Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

[Casinar]

Casi ji kia kahun main.
Speechless kar diya aap ne.
Dekhiye aap ko hum readers se puchne ki nahin, aap ko jo likhna hai likhiye jarur.
Ho sakta hai koyi scene kissi ko passand na aaye isska matlab ye nahin ke kahani badal dena chahiye kissi ke passand nah aane se.
Mujhe writer wo passand hai jo khud apne dimag se likhta hai aur jo ussko likhna hota hai wohi likhe.
Aate hai aaj k update par to mujhe behad acha laga ye update.
Iss me koyi bhi heyraan hone wali baat hai hi nahin. Jab do insaan ek dusre ke taraf itna akarshit hote hein to ye ho jata hai. Khaas kar jiss tarah se aap ne Abhi ki maansik stithi ko darshaya, jinn lamhon ko uss dauraan wo ji rahe the, usske jism ke andar jo kuch feel ho raha tha, jiss tarah se wo Ruhi ko mehsoos kar raha tha 18 saal baad to sab kuch jo hua wo laazmi tha.
Kuch bui galat ta bura nahin laga mujhe balke sab original laga.
Aap ka tehe dil se shukriya iss behtareen, shaamdaar, lajawaab alag si update ke liye casi ji. Hats off iss naayaab writing ke liye.

tehe dil se shukriya itni achi appreciative review ke liye savi deara

 

[Casinar]

Mujhe lag raha tha k weisa kuch hone hi wala hai donon k bich aur mujhe bikool bhi heyraani nahin hui. Jiss tarah se Abhi k chhati par kal wale update me Shweta ne apni ungliyon ko ferra tha tabhi mujhe shak hua tha ke wo Abhi se sharirik sambandh banana chahti hai.
Donon k bich jo gehra emotional rishta tha lag raha tha aisa kuch hoga.
Magar Casi ji jiss behtareen tarike se aap ne aaj iss update me sab darshaya wo bilkool mere khayaal k baahar the. Ye sirf aap hi kar sakte ho. Jiss tarah aap ne Abhi k emotions ko darshaya, jiss tarah usske andar Ruhi ko present rakha usski jism aur khusbhoo ke saath ye sab to mere soch se koson door the..... sab kuch bahut normal aur natural lagne laga jiss tarah se aap ne sab kuch detail me explain karte hue likha. Hats off isske liye aap ko.

bahot bahot shukriya Komal dear, kitna acha lag raha hai kek sabko passand aya yeh update

 

[Casinar]

Fantastic
Wonderful
Mindblowing
Extraordinary
Fabulous
Amazing
Tremendous
Awesomely written Casinar. Just blew me off. Fantastic narration. Unimaginable moments of creativity. How you mixed the moments spent with Ruhi and her body fragrance to let Abhi getting emotionally drowned in getting melted in the passion with Shweta. This was just overwhelming formidable. I thoroughly enjoyed the read.
Stunning update my dear loved it to the core.

thanks so very very much for the appreciation viram bro, am very happy with the response regarding the last update

 

[Casinar]

Bhai iss update k baare me kia kahun main. Bahut chhota hun main k aap ke iss jabardast update k baare me kuch kahun.
Buss itna kehta hoon
Behtareen
Jabardast
Shaandaar
Faaadu
Gajab
Jhakaaaaas
Bahut bahut bahut khaas likha hai aap ne. Shabd nahin mere paas.

bahot bahot shukriya shambhu bhai appreciate karne ke liye yaara

 

[Casinar]

I am blown out after reading the magnificent update.
Will post review after a while

and its a pleasure for me Amity dear

 

[Casinar]

This update is overwhelming. You in fact made me speechless Casinar ji. You hv written this with such depth that I am feeling weak in front of your script to say anything.
This seldom happens to me as a readers to be short of words to comment on an update.
In fact this update is GRAND, STRONG, POWERFUL and it is beaurifully justified by your wonderfully described and narrated facts and mixed past memories and feelings.
Altogether it is a praiseworthy update which I very rarely get to read. Even you Casinar ji out of a hundred you only once come to write such a script which looks like so REAL AND HAPPENING.
Praise to you my dear.

thanks so very very much for liking and appreciating the update amity dear

 

[Casinar]

BEHTAREEN, SHAANDAAR, LAJAWAB UPDATE. ISS THREAD MEIN SAARE UPDATES ME SE EK BEHTAREEN.
Iss update mein kuch bahut hi khaas hai. Ek kashish hai, ek alag gehraayi hai, ek raaz jaisa chhupa hua hai.
Kuch hai jo saamne nahin hai par hai.
Ruhi aur Shweta donon ke jism ek jaise hein, unn donon ke jism se ek hi ek hi khusbhoo ka aana, donon ke jism ke curves, donon ke pasine ki bhuh sab bilkool itna ek jaise hein ke Abhi ko 18 saal piche lekar gaye aur Abhi ek madhoshi ki aalam mein gum Shweta ko bhaon mein bhare pyar karta raha ussko Ruhi samajh ke.
Kia update hai casi ji. Dil jeet liya aap ne.
Aur kia kahun, aap the best ho.

dil ki gehraayi se shukriya Swathi dear

 

[Casinar]

Shaandaar
Behtareen update bhai. Wah.
Ghussa k baad Abhi par to pyar ki baarish ho gayi aaj... Ruhi ke kiss bhi mil gaya aaj pehli baar Abhi ko. Bahut maja aya bhai
Magar Ruhi ko kiss karna ata hai pehle se ???
Kia raaz hai bhai?

bahot bahot shukriya jaggu bhai

 

[Casinar]

Update romantic se ab erotic k or badh raha hai
Abhi ko utejina hone laga uss kiss k baad aur Ruhibki cleavage ko dekh kar.
Ruhi ko piche milne ke liye dobara bulaya Abhi ne aur Ruhi aayi...
Agle update me wo milna dekhna hai
Behtareen update hai

bahot bahot shukriya dost

 

[Casinar]

Kia update likha hai casi bhai dhamaka tha yaar
To Abhi ko Shweta ke jism se Ruhi ki khushbhoo aarahi hai. To isska matlab kia hota hai bhai?
Shuru se ye suspense barkarar rakha hai aap ne aur aaj Abhi shweta se humbistar hi gaya.
Jiss tarike se aap ne iss update ko likha aur darshaya hai nah bhai ye bilkool hatke hai.
Jiss dauraan Abhi ne Shweta ki jism ko apne agosh me liya tha wo uss waqt iss dunya me tha hi nahin wo uss waqt 1986 mein wapas chala gaya tha aur Ruhi k baahon mein tha.
Yehi hua tha nah Casi bhai?
Kia jabardast tarika dhunda aap ne bhai Abhi ko Shweta ke saath sambhog karwane ke liye wah. Maja agaya bhai.
Jhakaad update tha bhai.

tehe dil se shukriya Nayan bhai