Fantasy UNCAGED ( BEWARE THE BEAST WITHIN)

[BlooDBath175]

Characters Of Story​

Hero of story

Mouriya Rajput

Real Mother & Father of hero

INDRAJEET and NILOFER

Mouriya's Step mother and step father Step sister

VIJAY RAJPUT
KANCHAN RAJPUT
GOURI RAJPUT

Hero's pack name or Vijay pack name and details

NIGHT WARRIOR

Vijay is Alpha of pack

Kanchan is Luna of pack

Sandeep singh is Zeta of pack

Suraj chowhan is Gamma of pack

NIGHT WARRIOR PACK & MOON LIGHT PACK are allies

Information of MOON LIGHT PACK

Rajat Chandel is Alpha of pack

Rinku chandel is Luna of pack

Shivam chandel is son of Rajat and Rinku

Enemy pack details

Pack name :-Bloodhound pack

Bloodhound pack details

Digvijay singh is Alpha of the pack

Devendra Nanchhe is Zeta of pack

Niraj Rana is Gamma of pack

White Rose pack & Moon light pack are Allies

White Rose pack information

Alpha:-Arjun Jadeja
Luna:- Aanchal Jadeja

Arjun or Aanchal ka beta

Vishnu Jadeja

THE BLACK WOLVES PACK ALPHA NAME :- MUKHTAR ANSARI THA.

ZETA:- YUSUF MEMON

GAMMA:-ALMAAS MEMON

YUSUF OR ALMAAS DONO BHAI HE.

THE RAINBOW PACK ALPHA NAME:-SHASHVAT PAL

ZETA:-MAYANK PAL

GAMMA:-GOURANG PAL
TINO BHAI HE.

 

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Thodi der main likhne baithunga bhai matlab 10 baje jak mil jaayega

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Awesome
Update please

 

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Update:-10



[ENEMY AT THE GATE]
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AB Mouriya bhi 14 ho gaya tha to vo or uski behan or unki Umar ke kai ladke or ladki Pack warrior se traning lete the.Jab Gouri or Mouriya ki Training puri Hui to mouriya 15 saal ka ho gaya tha or Gouri 17 saal ki or ab unhe Unke pack ke Beta Sandeep or Gamma Suraj traning de rahe the or kuch mahino sikhne ke baad vo apni school life me mast ho gaye.Gouri ne apne bhai ke sath hi addmission sab karaya tha.

Unki school or college unki territory se thode duri pe yeh or vaha unke allies ke Werewolf aate the.Inki duniya insaano se alag hi thi or ye sahi bhi tha q ki sab ALPHAS ne milke ye decission liya tha.

Bahar insaano se ghul na milna matlab Werewolf hunters ko apni taraf aakarshit karna.

Unki bhi jindagi sahi chal thi.Night warrior pack or unke allies pack sath sath grow kar rahe the.

Par Black hound pack ko ye Raaz nahi aaya or vo lage apne shikar ko gherne or unko Scout karne matlab ek Werewolf ko bhej sab jaankari nikal te the.

par unka jasus pakda gaya jab vo ek pack ki jasusi kar raha tha tab to unhone Vijay Rajat or unke Betas or Gammas ko bulaya gaya vaha.

Jab Vijay or Rajat vaha pohchhe apne Betas or Gammas ke sath to jis pack ne pakada tha us jasus ko us pack ka Alpha unko leke Katghare me chala Gaya jaha uske pack warriors us jasus se sab mahiti nikal wa rahe the .

JAb vo vaha pohchhe to Vijay Ke Beta Sandeep ne aage badh ke us jasus ke sar ke baal pakad kar usse sab janane laga par vo itni mahiti nahi de paya.

Suraj:- Alpha hum ko ab apne allies ki border ki shuraksha dugni karni chahiye.

Vijay :- ha mujhe pata he main vahi soch raha tha.

