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[kamdev99008]

Dosto. Hinglish m likhne kee kosis kiya hai batana koi correction ho to.

brijesh ji..............badhiya likh rahe ho..........keep it up

 

[Rocky2602]

Nice

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Nice update

 

[tpk]

waiting for next update

 

[Sona]

Update 2

uday bhaag 2
natu ne raama se poochha kee kitane saal ho gae is ghatana ko ?
raama ne kaha kee pata nahin lekin yah ghatana harikaaka ke janm se pahale kee hai . ho gae honge 70 - 75 saal pata nahin ,yah sach hai bhee kee nahin lekin ye sach jaroor hai kee yah jameen banjar hai . vaise kaaka ne kaha ke ab toobavel lagaane ke baad bhee is saal kuchh nahin paida hua to phir vo apanee koshishe chhod denge . der raat tak natu aur raama baat karate rahe , raat ko chalatee thandee havao se natu neend ke aagosh mein chala gaya jo shaayad aisee achchhee neend use pichhale 8 saal se nahin aayee thee. subah jab utha to vo taarotaaja ho chooka tha , nahaate nahaate usane ugate hue soory ko anjali dee tab usakee aankhon mein aansoo aa gae use yaad aaya bita hua bhayankar bhootakaal phir yaad
aaya kee usane vaada kiya hai kee vo is baare mein kiseese baat nahin karega khud se bhee nahin . maname uthe hue iss toophaan ko dabaakar usane paanee mein dubakee lagaee aur baahar aaya tab usakee aankhon mein aaya hua khoon gaayab tha aur phir se vah laachaar aur gareeb natu ban gaya tha . nahaakar nikala tab tak subah ka naashta aa chooka tha .rotee , pyaaj aur talee huee mirch khaakar jaise usake shareer mein das haathee ke barabar taakat aa gaee thee.jaise hee vah naashta karake utha use harikaaka aate hue dikhe unhonne aate hee kaha bhaee natu tum mere lie bhaagyashaalee
nikale abhee kal hee tumane yahaan paanv rakhe aur baraso se mera
ek jameen ka kes chal raha vah poora ho gaya aur sundar ne case wapas bhee liya aur maafee bhee maangee . itana kahakar vo khet
mein ghoomane chale gae aur ek kone mein khade ho gae aur aavaaj
dekar raama aur natu ko bula liya aur unhonne ek kone mein ugee huee ghaas dikhaee aur kaha sachamuch tum mere lie bhaagyashaalee saabit hue ho jis jameen mein pichhale 80 saal mein kuchh nahin paida hua vahaan aaj kuchh ooga hai .

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Dosto. Hinglish m likhne kee kosis kiya hai batana koi correction ho to.

Fantastic update

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Yaar story achchi hai par update let hai thodi jaldi Dene ki koshish kar

 

[Asif khan]

Bahi mere start mai ye Hal h to agy Kia ho ga

 

[Radhe]

Bhai story complete hone ke chance hai ya nhi
Kyo ki 9 din me sirf 2 update

 

[Brijesh]

Bhai kal update ayega , idhar kuch jada busy hai life . Kal ek chota update deta hu

 

[Brijesh]

UPDATE 3
Uday 3

harikaka ne natu se poochha kya use traiktar chalaana aata hai to natu ne kaha aata hai . use baakaayada trening milee thee jel mein .poora din traiktar se khet jotane ke baad jab raat ko sab so rahe the
to natu ne raama se harikaaka ke parivaar ke baare mein poochha . raama
ne kaha harikaaka ek achchhe vyakti hai vo kabhee sarapanch nahin bane lekin gaanv mein unakee ijjat sarapanch se kam nahin hai aur dil ke itane achchhe hai kee bananevaala har sarapanch apane aap unakee ijjat karane lagata hai . kaakee to kuchh 5 saal pahale chal basee baaki parivaar mein 2 bete aur do betiyaan hai donon bete apane parivaar ke saath amareeka rahate hai aur ek betee ahamadaabaad aur ek mumbee mein rahatee hai . abhee to gaanv mein ghar khalee rahata hai lekin jab chhuttiya hotee hai to poora ghar kilakaariyon se goonj uthata hai jitane din naatee pote rahate hai harikaaka khet ka munh bhee nahin dekhate hai . natu ne poochha unake bete amareeka mein kya karate hai raama ne kaha kee ek beta Engineer hai aur ek paagalo ka doctor vo kya kahate hai sekretist, natu ke man mein uthal pathal machane lagee . pahale to har
saal aate the lekin ab har do teen saal mein aate hai . naam kya hai unake beto ka ? natu ne poochha . raama ne kaha jo engineer hai usaka naam raajesh patel aur sekretist hai usaka naam ronak patel . ronak patel naam sunakar natu ke aakho ke saamane ek hasamukh lekin laalachee chehara aa gaya . jis vyakti ka use barabaad karane mein bada haath tha useeke pitaajee ne use sahaara diya.

natu ne baad mein koee savaal nahin kiya phir usane taare ginaate hue khudako neend ke havaale kar diya ye sochakar kee jo bhee hoga dekha jaayega.


To be continued...