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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Update 11 Abhi Very Happy

Sunday ko din bhar Abhi ne apne diary mein sab kuch likha usske aur Ruhi ke baare mein. Apne feelings ko likha, ussko kia feel ho raha hai, kitna pyar karta hai Ruhi se, usske baghair jee nahin paega yeh sab likha Abhi ne.

Usske ghar mein wo apni choti behen jo 18 saal ki thi uss se bahut close tha. Abhi ussko sab kuch batata tha aur apne diary padhne ko deta tha, matlab usski uss behen ko sab kuch pata tha jo beet raha tha Abhi par. Usski behen ka naam tha Naina. Aur ek uss se bhi choti behen thi Abhi ka. Baaki aur 3 bhai the usske. Naina baaki sabko Abhi ke baare mein bata deti thi siwae usske pita ke. Matlab ghar mein usske pita ke ilawa sabko pata tha ke Abhi pyar mein hai Ruhi se.

Abhi ka din Ruhi ki yaad mein guzra hamesha ki tarah aur agle din savere savere pahunch gaya Ruhi ki aangan mein aur aaj bhi Ruhi gulaab tod rahi thi uss din ki tarah.

Iss baar Abhi ruk gaya garden ke saamne Ruhi ko dekhte hue aur good morning kaha. Ruhi weise hi apni Nightgown mein hi thi. Ek muthi mein kuch gulaab ke phool liye hue the aur dusre haath se aur phool tod rahi thi.

Ruhi ne kuch sharmilee adaa se good morning reply kiya Abhi ko magar bahot hi dhire se. Abhi khada ussko dekhta raha aur Ruhi kabhi ussko dekhti to kabhi mudhkar apne piche ghar ko dekhti ke koyi ussko dekh to nahin raha andar se.

Abhi ne pucha,

“Saturday ko tum kahan gayi thi? Aur mujhko jaane se pehle bataya kyun nahin tha?”

Ruhi muskuraayi, phir hanss padi aur aur apni dheemi, meethi awaaz mein kaha,

“Batana bhool gayi thi Friday ko, uss shaam ko aap chale gaye tab mujhe yaad aya ke aap se kehna bhool gayi thi ke Saturdays ko main ek course follow karne jaati hoon sewing ki.”

Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,

“sewing ki course? Kyun? Silaayi karogi aage chal kar kia?”

To Ruhi ne kaha,

”Aur kia kakrti? 12th ache se pass nahin hui, padhne ko aage mann nahin kiya, to mummy ne kaha silaayi seekh loon shaayad aage kaam ajaye!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“okay achcha bhi hai, magar kidhar gayi thi course follow karne ko? Kahin door kia?”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“West mein jo sheher hai wahan!”

Phir ruhi ne piche mudhkar dekhte hue kaha,

“Aap jao nah ab, aap kyun itne savere aajaate ho? Raat ko sote nahin ho kia? Abhi 6 baje hein kaam to 7 ko start hota hai nah?!”

Abhi ne jawaab diya,

“Neendh to tumne churra liye hein mere to kaise so paunga main? Aur ek baat batao kia tumko nahin passand ke main itne savere aajata hoon? Kumse kum sabke aane se pehle tumse kuch baatein karne ka mauka to mil jata hai, jaise abhi! Aur sach batao kia tum mujhko abhi expect nahin kar rahi thi? Kia tum abhi abhi mujhi ko nahin soch rahi thi?”

Ruhi hanss pari aur kaha,

“Aap mere khayaalon ke andar dekh sakte ho kia?

Abhi: “hmm isska matlab ke haan mere baare mein hi soch rahi thi tum hai nah? main to 24 ghante sirf tumko hi sochta rehta hoon, ghar se bus mein aate waqt tumhi rehti ho mere khayaalon mein to tumko bhi weisa hi sochna chahiye nah!”

Ruhi: “bilkool jhoot main aap ke bare mein bilkool bhi nahin soch rahi thi”

Aur ruhi hanss padi yeh keh kar, phir kaha,

“Aap jaao nah ab. Mera bada bhai yahin hai ussi ke liye flowers le rahi hoon wo photos leta hai apne camera se….”

Abhi ne tab kaha,

“Aur Saturday ko jab tum jaa rahi thi to ek nazar mujhko dekha bhi nahin nazrein bilkool niche jhuke hue the, mujhko ek nazar dekh to sakti thi nah?!”

Ruhi ne weise hi sharmilee andaaz mein gulaab ke phool ko dekhte hue jawaab diya,

“Main kaise nazar utha kar dekhti uss waqt sab ke nazar mujh par the mujhe maloom tha sab mujhi ko dekh rahe the, I felt very shy at that moment on that day! Magar main ne aap ko dekha tha jaate hue thoda sa. Mujhe pata tha ke aap bhi mujhko hi dekh rahe the.”

Abhi bahut khush hua usski answer se aur baat badalte hue kaha,

“Are haan Manoj bus ki bhi photos le raha tha, main ne dekha tha uss din! Wo professional photographer hai kia? Kaam kahan karta hai wo?”

Ruhi ne phir mudhkar ghar ke taraf dekhte hue reply kiya,

“Ussi sheher mein kaam karta hai jahan main silaayi ke liye jaati hoon, aur wo professional photographer to nahin magar usska shauk hai photos lena, ussko ek inaam mila tha ek baar kissi special photo ki ek photography contest mein!”

Abhi: “oh I See! Kia wo mujhe ek copy bus ki photos ka de sakta hai kia?”

Ruhi: “Ussi se maang lena, wo har roz bus ki photos leta hai, bus kaisa tha aur har roz kitna bus banta jaa raha hai, har roz kuch pics leta hai bus ki!”

Abhi: That’s great, wo mera madad kar raha hai ek tarah se, main zaroor uss se photos manguga last din ko.”

Ruhi: “To aap ko ussko pay karna padega photos ke liye!”

Abhi: “of course pay karunga. Kitna leta hai per photo?”

Ruhi: “pata nahin ussi se puch lena….. ab jao nah please, main nahin chahta hoon ke wo mujhse sawaal kare ke aap kia keh rahe the!”

Abhi: “Are to agar wo puche to keh dena ke main uss se bus ki photos kharidna chahta hoon nah!”

Ruhi ne phir hansste hue kaha,

“Bahot honshiyaar ho aap, turant aap ko ek bahana mil jata hai!”

Abhi: “Main to yahan sirf tumhare liye ata hoon; baaki to kaam to bahana hai sweetheart”

Ruhi: “main aap ki sweetheart nahin hoon kyun kehto aap mujhko sweetheart?!”

Abhi muskuraya aur jaane laga. To Ruhi ne kaha,

“Ruko please!”

Abhi: “kabhi jaane ko kehti ho kabhi rukne ko kia yaar!”

Ruhi ne tab hansste hue kaha,

“Mujhe kehna tha ke din mein kaam karte waqt aap baar baar mujhse baat karne mat ana khaas kar jab Mehboob chacha yahan hota hai!”

Abhi ne heyraan hote hue pucha,

“Are wo kyun? Mehboob ne kuch kaha kia?!”

Ruhi: “Haan baad mein bataungi aap ab jao!”

Abhi ne jaate hue kaha,

“Saturday ko tum Qayamat dhaa rahi thi, beauty queen lag rahi thi, itni khubsurat ho socha nahin tha, tum par to kayi mitte honge mere ilawa hai nah? jab uss sheher mein jaati ho to kitnon par Bijli giraati hogi tum hmmm?!”

Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“mujhe kia pata? Aap jaise diwane aur honge kahin to main kia jaanun!”

Abhi: “shukar hai ke mere ilawa kissi aur ka pata nahin tumko varna mujhe takliff hoti!”

Ruhi tab thoda zor se hanss padi aur khud apne muhn par haath rakh kar piche ghar ke taraf dekha aur dhire se phussphussaate hue Abhi se kaha,

“Ab jao please baad mein milti hoon! Jab Manoj chala jaaye tab milna!”

Abhi khush hua aur chala gaya washroom ke taraf.

Washroom ke ke kone se Abhi watch karne laga Ruhi ko aur dekha ke wo terrace se hokar ghar ke saamne ke darwaze ke andar gayi tabhi Manoj ki awaaz sunaayi diya yeh kehte hue,

“are ek do katra paani daalo uss rose par nah tab click karunga”

Abhi samajh gaya ke andar Manoj unn gulaabon ki tasveerin le raha tha.

Bus 10 mins baad Manoj kitchen ke taraf se apne bag kaandhe par taange nikla aur Abhi se hello kaha aur jaane laga to Abhi ne ussko roka, aur Manoj ne muskurate hue kaha,

“Are bus miss ho jaegi shaam ko wapas aunga to baat karenge”

Magar Abhi ne kaha,

“to chalte hue baat karta hoon nah chalo tumko bus stop tak chorr ke ata hoon baat bhi kar lenge.”

Ruhi kitchen ke stairs par aa khadi hui Abhi ko usske bhai se baat karte hue sunkar. Abhi ne ussko dekha aur Ruhi Abhi se muskuraayi. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi Manoj se bus ki photos ke baare mein baat karna chahta tha.

Aur jab Abhi aur Ruhi ne ek dusre se muskuraaye to Manoj ne donon ko ek dusre se muskuraate hue dekh kar hanssa.

Phir Abhi Manoj ke saath chalte hue bus stop tak gaya aur ussne Manoj se kaha ke jitney bhi photos wo bus ka lega unn sab pics ke ek copy ussko dein aur pucha ke per photo kitna lega. Manoj ne kaha 10 rupay ek photo ki. Abhi ne kaha okay aur tab manoj ne kaha ke,6 Mahinon mein 300 se ziada pics ho jayenge kia Abhi utna pay kar paega Manoj ne pucha, to Abhi ne kaha ke agar 500 pics bhi hue tab bhi pay karega. To Manoj ne kaha okay deal. Phir turant Abhi ne jeb se 500 rupay Manoj ko advance payment kar diya to Manoj ne kaha ke issi hafte mein pehla roll ko develop karega to jitney bus ki pictures hein wo Abhi ko dega.

Abhi kuch door ka soch raha tha is sliye ussko wo bus ki photos chahiye tha aur ussne Monoj se Saeed ko bataane se mana kiya ke Abhi uss se photos le raha hai. Yeh bhi kaha Abhi ne ke kabhi workers ko nahin lena photos mein, Saeed ko to bilkool bhi nahin lena, agar Abhi ko photos mein liya to koyi baat nahin…..

Yeh baad mein pata chalega ke Abhi ko kyun uss bus ke photos shuru se end tak chahiye tha. Abhi ne abhi se hi bade door ka soch rakha tha. Ek din future mein saare photos usske bade kaam aane wale the.