Suraj:- mera matlab he ki Abhi forun karo q ki ye vapas nahi jaayega vaha to unko pata lag jaayega ki ye pakada gaya he.Black hound ke Alpha kab se is taiyari me laga huaa he ye to hum sab jaante he isliye usko pata chalne ke turat baad hamla karega.

Vijay:- Tum ek kaam karo Tum yaha rehke inki territory ko surakshit karo or kaha se hamla ho sakta he hum defend karenge ya phir attack or traps vagera sab dekh lena.

Suraj:- Thik he

Rajat:- mera beta yahi rahega tumahare sath tumhari madad karne ke liye.

Vijay:- ha ye sahi rahe ga or tum apne pack mese Pack warrior bhej dena yaha se or baaki ke allies ko bhi suchna ke dena.

Vijay Apne allies ke Alpha se bola

Vijay:- tum apne jasus laga do jungle ke har ek kone me taki hum ko pata chal sake ki vo kaha se aa rahe or kis pe humla karege q ki agar hum yaha hi rahe to vo baki allies pe bhi hamla kar sakta he isliye hum unko koi mouka nahi dena he.

Allies ka Alpha Vijay ki baat sun apne jasus ko Jungle me Faila deta he.

Vijay Rajat Sandeep or Rajat ka Gamma apne territory ki or badh jaate he.Vijay apni territory me poch ke Sandeep ko bolta he ki

Vijay:- Sandeep sab pack warriors maise kuch ko chun ke mere aane ka intezar Karo.

Vijay ye kehke apne ghar me chala jaata he or Kanchan ko sab batata he or usko bolta he ki

Vijay:- main Gouri or Mouriya ko apne sath leke ja raha hu q ki vo dekhenge tabhi to sikhenge.

Kanchan:- abhi vo chote he abhi kaha unko insab me aap shamil kar rahe ho.

Vijay:- Kanchan tum khud 15 saal ki umar me ye sab karne lagi thi to Gouri ab 17 saal ki ho gayi he or mouriya bhi ab 15 saal ka ho chuka he.

inki baate chal rahi thi ki tab Gouri or Mouriya dono aa jate he vaha or unki baate sunne lagte he.

Vijay apne bacho ki dekh puchta he

Vijay:- Jung hone wali he hamari kuch bhure logo ke sath to ab tum hi faisla karo ki tumhe mere sath aana he ya nahi.

Gouri:- me aa rahi hu papa

Gouri ki baat sun

Mouriya:- haa bol deta he

vo sirf apni behan ke liye haa bol ta he q ki usko ye sab pasand nahi tha maarna or marna.

unki baat sun Vijay ko un dono pe Garv mehsus hota he q ki vo aane wale kal ke Alpha the.

Vinay unko leke bahar aata he to vaha sab warriors mojud the or unke dekh kehta he

Vijay:-

I am wolf

quietly I will endure .
Silently I will suffer .
patiently I will wait .

For I am a warrior.
And I will survive. ​

Vijay ki bat sun sab me Josh ubhar aaya or sab lage chillane or ab vo lage apne werewolf form me aane or ek bar phir se sab ne HOWL kiya or sab nikal gaye apni manzil ki taraf.

vo sab bhage ja rahe the apni or Werewolf ki tabahi ki taraf.Jo bhi Aaj Jung me marega vo hoga to Werewolf hi or kuch inke marenge ro kuch saamne walo ke bhi marenge.

kisi ne sahi kaha he



ONLY THE DEAD HAVE SEEN THE END OF WAR.

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Update please

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Update:-10



[ENEMY AT THE GATE]
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AB Mouriya bhi 14 ho gaya tha to vo or uski behan or unki Umar ke kai ladke or ladki Pack warrior se traning lete the.Jab Gouri or Mouriya ki Training puri Hui to mouriya 15 saal ka ho gaya tha or Gouri 17 saal ki or ab unhe Unke pack ke Beta Sandeep or Gamma Suraj traning de rahe the or kuch mahino sikhne ke baad vo apni school life me mast ho gaye.Gouri ne apne bhai ke sath hi addmission sab karaya tha.

