Romance Uff! Ye Mohabbat ! (completed)

[Adirshi]

सही है कि पहला प्यार भूलाए नहीं भूलता । कशिश जीवन पर्यन्त तक रहती है । लेकिन यह भी सच है कि सिर्फ यादों के सहारे जीवन काटा भी नहीं जा सकता । आगे बढ़ना ही होता है । अगर कोमल की शादी नहीं हुई होती तो अविनाश उसके लिए इंतजार कर सकता था पर अब तो ऐसा कुछ नहीं होने वाला है ।

समय सबसे अधिक बलवान होता है । वक्त बड़े से बड़े गम भुला देता है । कहते हैं प्यार में अपनी नहीं बल्कि दूसरे की खुशियां ज्यादा मायने रखती है । अगर वो खुश है तो हमें भी खुशी होती है । कोमल खुश है । प्यार करने वाला पति है । दोनों एक दूसरे को बहुत प्यार करते हैं ।
इसलिए अविनाश को अब मुव करना चाहिए । आगे की ओर देखना चाहिए । संजना खुबसूरत है । इंटेलिजेंट है । और सबसे बढ़कर वो उससे मोहब्बत करती है । उसे संजना का प्रपोजल एसेप्ट कर लेना चाहिए ।

लेकिन अविनाश अभी भी दूधिया में है । कोमल की यादों के सहारे पुरी जीवन जीना चाहता है ।
शायद कोमल ही उसकी दूविधा दूर कर सकती है ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट था Adirshi bhai.
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।

bahut bahut shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

अवि जो कि एक सहयोगी पात्र होते हुए भी
एक हटेली लव स्टोरी पर काफी दमदार प्रभाव छोड़
गया था, ये कहना ग़लत नहीं होगा कि वो अन्नी से भी ज्यादा प्रभवशाली रहा उस कहानी में , और अन्नी के लिए अपने प्यार को दबाना अवि के व्यक्तित्व को और निखार गया। और अब अवि को मुख्य भूमिका में देखकर काफी अच्छा लगा। अवि मेरा पसंदीदा पात्र है तो अब इस स्टोरी पर उपस्थित बराबर रहेगी मेरी। धन्यवाद

bahut bahut shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

Update 19​

Idhar komal college se nikli aur sodha aniket ke paas dukan me pahuchi aur aniket use dekhte hi bola

Aniket- aao aao malkin sahiba, aaj aap direct dukan me ?

Dukan me thodi gardi thi, log the, tab komal boli

Komal- suniye, jara bahar aaiye na, mujhe baat karni hai kuch

Aniket- Suniye..! direct suniye..! aay haay aise bulaogi to mai paatal me bhi aa jau, don’t worry sabko pata hai kitna darta hu mai tumse, itni ijjat mat do ab warna sabko lagega mai jhuth bolta hu unke samne..

Tab komal apni aankhe badi karte huye boli

Komal- ho gaya, ab baahar aaoge

Aniket- bas abhi aaya rani sarkar..

Itna bol ke aniket baahar aaya aur dono gaadi me jakar baithe… komal bahut exited thi

Komal- mai na aaj avi ke college me gayi thi

Ye sun ke anikiet bhi excited ho gaya aur bola

Aniket- kya bola avya…

Uske baad komal ne aniket ko sara kissa bataya jike sun ke aniket ekdum khush ho gaya

Aniket- ek number kaam kiya hai kammo.. kya baat hai..! aaj mai itna khush hu ke direct tajmahal tumhare naam karta hu..

Komal- ha, aur tajmahal kya narayanrao rane ka hai ?

Aniket- wo jane do abhi, maine kaha thga na maine sanjana ki aankho me dekha tha, aur wo mujhe bana rahi thi, boli dost ke bare me baat kar rahi hai..

Aniket ki badbad shuru hi thi par komal kuch soch rahi thi, fir komal boli

Komal-sanjana ne maan liya ki wo avi ke pyaar karti hai par avi, avi kuch bhi nahi bola

Aniket- kyu?

Komal- shayad sanjana jo bol rahi thi wo sach ho avi kisi se pyaar karta ho, kyuki agar aisa na hota to avi bhi kuch na kuch react jarur karta..

Aniket- mera na is mamle me dimag chalna hi band ho gaya hai, ek kaam karta hu kal hi subah harami ko leke aata hu aur do kaan ke niche baja ke puchta hu ki ye kya natak hai…

Komal- maine to mera kaam kar diya aur wqo successful bhi ho gaya, Mr. Aniket Rane ab tumhari bari hai dekhte hai jya jhande gaadte ho tum

Aniket- O rani sarkar, challenge nahi karne ka, maine man bana liya to kal ke kal un dono ki shadi bhi karwa sakta hu

Komal- aisa kya ? shakal dekhi hai apni, bade aaye shadi karane wale.. aajtak wo kisse pyaar karta ha ye to pata nahi chala tumhe aur khas dost ho na tum uske..

Aniket- wo aajtak mai tumhar pyaar me khoya hua tha isiliye dhyan hi nahi diya..

Komal- theek hai theek hai, par ab to lag jao kaam pe

Aniket- wo to mai karunga hu par uske pehle, Shabass kammo, aaj tum sahi hisab se Rane khandan ki bahu lag rahi ho..

Komal- par jo bhi karoge dhyan se karna, wo sanjana ke pitaji police hai aur love story me maar khane ka itihas hai tumhara..

Aniket- kammo tu darr rahi hai ya dara rahi hai..

Komal- dono..

Aniket- Don’t Worry hamare bapu hai na sa,bhalne ke liye.. pichli baar bhi to sambhal liya tha unhone aur Avya ke liye kuch bhi

Uske baad komal ghar aur aniket dukan me chale gaye

Wahi dusri taraf Avi tension me aa gaya tha.. sanjana ka use tension nahi tha asal tension ye tha ke komal ko ye sab pata chal gaya tha matlab aniket ko bhi pata chal hi chukka tha aura b use bas ek hi darr tha ke kuch bhi ho jaye komal ka naam bahar nahi aa chahiye, sanjana ne use dharmsankat me daal diya tha aur ab isse bachne ke liye use bas ek hi rasta najar aa raha tha wo tha sanjana ke pyaar ko accept karna jisse koi bhi uske past ke bare ne nahi puchega par wo ye karne ke liye ready nahi tha

Wo ab bhi komal ko dilo jaan se chahta tha par ab komal aur uska sath aana mumkin nahi tha.. halanki wo bhi nahi chahta tha ke komal aur aniket kabhi bhi alag ho wo un dono ke liye khus tha par jhuth muth hi sahi wo komal ki jagah kisi ko nahi de sakta tha aur isiliye wo sanjana ke propose ka jawab nahi dena chahta tha..kya kare kya na kare samajh hi nahi aa raha tha aur ab wo aniket ko kaise face karega ye use sochta tha.. use aniket ka swabhav ache se pata tha uske dimag me koi baat aa gayi to wo hath dho ke nahi balki naha dho ke uske piche lag jata tha

Aise me ek pal wo bhi aaya jab avi ko sanjana ka I Love you bolna yaad aaya aur uske dil ke chote me kone me ek khusi ki lehar daud gayi aur aankho samne sanjana ke wo shabd

“tumhe tumhara pyaar nahi mila to mujhse mera pyaar to pane do”

Ye shabh mano kisi hatode ki tarah uske dimag par prahar kar rahe the aur agle hi pal usne apne dimag se sare khayal nikal diye

Avi- nahi nahi.. mai komal ki jagah kisi ko bhi nahi de sakta

Aur avi ne sakht bane rehne ka faisla kar liya par kahi na kahi wo bhi ye baat jaanta the ke uske is decision ko surang lagne wali hai

Agle din avi hamesha ki tarah college pahucha aur canteen me jake baitha tab sanjana bhi waha aayi aur halke se boli

Sanjana- good morning may love..