Abhi wapas aangan mein gaya aur Ruhi ko dhundne laga. 6.30 hua thato usske paas 30 mins tha Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. Washroom se kitchen mein dekha to koyi nahin tha, phir bus ke piche wale hisse se washing stone ke taraf dekha to wahan ke room ka khidki khuli hui dekha… ussko umeed thi ke Ruhi uss kamrre mein hogi…. Kuch himmat karke Abhi chalte hue wahan tak gaya…magar kamre ke andar dekhne ki himmat nahin hui ussko. Bahot ganda lagta kissi ke kamre mein dekhte hue ussne socha…

Ab kyunke Abhi kad ka ooncha tha to ussko sirf kamre mein dekhna tha to sab kuch dikh jata ussko, magar ussne dekha nahin iss niyat se gaya wo uss taraf ke agar Ruhi andar hogi to kum se kum Ruhi to ussko dekh paegi. Aur wohi hua, jaise Ruhi ne Abhi ko uss khidki se guzarte dekha to ussne gala saaf kiya Abhi ko jaise ek ishara kiya ke wo andar hai…. Bed par baithi, haath mein ek kitab liye Ruhi Abhi ko dekh rahi thi muskuraate hue.

Abhi ne ussko dekha, uss kamre a moaena kiya, aur pucha,

“is this your bedroom?!”

Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“It can’t be called a bedroom, too small, but yes I sleep here, this is my bed.”

Abhi: “you can’t understand how lucky I am feeling to be introduced to the bed and place you sleep. It’s an honour for me.!”

Ruhi: “Ah really? Why so?!”

Abhi: “yessss my dear…. What are you reading?”

To Ruhi ne kitab ki cover ko turn karte hue Abhi ko book ki title dikhaayi, book tha ek Mills and Boon wala romantic tale. Cover ke pic par ek aurat thi semi nude ek bina shirt ke hero se lipti hui.

Abhi ne pucha,

“you love to read romantic stories only or any variety in your choice?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“nah mujhe sirf romantic hi padhna passand hai, detectives, horror ya police bilkool nahin passand sirf ziada tar mills and boon ya dusre author ke but romantic hi padhti hoon.”

Phir Ruhi ne ek collection dikhaya Abhi ko usski table par. Karib 25 ya 30 books the sab ke sab Mills and Boons collection wale. Abhi ne dekh kar muskuraya aur pucha,

“Abhi hum donon baatein kar rahe hein to ghar ke andar sab sun nahin rahe hein ke tum mujhse baat kar rahi ho?!”

Ruhi ne kaandhe ko uchakte hue kaha,

“To kia hua sunne do!”

Abhi: “tumhari mummy so rahi hai ya jaag gayi hai? Aur tumhare papa ko nahin dekha aaj tak main ne kahan hota hai wo, der raat ko kaam se wapas ata hai kia?!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Mera papa Saudi Arabia mein driving ki Naukri karte hein, wo wapas ane hi wala hai kuch mahine baad!”

Abhi: “oh I see! To tum, tumhari mummy, Manoj aur Mahesh rehte ho yahan!”

Ruhi ne add kiya,

“Dadaji bhi!”

Abhi: “are haan dada ji ko bhool gaya main! Aur buss itne hi members hein tumhare family mein?”

Ruhi: “no, meri ek badi behen hein jisski shaadi ho chuki hai wo yahan se 100 kms ki doorie par rehti hai. Kabhi kabhaar aati hai.”

Abhi: “wow great then to have an elder sis!”

Ruhi: “hmmm yes!”

Abhi: “acha yeh batao ke kyun tumne mujhse kaha ke jab Mehboob present ho to tumse baat nah karun? Kia kaha ussne?!”

Ruhi ne kamre mein piche dekha tab awaaz dhimi karke kaha,

“Mere papa aur Mehboob bhai jaise hein. Mere papa ne ussko hum logon ka khayal rakhne ke liye kaha hai, halaan ke bus ke piche wala ghar mere chote chacha ki hai, matlab mere papa ka chota bhai hai, phir bhi Mehboob mere chacha se badhkar hai. Uss ne meri mummy se pucha ke main aap se kyun baar baar baat karti hoon! To mummy ne wo baat mujhse kaha, to main samajh gayi ke unnko nahin achha lagta jab hum donon baat karte hein issi liye aap se kaha ke usski haaziri mein mat baat karna mujhse se”

Abhi: “okay main samajh gaya, usske saamne tumse baat nahin karunga.”

Ruhi: “are eise nahin, jaise hum abhi kar rahe hein aise mat karna but wahan jab sab koyi ek saath hein agar mummy, Mehboob chacha, Rahima chachi, Mahesh sab saath hein tab you can talk, but not like this alone me and you, samjhe aap?!”

Abhi: “thik hai samajh gaya main, magar ek dusre ko dekh to sakte hein nah, tum nazar aati rehna please. Main tumko har baar dekhna passand karta hoon. Agar ek ghanta ho gaya aur tum nazar nahin aayi to mujhe bechaini hone lagti hai to please saamne aaya karna hat baar okay?!”

Ruhi: “mujhe pata hai. Issi liye to aati rehti hoon nah!”

Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaha,

“thanks very much darling, ab chalta hoon weh log aane wale hein ab kaam start karna hoga. Aur dekha nah tumne pucha ke main kyun itne savera ajaata hoon, to ab samjhi, hum donon ko baatein karne ke liye kitna time mil gaya hai nah?!”

Ruhi ne haan mein muskuraate hue gardan hillayi.

Abhi jaane laga, phir wapas aya aur pucha,

“How old are you Ruhi? I am 22 will be 23 this year and you?”

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“ladkiyon ki umar nahin puche jaate, bad manners hihihi”

Abhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“ofo pata hai yaar, par main ne apni age bataya nah tumko so please tell me, kahin tum mujhse badi nikli to?!”

Ruhi zor se hanss padi aur kaha,

“haan main aap se badi hi hoon hihihihihi!!”

Abhi ne bhi hansste hue kaha,

“koyi baat nahin agar badi ho bhi to, umar se kia lena dena!”

Ruhi: “Aap ko koyi farak nahin padega agar main aap se umar mein badi hui to?

Abhi: “bilkool bhi nahin iss mein kaun si badi baat hai? Chalta hai yaar!”

Ruhi: “Acha aur aap ko lagta hai ke main aap se umar mein badi hoon kia?!”

Abhi: “bilkool hi nahin, tum 17, 18 ki lagti ho!! are yaar bata to do, 18 ho chuki ya ab bhi minor ho hehehehe!”

Ruhi: “ho chuki….. hmmmm I am over 19! Will be 20 this year!”

Abhi: “great that’s perfect then, ok see you later”

Aur Abhi chala gaya change karne, tab tak baaki ke sab agaye.

To be continued….. (2750 words)
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Update 14 Did the Quarrel End? How?

Subha Abhi late utha. Ziada peene ki vajah se sota raha. 8.30 ko bus mein tha kaam ke liye jaane ko. Yeh pehli baar hua tha jiss din se wahan kaam kar raha tha.

Pahunchne se pehle bus mein jaate waqt Abhi of course sirf Ruhi ke baare mein hi soch raha tha aur kal ke hue wakiye ko…. Abhi ab yeh sochne laga tha ke subha ko sabse pehle kaam par reach hone wala aaj 8.30 ko reach nahin hua hai, aur socha ke Ruhi kia soch rahi hogi 6 baje se 8.30 tak jab ussko wahan nahin dekha hoga to? Abhi sochne laga,

“Kia Ruhi mujhko dhund rahi hogi? 6 baje se meri raah dekh rahi hogi nah? kissi se puchne aayi hogi ke main kyun nahin aya hoon? Are yaar kahin wo yeh nah soche ke iss liye ke ussne kaha tha ke main nahin aunga to bala tal gayi usski; iss liye main nahin aya hoon…..”

Ab Abhi ke dil mein phir se wo baat aayi ke Ruhi ne uss se kaha tha ke usske liye bala tal jaegi agar ussne wahan aana band kar diya to…. Yeh sochne ke baad Abhi ko bus se utarne ka mann nahin kiya, socha ke ab kaam par jaaye hi nahin. Wo abhi tak hurt feel kar raha tha uss baat ko soch kar…. Aur ek pal ke liye Abhi ne socha ke hamesha ke liye issi waqt se wahan jaana band karde aur uss kaam ko chorr de! Tab hamesha ke liye saare lafde khatam!!

Aisa soch to liya dil mein Abhi ne magar wahan pahuchne par bus se uss bus stop par hi utra jahan utarna tha, yaane Ruhi ke ghar ke paas wale bus stop par. 9 bajne wala tha aur tab abhi uss aangan mein chalte hue nazar aya. Saeed aur Vinay bus ke uss side par the jiss taraf wo bada darkhat tha, aur Tony bus ke paas tap one ke paas kuch kar raha tha, abhi washroom pahuncha to Tony usske paas gaya aur kaha,

“are yaar main ne socha tu nahin aega, Saeed ghussa kar raha tha aur bura bhala bhi kehne laga tha tujhe!”

Abhi ne kapde badalte hue aur Ruhi ke kitchen ke andar dekhte hue kaha,

“bhai goli maar Saeed ko aur yeh bata Ruhi nazar aayi ke nahin yaar?!”

Tony: “Abhi wo subha se kayi chakkar laga chuki hai, rone wali surat banaayi hui hai, khud mujhse kayi baar puch chuki ke tu kidhar hai aur usski maa aayi Saeed se puchne ke tu kyun nahin aya aaj!”

Abhi ne shirt pehente hue kaha,

“Really? That’s nice yaar, that’s very good news, magar ab kidhar hai wo ladki mujhe paagal banaane wali?!”

Tony: “Tujhko andar se zaroor dekh rahi hogi aur muskura rahi hogi, tere expression ko read kar rahi hogi ke tu abhi tak ghussa to nahin, ussko pata hoga ke kal tere liye wo saamne nahin aayi to tu ghussa hoga, andar muskuraate hue tujhe dekh rahi hogi. Bahot hi khush ho rahi hogi ke tu agaya hai. Dekna abhi zaroor
tere saamne aegi.”

Abhi: “Achah? To bala kaise talegi agar main aata hi raha to?! Ho sakta hai ke yeh bhi keh rahi hogi ke yeh bala phir agaya!”

Tony? “Ab chorr yaar, abhi tak tu uss baat ko dil mein liye baitha hai? Wo tujhse bahot pyar karti hai tujhe paagalon ki tarah dhund rahi thi!”

Abhi: "terrace par jhadu laga diya ussne, poncha laga diya kia?”