Unki school or college unki territory se thode duri pe yeh or vaha unke allies ke Werewolf aate the.Inki duniya insaano se alag hi thi or ye sahi bhi tha q ki sab ALPHAS ne milke ye decission liya tha.

Bahar insaano se ghul na milna matlab Werewolf hunters ko apni taraf aakarshit karna.

Unki bhi jindagi sahi chal thi.Night warrior pack or unke allies pack sath sath grow kar rahe the.

Par Black hound pack ko ye Raaz nahi aaya or vo lage apne shikar ko gherne or unko Scout karne matlab ek Werewolf ko bhej sab jaankari nikal te the.

par unka jasus pakda gaya jab vo ek pack ki jasusi kar raha tha tab to unhone Vijay Rajat or unke Betas or Gammas ko bulaya gaya vaha.

Jab Vijay or Rajat vaha pohchhe apne Betas or Gammas ke sath to jis pack ne pakada tha us jasus ko us pack ka Alpha unko leke Katghare me chala Gaya jaha uske pack warriors us jasus se sab mahiti nikal wa rahe the .

JAb vo vaha pohchhe to Vijay Ke Beta Sandeep ne aage badh ke us jasus ke sar ke baal pakad kar usse sab janane laga par vo itni mahiti nahi de paya.

Suraj:- Alpha hum ko ab apne allies ki border ki shuraksha dugni karni chahiye.

Vijay :- ha mujhe pata he main vahi soch raha tha.

Suraj:- mera matlab he ki Abhi forun karo q ki ye vapas nahi jaayega vaha to unko pata lag jaayega ki ye pakada gaya he.Black hound ke Alpha kab se is taiyari me laga huaa he ye to hum sab jaante he isliye usko pata chalne ke turat baad hamla karega.

Vijay:- Tum ek kaam karo Tum yaha rehke inki territory ko surakshit karo or kaha se hamla ho sakta he hum defend karenge ya phir attack or traps vagera sab dekh lena.

Suraj:- Thik he

Rajat:- mera beta yahi rahega tumahare sath tumhari madad karne ke liye.

Vijay:- ha ye sahi rahe ga or tum apne pack mese Pack warrior bhej dena yaha se or baaki ke allies ko bhi suchna ke dena.

Vijay Apne allies ke Alpha se bola

Vijay:- tum apne jasus laga do jungle ke har ek kone me taki hum ko pata chal sake ki vo kaha se aa rahe or kis pe humla karege q ki agar hum yaha hi rahe to vo baki allies pe bhi hamla kar sakta he isliye hum unko koi mouka nahi dena he.

Allies ka Alpha Vijay ki baat sun apne jasus ko Jungle me Faila deta he.

Vijay Rajat Sandeep or Rajat ka Gamma apne territory ki or badh jaate he.Vijay apni territory me poch ke Sandeep ko bolta he ki

Vijay:- Sandeep sab pack warriors maise kuch ko chun ke mere aane ka intezar Karo.

Vijay ye kehke apne ghar me chala jaata he or Kanchan ko sab batata he or usko bolta he ki

Vijay:- main Gouri or Mouriya ko apne sath leke ja raha hu q ki vo dekhenge tabhi to sikhenge.

Kanchan:- abhi vo chote he abhi kaha unko insab me aap shamil kar rahe ho.

Vijay:- Kanchan tum khud 15 saal ki umar me ye sab karne lagi thi to Gouri ab 17 saal ki ho gayi he or mouriya bhi ab 15 saal ka ho chuka he.

inki baate chal rahi thi ki tab Gouri or Mouriya dono aa jate he vaha or unki baate sunne lagte he.

Vijay apne bacho ki dekh puchta he

Vijay:- Jung hone wali he hamari kuch bhure logo ke sath to ab tum hi faisla karo ki tumhe mere sath aana he ya nahi.

