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Fantasy TUSHAR EK YODHA 《Incest, Thrill, Magical》

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Ghajab update bro aarushi di ,harleen aur apni hero ki future gf harshika ne emotional kr Diya boht hi emotional update tha bro siya ke papa nhi rhe mom hai aur siya se related boht Sare suspances hai jaise ki
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Kaun usko pana Chahta hai??
Uska Papa ko kya kya baat pta thi??
Kaun siya ki madad krega (offcourse hero)??
Kya wajah hi siya ko pane ki kosis hi rhi hai!!??
Kya savan ki Tarah siya ke pass bhi power hai jisko koi pana chahita hai (koi kriya krke Bali wali chadake ya koi aur tariqa se)!!!???
Tushar kaun hai kya hai kisliye hai kya kya power hai kaise growup krega boht se chijen hai Jo abhi honi baaki hai story mai by the way nice story with a lots of mysterious things like it keep writing bro waiting for next update as always!!???
 

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|Jagala’s Haweli|

(Lala abhi bahut gusse mein tha. vo hall mein idher-udher chakar lagaye ja raha tha. uske pass hi uske 3 admiyo ki lashe bhi padi hui thi jo usne gusse mein akar apne hi 3 admi mar diye the.. uska gussa hona jayaj bhi tha, ek assa don jiske ghar par police jane se darti hai wahi ek police wala akar uske dost ko utha le gaya. Uske liye yeh baat uski ijjat ko daag lagane barabar thi.. akhir yeh Inspector Daya aya kaha se.? kisne beja tha usse. Yeh soch-soch Lala apna dimag kharab kar raha tha...)


Lala- (gusse se) aaye konn thaa yeh Inspector Dayaaa.. iski maa chodni hai.. nikalo iska pura bio data.. sala 300 police wale laya tha.. jao jaha-jaha apne admi hai sabko ikattha karo.. sarre police station jala ke rakh kardo.. aur Jaggu ko kisi bhi kimat par 2din ke ander yaha wapis lao.. (samne khade apne 4,5 admiyo ko dekh) jao madarchodo jao, mera muh kya dekhte ho......



|AB AAGE|


Chacha- (haste hue) hahahahah... are usne toh jate hi tabahi machadi...

Rudra- hua kya Chacha. bada gala faad has raha hai..?

Chacha- are Daya ne kisi Lala naam ke Don ki maa chod dali...

Rudra- Chacha tu thik se bataega kuch ya main teri chodu..?

Chacha- haha.. haan haan. Beth batata hu...


(dono sofe pe beth jate hai...)


Rudra- haan bata kya hua.. kya kiya Daya ne jo itna khush ho raha hai...

Chacha- Daya ka transfer maine ........... city mein karva diya tha.. taki vo Quasar ka pata laga sake aur uski sare jankari legal tarike se nikal sake.. lakin jab vo city phauncha toh city ki halat bahut kaharb thi.. waha sirf gundo ka raaz chalta tha.. din-dahade ladkiyo ko chhedna, logo ko marna pitna, rape tak ho jana waha aam baat ho chuki thi jiska bhi dil karta ladki ko utha le jate, aur police kya kar rahi thi. Kuch din gundo ko jail mein rakhna aur kuch le-de ke chhod dena.. koi raste se ja raha hai toh bina uske ghar-pariwar ke bare mein socho usse wahi goli se mar dena.. yeh game chal rahi thi ............. city mein...

Rudra- hmm.. toh iss game ke piche kon hai..?

Chacha- Jagala...

Rudra- toh yeh Jagala bhosdiwala hai iss game ka asli player. toh isko tapkane ka na sidha...

Chacha- Koi chota mota don nahi jo tapak jayega itni jaldi.. aur ek nahi hai 2 hai.

Rudra- matlab..?

Chacha- matlab yeh 2 admi hai.. Jaggu aur Lala yani Jagala...

Rudra- ooohhh.. bade smart ho rakhne hai aaj kal don bhi. Chodupatti sale.. acha toh aage batao...

Chacha- aage kya hona tha.. Daya jaise hi city phauncha waha ka mahol dekh uska dimag ghoom gaya. Fhir usse khabar mili ki Jaggu ne kisi ladki ka rape kiya aur fhir usse mar diya.. bas yahi sunna tha ki usne ussi raat apni team taiyar karli aur agli subhe hote hi Jagala ki Haweli phaunch gaya.. karib 300 policewalo ke sath vo city ke sabse bade don ko ussi ki Haweli se utth le gaya.. batao isse jada beejti wali baat uske liye kya hogi ki ek naya policewala city mein enter karta hai aur dusre hi din uske sathi dost ko utha le jata hai...

Rudra- (hasta hua) hahaha.. kamal kar diya Daya ne.. par ab musibat Daya pe ayegi.. Lala jarur Jaggu ko chudane ke liye kisi bhi had ko par kar jeyega.. City khatre mein bhi a sakti hai...

Chacha- haan baat toh sahi hai.. par jo karna hai ab Daya ko hi karna hai...