Sanjana ki baat sun ke avi thoda chauka…

Avi- oye, sanju kya boli tu ?

Sanjana bhi kandhe jhatakte huye boli

Sanjana- kaha, kuch bhi to nahi

Avi- abhi abhi kuch bola tune..

Sanjana- don’t worry kisi ne nahi suna aur waise bhi tum jo mere liye ho wahi bola hai..

Waise dekha jaye to sanjana ke muh se may love sun ke kahi na kahi avi ko bhi acha laga tha par usne ye baat jahir nahi hone di aur thoda chidhte huye bola

Avi- stop it..! tumko nahi lagta tum jabardasti kar rahi ho ?

Sanjana- jabardasti aur mai ? bilkul nahi.. maine tumse kaha ki tum bhi mujhe I love you bolo, aur don’t worry mai aisa bolungi bhi nahi, kyuki mujhe yakin hai ek na ek din tum khud mujhe ye baat bologe, khudse..

Avi- aur agar mai tab bhi nahi bola to

Sanjana- to mai raah dekhungi

Avi- tum paagal ho.

Sanjana- yours only..

Avi ko kya kare samajhg nahi aa raha tha aur itni baat bhi sach thi ke sanjana ke bagair use bhi chain nahi milta tha isiliye wo use taal bhi nahi raha tha aur akhir me wo pareshan hote huye bola

Avi- tu idhar meri jaan kha rahi hai aur udhar komal ne anya ko sab bata bhi diya hoga aur anya matlab rakshas hai tum nahi janti use..

Sanjana bhi jaldi se bol gayi

Sanjana- kuch bhi mat bolo bahut acha ladka hai wo..

Ye sunte hi avi ko ek jordar dhakka laga

Avi- matlab ? aur tere ko ye kaise pata

Sanjana- kaise matlab ? mai mili hu usse ek baar

Avi ne ye sun ke apna matha peet liya

Avi- khatam..tata..bye bye.. agaya mai ab.. ab kuch nahi ho sakta..

Sanjana- aise kyu bol rahe ho.. kya hua

Avi- tumko pata nahi hai anya kya chiz hai.. wo bhoot hai bhoot auyr ab ye bhoot mere piche lagne wala hai

Sanjana ekdum khud hote huye boli

Sanjana- sach me..!

Avi- hao, sahi me, pata nahi tumko kaunse muhurat me usse milne ki baat sujhi thi..

Sanjana- fir kya karti mai.. tumse kuch bhi pucho to tum koi jawab side tarah se nahi dete the to usse mil li

Avi- kya kya bola usko tumne?

Sanjana- kuch khas nahi bas usse itna pucha tha ke kya tum kisi se pyaar karte ho bas, sorry

Sanjana ne apne kaan pakad liye aur avi ko hase ya roye ye hi samajh nahi aa raha tha

Avi- vaat lag gayi matlab puri

Sanjana- use bhi pata nahi tha ki tum kisi se pyaar karte ho, avi sach sach batana tumne bas mujhe taalne ke liye hi to kisi ladki be bare me kahani nahi banayi na ? kyuki aisa kuch hota to aniket ko pata hota aur don’t worry maine use nahi bataya ki mai tumse pyaar karti hu bol diya ke meri dost chahti hai tumhe

Avi- waah !! shabass!! Tumne bola aur anya ne mana, wo bahut pahuchi huyi chiz hai, sirf T bhi bola to wo pehchan leta hai ke T table ka hai ya Talwar ka aur usne bhi tumne ye sab komal ke samne bola hai aur komal ko malum matlab anya ko malum.. ho gaya kalyan

Itne ne avi ka phone bajne laga

Avi- shaitan ka naam liya shaitan hajir, anya ka hi phone hai

Avi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ke phone par kya bole.. usne jaise taise phone uthaya aur awaj normal karte huye bola

Avi- hi anya kaisa hai bhai..

Udhar se awaj aaya

Aniket- mai ekdum handsome, hamesha ke jaisa tu bol kidhar hai ?

Avi- mai to class me hu lecture ke liye aaya hu

Aniket- ha canteen me tere baap ne lecture rakha hai na haramjade..

Avi aage kuch bolta isse pehle hi sanjana ne avi ko hatho se ishara karke piche dekhne kaha, avi ne mud ke dekha to aniket uske piche haste huye khada tha…..

 

[Adirshi]

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[Jaguaar]

Update 19​

Idhar komal college se nikli aur sodha aniket ke paas dukan me pahuchi aur aniket use dekhte hi bola

Aniket- aao aao malkin sahiba, aaj aap direct dukan me ?

Dukan me thodi gardi thi, log the, tab komal boli

Komal- suniye, jara bahar aaiye na, mujhe baat karni hai kuch

Aniket- Suniye..! direct suniye..! aay haay aise bulaogi to mai paatal me bhi aa jau, don’t worry sabko pata hai kitna darta hu mai tumse, itni ijjat mat do ab warna sabko lagega mai jhuth bolta hu unke samne..

Tab komal apni aankhe badi karte huye boli

Komal- ho gaya, ab baahar aaoge

Aniket- bas abhi aaya rani sarkar..

Itna bol ke aniket baahar aaya aur dono gaadi me jakar baithe… komal bahut exited thi

Komal- mai na aaj avi ke college me gayi thi

Ye sun ke anikiet bhi excited ho gaya aur bola

Aniket- kya bola avya…

Uske baad komal ne aniket ko sara kissa bataya jike sun ke aniket ekdum khush ho gaya

Aniket- ek number kaam kiya hai kammo.. kya baat hai..! aaj mai itna khush hu ke direct tajmahal tumhare naam karta hu..

Komal- ha, aur tajmahal kya narayanrao rane ka hai ?

Aniket- wo jane do abhi, maine kaha thga na maine sanjana ki aankho me dekha tha, aur wo mujhe bana rahi thi, boli dost ke bare me baat kar rahi hai..

Aniket ki badbad shuru hi thi par komal kuch soch rahi thi, fir komal boli

Komal-sanjana ne maan liya ki wo avi ke pyaar karti hai par avi, avi kuch bhi nahi bola

Aniket- kyu?

Komal- shayad sanjana jo bol rahi thi wo sach ho avi kisi se pyaar karta ho, kyuki agar aisa na hota to avi bhi kuch na kuch react jarur karta..

Aniket- mera na is mamle me dimag chalna hi band ho gaya hai, ek kaam karta hu kal hi subah harami ko leke aata hu aur do kaan ke niche baja ke puchta hu ki ye kya natak hai…

Komal- maine to mera kaam kar diya aur wqo successful bhi ho gaya, Mr. Aniket Rane ab tumhari bari hai dekhte hai jya jhande gaadte ho tum

Aniket- O rani sarkar, challenge nahi karne ka, maine man bana liya to kal ke kal un dono ki shadi bhi karwa sakta hu

Komal- aisa kya ? shakal dekhi hai apni, bade aaye shadi karane wale.. aajtak wo kisse pyaar karta ha ye to pata nahi chala tumhe aur khas dost ho na tum uske..

Aniket- wo aajtak mai tumhar pyaar me khoya hua tha isiliye dhyan hi nahi diya..

Komal- theek hai theek hai, par ab to lag jao kaam pe

Aniket- wo to mai karunga hu par uske pehle, Shabass kammo, aaj tum sahi hisab se Rane khandan ki bahu lag rahi ho..

Komal- par jo bhi karoge dhyan se karna, wo sanjana ke pitaji police hai aur love story me maar khane ka itihas hai tumhara..

Aniket- kammo tu darr rahi hai ya dara rahi hai..

Komal- dono..

