Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Bahut hi gambhir update bhai ji.. Totally enexpected disclosure..Its really very painful that someone who is married has taken virginity of Ruhi. All the blame goes to Mehboob still if Ruhi is culprit because she was younger at that time which can be easily trapped in sexual affair like act.. You can expect the immense anger in reader for Mehboob. Such a hateful act of mehboob...But but let's see what next abhi going to do?
One more point, what had happened to Ruhi. Why she was walking with the help of that stick. Is she not fine physically?

haan bhai aisa shak kar sakte the log, khud abhi ne aisa kabhi socha zaroor hoga magar kis sach hai kia nain baad mein pata chal hi jaega
thanks very much bhai interest se padhne ke liye

 

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2nd part khatarnak update laga...
To aaj Ruhi k bare me likha aap ne. Acha laga, magar hua kia ussko? Hope she is fine.

Baaki jo saeed ne kaha sach bhi ho sakta hai nahin bhi ho sakta.
Ho sakta hai iss liye keh raha hun k jiss din Ruhi ne wo hmmm hmmm hmm wali baat kahi thi wohi ishara karta hai magar ishara kuch aur bhi ho sakta tha jo uss din Abhi samjha tha. Jo Abhi samjha tha agar wohi hai to saeed ne jhoot kaha magar kyun?
Anyway great update

appreciate karne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya Husein bhai

 

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Wow terrific update mate.
Anything wrong with Ruhi's health? No detail available! Why was she using that stick? Hope its nothing serious. Well today we got to read a bit about Ruhi. Good to read about her.
She dared mention Abhi as her ex-husband to that man, so cute. And she still curse her fate and partly mentions her own faults. Yes, so she recognise her fault if today she is NOT with Abhi. Yeah she must be aware that she did nothing to help Abhi while he did all his best to reach her..... anyhow we must know more about her sooner or later I hope....
Thw next part of the update regarding Saeed telling Abhi about Ruhi is shocking. Never expected such thing will pop up in this story..

But is that true? I do not even trust that Saeed. How did he know all that? If that was true Sunil should have known that then why Sunil never told that to Abhi? Sunil related about Rahima eloping from her house but never mentioned Ruhi going at Mehboob's place to take care of Farzina and staying overnight there.
Why Saeed refused to say who told him all that? Its hard to believe and I think its a lie. But why Saeed will tell a lie I cant understand.
Well, wonderful update bro. Keep it up my dear

thanks very very much for the lovely appreciation Rowdy bro

 

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Woooooowww.....
Very well written and very beautifully described act......
And great showcase of Abhi and Navina's bonging....and understanding also....

I must say I like Navina personally very much....and your portrayal pf her character......brilliant....very beautiful


Abhi aaye hai details ki taraf.....
Jaisa ki maine pahle kaha tha....ye kaafi mushkil hoga.....apne khandani jameen ko or wo bhi jisme baaki bhai bahano ka bhi part ho.....
Iss tarah ki kisi zameen ko as a mortgage thing use karna.....
Kyoki first to wo zameen pariwar ki income ka jariya hai...wo baat alag hai ki bhale hee us se income kam ho....
Second uss zameen mai baaki bhai bahano ka bhi hissa hai....
Agar kal ko koi dikkat hoti hai....to iss zameen se baaki logo ka bhi future jo juda hua hai...daav par lag sakta hai...
Mujhe Abhi ka jyada zid na karna or bhai bahano ke hak ki baat man na kaafi achcha laga...
Kyoki ak baar ke liye maan lete hai ki profit hua....to thik....lekin agar kisi kaaran se loan repay na ho paya to.....

Tab bhale hee bhai bahano mai kitna bhi pyar ho...lekin ak na ak din unke mann mai ye baat jarur aa jaaye give ki abhi ne unka hisaab bhi gawa diya.....