Gouri:- me aa rahi hu papa

Gouri ki baat sun

Mouriya:- haa bol deta he

vo sirf apni behan ke liye haa bol ta he q ki usko ye sab pasand nahi tha maarna or marna.

unki baat sun Vijay ko un dono pe Garv mehsus hota he q ki vo aane wale kal ke Alpha the.

Vinay unko leke bahar aata he to vaha sab warriors mojud the or unke dekh kehta he

Vijay:-

I am wolf

quietly I will endure .
Silently I will suffer .
patiently I will wait .

For I am a warrior.
And I will survive. ​

Vijay ki bat sun sab me Josh ubhar aaya or sab lage chillane or ab vo lage apne werewolf form me aane or ek bar phir se sab ne HOWL kiya or sab nikal gaye apni manzil ki taraf.

vo sab bhage ja rahe the apni or Werewolf ki tabahi ki taraf.Jo bhi Aaj Jung me marega vo hoga to Werewolf hi or kuch inke marenge ro kuch saamne walo ke bhi marenge.

kisi ne sahi kaha he



ONLY THE DEAD HAVE SEEN THE END OF WAR.

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Nice update bro war war aaoooo

 

[BlooDBath175]

Nice update bro war war aaoooo

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12 baje tak main yaha bhi update de dunga

 

[Dude175]

Update:-8

{FIRST FULL MOON} ​

Subah Hui to kanchan ne fresh hoke Vijay ko jagaya uske baad apne bachho ko ek baar dekh vo room se bahar chali gai Breakfast banane ke liye.Vijay jaga or fresh hoke Rajat ko bhi uthaya to usko apne bete ke rone ki aawaj sunai di or ladke ko dekh ladki bhi rone lagi.Vijay vapas apne room me louta or apne dono bachho ko utha ke kitchen ki taraf bhi chala gaya tha.

Apne dono bachho ko kanchan ko soup vo sofe pe jaake baith gaya or itne Rajat Rinku or unka beta Shivam bhi aa gaye hall me.Shivam 3 saal ka tha matlab Vijay ki beti se 1 saal bada tha.

Rinku Shivam ko leke kanchan ke paas chali gayi.
Uske paas jaake uski help karne lagi kaam me.Itne me 2 omega (ladies) aai Ghar ka kaam karne to dono apne bachho ko leke apne pati ke jaake baith gayi.

Thodi der baate karne ke baad breakfast ke liye 1 omega aai unko bulane.Kanchan or Rinku ne apne bachho ko Vijay or Rajat ko soup ke breakfast laane chali gayi.

Breakfast karne ke baad Rajat or uski biwi or bachhe nikal gaye apni territory taraf unke sath unke Beta or Gamma bhi the or unke pariwar bhi.

Rajat ke jaane ke baad Vijay bahar chala gaya Sandeep paas or uske paas jaake kal ke baare me charcha karne laga.Jis vishay pe vo charcha kar raha tha vo vishay cinta janak hi tha.

Q ki Black hound pack sab pack pe attack kar kare the or ye Werewolf ke liye bilkul bhi achha nahi tha q ki ek dusre se lad ke Vo Werewolf parajati kamjor kar rahe the.Unki asli ladai Vampires ke sath thi par kehte he na ki jab takat ka nasha sar Chad jaaye to usko kuch nahi dikhta.

Vaisa hi Black hound ke Alpha se sath tha usko Werewolf parajati pe raaj karna tha usko sab Alpha ka Alpha banana tha usko True Alpha banana tha.Jabki is ke liye khud kismat chunti he par vo ye sab apne takat pe haasil karna chahata tha.

Vijay ko pata tha ki vo uske pack par ya fir uski allies pe filhaal attack to nahi karega q ki Vijay ka Night warrior pack jungle ke bicho bich tha or unko pack ko ghere huye unki allies thi.Agar vo ek allies pe attack karega to sab usko defend karenge or uski allies itni dur bhi nai thi.Abhi ke liye to uska pack or uski allies safe the par kab tak aaj nahi to kal vo attack karega hi un pe q ki vo abhi apni takat badha raha he.

