Fantasy Un-Deikhi Muhabbat (2)

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Index​	Family Introduction​
Main Character Introduction in Detail​	Some Dialogue​

 

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Update Friday night

 

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update late night

 

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thnx

 

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Yeh achcha h DD Bach gayi warna tow in Longo n halat buri ker di thi
Yeh jo ladka yahi fault h yahi kia dhara sab h jisne pyar ka jhansa de ker yaha laya
Baherhal dekhte h Jonh kia detail nikalta h or Aly kia halat kerta h iski
Behtareen shaandar update bhai

thnx bhai

 

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Update--39​

Mein: Mujhey es ladkey main hi Fault nazer aa raha hai ab es ki detail mill jaen tou pata chaley ga.

After 1 Hour…….

Mein: Haan bolo Jhon kia pata chala.

Jhon: Sir es ka naam Shahzaib hai aur yeh 5 saal pehley January k aakhri haftey main Pakistan wapis aaya tha kch Family issue tha ek baat aur pata chali hai k jis University main yeh perhta tha usi University main DD ne admission lia tha aur esi wajah se yeh usi university k kisi event main wahan gya tha jis main DD ki mulaqat es sey hui thi tab se hi baat cheet chalu hai yahan yeh apni Family k sath rehta hai es k ghar main es k maa baap aur chota bhai hai yeh Job krta hai ek Company main aur high post pe hai achi khasi income hai.

Mein: Koi aesi baat jo es pe shak krwa sakey.

Jhon: Shak kia sir esi ne kia hai yeh sab.

Mein: Kesay.

Jhon: Sir aap ne DD ki wajah se jin Ladkon ko jaan se maar dia tha usi main es ka bhai bhi tha jo k us waqt bach gya tha aur Coma main chala gya tha abhi 2 mahiney pehley hi who Coma se wapis aaya hai.

Jhon ki baat sun k Mueed aur Imran tou shocked huey hi mujhey bhi jabardast jhatka laga kiun k mein ne jis trhah se maara tha us lehaaz se kisi ka bach jana yeh mumkin hi nai hai lekin yeh bach gya es ka matlab yehi hai k us waqt yeh thoda hi affect hua tha ab mujhey yeh samjh nai aa rahi thi k Shahzaib ne kesay DD ko yahan bulwaya bas yehi pata krna tha.

Mein: Es ka address mujhey send kr.

Jhon: G bhai.

Mein: Mein ja k aata hn tum dono DD k pass rehna aur Jhon tum yahan ki security deikho koi bhi DD k room waley area main nai jaey ga.

Jhon: Theek hai bhai.

Mein wahan se nikla aur Shazaib k ghar ki traf nikal gya takreeban 30 min main mein us k ghar pounch gya ghar pe ja k bell di tou kisi aadmi ne derwaza khola.

Aadmi: G kis sey milna hai aap ko.

Mein: G mera naam Aly hai aur mein Haris ka dost hn mujhey pata chala k who theek ho gya hai tou mein milney chala aaya.

Aadmi: Aao beta ander aao.

Mein ander aaya aur hall main beith gya who Aadmi apni family ko bula laya us ki BV aur chotey betey ko bhi bula laya jo mujhey deikhtey hi derney laga usey deikh k us ka baap aur maa preshan ho gaey k achanak usey kia hua hai.

Mein: Aap ka bara beta nai aaya uncle.

Aadmi: Who bahir gya hai aata hi ho ga.

Mein: (Haris se) Aur janab kia haal hai mein ne suna tu Coma se bahir aa gya hai mujhey bataya hi nai tu ne.

Haris: (dertey huey) Deikho mujhey kch mat krna pehley hi tum ne itna mara hai k 5 saal coma main raha hn ab kia leney aaye ho yahan.

Apney betey ki baat sun k us k maa baap ko jhatka laga k yeh kia bol raha hai abhi kch hota tou un ka bara beta Shahzaib aa gya mujhey deikh k who confused ho gya k mein kon hn aur yahan kia kr raha hn.