Waise bhi loan amount kaafi bada hai....OR phir bank waale to jyada se jyada ye hee koshish karte hai ki kabhi bhi customer ke jariye mortage account ko cash swati debit na kiya jaaye....

OR bhale hee unke dimaag mai ye baat na bhi aaye you bhi Abhi ko khud achcha nahi lagega ki bhai bahano ka hak uski wajah se chala jaaye....



Bank waalo ki baat sahi hai....Jo chij pahle se hee liquidation account mai daali jaa chuki ho.....Use mortgage account me nahi rakh sakte....or phir policy ke hisaab se loan ke liye mortgage to compulsory hai....



Abhi apni saari baate Navina ko batata hai....jaise Navina ko aadat ho gayi hai abhi ke letters or thoughts padhne ki waise bhi Abhi ko bhi ak tarah se aadat ho gayi hai....Navina ko likhne or uske reply padhne ki.....ak dusre ko apni baate bataane ki... like a good friend.....
Jo ki ak dusre se apni sab baate share kar sakte hai....sukh dukh baant sakte hai.....

Abhi ka rona isliye nahi tha ki Navina us ke liye itna kar rahi hai ya wo uske kisi ahsaan ke niche dab gaya hai....bilkul nahi....
Abhi ka rona tha kyoki jis ko usne itna pyar kiya....admire kiya us Ruhi ne uska saath chhod diya....
OR jis Navina ko bas wo kuch hee dino se jaanta hai....OR jiske liye ki uske man mai koi khas feelings bhi nahi hai....usne uska saath diya.....
Wo bhi aise waqt jab wo khidki khud ki madad nahi kar sakta....na hee apne family ki help le sakta hai....
Ye aansu uske dil me uthe.....samman ko dikhaate hai.....Jo ki Navina ke liye uske mann mai aaye the....uski achchi....saaf goi.....OR uske Abhi ko pyar karne ki height ko dikhaate hue....

Abhi jaanta tha....lekin uske mann mai koi feelings nahi thi....Navina ke liye....lekin ape liye Navina ka pyar or samarpan dekha kar wo mana nahi kar paya....

Kabhi kabhi love ka ahsaas khud ke alawa baaki sabhi ko ho jata hai....Jo ki naina ko hua....OR usne Abhi ko samjhaya....

Navina ka character ko ham har tarah se perfect maan sakte hai....ak achchi biwi....a teacher....sab....


ABRUHI......Hmmmm Good name....Abhi Ruhi ko bhul nahi sakta jaanta hu....lekin agar iska naam AAVINA- hota to jyada achcha hota....
After all iss business ko khada karne mai Navina ka hee sabse bada haath hai....

Lekin Navina ke dwara isme bhi koi dikkat na hona....Abhi ke prati Navina ke pyar ko dikhata hai....
Wo nahi chahti ki abhi use Ruhi ki jagah de.....kyoki wo khud apni ak nayi jagah bana chuki hai...m jise agar Ruhi bhi chahe to nahi mit sakti.....


At last.....
Very good update....
Thanks....

bahot bahot shukriya vikram bhai gehraayi se padhne aur eeview dene ke liye.
appreciate very much bro..
aap ne ek ek line ko sahi dekha aur analyse kiya hai
jo kuch bhi aap ne abhi ke feelings ke baare mein kaha sab exact hein, navina ke bare mein bhi jo aap ki raaye hein sharp hai,
thanks very vey much bhai

 

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Hmmmm
Very good and beautiful update.....
Mostly last part.....

Sach kahu to samajh hee nahi aa raha kya kahu iss update ke baare mai....itna jyada achcha written hai.....
Baaki ka update ak dum sahi tha ak level tak tha....lekin ise height di iske last part ne....

Abhi or Navina ka romance chal raha hai.....Abhi ko dhyaan tha ki wo Ruhi ke ghar ke saamne se guzar raha hai....
Lekin usne jaan bujh kar ignore kiya....Navina ko dukhi na karne ke liye....


