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Bhai story vadiya aa par resPon ik tah apne punjabi section ch vese v ghat aunda aa loki karde ni reply duje ithe jada log bina id toh padege aa story es lai v response ghat aa par manu lagda story bhot log padh rehe ne jo bina id toh aa
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jattsingh1 ok ok bro par iste views meri baki stories nalo ghat ne yaar.
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Haan par sanu diwali di shuti nahi na hundi yaar.
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Recap:
Pechle update vich tuci read kita ke Amrit, Raveena di madad nal Kiran layi trap set kardi aa. Te pura plan bana laindi aa ke kida step by step Kiran te Komal nu fasona aa.
Hun agge:
Sawer de 6 baj rahe c, te hale tak v Kuldeep te Baljeet apne kamre vich nange lame paye c. Baljeet sidi lami payi hoyi c jiskarke usde 38 size de mammye ik duje to dur hoon di kohsish kar rahe san. Te usdi fudhi jisde upar halke jahe baal san oh bahut akarshak lag rahe san, Baljeet apni fudhi clean rakhdi c par upar wali jagah te oh bal rehan dindi c. Kyunki Kuldeep nu ih bahut pasand san.
Baljeet apnia akhan kholdi aa te khud nu ida dekh ke muskura ke reh jandi aa. Fer usde dimag vich aaj de plan da khiyal aunda aa te usda face ek serious ho janda aa. Oh kuj ke der apne khiyala vich rehndi aa te fer apne face te smile liya ke Kuldeep nu jagondi aa. Kuldeep uth ke Baljeet nu kiss karan lag janda aa te Baljeet v usda saath den lag jandi aa. Dome ek duje nu kafi der tak deep kiss karde rehnde ne. Te fer baro bari ja ke fresh ho aunde ne.
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Sawer da time 9 baje de kareeb…..
Sara parivar breakfast karan layi betha hunda aa, Baljeet apnia kudian nu breakfast serve kar rahi hundi aa te usda gharwala apne office layi niklan di tiyari kar reha hunda aa.
Kuldeep ik property dealer aa, usda Chandigarh vich ek bahut shaandar office aa, jithe ohde andar hor v bahut sare employee kam karde ne. Oh apne office layi nikal janda aa.
Hun ghar vich sirf Baljeet, Riya ate Preet hi reh gaye san. Baljeet v ohna lage hi ek kursi te beth jandi aa te apnia kudian nu piyar bharian nazra nal dekhan lag jandi aa. Na chahunde hoye v Baljeet dian akhan jhalak pendian ne. Te jado Riya te Preet di nazar apni maa te pendi aa te oh uth ke apni maa nu picho hi dome side toh jagi pa laindian ne.
Riya: Meri piyari mummy ro kyun rahi aa?
Preet: Haan mainu meri saheli da rona changa nahi lagda aa.
Baljeet: Kuj nahi bass tuhanu doma nu dekh rahi c ta mainu us raat bala manzar yaad aa gya. Jado us haramzadi Komal de nukile noha wale hath tuhade doma di dhon de san.
Preet: Le mummy yaar, apa theek aa, sanu kuj nahi hoeya, sama us din toh baad te sanu vadia hi bahut lag reha aa, jime ik nami urja sade vich aa gayi aa, (oh apni bhen wal dekhdi aa te usdian akhan vich dekhde boldi aa) te hun te sanu Vampires toh bilkul v dar nahi lada aa.
Riya: (apni bhen dian akhan vich dekhde) Haan mummy tuci bhul jayo us gal nu, na te ida kadi aage howe ga te nahi hi asi hoon dema gian. Tuci bass rona band karo.
Te dome bhen ekthe hi Baljeet di ek ek gal te kiss kar dindian ne. Baljeet apnia kudian da piyar dekh ke khush ho jandi aa te apnia akhan saaf karke Riya te Preet di gal te baro bari kiss kardi aa te boldi aa. Maa aa na, maa nu te apne bacheya di fikar hundi aa.
