Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

[Casinar]

The nental state of Abhi is very well defined and narrated. Super job Casinar ji. The words you hv chosen to show Abhi'd mental dilemna are fabulous.
Reagaring the diaries happy to know that Ruhi read part of them and shocked to know about Rahima.
Anyhow lovely update and now Abhi is aware of more things regarding Ruhi and he must feel peaceful inside.
Very good going my dear.
Sorry for late reply, had been busy last night.

thanks very much amity dear

 

[Casinar]

Great to read that Abhi has decided to move on.
He is right. For how long will he keep lamenting for Ruhi who does not care for him.
So Mehboob returned the diaries to Abhi and Abhi did not find the perfume which meant that Ruhi kept it. Does Ruhi love expensive gifts thats why she kept the perfumes? Or did she just keep it as its precious gift from Abhi to her?
And Abhi decided to shave and he shaved off Ruhi off his brain also it seemed.
Good to see him thinking big to reopen the garage he worked before.
Hope he will be successful.
Very nice update Casinar ji. Keep it up.

thanks so very much for the appreciation amity dear

 

[Casinar]

Bahut khushi hii bhai.
Ab abhi kuch kar dikhaaega
Bahut badhya update

bahot shukriya Shambhu bhai

 

[Casinar]

Woooooowww......
Very well written and beautifully described act.....

Thoda bahut suspence bhi tha......jis tarah se George or Sunil ne baate bataayi us hisaab se kisi ki bhi baat puri tarah sach nahi hai.......

Ab baat karte hai details ki to........
Abhi ki baat sahi he.....aankhe rona bnd kar deti hai....ak samay ke baad.....lekin mann or dil jab bhi wo samay wo naam yaad aata hai ....ya baad rone lagta hai......

Isliye nahi rota ki hamaare saath ye sab hua tha.....balki iss liye rota hai ki hamaare saath hee aisa kyo hua.....hamne kisi ka kya bigada tha......bas andar se rone waale ki aankhen hee bata sakti hai.....uska haal....OR ye chij har koi nahi samajh sakta......


Ruhi ki gali uska ghar ka aangan uska wo raasta Abhi ke dil ke kareeb hai.....wanha ki hawaaye bhi Abhi ko Ruhi ka ahsaas dil aati hai.....
Aise situation me dobara uss jagah jana.....dil or dimaag dono ko hilaane ke liye kaafi hai......

Manoj ki face reaction.....Abhi ke prati Manoj ki nafrat ko dikhata hai.....
Like se koi kisi se chid kar karta hai.....ye sala phir se aa gaya.....


Iss situation me bhi Abhi positivity saath lekar chal raha hai.....ki ho sakta hai ki Ruhi or family waalo ne Manoj ko dhamkaya ho.....

Jis se Manoj ko bhi guilty feel hua ho.....OR ho sakta hai ki wo abhi se maafi maang le......
Pr Abhi ki ye soch usi situation me sahi hai jab Ruhi ne aisa kaha ho.....lekin Ruhi ke us samay ke act se aisa bilkul nahi lagta ki usme resist karne ki jara bhi power hai.....
Lekin wahi baat ak Abhi ka pyar use ye sab sochne par mazbur kar raha hai......


Obviously Ruhi ne pahchan liya abhi ko.....kyoki jinhe hum dil se maante hai unke hone ka ahsaas khud hee ho jata hai......

Ruhi ro rahi hai.....iss par nahi ki abhi use se dur ho gaya.....na hee iss liye ki abhi ko dutkar kar nikala gaya.....
Uske aansu uski mazburi ko dikhaate hai.....sabki chahta sochte- samjhte.......jaante hue bhi kuch na kar paane ka ahsaas....bebas hone ki stithi.....

Ye hai Ruhi ki mazburi.....na wo kuch kar sakti hai na wo kuch badal sakti hai.....bas ghutan sakti hai khud mai.....


Sunil ne aakhir saari baat Abhi ko bata hee di.....lekin mere hisaab se.....Jo bhi sunil ne bataya hai usme har line mai hee gadbad hai.....

Ak bar ke liye Mana ki Mahboob or saeed ne hee aag lagaati hai......OR mahboob ke pass to motive bhi hai.....ki Ruhi uski bhatiji jaisi hai or jab saeed ne use Abhi ke baare me galat galat bataya to usne 2 face ka kaam kiya or Ruhi ki maa ko bhadka diya......maan liya.....

Lekin saeed.....Saeed ke pass konsa motive hai.....Abhi khud saeed ki kamaai ka jariye hai.....yanha tak ki abhi ke kaaran hee use mahboob se 2 ki jagah 3 laakh mila hai.....
Ak bar ke liye iss baat ko maan lete hai ki abhi se hui ladaai or paise ke laalach ke liye wo aisa kar sakta hai.....
Lekin ye bhi itna bada reason nahi hai.....
Phir bhi ise hee sach maan kar chalte hai....tab ye baat aati hai ki.....

Ruhi ki maa ki baat ka bhi puri tarah vishwas nahi kiya jaa sakta......OR phir kai bar aadmi khud bachne ke liye bhi to dusro par ilzam laga deta hai.....