Abhi ne kaafi tarakki kar li.....office mein Ruhi ghar mai bhi pc lagwa liya....khud ka laptop le liya mobile .....
Cars to to har generation me har kisi ki pasand hoti hai or ab jab Abhi khud ak karodpati hai to wo apna ye shaukh bhi bakhubi pura kar raha hai......

Mahesh ko dekh kar hee abhi ko purana sab kuch yaad aa gaya hoga jo ki usne dil me hee daba diya tha.....
Isme ye baat hai ki agar wo Manoj se na milta to kabhi bhi Ruhi se milne nahi jata....ha bhale hee wo wanha gaya or station waale se baat ki....
Lekin agar wo Manoj se na mila hota to wo agar us station par rukta bhi tab bhi wo us se baate nahi karta....
Manoj ka milna dubara uski bhaawnao ko hawa dene ke liye kaafi tha...jinhe ki wo kaafi piche chhod aaya....

Ruhi ke ghar mai sabhi ne Abhi ka interview or magazines me uski photos dekhi hai....achcha hai....har koi apne ne kiye par pachtata hoga...kisi ko apne faisle par dekha or rona bhi aata hoga........

Ruhi ke ghar mai jise GAREEB hone ka tana maara gaya tha....jiske kaam ko ghatiya bataya gaya tha....jise ki kaamchor bataya gaya tha....kaam se bhaagne wala....Aaj wo itni uchaaiyo par hai.....

Ruhi khush hogi.....bhale hee wo apni kismat par roti ho....lekin Wo uske ghar waalo ke saamne sir utha kar jeeti hogi.....

OR I'm sure uske ghar waale us se apni nazar nahi mila paane honge....



APNE USS REVIEW MAI MAI WANHI KAHNA CHAHTA THA.....jab Abhi ne Ruhi ko gaaliya dekar bhulna ki koshish ki thi.....

KI AK LAG KE KE LIYE BAHUT AASAN HOTA HAI.....YE KAH KAR KI......""RANDI HAI SAALI""......BHUL JANA BEHAD AASAN HOTA HAI....IGNORE KAR DENA JAISE KI WO USKI LIFE MAI EXIST HEE NA KARTI HO.....

LEKIN.....LEKIN.....AK LADKI KI MAZBURIYA....ONLY....AND ONLY AK LADKI HEE SAMAJH SAKTI HAI....

USKI TANHAAYI....USKA DARD OR TAKLEEF....SAB KUCH JAAN KAR BHI...SAMAJH KAR BHI....KUCH NA KAR PAANE KI USKI.....JO BEBASI HOTI HAI USE AK LADKI HEE SAMAJH SAKTI HAI.....


Abhi ka us full station waale se baat karne wala scene kaafi shaandar tha.....sab kuch hote hue bhi kuch na hone ka ahsaas....ak gaane ke bol hai....

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आके ज़रा देख तो तेरी खातिर हम किस तरह से जिये
आँसू के धागे से सीते रहे हम जो जख्म तूने दिये
चाहत की महफ़िल में गम तेरा लेकर किस्मत से खेला जुआं
दुनिया से जीते, पर तुझसे हारे, यूँ खेल अपना हुआ
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Baaki last waale part ke liye aaj jyada nahi kah paunga.....

At last
Very good update...
Thanks......

vikram bhai yeh best tha
aake zara dekh to teree khaatir ham kis tarah se jiye
aansoo ke dhaage se seete rahe ham jo jakhm toone diye
chaahat kee mahafil mein gam tera lekar kismat se khela juaan
duniya se jeete, par tujhase haare, yoon khel apana hua

Sach kahu to samajh hee nahi aa raha kya kahu iss update ke baare mai....itna jyada achcha written hai.....
Baaki ka update ak dum sahi tha ak level tak tha....lekin ise height di iske last part ne....