Rudra- vo toh karega hi.. itna toh vishwas hai mujhe uspar.. lakin main yeh soch raha hu ki city ka hero Quasar kaha hai.. usne abhi tak kyu nahi kiya kuch Jaggu ke liye.. ab tak toh jaggu ki asthiyaan tak beh jani chahiye thi...

Chacha- haan wahi main bhi soch raha tha ki Quasar kaha chala gaya...


|Back To Tushar|

(Sab log abhi Harshika ke ghar phaunch chuke the.. aur hall mein sabhi ek dum shant hokar bethe the.. Tushar kabhi kisi toh kabhi kisi ke latke hue chehre ko dekh raha tha.. sab apni-apni socho mein ghum the.. koi kuch bol hi nahi raha tha toh Tushar bola...)


Tushar- toh (gala saaf kar) ahaahum ahaahum. (kisi ne uski baat pe dhyan nahi diya, toh thora jor se karta hua) aaahhhhhuummm...

Arushi- (ajeeb se usse dekh) kuch atak gaya kya gale mein...

Harleen- (hasti hui) hahahahaha.. kya yaar Arushi. hasa deti hai mereko...

Arushi- maine kya hasaya tujhe...

Harleen- chhod yaar tu mere type ki bandi nahi hai.. tu meri baato ko nahi samaj sakti.. (uper chhat ki aur dekh, sapno mein) meri baato ko toh koi smart sa handsome sa hi samaj sakta hai. Pata nahi kaha hai vo...

Arushi- vo abhi ghass kha raha hoga...

Harleen- ( aakhen nikal usse dekh) eeh kiski baat kar rahi hai tu..?

Arushi- (muskura ke dekh) tu ghadhe ki baat kar rahi hai na..?

Tushar- (pet pakad hasta hua) hahahahahah...

Harshika- hehehe...

Harleen- (gusse mein) badi kamini hai tu Arushi.. main kehti hu tujhe bhi koi bada wala kamina hi mile.. jo teri roj subhe-sham bajaye...

Arushi- (aakhen dikhati hui) kya..?

Harleen- (muskura ke) band...

Tushar- Okay-Okay shant ho jao abhi aap log...

Harshika- Harleen bas kar abhi.. teri wajhe se hum kitni badi problem mein pad sakti thi janti hai na tu.. abhi tujhe majak suj raha hai...

Harleen- (ekdum se apni hasi gayab kar, niche dekhti hui) Sorry...

Harshika- Sorry wali baat nahi hai Harleen......

Tushar- (bich mein) ek mint-ek mint.. mujhe bhi bataoge ki akhir kya hua tha..?

Harleen- main batati hu Tushar...

Tushar- haan please batao...

Harleen- vo assa hua tha ki aaj mera class lagane ka man nahi tha toh maine inn dono se bola ki chalo aaj class bunk karke kahi ghumne chalte hai, fhir thori der roo-doo kar maine dono ko mana liya aur nikal pade car lekar, lakin hume nahi pata tha ki jo ladke hum roj gandi najar se dekhte hai vo bhi hamara picha karenge.. hum raste mein ja rahe the ki maine socha kyu na hum uss jungle mein camping kare.. toh maine jidd karke dono ko mana liya.. yeh dono ka kehna tha ki akele mein asse jungle mein jana thik nahi.. lakin mere ko maze karne ki padi thi.. lakin mujhe thori pata tha ki vo ladke hamara picha kar rahe hai.. hume jungle mein aye adha ghanta hua tha ki 2 gadiyan aakar waha ruki.. yeh wahi the hamare college ke ladke.. par yeh aur bhi ladko ko sath aye the.. unhone aate hi hume pakad liya aur (roti hui) aur hamare sath jabardasti karne lage...

Tushar- (utth ke uske pas jata hai aur chhup karane lagta hai) are toh isme apki galti kaha hui..? aap toh bewajhe roo rahi ho.. roo mat.. (Arushi aur Harshika ki aur dekh) toh aap log iss wajhe se naraj thi innse jab ki inki koi galti hi nahi thi.. dekho agar vo ladke apko jungle mein na pakadte toh kisi aur din kisi aur jagha apko pakadte hi pakadte.. samji aap.. asse inko doshi mat thehrao ki agar yeh jungle mein jane ke liye jidd na karti toh assa nahi hota...

Arushi- bilkul sahi kaha tumne Tushar.. Sorry Harleen...

Harshika- Harleen Sorry...

Harleen- (muskurati hui) its okay yaar...

Tushar- acha fhir batao kya hua..?

Arushi- fhir Tushar maine chalaki se tumhe message kiya.. lakin kaafi bar karne par bhi tumhra reply nahi aya toh maine Shivan ko message kar diya...

Tushar- oh sorry didi mere pas mera mobile nahi tha...

Arushi- koi baat nahi mujhe laga hi tha isiliye Shivan ko message kiya.. lakin tu mujhe bataega ki kahir itni jaldi itni achi fight karna kaha se sikkh gaya.. khanjar toh asse chala raha tha jaise koi Assassin ho.. itni jaldi kaise sikkha tu...

