Romance Uff! Ye Mohabbat ! (completed)

[Naina]

Update 33​

Sanjana aniket aur komal waha se bahar nikle to bahar nikalte hi sanjana ekdum se boli

Sanjana- aniket hum avi ko yaha dhundh rahe hai par itne samay me agar wo dharamshala me chala gaya hoga to ?

Tab aniket use samjhate huye bola

Aniket- arey maine wo receptionist ko bol rakha hai ke agar avi hamare piche se waha pahuche to wo hame call karke bata de..

Uske baad wo teeno dwarkadhish mandir aur ghat par bhi avi ko dhundh aaye par avi unko kahi nahi mila, par in sab ghatnakram me komal ekdum shant thi, aniket aur sanjana ko laga ke wo yaha ke vatavaran ko ache se mehsus kar rahi hai aur bas usi me khoyi huyi hai isiliye unhone bhi use nahi chheda

Sab taraf bhatak kar wo log sham ko dharamshala me pahuche aur aate hi unhone avi ke bare me pucha, par avi abhi tak lauta nahi tha, kal raat bhar ka safar aur din bhar ki bhagdaud me wo kafi thak gaye the, teeno ne socha ke ab avi ki raah yahi dekhenge

Unhone receptionist ko kaha ke jaise hi avi aaye unhe khabar kar de aur aniket aur komal apne room me aur sanjana apne room me chale gaye, komal ab bhi chup thi, aniket ne use apni bahe uske gale me dali aur pucha

Aniket- kya hua sweetheart itni chup chup kyu ho

Komal- ani ye sab jo bhi chal raha hai wo theek nahi hai

Aniket- kya theek nahi hai

Komal- mujhe lagta hai hame sanjana ko sab sach sach bata dena chahiye

Aniket- arey par avi ne kuch soch kar hi ye sab khel racha hai hai na

Ab komal chidh gayi

Komal- khadde me gaya tumhara khel, yaha us ladki ki jaan ja rahi hai aur tumko khel sujh raha hai.. tumhe nahi lagta ab ye sab kuch jyada ho raha hai

Aniket kuch soch raha tha, dono bed par aakar baith gaye aur komal ne aage kaha

Komal- tum logo ke khel me sanjana ki kya halat ho rahi hai tumhe najar nahi aa raha kya ?

Aniket- uske liye wo khud jimmedaar hai komal, bhul gayi kya usne avi ke sath kaisa suluk kiya tha

Komal- nahi ani mai kuch nahi bhuli hu par us baat ki itni bhi saja nahi deni hai use, aur galti kya uski akeli ki thi ? avi kahi galat nahi tha ?

Aniket kuch soch ke bola

Aniket- is sab ke piche avi ka koi na koi uddeshya hai ? uske bare me socha hai ?

Komal- ha, itni der sewahi soch rahi thi ke avi ka is sab ke piche kyahetu hai, yahi na ke sanjana ko apni galti ka ehsas ho, use pyaar ke sahi mayne samjhe

Aniket- barabar

Komal- tumhe aaj tak samajh aaya hai pyaar ka asal matlab ? ya avi ko samajha hai, agar samjha hota to wo jisse pyaar karta hai use itna nahi satata

Aniket- arey par komal ye sab bas ek game hai ye kyu bhul rahi ho tum

Komal- ha mai janti hu ke ye ek game hai par sanjana ko nahi pata na ke ye ek game hai, wo to use paglo ki tarah dhundh rahi hai, hum game khel rahe hai par isiliye hame jyada tension nahi hai, hum avi ko dhundhne ke sth sath is jagah ka maja bhi le rahe hai par sanjana ka kya ? is jagah aakar bhi uska kisi chiz me dhyan nahi hai, hum anay kar rahe hai uske sath aur jab galti dono ki hai to saja sirf sanjana ko kyu ? avi ko bhi saja milni chahiye

Aniket- ye bhi theekhai par waise dekha jaye to ye avi ke liye bhi ek tarah se saja hi hai

Komal- aur wo kaise ?

Aniket- mujhe ek baat batao, umko kab laga ke sanjana ko apni galti sanajh aa gayi hai aur pyaar ka ehsas bhi hua hai ?

Komal- wo jab hamare ghar aayi thi aur tumhare use itna kuch sunane ke baad bhi jab wo waha se nahi hili aur apne gharwalo kosab bata ke hamare sath avi kodhundhne aayi hai isse saf samajh aata hai ke usko apnigalti ka ehsas hai aur raha sawal pyaar ka to pyaar hai isiliye to use apni galti samajh aayi hai, aur aaj jis tarah se wo mere gale lagi thi na mai tab hi samajh gayi thi ke avi ke sath na hone se wo us pal ko ache se mehsus nahi kar payi hai, avi ki kami use har pal mehsus ho rahi thi

Aniket- barabar to mathura me avi ka uske sath na hona hi uski saja hai na ?

Komal- ha

Aniket- to mujhe batao ke avi ko bhi sanjana kikami khal hi rahi hogi, jaise avi ka sath na hoga sanjana ke liye saja saman hai waise hi sanjana ka avi ke sath na hona ye avi ke liye bhi to saja hi hai

Komal ko aniket ki baat sahi lag rahi thi par sanjana ke bate me bura feel ho raha tha aur fir wo kuch soch kar boli

Komal- ani, ye ek game hai aisa sanjana ko pata chala to isme bura kya hai ? waise bhiavi ka uddeshya to pura ho gaya hai

Aniket- agar uska hetu pura ho jata to wo ab tak samne aa jata kammo par wo nahi aaya matlab uske imag me aur bhi kuch hai par itna confirm hai ke sab uska hetu pura ho jayega wo khud samne aa jayega, par tumhari baat bhi sahi hai, hame sanjana ko sab bata dena chahiye

Komal- to fir chalo abhi use sab bata dete hai..

Fir dono apne room se nikle aur sanjana ke room me gaye, komal ne sanjana ko sari baat batayi, aur sab sanjana ko pata chala ke ye sab bas ek game hai uski khushi ka koi thikana nahi raha usne khushi se komal ko gale laga liya, komal bhi relax feel kar rahi thi kyuki use darr tha ke kahi sanjana in sab bato ka galat matlab na le le aur ho sakta tha ke wo gusse me waha se chali hi jaye aur sare khel ka satyanas ho jana ha par ab sanjana avi ke pyara me puri taraf dub chuki thi aur usne avi ko uske gun dosh sahit swikar kar liya tha, sara tension khatam ho gaya tha aur ab real game shuru hua tha, aniket ne sanjana ko bhi bata diya tha ke avi kahi nahi jane wala uska hetu pura hone par wo khud samne aa jayega

Aniket- ab tension mat lo sanjana aur ye sab jo ho raha hai uske bare me ek baar ache se socho, avi ne hame yaha aane par majbur kiya hai yaki iske piche koi na koi reason jarur hoga

Sanjana muskurayi aur boli

Sanjana- wo to mai safar ki shuruwat me hi samajh gayi thi

Aniket aur komal ko kuch samajh nahi aaya par sanjana ko avi ne aniket, komal aur mathura ke madhyam se bahut kuch samjha diya tha aur ab sanjana bhi tension bhul kar khel me shamil ho gayi thi

Sharir ki thakan insan sehan kar sakta hai par man hi thakan nahi, aur man par ka boj utarne ke baad insan pura relax ho jata hai aisa hi kuch in teeno ke sath hua, raat me teeno ne badhiya dinner kiya, avi bhi bhi aaya nahi tha, wo wapis apne apne rooms me gaye aur unhe kab neend aayi pata bhi nahi chala

Agli subah aniket neend se jata aur hadbada ke utha aur sidha room number 202 ki taraf bhaga, room ko lock tha, to wo sidha counter ke paas aaya par counter par koi dusra hi aadmi tha, usne avi ke bare me pucha to pata chala ke avi raat me deri se aaya aur subah jaldi hi kahi chala gaya

Aniket ne apne sar par hath maar liya aur pucha

Aniket- usne checkout kiya kya ?

Ispar us insan ne na me jawab diya,

Aniket ne wapis room me aakar komal ko jagaya, komal bhi hadbada kar uthi aur sabse pehla sawal kiya

Komal- avi mila ??

Aniket- kya ghanta mila wo, hum log yaha ghode bech ke so rahe the aur wo raat me aaya aur subah nikal bhi gaya

Komal- kya ? gaya ?? kaha gaya ???

Aniket- kya pata aaj kaha mara hai

Komal- to ab kya karna hai ?

Aniket- chinta ki baat nahi hai usne checkout nahi kiya hai, matlab aaspaas hi kahi gaya hai wo

Komal- thank god

Fir achanak komal khush hote huye boli

Komal- waise acha hua nahi to hamara honeymoon ek hi din me khatam ho jata

Aniket- acha ji to aapko bada honeymoon chahiye

Itna bol ke aniket apna chehra komal ke paas laya… aur……….