thanks very much yaara

Ruhi ke ghar mai jise GAREEB hone ka tana maara gaya tha....jiske kaam ko ghatiya bataya gaya tha....jise ki kaamchor bataya gaya tha....kaam se bhaagne wala....Aaj wo itni uchaaiyo par hai.....

ab socho ruhi ne kia taana mara hoga apni maa ko Abi ko oonchaaiyon par dekh kar

Ruhi khush hogi.....bhale hee wo apni kismat par roti ho....lekin Wo uske ghar waalo ke saamne sir utha kar jeeti hogi.....

exactly... aur apni maa aur manoj ko sunaaya bi hoga Ruhi ne aisa hua hoga nah bhai? jab Ruhi abi se milegi tab nah pata chalega

OR I'm sure uske ghar waale us se apni nazar nahi mila paane honge....

I AM SURE TOO

KI AK LAG KE KE LIYE BAHUT AASAN HOTA HAI.....YE KAH KAR KI......""RANDI HAI SAALI""......BHUL JANA BEHAD AASAN HOTA HAI....IGNORE KAR DENA JAISE KI WO USKI LIFE MAI EXIST HEE NA KARTI HO.....

aisa to kabhi bhi nahin kaha tha abhi ne kabhi bhi ruhi ke liye bhai?!!

USKI TANHAAYI....USKA DARD OR TAKLEEF....SAB KUCH JAAN KAR BHI...SAMAJH KAR BHI....KUCH NA KAR PAANE KI USKI.....JO BEBASI HOTI HAI USE AK LADKI HEE SAMAJH SAKTI HAI.....

bilkol sahi


bahot bahot shukriya vikram bhai

 

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Woooooowww
Brilliant update.....
Emotional and beautifully.....

Navina ki baat nahi hai....kuch log hote hee aise hai....jinhe ki bas dena hee aata hai.....bina kisi demand ke....bina kisi start ke.....
Bas kaise bhi karke saamne waale ko khush rakhna chahte hai.....phir bhale hee uske liye unhe gum uthaane pad jaaye....

Lekin Wo saamne waale ki khushi ko priorities dete hai......Navina bhi kuch aisi hee hai....

Wo achche se jaanti hai ki agar Ruhi kabhi bhi Abhi ki life mai dubara aa gayi ko uske liye kitni saari complications ho sakti hai....
Phir bhi wo abhi ke liye sirf uski khushi ke liye wo sab face karne ke liye bhi ready hai....

Negativity mai bhi positivity dhundh hee liya Navina nai....OR abhi ko bakhubi sambhal liya....

Lekin iss chij mai bhi ak point hai....OR wo ye ki....mai achchi tarah jaanta hu ki abhi kabhi Navina ke saath anyaay nahi karega....

Lekin.....lekin....ak possibility ye bhi hai ki.....future mai kabhi agar Ruhi wapas aati hai....OR bhale hee kuch der ya palo ke liye .....
Abhi bhatak jata hai....Jo ki obvious hai....kyoki jab Abhi Ruhi ke ghar ke pass hone or uski baat karne mai hee itna jyada hadbada gaya tha.....
Jab Ruhi paas mai hogi tab to uska sab kuch bhul jana confirm hai.....

OR uss pal mai....Navina ko ye Ahsas hoga...phir bhale hee wo kuch der ke liye ho....lekin hoga jarur ki kya....
Wo Abhi ki life mai kisi bhi roop mai exist karti hai...??...


Ab baat kare Abhi ki to Abhi ke liye Bas itna hee kahna chahunga ki....
JAB KUCH NAHI THA MERE PASS
TAB TU SAATH THI.....
OR AAJ JAB SAB KUCH HAI
TO TU HEE NAHI HAI.....

ABHI ki situation waisi hee hai....sab kuch hokar bhi kuch na hone ka ahsaas.....

At last....
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways
Very good update
Thanks......