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Uder Sahil hale tak apne kamre vich suta hoeya c. Apne kamre cho Sahil haje tak bahar nahi aeya c ta Shakshi, Aasha nu boldi aa ja dekh Sahil hale dhak apne kamre cho bahar kyun nahi aeya.
Te is gal te Aasha smile kardi boldi aa.,”Ki pata Sahil sir fer toh apne aap nu khush karan vich na lage hun.”
“Tu ahi sochdi rehni aa ke, tere dimag inha puthe kama vich kuj jayda hi nahi chalda. Ja chup chap usnu puch ke aa.” Shakshi, Aasha nu halka gusse jahe vich boldi aa.
Par Aasha nu pata c ke ih gussa nakli aa te oh aago dand kaddi Sahil de kamre bal nu tur paindi aa. Oh dekhdi aa ke darwaza haje tak band piya c. Andar apne kamre vich mai sirf underwear vich suta piya c te meri khatkatahat di aawaz nal akh khul jandi aa.Mai kachi neend vich hi bolda aa mai auna aa 10 mint vich. Te mainu Aasha de mere kamre toh dur ja rahe peran di aawaz aa jandi aa.
Mai apne upro chadar pare karda aa, mai jado raati 3 baje de kareeb Kiran de kolo aeya c apne kapde utar ke sirf underwear vich hi so gya c. Mai uth ke washroom vich jaan hi laga c ke meri nazar sishe te pe gayi. Te jado mai apne aap nu ruk ke sishe vich dekhya ta paeya ke mera sharir pehle din nalo jayda refined ho gya c.
Mere sharir da harek muscle mainu puri tarah developed lag reha c, mainu meri body de harek muscle da cut saaf lab reha c. Mai ih v notice kita ke meri height v 1 inch hor badh gayi aa. Khud nu sishe vich dekh ke mainu ek ajeeb jeha confidence te ego boost mil reha c. Jime mai puri duniya jitt sakda aa.
Mai fer jaldi nal nahata te kapde pa ke thale aa gya. Jithe mai sab nal mil ke nasta kita te university layi nikal gya. Jithe pehla mainu university jana bilkul v pasand nahi c. Par hun mainu university jana bahut changa lagan lag piya c. Kudian dian lalchaia akhan te unha da mere baare gal karna mainu bahut changa lagan lag piya c.
Kadi kadi mainu ih bura v lagda c kyunki mera viah ho chuka c. Par fer v mainu ih sab changa lag reha c. Upro mere blood lure karke Riya te Preet meri raah taak dian rehndian c. Oh alag gal aa ke mai us din toh baad ohna de lage v nahi gya c. Par ohna da mainu dekhna bahut vadia lagda c. Baki mai luk luk ke ohna di movement te nazar v rakhda c.
Ajj v jado mai university vich enter kita ta mai dekhya dome jania ajj meri class de darwaze te hi khardian c. Te je mai class vich enter karda ta mere unha nal taakare ho hi jaane c. Baki mai Komal nu is blood lure baare hor jaankari ikathi karan baare v keha c. Te kal rati jado mai ghar aa reha c ta usne mere hath vich ik page fardha dita c.
Jisnu padh ke mainu pata laga ke, jis insaan te v ik Vampire blood lure power da istemal karda aa oh insaan usda gulam hi bann janda aa. Te oh insaan apne malik bina nahi reha sakda aa. Je usda malak usnu time time nal apna khoon na dewe ta oh insaan dimagi tur te bimaar rehan lag painda aa. Usnu apne andar ik khokhla pan mehsus hoon lag painda aa.
Te ik time ida da aunda aa ke oh apne saamne aye duje insaan nal kuj v kar sakda aa. Baki Komal ne ih v pata laga liya c ke, is tarah di shakti wale Vampire nu Hunters ate Werewolf bahut vada khatra mannde ne. Te us Vampire nu khatam karan layi oh apni puri jaan laga dinde ne.