Aniket- Don’t Worry hamare bapu hai na sa,bhalne ke liye.. pichli baar bhi to sambhal liya tha unhone aur Avya ke liye kuch bhi

Uske baad komal ghar aur aniket dukan me chale gaye

Wahi dusri taraf Avi tension me aa gaya tha.. sanjana ka use tension nahi tha asal tension ye tha ke komal ko ye sab pata chal gaya tha matlab aniket ko bhi pata chal hi chukka tha aura b use bas ek hi darr tha ke kuch bhi ho jaye komal ka naam bahar nahi aa chahiye, sanjana ne use dharmsankat me daal diya tha aur ab isse bachne ke liye use bas ek hi rasta najar aa raha tha wo tha sanjana ke pyaar ko accept karna jisse koi bhi uske past ke bare ne nahi puchega par wo ye karne ke liye ready nahi tha

Wo ab bhi komal ko dilo jaan se chahta tha par ab komal aur uska sath aana mumkin nahi tha.. halanki wo bhi nahi chahta tha ke komal aur aniket kabhi bhi alag ho wo un dono ke liye khus tha par jhuth muth hi sahi wo komal ki jagah kisi ko nahi de sakta tha aur isiliye wo sanjana ke propose ka jawab nahi dena chahta tha..kya kare kya na kare samajh hi nahi aa raha tha aur ab wo aniket ko kaise face karega ye use sochta tha.. use aniket ka swabhav ache se pata tha uske dimag me koi baat aa gayi to wo hath dho ke nahi balki naha dho ke uske piche lag jata tha

Aise me ek pal wo bhi aaya jab avi ko sanjana ka I Love you bolna yaad aaya aur uske dil ke chote me kone me ek khusi ki lehar daud gayi aur aankho samne sanjana ke wo shabd

“tumhe tumhara pyaar nahi mila to mujhse mera pyaar to pane do”

Ye shabh mano kisi hatode ki tarah uske dimag par prahar kar rahe the aur agle hi pal usne apne dimag se sare khayal nikal diye

Avi- nahi nahi.. mai komal ki jagah kisi ko bhi nahi de sakta

Aur avi ne sakht bane rehne ka faisla kar liya par kahi na kahi wo bhi ye baat jaanta the ke uske is decision ko surang lagne wali hai

Agle din avi hamesha ki tarah college pahucha aur canteen me jake baitha tab sanjana bhi waha aayi aur halke se boli

Sanjana- good morning may love..

Sanjana ki baat sun ke avi thoda chauka…

Avi- oye, sanju kya boli tu ?

Sanjana bhi kandhe jhatakte huye boli

Sanjana- kaha, kuch bhi to nahi

Avi- abhi abhi kuch bola tune..

Sanjana- don’t worry kisi ne nahi suna aur waise bhi tum jo mere liye ho wahi bola hai..

Waise dekha jaye to sanjana ke muh se may love sun ke kahi na kahi avi ko bhi acha laga tha par usne ye baat jahir nahi hone di aur thoda chidhte huye bola

Avi- stop it..! tumko nahi lagta tum jabardasti kar rahi ho ?

Sanjana- jabardasti aur mai ? bilkul nahi.. maine tumse kaha ki tum bhi mujhe I love you bolo, aur don’t worry mai aisa bolungi bhi nahi, kyuki mujhe yakin hai ek na ek din tum khud mujhe ye baat bologe, khudse..

Avi- aur agar mai tab bhi nahi bola to

Sanjana- to mai raah dekhungi

Avi- tum paagal ho.

Sanjana- yours only..

Avi ko kya kare samajhg nahi aa raha tha aur itni baat bhi sach thi ke sanjana ke bagair use bhi chain nahi milta tha isiliye wo use taal bhi nahi raha tha aur akhir me wo pareshan hote huye bola

Avi- tu idhar meri jaan kha rahi hai aur udhar komal ne anya ko sab bata bhi diya hoga aur anya matlab rakshas hai tum nahi janti use..

Sanjana bhi jaldi se bol gayi

Sanjana- kuch bhi mat bolo bahut acha ladka hai wo..

Ye sunte hi avi ko ek jordar dhakka laga

Avi- matlab ? aur tere ko ye kaise pata

Sanjana- kaise matlab ? mai mili hu usse ek baar

Avi ne ye sun ke apna matha peet liya

Avi- khatam..tata..bye bye.. agaya mai ab.. ab kuch nahi ho sakta..

Sanjana- aise kyu bol rahe ho.. kya hua

Avi- tumko pata nahi hai anya kya chiz hai.. wo bhoot hai bhoot auyr ab ye bhoot mere piche lagne wala hai

Sanjana ekdum khud hote huye boli

Sanjana- sach me..!

Avi- hao, sahi me, pata nahi tumko kaunse muhurat me usse milne ki baat sujhi thi..

Sanjana- fir kya karti mai.. tumse kuch bhi pucho to tum koi jawab side tarah se nahi dete the to usse mil li

Avi- kya kya bola usko tumne?

Sanjana- kuch khas nahi bas usse itna pucha tha ke kya tum kisi se pyaar karte ho bas, sorry

Sanjana ne apne kaan pakad liye aur avi ko hase ya roye ye hi samajh nahi aa raha tha

Avi- vaat lag gayi matlab puri

Sanjana- use bhi pata nahi tha ki tum kisi se pyaar karte ho, avi sach sach batana tumne bas mujhe taalne ke liye hi to kisi ladki be bare me kahani nahi banayi na ? kyuki aisa kuch hota to aniket ko pata hota aur don’t worry maine use nahi bataya ki mai tumse pyaar karti hu bol diya ke meri dost chahti hai tumhe

Avi- waah !! shabass!! Tumne bola aur anya ne mana, wo bahut pahuchi huyi chiz hai, sirf T bhi bola to wo pehchan leta hai ke T table ka hai ya Talwar ka aur usne bhi tumne ye sab komal ke samne bola hai aur komal ko malum matlab anya ko malum.. ho gaya kalyan

Itne ne avi ka phone bajne laga

Avi- shaitan ka naam liya shaitan hajir, anya ka hi phone hai

Avi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ke phone par kya bole.. usne jaise taise phone uthaya aur awaj normal karte huye bola

Avi- hi anya kaisa hai bhai..

Udhar se awaj aaya

Aniket- mai ekdum handsome, hamesha ke jaisa tu bol kidhar hai ?

Avi- mai to class me hu lecture ke liye aaya hu

Aniket- ha canteen me tere baap ne lecture rakha hai na haramjade..

Avi aage kuch bolta isse pehle hi sanjana ne avi ko hatho se ishara karke piche dekhne kaha, avi ne mud ke dekha to aniket uske piche haste huye khada tha…..

Superb Updateee

Avi ke dil mein Sanjana ke liye pyaar toh hai par woh maan nhi paa raha hai. Komal ka pyaar Sanjana ke liyee jo pyaar hai usse daba raha hai.

Sanjana bhi pichhe padhi hui hai aur woh pichha chorne wali nhi hai iss janam mein.

Idher Aniket aagaya hai Avi ke college. Dekhte hai dono raakshas mil ke ab kya hungama karte hai.

 

[Sauravb]

Amazing update Adirshi bhai

 

[Punnu]

Update 16​

Sanjana mud kar jane lagi itne me aniket ne use awaj diya

Aniket- arey madam ruko, tumhare chehre par to double bara baj gaye, ruko aata hu mai…

Fir bhi sanjana dukan ke bahar nikal chuki thi aur aniket bhi jaldi se uske paas pahucha

Aniket- arey thoda dheere chalo madam, railway me paida huyi ho kya ?

Ab sanjana bhi gusse me boli

Sanjana- kyu, ab darr nahi lag raha kya apni biwi se..