Shahzaib: G aap kon.

Mein: Mein wohi hn jis ki DD ko tu ne mout k muh main bheijh dia.

Shahzaib: (confused) Kon DD.

Mein: Kon DD? Pehley tou tu ne Meri DD ko pyaar k jaal main phansaya doosra unhey darindon k hawaley kr dia aur marney k liey shod dia ab pouch raha hai k kon DD.

Shahzaib ko samjh aa gai thi k mein kis ki baat kr raha hn aur who heran tha k mujhey kesay pata chala es ka matlab yehi tha k meri DD zinda hai mari nai hai.

Shahzaib: Ohhh tou who bach gai usi ne tumhey yahan bheija hai lekin us ka bhai tou koi aur hai jis ka naam Mueed hai tum kon ho.

Mein: Mein bhi us ka bhai hi hn aur mein hi tha jis ne 5 saal pehley DD ka Rape krney ki koshish krney walon ko jaan se maar dia tha lekin mujhey yeh samjh nai aaye tera bhai bach kesay gya jab k baqi sab marey gaey.

Aadmi: yeh kia ho raha hai kon sa Rape kon mara gya yeh sab kia hai.

Mein: Mein batata hn aap ko drasal Meri DD ko 5 Ladkon ne kidnap kia tha aur un ka rape krna chaha tha jis main aap ka chota beta bhi tha mujhey jesay hi pata chala k DD ghaib hn tou mein un ki location pe pounch gya kiun k mein apni Family pe bht kari nazer rakhta hn mein wahan gya tou who 5 ladkey DD ka rape krney ki koshish kr rahey they mein ne unhey jaan se maar dia jis main aap ka chota beta bhi shamil tha.

Meri baat sun k who aadmi aur us ki BV shocked ho gaey aur apney chotey betey ko deikhney lagey jo apni nazrein neechay kiey huey tha who aadmi chal k us k pass gya.

Aadmi: Kia jo yeh bol raha hai who sach hai Bol jaldi se kia jo es ne bola who sach hai Bol.

Haris: G sach hai.

Yeh suntey hi us k baap ne usey zor dar thapper mara who pehley hi kamzor tha itney saal coma main rehney k baad zor ka thapper jab usey laga tou who ladkhada k girney laga tou us k barey bhai ne usey pakad lia.

Shahzaib: Yeh aap kia kr rahey hn baba us ne isey jaan se marney ki koshish ki aur aap apney hi betey ko mar rahey hn.

Aadmi: Tu chup kr jo es ne kia who tujhey nazer nai aa raha ager mujhey pata chalta tou mein khud isey jaan se maar deta (mujh se) Es ne kia kya hai.

Mein: Es ne apney bhai ka badla leney k liey meri Behan k sath jhutey pyaar ka Drama kia aur usey jaan se maar dalney k liey us Family ko soump dia jis k betey ko mein ne us waqt mara tha ab who Hospital main hn aur behosh hn.

Aadmi: (apney betey ko thapper martey huey) Ab yeh sab kia hai tu ne yeh sab kiun kia.

Shahzaib: Mein ne koi pyaar ka Drama nai kia tha bulkeh mein sach main usey pyaar krta tha us waqt mujhey maloom nai tha k merey bhai k es halat ka zimedaar yeh ladki hai jab Haris Coma se theek hua tha tou ek din who mera mobile istemaal kr raha tha us main meri aur Alishba ki tasveerein theen jinhey deikh k who ghabraney laga derney laga phr mein ne us sey poucha tou us ne mujhey sab bata dia tab mein ne us sey badla leney ki sochi.

Mein: Tumhara bhai kesey bach gya yeh mein nai janta kiun k mein jisey maarun who kabhi bhi zinda nai bachta lekin tumhara bhai bach gya es liey mein ab kch nai kahun ga isey lekin tumhey mein nai shod sakta kiun k tum ne meri DD ko nuqsaan pounchaya hai es liey ab yeh tumhey decide krna hai k tumhey apney maa baap bhai k samney marna hai ya kaheen aur kiun k ab tumhey marna tou hai decide kr lo.