Navina ki baat nahi hai....kuch log hote hee aise hai....jinhe ki bas dena hee aata hai.....bina kisi demand ke....bina kisi start ke.....
Bas kaise bhi karke saamne waale ko khush rakhna chahte hai.....phir bhale hee uske liye unhe gum uthaane pad jaaye.... Lekin Wo saamne waale ki khushi ko priorities dete hai......Navina bhi kuch aisi hee hai....

Eacly bhai navina aisi hi thi khushiyan dene wali, dusron ko khushi dekar khush hone wali thi Navina

Lekin iss chij mai bhi ak point hai....OR wo ye ki....mai achchi tarah jaanta hu ki abhi kabhi Navina ke saath anyaay nahi karega....

RIGHT

Lekin.....lekin....ak possibility ye bhi hai ki.....future mai kabhi agar Ruhi wapas aati hai....OR bhale hee kuch der ya palo ke liye .....
Abhi bhatak jata hai....Jo ki obvious hai....kyoki jab Abhi Ruhi ke ghar ke pass hone or uski baat karne mai hee itna jyada hadbada gaya tha.....
Jab Ruhi paas mai hogi tab to uska sab kuch bhul jana confirm hai.....

dekh elnge bhai

dil ki gehraayi s e aap ka shukriya vikram bhi updates ko itne shiddat se padhne ke liye aur itni achi review dene ke liye :

 

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Woooooowww so this is the update.....
A fantastic update.....
Very suspicious......

Sabse pahle baat kare Ruhi ki to....Ruhi wala part padh kar kaafi feel hua uske liye....
Jab Abhi mila us se to....usne bataya tha ki wo 19 .....20 ki thi.....OR aaj 8 saal ke baad hee wo laat hi pakad kar chal rahi hai.....wo bhi sirf 28....29 ki age mai.....so bad....

Uska bar bar feeling station par jana or abhi ke aane ke liye puchna ......saath hee station waale se Abhi ki baat sunkar rona.....uske love ko dikhata hai.....

Uski haalat bhi Abhi se kuch alag nahi hai.....balki wo bahut jyada suffer kar rahi hai.....
Lekin agar wo pahle hee sab kuch clear kar leti to kya Abhi haalat kuch aur nahin hote....

Saeed ko wapas kaam dekar achcha kiya Abhi ne.....lekin kisi ki gaddari ko koi bhi kabhi nahi bhulta....

Abhi bhi nahi bhula....OR usne saeed se pucha hee liya.....jiska jawab bhi saeed ne de diya....good...

Lekin kya so sach hai.....kya uski baat par bharosa kiya jaa sakta hai....mujhe nahi lagta....
OR agar use pata tha ki Ruhi thik nahi hai to.....usne starting mai hee abhi ko kyo nahi bata diya.....
KYO wo intezar kar raha tha ki bhai.....ak bar chidiya pura khet choog jaaye uske baad dekh lenge....
Abhi ki mental conditions phir se usi haalat me jaa rahi hai jaisi ki tab thi jab wo Ruhi ke ghar se nikala gaya tha....
Kisi ki baat maa ne ya kissi par bharosa kare samajh nahi aa raha....


Anyways
Very suspicious act...
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai...
Thanks.....

Sabse pahle baat kare Ruhi ki to....Ruhi wala part padh kar kaafi feel hua uske liye....
Jab Abhi mila us se to....usne bataya tha ki wo 19 .....20 ki thi.....OR aaj 8 saal ke baad hee wo laat hi pakad kar chal rahi hai.....wo bhi sirf 28....29 ki age mai.....so bad....

ek simple si accident bhi hua hoga... ya koyi chhoti si issue nah?

Uska bar bar feeling station par jana or abhi ke aane ke liye puchna ......saath hee station waale se Abhi ki baat sunkar rona.....uske love ko dikhata hai.....

