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Fantasy Vampire's war (the Ragnarok)

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Vampire wars

Hello guys me yaha pe meri pehli story likhane jaa raha hun so kuch galti ho toh bata dena I'm not pro

Yeh story vampires par based hai jaisa ke aapne movies ya kai series me dekha hoga me kuch alag story likhne ja raha jo movies or series se alag hogi jo aapne pehle dekho hogi or aapko maja bhi bahut aayega bas padhte rahiye.
Yeh story india me based hogi or kai vampire families or werewolves families pe hogi isme vampire vs vampire vs werewolves hoga.

Families name indian hi rakhunga so aapko padhane me aasani ho so story suru karta hun.

Hero - aarav (20 age, family ka aage pata chalega abhi story me nahi aayenge)

Heroine family- Agarwal family
Heroine - kriti ( evil , fearless, )
Dad- Rajveer
Mom- virinika
Sister - sara
Brother - Ruchir
Aage inke cousins aate aate hai inke bare me dusre update ke bataunga kyun ke woh bhi story ka main hissa hai. Yeh inke cousins blood related nahi hai kuch vampires bahut saal pehle ek pack me rehte the or modern jamane me yeh ek family name ke sath jud gaye or as a family rehte hai.

Mehra family - inka bete ka naam hai Vikrant ( chota hai or isse chota ek or hai)
Vijay - dad ( family head ya bole toh vimpire pack ke head hai iss wale)
Renu- mom
Sister - shruti
Sister 2- nisha
Brother1- rohan( sabse chota bhai)
Brother2 - rajiv( sabse bada bhai)
Or bhi bahut log hai family me woh aage aayega

Desai family- werewolves family
Head of family- anil
Inki wife- madhu
Beta - ranveer
Dusra beta- raj
Beti - sima
Or kuch log hai jo aage pata chalega

So guys yeh tha family intro har family me kamse kam 25 se 40 log honge jinka aage pata chalega

So story suru karta hun pehla upadate thoda fast hoga.

Yeh story gujarat me based hogi.

Ahmedabad ,gujarat

Kuch mahine pehle ek professor ki death ho gai jiske paas ek pendent tha or mana jata hai ki usme bahut kuch powers hai jo aam log ya insan open nahi kar sakte or usko open karne ka tarika kuch logo ko hi aata hai unhe black magicians ya kalajadu karne wale naam se jana jata hai. Or is pendent ki khas baat yeh thi ki agar aapko yeh chahiye toh tab hi mil sakta hai jab samne wala ya jiske paas hai woh aapko samne se de aap isko chin nahi sakte nahi bina us vyakti margi ke le sakte hai. Toh yeh pendent ek professor ke paas tha or marte time unhone apne story ke hero yani aarav ko dia tha.

Present,
Agarwal family ke head yani ke Rajveer ko iss baat ka pata chal gaya tha ke professor ki death ho chuki hai or yeh pendent unhone kisi or ko dia hai jo ke ek 20 saal ki age ka ladka tha or aam insan tha or professor ke pados me rehta tha or iska naam aarav hai.
 

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Congrats brother... I wish you all the best
 

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Vampire wars

Hello guys me yaha pe meri pehli story likhane jaa raha hun so kuch galti ho toh bata dena I'm not pro

Yeh story vampires par based hai jaisa ke aapne movies ya kai series me dekha hoga me kuch alag story likhne ja raha jo movies or series se alag hogi jo aapne pehle dekho hogi or aapko maja bhi bahut aayega bas padhte rahiye.
Yeh story india me based hogi or kai vampire families or werewolves families pe hogi isme vampire vs vampire vs werewolves hoga.

Families name indian hi rakhunga so aapko padhane me aasani ho so story suru karta hun.

Hero - aarav (20 age, family ka aage pata chalega abhi story me nahi aayenge)

Heroine family- Agarwal family
Heroine - kriti ( evil , fearless, )
Dad- Rajveer
Mom- virinika
Sister - sara
Brother - Ruchir
Aage inke cousins aate aate hai inke bare me dusre update ke bataunga kyun ke woh bhi story ka main hissa hai. Yeh inke cousins blood related nahi hai kuch vampires bahut saal pehle ek pack me rehte the or modern jamane me yeh ek family name ke sath jud gaye or as a family rehte hai.

Mehra family - inka bete ka naam hai Vikrant ( chota hai or isse chota ek or hai)
Vijay - dad ( family head ya bole toh vimpire pack ke head hai iss wale)
Renu- mom
Sister - shruti
Sister 2- nisha
Brother1- rohan( sabse chota bhai)
Brother2 - rajiv( sabse bada bhai)
Or bhi bahut log hai family me woh aage aayega

Desai family- werewolves family
Head of family- anil
Inki wife- madhu
Beta - ranveer
Dusra beta- raj
Beti - sima
Or kuch log hai jo aage pata chalega

So guys yeh tha family intro har family me kamse kam 25 se 40 log honge jinka aage pata chalega

So story suru karta hun pehla upadate thoda fast hoga.