Aurat: Aesay kesay maar dalo gey hum Police ko bulaen gey.

Mein: Djævel ko police tou kia duniya ki koi takat nai rok sakti.

 

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Update posted

 

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Update--39​

Mein: Mujhey es ladkey main hi Fault nazer aa raha hai ab es ki detail mill jaen tou pata chaley ga.

After 1 Hour…….

Mein: Haan bolo Jhon kia pata chala.

Jhon: Sir es ka naam Shahzaib hai aur yeh 5 saal pehley January k aakhri haftey main Pakistan wapis aaya tha kch Family issue tha ek baat aur pata chali hai k jis University main yeh perhta tha usi University main DD ne admission lia tha aur esi wajah se yeh usi university k kisi event main wahan gya tha jis main DD ki mulaqat es sey hui thi tab se hi baat cheet chalu hai yahan yeh apni Family k sath rehta hai es k ghar main es k maa baap aur chota bhai hai yeh Job krta hai ek Company main aur high post pe hai achi khasi income hai.

Mein: Koi aesi baat jo es pe shak krwa sakey.

Jhon: Shak kia sir esi ne kia hai yeh sab.

Mein: Kesay.

Jhon: Sir aap ne DD ki wajah se jin Ladkon ko jaan se maar dia tha usi main es ka bhai bhi tha jo k us waqt bach gya tha aur Coma main chala gya tha abhi 2 mahiney pehley hi who Coma se wapis aaya hai.

Jhon ki baat sun k Mueed aur Imran tou shocked huey hi mujhey bhi jabardast jhatka laga kiun k mein ne jis trhah se maara tha us lehaaz se kisi ka bach jana yeh mumkin hi nai hai lekin yeh bach gya es ka matlab yehi hai k us waqt yeh thoda hi affect hua tha ab mujhey yeh samjh nai aa rahi thi k Shahzaib ne kesay DD ko yahan bulwaya bas yehi pata krna tha.

Mein: Es ka address mujhey send kr.

Jhon: G bhai.

Mein: Mein ja k aata hn tum dono DD k pass rehna aur Jhon tum yahan ki security deikho koi bhi DD k room waley area main nai jaey ga.

Jhon: Theek hai bhai.

Mein wahan se nikla aur Shazaib k ghar ki traf nikal gya takreeban 30 min main mein us k ghar pounch gya ghar pe ja k bell di tou kisi aadmi ne derwaza khola.

Aadmi: G kis sey milna hai aap ko.

Mein: G mera naam Aly hai aur mein Haris ka dost hn mujhey pata chala k who theek ho gya hai tou mein milney chala aaya.

Aadmi: Aao beta ander aao.

Mein ander aaya aur hall main beith gya who Aadmi apni family ko bula laya us ki BV aur chotey betey ko bhi bula laya jo mujhey deikhtey hi derney laga usey deikh k us ka baap aur maa preshan ho gaey k achanak usey kia hua hai.

Mein: Aap ka bara beta nai aaya uncle.

Aadmi: Who bahir gya hai aata hi ho ga.

Mein: (Haris se) Aur janab kia haal hai mein ne suna tu Coma se bahir aa gya hai mujhey bataya hi nai tu ne.

Haris: (dertey huey) Deikho mujhey kch mat krna pehley hi tum ne itna mara hai k 5 saal coma main raha hn ab kia leney aaye ho yahan.

Apney betey ki baat sun k us k maa baap ko jhatka laga k yeh kia bol raha hai abhi kch hota tou un ka bara beta Shahzaib aa gya mujhey deikh k who confused ho gya k mein kon hn aur yahan kia kr raha hn.

Shahzaib: G aap kon.

Mein: Mein wohi hn jis ki DD ko tu ne mout k muh main bheijh dia.

Shahzaib: (confused) Kon DD.