Kuch samay baad sanjana ne unka darwaja khatkhataya, aur aniket ne darwaja khola, sanjana jaldi jaldi bata rahi thi ki avi raat me aaya aur subah jaldi hi kahi nikal gaya aniket ne bhi aise jataya aise use kuch pata hi na ho

Aniket- acha….hmm…. arey baar re to ab kya kare sanjana

Sanjana- achi bata ye hai ke usne checkout nahi kiya hai abhi

Aniket- theek hai tum ready ho jao fir dekhte hai aage kya karna hai…

So pyar ko hi khel bana diya kambakht ne ..... ye pehli baar hua hai jab hero heroine ke sath pyar ka khel khele aur heroine ko bhi isme ab maza aaye
Pyar ko mazak banake ya mere revos ki bhasha mein aisi ki taisi karke rakh di hai dono ne hi.... aur isme saamil huye aniket aur komal bhi....
wah kya pyar ka game khela hai.... in logo ke is adbhut karname to taaliyaan bajti rehni chahiye ...

Khair...


Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

galti se mistake

Total chaar romantic stories pe nischal nd meera lead characters hai ab bas hella ko entry karwa to maja hi kuch aur hai..

nd ju adirshi

 

[Naina]

Update 34​

Avi sabse pehle ready hokar bahar nikla to reception par kal wala aadmi hi tha uske aniket ko dekhte hi namaste kiya aur bola

“hamka maaf kar do babu u hum raat ma duty par rehne wale babu ko batana bhule rahe ke aap avinas babu ko dhundh rahe, kaunu mamla hai u ka babu ?”

Aniket bhi unke paas jake unke style me bola

Aniket- bahut hi bada mamla hai, dil ka mamla, avinas babu thoda ruthe rahe, hamre sath jo u akeli ladki hai na u uski heroine hai aur hum iha aake avinas babu ko dhundh rahe

Receptionist ko bhi aniket ka bolna pasand aaya aur wo bola

“fir kauno baat nahi, fir to aap bahut hi sahi jagah aaye ho, e mathura hai aur iha ke malik hamre sawle sarkar hai, e dil ka head office hai babu, sari duniya ka dil ka karobar yahi se chalta hai, aap tanik ghabrao nahi hamre thakurji sabki naiyaa paar lagawat hai”

Aniket ko bhi receptionoist ki baat jach gayi aur uski nautanki shuru ho gayi, kal din bhar wo sab logo ki brajbhasha sun raha tha aur wo itni meethi thi ke aniket se jhat se usko pakad liya aur fir us receptionist se bola

Aniket- aye haye kaka ka mithi baat bole rahe, maja awat hai

“bahut badhiya babuji to aap par bhi hamri brajbhasha sawar huyi rahi, sach hai, nandlal sabhi ko apne rang me rang lewat hai, u chhodo jab hum u raat wale manager se puchat rahe aur avinas babu ke bare me chan bin kare rahe to u bataya ke avinas babu iha se vrindavan gaye hai, u bas adde ka pata puche rahe”

Aniket ab ekdum khush ho gaya

Aniket- arey mere CID chacha, ji karta hai chum lu aapko

Fir us budhau ne usko apne paas aane ka ishara kiya aur dhimi awaj me aniket ko bola

“hamko hame chumoge babu, u vyastha to aap saath ma hi laye rahe, tohar mehraru u dekho aaye rahi “

Itne me komal aur sanjana waha tayar hoke pahuche aur aniket ne ghoshna kar di

Aniket- chalo vrindavan

Dono pehgle choda chauki fir aniket ne unko puri baat batayi, sanjana ne bhi us receptionist ko hath jod ke dhanyawaad kaha

“uha bake bihari aur krishna balram mandir me dil se rajkarna beti, sawle sarkar thakur naiya paar laga denge”

Sanjana bhi unki baat sunkar muskurayi aur teeno vrindavan ki taraf nikle, gadi me aniket ki badbad shuru thi par uski taraf sanjana ka dhyan nahi tha, uski udasi uske chehre par saaf dikh rahi thi, komal boli

Komal- lo, yaha kal isko samjha samjha kar hamara gala sukh gaya aur madam aaj bhi chehre par bara baja ke baithi hai

Sanjana jabardasti haste huye boli

Sanjana- waisi baat nahi hai par avi kab milega

Aur ye bolte bolte sanjana ki aankh bhar aayi aur komal sanjana ko samjhate huye boli

Komal- oye heroine, abhi bas teen din huye hai use dhundhte huye aur abhi se haar maan li ? tumko pata nahi hai avi kya chiz hai, jaldi se hath me aane ke liye wo koi baccha nahi hai aur jara ye bhi to socho ke tumhe tumhara pyaar mile iske liye kite log lage huye hai, wo yash baitha hai computer ke samne ke jaise hi avikuch search kare hame jhat se bata de tumhari maa ne bhi to jaldi se permission de di, itna easy tha kya ye sab, aur wo dharamshala ka receptionist bhi kitni madad kar raha hai aur hum to sath hai hi isiliye jara muskurao kya pata tumhari muskan dekh ke avi jaldi mil jaye

Aniket- wahi to, yaha gadi chala chala ke mere pichwade par chale aa gaye hai par maine uff tak nahi kari hai, aur ye ro rahi, huh

Aniket ki baat sunkar sanjana hasne lagi

Komal- shabash, aise hi haste rehne ka kyuki ek raaz ki baat batau, pata nahi in ladko ko hum ladkiyo ko rulane me kya hi sukh milta hai isiliye haste raho to ye line par rehe hai

Itna bolke komal ne aniket ko ek jordar chimta kata

Aniket- oye oye kammo dheere na, aur maine kab rulaya tumko ?

Komal- kyu bhul gaye kya, shadi ke pehle kitna rulaya tha

Aniket- aur tum logo ne mere ko kidnap kiya, meri hawa tight ki uska kya ? par wo bhi meri hi galti thi waise to, khair sorry rani sarkar

Itna bolke aniket ne ek hath se apne kaan pakda

Komal- jao maaf kiya tum bhi kya yaad karoge kis dildar se pala pada hai

Unki ye nok jhok sanjana dekh rahi thi aur man hi man soch rahi thi ke kya yyahi pyaar hai, aniket ne shadi ke pehle komal ko itna tadpaya rulaya par komal ne kisi baat ko man par nahi lagaya ya uska gussa nahi mana kyuki usse gusse se jyada relation important tha aur aniket ne bhi khule dil se mafi mang li, sach kaha jaye to avi ne use bas pyaar karna sikhaya tha use nibhana kaise hai ye aniket aur komal ne sikhaya

Aniket ko lag raha tha ke sidha mandir me jana chahiye, vrindavan me entry par hi ek bada gate unka swagat kar raha tha par gaon me ghuste hi aniket chakra gaya, waha ghar kam aur mandir hi jyada the fir usereceptionist ka bataya mandir yaad aaya aur waha logo se puchne par pata chala ke waha car lejate nahi aayegi usne car park ki

Aur teeno niche utar kar mandir ki taraf paidal jane lage, aniket aur sanjana avi ko dhundhte huye ja rahe the wahi komal apne hi khayalo me khoyi huyi thi, waha pahuch kar uska man mano krishnamay ho gaya tha

Wo teeno shri krishna balram mandir me pahuche to ek bade se gate ne unka swagat kiya.. us shubhra mandir me dhup deep ke sath sath doodh dahi aur mithai ki khushbu bhi ghum rahi thi, unlogo ne darshan kiye aur bahar aakar baithe, sanjana aur aniket ne pura mandir chan mara par unhe avi kahi nahi dikha

Waha se nikal kar fir w bake bihari mandir me pahuche, waha ki vyastha ekdum alag thi, jaise maharashta ke bade mandiro me darshan ke liye line lagti hai aisa waha nahi tha, mandir kamukhya garbhgrih yahi teen bade darwaje the aur uske samne bada sa hall jaha sare bhavik bhakt gardi karke khade the, aur gate par parda laga hua tha, aniket ne apne baju wale ek aadmi se pucha ke darshan kab honge to usne bataya ke waha ke logo ki aisi manyata hai ke agar kisi ne jyada der tak bhagwan ka wo rup dekha to wo uspar ohit ho jata hai aur bhagwan ko najar lagti hai isiliye balgopal ke pure shringar ke baad hi parda hatta hai wo bhi kuch hi samay ke liye

Aniket ko uski baat sunke hasi aayi ke bhagwan kok kaise najar lag sakti hai, sab log aturta se parda hatne ki raah dekhne lage aur fir ghanta naad shuru hua aur pujari ne parda hataya aur fir jab sabki drishti us sola shringar kare radha aur krishna par padi to sab mantramugdh hokar unhe dekhne laga ayr pure hall me unka jaikar gunjne laga

Sanjana hath jod kar bhagwan se avi ke jaldi milne ki prarthana kar rahi thi pune hall me radha krishna ka jaikara gunj raha tha aur itne me sanjana ke kano me ek awaj aayi

“I Love You Sanju”

Sanjana jhatke ke sath piche ghumi to uske piche avi haste huye usko dekh raha tha, usne jaldi se ek haar sanjana ke gale me daal diya aur ye sab kya ho raha hai ye sanjana samajh pati isse pehle hi avi gardi me gayab ho gaya aur wo bas use awaj deti rahi par uska awaj logo ke awaj me kahi mano dab gaya tha, sanjana jaldi se bahar aayi par tab tak avi wapis kahi chala gaya tha…..