Ab baat kare Ruhi ki chachi ki to......janha tak mujhe yaad hai chachi ka first intro tab hee aayi tha jab Ruhi ke udhar jaane ki baat hui thi......us se pahle bas ye hee bataya gaya tha ki Ruhi ki ak chachi bhi hai.....OR Shweta uski beti hai.....bas itna hee.....

Sunil ke hisaab se chachi galat hai....lekin kaise jabki Ruhi ke wanha jaane se pahle na kabhi chachi Ruhi ke ghar aayi na kabhi ye log uske ghar gaye.....phir usne kaise kiya....
Aisa to hai nahi ki wo roj ghar aakar chup kar dono ko dekhti thi or phir Ruhi ke ghar waalo ko bhadka kar chali jaati thi.....not possible

Ruhi ki maa ne bataya ki chachi ne aag lagaya tha maan liya.....lekin chachi ke pass to Abhi Ruhi ke jaane ke baad gaya tha...mm lekin uske pahle jo sab naatak hue....uska kya....

Ise mere hisaab se ....ham ise aise dekh sakte hai ki......

YANHA RUHI KI MAA NE BADA GAME KHELA.....KAISE.....BATATA HU....
RUHI KI MAA NE CHACHI KE DUKAAN OR SHAHAR KE BAARE MAI KHUD ABHI KO BATAYA.....USE ACHCHI TARAH PATA THA KI ABHI WANHA JARUR JAAYEGA.....

PHIR ABHI WANHA GAYA OR CHACHI SE MILA.....OR JAB ABHI PHIR RUHI KE GHAR AAYEGA TAB WO ABHI KO BATA DEGI KI
ABHI BINA PUCHE BATAAYE CHACHI KE GHAR GAYA ISLIYE WO SAB NAARAAZ HAI.....OR CHACHI KE UN PAR CHILLANE SE GUSSA BHI.....OR ISILIYE WO ABHI SE KOI CONNECTION RAKHNA NAHI CHAHTE....

OR PHIR RUHI KI MAA NE YE BAAT SUNIL KO BATAI...TAAKI SUNIL ABHI KO BATAYE.....
AB GHAR WALA KOI HO TAB TO ABHI USE SAMJHAYE BHI.....LEKIN CHACHI KA WO KYA KAR SAKTA HAI.....

PHIR WAHI BAAT KHUD BHALE RAH KAR DUSRE KO VILLAIN BANANA...


George se Abhi ki taarif ki Ruhi ne.....good lekin jab usi Abhi ko kutte ki tarah jaleel kar ghar se nikala jaa raha tha.....
Tab kya Ruhi ke liye Abhi achcha.....pyar karne waala.....nek dil....intelligent nahi tha......
Jo hame dil-o-jaan se chahta ho use koi itni buri tarah be izzat karke nikaale.....to ye apne liye maut ke barabar hota hai.....

Us waakye ke baad Abhi khud badal gaya hai....gambhir ho gaya hai.....
Lekin Ruhi har baat has kar ya muskura kar....kar rahi he......jaise uske liye ye koi normal baat ho.....

Ruhi ne bhi chachi ko hee galat bataya lekin maine chachi ki position pahle hee clear kar di hai...


Khair dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai......
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks........




Ha kuch or bhi bacha hai aaj.......
Abhi ki iss baat par.....

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Once again
Thanks.....

bahot bahot shukriya Vikram bhai...
aap ki review to ek update se kum nahin hai... aur aap ko counter reply karne ke liye kuch ziada sochna padta hai

Ab baat karte hai details ki to........
Abhi ki baat sahi he.....aankhe rona bnd kar deti hai....ak samay ke baad.....lekin mann or dil jab bhi wo samay wo naam yaad aata hai ....ya baad rone lagta hai......

Isliye nahi rota ki hamaare saath ye sab hua tha.....balki iss liye rota hai ki hamaare saath hee aisa kyo hua.....hamne kisi ka kya bigada tha......bas andar se rone waale ki aankhen hee bata sakti hai.....uska haal....OR ye chij har koi nahi samajh sakta......

bilkool sahi kaha aap ne

Ruhi ki gali uska ghar ka aangan uska wo raasta Abhi ke dil ke kareeb hai.....wanha ki hawaaye bhi Abhi ko Ruhi ka ahsaas dil aati hai.....
Aise situation me dobara uss jagah jana.....dil or dimaag dono ko hilaane ke liye kaafi hai......

EXACTLY bhai aap sahi samjhe yaara

Obviously Ruhi ne pahchan liya abhi ko.....kyoki jinhe hum dil se maante hai unke hone ka ahsaas khud hee ho jata hai......

Ruhi ro rahi hai.....iss par nahi ki abhi use se dur ho gaya.....na hee iss liye ki abhi ko dutkar kar nikala gaya.....
Uske aansu uski mazburi ko dikhaate hai.....sabki chahta sochte- samjhte.......jaante hue bhi kuch na kar paane ka ahsaas....bebas hone ki stithi.....