Aniket- huh, kaun bola ki mai darta hu usse ? mai kisise nahi marta , ha par agar wo gussa jo tab alag baat hai

Aniket ne haste huye kaha

Sanjana- to jao, baitho apna dukan sambhalte huye

Ab aniket ka sur badal gaya tha

Aniket- oye madam, avi ke bare me janna hai to chalo chup chap coffee pite huye baat karte hai

Ab sanjana bhi shant ho gayi aur wo dono coffee shop me jake baithe aur sanjana jaise taise boli

Sanjana- sorry..

Aniket- sorry ke badle agar bill mai bhar dungi aisa kehti to thoda acha lagta

Sanjana- aapko sahi me kuch problem nahi hai na, matlab aapki wife?

Aniket- mai majak kar raha tha, aur ha meri biwi ko pura bharosa hai mujhpar aur ye majak nahi hai, acha ye chhodo aap avi ke bare me keh rahi thi ? aur aap kaun ?

Sanjana- wo mai aur avi ek hi college me padhte hai, mera naam sanjana hai…

Aniket- waah, badhiya, par mujhse kya kaam aa gaya aapko ?

Ab sanjana yaha tak pahuch to gayi thi par aage baat kaise kare ye use samajh nahi aa raha tha, jaise taise wo himmat karke boli

Sanjana- meri na ek dost hai, wo bahut pyaar karti hai avi se par avi kisi aur ko chahta hai..

Sanjana ki baat sunkar aniket apna sar pakad ke baith gaya, waise usne pehchan liya tha ke sanjana jhuth bol rahi hai fir bhi wo bola

Aniket- gajab ! matlab ye dhande shuru hai uske waha.. haramkhor ko padhne bheja tha aur ye kar raha hai wo, milne do usko tang hi tod ke hath me de dunga..

Ab sanjana hadbada gayi,

Sanjana- nahi.. nahi aisa nahi hai.. wo meri saheli pyaar karti hai usse par avi ka pata nahi.. aur itni kya badi baat hai usne ? aapne bhi love marriage ki hai na.. ?

Aniket- ye avya bhi gadha hai ek number ka.. hamesha kahi na kahi fasta rehta hai. Ab kuch dino pehle ki hi baat hai, ek chudail piche padi thi uske, baap police isiliye ander karwa diya usko wo nipta nahi kea b ye nayi jhanjhat…

Sanjana- chudail nahi..mai.. hi..thi..wo..

Aniket- arey waah.. mujhe nahi pata tha chudaile itni khubsurat hoti hai.. acha chhodo kaam kya hai batao ?

Sanjana- avi kisi ko chahta hai kya ?

Aniket ne do minute socha aur fir bola

Aniket-avi aur pyaar.., bilkul nahi. Khurafat karne bolo maar peet ka bolo wo ache se kar lega par pyaar wyar nahi, waisa kuch hota to mujhe pata hota..

Uske baad sanjana ne wo sara kissa bataya jab avi serious hokar baat kar raha tha aura b wo baat sunkar aniket bhi soch me pad gaya ki avi kisi ko chahta hai aur use pata hi nahi hai par fir bhi sari baat sunkar aniket bola

Aniket- aap aapki dost ko bolo ki wo ‘thi’ aisa bola yani ab nahi hai, aur mai dave ke sath keh sakta hu ke avi ki life me koi ladki nahi hai, ye sab to usne picha chhudane ke liye bola hoga, mai ache se janta hu usko, seat khali hai jaldi se rumal daal kar reserve kar lo..

Sanjana- wo bahut koshish kar rahi hai par avi kuch suntan hi nahi.

Aniket- iski to.. aise kaise nahi sunega mai bhi dekhta hu, mai madad karunga par mujhe pata to chale ki wo ladki kaun hai, aur pyaar karti hai to darr kyu rahi hai? Apni dost ko kyu bheja..

Sanjana- nahi waisa kuch nahi hai, mai idhar aa rahi thi to maine hi socha aapse mil lu aap khas dost ho na uske..

Aniket- fikar not.. kuch bhi madad chahiye hogi to bas call me..

Itna bol ke aniket ne apna card sanjana ko diya aur wo waha se chali gayiaur aniket haste huye khud se bola

Aniket- shabash.. matlab doodh lene bhi jana hai aur bartan bhi chupana hai.. avi ka to baad me dekha jayega pehle tumhare pyaar ka ijhar to ho jaye.. ab aayega maja, avi haramjade mera band bajaya tha tune ab teri bari hai.. tu to beta gaya ab

Par reh reh ke aniket ke dimag me ek hi sawal aa raha tha ke akhir avi ki premika hai kaun ? aisa kaise ho sakta hai ke uska jigri kisi ke pyaar karta hai aur use is baat ki khabar tak nahi hai.. apne ki khayalo me khoya aniket wapis dukan jane ke bajay ghar pahuch gaya aur pahuchte hi awaj lagayi..

Aniket- kammo meri darling.. jane meri janeman….

Aniket ki awaj sunkar komal kitchen se bahar aate huye boli

Komal- tum aagaye ? itni jaldi ? sab theek hai na ??

Aniket- wo tumhari yaad aagayi to chala aaya kammo darling

Komal ne pehle idhar udhar dekha ki koi hai to nahi aur jab wo nischint ho gayi ke aaspaas koi nahi hai to usne mast ek mukka aniket ke pith me jad diya aur boli

Komal- ho gayi tumhari nautanki shuru… meri yaad aa rahi thi.. jaldi batao kya baat hai bahut kaam hai mujhe..

Aniket- aaila kamal hai, ab mujhe meri eklauti biwi ki yaad bhi nahi aa sakti kya

Aniket ki baat sun komal ke gaal bhi laal ho gaye the..

Komal- tum bhi na.. acha batao baat kya hai..

Aniket- bas itna samajh lo ki maja aa gaya

Komal- kya hua hai ?

Aniket- kuch nahi, mukka jara jor se laga par tumne mara tha to dard nahi hua

Komal- aisa kya, theek hai fir aaj ho jaye, waise bhi ghar par koi nahi hai

Aniket- arey nahi.. nahi.. mai bhale hi bahar kitna bhi shjer ban lu par mujhe ache se pata hai ki tum is sher pe sawar hone wali mata ho, acha ye sab chhodo, breaking news hai, ek ladki aayi thi abhi dukan par avya ke bare me puch rahi thi..

Itna bol ke aniket apne daat dikhane laga..

Komal- sach me..? apne avi ke bare me puch rahi thi.. gajab.. kaisi thi?

Aniket- ek number, ekdum kadak, tavka..

Aniket ki baat sun komal keapni aankhe badi ki tab ani ke dhyan me aaya ki wo kya bol raha hai

Aniket- Avi … avi ke liye sahi thi..

Komal- hmm.. waise kya puch rahi thi? Aur tumko aisa kyu laga ki wo usko pasand karti hai..

Aniket- easy hai ekdum,, wahi purana style mere dost ke liye puchne aayi hu wagaira wagaira

Aniket ne natki andaj me kaha

Komal- arey to kya pata wo sach keh rahi ho..

Aniket- kammo rani ye aniket rane ki najar hai, ek jhatke me sab pehchan leti hai

Komal- ha ha pata hai aniket rane kin ajar, khud ko samajhne me do saal lage the tumko yaad hai na

Aniket- ab tab mai kaccha tha is mamle me, tumhare pyaar me hi to samajhdar hua hu

Komal- Mr. Rane hamari bate bas karenge ab aur avi ke bare me socho

Aniket- arey yahi wo ladki hai sanjana mohite patil jisne apne baap ko bol ke avi ko ander karaya tha aur bapu chhuda ke laye the..

Komal- fir kahi koi naya bawal to nahi?