Mein: Kon DD? Pehley tou tu ne Meri DD ko pyaar k jaal main phansaya doosra unhey darindon k hawaley kr dia aur marney k liey shod dia ab pouch raha hai k kon DD.

Shahzaib ko samjh aa gai thi k mein kis ki baat kr raha hn aur who heran tha k mujhey kesay pata chala es ka matlab yehi tha k meri DD zinda hai mari nai hai.

Shahzaib: Ohhh tou who bach gai usi ne tumhey yahan bheija hai lekin us ka bhai tou koi aur hai jis ka naam Mueed hai tum kon ho.

Mein: Mein bhi us ka bhai hi hn aur mein hi tha jis ne 5 saal pehley DD ka Rape krney ki koshish krney walon ko jaan se maar dia tha lekin mujhey yeh samjh nai aaye tera bhai bach kesay gya jab k baqi sab marey gaey.

Aadmi: yeh kia ho raha hai kon sa Rape kon mara gya yeh sab kia hai.

Mein: Mein batata hn aap ko drasal Meri DD ko 5 Ladkon ne kidnap kia tha aur un ka rape krna chaha tha jis main aap ka chota beta bhi tha mujhey jesay hi pata chala k DD ghaib hn tou mein un ki location pe pounch gya kiun k mein apni Family pe bht kari nazer rakhta hn mein wahan gya tou who 5 ladkey DD ka rape krney ki koshish kr rahey they mein ne unhey jaan se maar dia jis main aap ka chota beta bhi shamil tha.

Meri baat sun k who aadmi aur us ki BV shocked ho gaey aur apney chotey betey ko deikhney lagey jo apni nazrein neechay kiey huey tha who aadmi chal k us k pass gya.

Aadmi: Kia jo yeh bol raha hai who sach hai Bol jaldi se kia jo es ne bola who sach hai Bol.

Haris: G sach hai.

Yeh suntey hi us k baap ne usey zor dar thapper mara who pehley hi kamzor tha itney saal coma main rehney k baad zor ka thapper jab usey laga tou who ladkhada k girney laga tou us k barey bhai ne usey pakad lia.

Shahzaib: Yeh aap kia kr rahey hn baba us ne isey jaan se marney ki koshish ki aur aap apney hi betey ko mar rahey hn.

Aadmi: Tu chup kr jo es ne kia who tujhey nazer nai aa raha ager mujhey pata chalta tou mein khud isey jaan se maar deta (mujh se) Es ne kia kya hai.

Mein: Es ne apney bhai ka badla leney k liey meri Behan k sath jhutey pyaar ka Drama kia aur usey jaan se maar dalney k liey us Family ko soump dia jis k betey ko mein ne us waqt mara tha ab who Hospital main hn aur behosh hn.

Aadmi: (apney betey ko thapper martey huey) Ab yeh sab kia hai tu ne yeh sab kiun kia.

Shahzaib: Mein ne koi pyaar ka Drama nai kia tha bulkeh mein sach main usey pyaar krta tha us waqt mujhey maloom nai tha k merey bhai k es halat ka zimedaar yeh ladki hai jab Haris Coma se theek hua tha tou ek din who mera mobile istemaal kr raha tha us main meri aur Alishba ki tasveerein theen jinhey deikh k who ghabraney laga derney laga phr mein ne us sey poucha tou us ne mujhey sab bata dia tab mein ne us sey badla leney ki sochi.

Mein: Tumhara bhai kesey bach gya yeh mein nai janta kiun k mein jisey maarun who kabhi bhi zinda nai bachta lekin tumhara bhai bach gya es liey mein ab kch nai kahun ga isey lekin tumhey mein nai shod sakta kiun k tum ne meri DD ko nuqsaan pounchaya hai es liey ab yeh tumhey decide krna hai k tumhey apney maa baap bhai k samney marna hai ya kaheen aur kiun k ab tumhey marna tou hai decide kr lo.