So finally pyar ka khel aur ye sabhi nautanki karne baad avi sanjana ke saamne aa hi gaya...
lekin saamne aane ke baad bhi luka chupi wala khel ,khel raha hai.... sanjana bhi dhundhne mein lag gayi....
khair mujhe kya.... jo marzi kare ye dono

Btw ek bhi thrill ya murder mystery scene add nahi hua is khoj bin ke dauran

Well....
jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[kingkhankar]

Mohabbat ko ek khel mein badal diya hey....
Avi mil jaye to Sanjana should punish properly this naughty boy!

 

[Jaguaar]

Update 33​

Sanjana aniket aur komal waha se bahar nikle to bahar nikalte hi sanjana ekdum se boli

Sanjana- aniket hum avi ko yaha dhundh rahe hai par itne samay me agar wo dharamshala me chala gaya hoga to ?

Tab aniket use samjhate huye bola

Aniket- arey maine wo receptionist ko bol rakha hai ke agar avi hamare piche se waha pahuche to wo hame call karke bata de..

Uske baad wo teeno dwarkadhish mandir aur ghat par bhi avi ko dhundh aaye par avi unko kahi nahi mila, par in sab ghatnakram me komal ekdum shant thi, aniket aur sanjana ko laga ke wo yaha ke vatavaran ko ache se mehsus kar rahi hai aur bas usi me khoyi huyi hai isiliye unhone bhi use nahi chheda

Sab taraf bhatak kar wo log sham ko dharamshala me pahuche aur aate hi unhone avi ke bare me pucha, par avi abhi tak lauta nahi tha, kal raat bhar ka safar aur din bhar ki bhagdaud me wo kafi thak gaye the, teeno ne socha ke ab avi ki raah yahi dekhenge

Unhone receptionist ko kaha ke jaise hi avi aaye unhe khabar kar de aur aniket aur komal apne room me aur sanjana apne room me chale gaye, komal ab bhi chup thi, aniket ne use apni bahe uske gale me dali aur pucha

Aniket- kya hua sweetheart itni chup chup kyu ho

Komal- ani ye sab jo bhi chal raha hai wo theek nahi hai

Aniket- kya theek nahi hai

Komal- mujhe lagta hai hame sanjana ko sab sach sach bata dena chahiye

Aniket- arey par avi ne kuch soch kar hi ye sab khel racha hai hai na

Ab komal chidh gayi

Komal- khadde me gaya tumhara khel, yaha us ladki ki jaan ja rahi hai aur tumko khel sujh raha hai.. tumhe nahi lagta ab ye sab kuch jyada ho raha hai

Aniket kuch soch raha tha, dono bed par aakar baith gaye aur komal ne aage kaha

Komal- tum logo ke khel me sanjana ki kya halat ho rahi hai tumhe najar nahi aa raha kya ?

Aniket- uske liye wo khud jimmedaar hai komal, bhul gayi kya usne avi ke sath kaisa suluk kiya tha

Komal- nahi ani mai kuch nahi bhuli hu par us baat ki itni bhi saja nahi deni hai use, aur galti kya uski akeli ki thi ? avi kahi galat nahi tha ?

Aniket kuch soch ke bola

Aniket- is sab ke piche avi ka koi na koi uddeshya hai ? uske bare me socha hai ?

Komal- ha, itni der sewahi soch rahi thi ke avi ka is sab ke piche kyahetu hai, yahi na ke sanjana ko apni galti ka ehsas ho, use pyaar ke sahi mayne samjhe

Aniket- barabar

Komal- tumhe aaj tak samajh aaya hai pyaar ka asal matlab ? ya avi ko samajha hai, agar samjha hota to wo jisse pyaar karta hai use itna nahi satata

Aniket- arey par komal ye sab bas ek game hai ye kyu bhul rahi ho tum

Komal- ha mai janti hu ke ye ek game hai par sanjana ko nahi pata na ke ye ek game hai, wo to use paglo ki tarah dhundh rahi hai, hum game khel rahe hai par isiliye hame jyada tension nahi hai, hum avi ko dhundhne ke sth sath is jagah ka maja bhi le rahe hai par sanjana ka kya ? is jagah aakar bhi uska kisi chiz me dhyan nahi hai, hum anay kar rahe hai uske sath aur jab galti dono ki hai to saja sirf sanjana ko kyu ? avi ko bhi saja milni chahiye

Aniket- ye bhi theekhai par waise dekha jaye to ye avi ke liye bhi ek tarah se saja hi hai

Komal- aur wo kaise ?

Aniket- mujhe ek baat batao, umko kab laga ke sanjana ko apni galti sanajh aa gayi hai aur pyaar ka ehsas bhi hua hai ?

Komal- wo jab hamare ghar aayi thi aur tumhare use itna kuch sunane ke baad bhi jab wo waha se nahi hili aur apne gharwalo kosab bata ke hamare sath avi kodhundhne aayi hai isse saf samajh aata hai ke usko apnigalti ka ehsas hai aur raha sawal pyaar ka to pyaar hai isiliye to use apni galti samajh aayi hai, aur aaj jis tarah se wo mere gale lagi thi na mai tab hi samajh gayi thi ke avi ke sath na hone se wo us pal ko ache se mehsus nahi kar payi hai, avi ki kami use har pal mehsus ho rahi thi

Aniket- barabar to mathura me avi ka uske sath na hona hi uski saja hai na ?

Komal- ha

Aniket- to mujhe batao ke avi ko bhi sanjana kikami khal hi rahi hogi, jaise avi ka sath na hoga sanjana ke liye saja saman hai waise hi sanjana ka avi ke sath na hona ye avi ke liye bhi to saja hi hai

Komal ko aniket ki baat sahi lag rahi thi par sanjana ke bate me bura feel ho raha tha aur fir wo kuch soch kar boli

Komal- ani, ye ek game hai aisa sanjana ko pata chala to isme bura kya hai ? waise bhiavi ka uddeshya to pura ho gaya hai

Aniket- agar uska hetu pura ho jata to wo ab tak samne aa jata kammo par wo nahi aaya matlab uske imag me aur bhi kuch hai par itna confirm hai ke sab uska hetu pura ho jayega wo khud samne aa jayega, par tumhari baat bhi sahi hai, hame sanjana ko sab bata dena chahiye

Komal- to fir chalo abhi use sab bata dete hai..

Fir dono apne room se nikle aur sanjana ke room me gaye, komal ne sanjana ko sari baat batayi, aur sab sanjana ko pata chala ke ye sab bas ek game hai uski khushi ka koi thikana nahi raha usne khushi se komal ko gale laga liya, komal bhi relax feel kar rahi thi kyuki use darr tha ke kahi sanjana in sab bato ka galat matlab na le le aur ho sakta tha ke wo gusse me waha se chali hi jaye aur sare khel ka satyanas ho jana ha par ab sanjana avi ke pyara me puri taraf dub chuki thi aur usne avi ko uske gun dosh sahit swikar kar liya tha, sara tension khatam ho gaya tha aur ab real game shuru hua tha, aniket ne sanjana ko bhi bata diya tha ke avi kahi nahi jane wala uska hetu pura hone par wo khud samne aa jayega

Aniket- ab tension mat lo sanjana aur ye sab jo ho raha hai uske bare me ek baar ache se socho, avi ne hame yaha aane par majbur kiya hai yaki iske piche koi na koi reason jarur hoga

Sanjana muskurayi aur boli

Sanjana- wo to mai safar ki shuruwat me hi samajh gayi thi

Aniket aur komal ko kuch samajh nahi aaya par sanjana ko avi ne aniket, komal aur mathura ke madhyam se bahut kuch samjha diya tha aur ab sanjana bhi tension bhul kar khel me shamil ho gayi thi

Sharir ki thakan insan sehan kar sakta hai par man hi thakan nahi, aur man par ka boj utarne ke baad insan pura relax ho jata hai aisa hi kuch in teeno ke sath hua, raat me teeno ne badhiya dinner kiya, avi bhi bhi aaya nahi tha, wo wapis apne apne rooms me gaye aur unhe kab neend aayi pata bhi nahi chala

Agli subah aniket neend se jata aur hadbada ke utha aur sidha room number 202 ki taraf bhaga, room ko lock tha, to wo sidha counter ke paas aaya par counter par koi dusra hi aadmi tha, usne avi ke bare me pucha to pata chala ke avi raat me deri se aaya aur subah jaldi hi kahi chala gaya

Aniket ne apne sar par hath maar liya aur pucha

Aniket- usne checkout kiya kya ?

Ispar us insan ne na me jawab diya,

Aniket ne wapis room me aakar komal ko jagaya, komal bhi hadbada kar uthi aur sabse pehla sawal kiya

Komal- avi mila ??

Aniket- kya ghanta mila wo, hum log yaha ghode bech ke so rahe the aur wo raat me aaya aur subah nikal bhi gaya

Komal- kya ? gaya ?? kaha gaya ???

Aniket- kya pata aaj kaha mara hai

Komal- to ab kya karna hai ?

Aniket- chinta ki baat nahi hai usne checkout nahi kiya hai, matlab aaspaas hi kahi gaya hai wo

Komal- thank god

Fir achanak komal khush hote huye boli

Komal- waise acha hua nahi to hamara honeymoon ek hi din me khatam ho jata

Aniket- acha ji to aapko bada honeymoon chahiye

Itna bol ke aniket apna chehra komal ke paas laya… aur……….