Aniket- arey nahi, maine baat ki hai usse aur mujhe lagta hai avya ki wicket bhi gir gayi hai par tumko pata hai wo dus dimag wala us bechari ke samajh ke bare hai upar se ek nayi baat pata chali hai, uska bolna hai kea vi kisi se pyaar karta haiaur bas isi bare me puch rahi thi wo..

Komal- ho hi nahi sakta hai, avi ka aisa koi scene hota to humko pata hopta.. shayad use galatfehmi huyi hogi..

Aniket- wahi to mai keh raha hu, aur samjho aisa koi matter hota to ab tak bhai ki shadi ho chuki hoti.. humne yak am ladkiyo ko bhagaya hai kya

Komal- ha ye bhi hai, chalo tumko pata nahi hai maan sakti hu par mujhe to pata hota hi..

Aniket- mujhe pata nahi aur tumhe pata hai aisa kaise

Komal- ab tum college me busy the na shravni ke piche

Aniket- arey yaar komal yaar uski yaad mat dila please..

Komal- acha chhodoye baat par kya tumhe sach me lagta hai ki ye sanjana apnea vi par fida hai..

Aniket- 100% maine dekha hai uski aankho me..

Komal- fir usne apni dost ka naam kyu liya

Aniket- wahi to matter hai, mujhe lagta hai pehle apne ko khud mamla confirm karna chahiye ki sanjana avi ko chahti hai ya uski koi dost ya kahi ye koi naya game to nahi par kuch bhi ho maja jarur aayega, bahut din ho gaye kuch dhamal kiye huye, ek kaam karo tum tumhare stylr se avi ko dekhoagar batata hai to theek nahi to tekdi ka plan banaya jayega

Komal- tumko to bas bahana chahiye tekdi par jane ka, pehle pata to chale dono ke ,man me kya hai fir karenge dhamal..

Ab aage kya karna hai aniket aur komal isi bare me sochne lage…..

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[Punnu]

Update 17 ​

Aniket aur komal dono soch me pad gaye the, akhir kaun hogi wo aur akhir me aniket chidh gaya

Aniket- ye kya baat huyi bhala ? hum donobachpan ke dost hai aur dost kam bhai jyada au aura vi ke is bare me ek baar bhi nahi bataya, ruk abhi call karta hu usko..

Aniket bas call lagane hi wala tha ke komal ne use rok diya aur boli

Komal- runo ani, call mat karo aur gussa to bilkul mat karo..

Aniket- arey par itni badi baat usne chipayi kaise..

Tab komal kuch soch ke boli

Komal- jitna mai avi ko janti hu usse lagta hai ki uski jarur koi majburi hogi isiliye usne is bare me humse koi baat nahi ki hogi aur uspar gussa hone ki bajay ye bhi to socho ki hum kitne swarthi hai, hum bas apne pyaar ke liye tadap rahe the us samay aur humne uske bare me kabhi socha hi nahi, hame hamare pyaar ki takleef najar aa rahi thi aur is beech hame samay hi kaha trha avi ki or dekhne ka..

Aniket- ye bhi sahi hai.. hum hamari hi duniya ke khoye huye the.. par koi baat nahi ab bhi samay nahi gaya hai, hum dhundh nikalenge usko jisse avi pyaar karta tha

Komal- aur fayda kya hoga, wo past tha ani, tumhi ne kaha tha na ke wo aba vi ki lofe me nahi hai..

Aniket- ye hhi theek hai to ab kya kara jaye ?

Komal- har kisi ko apna pehla pyaar nahi mil pata hai par pehla pyaar na mile to apne dil ke darwaje band nahi kiye jate, aur shayad yahi wajah hai kea vi sanjana ko koi response nahi de raha hai.. shayad wo ab dobara pyaar ke chakker me nahi panda chahta..

Aniket-ha ye ho sakta hai par ek baat mere dhyan me aayi hai, aag dono taraf lagi hai par koi bolne ko tayar nahi hai

Komal- ha na, ab sab tumhari tarah daringbaaz thodi na hai..

Aniket- ye tu meri tariff kar rahi hai ya tana maar rahi hai

Komal- tumko kya lagta hai ?

Aniket- tariff hi hogi, bhale daru pike propose kiya tha par propose to kiya tha

Komal- ha par bhulo mat us samay tumhe sath dene ke liye avi aur yash bhi the sath me…

Aniket- ye bhi sahi hai, kal ke kal jake milta hu avya se aur bolta hu ja patthe aage badh mai hu sath me

Komal- mr. rane avinash hai wo, aapke jitna utawala nahi hai wo, pehle ye jaante hai ke uske man me kya hai, tum shant raho jara, waise bhi sochna tumhara kaam nahi hai..

Aniket- to fir kya mai har love story me maar khan eke liye hu kya pehle yash wale kisse me maar khaya, fir wo docter suman ko uske ghar se bhagane ke chakker me pita aur hamare pujya pitaji ko to bas mauka chahiye tha unhone bhi hath saaf kiya (( adi harami mai maar nahi khaunga is baar, (ha malum hai chal aage likhne de ) bsdk ))

Komal- isiliye to keh rahi hu pehle confirm karne do..

Aniket- ha theek hai ye kaam tumhare jimme tab tak mai ye sochta hu ke avi ki heroine kaun hai

Wahi dusri taraf sanjana kafi khush thi, aniket ne use ache se samjhaya tha ke filhaal avi ki life me koi aur ladki nahi hai aur is waqt wo canteen me avi ki raah dekhte huye baithi thi itne me jyoti waha aa gayi

Jyoti- kya sanjana madam, kaha ho aaj kal kya chal raha hai

Sanjana- kaha kya, yahi hu, bas avi ki raah dekh rahi thi

Sanjana ki baat sunkar jyoti ne ek bhadi huyi muskan di

Sanjana- kya hua tu aise kyu hasi..

Jyoti- kaha kya, kuch to nahi

Sanjana- fir hasi kyu

Jyoti- wo aisa hai na tu jiski yaha raah dekh rahi hai wo waha kisi heroine se gulugulu karne me laga hua hai, najane kitni der se..

Sanjana- kaun ? avi ? ho hi nahi sakta

Jyoti- maine abhi khud apni aankho se dekha hai, wow aha parking me us heroine se baate kar raha tha, maine hi kiya to dekha tak nahi, itna kya khola ladki me ki dost hi na dikhe..

Sanjana- jyoti agar ye majak hua na to acha nahi hoga samjhi na

Jyoti- mai kyu majak karungi, khud jake dekh le, aur sambhal ke jana pata chala kuch or hi dekhne mil jaye

Jyoti ne aag to laga di thi aur sanjana bhadak gayi thi, wow aha se uthi aur jaldi jaldi parking ki or jane lagi, avi kabhi kisi ladki se baat nahi karta tha aur ye kaun hai jise wo parking me lejake baate kar raha hai, sanjana yahi soch rahi thi aur use dur se hi avi kisi ladki se baat karta hua dikh gaya ayr ab to uska para satve aasman par tha.. sanjana jhatke ke sath waha pahuchi aur gajri

Sanjana- AVI..!!

Avi bhi palta aur bola

Avi- sanjana..

Avi aage kuch bolta isse pehle hi wo ladki sanjana se boli

Ladki- hum yaha jara kuch important baat kar rahe hai tum baad me aana..

Bas isi ki to kami thi ab to sanjana se gussa control nahi ho raha tha.

Sanjana- tu kaun mujhe bolne wali aur waise bhi mai isse baat kar rahi hu

Ab avi kuch bolta isse pehle wo ladki avi se boli

Ladki- tu ek shabd bhi nahi bolega

Ab avi ekdum chup aur us ladki ka avi ko aisa bola hua sanjana ko pasand nahi aaya

Sanjana- tu hai kaun use chup karane wali

Tab wo ladki sanjana ko samjhate huye boli

Ladki- tum jao abhi yaha se baad me baat krna kaha na..