Tony: “nahin kuch nahin kiya sirf teri raah dekh rahi hai subha se, usski nazrein sirf main road par aur aate hue bus par rehti thi subha se!

Abhi: “yaar tony to ab kyun nahin dikh rahi hai? Mere saamne aa nahin sakti kia? Marr gayi kia wo?!”

Tony: “are yaar itna ghussa kyun karne laga achaanak tu? Wo sun legi yaar. Kamaal hai udhar Saeed ghussa kar raha hai idhar tu kia ho gaya hai? Kissi ki nazar to nahin lagi hein kahin?!”

Abhi: “bhaad mein jaaye saeed kaun si badi toap hai wo, chal karte hein jo kaam karna hai…..”

Jab Abhi aur Tony bus ke taraf jaane lage to Abhi ko Ruhi ki blue dress ki ek choti si jhalak dikhaayi diya lounge mein hawa se parde ke hillne ki vajah se. Matlab Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi ussko andar se dekh rahi thi.

Aur 9.15 ko Abhi ne kaam karna start kiya aur Saeed shuru hua;

“kia hai abhi? Aise kaam kiya jaata hai kia? Subha ke 9.15 ko kaam shuru hota hai kia?

Ek to Abhi pehle se ghusse mein tha Ruhi ki kal wale vyohaar ko lekar aur ab Saeed uss par chilla raha tha to Abhi ne bhi ghusse mein aur oonchi awaaz mein Saeed ko jawaab diya.

Donon mei tutu main main hone laga aur tension badhne lage…. Awaaz door tak sunaayi dene lage donon ke aur dhadpdaate hue Mehboob apne ghar se baahar aya aur donon ko shaant karne ki koshish kiye…. Saeed Abhi ko suna raha tha aur Abhi saeed ko…. Saeed ne ek baar kaha,

“yahan herogiri karne nahin aate hein kaam karne aate hein, Mehboob ne humko kaam karne ke liye paise diye hein flirt karne ke liye nahin, kia karta rehta hai tu kaam karne ke waqt, kia karne jata hai wahan uss washing stone ke paas? Kaam wahan hota hai kia?”

Ruhi aur usski maa sab sun rahe the, aur Ruhi ne apni maa ke chehre mein dekha, udaasi aur darr ke saath….. Ruhi ne kabhi nahin socha tha ke kuch aisa hoga….

Abhi ne Saeed ki uss baat ka yeh jawaab diya chilaate hue,

“kyun be tere gaand mein kyun aag lagta hai agar main wahan jata hoon to? Kaam to pura karta hoon tujh se bahut ziada kaam main ne kiya hai iss bus mein dikhaun tujhko, naap lagayega tum ne kitna kaam kiya aur main ne kitna?”

Mehboob ko pata tha ke Abhi ne bahut ziada kaam kiya hua hai to ussne Abhi ke kaandhe par haath rakh kar ussko ek taraf karne ki koshish kiya, magar Saeed ne bhi oonchi awaaz mein kaha ke ussko bataaye ke kaise Abhi ne ziada kaam kiya hai, to ussi tone mein, ghusse mein Abhi ne kaha,

“yeh dekh shuruwaat yahan se kiya tha main ne front side, jo back side se 50 gunah ziada complicated aur mushkil hai phir bhi tujh se pehle main ne right panel ko banana shuru kar diya aur tu back side par hi laga hua tha, jab main ne front side aur right panel pura kar diya tab jahan tujhko left panel pura karna tha wo bhi uss mein aadha se ziada main ne complete kiya, main ne upar ke kaam bhi aadha se ziada kar diya, to tere mukable 100 gunah ziada kaam kiya hai main ne iss bus mein sala mujhko 2 ghante ki lateness ke liye sunata hai? Main tujhko sunaunga to tere adhe paise mere hone chahiye, suna tum ne mujhe ghussa mat dila varna sab chorr chaar ke chala jaunga yahan se ek to bala banke mandra raha hoon kissi ke liye, nikal hi jaun to achchah hai!”

Abhi itna ghusse mein tha ke Mehboob ussko sambhal nahin paa raha tha, Ruhi aur usski maa terrace par nikal gaye the sab dekhte hue, to Mehboob ko laga ke sirf Ruhi Abhi ko shant kar paegi, to Mehboob ne Ruhi ke maa ke taraf dekha aur ishaare se ussko kuch kaha, aur Ruhi ki maa aayi Abhi ke bazu pakra aur apne terrace ke taraf lejaate hue ahiste aur araam se kaha,

“Idhar chalo aao aao ssshhhh ghussa thuk do aao nah dekho Ruhi tumko bula rahi hai aao nah beta, aisa nahin karte, thand rakho beta…” tab tak chalte hue Ruhi ghar ke piche wale hisse mein jaa chuki thi aur apni maa ko Abhi ko apne saat laate hue dekh rahi thi….

Wo hissa ghar ke piche tha washing stone se thoda door, Ruhi ki aankhe bhar aayi thi kyunke ussne sab suna ke Abhi ne kuch der pehle kaha ke kissi ke liye wo bala ban chuka hai to behtar hai ke sab chorr chaar kar chala jaaye… ruhi apni kahi hui baat par bahot pachta rahi thi aur jaise Ruhi ki maa Abhi ko uss kone mein laaya Ruhi Abhi se lipat gayi rote hue aur Abhi ke peeth par apne komal kalaayi ko ferrte hue Ruhi kayi baar rote hue kehti gayi,

“I am sorry, I am very very sorry, please forgive me, will you? Mujhe maaf kardo Abhi mujhse ghalati hui, mujhe kal wo nahin kehna chahiye tha I am so sorry Abhi!”

Abhi ka jism shake kar raha tha ghusse se, aur jitna zor se Ruhi ne ussko apne baahon mein jakra tha Ruhi usske jism ki wo thartharaahat feel kar rahi thi…. Aur Ruhi khud kaampne lagi rote hue aur maafi maangte hue. Ruhi ki maa sab dekh rahi thi aur apni beti ko rote hue dekh kar wo khud apni aankh se aansoo ponch rahi thi.

Abhi jaise hosh mein nahin tha uss waqt. Usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kia ho raha hai…. Ussko laga ke sab ek sapna tha… aur ahiste ahiste Abhi ne apne baahon ko uthaya aur Ruhi ke kaandhe par kiya, Ruhi ka badan pura Abhi ke jism se chipki hui thi uss waqt, Aur oonche kad ke hone ke kaaran Ruhi ka sar Abhi ke chaati par tha aur wo Abhi ke dil ki dhadkanon ko saaf sun rahi thi. Ruhi ke donon baahein Abhi ke baazu ke niche se hokar ussko jakre hue the…. Ruhi ke aankhon se ab bhi ashk jaari the, aur jis pal ko Ruhi ne Abhi ke haathon ko apne kaandhe par feel kiya tab usski aankon ke aansoo ruke aur usski maa wahan se wapas terrace par chali gayi aur Mehboob ne uss se kaha ke Abhi ko kuch der udhar hi rehne de taake wo shant ho sake. Ruhi ki maa tab Mehboob aur saeed se baatein karne lage jaanne ke liye ke jhagda kyun aur kaise shuru hua. Dhire se Mehboob ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha ke iss mein Abhi ki ghalati nahin hai ussne sach mein saeed se bahot ziada kaam kiya hai bus mein.

Udhar jab Abhi ke haath Ruhi ke kaandhe par gaye to Ruhi ne apne chehre ko usske chhati par sattaye hue hi kaha,

“Aap mujhe apne baahon mein bharna chahte the nah? Lo bhar liya aapne mujhe apne baahon mein ab khush?!”

Abhi ki saansein tez chal rahe the aur wo thoda hannff raha tha, to Ruhi ne ussi position mein kaha,

“Baap re itna ghussa uff mujhe nahin pata tha aap itne ghusse wale ho, aap to bahot cool aur sweet dikhte the itne dinon se aap ko sambhaalna bada mushkil hai!”

Abhi kuch nahin bol raha tha, jaise ab bhi kisi shock mein dooba hua tha, to Ruhi ko sar upar utha kar Abhi ke chehre mein dekhna pada, aur dekha ke abhi khoya hua hai to kaha,

“Aap ka ghussa mujh par tha nah? Mere wale ghussa aap nikaal rahe the nah? kal se ghussa paal rahe the aap mere khilaaf Abhi? Main nahin dikhi thi iss liye? Main ne saare parde khinch liye the iss liye? Main ne bala tal jaegi kaha tha iss liye? Main ne to buss mazaak kiya tha Abhi, I did not mean it at all! I am so sorry ke mere munh se wo shabd nikal gaye the Abhi. Main kal hi aap ko sorry kehne ke liye wait kar rahi thi lunch time ke waqt magar aap aaye hi nahin main wait karti rahi, to mera bhi mood off hua issi liye main shaam ko nahin nikli thi magar main aap ko andar se jaate hue dekh rahi thi Abhi. Pleaae forgive me nah!”

Abhi ne ek bahot lambi sanns liye jiss se Ruhi ki chaati aage badhi phir piche hue Abhi se chipki hui jo thi. Do jism ek jaan lag rahe the donon uss waqt.

Ruhi ne phir usske seene par apne gaal ko satta diya aur kaha,

“Aap mere liye bala kaise ho sakte ho bhala? Main to chahungi ke aap umar bhar har roz yahan aao aur main aap ko issi aangan mein dekhun zindagi bhar Abhi! …. Abhi aaj aap meri vajah se late aaye? Bataiye nah, kia aap nahin aane wale the aaj? Meri kal ki kahi hui baat ki vajah se? Pata hai, main aaj subha 4 baje se uth chuki hoon aur aap ki raah dekhti rahi dekhti rahi, socha 6 bajne se pehle ajaoge aaj kyunke kal shaam ko aap ne mujhe nahin dekha tha nah, iss liye main barpaayi karna chahti thi Abhi magar aap aaye hi nahin…. Aap ko pata hai mujh par kia beet rahi thi jab sab log aagaye aur aap nain aaye? Pata hai main ne kitna dhunda aap ko? Main ro pari thi Abhi, main apni maa se saari baatein kehte hue fut fut kar ro rahi thi, maa ko bheja tha saeed ji se puchne ke aap kyun nahin aaye ho, mujhe darr tha ke kahin meri kahi hui baat ki vajah se aap ab kabhi bhi nahin awo…. Main kia karti tab? Aap kyun late aaye aaj abhi? Boliye nah, mujhe sazaa dene ke liye hmm? You were punishing me?!”

Ruhi ki meethi awaaz mein tadap thi, aaj pehli baar jiss awaaz ko sunne ke liye Abhi tarasta tha uss awaaz mein itna tadap mehsoos kar raha tha.