Kuch samay baad sanjana ne unka darwaja khatkhataya, aur aniket ne darwaja khola, sanjana jaldi jaldi bata rahi thi ki avi raat me aaya aur subah jaldi hi kahi nikal gaya aniket ne bhi aise jataya aise use kuch pata hi na ho

Aniket- acha….hmm…. arey baar re to ab kya kare sanjana

Sanjana- achi bata ye hai ke usne checkout nahi kiya hai abhi

Aniket- theek hai tum ready ho jao fir dekhte hai aage kya karna hai…

Superbbb Updateee

Aakhir kyaa reason hosakta hai Avi ka inko Mathura bulane ka. Aakhir woh kyaa chahta hai.

 

[Jaguaar]

Update 34​

Avi sabse pehle ready hokar bahar nikla to reception par kal wala aadmi hi tha uske aniket ko dekhte hi namaste kiya aur bola

“hamka maaf kar do babu u hum raat ma duty par rehne wale babu ko batana bhule rahe ke aap avinas babu ko dhundh rahe, kaunu mamla hai u ka babu ?”

Aniket bhi unke paas jake unke style me bola

Aniket- bahut hi bada mamla hai, dil ka mamla, avinas babu thoda ruthe rahe, hamre sath jo u akeli ladki hai na u uski heroine hai aur hum iha aake avinas babu ko dhundh rahe

Receptionist ko bhi aniket ka bolna pasand aaya aur wo bola

“fir kauno baat nahi, fir to aap bahut hi sahi jagah aaye ho, e mathura hai aur iha ke malik hamre sawle sarkar hai, e dil ka head office hai babu, sari duniya ka dil ka karobar yahi se chalta hai, aap tanik ghabrao nahi hamre thakurji sabki naiyaa paar lagawat hai”

Aniket ko bhi receptionoist ki baat jach gayi aur uski nautanki shuru ho gayi, kal din bhar wo sab logo ki brajbhasha sun raha tha aur wo itni meethi thi ke aniket se jhat se usko pakad liya aur fir us receptionist se bola

Aniket- aye haye kaka ka mithi baat bole rahe, maja awat hai

“bahut badhiya babuji to aap par bhi hamri brajbhasha sawar huyi rahi, sach hai, nandlal sabhi ko apne rang me rang lewat hai, u chhodo jab hum u raat wale manager se puchat rahe aur avinas babu ke bare me chan bin kare rahe to u bataya ke avinas babu iha se vrindavan gaye hai, u bas adde ka pata puche rahe”

Aniket ab ekdum khush ho gaya

Aniket- arey mere CID chacha, ji karta hai chum lu aapko

Fir us budhau ne usko apne paas aane ka ishara kiya aur dhimi awaj me aniket ko bola

“hamko hame chumoge babu, u vyastha to aap saath ma hi laye rahe, tohar mehraru u dekho aaye rahi “

Itne me komal aur sanjana waha tayar hoke pahuche aur aniket ne ghoshna kar di

Aniket- chalo vrindavan

Dono pehgle choda chauki fir aniket ne unko puri baat batayi, sanjana ne bhi us receptionist ko hath jod ke dhanyawaad kaha

“uha bake bihari aur krishna balram mandir me dil se rajkarna beti, sawle sarkar thakur naiya paar laga denge”

Sanjana bhi unki baat sunkar muskurayi aur teeno vrindavan ki taraf nikle, gadi me aniket ki badbad shuru thi par uski taraf sanjana ka dhyan nahi tha, uski udasi uske chehre par saaf dikh rahi thi, komal boli

Komal- lo, yaha kal isko samjha samjha kar hamara gala sukh gaya aur madam aaj bhi chehre par bara baja ke baithi hai

Sanjana jabardasti haste huye boli

Sanjana- waisi baat nahi hai par avi kab milega

Aur ye bolte bolte sanjana ki aankh bhar aayi aur komal sanjana ko samjhate huye boli

Komal- oye heroine, abhi bas teen din huye hai use dhundhte huye aur abhi se haar maan li ? tumko pata nahi hai avi kya chiz hai, jaldi se hath me aane ke liye wo koi baccha nahi hai aur jara ye bhi to socho ke tumhe tumhara pyaar mile iske liye kite log lage huye hai, wo yash baitha hai computer ke samne ke jaise hi avikuch search kare hame jhat se bata de tumhari maa ne bhi to jaldi se permission de di, itna easy tha kya ye sab, aur wo dharamshala ka receptionist bhi kitni madad kar raha hai aur hum to sath hai hi isiliye jara muskurao kya pata tumhari muskan dekh ke avi jaldi mil jaye

Aniket- wahi to, yaha gadi chala chala ke mere pichwade par chale aa gaye hai par maine uff tak nahi kari hai, aur ye ro rahi, huh

Aniket ki baat sunkar sanjana hasne lagi

Komal- shabash, aise hi haste rehne ka kyuki ek raaz ki baat batau, pata nahi in ladko ko hum ladkiyo ko rulane me kya hi sukh milta hai isiliye haste raho to ye line par rehe hai

Itna bolke komal ne aniket ko ek jordar chimta kata

Aniket- oye oye kammo dheere na, aur maine kab rulaya tumko ?

Komal- kyu bhul gaye kya, shadi ke pehle kitna rulaya tha

Aniket- aur tum logo ne mere ko kidnap kiya, meri hawa tight ki uska kya ? par wo bhi meri hi galti thi waise to, khair sorry rani sarkar

Itna bolke aniket ne ek hath se apne kaan pakda

Komal- jao maaf kiya tum bhi kya yaad karoge kis dildar se pala pada hai

Unki ye nok jhok sanjana dekh rahi thi aur man hi man soch rahi thi ke kya yyahi pyaar hai, aniket ne shadi ke pehle komal ko itna tadpaya rulaya par komal ne kisi baat ko man par nahi lagaya ya uska gussa nahi mana kyuki usse gusse se jyada relation important tha aur aniket ne bhi khule dil se mafi mang li, sach kaha jaye to avi ne use bas pyaar karna sikhaya tha use nibhana kaise hai ye aniket aur komal ne sikhaya

Aniket ko lag raha tha ke sidha mandir me jana chahiye, vrindavan me entry par hi ek bada gate unka swagat kar raha tha par gaon me ghuste hi aniket chakra gaya, waha ghar kam aur mandir hi jyada the fir usereceptionist ka bataya mandir yaad aaya aur waha logo se puchne par pata chala ke waha car lejate nahi aayegi usne car park ki

Aur teeno niche utar kar mandir ki taraf paidal jane lage, aniket aur sanjana avi ko dhundhte huye ja rahe the wahi komal apne hi khayalo me khoyi huyi thi, waha pahuch kar uska man mano krishnamay ho gaya tha

Wo teeno shri krishna balram mandir me pahuche to ek bade se gate ne unka swagat kiya.. us shubhra mandir me dhup deep ke sath sath doodh dahi aur mithai ki khushbu bhi ghum rahi thi, unlogo ne darshan kiye aur bahar aakar baithe, sanjana aur aniket ne pura mandir chan mara par unhe avi kahi nahi dikha

Waha se nikal kar fir w bake bihari mandir me pahuche, waha ki vyastha ekdum alag thi, jaise maharashta ke bade mandiro me darshan ke liye line lagti hai aisa waha nahi tha, mandir kamukhya garbhgrih yahi teen bade darwaje the aur uske samne bada sa hall jaha sare bhavik bhakt gardi karke khade the, aur gate par parda laga hua tha, aniket ne apne baju wale ek aadmi se pucha ke darshan kab honge to usne bataya ke waha ke logo ki aisi manyata hai ke agar kisi ne jyada der tak bhagwan ka wo rup dekha to wo uspar ohit ho jata hai aur bhagwan ko najar lagti hai isiliye balgopal ke pure shringar ke baad hi parda hatta hai wo bhi kuch hi samay ke liye

Aniket ko uski baat sunke hasi aayi ke bhagwan kok kaise najar lag sakti hai, sab log aturta se parda hatne ki raah dekhne lage aur fir ghanta naad shuru hua aur pujari ne parda hataya aur fir jab sabki drishti us sola shringar kare radha aur krishna par padi to sab mantramugdh hokar unhe dekhne laga ayr pure hall me unka jaikar gunjne laga

Sanjana hath jod kar bhagwan se avi ke jaldi milne ki prarthana kar rahi thi pune hall me radha krishna ka jaikara gunj raha tha aur itne me sanjana ke kano me ek awaj aayi

“I Love You Sanju”

Sanjana jhatke ke sath piche ghumi to uske piche avi haste huye usko dekh raha tha, usne jaldi se ek haar sanjana ke gale me daal diya aur ye sab kya ho raha hai ye sanjana samajh pati isse pehle hi avi gardi me gayab ho gaya aur wo bas use awaj deti rahi par uska awaj logo ke awaj me kahi mano dab gaya tha, sanjana jaldi se bahar aayi par tab tak avi wapis kahi chala gaya tha…..

Superbbb Updateee

Yeh Avi kyaa Vrindavan mein shaadi karne aaya hai kyaa. Shayad kisi unique style mein kuch khaash karne ka plan hai uska.

Dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai

 

[Aryan s.]

