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Fantasy Vampire's war (the Ragnarok)

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Aaj raat ko aayega update 11 baje tak
 

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UPDATE 6
Toh dosto ab aage,

Kriti boli ha toh chul hi toh hai pura din aese ghurte hi rehte ho. Pata nai kya kya soch te rehto ho

Aarav- sorry ab nahi aesa karunga par sirf collage me thik hai ghar pe toh dekh hi sakta hun na? Or rahi baat sochne ki woh tumhe bhi pata hoga me kya sochta hoga

Kriti ne aese uski taraf thoda gusse se dekha kyun ke actually me usko pata tha yeh kya sochta hai par woh aese maan toh nahi sakti

Kriti- mujhe kaise pata hoga ke tum kya sochate ho

Kriti ne aesa javab dia par jab woh uspe najar rakhti hai to usko pata hai yeh sex or aese hi sab chijon ka sochta hai

Aarav - ha fir bhi guess karo kaisa

Kriti- usme kya accha hi sochate hoge

Aarav - hmmm jo me sochata hun woh tumhe accha lagta hai?

Aarav ko pata nahi tha kriti ko pata hai woh kya sochta hai par fir bhi aamtor par ladke kya sochate hai woh koi bhi bata sakta hai

Kriti ne mann me bola chutiya sala gussa aa chuka tha usko pura ka pura par kuch kar nahi sakti thi

Kriti - ha accha hi lagega vaise bhi tum mere bare me bura toh kuch soch nahi sakte haina ?

Itna bolke bhola sa chehra bana diya. Aesa bhola or masum chahra dekh ke Aarav ko guilty feel huva

Aarav- sorry yaar actually me bura toh nahi kah sakti par us type ka sochta hai par abse pakka kuch aesa vaisa nahi sochunga

Kriti ko laga nahi tha ke Aarav kabul kar lega or uper se sorry bhi bolega kyun aam tor par log aesa nahi karte

Kriti- koi baat nahi vaise bhi tumhara aesa vaisa bhi sochne se mujhe koi taklif nahi hai

Itna bolke usne sexy si smile ke sath aankh maar di

Aesa karna Aarav ke arman jaga diye uspe pura nasha chad chuka tha par woh kuch karna nahi chahta tha par usko masti suji

Aarav- yeh baat pehle bolni thi ab toh aese bhi ab soch ke kya karunga jab practically kar sakta hun

Itna bolke Aarav ne bhi aankh maar di

Kriti ko samaj nahi aaya iska ab kya kare par usko yaad aaya abhi se line set kar deti hun so woh future me kuch karne ka try na kare

Kriti- nahi me toh kuch nahi karne dene wali or nahi mera aesa kuch mood hai atleast collage khatam hone tak toh nahi

Aarav ko bhi pata tha uska aesa hi kuch ans hoga woh bhi samaj sakta tha agar kriti ko nahi kuch karna toh woh try nahi karega

Aarav- koi baat nahi jaisa tum kaho par thoda aese gf bf ki tarah toh rah sakte haina or kam se kam ek Chick pe toh kiss kar hi sakta hun

Kriti- thik hai jaisa aap kahe sir
Itna bolke kriti ne samne se Aarav ko hug kia aarav ko accha laga raha tha yeh sab or thik raha tha kriti use kitna pyaar karti hai. Aarav itne me khush tha

Fir thodi or bate or masti chali dono ke kriti ek dum normal rah rahi thi Aarav soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki kuch gadbad hai.
Ab saam hone ko aagai thi so Aarav ghar pe chala gaya

Or aese hi Aarav ki raat to acche se biti kriti ab sochne lagi usko jo karna tha woh sab ho gaya tha uska plan accha ja raha tha ab uska plan aage tha Aarav ko lalana yani kuch jyada hi lalana aesa kuch din rahega jab tak woh control na kar paye tab tak or aage badne ki koshish karega tab kriti thoda natak karegi or bol degi atleast woh sagai se pahle toh aesa kuch nahi karna chahati kyun ke usko ab usko ladko pe bharosa nahi or kuch ex boyfriend ki jhuthi muthi kahani suna degi isiliye usko ladko pe bharosa nahi hai agar aesa ho jaye toh Aarav paka woh ring usko pehna dega fir ek baar ring uske hath me aajayi fir to usko koi rokne wala nahi hai.