Aurat: Aesay kesay maar dalo gey hum Police ko bulaen gey.

Mein: Djævel ko police tou kia duniya ki koi takat nai rok sakti.

 

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Update Thursday raat ko

 

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sorry
was busy in problems update friday raat ko

 

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Update--39​

Mein: Mujhey es ladkey main hi Fault nazer aa raha hai ab es ki detail mill jaen tou pata chaley ga.

After 1 Hour…….

Mein: Haan bolo Jhon kia pata chala.

Jhon: Sir es ka naam Shahzaib hai aur yeh 5 saal pehley January k aakhri haftey main Pakistan wapis aaya tha kch Family issue tha ek baat aur pata chali hai k jis University main yeh perhta tha usi University main DD ne admission lia tha aur esi wajah se yeh usi university k kisi event main wahan gya tha jis main DD ki mulaqat es sey hui thi tab se hi baat cheet chalu hai yahan yeh apni Family k sath rehta hai es k ghar main es k maa baap aur chota bhai hai yeh Job krta hai ek Company main aur high post pe hai achi khasi income hai.

Mein: Koi aesi baat jo es pe shak krwa sakey.

Jhon: Shak kia sir esi ne kia hai yeh sab.

Mein: Kesay.

Jhon: Sir aap ne DD ki wajah se jin Ladkon ko jaan se maar dia tha usi main es ka bhai bhi tha jo k us waqt bach gya tha aur Coma main chala gya tha abhi 2 mahiney pehley hi who Coma se wapis aaya hai.

Jhon ki baat sun k Mueed aur Imran tou shocked huey hi mujhey bhi jabardast jhatka laga kiun k mein ne jis trhah se maara tha us lehaaz se kisi ka bach jana yeh mumkin hi nai hai lekin yeh bach gya es ka matlab yehi hai k us waqt yeh thoda hi affect hua tha ab mujhey yeh samjh nai aa rahi thi k Shahzaib ne kesay DD ko yahan bulwaya bas yehi pata krna tha.

Mein: Es ka address mujhey send kr.

Jhon: G bhai.

Mein: Mein ja k aata hn tum dono DD k pass rehna aur Jhon tum yahan ki security deikho koi bhi DD k room waley area main nai jaey ga.

Jhon: Theek hai bhai.

Mein wahan se nikla aur Shazaib k ghar ki traf nikal gya takreeban 30 min main mein us k ghar pounch gya ghar pe ja k bell di tou kisi aadmi ne derwaza khola.

Aadmi: G kis sey milna hai aap ko.

Mein: G mera naam Aly hai aur mein Haris ka dost hn mujhey pata chala k who theek ho gya hai tou mein milney chala aaya.

Aadmi: Aao beta ander aao.

Mein ander aaya aur hall main beith gya who Aadmi apni family ko bula laya us ki BV aur chotey betey ko bhi bula laya jo mujhey deikhtey hi derney laga usey deikh k us ka baap aur maa preshan ho gaey k achanak usey kia hua hai.

Mein: Aap ka bara beta nai aaya uncle.

Aadmi: Who bahir gya hai aata hi ho ga.

Mein: (Haris se) Aur janab kia haal hai mein ne suna tu Coma se bahir aa gya hai mujhey bataya hi nai tu ne.

Haris: (dertey huey) Deikho mujhey kch mat krna pehley hi tum ne itna mara hai k 5 saal coma main raha hn ab kia leney aaye ho yahan.

Apney betey ki baat sun k us k maa baap ko jhatka laga k yeh kia bol raha hai abhi kch hota tou un ka bara beta Shahzaib aa gya mujhey deikh k who confused ho gya k mein kon hn aur yahan kia kr raha hn.

Shahzaib: G aap kon.

Mein: Mein wohi hn jis ki DD ko tu ne mout k muh main bheijh dia.

Shahzaib: (confused) Kon DD.

Mein: Kon DD? Pehley tou tu ne Meri DD ko pyaar k jaal main phansaya doosra unhey darindon k hawaley kr dia aur marney k liey shod dia ab pouch raha hai k kon DD.