Yeh story gujarat me based hogi.

Ahmedabad ,gujarat

Kuch mahine pehle ek professor ki death ho gai jiske paas ek pendent tha or mana jata hai ki usme bahut kuch powers hai jo aam log ya insan open nahi kar sakte or usko open karne ka tarika kuch logo ko hi aata hai unhe black magicians ya kalajadu karne wale naam se jana jata hai. Or is pendent ki khas baat yeh thi ki agar aapko yeh chahiye toh tab hi mil sakta hai jab samne wala ya jiske paas hai woh aapko samne se de aap isko chin nahi sakte nahi bina us vyakti margi ke le sakte hai. Toh yeh pendent ek professor ke paas tha or marte time unhone apne story ke hero yani aarav ko dia tha.

Present,
Agarwal family ke head yani ke Rajveer ko iss baat ka pata chal gaya tha ke professor ki death ho chuki hai or yeh pendent unhone kisi or ko dia hai jo ke ek 20 saal ki age ka ladka tha or aam insan tha or professor ke pados me rehta tha or iska naam aarav hai.
Fast .. congratulations Bhai new story start krne ke liye..
Mujhe vampire based story bahut jayda pasnd hai ... And thanks apne yeh story start ki.
Apse Mai ummid krunga aap daily update do ..
Aate hai story PR..
Story Mai bahut SE charcter hai ...or aane wale hai....herohin ka family introduction ho gya..
Apna hero ko sbkuch hide hai ..Jo time SE open hoga....
Dekhna hoga apna hero aam insan SE kahss kaise bnta hai .
Wait rahega next update ka
 

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Vampire wars

Hello guys me yaha pe meri pehli story likhane jaa raha hun so kuch galti ho toh bata dena I'm not pro

Yeh story vampires par based hai jaisa ke aapne movies ya kai series me dekha hoga me kuch alag story likhne ja raha jo movies or series se alag hogi jo aapne pehle dekho hogi or aapko maja bhi bahut aayega bas padhte rahiye.
Yeh story india me based hogi or kai vampire families or werewolves families pe hogi isme vampire vs vampire vs werewolves hoga.

Families name indian hi rakhunga so aapko padhane me aasani ho so story suru karta hun.

Hero - aarav (20 age, family ka aage pata chalega abhi story me nahi aayenge)

Heroine family- Agarwal family
Heroine - kriti ( evil , fearless, )
Dad- Rajveer
Mom- virinika
Sister - sara
Brother - Ruchir
Aage inke cousins aate aate hai inke bare me dusre update ke bataunga kyun ke woh bhi story ka main hissa hai. Yeh inke cousins blood related nahi hai kuch vampires bahut saal pehle ek pack me rehte the or modern jamane me yeh ek family name ke sath jud gaye or as a family rehte hai.

Mehra family - inka bete ka naam hai Vikrant ( chota hai or isse chota ek or hai)
Vijay - dad ( family head ya bole toh vimpire pack ke head hai iss wale)
Renu- mom
Sister - shruti
Sister 2- nisha
Brother1- rohan( sabse chota bhai)
Brother2 - rajiv( sabse bada bhai)
Or bhi bahut log hai family me woh aage aayega

Desai family- werewolves family
Head of family- anil
Inki wife- madhu
Beta - ranveer
Dusra beta- raj
Beti - sima
Or kuch log hai jo aage pata chalega

So guys yeh tha family intro har family me kamse kam 25 se 40 log honge jinka aage pata chalega

So story suru karta hun pehla upadate thoda fast hoga.

Yeh story gujarat me based hogi.

Ahmedabad ,gujarat

Kuch mahine pehle ek professor ki death ho gai jiske paas ek pendent tha or mana jata hai ki usme bahut kuch powers hai jo aam log ya insan open nahi kar sakte or usko open karne ka tarika kuch logo ko hi aata hai unhe black magicians ya kalajadu karne wale naam se jana jata hai. Or is pendent ki khas baat yeh thi ki agar aapko yeh chahiye toh tab hi mil sakta hai jab samne wala ya jiske paas hai woh aapko samne se de aap isko chin nahi sakte nahi bina us vyakti margi ke le sakte hai. Toh yeh pendent ek professor ke paas tha or marte time unhone apne story ke hero yani aarav ko dia tha.

Present,
Agarwal family ke head yani ke Rajveer ko iss baat ka pata chal gaya tha ke professor ki death ho chuki hai or yeh pendent unhone kisi or ko dia hai jo ke ek 20 saal ki age ka ladka tha or aam insan tha or professor ke pados me rehta tha or iska naam aarav hai.
:congrats: for new story sir
Intro kaafi achha diya hai :applause: :applause:
Dekhte aage kya hota
Waiting for next update
 

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Aaj raat tak aayega naya update
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