Tushar- isme sochna kya hai didi.. main toh bas marne pe focus kar raha tha.. uss waqt mere ander bahut gussa tha jo samne aya marta gaya.. pata nahi main kaise itna acha ladh liya par haan shayad yeh mere gusse ke karan hua tha...

Harshika- apka gussa dekh hum sab aur jada dar gaye the.. aur vo jo apke sath the unhone toh sidha apna sword uss ladke ke sine ke par kar diya.. uff bahut daravna tha vo. Mera toh dil kamp gaya tha dekh kar...


(Tushar uski baat karne ke andaj mein kho sa gaya tha.. DIL teen shabado ka shabad, issi juddi baato ke bare mein kya likh sakta hu.. assa kyu hota hai ki usse pura din dekh kar bhi tera man nahi bharta, assa kyu hota hai ki uska tere sath na hone se din nahi kat.ta, assa kyu hota hai ki siwaye uske kisi aur ki awaj sunne ka tera dil nahi karta, assa kyu hota hai ki jab vo pass nahi hoti toh bahut dhura-dhura sa tujhe lagata, assa kyu hota hai ki usse koi chhu tak le toh tera dil agg ki tarah jalta, assa kyu hota hai ki agar vo tujhe na mili toh yeh soch kar hi tera dil bahut darta, assa kyu hota hai ki vo chhod kar chali gayi tujhe ab yeh dil har waqt tujhse ladhta...)


(Arushi Tushar ko awaj laga rahi thi jo kabse Harshika ko bas ghure ja raha tha, Harshika ne bhi dekh liya tha vo muh niche kar sharma rahi thi.. Arushi aur Harleen bhi hasi control kar ke has rahi thi...)


Arushi- Tushar..!

Tushar- (hadbadta ke, apni socho se bhar nikal) haann.. haan didi...

Arushi- kya hua.. (Harshika ko dekh muskura ke) kaha khoiya tha yeh..?

Harshika- (sharmati hui) mujhe.. mujhe kya pata.. maine toh kuch kiya hi nahi...

Tushar- vo.. are nahi darasal main soo raha.....

Harleen- (bich mein) aakhen khol ke soo rahe the..?

Tushar- are nahi main keh raha hu soch raha tha...

Harleen- ohh.. waise kya soch rahe the..?

Tushar- vo.. are chhodo na...

Harleen- (muskura ke, pehle Tushar fhir Harshika ko dekh) humne toh pakda hi nahi usse...

Tushar- (idher-udher dekhta hua) aap kya baate kar rahi ho.. (baat badalta hua) didi mujhe chai-coffee bana ke do na.. thori thakawat si lag rahi hai...

Arushi- (uthti hui) thik hai main lati hu...

Harshika- (jaldi-jaldi utth ke) ruk Arushi, tu beth main lati hu banake...

Harleen- (dhire se Arushi se) kya baat hai.. shadi se pehle hi...

Arushi- (dhire se usse bhi) bas chup karja abhi.. bahut bolti hai tu...



(udher Siya, Savana aur Safal hospital ja rahe the.. lakin abhi waha dukho ka samandar unka intjar kar raha tha....)


《1764 -words》
Hmmmm
Good update

1 anar 100 bimaar.....ye hai hero ki situation....girls ko lekar....

To daya ko rudra ne bheja hai.....good....tab to kaafi dam dar hoga.....

dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Anyways
Good Update
Thanks
 

Vikram singh rana

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Arushi- (uthti hui) thik hai main lati hu...

Harshika- (jaldi-jaldi utth ke) ruk Arushi, tu beth main lati hu banake...

Harleen- (dhire se Arushi se) kya baat hai.. shadi se pehle hi...

Arushi- (dhire se usse bhi) bas chup karja abhi.. bahut bolti hai tu...

(udher Siya, Savana aur Safal hospital ja rahe the.. lakin abhi waha dukho ka samandar unka intjar kar raha tha....)



|AB AGGE|

(Siya, Savana aur Safal Hospital pahunche toh unhone dekha ki Hospital ke ander se bahut log ghabarae hue se bhag-daud kar rahe bahar a rahe hai.. Savana aur Safal yeh dekh thora herain ho jate hai ki log aase haala kyu macha rahe hai.. teeno ander jate hai toh dekhte hai ki doctors tak hadbadae hue ghum rahe hai.. sare rooms ke doors close the bas ek samne wale room ka door tha jo khula hua tha, aur waha se rone chilane ki awaje a rahi thi.. Savana jaldi se uss aur jane lagti hai, Safal bhi Siya ko gaud mein uthata hai aur jaldi se room ki aur jane lagata hai.. room mein enter hote hi Siya samne dekh jor se chila padti hai...)


Siya- (chilati hui) Muuummmmaaaaaa...


(samne niche jameen par Siya ki Mumma padi hui thi jiske pet mein goli lagi hui thi.. vo khoon se lath-path shayad duniya ko alwida keh chuki thi.. uske sath Siya ke Papa jo bed par bade the unhe bhi ek goli unke pet mein mar di gayi thi lakin abhi vo jinda the shayad abhi kuch hi saase bachi thi unki.. aur goli chalane wale 3 admi abhi bhi wahi the, unmese ek abhi bhi Siya ke Papa par Gun tane kahada tha aur usse kuch sawal kar raha..)