Update 33​

Sanjana aniket aur komal waha se bahar nikle to bahar nikalte hi sanjana ekdum se boli

Sanjana- aniket hum avi ko yaha dhundh rahe hai par itne samay me agar wo dharamshala me chala gaya hoga to ?

Tab aniket use samjhate huye bola

Aniket- arey maine wo receptionist ko bol rakha hai ke agar avi hamare piche se waha pahuche to wo hame call karke bata de..

Uske baad wo teeno dwarkadhish mandir aur ghat par bhi avi ko dhundh aaye par avi unko kahi nahi mila, par in sab ghatnakram me komal ekdum shant thi, aniket aur sanjana ko laga ke wo yaha ke vatavaran ko ache se mehsus kar rahi hai aur bas usi me khoyi huyi hai isiliye unhone bhi use nahi chheda

Sab taraf bhatak kar wo log sham ko dharamshala me pahuche aur aate hi unhone avi ke bare me pucha, par avi abhi tak lauta nahi tha, kal raat bhar ka safar aur din bhar ki bhagdaud me wo kafi thak gaye the, teeno ne socha ke ab avi ki raah yahi dekhenge

Unhone receptionist ko kaha ke jaise hi avi aaye unhe khabar kar de aur aniket aur komal apne room me aur sanjana apne room me chale gaye, komal ab bhi chup thi, aniket ne use apni bahe uske gale me dali aur pucha

Aniket- kya hua sweetheart itni chup chup kyu ho

Komal- ani ye sab jo bhi chal raha hai wo theek nahi hai

Aniket- kya theek nahi hai

Komal- mujhe lagta hai hame sanjana ko sab sach sach bata dena chahiye

Aniket- arey par avi ne kuch soch kar hi ye sab khel racha hai hai na

Ab komal chidh gayi

Komal- khadde me gaya tumhara khel, yaha us ladki ki jaan ja rahi hai aur tumko khel sujh raha hai.. tumhe nahi lagta ab ye sab kuch jyada ho raha hai

Aniket kuch soch raha tha, dono bed par aakar baith gaye aur komal ne aage kaha

Komal- tum logo ke khel me sanjana ki kya halat ho rahi hai tumhe najar nahi aa raha kya ?

Aniket- uske liye wo khud jimmedaar hai komal, bhul gayi kya usne avi ke sath kaisa suluk kiya tha

Komal- nahi ani mai kuch nahi bhuli hu par us baat ki itni bhi saja nahi deni hai use, aur galti kya uski akeli ki thi ? avi kahi galat nahi tha ?

Aniket kuch soch ke bola

Aniket- is sab ke piche avi ka koi na koi uddeshya hai ? uske bare me socha hai ?

Komal- ha, itni der sewahi soch rahi thi ke avi ka is sab ke piche kyahetu hai, yahi na ke sanjana ko apni galti ka ehsas ho, use pyaar ke sahi mayne samjhe

Aniket- barabar

Komal- tumhe aaj tak samajh aaya hai pyaar ka asal matlab ? ya avi ko samajha hai, agar samjha hota to wo jisse pyaar karta hai use itna nahi satata

Aniket- arey par komal ye sab bas ek game hai ye kyu bhul rahi ho tum

Komal- ha mai janti hu ke ye ek game hai par sanjana ko nahi pata na ke ye ek game hai, wo to use paglo ki tarah dhundh rahi hai, hum game khel rahe hai par isiliye hame jyada tension nahi hai, hum avi ko dhundhne ke sth sath is jagah ka maja bhi le rahe hai par sanjana ka kya ? is jagah aakar bhi uska kisi chiz me dhyan nahi hai, hum anay kar rahe hai uske sath aur jab galti dono ki hai to saja sirf sanjana ko kyu ? avi ko bhi saja milni chahiye

Aniket- ye bhi theekhai par waise dekha jaye to ye avi ke liye bhi ek tarah se saja hi hai

Komal- aur wo kaise ?

Aniket- mujhe ek baat batao, umko kab laga ke sanjana ko apni galti sanajh aa gayi hai aur pyaar ka ehsas bhi hua hai ?

Komal- wo jab hamare ghar aayi thi aur tumhare use itna kuch sunane ke baad bhi jab wo waha se nahi hili aur apne gharwalo kosab bata ke hamare sath avi kodhundhne aayi hai isse saf samajh aata hai ke usko apnigalti ka ehsas hai aur raha sawal pyaar ka to pyaar hai isiliye to use apni galti samajh aayi hai, aur aaj jis tarah se wo mere gale lagi thi na mai tab hi samajh gayi thi ke avi ke sath na hone se wo us pal ko ache se mehsus nahi kar payi hai, avi ki kami use har pal mehsus ho rahi thi

Aniket- barabar to mathura me avi ka uske sath na hona hi uski saja hai na ?

Komal- ha

Aniket- to mujhe batao ke avi ko bhi sanjana kikami khal hi rahi hogi, jaise avi ka sath na hoga sanjana ke liye saja saman hai waise hi sanjana ka avi ke sath na hona ye avi ke liye bhi to saja hi hai

Komal ko aniket ki baat sahi lag rahi thi par sanjana ke bate me bura feel ho raha tha aur fir wo kuch soch kar boli

Komal- ani, ye ek game hai aisa sanjana ko pata chala to isme bura kya hai ? waise bhiavi ka uddeshya to pura ho gaya hai

Aniket- agar uska hetu pura ho jata to wo ab tak samne aa jata kammo par wo nahi aaya matlab uske imag me aur bhi kuch hai par itna confirm hai ke sab uska hetu pura ho jayega wo khud samne aa jayega, par tumhari baat bhi sahi hai, hame sanjana ko sab bata dena chahiye

Komal- to fir chalo abhi use sab bata dete hai..

Fir dono apne room se nikle aur sanjana ke room me gaye, komal ne sanjana ko sari baat batayi, aur sab sanjana ko pata chala ke ye sab bas ek game hai uski khushi ka koi thikana nahi raha usne khushi se komal ko gale laga liya, komal bhi relax feel kar rahi thi kyuki use darr tha ke kahi sanjana in sab bato ka galat matlab na le le aur ho sakta tha ke wo gusse me waha se chali hi jaye aur sare khel ka satyanas ho jana ha par ab sanjana avi ke pyara me puri taraf dub chuki thi aur usne avi ko uske gun dosh sahit swikar kar liya tha, sara tension khatam ho gaya tha aur ab real game shuru hua tha, aniket ne sanjana ko bhi bata diya tha ke avi kahi nahi jane wala uska hetu pura hone par wo khud samne aa jayega

Aniket- ab tension mat lo sanjana aur ye sab jo ho raha hai uske bare me ek baar ache se socho, avi ne hame yaha aane par majbur kiya hai yaki iske piche koi na koi reason jarur hoga

Sanjana muskurayi aur boli

Sanjana- wo to mai safar ki shuruwat me hi samajh gayi thi

Aniket aur komal ko kuch samajh nahi aaya par sanjana ko avi ne aniket, komal aur mathura ke madhyam se bahut kuch samjha diya tha aur ab sanjana bhi tension bhul kar khel me shamil ho gayi thi

Sharir ki thakan insan sehan kar sakta hai par man hi thakan nahi, aur man par ka boj utarne ke baad insan pura relax ho jata hai aisa hi kuch in teeno ke sath hua, raat me teeno ne badhiya dinner kiya, avi bhi bhi aaya nahi tha, wo wapis apne apne rooms me gaye aur unhe kab neend aayi pata bhi nahi chala

Agli subah aniket neend se jata aur hadbada ke utha aur sidha room number 202 ki taraf bhaga, room ko lock tha, to wo sidha counter ke paas aaya par counter par koi dusra hi aadmi tha, usne avi ke bare me pucha to pata chala ke avi raat me deri se aaya aur subah jaldi hi kahi chala gaya

Aniket ne apne sar par hath maar liya aur pucha

Aniket- usne checkout kiya kya ?

Ispar us insan ne na me jawab diya,

Aniket ne wapis room me aakar komal ko jagaya, komal bhi hadbada kar uthi aur sabse pehla sawal kiya

Komal- avi mila ??

Aniket- kya ghanta mila wo, hum log yaha ghode bech ke so rahe the aur wo raat me aaya aur subah nikal bhi gaya

Komal- kya ? gaya ?? kaha gaya ???

Aniket- kya pata aaj kaha mara hai

Komal- to ab kya karna hai ?

Aniket- chinta ki baat nahi hai usne checkout nahi kiya hai, matlab aaspaas hi kahi gaya hai wo

Komal- thank god

Fir achanak komal khush hote huye boli

Komal- waise acha hua nahi to hamara honeymoon ek hi din me khatam ho jata

Aniket- acha ji to aapko bada honeymoon chahiye

Itna bol ke aniket apna chehra komal ke paas laya… aur……….



Kuch samay baad sanjana ne unka darwaja khatkhataya, aur aniket ne darwaja khola, sanjana jaldi jaldi bata rahi thi ki avi raat me aaya aur subah jaldi hi kahi nikal gaya aniket ne bhi aise jataya aise use kuch pata hi na ho

Aniket- acha….hmm…. arey baar re to ab kya kare sanjana

Sanjana- achi bata ye hai ke usne checkout nahi kiya hai abhi

Aniket- theek hai tum ready ho jao fir dekhte hai aage kya karna hai…

Nice update....
Komal ko Sanjana ki feeling ki ehsas hai....
Usne sahi kiya Sanjana ko game ke bare me bata kar....
Sanjana bhi bura nahi manni.... Kyun ki jahan pyar hain wahan ego ke liye koi jagah nehi hai....
Superb....