100% right

Uski haalat bhi Abhi se kuch alag nahi hai.....balki wo bahut jyada suffer kar rahi hai.....
Lekin agar wo pahle hee sab kuch clear kar leti to kya Abhi haalat kuch aur nahin hote....

bilkool sahi pehchana aap ne vikram bhai..... abhi ko to Navina mil gayi hai..... abhi business kaam mein kissi tarah time spend kar leta hai magar ruhi kia kar rahi hai kaise ji rahi hai.... usske liye bahot ziada mushkil ho rahi hogi nah agar wo bhi Abhi se weise hi pyar karti hai to!!

Lekin kya so sach hai.....kya uski baat par bharosa kiya jaa sakta hai....mujhe nahi lagta....
OR agar use pata tha ki Ruhi thik nahi hai to.....usne starting mai hee abhi ko kyo nahi bata diya.....
KYO wo intezar kar raha tha ki bhai.....ak bar chidiya pura khet choog jaaye uske baad dekh lenge....
Abhi ki mental conditions phir se usi haalat me jaa rahi hai jaisi ki tab thi jab wo Ruhi ke ghar se nikala gaya tha....
Kisi ki baat maa ne ya kissi par bharosa kare samajh nahi aa raha....

sab saamne aega bai, sab pata chalega ke Saeed ne sahi kaha tha ya koyi aur baat thi....

bahot bahot shukriya Vikram bhai
mujhe bahot acha laga aaj aap ne updates ek ke baad ek padh kar sab par review diye....
isske liye tehe dil se dhanyawaad vikaram bhai

 

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chalo...jis raj ko chhupakar ruhi ne abhi ko gumrah kiya...................
aur jis attitude ko dikhakar manoj aur uske maa baap ne abhi ko beijjat kiya

mein chahta hu ki wo raj ruhi ke gharwalon ke samne khule............. tab dekhte hain manoj ko kitna khyal hai apni bahan ka
aur mahboob ke sath kya karega.... ya uske taluve chatega

us angan mein hungama hona chahiye................ kyonki ruhi to yehi kahegi ki na aisa kuchh hua... na usne abhi se kuchh kaha aur na ab aisa kuchh hai
wo jhuthi, makkar aur hawas ki bhookhi hai

kya aisa ho sakta hai ki 2 weeks tak mahboob ne ruhi ko choda.... aur fir har samay samne rahte huye bhi dobara koshish nahi ki........
mere khyal se ye relation ab tak bane huye hain...............
mahboob aur ruhi ka ye jismani rishta aj bhi barkarar hai.... isiliye mahboob nahin chahta ki ruhi ki shadi ho sake.... abhi se kya kisi se bhi

chahe wo dusre shahar mein silai seekhne jane ka bahana ho........... ya chachi aur nani ke ghar ka............

chachi ke yahan jis din abhi gaya tha aur chachi ne bataya ki ruhi ja chuki hai........... lekin abhi ko laga wo wahin hai
kya mahboob ke sath thi us din bhi

chalo badhiya hua.... ooparwala jo karta hai achchhe ke liye hi karta hai.............. abhi ko us gandgi se nikalkar navina jaisi biwi di...ye abhi ki khushkismati hai................meine pichhle update mein bhi is bat ko mama tha ki ruhi ka thukrana abhi ki khushkismati tha............... lekin ab kahunga ki ruhi ka abhi ki jindgi se jana............bahut badi khushnasibi hai abhi ki..............

aur ruhi ki badnasibi................... ki usne khulkar abhi aur apne gharwalon ke samne mahboob ka raj nahi ane diya....
warna uski abhi se shadi bhi ho jati...gharwale khilafat nahi karte.............aur ruhi ko bhi us nazayaj hawas ke rishte se chhootkar.... ek pyar karnewala pati aur apna ghar mil jata........................... lekin kaha jata hai................... kismat se kisi kisi ko milta hai................ baki to har kisi ko wohi milta hai jo wo apni kismat mein khud likhta hai..........................aur ruhi ne ye badnasibi apni kismat mein khud likhi thi

keep it up
besabri se agle update ka intzar hai ki ab kya karega abhi.................... kam se kam ruhi se to milega hi ek bar......