Tab Abhi ne apna sar niche jhukaya, Ruhi ki thudi ko apne ungliyon se apne chehre ke taraf uthaya, Ruhi ke aankhon ne Abhi ke ankhon mein dekha, Abhi ne jhuk kar apne honton ko Ruhi ke honton par rakh diya…. Ruhi apne toes par khadi hui aur Abhi ko kiss karne lagi ziada zoron se Abhi ko jakarte hue….

Abhi ne life mein kabhi kissi ladki ko kiss nahin kiya tha, usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kaise kia karein, sirf apne honth ko Ruhi ke honton se takraya tha ussne, magar Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi, Abhi ko ussi pal laga ke ussko kiss karna to ata hi nahin magar Ruhi ko kiss karna ata tha!!

To be continued…. (2450 Words)

Jabardast update bhai. Dil ko chuh dene wala update. Mere to aankhen nam ho gaye Ruhi ko uss tarah se maafi maangte hue dekh kar. Kitna pyar karti hai wo Abhi se magar kyun itni doorie rakhti thi, kyun itna tadpati thi Abhi ko shuru mein?
Kia baat hai ji Ruhi bata nahin sakti Abhi ko?
Bhai jiss tarah se aap ne Abhi aur Ruhi ko milaya nah wo kamaal ka tha. Bilkool nahin socha tha k ek aur ladaayi hogi aur iss baar saeed k saath. Sala jaise loha lohe ko kaatta hai waise hi ladaayi ladaayi ko end karta hai:D
Bahut badhya, intense aur romantic update bhai. Behtareen likha gaya hai. Hats off.
 

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Subha Abhi late utha. Ziada peene ki vajah se sota raha. 8.30 ko bus mein tha kaam ke liye jaane ko. Yeh pehli baar hua tha jiss din se wahan kaam kar raha tha.

Pahunchne se pehle bus mein jaate waqt Abhi of course sirf Ruhi ke baare mein hi soch raha tha aur kal ke hue wakiye ko…. Abhi ab yeh sochne laga tha ke subha ko sabse pehle kaam par reach hone wala aaj 8.30 ko reach nahin hua hai, aur socha ke Ruhi kia soch rahi hogi 6 baje se 8.30 tak jab ussko wahan nahin dekha hoga to? Abhi sochne laga,

“Kia Ruhi mujhko dhund rahi hogi? 6 baje se meri raah dekh rahi hogi nah? kissi se puchne aayi hogi ke main kyun nahin aya hoon? Are yaar kahin wo yeh nah soche ke iss liye ke ussne kaha tha ke main nahin aunga to bala tal gayi usski; iss liye main nahin aya hoon…..”

Ab Abhi ke dil mein phir se wo baat aayi ke Ruhi ne uss se kaha tha ke usske liye bala tal jaegi agar ussne wahan aana band kar diya to…. Yeh sochne ke baad Abhi ko bus se utarne ka mann nahin kiya, socha ke ab kaam par jaaye hi nahin. Wo abhi tak hurt feel kar raha tha uss baat ko soch kar…. Aur ek pal ke liye Abhi ne socha ke hamesha ke liye issi waqt se wahan jaana band karde aur uss kaam ko chorr de! Tab hamesha ke liye saare lafde khatam!!

Aisa soch to liya dil mein Abhi ne magar wahan pahuchne par bus se uss bus stop par hi utra jahan utarna tha, yaane Ruhi ke ghar ke paas wale bus stop par. 9 bajne wala tha aur tab abhi uss aangan mein chalte hue nazar aya. Saeed aur Vinay bus ke uss side par the jiss taraf wo bada darkhat tha, aur Tony bus ke paas tap one ke paas kuch kar raha tha, abhi washroom pahuncha to Tony usske paas gaya aur kaha,

“are yaar main ne socha tu nahin aega, Saeed ghussa kar raha tha aur bura bhala bhi kehne laga tha tujhe!”

Abhi ne kapde badalte hue aur Ruhi ke kitchen ke andar dekhte hue kaha,

“bhai goli maar Saeed ko aur yeh bata Ruhi nazar aayi ke nahin yaar?!”

Tony: “Abhi wo subha se kayi chakkar laga chuki hai, rone wali surat banaayi hui hai, khud mujhse kayi baar puch chuki ke tu kidhar hai aur usski maa aayi Saeed se puchne ke tu kyun nahin aya aaj!”

Abhi ne shirt pehente hue kaha,

“Really? That’s nice yaar, that’s very good news, magar ab kidhar hai wo ladki mujhe paagal banaane wali?!”

Tony: “Tujhko andar se zaroor dekh rahi hogi aur muskura rahi hogi, tere expression ko read kar rahi hogi ke tu abhi tak ghussa to nahin, ussko pata hoga ke kal tere liye wo saamne nahin aayi to tu ghussa hoga, andar muskuraate hue tujhe dekh rahi hogi. Bahot hi khush ho rahi hogi ke tu agaya hai. Dekna abhi zaroor
tere saamne aegi.”

Abhi: “Achah? To bala kaise talegi agar main aata hi raha to?! Ho sakta hai ke yeh bhi keh rahi hogi ke yeh bala phir agaya!”

Tony? “Ab chorr yaar, abhi tak tu uss baat ko dil mein liye baitha hai? Wo tujhse bahot pyar karti hai tujhe paagalon ki tarah dhund rahi thi!”

Abhi: "terrace par jhadu laga diya ussne, poncha laga diya kia?”

Tony: “nahin kuch nahin kiya sirf teri raah dekh rahi hai subha se, usski nazrein sirf main road par aur aate hue bus par rehti thi subha se!

Abhi: “yaar tony to ab kyun nahin dikh rahi hai? Mere saamne aa nahin sakti kia? Marr gayi kia wo?!”

Tony: “are yaar itna ghussa kyun karne laga achaanak tu? Wo sun legi yaar. Kamaal hai udhar Saeed ghussa kar raha hai idhar tu kia ho gaya hai? Kissi ki nazar to nahin lagi hein kahin?!”

Abhi: “bhaad mein jaaye saeed kaun si badi toap hai wo, chal karte hein jo kaam karna hai…..”

Jab Abhi aur Tony bus ke taraf jaane lage to Abhi ko Ruhi ki blue dress ki ek choti si jhalak dikhaayi diya lounge mein hawa se parde ke hillne ki vajah se. Matlab Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi ussko andar se dekh rahi thi.

Aur 9.15 ko Abhi ne kaam karna start kiya aur Saeed shuru hua;

“kia hai abhi? Aise kaam kiya jaata hai kia? Subha ke 9.15 ko kaam shuru hota hai kia?

Ek to Abhi pehle se ghusse mein tha Ruhi ki kal wale vyohaar ko lekar aur ab Saeed uss par chilla raha tha to Abhi ne bhi ghusse mein aur oonchi awaaz mein Saeed ko jawaab diya.

Donon mei tutu main main hone laga aur tension badhne lage…. Awaaz door tak sunaayi dene lage donon ke aur dhadpdaate hue Mehboob apne ghar se baahar aya aur donon ko shaant karne ki koshish kiye…. Saeed Abhi ko suna raha tha aur Abhi saeed ko…. Saeed ne ek baar kaha,

“yahan herogiri karne nahin aate hein kaam karne aate hein, Mehboob ne humko kaam karne ke liye paise diye hein flirt karne ke liye nahin, kia karta rehta hai tu kaam karne ke waqt, kia karne jata hai wahan uss washing stone ke paas? Kaam wahan hota hai kia?”

Ruhi aur usski maa sab sun rahe the, aur Ruhi ne apni maa ke chehre mein dekha, udaasi aur darr ke saath….. Ruhi ne kabhi nahin socha tha ke kuch aisa hoga….

Abhi ne Saeed ki uss baat ka yeh jawaab diya chilaate hue,

“kyun be tere gaand mein kyun aag lagta hai agar main wahan jata hoon to? Kaam to pura karta hoon tujh se bahut ziada kaam main ne kiya hai iss bus mein dikhaun tujhko, naap lagayega tum ne kitna kaam kiya aur main ne kitna?”

Mehboob ko pata tha ke Abhi ne bahut ziada kaam kiya hua hai to ussne Abhi ke kaandhe par haath rakh kar ussko ek taraf karne ki koshish kiya, magar Saeed ne bhi oonchi awaaz mein kaha ke ussko bataaye ke kaise Abhi ne ziada kaam kiya hai, to ussi tone mein, ghusse mein Abhi ne kaha,

“yeh dekh shuruwaat yahan se kiya tha main ne front side, jo back side se 50 gunah ziada complicated aur mushkil hai phir bhi tujh se pehle main ne right panel ko banana shuru kar diya aur tu back side par hi laga hua tha, jab main ne front side aur right panel pura kar diya tab jahan tujhko left panel pura karna tha wo bhi uss mein aadha se ziada main ne complete kiya, main ne upar ke kaam bhi aadha se ziada kar diya, to tere mukable 100 gunah ziada kaam kiya hai main ne iss bus mein sala mujhko 2 ghante ki lateness ke liye sunata hai? Main tujhko sunaunga to tere adhe paise mere hone chahiye, suna tum ne mujhe ghussa mat dila varna sab chorr chaar ke chala jaunga yahan se ek to bala banke mandra raha hoon kissi ke liye, nikal hi jaun to achchah hai!”

Abhi itna ghusse mein tha ke Mehboob ussko sambhal nahin paa raha tha, Ruhi aur usski maa terrace par nikal gaye the sab dekhte hue, to Mehboob ko laga ke sirf Ruhi Abhi ko shant kar paegi, to Mehboob ne Ruhi ke maa ke taraf dekha aur ishaare se ussko kuch kaha, aur Ruhi ki maa aayi Abhi ke bazu pakra aur apne terrace ke taraf lejaate hue ahiste aur araam se kaha,

“Idhar chalo aao aao ssshhhh ghussa thuk do aao nah dekho Ruhi tumko bula rahi hai aao nah beta, aisa nahin karte, thand rakho beta…” tab tak chalte hue Ruhi ghar ke piche wale hisse mein jaa chuki thi aur apni maa ko Abhi ko apne saat laate hue dekh rahi thi….

