Bahut hi badhiya likha hain aapne, par meri raai mein unexpected sex ki story unexpected ke baad hi Khatam ho jaaye to kahani kaa Maan Kayam rahega aage kahani badhti rahi to shayad achchi bhi ho par story kahi naa kahi Khichti hui mehsus hogi, aap chahe to is kahani ke sequel ke taur pe alag se kahani aage badhate hue alag se shuru karke post kar sakte hain tab alag se ruchi bhi bani rahegi kahani ke liye.
Yeh sirf meri niji raai hain bura lage to maaf kijiyega.
Kahani waqai bahut achchi likkhi hain aapne.