka.. (Shivan ko dekh) aur apko bhi pata nahi chala Mask wale bhaiya...

Shivan- nahi Siya maine kha liya tha khana...


(Tushar kitchen ki aur dekh raha tha yaha Priyal man laga ke khana taiyar kar rahi thi.. Tushar utha aur kitchen ki aur jane laga...)


Tushar- (kitchen mein pahunch kar) Ji main.. main kuch help karu apki…

Priyal- (ghum kar uski aur dekhti hui) are aap Tushar ji.. nahi nahi main aap rahane do.. main kar lungi…

Tushar- aap ji kyu bula rahi ho mujhe.. itna chota hu main apse.. itni ijjat na de aap mujhe…

Priyal- nahi ji aap ijjat ke hakdar hai.. main nahi janti aap kon ho, kya ho, infact aap toh mujhe bhi thik se nahi jante lakin apne mujhe aur meri beti ko apne ghar rehne diya, dukh ki ghadi mein apne hamara itna khayal rakha.. uske liye jitna shukriya karu main apka kam hai…

Tushar- dekhiye aap assa mat boliye , acha apki AGE kya hai…

Priyal- ji meri AGE 27 hai…

Tushar- hmm.. toh jo bahar betha hai na Shivan uski 22 hai.. toh matlb vo 5 saal chota hai apse uss hisab se aap uski bhabhi lagti ho aur uski hui toh meri bhi hui fhir…

Priyal- (Tushar ki gaal khichti hui) acha thik hai lakin aap jante nahi ki devar ko bhi Devar Ji bula lete hai.. samje Ji…

Tushar- (apna sar khuja ke) toh aap nahi manegi thik hai.. toh lao mein apki madad karta hu.. Mere vo 2 sathi kisi jaruri kaam se bahar gaye hai.. warna toh wahi dono khana banate the…


(Fhir Tushar Priyal ki thori kaam mein help karta hai aur fhir khana banne ke baad teeno beth ke khate hai.. Shivan ne waha nahi khaya tha vo apna mask nahi utar sakta toh isliye vo alag hokar khata hai sabse…)


(Udher shehar mein jitne Students, Bache drugs addicted the unmese jadatar students ko Savana, Safal aur unki team, aur police walo ne unhe hospital pahuncha diya tha.. jo teachers drugs de rahe the bacho ko unme se kuch teachers pakde gaye the aur thora dara, damkar aur ek-do dande lagane ke baad unhone bakki ke kuch teachers ka bhi pata laga liya tha…)


|Jagala’s Haweli|

(Lala pareshan hua sofe par betha tha.. usse jakin nahi ho raha tha ki uske 300-350 admi ek jhatke mein udha diye gaye…)

Lala- yeh sale murakh log the kya.. yaha se toh bara halla machate hue gaye the.. udhar jakar kuch hi minton mein hawa mein dhul ho gaye.. sale gand marvaie log na khak ke na jhat ke.. tatte bade hue nahi ki chale gunde banne…

Khass Admi- Boss main kya kehta hu abhi apki meeting hai kal, India ke sabse bade Don Vaibhav Sethia ke sath.. aap usse milne ki taiyari kijiye.. vo baar-baar India nahi ayega, aur ayenge toh jaruri nahi ki humse milenge hi.. agar hamari deal ho gayi toh croro ka maal hath ayega…

Lala- haan baat toh teri yeh bhi sahi hai.. tu taiyari kar milne ki.. aur maal fresh rakhna.. yeh sale Daya ka patta saaf karne ko bhi bolna hoga usse.. kuch jada hi fudak raha hai aate hi vo…


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Hmmmmmmm
Good update

Siya or tushar wala scene achcha tha.....hero ko talwar dikhne mai uska past help kar raha hai....

Lala itni aasani se nahi maanega....kuch to karega hee vaibhav se milne ke baad....

Khair Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Anyways
Good update
Thanks

 

[parkas]

Next Khatarnak Update Kal Raat Ko Ayega Dosto..!!

Eagerly waiting for the next update..

 

[QUASAR]

Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai..

Thanks spritemathews bhai.. Keep Supporting...

 

[QUASAR]

awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai
Dhamkedar update hai..
Tusar ne plain bahut acha bnaya..Daya lgta hai Qusar ke bare Mai bahut kuch janta hai...
Tusar ki Deadline v sampt gone wali hai.apne khae anusar Use saja de dega .
Tania ne Jasmine ko din Mai tare to dikha diye sath sath muft ka tension v pal liya...Mai v Janna chahta hu aakhir Jasmine hai kiski beti..jis looser ko wo janti thi wo kb ka mar chuka hai.ab Jo hai wo kuch alag hai...
annika supperrrr yrr iske bare Mai JB v aap kuch likhte hai hm reders padhte hai to direct Dil ko chu. Jati hai..
Rudra suspense bna hi hai bate isaro Mai bahut krta hai .chacha 2 muh Bala sanp dikhane ke liye kuch or khane ke liye kuch or. Rudra ko is bare Mai PTA hai but Avi to chacha ki activity hm reders ko uske parti sk nhi hone Diya .

Thanks Bhai.. hmm thik kaha bhai Daya pahuncha hua khiladi hai.. Jasmine kiski beti hai yeh raaz 2,3 updates mein hi khul jayega.. Keep Supporting...

 

[QUASAR]

Tushar and Daya had made a plan together, I did not think that, but from Daya's words it seems that he knows the truth of Tushar. Tushar's plan was very good and successful too. Now I request you to torture and kill Jaggu, he should not get easy death.
Anika does not hear a word against her brother and that is why I like her. Tania's anger was also justified, but now Jasmine has created a hatred for Tania in her mind and she will definitely avenge it, Who is the father of jasmine?
Rudra knew everything, what does Rudra want?
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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