Sanjana gusse me avi ka hath pakadne ja hi rahi thi ke us ladki ne sanjana ka hath pakad liya aur daat piste huye boli

Ladki- tujhe ek baar ache se bataya samajh nahi aaya kya ?

Sanjana bhi bhadki huyi thi

Sanjana- mera hath chhod

Dono ladkiya jidd par addi huyi thi

Ladki- sidhe sidhe yaha se jao tab chhodungi

Sanjana- iska anjaam acha nahi hoga

Ladki- ha chal chal bahut dekhe tere jaise..

Sanjana karate champion thi usne gusse me ek hath ghumaya par samne wali bhi koi kacchi khiladi nahi thi usne aasani se sanjana ka waar bachaya aur ghumkar sanjana ka hath pakad kar marod diya aur piche kar diya,

Ye sab itna jaldi hua kea vi ko kuch bolne ka mauka hi nahi mila.. us ladki ne sanjana ka hath jor se marodte huye pucha

Ladki- ab bata tu hai kaun..

Sanjana to chidi huyi thi hi

Sanjana- mai pyaar karti hu isse, tu kaun

Sanjana ki baat sunte hu avi ekdum sunn ho gaya aur aankhe badi karke use dekhne laga, aajtak sanjana ne kabhi aise nahi bola tha, wo ladki hasi aur boli]

Ladki- kya boli.. dobara bol.. tu ye avya ki premika hai kya ?

Sanjana- ha hu mai iski premika, tujhe problem hai kya, tu kaun hai..

Us ladki ne sanjana ka hath chhoda, sanjana ne apna hath sidha kiya aur dobara use maarne ke liye bhagi pat avi ne sanjana ka hath pakad liya.. avi kuch bol raha tha par sanjana sunne ki halat me hi nahi thi akhir us ladki ne hath jode aur boli

Ladki- shant ho jao sanjana, mai komal..

Sanjana- kaun komal aur tera ka sambandh hai avi ke sath..

Komal ne shanti se kaha

Komal- komal aniket rane..

Ye naam sunte hi sanjana ekdun shant ho gayi use samajh aa gaya ki ek to wo sab galat samajh baithi thi aur gusse gusse me usne apne pyaar ki kabuli bhi de di thi..

Komal mand mand muskura rahi thi, kisi tufan ke baad jaisi shanti ho jati hai waise sara mahol shant ho gaya tha koi kuch nahi bol raha tha.. sanjana ne anjane me apne pyaar ka ijhar kar diya tha isiliye wo shant thi aur avi sanjana ki uske liye feelings sunkar shant tha aur akhir me komal boli

Komal- avya, mera kaam to ho gaya mai chalti hu ab, ab tum dono ke beech meri koi jarurat nahi hai.. tum log karo baate

Itna bol ke komal ne sanjana ko aankh mari aur waha se chali gayi

Waise to sanjana ne FB par komal ke photos dekhe the par jyadatar uske shadi ke hi photo the aur ek baar hi dekhe hone ki wajah se wo komal ko pehchan nahi payi aur jyoti ne jis tarah bataya tha uske baad tosawal hi nahi tha ke wo komal ko pehchan leti

Avi ko shuruwat me komal ne chup rehne kyu kaha tha ke use samja nahi tha par baad me dhyan me aaya ke uske muh se sanjana naam sunkar usne use chup rehne kaha tha.. matlb jab usne sanjana ko gusse me dekha tha tabhi wo samajh gayi thi ke sanjana avi ko chahti hai aur wo is baat ko maan le isiliye use uksa rahi thi

Komal ne apna game barabar khel liya tha, sanjana ne to apne pyaar ka ijhar kar diya tha aur ab avi ki bari thi……

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[Punnu]

Update 18​

Komal ne apna kaam kar diya tha, usne sanjana ke muh se hi uski chahat Kabul kara li thi aura b wow aha se chali gayi thi par ye dono yani avi aur sanjana wahi sunn khade the..

Kuch samay tak dono me se koi kuch nahi bola aur akhir me avi bola

Avi- canteen me chal kar baithe ?

Sanjana ne bas ha me gardan hilayi.. dono bagair kuch bole canteen me aakar baithe, chai ka order diya.. ab sanjana se raha nahi gaya aur wo boli

Sanjana- sorry, wo jyoti ne mere dimag me kuch ulti seedhi baate daal di thi, mai komal ko pehchan nahi payi aur usi chakker me ye sab jhol ho gaya..

Avi thoda gambhir awaj me bola

Avi- usme itna react hone jaisa kyat ha ?

Sanjana- tum nahi samjhoge..

Avi- to fir samjhao na, batao samjhake..

Sanjana- kyu? Tum nahi jaante ki maine aise react kyu kiya ?

Avi- Nahi.

Sanjana- baine bata diya tha usi samay..

Avi- tum gusse se thi us waqt.

Sanjana ne avi ke hath par apna hath rakha aur boli

Sanjana- par ab mai gusse me nahi hu, avi mai sach me bahut pyaar karti hu tumse

Avi- hmmmmm..

Sanjana- tumhe nahi bolna hai kuch ?

Par avi kuch nahi bola, wo shant tha aur akhir me sanjana hi boli

Sanjana- dekho avi, mai koi tmhe force nahi kar rahi hu ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karo, ha par itna jarur kahungi ki mai tumse pyaar karti hu kar karti rahungi..

Avi kuch nahi bol raha tha aur akhir me usne lambi saas chhodi aur bola

Avi- sanju tum bahut achi ho, koi bhi asani se tumhare pyaar me pagal ho jaye itni khubsurat ho, par ek baat batau..

Avi ki aankho me pani jama hone laga tha, awaz bhari ho gaya tha, gala bhar aaya tha fir bhi wo bola

Avi- mai tumhare liye sahi nahi hu, mai kisi aur ko chahta hu.. kisi aur se pyaar karta hu..

Avi ki baat sunkar sanjana ko dil par mano bijli giri ho, aisa nahi tha ke wo ye pehle baar sun rahi thi par ye baat avi ke muh se sunkar uske man ko thes pahuchi thi… par..par…par.. itni asani se wo is baat ko jane de wo sanjana thodi hai…

Sanjana- kya mai puch sakti hu ki wo kaun hai ?

Avi- nahi.

Sanjana- tum samajh rahe ho waisa nahi hai, mai isiliye puch rahu huki kya mai tum logo ko sath me lane ke liye koi madad kar sakti hu…

Avi- ye mumkin nahi hai..

Sanjana- kyu mumkin nahi hai, agar tumhara pyaar saccha hai to kya dikkat hai fir ?

Avi bahut bechain tha, kya bolu, kaise bolu use samajh hi nahi aa raha tha fir bhi wo jaise taise bola

Avi- shadi ho chuki hai uski..

Ab sanjana ki halat bhi vichitra ho gayi thi.. use ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ke uski line clear hai ye soch ke khush ho ya avi ko uska pyar nahi mil paya is wajah se dukhi…

Sanjana- fir bhi pyaar karte hi usse ?

Avi- mai usse nahi kehta ki wo bhi mujhse pyaar karte ha par itni baat saaf hai ke usse pyaar karne ke liye mai bhi apne aap ko nahi rok sakta..

(uff ye ek tarfa aashiq )

Sanjana halke se muskurayi aur boli

Sanjana- thank you

Sanjana ka trhank you sun ke avi chauka

Avi- thank you kis liye

Sanjana- meri ek bahut badi duvidha dur karne ke liye

Avi ko kuch samajh me nahi aaya

Avi- kaisi duvidha ?