Wo hissa ghar ke piche tha washing stone se thoda door, Ruhi ki aankhe bhar aayi thi kyunke ussne sab suna ke Abhi ne kuch der pehle kaha ke kissi ke liye wo bala ban chuka hai to behtar hai ke sab chorr chaar kar chala jaaye… ruhi apni kahi hui baat par bahot pachta rahi thi aur jaise Ruhi ki maa Abhi ko uss kone mein laaya Ruhi Abhi se lipat gayi rote hue aur Abhi ke peeth par apne komal kalaayi ko ferrte hue Ruhi kayi baar rote hue kehti gayi,

“I am sorry, I am very very sorry, please forgive me, will you? Mujhe maaf kardo Abhi mujhse ghalati hui, mujhe kal wo nahin kehna chahiye tha I am so sorry Abhi!”

Abhi ka jism shake kar raha tha ghusse se, aur jitna zor se Ruhi ne ussko apne baahon mein jakra tha Ruhi usske jism ki wo thartharaahat feel kar rahi thi…. Aur Ruhi khud kaampne lagi rote hue aur maafi maangte hue. Ruhi ki maa sab dekh rahi thi aur apni beti ko rote hue dekh kar wo khud apni aankh se aansoo ponch rahi thi.

Abhi jaise hosh mein nahin tha uss waqt. Usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kia ho raha hai…. Ussko laga ke sab ek sapna tha… aur ahiste ahiste Abhi ne apne baahon ko uthaya aur Ruhi ke kaandhe par kiya, Ruhi ka badan pura Abhi ke jism se chipki hui thi uss waqt, Aur oonche kad ke hone ke kaaran Ruhi ka sar Abhi ke chaati par tha aur wo Abhi ke dil ki dhadkanon ko saaf sun rahi thi. Ruhi ke donon baahein Abhi ke baazu ke niche se hokar ussko jakre hue the…. Ruhi ke aankhon se ab bhi ashk jaari the, aur jis pal ko Ruhi ne Abhi ke haathon ko apne kaandhe par feel kiya tab usski aankon ke aansoo ruke aur usski maa wahan se wapas terrace par chali gayi aur Mehboob ne uss se kaha ke Abhi ko kuch der udhar hi rehne de taake wo shant ho sake. Ruhi ki maa tab Mehboob aur saeed se baatein karne lage jaanne ke liye ke jhagda kyun aur kaise shuru hua. Dhire se Mehboob ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha ke iss mein Abhi ki ghalati nahin hai ussne sach mein saeed se bahot ziada kaam kiya hai bus mein.

Udhar jab Abhi ke haath Ruhi ke kaandhe par gaye to Ruhi ne apne chehre ko usske chhati par sattaye hue hi kaha,

“Aap mujhe apne baahon mein bharna chahte the nah? Lo bhar liya aapne mujhe apne baahon mein ab khush?!”

Abhi ki saansein tez chal rahe the aur wo thoda hannff raha tha, to Ruhi ne ussi position mein kaha,

“Baap re itna ghussa uff mujhe nahin pata tha aap itne ghusse wale ho, aap to bahot cool aur sweet dikhte the itne dinon se aap ko sambhaalna bada mushkil hai!”

Abhi kuch nahin bol raha tha, jaise ab bhi kisi shock mein dooba hua tha, to Ruhi ko sar upar utha kar Abhi ke chehre mein dekhna pada, aur dekha ke abhi khoya hua hai to kaha,

“Aap ka ghussa mujh par tha nah? Mere wale ghussa aap nikaal rahe the nah? kal se ghussa paal rahe the aap mere khilaaf Abhi? Main nahin dikhi thi iss liye? Main ne saare parde khinch liye the iss liye? Main ne bala tal jaegi kaha tha iss liye? Main ne to buss mazaak kiya tha Abhi, I did not mean it at all! I am so sorry ke mere munh se wo shabd nikal gaye the Abhi. Main kal hi aap ko sorry kehne ke liye wait kar rahi thi lunch time ke waqt magar aap aaye hi nahin main wait karti rahi, to mera bhi mood off hua issi liye main shaam ko nahin nikli thi magar main aap ko andar se jaate hue dekh rahi thi Abhi. Pleaae forgive me nah!”

Abhi ne ek bahot lambi sanns liye jiss se Ruhi ki chaati aage badhi phir piche hue Abhi se chipki hui jo thi. Do jism ek jaan lag rahe the donon uss waqt.

Ruhi ne phir usske seene par apne gaal ko satta diya aur kaha,

“Aap mere liye bala kaise ho sakte ho bhala? Main to chahungi ke aap umar bhar har roz yahan aao aur main aap ko issi aangan mein dekhun zindagi bhar Abhi! …. Abhi aaj aap meri vajah se late aaye? Bataiye nah, kia aap nahin aane wale the aaj? Meri kal ki kahi hui baat ki vajah se? Pata hai, main aaj subha 4 baje se uth chuki hoon aur aap ki raah dekhti rahi dekhti rahi, socha 6 bajne se pehle ajaoge aaj kyunke kal shaam ko aap ne mujhe nahin dekha tha nah, iss liye main barpaayi karna chahti thi Abhi magar aap aaye hi nahin…. Aap ko pata hai mujh par kia beet rahi thi jab sab log aagaye aur aap nain aaye? Pata hai main ne kitna dhunda aap ko? Main ro pari thi Abhi, main apni maa se saari baatein kehte hue fut fut kar ro rahi thi, maa ko bheja tha saeed ji se puchne ke aap kyun nahin aaye ho, mujhe darr tha ke kahin meri kahi hui baat ki vajah se aap ab kabhi bhi nahin awo…. Main kia karti tab? Aap kyun late aaye aaj abhi? Boliye nah, mujhe sazaa dene ke liye hmm? You were punishing me?!”

Ruhi ki meethi awaaz mein tadap thi, aaj pehli baar jiss awaaz ko sunne ke liye Abhi tarasta tha uss awaaz mein itna tadap mehsoos kar raha tha.

Tab Abhi ne apna sar niche jhukaya, Ruhi ki thudi ko apne ungliyon se apne chehre ke taraf uthaya, Ruhi ke aankhon ne Abhi ke ankhon mein dekha, Abhi ne jhuk kar apne honton ko Ruhi ke honton par rakh diya…. Ruhi apne toes par khadi hui aur Abhi ko kiss karne lagi ziada zoron se Abhi ko jakarte hue….

Abhi ne life mein kabhi kissi ladki ko kiss nahin kiya tha, usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kaise kia karein, sirf apne honth ko Ruhi ke honton se takraya tha ussne, magar Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi, Abhi ko ussi pal laga ke ussko kiss karna to ata hi nahin magar Ruhi ko kiss karna ata tha!!

To be continued…. (2450 Words)

Ab tak ki iss kahani ki sabse khatarnak aur sabse jiada romantic update. Pyar ubhar ubhar k baahar aaya hai iss update mein. Wow.
Abhi ghusse mein kuch bhi bakta hai. Ruhi ko bhi bura bhala nikal gaya usske munh se.
Saeed se ghamasain ladaayi hui. Khub sunaya Abhi ne Saeed ko ke wo uss se bahut jiada kaam kiya hai bus mein.
Magar sab se badi aur pyari baat yeh hui k khud Mehboob ne Ruhi ki maa ko Abhi ko ek taraf lejaane ko kaha ussko shaant karne k liye. Mehboob ko shayad pata tha ke Ruhi ne agar Abhi ko shaant kiya to wo khamosh ho jaega iss liye Saeed se Abhi ko door karne k liye usse Ruhi ki maa k hawale kiya.
Aur baaki ko hua buss kamaal hua.
Main ne bilkool bhi nahin socha tha ke Ruhi apni maa ke saamne uss tarah se Abhi ko jakar legi. Magar samajh sakti hoon kyun ussne waisa kiya. Ussne ek to Abhi ko bahut hi misd kiya tha kyunke wo late aya tha aur Shayad Ruhi ne feel kiya hoga k wo ab kabhi nahin aega usski kal wale shabdon k liye. Dusri baat iss liye kyunke Ruhi samajh rahi thi k Abhi mein ghussa iss liye bhi bhara hua tha sirf usski kal wali vyohar ki vajah se. Abhi ne chillate hue yeh bhi kaha tha ke bala kaha gaya hai usse to kaam ko wahin chorr kar chala jaaye aur Ruhi ne sab suna tha.
Ruhi ne Abhi ko apne baahon mein har kar jiss tarah se uss se maafi maangi apni kal ki kahe hue shabdon ke liye, ussko padhte hue meri aankhen nam ho gaye.
Aur kiss wali baat bhi unexpected tha. Socha nahin tha k Abhi Ruhi ko kiss karega. Sabse badi baat ye hai k Abhi ka pehla kiss tha magar Ruhi ki pehli kiss nahin thi wo.
To Ruhi ko kiss karna kaise aaya THAT IS THE QUESTION or the secret.
FANTAFABULOUS update Casi ji. Hats off. :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
 

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Subha Abhi late utha. Ziada peene ki vajah se sota raha. 8.30 ko bus mein tha kaam ke liye jaane ko. Yeh pehli baar hua tha jiss din se wahan kaam kar raha tha.

Pahunchne se pehle bus mein jaate waqt Abhi of course sirf Ruhi ke baare mein hi soch raha tha aur kal ke hue wakiye ko…. Abhi ab yeh sochne laga tha ke subha ko sabse pehle kaam par reach hone wala aaj 8.30 ko reach nahin hua hai, aur socha ke Ruhi kia soch rahi hogi 6 baje se 8.30 tak jab ussko wahan nahin dekha hoga to? Abhi sochne laga,

“Kia Ruhi mujhko dhund rahi hogi? 6 baje se meri raah dekh rahi hogi nah? kissi se puchne aayi hogi ke main kyun nahin aya hoon? Are yaar kahin wo yeh nah soche ke iss liye ke ussne kaha tha ke main nahin aunga to bala tal gayi usski; iss liye main nahin aya hoon…..”

Ab Abhi ke dil mein phir se wo baat aayi ke Ruhi ne uss se kaha tha ke usske liye bala tal jaegi agar ussne wahan aana band kar diya to…. Yeh sochne ke baad Abhi ko bus se utarne ka mann nahin kiya, socha ke ab kaam par jaaye hi nahin. Wo abhi tak hurt feel kar raha tha uss baat ko soch kar…. Aur ek pal ke liye Abhi ne socha ke hamesha ke liye issi waqt se wahan jaana band karde aur uss kaam ko chorr de! Tab hamesha ke liye saare lafde khatam!!

Aisa soch to liya dil mein Abhi ne magar wahan pahuchne par bus se uss bus stop par hi utra jahan utarna tha, yaane Ruhi ke ghar ke paas wale bus stop par. 9 bajne wala tha aur tab abhi uss aangan mein chalte hue nazar aya. Saeed aur Vinay bus ke uss side par the jiss taraf wo bada darkhat tha, aur Tony bus ke paas tap one ke paas kuch kar raha tha, abhi washroom pahuncha to Tony usske paas gaya aur kaha,

“are yaar main ne socha tu nahin aega, Saeed ghussa kar raha tha aur bura bhala bhi kehne laga tha tujhe!”