Isliye Vijay apne Beta (Sandeep) ko bol ke apne pack warriors me nai bharti karana chahta tha or Sandeep bhi koi kacha kheladi nahi tha Vo khud ek behtarin warrior tha or vo har mod pe Vijay ke sath hamesha khada tha , khada he or khada rahega.

Thodi der baate karne ke bat Gamma aa jata he vaha to Vijay usko kehta he

Vijay:-Tum sab allies ke paas jaake bolo ki ab apne pack warriors ki sankhiya badhaye q ki ab Jung dur nahi he or tum bhi is kaam ke liye lag jaao chote chote pack ko apne pack me shamil karao or agar unko shamil nahi hona to unko allies banao apni.

Gamma Alpha ki bat sun nikal jaate he apne kaam pe.Vijay or Sandeep pack ki territory ka chakkar laga ne jate he.

10 din baad FULL MOON(purnima ki raat) tha tab uske ladke ka naam rakhne wale the q ki uske bete ke liye FIRST FULL MOON tha or uske liye Sab se bujurg Werewolf ko bulaya jata he.

AIse hi bhaag dod or tension bhare mahol me ek khushi ka mahol aata he full moon ka jab Vijay ke ladke ka naam rakhne ka mahol.

Pack ke Werewolf sab ek Katha ho te he Jund me or jund ke bicho bich Vijay kanchan or uski bati or beta khade the or unke sath ek bujurg Werewolf bhi the.

Ab deri thi to sirf chaand ke badalo se bahar nikal ne ki.Vo time bhi aa gaya or sab apne apne Werewolf form me aa gaye.Bujurg Werewolf ne Vijay ke bete ko apne god me liya or Chaand ki taraf dekh aankhe bandh ki or kuch apne man me bola or phir apne god rakhe bachhe ki aankho me dekh "MOURIYA" chillaya.

Jab usne "MOURIYA" chillaya to us ladke ke aankhe kuch shan ke liye laal ho gaye thi or ye dekh vo bujurg hairan huaa q ki Laal aanke True Alpha ki hi hoti he.

Thodi der baad vo normal huaa or Mouriya ko Vijay ki god me soup diya.Mouriya ko soup vo Vijay or kanchan se mil phir nikal gaya vo bujurg Werewolf.

Bujurg Werewolf jaise hi pack ki territory se bahar nikala or jab jungle ki sarhad ke nazdik pohcha to usko kisiki piche se pakad ke uski gardan marod di or uska dil nikal ke usko khada khod dafna diya.

Usko Marne wala koi or nahi INDRAJEET tha q ki vo bujurg Werewolf agar sabko Mouriya ki aankho ke bare me batata to kitne log uske bete ko maarne ki koshish karte or kitne anchahe khatro se vo bach ta q ki abhi uska beta is kaabil nahi tha ki vo khud ki raksha kar sake.

INDRAJEET usko dafna ke vaha se nikal gaya or Vahi Night warrior pack me Kushi ka mahol tha to sab jum rahe the sharab pi rahe the.

Koi koi aake Vijay or Kanchan ko badhai bhi de rahe the.

Aise hi thodi der Khushi manane ke baad sab apne apne ghar ko lout gaye or so Gaye.

Time chal nahi bhag Raha tha or Mouriya bhi ab 5 saal ka ho gaya tha.Sab ka ladla bhi tha pack me q ki uske chehre ki masumiyat aisi thi ki koi bhi khud ko rok nahi pata tha.

Mouriya ne jab chal na sikha tha tab se Vo traning building ki or jaata or sab ko tranning karte huye dekhta rehta.Jab vo in sab se ub jaata to Dusro ke ghar chala jaata unke bachcho ke sath khelne.

Ab vo 5 saal ka ho gaya tha or uski shararat bhi chalu ho gayi thi or ghar ko upar niche kar deta tha vo.Kanchan kabhi kabhi usse bohat Gussa ho jaati thi par hath na uthati thi.