Sanjana- yahi ki mujhe pyaar karne se koi nahi rok sakta, wo bhi nahi jisse mai pyaar karti hu, isiliye thank you, ab to mai sina taan ke keh sakti hu ki Avi I Love You, I Love you..

Tab avi sanjana ko chup karate huye bola

Avi- ye kya kar rahu ho tum, kya pagalpan hai ye..

Sanjana- agar ye pagalpan hai ti tum pagalo ke sardar ke puraskar ke hakdar ho..

Avi- kuch bhi kya bakwas hai ye..

Sanjana- kuch bhi matlab, khud to usse pyaar karta hai jo jindagi me dobara nahi aane wali aur ulta mujhe pagal bolta hai..

Avi ko sanjana ka point samajh me aa gaya aur wo jaise taise bola

Avi- sorry

Sanjana- acha wo jane do ek baat bata.. saamne wala humse pyaar nahi karta ye baat jaante huye bhi pyaar karne me kya burayi hai..

Avi kuch nahi bola, aur ab sanjana full form me thi kyuki ye ek hi aisa topic tha jana avi ki buddhi uska sath chhod rahi thi aur sanjana mood me aate huye boli

Sanjana- waise maan gaye komal ko, jabardast, jis baat ke bare me mai itne dino se soch rahi thi pal bhar me usko mere muh se wo baat bulwa di, ab kitna mast halka halka lag raha hai, ab mai bindass tumpar pyaar dikha sakti hu

Avi shanti se bola

Avi- par maine abhi kuch bola nahi hai..

Sanjana- ek baat puchu ?

Avi- nahi bola tochup rahegi ?

Sanjana- nope..

Avi- to puch fir..

Sanjana- ye jaante huye bhi ki wo tumhe mahi milegi fir bhi kaise pyaar kar lete ho usse

Avi- kyuki mai pyaar karta hu, uspar apna haq jatane nahi jata..

Sanjana- matlab ?

Avi- matlab wo sirf meri hai, use meri hona hi hoga ye bhavna yani apna haq jatana, wo meri ho ya na ho fir bhi mera usse pyaar karna isko niswarth prem kehte hai.. kisi ne kaha hai, premi ko pa lena hi sabkuch nahi hota, na pa kar bhi pyaar karte rehne ka apna alag hi maja hai..

Sanjana taali bajate huye boli

Sanjana- waah.. kya baat hai.. ek number.. kitna mast bolta hai tu avi.. haay.. ab toi tumhare liye pyaar aur badh gaya hai kyuki tumne aaj prem ka ek naya pehlu samjhaya hai.. I love you avi..

Avi ne apne sar ke hath maar liya aur bola

Avi- sanjana mai tumhe ye batane ki koshish kar raha hu ki mai tumse pyaar nahi karta..

Sanjana bhi befikri se boi

Sanjana- ab usse koi fark nahi padta.. tu pyaar kare ya na kare wo tera problem hai par mai tumse pyaar karti hu, karti rakhungi aur tumse pyaar karne se mujhe tum bhi nahi rok sakte..

Ab avi thoda chidhne laga tha

Avi- ye shudh murkhta hai

Sanjana- tum bhi wahi kar rahe ho

Avi- arey bas kar yaar..

Sanjana- kyu bas karu.. tumhe tumhara pyaar nahi mila to kya mujhe bhi na mile, aisa zaruri to nahi..

Is sawalka jawab avi ke paas nahi thaw o thoda chidhte huye bola

Avi- mai nahi kar sakta tumse pyaar ?

Sanjana- kyu ?

Avi- maine tumhe sab bata diya hai..

Sanjana- tum usse pyaar karo mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai par mujhse pyaar kyu nahi kar sakte.. kyu nahi maante ki wo ab dobara tumhari jindagi ne nahi aayegi.. jindagi k eek mod par tum mile aur uske baad tumhare raste alag ho gaye, wo apne raste nikalo gayi aura b dobara nahi aayegi ye jaante huye bhi tum uski raah kyu dekhna chahte ho..

Avi- mujhe nahi pata

Avi ne baat taalte huye kaha par sanjana bhi kam nahi thi, wo itne asani se aaj avi ko chhodne wali nahi thi

Sanjana- tumhe pata nahi ya pata karna nahi chahte, maanti hu insaan apna pehla pyaar nahi bhul sakta par iska matlab ye nahi ke jindagi bhar usi baat ko leke baitha rahe..tumhe aage badhna hoga.. tumhe bhi pyaar pane ka adhikar hai, come on move on.. aur tumhe tumhara pyaar nahi mila isiliye mujhe mera pehla pyaar china chahte ho kya ?

Avi kuch nahi bol raha tha

Sanjana- aur agar usi ne tumhe aage badhne keh diya to move on karoge ?

Avi- matlab ?

Sanjana- matlab wo kaun hai batao mujhe mai baat karti hu usse tumhe samjhane bolti hu..

Avi jhatke ke sath khada hua aur table par apne dono hath patakte huye bola

Avi- khabardar agar usko kuch bhi kahat aur ye bahut ho gaya ilu ilu mera piche chhod de ha.. mai kisi ke hath nahi aane wala..

Itna bol ke avi waha se nikal gaya aur sanjana mand mand muskurate huye boli

Sanjana- wo to ab possible nahi hai.. bhagwan bhi agar niche aa jaye na tab bhi mujhe tumhe chahne se nahi rok sakte.. raha sawal tumhara to tumhe to mai nahi chhodungi aur ek din aisa aayega ki tum khud mera pyaar swikaroge..

Sanjana ki aankho me ek alag ki chamak dikhai de rahi thi aur chehre par confidence…..

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Update 19​

Idhar komal college se nikli aur sodha aniket ke paas dukan me pahuchi aur aniket use dekhte hi bola

Aniket- aao aao malkin sahiba, aaj aap direct dukan me ?

Dukan me thodi gardi thi, log the, tab komal boli

Komal- suniye, jara bahar aaiye na, mujhe baat karni hai kuch

Aniket- Suniye..! direct suniye..! aay haay aise bulaogi to mai paatal me bhi aa jau, don’t worry sabko pata hai kitna darta hu mai tumse, itni ijjat mat do ab warna sabko lagega mai jhuth bolta hu unke samne..

Tab komal apni aankhe badi karte huye boli

Komal- ho gaya, ab baahar aaoge

Aniket- bas abhi aaya rani sarkar..

Itna bol ke aniket baahar aaya aur dono gaadi me jakar baithe… komal bahut exited thi

Komal- mai na aaj avi ke college me gayi thi

Ye sun ke anikiet bhi excited ho gaya aur bola

Aniket- kya bola avya…

Uske baad komal ne aniket ko sara kissa bataya jike sun ke aniket ekdum khush ho gaya

Aniket- ek number kaam kiya hai kammo.. kya baat hai..! aaj mai itna khush hu ke direct tajmahal tumhare naam karta hu..

Komal- ha, aur tajmahal kya narayanrao rane ka hai ?

Aniket- wo jane do abhi, maine kaha thga na maine sanjana ki aankho me dekha tha, aur wo mujhe bana rahi thi, boli dost ke bare me baat kar rahi hai..

Aniket ki badbad shuru hi thi par komal kuch soch rahi thi, fir komal boli

Komal-sanjana ne maan liya ki wo avi ke pyaar karti hai par avi, avi kuch bhi nahi bola

Aniket- kyu?

Komal- shayad sanjana jo bol rahi thi wo sach ho avi kisi se pyaar karta ho, kyuki agar aisa na hota to avi bhi kuch na kuch react jarur karta..