 

[Aryan s.]

Update 34​

Avi sabse pehle ready hokar bahar nikla to reception par kal wala aadmi hi tha uske aniket ko dekhte hi namaste kiya aur bola

“hamka maaf kar do babu u hum raat ma duty par rehne wale babu ko batana bhule rahe ke aap avinas babu ko dhundh rahe, kaunu mamla hai u ka babu ?”

Aniket bhi unke paas jake unke style me bola

Aniket- bahut hi bada mamla hai, dil ka mamla, avinas babu thoda ruthe rahe, hamre sath jo u akeli ladki hai na u uski heroine hai aur hum iha aake avinas babu ko dhundh rahe

Receptionist ko bhi aniket ka bolna pasand aaya aur wo bola

“fir kauno baat nahi, fir to aap bahut hi sahi jagah aaye ho, e mathura hai aur iha ke malik hamre sawle sarkar hai, e dil ka head office hai babu, sari duniya ka dil ka karobar yahi se chalta hai, aap tanik ghabrao nahi hamre thakurji sabki naiyaa paar lagawat hai”

Aniket ko bhi receptionoist ki baat jach gayi aur uski nautanki shuru ho gayi, kal din bhar wo sab logo ki brajbhasha sun raha tha aur wo itni meethi thi ke aniket se jhat se usko pakad liya aur fir us receptionist se bola

Aniket- aye haye kaka ka mithi baat bole rahe, maja awat hai

“bahut badhiya babuji to aap par bhi hamri brajbhasha sawar huyi rahi, sach hai, nandlal sabhi ko apne rang me rang lewat hai, u chhodo jab hum u raat wale manager se puchat rahe aur avinas babu ke bare me chan bin kare rahe to u bataya ke avinas babu iha se vrindavan gaye hai, u bas adde ka pata puche rahe”

Aniket ab ekdum khush ho gaya

Aniket- arey mere CID chacha, ji karta hai chum lu aapko

Fir us budhau ne usko apne paas aane ka ishara kiya aur dhimi awaj me aniket ko bola

“hamko hame chumoge babu, u vyastha to aap saath ma hi laye rahe, tohar mehraru u dekho aaye rahi “

Itne me komal aur sanjana waha tayar hoke pahuche aur aniket ne ghoshna kar di

Aniket- chalo vrindavan

Dono pehgle choda chauki fir aniket ne unko puri baat batayi, sanjana ne bhi us receptionist ko hath jod ke dhanyawaad kaha

“uha bake bihari aur krishna balram mandir me dil se rajkarna beti, sawle sarkar thakur naiya paar laga denge”

Sanjana bhi unki baat sunkar muskurayi aur teeno vrindavan ki taraf nikle, gadi me aniket ki badbad shuru thi par uski taraf sanjana ka dhyan nahi tha, uski udasi uske chehre par saaf dikh rahi thi, komal boli

Komal- lo, yaha kal isko samjha samjha kar hamara gala sukh gaya aur madam aaj bhi chehre par bara baja ke baithi hai

Sanjana jabardasti haste huye boli

Sanjana- waisi baat nahi hai par avi kab milega

Aur ye bolte bolte sanjana ki aankh bhar aayi aur komal sanjana ko samjhate huye boli

Komal- oye heroine, abhi bas teen din huye hai use dhundhte huye aur abhi se haar maan li ? tumko pata nahi hai avi kya chiz hai, jaldi se hath me aane ke liye wo koi baccha nahi hai aur jara ye bhi to socho ke tumhe tumhara pyaar mile iske liye kite log lage huye hai, wo yash baitha hai computer ke samne ke jaise hi avikuch search kare hame jhat se bata de tumhari maa ne bhi to jaldi se permission de di, itna easy tha kya ye sab, aur wo dharamshala ka receptionist bhi kitni madad kar raha hai aur hum to sath hai hi isiliye jara muskurao kya pata tumhari muskan dekh ke avi jaldi mil jaye

Aniket- wahi to, yaha gadi chala chala ke mere pichwade par chale aa gaye hai par maine uff tak nahi kari hai, aur ye ro rahi, huh

Aniket ki baat sunkar sanjana hasne lagi

Komal- shabash, aise hi haste rehne ka kyuki ek raaz ki baat batau, pata nahi in ladko ko hum ladkiyo ko rulane me kya hi sukh milta hai isiliye haste raho to ye line par rehe hai

Itna bolke komal ne aniket ko ek jordar chimta kata

Aniket- oye oye kammo dheere na, aur maine kab rulaya tumko ?

Komal- kyu bhul gaye kya, shadi ke pehle kitna rulaya tha

Aniket- aur tum logo ne mere ko kidnap kiya, meri hawa tight ki uska kya ? par wo bhi meri hi galti thi waise to, khair sorry rani sarkar

Itna bolke aniket ne ek hath se apne kaan pakda

Komal- jao maaf kiya tum bhi kya yaad karoge kis dildar se pala pada hai

Unki ye nok jhok sanjana dekh rahi thi aur man hi man soch rahi thi ke kya yyahi pyaar hai, aniket ne shadi ke pehle komal ko itna tadpaya rulaya par komal ne kisi baat ko man par nahi lagaya ya uska gussa nahi mana kyuki usse gusse se jyada relation important tha aur aniket ne bhi khule dil se mafi mang li, sach kaha jaye to avi ne use bas pyaar karna sikhaya tha use nibhana kaise hai ye aniket aur komal ne sikhaya

Aniket ko lag raha tha ke sidha mandir me jana chahiye, vrindavan me entry par hi ek bada gate unka swagat kar raha tha par gaon me ghuste hi aniket chakra gaya, waha ghar kam aur mandir hi jyada the fir usereceptionist ka bataya mandir yaad aaya aur waha logo se puchne par pata chala ke waha car lejate nahi aayegi usne car park ki

Aur teeno niche utar kar mandir ki taraf paidal jane lage, aniket aur sanjana avi ko dhundhte huye ja rahe the wahi komal apne hi khayalo me khoyi huyi thi, waha pahuch kar uska man mano krishnamay ho gaya tha

Wo teeno shri krishna balram mandir me pahuche to ek bade se gate ne unka swagat kiya.. us shubhra mandir me dhup deep ke sath sath doodh dahi aur mithai ki khushbu bhi ghum rahi thi, unlogo ne darshan kiye aur bahar aakar baithe, sanjana aur aniket ne pura mandir chan mara par unhe avi kahi nahi dikha

Waha se nikal kar fir w bake bihari mandir me pahuche, waha ki vyastha ekdum alag thi, jaise maharashta ke bade mandiro me darshan ke liye line lagti hai aisa waha nahi tha, mandir kamukhya garbhgrih yahi teen bade darwaje the aur uske samne bada sa hall jaha sare bhavik bhakt gardi karke khade the, aur gate par parda laga hua tha, aniket ne apne baju wale ek aadmi se pucha ke darshan kab honge to usne bataya ke waha ke logo ki aisi manyata hai ke agar kisi ne jyada der tak bhagwan ka wo rup dekha to wo uspar ohit ho jata hai aur bhagwan ko najar lagti hai isiliye balgopal ke pure shringar ke baad hi parda hatta hai wo bhi kuch hi samay ke liye

Aniket ko uski baat sunke hasi aayi ke bhagwan kok kaise najar lag sakti hai, sab log aturta se parda hatne ki raah dekhne lage aur fir ghanta naad shuru hua aur pujari ne parda hataya aur fir jab sabki drishti us sola shringar kare radha aur krishna par padi to sab mantramugdh hokar unhe dekhne laga ayr pure hall me unka jaikar gunjne laga

Sanjana hath jod kar bhagwan se avi ke jaldi milne ki prarthana kar rahi thi pune hall me radha krishna ka jaikara gunj raha tha aur itne me sanjana ke kano me ek awaj aayi

“I Love You Sanju”

Sanjana jhatke ke sath piche ghumi to uske piche avi haste huye usko dekh raha tha, usne jaldi se ek haar sanjana ke gale me daal diya aur ye sab kya ho raha hai ye sanjana samajh pati isse pehle hi avi gardi me gayab ho gaya aur wo bas use awaj deti rahi par uska awaj logo ke awaj me kahi mano dab gaya tha, sanjana jaldi se bahar aayi par tab tak avi wapis kahi chala gaya tha…..

Excellent.....
Mujhe lagta hai Avi ka maqsad tha Sachha pyar kya hota hai Sanjana Ko dikhana....
Usne Komal Aniket ke pyar ke madhyam se Sanjana ko sachha pyar ka ehsas dilaya.....
Komal aur Aniket ki pyar kitna gehra hai aur pyar ki paribhasa kya hai, Sanjana ko samajh aa raha hai....
Apna pyar ki Suruwat woh vrindavan jaise pawan sthal, pyar ki shrot se karna chahta tha....
Excellent thinking....
Super....
for the beautiful updates.....