Oda ta is power wale Vampire bahut ghat paye jande ne. Par ida di power kon nahi pana chahunda is lyi. Yuvraj Shergill warge Vampire jadu di madad nal Rupinder wargian kudian nu apne jaal vich fasa lainde ne. Par power te magic nal kise nu apna gulam banon vich bahut farak aa.
Kise v person te je jadu nal apni shaap shadi gayi aa, te oh ini powerful nahi hundi aa jini blood lure wali hundi aa. Te dusra jo ke sab toh important pehlu aa, oh ih aa ke jadu nal shadi gayi shaap, jadu nal mitayi ja sakdi aa par Blood Lure wali power nal shadi gayi shaap da koi todh nahi aa. Isnu oh Vampire v nahi todh sakda jisne ih shaap kise te shadi howe.
Te teesri gal jo Blood Lure power nu Jaduyi shaap toh alag banondi aa oh ih aa ke, Blood Lure: Vampires, Werewolfs, Hunters, Magicians ate Insaan sab te kam kardi aa par magic wali shaap sab te kam nahi kardi. Te je kardi v aa oh ini powerfull nahi hundi ke usnu todeya na ja sake. Te jo bahut strong mind te power wala viyakti hunda aa oh magic wali shaap nu khud v todh lainda aa. Baki jadu shaap mostly insaana te hi kaam kardi aa.
Blood Lure te ini information hoon toh baad mainu ina te pata lag gya c ke, mainu Riya te Preet da koi paka hal karne hi paina aa. Is lyi mai socheya ke ajj Riya te Preet nu mil hi lainda aa. Mai jado apni class lage puja ta mainu dekh ke Riya te Preet de chehre te smile aa gayi. Oh dome mere wal nu tur piyan.
Par oh kuj boldian mai pehla hi bol piya…..”mere hisab nal ih sahi jagah nahi aa sade gal karan di, is layi mere no likho te mai tuhanu adress send kara ga ithe a jeyo. Sari gal hun othe hi howe gi.” Oh v kuj naahi boliyan doma ne mera no. liya te mere kahe mutabik otho chup chap nikal giyan.
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Dupher de 12 baj chuke san, ate Amrit de kahe mutabak. Sare godam vich ikathe ho chuke san. Sab ajj apni full fighting uniform vich san, jo ke brown mitti(soil) jahe rang di c. Isda ik hi reason c ke unha ne din vich hamla karna aa is karke ih rang vatavaran vich ghul mil jawe ga.
Sab ne apne manpasand de hatiyar v chal laye san te puri tarah equipped ho gaye san. Amrit jo ke support magic ate fighting doma vic nipun c. Usne apni lak nal bani utility belt vich do khanjar, do guns te spare bullets rakhian san.
Baljeet jo ke stealthate muke mila te jaanleva vaar karan vich naipun c usne apni utility belt vich bahut sare shote shote chaku tange c. Ate usne hath vich dohab gutta upar v kuj paeya hoeya c. Baki usne v apne kol ik gun rakhi c.
Meher jo ke fighting vich ini nipun ta nahi c par fer v usne apni mom wang apne kol do khanjar rakhe san te kuj jardian bhootiyan. Te Armaan oh te ek dum inventory hi baneya piya c. Usde kapdeya vich ta pockets hi pockets san. Usne apne kol smoke bombs, do small pistols, ate usde bullets, baki sab de layi v spare bullets, ek phone jo ke aam phone nalo different c, ek hor gun type cheez, par ih te paka aa ke us vicho goliyan te nahi nikldian te oh normal pistol nalo kafi baadi c. Ate pher usde kol ek bada box v peya c.
Teji jo ke is group da tank c. Usde kapde v bakia nalo thode jayda paded c, usne v apne kol gun te rakhi c par usde gloves bakian nalo different san, usde gloves da sidha hisa te kapde da hi c par uparla hisa stell spike wala c, jo ke brown painted c te is tarah jurdeya c ke hath di movement ruke na. Te usde lage v ek box peya c.