Jab vo bohat gussa hoti to Mouriya ko Vijay ke sath bhej deti or vo bhi hasi khusi uske sath chala jata.Jabki Issi behan ka Group alag tha or vo apne group me hi viyast rehti thi par jab vo ghar hoti to mouriya ke sath khub khelti or vo mouriya ko pyar se "MOU" kehke bulati thi.

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Nice name Mouriya good keep posting

 

[Dude175]

Update:-9


[FIRST TRANSFORM] ​

Aise hi chaar saal bit gaye or Gouri 11 saal ki ho gayi thi or Mouriya 9 saal ka huaa tha.

Werewolf ka 11 or 14 saal me unka first Transform hota he matlab insaan se Werewolf main change hote he inke 11 ya 14 saal ke first full moon pe.

First transform main unko dard bhi bohat hota he q ki unki sareer ki hadiya change hoti he or first transform ke baad unko gussa jald aata he or jab gussa aata he to unka true form bahar aata he matlab Werewolf form.

Aaj Gouri ka first full moon tha 11 saal ki umar main to sab Werewolf mahila usko leke ek room main bandh ho gayi thi q ki jab body shape change karti he to obviously kapde fatenge.

Thodi der bad jab chaand nikala to Gouri ke shareer me badlav aane laga or uss badlav ka dard pure ghar me sunai de raha tha or ye sun Mouriya bhi thoda chintit tha apni behan ko leke or Vijay bhi q ki kai baar transform ke doran mout bhi hui he ya phir kabhi kabhi aisa bhi huaa he ki jab transform hota he to koi koi apne human senses bhi kho dete he or hamesha ke liye Werewolf me hi rehte he.

Karib 10 min baad chikhe bandh ho gai or ek ghurahat sunai di bhediye ki or ye dahad pure pack ke members ne suni thi.Thode time baad waapis chokhe sunai di or sab mahila us room se bahar aa gai.

Vijay ne Kanchan ko dekha or pucha

Vijay:- Gouri kesi he abhi...

Kanchan:- 1 2 din tak dard rahega or jab usko aadat pad jaayegi tab uski dard nahi hoga.

Kanchan ki baat sun Vijay ne Rahat ki saans li.

Mouriya:- kiya main Gouri di di ko dekh sakhta hu

Kanchan:- nahi beta abhi vo so Rahi he tum kal mil Lena.

Mouriya mayus hoke kehta he

Mouriya:- thik he mummy

Itna kehke vo apne room main chala jata he or so jata he.

Dusre din subah vo jaldi se uth ke kitchen me jaake apni mummy se permission leta he Gouri ko dekh ne ki to kanchan bhi haa bol deti he usko.Ha sunte hi vo Gouri ke room ki taraf bhaag ta he.

Room me abhi bhi Gouri so Rahi thi.Mouriya uske paas aake usko hila ke utha ta he to Gouri uth jaati he par uske sareer me abhi bhi dard tha.

Mouriya Gouri ko uth te dekh usko puchta he

Mouriya:- Ab kaisi ho aap di di pata he kal main dar gaya tha aapki chikh ne aawaj sun agar itna hi dard hota he to fir sab Werewolf q bante he insaan ki tarah nahi reh sakte kiya.

Gouri:- Mou is dard se sab ko gujarna padta he or aakhir vohi to hamara asli roop he or hamara astitva he.yehi mummy ne bola tha kal mujhe jab mujhe dard ho raha tha.isliye tujhe bhi is dard se gujarna padega.

Mouriya:- na main nahi badal ne wala mere roop aise thik hu main.Ab chalo aap mere sath breakfast karne.

Mouriya ki bat sun Gouri has deti he or uske sath breakfast karne room ke bahar chali jaati he.

Aise hi time nikal ta he or Mouriya bhi 11 saal ka ho jaata he or uska bhi first full moon hota he or uske bhi Transform hone ka waqt ho jaata he.Jab chaand dikhta he phir bhi mouriya apna roop nahi badlta he or kaafi der hone ke baad bhi uske sharir me badlav nahi hota.