Abhi ne kapde badalte hue aur Ruhi ke kitchen ke andar dekhte hue kaha,

“bhai goli maar Saeed ko aur yeh bata Ruhi nazar aayi ke nahin yaar?!”

Tony: “Abhi wo subha se kayi chakkar laga chuki hai, rone wali surat banaayi hui hai, khud mujhse kayi baar puch chuki ke tu kidhar hai aur usski maa aayi Saeed se puchne ke tu kyun nahin aya aaj!”

Abhi ne shirt pehente hue kaha,

“Really? That’s nice yaar, that’s very good news, magar ab kidhar hai wo ladki mujhe paagal banaane wali?!”

Tony: “Tujhko andar se zaroor dekh rahi hogi aur muskura rahi hogi, tere expression ko read kar rahi hogi ke tu abhi tak ghussa to nahin, ussko pata hoga ke kal tere liye wo saamne nahin aayi to tu ghussa hoga, andar muskuraate hue tujhe dekh rahi hogi. Bahot hi khush ho rahi hogi ke tu agaya hai. Dekna abhi zaroor
tere saamne aegi.”

Abhi: “Achah? To bala kaise talegi agar main aata hi raha to?! Ho sakta hai ke yeh bhi keh rahi hogi ke yeh bala phir agaya!”

Tony? “Ab chorr yaar, abhi tak tu uss baat ko dil mein liye baitha hai? Wo tujhse bahot pyar karti hai tujhe paagalon ki tarah dhund rahi thi!”

Abhi: "terrace par jhadu laga diya ussne, poncha laga diya kia?”

Tony: “nahin kuch nahin kiya sirf teri raah dekh rahi hai subha se, usski nazrein sirf main road par aur aate hue bus par rehti thi subha se!

Abhi: “yaar tony to ab kyun nahin dikh rahi hai? Mere saamne aa nahin sakti kia? Marr gayi kia wo?!”

Tony: “are yaar itna ghussa kyun karne laga achaanak tu? Wo sun legi yaar. Kamaal hai udhar Saeed ghussa kar raha hai idhar tu kia ho gaya hai? Kissi ki nazar to nahin lagi hein kahin?!”

Abhi: “bhaad mein jaaye saeed kaun si badi toap hai wo, chal karte hein jo kaam karna hai…..”

Jab Abhi aur Tony bus ke taraf jaane lage to Abhi ko Ruhi ki blue dress ki ek choti si jhalak dikhaayi diya lounge mein hawa se parde ke hillne ki vajah se. Matlab Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi ussko andar se dekh rahi thi.

Aur 9.15 ko Abhi ne kaam karna start kiya aur Saeed shuru hua;

“kia hai abhi? Aise kaam kiya jaata hai kia? Subha ke 9.15 ko kaam shuru hota hai kia?

Ek to Abhi pehle se ghusse mein tha Ruhi ki kal wale vyohaar ko lekar aur ab Saeed uss par chilla raha tha to Abhi ne bhi ghusse mein aur oonchi awaaz mein Saeed ko jawaab diya.

Donon mei tutu main main hone laga aur tension badhne lage…. Awaaz door tak sunaayi dene lage donon ke aur dhadpdaate hue Mehboob apne ghar se baahar aya aur donon ko shaant karne ki koshish kiye…. Saeed Abhi ko suna raha tha aur Abhi saeed ko…. Saeed ne ek baar kaha,

“yahan herogiri karne nahin aate hein kaam karne aate hein, Mehboob ne humko kaam karne ke liye paise diye hein flirt karne ke liye nahin, kia karta rehta hai tu kaam karne ke waqt, kia karne jata hai wahan uss washing stone ke paas? Kaam wahan hota hai kia?”

Ruhi aur usski maa sab sun rahe the, aur Ruhi ne apni maa ke chehre mein dekha, udaasi aur darr ke saath….. Ruhi ne kabhi nahin socha tha ke kuch aisa hoga….

Abhi ne Saeed ki uss baat ka yeh jawaab diya chilaate hue,

“kyun be tere gaand mein kyun aag lagta hai agar main wahan jata hoon to? Kaam to pura karta hoon tujh se bahut ziada kaam main ne kiya hai iss bus mein dikhaun tujhko, naap lagayega tum ne kitna kaam kiya aur main ne kitna?”

Mehboob ko pata tha ke Abhi ne bahut ziada kaam kiya hua hai to ussne Abhi ke kaandhe par haath rakh kar ussko ek taraf karne ki koshish kiya, magar Saeed ne bhi oonchi awaaz mein kaha ke ussko bataaye ke kaise Abhi ne ziada kaam kiya hai, to ussi tone mein, ghusse mein Abhi ne kaha,

“yeh dekh shuruwaat yahan se kiya tha main ne front side, jo back side se 50 gunah ziada complicated aur mushkil hai phir bhi tujh se pehle main ne right panel ko banana shuru kar diya aur tu back side par hi laga hua tha, jab main ne front side aur right panel pura kar diya tab jahan tujhko left panel pura karna tha wo bhi uss mein aadha se ziada main ne complete kiya, main ne upar ke kaam bhi aadha se ziada kar diya, to tere mukable 100 gunah ziada kaam kiya hai main ne iss bus mein sala mujhko 2 ghante ki lateness ke liye sunata hai? Main tujhko sunaunga to tere adhe paise mere hone chahiye, suna tum ne mujhe ghussa mat dila varna sab chorr chaar ke chala jaunga yahan se ek to bala banke mandra raha hoon kissi ke liye, nikal hi jaun to achchah hai!”

Abhi itna ghusse mein tha ke Mehboob ussko sambhal nahin paa raha tha, Ruhi aur usski maa terrace par nikal gaye the sab dekhte hue, to Mehboob ko laga ke sirf Ruhi Abhi ko shant kar paegi, to Mehboob ne Ruhi ke maa ke taraf dekha aur ishaare se ussko kuch kaha, aur Ruhi ki maa aayi Abhi ke bazu pakra aur apne terrace ke taraf lejaate hue ahiste aur araam se kaha,

“Idhar chalo aao aao ssshhhh ghussa thuk do aao nah dekho Ruhi tumko bula rahi hai aao nah beta, aisa nahin karte, thand rakho beta…” tab tak chalte hue Ruhi ghar ke piche wale hisse mein jaa chuki thi aur apni maa ko Abhi ko apne saat laate hue dekh rahi thi….

Wo hissa ghar ke piche tha washing stone se thoda door, Ruhi ki aankhe bhar aayi thi kyunke ussne sab suna ke Abhi ne kuch der pehle kaha ke kissi ke liye wo bala ban chuka hai to behtar hai ke sab chorr chaar kar chala jaaye… ruhi apni kahi hui baat par bahot pachta rahi thi aur jaise Ruhi ki maa Abhi ko uss kone mein laaya Ruhi Abhi se lipat gayi rote hue aur Abhi ke peeth par apne komal kalaayi ko ferrte hue Ruhi kayi baar rote hue kehti gayi,

“I am sorry, I am very very sorry, please forgive me, will you? Mujhe maaf kardo Abhi mujhse ghalati hui, mujhe kal wo nahin kehna chahiye tha I am so sorry Abhi!”

Abhi ka jism shake kar raha tha ghusse se, aur jitna zor se Ruhi ne ussko apne baahon mein jakra tha Ruhi usske jism ki wo thartharaahat feel kar rahi thi…. Aur Ruhi khud kaampne lagi rote hue aur maafi maangte hue. Ruhi ki maa sab dekh rahi thi aur apni beti ko rote hue dekh kar wo khud apni aankh se aansoo ponch rahi thi.

Abhi jaise hosh mein nahin tha uss waqt. Usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kia ho raha hai…. Ussko laga ke sab ek sapna tha… aur ahiste ahiste Abhi ne apne baahon ko uthaya aur Ruhi ke kaandhe par kiya, Ruhi ka badan pura Abhi ke jism se chipki hui thi uss waqt, Aur oonche kad ke hone ke kaaran Ruhi ka sar Abhi ke chaati par tha aur wo Abhi ke dil ki dhadkanon ko saaf sun rahi thi. Ruhi ke donon baahein Abhi ke baazu ke niche se hokar ussko jakre hue the…. Ruhi ke aankhon se ab bhi ashk jaari the, aur jis pal ko Ruhi ne Abhi ke haathon ko apne kaandhe par feel kiya tab usski aankon ke aansoo ruke aur usski maa wahan se wapas terrace par chali gayi aur Mehboob ne uss se kaha ke Abhi ko kuch der udhar hi rehne de taake wo shant ho sake. Ruhi ki maa tab Mehboob aur saeed se baatein karne lage jaanne ke liye ke jhagda kyun aur kaise shuru hua. Dhire se Mehboob ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha ke iss mein Abhi ki ghalati nahin hai ussne sach mein saeed se bahot ziada kaam kiya hai bus mein.

Udhar jab Abhi ke haath Ruhi ke kaandhe par gaye to Ruhi ne apne chehre ko usske chhati par sattaye hue hi kaha,

“Aap mujhe apne baahon mein bharna chahte the nah? Lo bhar liya aapne mujhe apne baahon mein ab khush?!”

Abhi ki saansein tez chal rahe the aur wo thoda hannff raha tha, to Ruhi ne ussi position mein kaha,

“Baap re itna ghussa uff mujhe nahin pata tha aap itne ghusse wale ho, aap to bahot cool aur sweet dikhte the itne dinon se aap ko sambhaalna bada mushkil hai!”

Abhi kuch nahin bol raha tha, jaise ab bhi kisi shock mein dooba hua tha, to Ruhi ko sar upar utha kar Abhi ke chehre mein dekhna pada, aur dekha ke abhi khoya hua hai to kaha,

“Aap ka ghussa mujh par tha nah? Mere wale ghussa aap nikaal rahe the nah? kal se ghussa paal rahe the aap mere khilaaf Abhi? Main nahin dikhi thi iss liye? Main ne saare parde khinch liye the iss liye? Main ne bala tal jaegi kaha tha iss liye? Main ne to buss mazaak kiya tha Abhi, I did not mean it at all! I am so sorry ke mere munh se wo shabd nikal gaye the Abhi. Main kal hi aap ko sorry kehne ke liye wait kar rahi thi lunch time ke waqt magar aap aaye hi nahin main wait karti rahi, to mera bhi mood off hua issi liye main shaam ko nahin nikli thi magar main aap ko andar se jaate hue dekh rahi thi Abhi. Pleaae forgive me nah!”