chalo...jis raj ko chhupakar ruhi ne abhi ko gumrah kiya...................
aur jis attitude ko dikhakar manoj aur uske maa baap ne abhi ko beijjat kiya

mein chahta hu ki wo raj ruhi ke gharwalon ke samne khule............. tab dekhte hain manoj ko kitna khyal hai apni bahan ka
aur mahboob ke sath kya karega.... ya uske taluve chatega

us angan mein hungama hona chahiye................

kamdev bhai aap kahin ziada jaldi conclude nahin kar rahe ho? abhi tak saabit to nahin hua nah ke jo saeed ne kaha sahi tha ya kuch aur baat hai?
weise agar sahi hai to aap bilkol sahi keh rahe hoi weisa hi hona chahiye jo aap ne kaha abhi

kya aisa ho sakta hai ki 2 weeks tak mahboob ne ruhi ko choda.... aur fir har samay samne rahte huye bhi dobara koshish nahi ki........
mere khyal se ye relation ab tak bane huye hain...............
mahboob aur ruhi ka ye jismani rishta aj bhi barkarar hai.... isiliye mahboob nahin chahta ki ruhi ki shadi ho sake.... abhi se kya kisi se bhi

chahe wo dusre shahar mein silai seekhne jane ka bahana ho........... ya chachi aur nani ke ghar ka............

Saeed ki baat sunkar abhi ne bhi aisa hi socha jaise aap keh rahe ho

thanks very much kaamdev bhai....
saare aaton ka khulassa to tabi hoga nah jab abhi Ruhi se milega
kab milega kab sab saamne aenge ussi ka intezaar rahega mujhe bhi
tehe dil se shukriya Kamdev bhai

 

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saeed ne us samay ruhi aur mahboob ka raj abhi ko nahin bataya........... ya abhi ko ruhi ki ore age badhne se nahi roka uski wajah thi...............
use mahboob ka kaam poora karana tha....jo abhi ke bina nahin ho sakta tha..................
1- abhi ruhi ke chakkar mein wahan apni capacity se bhi jyada mehnat aur lagan (concentration) se kam kar raha tha
2- ruhi ka raj khulne par mahboob se jhagda karta ....jisse saeed ka nuksan hota...bus ka kam bhi band ho jata
saeed ne utna galat nahi kiya ...........jitna ki ruhi aur uske gharwalon ne kiya............... lalacha kar thukra dena

vaise mujhe lagta hai ruhi ka ye affair mahboob aur ruhi ki sazish bhi ho sakti hai............ mahboob ke kahne par hi ruhi ne abhi se flirt kiya ...........jisse abhi mahboob ke kam ko complete kare........................... kyonki shuru mein hi mahboob hi nahi sabko pata chal gaya tha ki abhi ruhi ki ore attract hai................ isi attraction ka fayda mahboob ne ruhi ko mohra banakar uthaya.........
lekin kahin na kahin..... khud ko pyar na sahi............ abhi ke bholepan aur pyar ki gahrai ko ruhi ne samjha.... tabhi wo us angan mein jate samay abhi se milkar roi thi.................

ab agle update ka intzar hai

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Ruhi ke baare me kuch pata chala bahut acha laga. Bahut afsos bhi hua aur khushi bhi hui. Magar rona aya Ruhi ko tadapte dekh kar.... kia hua ussko? Bimaar hai wo ya koyi accident hui usski?
Baaki ke update padhkar shock laga mujhe.... main nahin maanti ke Mehboob ka kuch tha Ruhi ke saath.... bilkool yakeen nahin araha mujhe.... saeed jhoot keh raha hai, wo hamesha jhoot kehta aya hai..... koyi vajah hogi Saeed ki weisa kehne ke liye...
Hope ke jald pata chal jaega....
Fabulous update

bahot bahot shukriya Swathi dear appreciate karne ke liye