Sab puri tarah tiyan san apne shikar da shikar karan layi par. Raveena haje tak nahi c ayi. Kyunki usne sidah hamale wali jagah te hi auna c 2 baje. Amrit da group baki da sara saaman do gadian vich rakh dinda aa. Gadian de sishe tinted c is layi andar kon betha a koi bahar la dekh nahi sakda c. Ate Amrit da group nikal janda aa apni teh kiti jagah te.
Pehla te oh sara saman kad ke us jagah te le aunde ne jithe unha ne trap set karne c. Sab kuj set karan toh baad Teji ate Meher gadian nu dur kite park karke luko aunde ne. Te ine nu do v baj jande aa te Raveena v othe aa jandi aa. Raveena ne fight ta karni c bass time te apne magic traps nu on hi karna c. Par fer v oh precautions layi tight back athletic dress paa ke ayi c.
Ik duje nu plan samjonde te apni apni postion dekhde time kado nikal janda aa pata hi nahi lagda. Tin bajan wale c ta hor 10 15 mint vich Kiran di car aa sakdi c. Amirt ne sab nu apni apni position len da order dita ta sab ne apna muh cover kar kiya ta Amrit de ishare nal Raveena ne ek mantar padheya ta sab de gale vich paye locket chamkan lag paye.
Asal vich ih locket da kaam c tuhanu Vampire de tez senses toh bachona. Ta ke tuci bina unha di nazar vich aye unha te nazar rakh sako. Fer Armaan sab nu do do smoke gernade dinda aa. Te apni sniper rifle le ke darakhat te chard janda aa te nazar tika lainda aa sadak te jitho Kiran di car ne auna c.
Amrit te Teji sadak de lage de ek ek darakhat te chardh jande ne te Baljeet tiyar ho jandi aa hath vich do smoke gernade fadh ke sutan layi te unha toh kuj ke dur cover le ke khadh jandi aa Meher jo tiyar c apna support magic use karan layi. Par Raveena inha toh 100 meter dur khadi c luk ke, usdi nazar Arman te hi c ke kado oh usnu ishara dawe te oh apna magic trap shuru kar dewe.
Ohna da intezar v khatam ho janda aa te Armaan nu Kiran di gadi labh jandi aa, oh apne kan te lage earpiece te ungel rakh ke bolda aa, “Be Ready target bass aun hi wala aa.”
Armaan di awaaz sun ke sare chokane ho jande ne. Te kuj hi der baad Armaan di aawaz fer aundi aa,”NOW”
Ih shabad sunde hi Amrit ate Teji darakhat toh thale shaal mar dinde ne, ate Simran ih shabad sunde hi apna support magic on kar dindi aa. Jiskarke ini upro shaal maran te v Amrit te Teji bilkul smooth landing karde ne te apni apni side dian rasian nu kat dinde ne.
Kiran te Komal jo aram nal bina kise parvah toh drive kardian apne ghar wal ja rehian c oh ik zordar dhamak di aawaz nal dhabak ke reh jandian ne. Komal te Kiran jado jaldi vich peecho ayi aawaz nu dekhdian ne te unha nu peeche do darakhat dige disde ne, par use hi pal aago v same aaawaz aundi aa te unha di car saamne dige do darakhtan nal takra jandi aa.
Koi insaan hunda ta ine zordar impact nal udh ke sisha todh ke gadi vicho bahar dig janda par car andar koi insaan nahi sama do Vampire san jina vich furti te power bahut jayda c. Te jida hi gadi da impact samne wale darakhtan nal hoeya te oh gadi vicho use vele hi bahar nikal gian, par haje oh gadi vicho nikliya hi c ke do smoke gernade ohna di gadi lage aa ke paye.
Gernade jo jida hi smoke nikliya Komal samajh gayi ke ih norma smoke gernade nahi aa, usne Kiran wal dekhya ta doma ne akhan hi akhan vich ishara kita te otho bhajan di sochi par problem ih c ke dome gadi de left right side toh bahar niklian c. Te doma nu ik duje de opposite bhajne pena c, kyuke ohna de front te back te smoke fail reha c, jo unha wal nu hi badh reha c.