Aniket- mera na is mamle me dimag chalna hi band ho gaya hai, ek kaam karta hu kal hi subah harami ko leke aata hu aur do kaan ke niche baja ke puchta hu ki ye kya natak hai…

Komal- maine to mera kaam kar diya aur wqo successful bhi ho gaya, Mr. Aniket Rane ab tumhari bari hai dekhte hai jya jhande gaadte ho tum

Aniket- O rani sarkar, challenge nahi karne ka, maine man bana liya to kal ke kal un dono ki shadi bhi karwa sakta hu

Komal- aisa kya ? shakal dekhi hai apni, bade aaye shadi karane wale.. aajtak wo kisse pyaar karta ha ye to pata nahi chala tumhe aur khas dost ho na tum uske..

Aniket- wo aajtak mai tumhar pyaar me khoya hua tha isiliye dhyan hi nahi diya..

Komal- theek hai theek hai, par ab to lag jao kaam pe

Aniket- wo to mai karunga hu par uske pehle, Shabass kammo, aaj tum sahi hisab se Rane khandan ki bahu lag rahi ho..

Komal- par jo bhi karoge dhyan se karna, wo sanjana ke pitaji police hai aur love story me maar khane ka itihas hai tumhara..

Aniket- kammo tu darr rahi hai ya dara rahi hai..

Komal- dono..

Aniket- Don’t Worry hamare bapu hai na sa,bhalne ke liye.. pichli baar bhi to sambhal liya tha unhone aur Avya ke liye kuch bhi

Uske baad komal ghar aur aniket dukan me chale gaye

Wahi dusri taraf Avi tension me aa gaya tha.. sanjana ka use tension nahi tha asal tension ye tha ke komal ko ye sab pata chal gaya tha matlab aniket ko bhi pata chal hi chukka tha aura b use bas ek hi darr tha ke kuch bhi ho jaye komal ka naam bahar nahi aa chahiye, sanjana ne use dharmsankat me daal diya tha aur ab isse bachne ke liye use bas ek hi rasta najar aa raha tha wo tha sanjana ke pyaar ko accept karna jisse koi bhi uske past ke bare ne nahi puchega par wo ye karne ke liye ready nahi tha

Wo ab bhi komal ko dilo jaan se chahta tha par ab komal aur uska sath aana mumkin nahi tha.. halanki wo bhi nahi chahta tha ke komal aur aniket kabhi bhi alag ho wo un dono ke liye khus tha par jhuth muth hi sahi wo komal ki jagah kisi ko nahi de sakta tha aur isiliye wo sanjana ke propose ka jawab nahi dena chahta tha..kya kare kya na kare samajh hi nahi aa raha tha aur ab wo aniket ko kaise face karega ye use sochta tha.. use aniket ka swabhav ache se pata tha uske dimag me koi baat aa gayi to wo hath dho ke nahi balki naha dho ke uske piche lag jata tha

Aise me ek pal wo bhi aaya jab avi ko sanjana ka I Love you bolna yaad aaya aur uske dil ke chote me kone me ek khusi ki lehar daud gayi aur aankho samne sanjana ke wo shabd

“tumhe tumhara pyaar nahi mila to mujhse mera pyaar to pane do”

Ye shabh mano kisi hatode ki tarah uske dimag par prahar kar rahe the aur agle hi pal usne apne dimag se sare khayal nikal diye

Avi- nahi nahi.. mai komal ki jagah kisi ko bhi nahi de sakta

Aur avi ne sakht bane rehne ka faisla kar liya par kahi na kahi wo bhi ye baat jaanta the ke uske is decision ko surang lagne wali hai

Agle din avi hamesha ki tarah college pahucha aur canteen me jake baitha tab sanjana bhi waha aayi aur halke se boli

Sanjana- good morning may love..

Sanjana ki baat sun ke avi thoda chauka…

Avi- oye, sanju kya boli tu ?

Sanjana bhi kandhe jhatakte huye boli

Sanjana- kaha, kuch bhi to nahi

Avi- abhi abhi kuch bola tune..

Sanjana- don’t worry kisi ne nahi suna aur waise bhi tum jo mere liye ho wahi bola hai..

Waise dekha jaye to sanjana ke muh se may love sun ke kahi na kahi avi ko bhi acha laga tha par usne ye baat jahir nahi hone di aur thoda chidhte huye bola

Avi- stop it..! tumko nahi lagta tum jabardasti kar rahi ho ?

Sanjana- jabardasti aur mai ? bilkul nahi.. maine tumse kaha ki tum bhi mujhe I love you bolo, aur don’t worry mai aisa bolungi bhi nahi, kyuki mujhe yakin hai ek na ek din tum khud mujhe ye baat bologe, khudse..

Avi- aur agar mai tab bhi nahi bola to

Sanjana- to mai raah dekhungi

Avi- tum paagal ho.

Sanjana- yours only..

Avi ko kya kare samajhg nahi aa raha tha aur itni baat bhi sach thi ke sanjana ke bagair use bhi chain nahi milta tha isiliye wo use taal bhi nahi raha tha aur akhir me wo pareshan hote huye bola

Avi- tu idhar meri jaan kha rahi hai aur udhar komal ne anya ko sab bata bhi diya hoga aur anya matlab rakshas hai tum nahi janti use..

Sanjana bhi jaldi se bol gayi

Sanjana- kuch bhi mat bolo bahut acha ladka hai wo..

Ye sunte hi avi ko ek jordar dhakka laga

Avi- matlab ? aur tere ko ye kaise pata

Sanjana- kaise matlab ? mai mili hu usse ek baar

Avi ne ye sun ke apna matha peet liya

Avi- khatam..tata..bye bye.. agaya mai ab.. ab kuch nahi ho sakta..

Sanjana- aise kyu bol rahe ho.. kya hua

Avi- tumko pata nahi hai anya kya chiz hai.. wo bhoot hai bhoot auyr ab ye bhoot mere piche lagne wala hai

Sanjana ekdum khud hote huye boli

Sanjana- sach me..!

Avi- hao, sahi me, pata nahi tumko kaunse muhurat me usse milne ki baat sujhi thi..

Sanjana- fir kya karti mai.. tumse kuch bhi pucho to tum koi jawab side tarah se nahi dete the to usse mil li

Avi- kya kya bola usko tumne?

Sanjana- kuch khas nahi bas usse itna pucha tha ke kya tum kisi se pyaar karte ho bas, sorry

Sanjana ne apne kaan pakad liye aur avi ko hase ya roye ye hi samajh nahi aa raha tha

Avi- vaat lag gayi matlab puri

Sanjana- use bhi pata nahi tha ki tum kisi se pyaar karte ho, avi sach sach batana tumne bas mujhe taalne ke liye hi to kisi ladki be bare me kahani nahi banayi na ? kyuki aisa kuch hota to aniket ko pata hota aur don’t worry maine use nahi bataya ki mai tumse pyaar karti hu bol diya ke meri dost chahti hai tumhe

Avi- waah !! shabass!! Tumne bola aur anya ne mana, wo bahut pahuchi huyi chiz hai, sirf T bhi bola to wo pehchan leta hai ke T table ka hai ya Talwar ka aur usne bhi tumne ye sab komal ke samne bola hai aur komal ko malum matlab anya ko malum.. ho gaya kalyan

Itne ne avi ka phone bajne laga

Avi- shaitan ka naam liya shaitan hajir, anya ka hi phone hai

Avi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ke phone par kya bole.. usne jaise taise phone uthaya aur awaj normal karte huye bola

Avi- hi anya kaisa hai bhai..

Udhar se awaj aaya

Aniket- mai ekdum handsome, hamesha ke jaisa tu bol kidhar hai ?

Avi- mai to class me hu lecture ke liye aaya hu

Aniket- ha canteen me tere baap ne lecture rakha hai na haramjade..

Avi aage kuch bolta isse pehle hi sanjana ne avi ko hatho se ishara karke piche dekhne kaha, avi ne mud ke dekha to aniket uske piche haste huye khada tha…..

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