 

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Update 33​

Sanjana aniket aur komal waha se bahar nikle to bahar nikalte hi sanjana ekdum se boli

Sanjana- aniket hum avi ko yaha dhundh rahe hai par itne samay me agar wo dharamshala me chala gaya hoga to ?

Tab aniket use samjhate huye bola

Aniket- arey maine wo receptionist ko bol rakha hai ke agar avi hamare piche se waha pahuche to wo hame call karke bata de..

Uske baad wo teeno dwarkadhish mandir aur ghat par bhi avi ko dhundh aaye par avi unko kahi nahi mila, par in sab ghatnakram me komal ekdum shant thi, aniket aur sanjana ko laga ke wo yaha ke vatavaran ko ache se mehsus kar rahi hai aur bas usi me khoyi huyi hai isiliye unhone bhi use nahi chheda

Sab taraf bhatak kar wo log sham ko dharamshala me pahuche aur aate hi unhone avi ke bare me pucha, par avi abhi tak lauta nahi tha, kal raat bhar ka safar aur din bhar ki bhagdaud me wo kafi thak gaye the, teeno ne socha ke ab avi ki raah yahi dekhenge

Unhone receptionist ko kaha ke jaise hi avi aaye unhe khabar kar de aur aniket aur komal apne room me aur sanjana apne room me chale gaye, komal ab bhi chup thi, aniket ne use apni bahe uske gale me dali aur pucha

Aniket- kya hua sweetheart itni chup chup kyu ho

Komal- ani ye sab jo bhi chal raha hai wo theek nahi hai

Aniket- kya theek nahi hai

Komal- mujhe lagta hai hame sanjana ko sab sach sach bata dena chahiye

Aniket- arey par avi ne kuch soch kar hi ye sab khel racha hai hai na

Ab komal chidh gayi

Komal- khadde me gaya tumhara khel, yaha us ladki ki jaan ja rahi hai aur tumko khel sujh raha hai.. tumhe nahi lagta ab ye sab kuch jyada ho raha hai

Aniket kuch soch raha tha, dono bed par aakar baith gaye aur komal ne aage kaha

Komal- tum logo ke khel me sanjana ki kya halat ho rahi hai tumhe najar nahi aa raha kya ?

Aniket- uske liye wo khud jimmedaar hai komal, bhul gayi kya usne avi ke sath kaisa suluk kiya tha

Komal- nahi ani mai kuch nahi bhuli hu par us baat ki itni bhi saja nahi deni hai use, aur galti kya uski akeli ki thi ? avi kahi galat nahi tha ?

Aniket kuch soch ke bola

Aniket- is sab ke piche avi ka koi na koi uddeshya hai ? uske bare me socha hai ?

Komal- ha, itni der sewahi soch rahi thi ke avi ka is sab ke piche kyahetu hai, yahi na ke sanjana ko apni galti ka ehsas ho, use pyaar ke sahi mayne samjhe

Aniket- barabar

Komal- tumhe aaj tak samajh aaya hai pyaar ka asal matlab ? ya avi ko samajha hai, agar samjha hota to wo jisse pyaar karta hai use itna nahi satata

Aniket- arey par komal ye sab bas ek game hai ye kyu bhul rahi ho tum

Komal- ha mai janti hu ke ye ek game hai par sanjana ko nahi pata na ke ye ek game hai, wo to use paglo ki tarah dhundh rahi hai, hum game khel rahe hai par isiliye hame jyada tension nahi hai, hum avi ko dhundhne ke sth sath is jagah ka maja bhi le rahe hai par sanjana ka kya ? is jagah aakar bhi uska kisi chiz me dhyan nahi hai, hum anay kar rahe hai uske sath aur jab galti dono ki hai to saja sirf sanjana ko kyu ? avi ko bhi saja milni chahiye

Aniket- ye bhi theekhai par waise dekha jaye to ye avi ke liye bhi ek tarah se saja hi hai

Komal- aur wo kaise ?

Aniket- mujhe ek baat batao, umko kab laga ke sanjana ko apni galti sanajh aa gayi hai aur pyaar ka ehsas bhi hua hai ?

Komal- wo jab hamare ghar aayi thi aur tumhare use itna kuch sunane ke baad bhi jab wo waha se nahi hili aur apne gharwalo kosab bata ke hamare sath avi kodhundhne aayi hai isse saf samajh aata hai ke usko apnigalti ka ehsas hai aur raha sawal pyaar ka to pyaar hai isiliye to use apni galti samajh aayi hai, aur aaj jis tarah se wo mere gale lagi thi na mai tab hi samajh gayi thi ke avi ke sath na hone se wo us pal ko ache se mehsus nahi kar payi hai, avi ki kami use har pal mehsus ho rahi thi

Aniket- barabar to mathura me avi ka uske sath na hona hi uski saja hai na ?

Komal- ha

Aniket- to mujhe batao ke avi ko bhi sanjana kikami khal hi rahi hogi, jaise avi ka sath na hoga sanjana ke liye saja saman hai waise hi sanjana ka avi ke sath na hona ye avi ke liye bhi to saja hi hai

Komal ko aniket ki baat sahi lag rahi thi par sanjana ke bate me bura feel ho raha tha aur fir wo kuch soch kar boli

Komal- ani, ye ek game hai aisa sanjana ko pata chala to isme bura kya hai ? waise bhiavi ka uddeshya to pura ho gaya hai

Aniket- agar uska hetu pura ho jata to wo ab tak samne aa jata kammo par wo nahi aaya matlab uske imag me aur bhi kuch hai par itna confirm hai ke sab uska hetu pura ho jayega wo khud samne aa jayega, par tumhari baat bhi sahi hai, hame sanjana ko sab bata dena chahiye

Komal- to fir chalo abhi use sab bata dete hai..

Fir dono apne room se nikle aur sanjana ke room me gaye, komal ne sanjana ko sari baat batayi, aur sab sanjana ko pata chala ke ye sab bas ek game hai uski khushi ka koi thikana nahi raha usne khushi se komal ko gale laga liya, komal bhi relax feel kar rahi thi kyuki use darr tha ke kahi sanjana in sab bato ka galat matlab na le le aur ho sakta tha ke wo gusse me waha se chali hi jaye aur sare khel ka satyanas ho jana ha par ab sanjana avi ke pyara me puri taraf dub chuki thi aur usne avi ko uske gun dosh sahit swikar kar liya tha, sara tension khatam ho gaya tha aur ab real game shuru hua tha, aniket ne sanjana ko bhi bata diya tha ke avi kahi nahi jane wala uska hetu pura hone par wo khud samne aa jayega

Aniket- ab tension mat lo sanjana aur ye sab jo ho raha hai uske bare me ek baar ache se socho, avi ne hame yaha aane par majbur kiya hai yaki iske piche koi na koi reason jarur hoga

Sanjana muskurayi aur boli

Sanjana- wo to mai safar ki shuruwat me hi samajh gayi thi

Aniket aur komal ko kuch samajh nahi aaya par sanjana ko avi ne aniket, komal aur mathura ke madhyam se bahut kuch samjha diya tha aur ab sanjana bhi tension bhul kar khel me shamil ho gayi thi

Sharir ki thakan insan sehan kar sakta hai par man hi thakan nahi, aur man par ka boj utarne ke baad insan pura relax ho jata hai aisa hi kuch in teeno ke sath hua, raat me teeno ne badhiya dinner kiya, avi bhi bhi aaya nahi tha, wo wapis apne apne rooms me gaye aur unhe kab neend aayi pata bhi nahi chala

Agli subah aniket neend se jata aur hadbada ke utha aur sidha room number 202 ki taraf bhaga, room ko lock tha, to wo sidha counter ke paas aaya par counter par koi dusra hi aadmi tha, usne avi ke bare me pucha to pata chala ke avi raat me deri se aaya aur subah jaldi hi kahi chala gaya

Aniket ne apne sar par hath maar liya aur pucha

Aniket- usne checkout kiya kya ?

Ispar us insan ne na me jawab diya,

Aniket ne wapis room me aakar komal ko jagaya, komal bhi hadbada kar uthi aur sabse pehla sawal kiya

Komal- avi mila ??

Aniket- kya ghanta mila wo, hum log yaha ghode bech ke so rahe the aur wo raat me aaya aur subah nikal bhi gaya

Komal- kya ? gaya ?? kaha gaya ???

Aniket- kya pata aaj kaha mara hai

Komal- to ab kya karna hai ?

Aniket- chinta ki baat nahi hai usne checkout nahi kiya hai, matlab aaspaas hi kahi gaya hai wo

Komal- thank god

Fir achanak komal khush hote huye boli

Komal- waise acha hua nahi to hamara honeymoon ek hi din me khatam ho jata

Aniket- acha ji to aapko bada honeymoon chahiye

Itna bol ke aniket apna chehra komal ke paas laya… aur……….