Agli subah,

Subah ho gai thi Aarav apne collage ke liye nikal gaya woh road cross kar raha tha tab usko ek car takkar maar deti hai car me Break lagai thi par thoda side se usko touch ho gaya woh girte girte bacha car me se ek ladka bahar aaya or sorry sorry bolne laga Aarav ne bhi jyada BAAT aage nahi badhai bola it's ok bol dia. Fir car me se ek ladki nikli usne bhi do teen baar usko sorry bol dia Aarav ko jyada kuch chot lagi nahi thi so usne koi jyada aage baat nahi badai fir bato se pata chala woh bhi uske collage ke hi or biology department hai. Fir us ladke ne bola chalo hamare sath hi aajavo collage me chod denge Aarav ne bhi bola thik hai woh bhi unke sath car me beth gaya.

Us ladke ne Aarav ka name pucha Aarav me fir un dono ka name pucha ladki ka naam sima desai or ladke name raj desai tha or dono bhai bahan the ( yeh wahi werewolves family ke hi members hai) Aarav ne thodi der baat ki dono funny the so bato bato me dost jaise ho gaye dono bate bhi achhi kar rahe the 5 min me collage pochak gaye or car parking me laga di. Kriti ki car waha pehle se hi thi matlab roj ki tarah woh pehle aagai thi.

Fir teeno bate karte karte ja rahe the Aarav ne unko collage ke bare me bataya fir bola chalo mere friends se milva ta hun kyun ke dono yaha naye the se Aarav ko laga kuch friends ban jaye to accha hai unko accha lagega or dono the bhi mast bate achi kar rahe the.

Aarav ne thode door se dekha woh sab roj wali jagah pe khade the or sab bate kar rahe the Aarav ne paas jake kriti ko dekha woh khubsurat lag rahi thi or mobile me kuch dekh rahi thi Aarav ne jake sabko hello bola kriti ne uper Aarav ko hello bola fir usne raj or sima ki or dekha waha sona bhi thi usne bhi unki or dekha. Kriti ko sock laga un dono ko yaha dekh ke woh aese gusse me ho gai puri tarah se woh dono muskara rahe the or sabse mil rahe the or intro se rahe the sima ne kriti ki or hath badaya or bola I'm sima Kriti ne bhi hath milaya or jor se daba dia smile wale face ke sath or bola I'm kriti itna bolke hath chod dia. Dono ek tarah se gusse me the par dikha nahi rahe the.
 

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Vampire wars

Hello guys me yaha pe meri pehli story likhane jaa raha hun so kuch galti ho toh bata dena I'm not pro

Yeh story vampires par based hai jaisa ke aapne movies ya kai series me dekha hoga me kuch alag story likhne ja raha jo movies or series se alag hogi jo aapne pehle dekho hogi or aapko maja bhi bahut aayega bas padhte rahiye.
Yeh story india me based hogi or kai vampire families or werewolves families pe hogi isme vampire vs vampire vs werewolves hoga.

Families name indian hi rakhunga so aapko padhane me aasani ho so story suru karta hun.

Hero - aarav (20 age, family ka aage pata chalega abhi story me nahi aayenge)

Heroine family- Agarwal family
Heroine - kriti ( evil , fearless, )
Dad- Rajveer
Mom- virinika
Sister - sara
Brother - Ruchir
Aage inke cousins aate aate hai inke bare me dusre update ke bataunga kyun ke woh bhi story ka main hissa hai. Yeh inke cousins blood related nahi hai kuch vampires bahut saal pehle ek pack me rehte the or modern jamane me yeh ek family name ke sath jud gaye or as a family rehte hai.

Mehra family - inka bete ka naam hai Vikrant ( chota hai or isse chota ek or hai)
Vijay - dad ( family head ya bole toh vimpire pack ke head hai iss wale)
Renu- mom
Sister - shruti
Sister 2- nisha
Brother1- rohan( sabse chota bhai)
Brother2 - rajiv( sabse bada bhai)
Or bhi bahut log hai family me woh aage aayega

Desai family- werewolves family
Head of family- anil
Inki wife- madhu
Beta - ranveer
Dusra beta- raj
Beti - sima
Or kuch log hai jo aage pata chalega

So guys yeh tha family intro har family me kamse kam 25 se 40 log honge jinka aage pata chalega

So story suru karta hun pehla upadate thoda fast hoga.

Yeh story gujarat me based hogi.

Ahmedabad ,gujarat

Kuch mahine pehle ek professor ki death ho gai jiske paas ek pendent tha or mana jata hai ki usme bahut kuch powers hai jo aam log ya insan open nahi kar sakte or usko open karne ka tarika kuch logo ko hi aata hai unhe black magicians ya kalajadu karne wale naam se jana jata hai. Or is pendent ki khas baat yeh thi ki agar aapko yeh chahiye toh tab hi mil sakta hai jab samne wala ya jiske paas hai woh aapko samne se de aap isko chin nahi sakte nahi bina us vyakti margi ke le sakte hai. Toh yeh pendent ek professor ke paas tha or marte time unhone apne story ke hero yani aarav ko dia tha.