Ye hai Ruhi ki mazburi.....na wo kuch kar sakti hai na wo kuch badal sakti hai.....bas ghutan sakti hai khud mai.....

yeh bi sahi hai aap ke taraf se..... magar issko ek din Ruhi khud apni zuban mein batayegi abhi ko

Sunil ne aakhir saari baat Abhi ko bata hee di.....lekin mere hisaab se.....Jo bhi sunil ne bataya hai usme har line mai hee gadbad hai.....

Ak bar ke liye Mana ki Mahboob or saeed ne hee aag lagaati hai......OR mahboob ke pass to motive bhi hai.....ki Ruhi uski bhatiji jaisi hai or jab saeed ne use Abhi ke baare me galat galat bataya to usne 2 face ka kaam kiya or Ruhi ki maa ko bhadka diya......maan liya.....

Lekin saeed.....Saeed ke pass konsa motive hai.....Abhi khud saeed ki kamaai ka jariye hai.....yanha tak ki abhi ke kaaran hee use mahboob se 2 ki jagah 3 laakh mila hai.....
Ak bar ke liye iss baat ko maan lete hai ki abhi se hui ladaai or paise ke laalach ke liye wo aisa kar sakta hai.....
Lekin ye bhi itna bada reason nahi hai.....
Phir bhi ise hee sach maan kar chalte hai....tab ye baat aati hai ki.....

yeh baat aage chal kar sahi sahi pata chalega bhai

YANHA RUHI KI MAA NE BADA GAME KHELA.....KAISE.....BATATA HU....
RUHI KI MAA NE CHACHI KE DUKAAN OR SHAHAR KE BAARE MAI KHUD ABHI KO BATAYA.....USE ACHCHI TARAH PATA THA KI ABHI WANHA JARUR JAAYEGA.....

PHIR ABHI WANHA GAYA OR CHACHI SE MILA.....OR JAB ABHI PHIR RUHI KE GHAR AAYEGA TAB WO ABHI KO BATA DEGI KI
ABHI BINA PUCHE BATAAYE CHACHI KE GHAR GAYA ISLIYE WO SAB NAARAAZ HAI.....OR CHACHI KE UN PAR CHILLANE SE GUSSA BHI.....OR ISILIYE WO ABHI SE KOI CONNECTION RAKHNA NAHI CHAHTE....

OR PHIR RUHI KI MAA NE YE BAAT SUNIL KO BATAI...TAAKI SUNIL ABHI KO BATAYE.....
AB GHAR WALA KOI HO TAB TO ABHI USE SAMJHAYE BHI.....LEKIN CHACHI KA WO KYA KAR SAKTA HAI.....

kia dimaagh lagaya hai aap ne bhai wah, maan gaye yaara

George se Abhi ki taarif ki Ruhi ne.....good lekin jab usi Abhi ko kutte ki tarah jaleel kar ghar se nikala jaa raha tha.....
Tab kya Ruhi ke liye Abhi achcha.....pyar karne waala.....nek dil....intelligent nahi tha......
Jo hame dil-o-jaan se chahta ho use koi itni buri tarah be izzat karke nikaale.....to ye apne liye maut ke barabar hota hai.....

picnic par gayi thi yaar khush to hogi nah

Us waakye ke baad Abhi khud badal gaya hai....gambhir ho gaya hai.....
Lekin Ruhi har baat has kar ya muskura kar....kar rahi he......jaise uske liye ye koi normal baat ho.....

sahi pakda bhai aap ne

Zafar ki kavita jabardast hai bhai
thanks very veryr much vikram bai
its a real pleasure to read from you dost

 

[Casinar]

Bahut acha laga ke ab Abhi apna khud ka garage chalaega.
Ab buss usske pita ussko jamin ko bank walon k paas girwin rakhne ko raji hi jaye, tab dekhna kaise Ruhi ki maa ki bajegi

bahot bahot shukriya Supar bhai

 

[Casinar]

amazing update hai casi bhai,
to abhi ko diary waapas mil gaya hai,
aur abhi ne garage ko kharidne ke liye poora jod laga diya hai,
ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

appreciation ke liye bahot shukriya Aman bhai

 

[Casinar]

Mast aut majedar update hai bhai.
Ab Abhi mein badlav a raha hai.
Wo kuch karna chah raha hai kuch banna chahta hai. Aur mujhe yakeen hai wo kaamyaab hoga.
As usual aap ne jabaradat likha hai

bahot bahot shukriya Huseien bhai

 

[Casinar]

enjoy the read bro

 

[Casinar]

do enjoy the read rowdy bro

 

[Casinar]

Majedaar situation par agayi hai kahani ab. To kia sach mein Abhi ne Ruhi ko bhula diya? Ya buss dunya ko dikhane k liye weisa kiya hai?
Diaries mil gaye magar perfume rakh liya Ruhi ne
Abhi puri koshish kar raha hai apne old garage/company ko dobara open karne ki. Aur usske liye bank se loan lena padega. Magar baap se jameen ki kagjat k liye mere khayaal milna mushkil hoga.
Abhi ne jo aage badhne k liye socha wo apun ko bahut acha laga.
Badhya update bidu

appreciate karne ke liye bahot dhanyawaad king bro