Kuch samay baad sanjana ne unka darwaja khatkhataya, aur aniket ne darwaja khola, sanjana jaldi jaldi bata rahi thi ki avi raat me aaya aur subah jaldi hi kahi nikal gaya aniket ne bhi aise jataya aise use kuch pata hi na ho

Aniket- acha….hmm…. arey baar re to ab kya kare sanjana

Sanjana- achi bata ye hai ke usne checkout nahi kiya hai abhi

Aniket- theek hai tum ready ho jao fir dekhte hai aage kya karna hai…

majedar update ..komal ko sanjana ka dard dekha nahi gaya aur usne aniket se sab batane ko keh diya .
sanjana ko pata chala aur ab wo bhi khel ka maja le rahi hai ..
avi raat ko late aakar jaldi chala gaya aur sanjana excite hokar bata rahi thi aniket ko aur aniket aise dikha raha tha jaise usko kuch pata hi nahi ..

 

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Update 34​

Avi sabse pehle ready hokar bahar nikla to reception par kal wala aadmi hi tha uske aniket ko dekhte hi namaste kiya aur bola

“hamka maaf kar do babu u hum raat ma duty par rehne wale babu ko batana bhule rahe ke aap avinas babu ko dhundh rahe, kaunu mamla hai u ka babu ?”

Aniket bhi unke paas jake unke style me bola

Aniket- bahut hi bada mamla hai, dil ka mamla, avinas babu thoda ruthe rahe, hamre sath jo u akeli ladki hai na u uski heroine hai aur hum iha aake avinas babu ko dhundh rahe

Receptionist ko bhi aniket ka bolna pasand aaya aur wo bola

“fir kauno baat nahi, fir to aap bahut hi sahi jagah aaye ho, e mathura hai aur iha ke malik hamre sawle sarkar hai, e dil ka head office hai babu, sari duniya ka dil ka karobar yahi se chalta hai, aap tanik ghabrao nahi hamre thakurji sabki naiyaa paar lagawat hai”

Aniket ko bhi receptionoist ki baat jach gayi aur uski nautanki shuru ho gayi, kal din bhar wo sab logo ki brajbhasha sun raha tha aur wo itni meethi thi ke aniket se jhat se usko pakad liya aur fir us receptionist se bola

Aniket- aye haye kaka ka mithi baat bole rahe, maja awat hai

“bahut badhiya babuji to aap par bhi hamri brajbhasha sawar huyi rahi, sach hai, nandlal sabhi ko apne rang me rang lewat hai, u chhodo jab hum u raat wale manager se puchat rahe aur avinas babu ke bare me chan bin kare rahe to u bataya ke avinas babu iha se vrindavan gaye hai, u bas adde ka pata puche rahe”

Aniket ab ekdum khush ho gaya

Aniket- arey mere CID chacha, ji karta hai chum lu aapko

Fir us budhau ne usko apne paas aane ka ishara kiya aur dhimi awaj me aniket ko bola

“hamko hame chumoge babu, u vyastha to aap saath ma hi laye rahe, tohar mehraru u dekho aaye rahi “

Itne me komal aur sanjana waha tayar hoke pahuche aur aniket ne ghoshna kar di

Aniket- chalo vrindavan

Dono pehgle choda chauki fir aniket ne unko puri baat batayi, sanjana ne bhi us receptionist ko hath jod ke dhanyawaad kaha

“uha bake bihari aur krishna balram mandir me dil se rajkarna beti, sawle sarkar thakur naiya paar laga denge”

Sanjana bhi unki baat sunkar muskurayi aur teeno vrindavan ki taraf nikle, gadi me aniket ki badbad shuru thi par uski taraf sanjana ka dhyan nahi tha, uski udasi uske chehre par saaf dikh rahi thi, komal boli

Komal- lo, yaha kal isko samjha samjha kar hamara gala sukh gaya aur madam aaj bhi chehre par bara baja ke baithi hai

Sanjana jabardasti haste huye boli

Sanjana- waisi baat nahi hai par avi kab milega

Aur ye bolte bolte sanjana ki aankh bhar aayi aur komal sanjana ko samjhate huye boli

Komal- oye heroine, abhi bas teen din huye hai use dhundhte huye aur abhi se haar maan li ? tumko pata nahi hai avi kya chiz hai, jaldi se hath me aane ke liye wo koi baccha nahi hai aur jara ye bhi to socho ke tumhe tumhara pyaar mile iske liye kite log lage huye hai, wo yash baitha hai computer ke samne ke jaise hi avikuch search kare hame jhat se bata de tumhari maa ne bhi to jaldi se permission de di, itna easy tha kya ye sab, aur wo dharamshala ka receptionist bhi kitni madad kar raha hai aur hum to sath hai hi isiliye jara muskurao kya pata tumhari muskan dekh ke avi jaldi mil jaye

Aniket- wahi to, yaha gadi chala chala ke mere pichwade par chale aa gaye hai par maine uff tak nahi kari hai, aur ye ro rahi, huh

Aniket ki baat sunkar sanjana hasne lagi

Komal- shabash, aise hi haste rehne ka kyuki ek raaz ki baat batau, pata nahi in ladko ko hum ladkiyo ko rulane me kya hi sukh milta hai isiliye haste raho to ye line par rehe hai

Itna bolke komal ne aniket ko ek jordar chimta kata

Aniket- oye oye kammo dheere na, aur maine kab rulaya tumko ?

Komal- kyu bhul gaye kya, shadi ke pehle kitna rulaya tha

Aniket- aur tum logo ne mere ko kidnap kiya, meri hawa tight ki uska kya ? par wo bhi meri hi galti thi waise to, khair sorry rani sarkar

Itna bolke aniket ne ek hath se apne kaan pakda

Komal- jao maaf kiya tum bhi kya yaad karoge kis dildar se pala pada hai

Unki ye nok jhok sanjana dekh rahi thi aur man hi man soch rahi thi ke kya yyahi pyaar hai, aniket ne shadi ke pehle komal ko itna tadpaya rulaya par komal ne kisi baat ko man par nahi lagaya ya uska gussa nahi mana kyuki usse gusse se jyada relation important tha aur aniket ne bhi khule dil se mafi mang li, sach kaha jaye to avi ne use bas pyaar karna sikhaya tha use nibhana kaise hai ye aniket aur komal ne sikhaya

Aniket ko lag raha tha ke sidha mandir me jana chahiye, vrindavan me entry par hi ek bada gate unka swagat kar raha tha par gaon me ghuste hi aniket chakra gaya, waha ghar kam aur mandir hi jyada the fir usereceptionist ka bataya mandir yaad aaya aur waha logo se puchne par pata chala ke waha car lejate nahi aayegi usne car park ki

Aur teeno niche utar kar mandir ki taraf paidal jane lage, aniket aur sanjana avi ko dhundhte huye ja rahe the wahi komal apne hi khayalo me khoyi huyi thi, waha pahuch kar uska man mano krishnamay ho gaya tha

Wo teeno shri krishna balram mandir me pahuche to ek bade se gate ne unka swagat kiya.. us shubhra mandir me dhup deep ke sath sath doodh dahi aur mithai ki khushbu bhi ghum rahi thi, unlogo ne darshan kiye aur bahar aakar baithe, sanjana aur aniket ne pura mandir chan mara par unhe avi kahi nahi dikha

Waha se nikal kar fir w bake bihari mandir me pahuche, waha ki vyastha ekdum alag thi, jaise maharashta ke bade mandiro me darshan ke liye line lagti hai aisa waha nahi tha, mandir kamukhya garbhgrih yahi teen bade darwaje the aur uske samne bada sa hall jaha sare bhavik bhakt gardi karke khade the, aur gate par parda laga hua tha, aniket ne apne baju wale ek aadmi se pucha ke darshan kab honge to usne bataya ke waha ke logo ki aisi manyata hai ke agar kisi ne jyada der tak bhagwan ka wo rup dekha to wo uspar ohit ho jata hai aur bhagwan ko najar lagti hai isiliye balgopal ke pure shringar ke baad hi parda hatta hai wo bhi kuch hi samay ke liye

Aniket ko uski baat sunke hasi aayi ke bhagwan kok kaise najar lag sakti hai, sab log aturta se parda hatne ki raah dekhne lage aur fir ghanta naad shuru hua aur pujari ne parda hataya aur fir jab sabki drishti us sola shringar kare radha aur krishna par padi to sab mantramugdh hokar unhe dekhne laga ayr pure hall me unka jaikar gunjne laga

Sanjana hath jod kar bhagwan se avi ke jaldi milne ki prarthana kar rahi thi pune hall me radha krishna ka jaikara gunj raha tha aur itne me sanjana ke kano me ek awaj aayi

“I Love You Sanju”

Sanjana jhatke ke sath piche ghumi to uske piche avi haste huye usko dekh raha tha, usne jaldi se ek haar sanjana ke gale me daal diya aur ye sab kya ho raha hai ye sanjana samajh pati isse pehle hi avi gardi me gayab ho gaya aur wo bas use awaj deti rahi par uska awaj logo ke awaj me kahi mano dab gaya tha, sanjana jaldi se bahar aayi par tab tak avi wapis kahi chala gaya tha…..

lovely update ..aniket aur komal ka pyar dekhke khush ho gayi sanjana .aur pyar ke maayne bhi samajh aa gaye usko .
mandir ka jis tarah varnan kiya hai aisa lagta hai aankho ke saamne ho ( lagta hai writer waha ghum ke aaya hai ,bas kuch jagah spelling mystake hai ) .
avi ne darshan de hi diye sanjana ko aur i love u bolke haar gale me daala aur dobara gayab ho gaya ..avi wakai is game ka maja le raha hai .