Ye dekh Vijay Mouriya ko kehta he ki

Vijay:-tension mat lo ab nahi huaa to 14 saal ki umar me hoga par hoga jarur.

Mouriya:- papa main tension bilkul bhi nahi le raha hu ulta me to khush hu ke jo dard di di ko sehna pada vo mujhe nahi sehna pada.

mouriya ki baat or uski naadani pe Vijay muskura deta he or dono room ke bahar aa jate he.Mouriya apni mummy or di di ko milne ke baad vo apne room me chala jaata he.

YE baat pack me sab ko pata chal gayi ki Mouriya ka roop bhediye me change nahi huaa.Din bitate gaye or ab sab mouriya se duri banane Lage q ki jiyada yar bachhe 11 saal ki umar me hi bhediye me change ho jate the or ye bat Vijay or Kanchan ne bhi notice ki par vo kuch nai kar sakte the.

Jab Mouriya 14 saal ka huaa or uske 14 saal ke first full moon pe vo kamre me apne papa ke sath tha or jab Chand nikala to usko dard hone laga or uski bhi chuke gunjane lagi pure ghar me.Thodi der baad chikhe bandh ho gai or Mouriya aadha insaan or aadha bhediya bana huaa tha or tab usne Chand ko dekh dahad maari or us dahad Se Vijay bhi piche hat gaya q ki Werewolf sirf gurarate he par dahad te nahi.Jab Vijay ne mouriya ki aankho ko dekha to vo surkh laal thi.

Mouriya ki dahad sun pack ke members bhi dar gaye the or kanchan or Gouri bhi dar gaye the.

Vijay or chintit ho gaya ye dekh.Q ki Laal aankhe sirf True Alpha ki hoti he.

Thodi der baad vo vaapas insaan ke roop me aaya or kapade pehne or Vijay ke paas aake khada ho gaya or bola

Mouriya:- chalo papa mummy or didi se mil lete he.

Vijay:- Tum aaram Karo beta tum he dard ho raha hoga kal mil Lena unse.

Mouriya:- nahi papa mujhe bilkul bhi dard nahi ho raha he.Ab chalo

Uski baat sun Vijay bhi chal deta uske sath bahar.Mouriya bahar aake apni mummy or didi se milke sone chale jata he.

Gouri bhi sone chali jaati he apne room me.

Vijay jab bed pe leta soch raha hota he tab kanchan uske bagal me lait kar usse puchati he

kanchan:- kiya huaa kaha khoye huye ho.

Vijay:- Mouriya ke baare me soch raha hu main.

Phir Vijay kanchan ko sab bata deta he jo us room huaa tha jise sun kanchan bhi thoda tension me aa jati he.

Kanchan:- Ab kiya karenge hum

Vijay:- hum kuch nahi kar sakte sab samay ke upar chod do.

Q ki bat hi tension wali thi.Laal aankhe mouriya ki or aadha bhediyo waka roop or aadha insaano wala.Jab vo bhediye ke roop me aayega tab vo kaisa dekhega ya phir vo aisa hi rahega.

Inhi baato ko leke tension me the Kanchan or Vijay.

Par vo kar bhi kiya sakte the isliye sab aane wale kal pe chhod ke so Gaye.

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First transform was good for Mouriya let see what happens next

 

[Dude175]

[ENEMY AT THE GATE]
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Vijay:-

I am wolf

quietly I will endure .
Silently I will suffer .
patiently I will wait .

For I am a warrior.
And I will survive. ​

ONLY THE DEAD HAVE SEEN THE END OF WAR.

The way you wrote in red is really good. dialogues and quotes you have used in This story and in another story they all are worth reading

 

[BlooDBath175]

First transform was good for Mouriya let see what happens next

Thanks

The way you wrote in red is really good. dialogues and quotes you have used in This story and in another story they all are worth reading

Thanks Dude175