Dome opposite side nu bhaj piyan par jida hi Komal bhaji ta oh ek invisible shield nal takra gayi. Jisnu Raveena ne pehla hi set kita hoeya c kyunki Amriy de plan mutabik doma nu limited space de andar ek dum straight line vich sadak wale hise toh dur le ke auna c.
Komal uchi aawaz vich boli Miss apa fas chuke aa mere wali side sheild aa. Ate Komal ne ek jump mari te oh gadi toh udh ke Kiran wali side aa gayi. Dome smoke cho niklan layi left side nu bhajian par jida hi unha ne smoke de area cho bahar paer rakheya. Ek ek karke onha de parallel line wise smoke gernade fatan lag paye.
Jime unha layi andar jaan layi rasta bana rahe hoon. Hun te Kiran v samaj gayi c ke ih koi shota mota attack nahi aa ih ik full fledge plan karke kita gya attack aa. Upro Kale Chandan da v use kita ja reha c oh v ina jayda. Ine jayda smoke karke doma te usda halka halka asar hona shuru v ho gya c.
Par hun Kiran nu gussa aa reha c, ate Komal apni miss de is expression nu smjh rahi c ke oh kini jayda gusse ho chuki aa. Oh apni Miss nu boldo aa, “Mai right side toh smoke vicho nika ke dekhdi aa, je nikal hoeya te tuci v mere peeche aa jeyo. Sada itho nikalna hi sahi aa.”
Te ina keh ke jida hi Komal right side wal ni jandi aa te jida hi smoke usdi skin nu lagda aa usnu exposed skin jalan lag jandi aa par oh rukdi nahi par fer ohi hunda aa ek invisibile sheild nal oh takra jandi aa. Oh use hi pal apni Miss wal dodh pendi aa, kyunki usde layi usdi Miss di safety bahut jaruri c te oh jina apni Miss de kol rahwe gi una hi oh usnu safe rakh pawe gi.
Komal nu dowara vapis aundi nu dekh ke Kiran samaj jandi aa ke unha de left right ate back tina rasteya nu band kar dita gya aa te ke una nu sadak toh dur bilkul andar ghane darakhata wale ilake vich le ke jaeya jaye. Kiran da gussa fut painda aa oh uchi awaaz vich boldi aa, jisne v ih himmat kiti aa usnu mai tadpa tadpa ke mara gi.
Komal di halat khatab ho rahi c, ik te smoke karke ohde vich kamzori aa rahi c duja smoke de andro bahar niklan karke usdi exposed skin te jalan hona v shuru ho gya c. Te smoke da asar Kiran te v ho reha c.
Kiran dian gusse vich akhan lal ho jandian ne te oh full speed nal andar nu bhajdi aa, te Komal v apne dard nu sehan kardi apni Miss de magar dodh laga dindi aa. Par Kala Chandan apa asar dikha reha c. Do sec vich hi dome smoke range cho bahar c par dome kafi andar aa giyan c. Hun bass unha de ale duale bass lambhe lambhe darakhtan hi san.
Oh dome khadian ho ke ider uder dekh ke unha te hamla karan wale nu labh hi rahe san ke ke Kiran di nazar ek darakhat te bethe saksh te pendi aa jisne hath vich sniper c. Te jida hi doma di nazar apas vich takrondi aa oh shaksh goli chala dinda aa. Apne wal aundi goli nu Kiran dekh ke side te ho jandi aa par jida hi oh goli toh bachdi aa usnu apne peecho fer kise cheez de usde lage aun da ehsas hunda aa.
Oh jandi nal usto bachan layi side nu ghumdi aa te usde face de ekdum lageyo ek chaku nikalda dikahyi dinda aa. Te same tarah de hamle Komal te v ho rahe c. Kiran apne te hoye duje war toh bachi hi c ke fer toh Armaan uste sniper rilfle nal goli chala dinda aa. Kale Chandan karke Kiran di v movement slow ho rahi c is karke oh time te side nahi ho pandi te goli usde mode nu chu ke nikal jandi aa.