Admi.1- nahi bataega yeh le fhir...


(vo Admi shoot karne wala tha ki Siya chheekh padi.. yeh wahi waqt tha jab Siya, Savana aur Safal room mein enter kiye the.. Siya jaise hi chheekhi toh unka dhayan uss taraf chala gaya...)


Siya’s Papa- (dard se aur herani se) betiiii.. tum yaha kyu ayi.. (Savana aur Safal ko dekh) aap log kyu laye isse yaha.. kyuuuu..!!

Admi.1- (hasta hua) oyee tu chup kar ladke.. hahaha.. yeh toh bahut acha hua, (Safal ko dekh) la oye ladke iss ladki ko mujhe dede...


(bas yeh iss ladke ki last line thi.. Safal ne roti hui Siya ki aakhon pe hath rakha aur Savana ko ishara kiya, Savana ne apni jacket ke ander se 2 Pistol nikale aur samne khade teeno Admiyo ke mathe par ek baad ek Goli chala di.. teeno shanti se jameen par gir gaye aur kabhi na uthne wali neend soo gaye...)


(Safal ne Siya ke aakhon se hath hataya toh dekha Siya behosh ho gayi thi.. ab uske Mamma-Papa samne Goli kahye pade hai toh ek nanhi si jaan kaise yeh dekh bardash kar sakti thi.. Safal ne Siya ko ek bed par letta diya aur jaldi se Siya ke Papa ke pass gaye...)


Safal- (unhe lagi Goli aur behte khoon ko dekhta hua) aap.. apko kuch nahi hoga.. main doctor ko bulata hu.. chinta mat karo aap...

Siya’s Papa- (dard mein bolta hua) Shukriya meri beti ki jaan bachane ke liye.. meri ahhh hhhaa meri baat suno.. apne bataya tha ki aap Agents ho dekho main ab nahi bachunga...

Safal- (bich mein) Savana Doctor ko bulao jaldi...

Savana- haan main bulati hu Doctor ko...


(Savana ne pehle jameen par padi Siya ki Mummy ko bed par letaya aur daud kar bahar chali gayi Doctor ko lane...)


Siya’s Papa- meri baat kyu nahi sun rahe aap log mere pas waqt nahi hai.. bas itna kehtna hai ki Siya ko bacha ke rakha yeh koi aam ladki nahi hai.. kuch log isse pana chahte hai.. mujhe vada karo ki isse kuch nahi hone doge.. vada karo.. (rota hua) please meri bachi ko kisi ko mat dena chahe koi kitni hi mang kare.. hamesha isse apne pass rakhna.. bolo kya aap karoge aasa..?

Safal- haan fikar mat karo.. mujhe nahi pata aap aasa kyu bol rahe ho lakin apki beti ko kuch nahi hoga.. yeh mera wada hai apse...

Siya’s Papa- meri Wife ko bacha lena please.. vo bach sakti hai...

Safal- Chinta mat kijiye hum apko bhi.....

Siya’s Papa- (bich mein, dard mein bolne ki koshish karte hue) aahh nahi.. mera bach pana namumkin nahi hai.. mujhe zeharili Goli lagi hai.. lakin meri Wife bach..........


(Bas itni hi keh paye the ki Siya ke Papa ne dam tod liya.. ab kya hi likhu..? ek 8 saal ki nanhi si jaan ke Papa nahi rahe yeh baat Safal usse kaise bataega..? Safal Siya ke masoom chehre ko dekh raha tha.. uske reshmi baal hawa mein udd rahe the, ek choti si pyari si naak, chote-chote hoth, badi badi aakhen jo abhi band thi, pyara sa uska face.. Safal ki aakhon mein pani baraas raha tha, yeh soch kar ki ab yeh bachi kisko apne Papa kahegi, kisse apne liye khilone mangegi, chhot lagne par jo Papa usse gaudi mein utha ke chup karate the vo kon karega ab, apni vidaii par kisko gale se laga kar royegi, abhi toh itni choti si hai, kaise apni bakki jindgi apne Papa ke beggar, unki yaadon mein gujaaregi.. itne mein Savana 2 Doctors aur 3 Nurses ke sath a gayi.. unhone aate hi sabko bahar jane ko kaha.. Safal ne rote-rote hi Siya ko uthiya aur usse apni gaud mein utha kar bahar chala gaya aur ek bench par beth gaya.. Savana pani lekar ayi aur Siya par chhidka toh vo hosh mein a gayi.. Siya hosh mein aate hi wapis rone lagi...)


Siya- (roti hui) bhaiya.. bhaiya. Mumma aur Papa kaha hai.. (jor-jor se roti hui) unhe kisi ne mar diya...


(Siya ne jab yeh baat apni roti hui surat se itne dard bhari awaj mein boli toh Savana aur Safal ka dil bhi jor-jor se roo pada.. Savana bhi khub rone lagi.. Safal ne ek side se Siya aur ek Side se Savana ko apne se laga liya...)


Safal- nahi beta Doctors gaye hai ander vo apke Mumma-Papa ko kuch nahi hone denge.. thik hai, chinta mat karo tum...