Shahzaib ko samjh aa gai thi k mein kis ki baat kr raha hn aur who heran tha k mujhey kesay pata chala es ka matlab yehi tha k meri DD zinda hai mari nai hai.

Shahzaib: Ohhh tou who bach gai usi ne tumhey yahan bheija hai lekin us ka bhai tou koi aur hai jis ka naam Mueed hai tum kon ho.

Mein: Mein bhi us ka bhai hi hn aur mein hi tha jis ne 5 saal pehley DD ka Rape krney ki koshish krney walon ko jaan se maar dia tha lekin mujhey yeh samjh nai aaye tera bhai bach kesay gya jab k baqi sab marey gaey.

Aadmi: yeh kia ho raha hai kon sa Rape kon mara gya yeh sab kia hai.

Mein: Mein batata hn aap ko drasal Meri DD ko 5 Ladkon ne kidnap kia tha aur un ka rape krna chaha tha jis main aap ka chota beta bhi tha mujhey jesay hi pata chala k DD ghaib hn tou mein un ki location pe pounch gya kiun k mein apni Family pe bht kari nazer rakhta hn mein wahan gya tou who 5 ladkey DD ka rape krney ki koshish kr rahey they mein ne unhey jaan se maar dia jis main aap ka chota beta bhi shamil tha.

Meri baat sun k who aadmi aur us ki BV shocked ho gaey aur apney chotey betey ko deikhney lagey jo apni nazrein neechay kiey huey tha who aadmi chal k us k pass gya.

Aadmi: Kia jo yeh bol raha hai who sach hai Bol jaldi se kia jo es ne bola who sach hai Bol.

Haris: G sach hai.

Yeh suntey hi us k baap ne usey zor dar thapper mara who pehley hi kamzor tha itney saal coma main rehney k baad zor ka thapper jab usey laga tou who ladkhada k girney laga tou us k barey bhai ne usey pakad lia.

Shahzaib: Yeh aap kia kr rahey hn baba us ne isey jaan se marney ki koshish ki aur aap apney hi betey ko mar rahey hn.

Aadmi: Tu chup kr jo es ne kia who tujhey nazer nai aa raha ager mujhey pata chalta tou mein khud isey jaan se maar deta (mujh se) Es ne kia kya hai.

Mein: Es ne apney bhai ka badla leney k liey meri Behan k sath jhutey pyaar ka Drama kia aur usey jaan se maar dalney k liey us Family ko soump dia jis k betey ko mein ne us waqt mara tha ab who Hospital main hn aur behosh hn.

Aadmi: (apney betey ko thapper martey huey) Ab yeh sab kia hai tu ne yeh sab kiun kia.

Shahzaib: Mein ne koi pyaar ka Drama nai kia tha bulkeh mein sach main usey pyaar krta tha us waqt mujhey maloom nai tha k merey bhai k es halat ka zimedaar yeh ladki hai jab Haris Coma se theek hua tha tou ek din who mera mobile istemaal kr raha tha us main meri aur Alishba ki tasveerein theen jinhey deikh k who ghabraney laga derney laga phr mein ne us sey poucha tou us ne mujhey sab bata dia tab mein ne us sey badla leney ki sochi.

Mein: Tumhara bhai kesey bach gya yeh mein nai janta kiun k mein jisey maarun who kabhi bhi zinda nai bachta lekin tumhara bhai bach gya es liey mein ab kch nai kahun ga isey lekin tumhey mein nai shod sakta kiun k tum ne meri DD ko nuqsaan pounchaya hai es liey ab yeh tumhey decide krna hai k tumhey apney maa baap bhai k samney marna hai ya kaheen aur kiun k ab tumhey marna tou hai decide kr lo.

Aurat: Aesay kesay maar dalo gey hum Police ko bulaen gey.

Mein: Djævel ko police tou kia duniya ki koi takat nai rok sakti.

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