Te ina hi kafi c kyunki goli nu Raveena ne Kale Chandan de pani vich dubo ke rakheya c. Hanji kal raat Raveena ne sirf smoke gernade banon vich hi madad nahi kiti c usne limited golian te thode chaku v tiyar kite c. Kiran de mode nu goli pame halka jeha shuhi hi c ke us goli te laga Kala Chandan usde khoon nal mil janda aa.
Te ik dard bhari cheekh Kiran de mukh vicho nikaldi aa te Kiran uthe hi zameen te dig jandi aa. Kyunki usde khoon de andar Kala Chandan ja chuka c te usnu puri body vich jalan mehsus ho rahi c. Apni Miss nu ida dard vich bethi dekh Komal usnu ja ke jafi pa laindi aa te baki de sare hamle apne upar le lendi aa. Komal ne Kiran nu pura cover kar liya c. Te usde pith te is time char chaku khub chuke san.
Te Komal nal hi zameen te lagpagh behoshi di halat vich dig jandi aa. Apni maid nu ida zameen te digda dekh Kiran da gussa futt painda aa, usdian akhan ik dum deep red ho jandia ne te dand transfrom ho jande ne. Te oh ini speed vich Armaan wal jump mar ke uskol puj ke usde face te puch mardi aa ke Armaan udh ke dur ja digda aa te ek darakhat nal ja ke takra janda aa. Te oh darakhat v us takar de nal tut ke thale dig janda aa. Armaan hale thale digia hi c ke Kiran usde kareeb puj chuki c.
Oh Armaan nu dhon toh fadh ke chuk lendi aa te usde face te mukian di barsat kar dindi aa. Par Armaan Meher ate Amrit doma de support magic nal protected c oh ine zordar mukian nu sahar te sakda c par fer v Kiran de muke ine zordar c ke Armaan da nak tutt chuka c te uscho khoon beh reha c.
Par Kiran uste hor hamle kar pandi ke Teji full speed vich bhajda othe aa janda aa, apne hath vich fadhe Armaan nu Kiran chuke ke zameen te sutdi aa te apne wal aa rahe Teji wal nu dodh paindi aa. Dome jado ek duje de kareeb pujde ne ta ek duje te punch nal baar kar dinde ne. Doma de punch ek duje nal takronde ne te kuj mili sec layi dome ek jagah hawa vich hi ruk jande ne. Doma de punch vich ini power c ke zameen te paye pate te hawa nal peeche nu udh jande ne te dome ek duje toh 2m dur ja ke rukde ne.
Mehere ine tim vich Armaan kol pahuch chuki c te usnu heal kar rahi c. Amrit, ate Baljeet v othe puj chukian san. Apne lage ine hunters nu dekh ke Kiran garajdi aawaz vich boldi aa,”Je tuhanu lagda aa ke tuci Kiran Randhawa te hamla karke bach jawo ge ta tuci bahut galat aa. Mai Kiran Randhawa aa The Kiran Randhawa. Mai bachpan toh hi is Kale Chandan nal training kardi aa rahi aa. Mainu is dard nu sehna te is dard nu sehan karde ladhna audna aa. Te je tuhade karke meri maid Komal nu kuj v hoeya ta mai tuhade sareya da dil apne hath nal tuhade sharir cho kad ke zameen te sut dama gi.”
Kiran di hunkar nu sun ke agoo Amrit v hunkar ke boldi aa,”Te tenu ki lagda aa The Kiran Randhawa asi ithe bina kise tiyari toh aye aa. Je tenu mai mere peran vich nak ragrdan te majbur na kita mera naam v Amrit Kaur Gill nahi.”