Siya- (thori umeed se) kya vo Mumma-Papa ko thik kar denge..?


(Safal Savana ko dekhta hai aur soch raha hota hai ki kya bolo aur kis muh se bolo main, jab khud usne uske Papa ko apni aakhon ke samne dam todte dekha hai...)


Safal- (apne aansoo bahata hua) haan beta, vo thik kar denge tumhare Mumma-Papa ko...


(yeh bolte hue Safal ki aankhon se jharna beh nikla.. vo utth kar bahar jana chahta tha taki vo ek baar khul kar roo sake lakin vo bajaye assa karne ke uss nani si jaan ko hosla dena chahta tha uske aansoo pochna chahta tha...)


|Back To Tushar|

Harshika- (kitchen se coffee lati hui) yeh lo a gayi coffee...

Harleen- (hasti hui) hmm.. pehle apne MR. ko dijiye kahi naraj na ho jaye...

Harshika- (herani se) kya boli...

Harleen- (tedhi aakh se Tushar ko dekh) maine kaha pehle inn MR. ko coffee do kahi naraj na ho jaye...


(Tushar sab samajta hua bhi masoom bana fhir raha tha, vo uper-niche aur idher-udher najare ghuma raha tha jaise usne toh kuch suna hi nahi.. Harshika trey lekar Tushar ke pass jati hai aur thora jhuk kar jab trey uske samne karti hai toh Tushar ka dhyan Harshika ke boobs ke bicho-bich ban rahi line par tik jati hai.. bas kuch seconds tak hi sahi lakin Tushar ka man ander se khush ho gaya.. usne jaldi se apni najare uper karli aur coffee ka cup pakad liya.. Harshika ko kuch pata nahi chala tha lakin koi tha jisne uski iss harkat ko ache se dekh aur note kar liya tha.. vo mand-mand muskura rahi thi aur kuch sochne bhi lagi thi.. Harshika ne sabko coffee di aur apni coffee ka cup bhi lekar jan-bujhkar ek sofa chhod kar Tushar ke samne wale sofe par akar beth gayi...)


(sab coffee pe rahe the ki Arushi ke mobile par Annika ka call a jata hai...)


Arushi- (call utha ke) hello meri barfi kaisi hai...

Annika- (narajgi se) huuuhh.. mujhe barfi kyu bola.. main barfi hu kya..?

Arushi- (muskurati hui) haan barfi hi toh hai itni mitthi c.. ek din main tujhe kha jayungi...

Annika- nahi main mitthi nahi hu mujhe mat khana...

Arushi- (hasti hui) hehehe.. acha thik hai nahi kahti.. chal bata kyu call kiya...

Annika- (wapis naraj hokar) mujhe bhaiya se baat nahi karni...

Arushi- alle kya hua.. Tushar ne kuch bola tumhe..?

Annika- bola nahi hai isiliye toh baat nahi karni.. hhuuhh...

Arushi- yeh huuhh-huuhh karna chhod aur (Tushar ko gusse se dekh) bata kya kiya usne, main abhi khabar leti hu uski...

Harshika- yeh apki baat kar rahi hai na.. kya kiya apne..?

Tushar- (ghabhrata hua) mujhe, mujhe khud nahi pata...

Annika- nahi didi.. bhaiya mujhse baat nahi kar rahe, issliye main gussa hu.. vo mere call bhi nahi utha rahe.. (nam aakhon se) main unke liye important nahi hu kya..? (aur rone lagi)

Arushi- are nahi mera bacha rone kyu lagi aap.. dekho meri baat suno Tushar ka mobile... (apni kahi baat ko kosti hui) vo vo uska mobile...

Annika- kya didi.. bhaiya ka mobile kya...

Arushi- vo tu Tushar se hi puch le.. (aur mobile Tushar ko de diya)

Tushar- (ghabrata hua) hello gudiya.. kaisi hai tu..?

Annika- (khushi se) main thik hu bhaiya.. (wapis naraj hokar) lakin mujhe apse baat nahi karni...

Tushar- lakin kyu..?

Annika- aap mujhse baat nahi kar rahe the.. na call ki na hi meri call uthai.. kya main ab apke liye important nahi rahi..?

Tushar- (relax hota hua) oohh.. assi baat thi.. sorry meri guddu mera mobile.. aah aah.. vo kahi kho gaya tha.. haan.. warna kya main apni gudiya ka call asse hi chhod deta.. bilkul bhi nahi...

Annika- (confirm karti hui) pakka..?

Tushar- (man mein) nahi gudiya.. ab tumhe kaise batau ki mobile Haweli mein hai.. agar Haweli ke bare mein bata diya toh sab kuch batana padega. Aur main nahi chahta ki tumhe kisi tarah ki tension mein dalu...

Tushar- haan pakka meri jaan...

Annika- (khush hokar) fhir thik hai.. toh aap mujhse baat kar sakte ho.. heheheh...

Tuhsar- ohh toh ab mujhe permission mil gayi.. acha kya kar rahi hai meri pyari gudiya, aur vo kaha hai aag ki pudiya.. kahi tujhe tang toh nahi karti..? karti hai toh batana uski tange tood dunga main.. hahaha...