Abhi ne ek bahot lambi sanns liye jiss se Ruhi ki chaati aage badhi phir piche hue Abhi se chipki hui jo thi. Do jism ek jaan lag rahe the donon uss waqt.

Ruhi ne phir usske seene par apne gaal ko satta diya aur kaha,

“Aap mere liye bala kaise ho sakte ho bhala? Main to chahungi ke aap umar bhar har roz yahan aao aur main aap ko issi aangan mein dekhun zindagi bhar Abhi! …. Abhi aaj aap meri vajah se late aaye? Bataiye nah, kia aap nahin aane wale the aaj? Meri kal ki kahi hui baat ki vajah se? Pata hai, main aaj subha 4 baje se uth chuki hoon aur aap ki raah dekhti rahi dekhti rahi, socha 6 bajne se pehle ajaoge aaj kyunke kal shaam ko aap ne mujhe nahin dekha tha nah, iss liye main barpaayi karna chahti thi Abhi magar aap aaye hi nahin…. Aap ko pata hai mujh par kia beet rahi thi jab sab log aagaye aur aap nain aaye? Pata hai main ne kitna dhunda aap ko? Main ro pari thi Abhi, main apni maa se saari baatein kehte hue fut fut kar ro rahi thi, maa ko bheja tha saeed ji se puchne ke aap kyun nahin aaye ho, mujhe darr tha ke kahin meri kahi hui baat ki vajah se aap ab kabhi bhi nahin awo…. Main kia karti tab? Aap kyun late aaye aaj abhi? Boliye nah, mujhe sazaa dene ke liye hmm? You were punishing me?!”

Ruhi ki meethi awaaz mein tadap thi, aaj pehli baar jiss awaaz ko sunne ke liye Abhi tarasta tha uss awaaz mein itna tadap mehsoos kar raha tha.

Tab Abhi ne apna sar niche jhukaya, Ruhi ki thudi ko apne ungliyon se apne chehre ke taraf uthaya, Ruhi ke aankhon ne Abhi ke ankhon mein dekha, Abhi ne jhuk kar apne honton ko Ruhi ke honton par rakh diya…. Ruhi apne toes par khadi hui aur Abhi ko kiss karne lagi ziada zoron se Abhi ko jakarte hue….

Abhi ne life mein kabhi kissi ladki ko kiss nahin kiya tha, usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kaise kia karein, sirf apne honth ko Ruhi ke honton se takraya tha ussne, magar Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi, Abhi ko ussi pal laga ke ussko kiss karna to ata hi nahin magar Ruhi ko kiss karna ata tha!!

To be continued…. (2450 Words)

Are wah miyan! Shah bhai ab tak ki sabse behtareen update kahunga positive way mein. Behad passand aaya ye update mujhe yaar. Rula diya yaar Ruhi ne mujhe. Bahut pyar bhara hai usske dil mein Abhi ke liye yaar. Wow.
Chalo shuru se update ki operation karta hoon :D
To Abhi itna hurt tha Ruhi kal wali "bala tal jaegi" baat se aur Ruhi ki shaam ko nahin dikhaayi dene se ke ussko late hi sahi bus se utarne ko bhi mann nahin kar raha tha. Socha k wahan kaam karna chorr de. Kitna hurt hua tha ye pata chalta hai usski uss vyohaar se.
Tony usske piche gaya aur ussko sab kuch bataya k Ruhi kaise ussko dhund rahi hai subha se.
Magar Abhi bhi puchne laga k terrace par kasm kar diya Ruhi ne ya nahin, matlab Abhi chahta tha k Ruhi ussko dikhe aur usske nazdik rahe.
Magar Abhi tab bhi ghusse mein hi tha k kuch bhi bol raha tha k ab kyun Ruhi nahin dikh rahi mar gayi kia ye sirf ghussa express karna tha, wo mean to nahin kar raha tha k weisa ho.
Phir hui takraar Saeed k saath. Ek ghayal sher ko kabhi cherrte nahin hai. Abhi ghayal tha pehle se hi aur jara sa deri se aane k liye Saeed uss par tut para to Abhi explode ho gaya. Laazmi tha usska visphot hona.
Aur Abhi ne prove kiya k bus mein ussne Saeed se jiada kaam kiya hai jiss se Mehboob raazi tha.
Aur maamla aur na bigre iss liye Mehboo apna kaam nikalne k liye Ruhi ki maa aur Ruhi ko istemaal kiya Abhi ko Saeed se door karne k liye. Mehboob ko kyunke pata tha ke Abhi Ruhi ko chahta hai to ussko laga hoga k Ruhi ussko shaant kar sakta hai
Aur tab aayi haseen pal Abhi ke liye.
Wah bhai ye BEST part tha iss update ka jissne mujhe rula diya. Pyari Ruhi ne mujhe uss tarah se maafi maangte hue rulay yaar. Kitna pyar karti hai Abhi se aaj Ruhi ne saabit kar diya bhai.
Kia update likha hai aap ne, behtareen, Lajawab, shaandaar se bhi upar.
Magat suspense note par end kiya update ko. RUHI KO KISS KARNA ATA HAI AUR ABHI KO NAHIN KYUNKE TE USSKA PEHLA KISS THA.....
Matlab saaf hai k Ruhi pehle kiss kar chuki hai..... sawaal hai kiss ko kiss kiya hai Ruhi ne???
Badhya se bhi badhya update bhai.
Shabaash. ::yourock:
 

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Update 14 Did the Quarrel End? How?

Subha Abhi late utha. Ziada peene ki vajah se sota raha. 8.30 ko bus mein tha kaam ke liye jaane ko. Yeh pehli baar hua tha jiss din se wahan kaam kar raha tha.

Pahunchne se pehle bus mein jaate waqt Abhi of course sirf Ruhi ke baare mein hi soch raha tha aur kal ke hue wakiye ko…. Abhi ab yeh sochne laga tha ke subha ko sabse pehle kaam par reach hone wala aaj 8.30 ko reach nahin hua hai, aur socha ke Ruhi kia soch rahi hogi 6 baje se 8.30 tak jab ussko wahan nahin dekha hoga to? Abhi sochne laga,

“Kia Ruhi mujhko dhund rahi hogi? 6 baje se meri raah dekh rahi hogi nah? kissi se puchne aayi hogi ke main kyun nahin aya hoon? Are yaar kahin wo yeh nah soche ke iss liye ke ussne kaha tha ke main nahin aunga to bala tal gayi usski; iss liye main nahin aya hoon…..”

Ab Abhi ke dil mein phir se wo baat aayi ke Ruhi ne uss se kaha tha ke usske liye bala tal jaegi agar ussne wahan aana band kar diya to…. Yeh sochne ke baad Abhi ko bus se utarne ka mann nahin kiya, socha ke ab kaam par jaaye hi nahin. Wo abhi tak hurt feel kar raha tha uss baat ko soch kar…. Aur ek pal ke liye Abhi ne socha ke hamesha ke liye issi waqt se wahan jaana band karde aur uss kaam ko chorr de! Tab hamesha ke liye saare lafde khatam!!

Aisa soch to liya dil mein Abhi ne magar wahan pahuchne par bus se uss bus stop par hi utra jahan utarna tha, yaane Ruhi ke ghar ke paas wale bus stop par. 9 bajne wala tha aur tab abhi uss aangan mein chalte hue nazar aya. Saeed aur Vinay bus ke uss side par the jiss taraf wo bada darkhat tha, aur Tony bus ke paas tap one ke paas kuch kar raha tha, abhi washroom pahuncha to Tony usske paas gaya aur kaha,

“are yaar main ne socha tu nahin aega, Saeed ghussa kar raha tha aur bura bhala bhi kehne laga tha tujhe!”

Abhi ne kapde badalte hue aur Ruhi ke kitchen ke andar dekhte hue kaha,

“bhai goli maar Saeed ko aur yeh bata Ruhi nazar aayi ke nahin yaar?!”

Tony: “Abhi wo subha se kayi chakkar laga chuki hai, rone wali surat banaayi hui hai, khud mujhse kayi baar puch chuki ke tu kidhar hai aur usski maa aayi Saeed se puchne ke tu kyun nahin aya aaj!”

Abhi ne shirt pehente hue kaha,

“Really? That’s nice yaar, that’s very good news, magar ab kidhar hai wo ladki mujhe paagal banaane wali?!”

Tony: “Tujhko andar se zaroor dekh rahi hogi aur muskura rahi hogi, tere expression ko read kar rahi hogi ke tu abhi tak ghussa to nahin, ussko pata hoga ke kal tere liye wo saamne nahin aayi to tu ghussa hoga, andar muskuraate hue tujhe dekh rahi hogi. Bahot hi khush ho rahi hogi ke tu agaya hai. Dekna abhi zaroor
tere saamne aegi.”

Abhi: “Achah? To bala kaise talegi agar main aata hi raha to?! Ho sakta hai ke yeh bhi keh rahi hogi ke yeh bala phir agaya!”

Tony? “Ab chorr yaar, abhi tak tu uss baat ko dil mein liye baitha hai? Wo tujhse bahot pyar karti hai tujhe paagalon ki tarah dhund rahi thi!”

Abhi: "terrace par jhadu laga diya ussne, poncha laga diya kia?”

Tony: “nahin kuch nahin kiya sirf teri raah dekh rahi hai subha se, usski nazrein sirf main road par aur aate hue bus par rehti thi subha se!

Abhi: “yaar tony to ab kyun nahin dikh rahi hai? Mere saamne aa nahin sakti kia? Marr gayi kia wo?!”

Tony: “are yaar itna ghussa kyun karne laga achaanak tu? Wo sun legi yaar. Kamaal hai udhar Saeed ghussa kar raha hai idhar tu kia ho gaya hai? Kissi ki nazar to nahin lagi hein kahin?!”

Abhi: “bhaad mein jaaye saeed kaun si badi toap hai wo, chal karte hein jo kaam karna hai…..”

Jab Abhi aur Tony bus ke taraf jaane lage to Abhi ko Ruhi ki blue dress ki ek choti si jhalak dikhaayi diya lounge mein hawa se parde ke hillne ki vajah se. Matlab Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi ussko andar se dekh rahi thi.

Aur 9.15 ko Abhi ne kaam karna start kiya aur Saeed shuru hua;

“kia hai abhi? Aise kaam kiya jaata hai kia? Subha ke 9.15 ko kaam shuru hota hai kia?

Ek to Abhi pehle se ghusse mein tha Ruhi ki kal wale vyohaar ko lekar aur ab Saeed uss par chilla raha tha to Abhi ne bhi ghusse mein aur oonchi awaaz mein Saeed ko jawaab diya.