Kiran, Amrit da naam sun ke thoda chaunk jahi jandi aa par usnu samjahde bilkul v der nahi lagdi keis hamle da reason ki aa. Kiran v fer garajadi boldi aa,”Je hai himmat te lalo jina zor launa aa, Kiran mar jawe gi par kise aage ser nahi chukawe gi. Ikale ikale aun di lodh nahi aa ikathe hi ajo tuhade layi mai ikali hi kafi aa.”
Kiran ina bol ke hati hi c ke Baljeet puri speed vich jump mar ke aundi aa te Kiran de face te puch nal hamla kar dindi aa, par oh puch nu Kiran vich hi rok ke usde tid te lat mardi aa te Baljeet udhdi dur ja digdi aa. Ida hi fer Teji fer Amrit Kiran te hamla kar dinde ne. Armaan v heal ho chuka c te oh v na hi fight vich judh janda aa. Te usde nal hi Meher v a jandi aa.
Te fer shuru hunda attack dodge ate counter attack da sinsla, fraction of second vich attacks exchange ho rahe c. 5 jane ral ke Kiran te hamla kar rahe c, te upro ini speed nal ke Kiran nu v sab nu tackel karan vich mushkil aa rahi c par oh 5anja da dhaat ke mukabla kar rahi c.
Jithe andar ini ghamasaan ladai ho rahi c. Par bahar masa v aawaz nahi c jaa rahi. Kyunki jo sheild Raveena ne banyi c oh aawaz nu bahar jaan toh rok rahi c. Te duja jado rasian katan karke darakhat Kiran di car te dige c ta unha di car toh 500m dur v tin chatlr darakhat dig gye c. Jo ke us raste toh nikaln wale lokan nu rokan layi c.
Apne hamleya da Kiran te koi asar na hunda dekh panje ek due wal ishara karde ne ta sare apni apni pistal kad lainde ne Kiran panja de ekdum vich khadi c. Te tiyar c unha walo chalian golian nu dodge karan layi. Par uder Komal kafi had tak recover ho chuki c te jado usdian akhan khulian te usne dekhya ke usdi Miss te 5 jane pistal taani kahde aa ta usne apne apne dard nu shende howe khud nu transform kita te apni Miss di pith nal pith la ke khadh gayi.
“Tuhanu ki laga ke mai meri Miss te hamla karan walian nu bina shabak sikhaye shad dama gi.” Komal, Kiran wal halka jeha ser ghuma ke smile kardi boli. Kiran ne v smile kiti te boli.,”Hun ihna nu dasde aa ke Kiran Randhawa te hamla karan toh pehla loki 100 vaar kyun sochde ne.”
5 jane doma te golian chala shuru kar dinde ne par Komal te Kiran apni high senses nal ek smooth movements karke golian toh bachana shuru kar dindia ne. Par sab da mil ke golian chalona Raveena layi ik signal c. Raveena apna single samaj jandi aa te oh mantar padhna shuru Kar dind aa. Usde hatha cho ek red colour di light nikaldi aa te jo invisibile sheild usne banayi c oh ek vaade gol dhare da aakar lai laindi aa te hauli hauli shoti hoon lag jandi aa.
Komal te Kiran golian dodge karan vich busy hoon karke is gal nu notice nahi kar pandian par jado ih gal unha de notice vich aundi aa, ta bahut der ho chuki c. Oh gola ina shota ho gya ke dome jania 5m de area cho bahar v nahi ja sakdian c. Golian chalnia band ho chukian c. Te panja de chehre te jetu muskan c. Panje tur ke unha de lage aunde ne unha toh 6 meter dur doma nu gher ke khade ho jande ne.
Fer panje jane apne face toh masak utarde ne ta Baljeet khush hundi boldi aa,”Bahut bol rahi c tu, The Kiran Randhawa te hamla kita aa falana timkada. Tu is sheild cho tak bahar nahi nikal sakdi aa. Tenu ki laga c mai tenu maaf kar dama gi. Tu jo meri kudian nal kita aa usdi sajah te tenu mile gi. Te nale tere us name gulam nu v mile gi jisne meri kudian da khoon pita aa.”