Annika- (hasti hui) hihihi.. aap bahut joke marte ho bhaiya.. main toh apse baat kar rahi hu na toh main aur kya karugi.. Aur Tania didi mujhe tang nahi karti.. mujhe bahut sambhal ke rakhti hai.. didi idher hi bethi hai mere pass hi...

Tushar- (ghabhrata hua) ohh.. vo bhi udher hi hai.. (apne gale se thukkh nigalta hua) aahhumm toh kya mobile.....

Annika- (bich mein bolti hui) bhaiya apko ek good news du.. vo na mobile speaker par hai.. heheheh...

Tushar- vo.. vo.. vo...

Tania- (gusse se) ab vo vo kya karta hai, bol ab.. tu tange todega meri.. tu ghar a teri tango ko asse modungi na ki baba ramudev bhi sharma jayega...

Annika- (pet pakad hasti hui) heheheheh.. bhaiya abhi ghar aane se pehle 2 baar soch ke aana...

Tushar- isme sochna kya hai.. main nahi ayunga ghar...

Tania- aase kaise nahi ayega.. tu nahi ayega toh main a jayungi waha, ek baar teri khabar toh leni hai mujhe...

Tushar- thik hai le lena meri khabar.. acha batao tum sab thik ho, ghar mein koi problem toh nahi, aur school mein koi tang toh kar raha...

Tania- (herani se) nahi assi toh koi baat nahi hai.. lakin asse kyu puch raha hai tu...

Tushar- kuch nahi bas asse hi.. acha thik hai apna dhayan rakho.. BYE...

Tania- BYE...

Annika- BYE bhaiya, hum apse milne ayenge...

Tushar- haan mera guddu mujhe bhi milna hai tumse, dil nahi lagta tere bina.. BYE...



《1983 -words》
Hmmmm
Very good update
After a long time
And much emotional also

Siya ke mom dad wala scene kaafi achcha tha.....OR Siya ke dad ki baato se lagta hai Siya or uski maa me kuch powers hai...

ye jab Safal ko Siya ke dad bata diye ki Siya ki maa bach sakti hai....goli lagne ke baad bhi....tab bhi wo be kar ki baato mai time pass kar raha he.....jabki Abhi uski priority Siya ki maa honi chahiye....jyada nahi to kam se kam use dekh hee le....


Kis kaam ka agent hai wo jo bas 2 logo ki maut se vichleet ho gaya.....

Hero or Annika ki conversation kaafi achchi thi.....

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks
 

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Tushar ne bacha liya sbko
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Daya ko rudar ke chacha ne bheja
Siya ke mummy papa ko kisne mara or kyu mara
Siya ko kyu maang rhe the wo log
Update 33 emotional update tha:cry2:
Siya ki aankhon ke samne mar diya uske mom dad ko :verysad:
Safal ko apne papa yaad aa gye
Overall fantastic updates
34 update kl padhke review dungi
 

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Tushar- thik hai le lena meri khabar.. acha batao tum sab thik ho, ghar mein koi problem toh nahi, aur school mein koi tang toh kar raha...

Tania- (herani se) nahi assi toh koi baat nahi hai.. lakin asse kyu puch raha hai tu...

Tushar- kuch nahi bas asse hi.. acha thik hai apna dhayan rakho.. BYE...

Tania- BYE...

Annika- BYE bhaiya, hum apse milne ayenge...

Tushar- haan mera guddu mujhe bhi milna hai tumse, dil nahi lagta tere bina.. BYE...



|AB AGGE|

Harshika- (khushi se) apki sisters ka call tha..?

Tushar- (muskurata hua) haan meri pyari behano ka...

Harshika- mujhe bhi milwao na unse.. maine apse pehle bhi kaha tha, (sad face banake) lakin apne mujhe milwaya nahi...

Harleen- haan vo apki choti gudiya se toh main mil chuki hu ek baar, bahut sweet hai vo.. lakin apki judwa behan se nahi mili.. mujhe bhi ek baar milwana please...

Tushar- haan haan kyu nahi jarur milwaonga unse apko.. (Arushi ki aur dekh) kya hua didi aap itni udass kyu lag rahi ho...

Arushi- kuch nahi main bas soch rahi thi ki aaj jin ladko ko tumne mara hai kya unhe marna sahi tha.? i mean jaan se maar dena kuch jada nahi ho gaya Tushar..?

Harleen- (udaas hokar) mujhe bhi yahi lag raha hai ki.......

Tushar- (bich mein chilla ke khada hota hua) bassssss.. sunlo meri baat, maine jo kiya kuch galat nahi kiya, (Arushi ko gusse mein dekhta hua) didi aap keh rahi unhe jaan se maar dena jada ho gaya, agar main waha waqt par nahi hota toh kya jada nahi ho jata..? tab kya apke dil mein unke liye beinteha nafrat nahi hoti..? kya tabh bhi aap yeh nahi chaah rahi hoti ki mere sath itni badsaluki karne wale insan ki garden kat jaye.. maine wahi kiya hai didi maine anhoni hone se pehle hi garden kat di.. (gusse mein cheekhta hua) meri behan ko koi chuu tak nahi sakta.. agar aage se kisi ne assa karna ka socha bhi toh main usse vo ban ke dikhaunga jo usne kabhi na dekha na socha hoga...