Donon mei tutu main main hone laga aur tension badhne lage…. Awaaz door tak sunaayi dene lage donon ke aur dhadpdaate hue Mehboob apne ghar se baahar aya aur donon ko shaant karne ki koshish kiye…. Saeed Abhi ko suna raha tha aur Abhi saeed ko…. Saeed ne ek baar kaha,

“yahan herogiri karne nahin aate hein kaam karne aate hein, Mehboob ne humko kaam karne ke liye paise diye hein flirt karne ke liye nahin, kia karta rehta hai tu kaam karne ke waqt, kia karne jata hai wahan uss washing stone ke paas? Kaam wahan hota hai kia?”

Ruhi aur usski maa sab sun rahe the, aur Ruhi ne apni maa ke chehre mein dekha, udaasi aur darr ke saath….. Ruhi ne kabhi nahin socha tha ke kuch aisa hoga….

Abhi ne Saeed ki uss baat ka yeh jawaab diya chilaate hue,

“kyun be tere gaand mein kyun aag lagta hai agar main wahan jata hoon to? Kaam to pura karta hoon tujh se bahut ziada kaam main ne kiya hai iss bus mein dikhaun tujhko, naap lagayega tum ne kitna kaam kiya aur main ne kitna?”

Mehboob ko pata tha ke Abhi ne bahut ziada kaam kiya hua hai to ussne Abhi ke kaandhe par haath rakh kar ussko ek taraf karne ki koshish kiya, magar Saeed ne bhi oonchi awaaz mein kaha ke ussko bataaye ke kaise Abhi ne ziada kaam kiya hai, to ussi tone mein, ghusse mein Abhi ne kaha,

“yeh dekh shuruwaat yahan se kiya tha main ne front side, jo back side se 50 gunah ziada complicated aur mushkil hai phir bhi tujh se pehle main ne right panel ko banana shuru kar diya aur tu back side par hi laga hua tha, jab main ne front side aur right panel pura kar diya tab jahan tujhko left panel pura karna tha wo bhi uss mein aadha se ziada main ne complete kiya, main ne upar ke kaam bhi aadha se ziada kar diya, to tere mukable 100 gunah ziada kaam kiya hai main ne iss bus mein sala mujhko 2 ghante ki lateness ke liye sunata hai? Main tujhko sunaunga to tere adhe paise mere hone chahiye, suna tum ne mujhe ghussa mat dila varna sab chorr chaar ke chala jaunga yahan se ek to bala banke mandra raha hoon kissi ke liye, nikal hi jaun to achchah hai!”

Abhi itna ghusse mein tha ke Mehboob ussko sambhal nahin paa raha tha, Ruhi aur usski maa terrace par nikal gaye the sab dekhte hue, to Mehboob ko laga ke sirf Ruhi Abhi ko shant kar paegi, to Mehboob ne Ruhi ke maa ke taraf dekha aur ishaare se ussko kuch kaha, aur Ruhi ki maa aayi Abhi ke bazu pakra aur apne terrace ke taraf lejaate hue ahiste aur araam se kaha,

“Idhar chalo aao aao ssshhhh ghussa thuk do aao nah dekho Ruhi tumko bula rahi hai aao nah beta, aisa nahin karte, thand rakho beta…” tab tak chalte hue Ruhi ghar ke piche wale hisse mein jaa chuki thi aur apni maa ko Abhi ko apne saat laate hue dekh rahi thi….

Wo hissa ghar ke piche tha washing stone se thoda door, Ruhi ki aankhe bhar aayi thi kyunke ussne sab suna ke Abhi ne kuch der pehle kaha ke kissi ke liye wo bala ban chuka hai to behtar hai ke sab chorr chaar kar chala jaaye… ruhi apni kahi hui baat par bahot pachta rahi thi aur jaise Ruhi ki maa Abhi ko uss kone mein laaya Ruhi Abhi se lipat gayi rote hue aur Abhi ke peeth par apne komal kalaayi ko ferrte hue Ruhi kayi baar rote hue kehti gayi,

“I am sorry, I am very very sorry, please forgive me, will you? Mujhe maaf kardo Abhi mujhse ghalati hui, mujhe kal wo nahin kehna chahiye tha I am so sorry Abhi!”

Abhi ka jism shake kar raha tha ghusse se, aur jitna zor se Ruhi ne ussko apne baahon mein jakra tha Ruhi usske jism ki wo thartharaahat feel kar rahi thi…. Aur Ruhi khud kaampne lagi rote hue aur maafi maangte hue. Ruhi ki maa sab dekh rahi thi aur apni beti ko rote hue dekh kar wo khud apni aankh se aansoo ponch rahi thi.

Abhi jaise hosh mein nahin tha uss waqt. Usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kia ho raha hai…. Ussko laga ke sab ek sapna tha… aur ahiste ahiste Abhi ne apne baahon ko uthaya aur Ruhi ke kaandhe par kiya, Ruhi ka badan pura Abhi ke jism se chipki hui thi uss waqt, Aur oonche kad ke hone ke kaaran Ruhi ka sar Abhi ke chaati par tha aur wo Abhi ke dil ki dhadkanon ko saaf sun rahi thi. Ruhi ke donon baahein Abhi ke baazu ke niche se hokar ussko jakre hue the…. Ruhi ke aankhon se ab bhi ashk jaari the, aur jis pal ko Ruhi ne Abhi ke haathon ko apne kaandhe par feel kiya tab usski aankon ke aansoo ruke aur usski maa wahan se wapas terrace par chali gayi aur Mehboob ne uss se kaha ke Abhi ko kuch der udhar hi rehne de taake wo shant ho sake. Ruhi ki maa tab Mehboob aur saeed se baatein karne lage jaanne ke liye ke jhagda kyun aur kaise shuru hua. Dhire se Mehboob ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha ke iss mein Abhi ki ghalati nahin hai ussne sach mein saeed se bahot ziada kaam kiya hai bus mein.

Udhar jab Abhi ke haath Ruhi ke kaandhe par gaye to Ruhi ne apne chehre ko usske chhati par sattaye hue hi kaha,

“Aap mujhe apne baahon mein bharna chahte the nah? Lo bhar liya aapne mujhe apne baahon mein ab khush?!”

Abhi ki saansein tez chal rahe the aur wo thoda hannff raha tha, to Ruhi ne ussi position mein kaha,

“Baap re itna ghussa uff mujhe nahin pata tha aap itne ghusse wale ho, aap to bahot cool aur sweet dikhte the itne dinon se aap ko sambhaalna bada mushkil hai!”

Abhi kuch nahin bol raha tha, jaise ab bhi kisi shock mein dooba hua tha, to Ruhi ko sar upar utha kar Abhi ke chehre mein dekhna pada, aur dekha ke abhi khoya hua hai to kaha,

“Aap ka ghussa mujh par tha nah? Mere wale ghussa aap nikaal rahe the nah? kal se ghussa paal rahe the aap mere khilaaf Abhi? Main nahin dikhi thi iss liye? Main ne saare parde khinch liye the iss liye? Main ne bala tal jaegi kaha tha iss liye? Main ne to buss mazaak kiya tha Abhi, I did not mean it at all! I am so sorry ke mere munh se wo shabd nikal gaye the Abhi. Main kal hi aap ko sorry kehne ke liye wait kar rahi thi lunch time ke waqt magar aap aaye hi nahin main wait karti rahi, to mera bhi mood off hua issi liye main shaam ko nahin nikli thi magar main aap ko andar se jaate hue dekh rahi thi Abhi. Pleaae forgive me nah!”

Abhi ne ek bahot lambi sanns liye jiss se Ruhi ki chaati aage badhi phir piche hue Abhi se chipki hui jo thi. Do jism ek jaan lag rahe the donon uss waqt.

Ruhi ne phir usske seene par apne gaal ko satta diya aur kaha,

“Aap mere liye bala kaise ho sakte ho bhala? Main to chahungi ke aap umar bhar har roz yahan aao aur main aap ko issi aangan mein dekhun zindagi bhar Abhi! …. Abhi aaj aap meri vajah se late aaye? Bataiye nah, kia aap nahin aane wale the aaj? Meri kal ki kahi hui baat ki vajah se? Pata hai, main aaj subha 4 baje se uth chuki hoon aur aap ki raah dekhti rahi dekhti rahi, socha 6 bajne se pehle ajaoge aaj kyunke kal shaam ko aap ne mujhe nahin dekha tha nah, iss liye main barpaayi karna chahti thi Abhi magar aap aaye hi nahin…. Aap ko pata hai mujh par kia beet rahi thi jab sab log aagaye aur aap nain aaye? Pata hai main ne kitna dhunda aap ko? Main ro pari thi Abhi, main apni maa se saari baatein kehte hue fut fut kar ro rahi thi, maa ko bheja tha saeed ji se puchne ke aap kyun nahin aaye ho, mujhe darr tha ke kahin meri kahi hui baat ki vajah se aap ab kabhi bhi nahin awo…. Main kia karti tab? Aap kyun late aaye aaj abhi? Boliye nah, mujhe sazaa dene ke liye hmm? You were punishing me?!”

Ruhi ki meethi awaaz mein tadap thi, aaj pehli baar jiss awaaz ko sunne ke liye Abhi tarasta tha uss awaaz mein itna tadap mehsoos kar raha tha.

Tab Abhi ne apna sar niche jhukaya, Ruhi ki thudi ko apne ungliyon se apne chehre ke taraf uthaya, Ruhi ke aankhon ne Abhi ke ankhon mein dekha, Abhi ne jhuk kar apne honton ko Ruhi ke honton par rakh diya…. Ruhi apne toes par khadi hui aur Abhi ko kiss karne lagi ziada zoron se Abhi ko jakarte hue….

Abhi ne life mein kabhi kissi ladki ko kiss nahin kiya tha, usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kaise kia karein, sirf apne honth ko Ruhi ke honton se takraya tha ussne, magar Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi, Abhi ko ussi pal laga ke ussko kiss karna to ata hi nahin magar Ruhi ko kiss karna ata tha!!

To be continued…. (2450 Words)

Gajab ka update hai casi ji. Behtareen update. Bahut kamaal ki update hai ye.
Behad passand aya mujhe.
Main detail mein nahin jaungi buss itna kehna hai main rone lagi jiss tarah se Ruhi Abhi se mafi mang rahi thi. Bahut emotional tha wo part.
Aur shocking ye baat thi k samajh mein agaya k Ruhi k life mein ya to koyi tha pehle ya ab bhi ya ya door hai, pata nahin kia raaz hai par kuch hai jarur.
Dilchasp aur shaandaar likha hai aap ne. :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
 
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