Baljeet de muhu Sahil baare gal sun ke Kiran kolo control nahi hunda te oh Baljeet te hamla karan layi jump mardi aa par oh sheild nal takara jandi aa te usde puri body vich jime current dodh janda aa oh zameen te dig ke tadphan lag pendi aa. Apni miss nu ida tadphda dekh Komal usda ser apne patt te rakh ke usde kol beth jandi aa.
Oh Baljeet wal dekh ke hasan lag jandi aa. Komal nu is situation vich hasda dekh ke Oh sare heran reh jande aa te usde nal Kiran v. Komal nu hasda dekh Baljeet boldi aa,”Lagda apni maut nu saamne dekh ke tera dimag kharab ho gya a jo tu ida hass rahi aa. Mainu nahi pata c ke sade hamla da tere dimah te ina gehra asar howe ga.”
Komal, Baljeet Kaur wal gusse nal dekhdi aa te serious ho ke boldi aa,”Jis kudian de sirf khoon peen karke tu in vada kadan chukeya ke apne Khandaan di parvah kite bina hi Randhawa khandan di kudi te hamla kar dita. Par jado tenu pata lage ga ki terian kudian nal kita ho chuka aa odo ki kare gi tu.” Te Komal fer toh pagla di tarah hasan lag pendi aa.
Apnia kudian baare sun ke Baljeet da gussa hor badh janda aa te oh uchi aawaz vich boldi aa,”Ki merian kudian das v puri gal.” Par Komal kuj nahi boldi bass hasdi hi rehndi aa.
Baljeet kolo v hun hor sabar nahi hunda te oh boldi aa,”Tu ki tere ta fariste v bolan ge.” Te oh Amrit nu agle hamle layi boldi aa. Amrit apne kan vich lage earpiece te ungel rakh ke boldi aa,”Plan B” te jida hi Raveena nu ih shabad sunayi dinda aa te oh ik matar padhna shrur kar dindi aa.
Hunter group jado dekha aa ke pure 10 meter de area vich black te purple light wala circle ban gya aa te oh jump mar ke us circle cho bahar nikal jande ne. Koma, Kiran nu khada kardi aa te dome dekhan lag jandia ne ke hun ih kheda trap aa jis vich oh fas chukian ne.
Par usto baad jo hunda aa usdi unha nu umeedi hi nahi c. Circle vicho sangal niklan lag jande ne jinade muh chaku wang tikhe te ek duk nukile san. Oh sangal aa ke doma de sharir vich khubna shuru ho jande ne te doma de mub vicho dard parian cheekhan niklan lag jandian ne. Kiran ate Kamal khoon nal san chukian san. Sangalan ne doma nu hawa vich latka dita c. Te ek sangal aa ke Kiran de dil cheerde vich khub janda aa te Kiran de mukh vicho ek jordar cheekh nilkdi aa.
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Uder mai apne ghar lage pujan hi wala c ke mainu mere dil ate ser vich bahut zordar dard uthda mehsus hunda aa. Mai apni bike nu othe hi rok ke, ek ghar de peeche chala janda aa. Te mainu inj lagda aa jime mere dil vich kise ne khanjar khoob dita howe.
Mainu ida lagan lag janda aa ke jime Kiran bahut taklif vich aa te mainu pukar rahi aa. Merian akhan laal ho jandian ne ate mere dand apne aap hi transform ho jande ne mere hatha de nails v bade ho jande ne te meri red vision on ho jandi aa. Mainu pata nai lagda mai kider dodh reha aa bass apni puri jaan te speed nal mai dodh laga dinda aa.
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Milde a hun agle update vich te dekhde aa ki hunda aa agge. Haan mainu pata aa mai update shota post kita aa. Mainu aaj shuti c. Par mainu kam te bula liya gya jis karke update nu thoda shota rakhne piya.
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Bhai update post kardo ajj taAmanpreet Sarliwala Ok bro