(Tushar apni har line itne cheekh-cheekh kar bola tha ki teeno ladkiyan toh dar ke kamp gayi...)


Tushar- (Arushi ko gusse se dekhta hua) bolo didi bolti kyu nahi.. kya tabh bhi aap yahi kehti ki jo hua galat hua hai.. boloooo...


(Arushi Tushar ki assi baato se roo hi padi thi.. uske muh se kuch nikal hi nahi raha tha bechari kya bolti.. kuch der koi kuch nahi bola, achanak Tushar ko ehsaas hua ki aaj vo pehli baar apni behan par chilaya hai, usse koi haq nahi hai ki vo apni badi behan se asse gusse se baat kare, vo dhire-dhire uske pass gaya aur uske samne jakar khada ho gaya, Arushi abhi bhi bethi hui thi toh Tushar ne usko uski kamar se pakad utha ke khada kar diya, aur pehle uske behnte aansoo ko apne hatho se saaf kiya aur phir kass ke usse apne gale se laga liya...)


Tushar- Sorry.. Sorry didi.. main bahut jada bol gaya apko.. mujhe maaf kardo please...

Arushi- (muskurati hui) nahi tu Sorry nabol.. aur Tushar yeh aansoo issliye nahi aye ki tune mujhpe gussa kiya balki issliye aye kyuki tujhe meri kitni fikar hai.. jiss haq se tune aaj mujhe danta hai na mere toh aansoo niklenge hi.. Pagla kahi ka tune toh mujhe rula hi diya.. (kass ke gale lagati hui) aur Sorry, main galat thi Tushar tune sahi kiya unke sath...

Harleen- haan Tushar Sorry.. main bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki apne kuch jada hi badi saza dedi unhe, lakin agar dusri taraf se dekha jaye toh hamare yaha ka kanoon bigdhra hua hai, hum unse apni safety ki guarantee toh le hi nahi sakte...

Harshika- bilkul thik kaha apne.. main apki har baat se sehmat hu Tushar.. agar aap waha waqt par akar hume usne sahi bachate toh hamare sath kuch bhi galat ho sakta tha.. aaj hamare sath hota kal kisi aur ke sath hota.. unka hosla badhta jata.. aur issi paap ke kaam mein aur ladke bhi unke sath judte jate.. aur hum.. aur hum toh bas bethi abhi roo hi rahi hoti na.. agar ek ache insaan ko bachane ke liye 100 bure log bhi marne padh jaye toh vo galat nahi hai.. hamare sath bura hota isse acha toh unn bure ke sath hi bura hua...


|Back To Hospital|


(Siya abhi Savana ki gaud mein bethi, uski aur face kiya usse Chipak ke dhire-dhire subak rahi thi.. Savana aur Safal bhi bas issi ek umeed mein the ki shayad Doctor Siya ke Mummy-Papa ko bach le.. dono ka dhayan uss room ki taraf yaha Siya ke Mummy-Papa ka ilaaj chal raha tha...)


( aur 2 ghante bett jane ke baad Room ka Door khulta hai aur ek Doctor bahar aata hai.. Safal ne usse dekha toh uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki vo Doctor se jakar baat kare ki akhir kya hua.. Safal utha nahi toh akhir Doctor ne hi Safal ko ishare se apni aur bulaya toh Safal ghabhrata hua utth kar Doctor ke pass chala gaya...)


Safal- Ji Doctor kya hua..?

Doctor- apka naam..?

Safal- Safal...

Doctor- vo jo Ladka-Ladki ander hai vo apke kya lagte the..?

Safal- (ghabhrahat se) lagte the matab..? kya hua hai vo thik toh hai na....

Doctor- meri baat suno abhi karib 3 ghante pehle kuch 3,4 admi Hospital mein ghuss aye aur jabardasti unn Ladka-Ladki ka room number puchne lage.. hamare guards ne unhe rokne ki koshish ki toh unhone dono guards ko Goli maar di.. Goli lagte hi Hospital mein bagh-dhor macch gayi.. jo Rooms mein the unhone door band kar liye aur jo bahar the vo Hospital se chilate hue bahar ko bhagne lage.. kuch der baad ek room se 2 baar Goli chalne ki awaj ayi.. kuch der aur bett jane ke baad wapis 3 Goli chalne ki awaj ayi, aur thori hi der mein (Savana ki aur ishara kar) vo Ladki hamare pass ayi aur apna ID card dikha ke hume boli ke vo Agent hai aur usne tenno Admiyo ko maar diya hai.. Ladka-Ladki ko Goli lagi hai unhe kuch ho na jaye jaldi chalo...

Safal- toh kya vo dono ab thik hai..?

Doctor- (Safal ke kandhe par hath rakhta hua) dekho Mr. Safal, humne apni koshish puri ki bachne ki, hamare pass waqt bhi kaffi tha lakin...

Safal- (apne kandhe se Doctor ka hath jhatakta hua, ghabhrahat se) lakin kya Doctor.. aap mujhe saaf-saaf bataenge please..?

Doctor- baat darasal yeh hai ki Ladki ko ek mamuli Goli lagi thi, jisse aap keh sakte ho ki sirf behosh karne wali Goli.. lakin Ladke ko ek asse jehar ki Goli lagi hai jiska koi illaj nahi hai...

Safal- (aankho mein aansoo bharta hua) toh matlab...

Doctor- haan..! hamne Ladki ko bacha liya hai, lakin Ladke ko nahi bacha paye.. uska bach pana impossible tha.. Sorry...


(itna bol Doctor waha se chala gaya.. aur Safal ki himmat ne dam tood diya aur vo wahi ghutno par beth gaya.. dur bethi Savana ne jab Safal ko asse dekha toh kass ke Siya ko apne se laga liya.. vo dhire-dhire yeh soch kar rone lagi ki ab vo kya jawab degi Siya ko...)


Siya- (apne uper pad rahe Savana ke aansoo ko feel kar, sar utha kar) kya hua didi.. aap roo rahi ho...

Savana- nahi beta.. (Safal ki aur ishara kar) vo dekho chalo bhaiya ke pass chale...


(Savana Siya ko gaud mein utha ke Safal ke pass le jaa rahi hoti hai ki Samne Room se 2 nurses stretcher par kisi body ko lekar bahar chali gayi.. shayad yeh Siya ke Papa ki body thi.. unka face dhakha hua tha toh Siya dekh nahi payi ki kon hai vo.. ab masoom ladki toh samaj bhi nahi payi thi yeh body uske Mumma ya Papa ki ho sakti hai.. lakin Savana ne jab yeh dekha tho uska dil kampna shuru kar diya...)


Savana- (Safal ke pass pahunchti hui) Safal...

Safal- (sar uper utha, apni beghi aankho se Savana ko dekhta hua) haan...

Savana- (dard bhari awaj mein) kya kaha Doctor ne...

Safal- (Siya ko dekh) beta chalo apko apki Mumma se milata hu...


Siya- (bahut khush hokar) Mumma thik ho gaye...

Safal- (aansoo ko rok muskurata hua) haan bilkul thik ho gayi apki Mumma.. (uthta hua) chalo...



(Siya Safal ki ek ungli pakadti hai aur dono Room ke ander jane lagte hai.. abhi kuch der pehle hi uske Papa ki body ko uske samne se lejaya gaya tha.. Savana bhi samaj gayi thi ki Siya ki Mumma jinda hai lakin uske Papa nahi rahe.. vo wapis ek bench par beth kar rone lagi uska sar dard karne laga tha, ek phool si bachi yeh sadma kaise seh payegi yeh soch kar, jab vo sunegi ki uske Papa ab iss dunia mein nahi rahe...)



(Safal aur Siya room mein pahunche toh ek bed par pith tikaye ek ladki bethi thi jo bas roye ja rahi thi.. yeh thi Siya ki Mummy.. 27 saal ki umer, khubsurat chehra, kale baar jo abhi bikhre hue the, aankhon mein jhar-jhar behta pani, gulabi honth jo abhi sukh chuke the.. inka naam tha Priyal.. Priyal ne jaise hi Siya ko dekha vo aur rone lagi.. uske pass ek Nurse khadi thi ko usse shant karwa rahi thi. lakin yeh dukh toh usse sari umer jhelna tha...)


(Siya bhi bhagh kar gayi aur bed par chalang laga kar apni Mumma se lipat gayi...)



Siya- (khush hokar) Mumma aap thik ho gayi...

Priyal- (muskurane ki koshish kar, haan mein sar hilati hui)

Siya- (apni Mumma ke tapakte aansoo dekh) kya hua Mumma aap roo kyu rahi ho.. (durse khali bed ho dekh) Papa kaha hai.. (jhute gusse se) unhone danta apko.. batao kaha hai main abhi unki khabar leti hu...


(bechari Priyal kya bataye ki ab usse dante-dhamkane wala, usse roti hui ko chup karane wala, uske sath cheed-chaad karne wala, har musibat mein uska sath dene wala ab iss dunia ko chhod kar ja chuka hai.. Priyal se saha nahi ja raha tha.. usne apni beti ko pakad ke apne sine se laga liya aur apni aane wali jindgi ke bare mein soch kar rone lagi.. iss anjaan dunia mein uska aur koi hai bhi nahi.. vo kaha jayegi, uski beti ko kuch log pana chahte hai kaise vo apni beti ko unse bacha payegi, kya vo akeli unse ladh payegi ya yeh jindgi bas kuch bas ki hone wali hai...)



《1755 -words》
Hmmmm
Good update
Mostly Siya and her mom 's meeting....very good.....so priya ko bacha hee liya gaya....

Hero ka a Arushi or diya hua counter reply kaafi achcha tha.....ise ham aise dekh sakte hai ki....
Ak hee situation ke har ak ke liye....kaaran or parinam alag ho sakte hai.....OR nazariye bhi......

Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai
Anyways
Good update
Thanks
 
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