Present,
Agarwal family ke head yani ke Rajveer ko iss baat ka pata chal gaya tha ke professor ki death ho chuki hai or yeh pendent unhone kisi or ko dia hai jo ke ek 20 saal ki age ka ladka tha or aam insan tha or professor ke pados me rehta tha or iska naam aarav hai.
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Hellohoney

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Vampire wars

Hello guys me yaha pe meri pehli story likhane jaa raha hun so kuch galti ho toh bata dena I'm not pro

Yeh story vampires par based hai jaisa ke aapne movies ya kai series me dekha hoga me kuch alag story likhne ja raha jo movies or series se alag hogi jo aapne pehle dekho hogi or aapko maja bhi bahut aayega bas padhte rahiye.
Yeh story india me based hogi or kai vampire families or werewolves families pe hogi isme vampire vs vampire vs werewolves hoga.

Families name indian hi rakhunga so aapko padhane me aasani ho so story suru karta hun.

Hero - aarav (20 age, family ka aage pata chalega abhi story me nahi aayenge)

Heroine family- Agarwal family
Heroine - kriti ( evil , fearless, )
Dad- Rajveer
Mom- virinika
Sister - sara
Brother - Ruchir
Aage inke cousins aate aate hai inke bare me dusre update ke bataunga kyun ke woh bhi story ka main hissa hai. Yeh inke cousins blood related nahi hai kuch vampires bahut saal pehle ek pack me rehte the or modern jamane me yeh ek family name ke sath jud gaye or as a family rehte hai.

Mehra family - inka bete ka naam hai Vikrant ( chota hai or isse chota ek or hai)
Vijay - dad ( family head ya bole toh vimpire pack ke head hai iss wale)
Renu- mom
Sister - shruti
Sister 2- nisha
Brother1- rohan( sabse chota bhai)
Brother2 - rajiv( sabse bada bhai)
Or bhi bahut log hai family me woh aage aayega

Desai family- werewolves family
Head of family- anil
Inki wife- madhu
Beta - ranveer
Dusra beta- raj
Beti - sima
Or kuch log hai jo aage pata chalega

So guys yeh tha family intro har family me kamse kam 25 se 40 log honge jinka aage pata chalega

So story suru karta hun pehla upadate thoda fast hoga.

Yeh story gujarat me based hogi.

Ahmedabad ,gujarat

Kuch mahine pehle ek professor ki death ho gai jiske paas ek pendent tha or mana jata hai ki usme bahut kuch powers hai jo aam log ya insan open nahi kar sakte or usko open karne ka tarika kuch logo ko hi aata hai unhe black magicians ya kalajadu karne wale naam se jana jata hai. Or is pendent ki khas baat yeh thi ki agar aapko yeh chahiye toh tab hi mil sakta hai jab samne wala ya jiske paas hai woh aapko samne se de aap isko chin nahi sakte nahi bina us vyakti margi ke le sakte hai. Toh yeh pendent ek professor ke paas tha or marte time unhone apne story ke hero yani aarav ko dia tha.

Present,
Agarwal family ke head yani ke Rajveer ko iss baat ka pata chal gaya tha ke professor ki death ho chuki hai or yeh pendent unhone kisi or ko dia hai jo ke ek 20 saal ki age ka ladka tha or aam insan tha or professor ke pados me rehta tha or iska naam aarav hai.
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Very nice update ..........
Keep it up bro ..........
 

Hellohoney

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UPDATE 2
So guys suru karte hai

Toh Rajveer ko jaise pata chala ke pendent kisi Aarav naam ke ladke ke paas tha or Rajveer ko pura bharosa tha ke woh ladka insan hi hoga kyun ke professor kisi vampire ya werewolves ko pendent de nahi sakte aesa rajveer ko laga tha

Ab usko haasil karna bahut jaruri tha Aggarwal family ke liye kyun ke abhi mehra family sabse powerful vampire family thi aaspaas me Rajveer unse darte nahi the or dono family me aese achhi banti bhi thi par apni family ki sefty ko woh daav pe nahi laga sakta tha.

So guys abhi vampire ki powers ki baat kar dun ke aesa mana jata hai ke jo insan me se vampire banta hai usse jyda jo vampire peda hote woh jyda powerful hote hai agar woh apne aapko acche se control kar le toh. Or jo insan ka khoon pite hai woh janvar ka khoon pine walo se jyada powerful hote hai.

Aate hai story par toh Rajveer kuch din pehle vijay se mila tha toh usne kriti ki marriage ki baat Vikrant se ki thi jisse dono family me acche khase relation ban jate. Par Rajveer ko yeh baat pasand nahi aay kyun ke pehli Baat toh yeh ke isse kriti unke pack ya family ke sath jud jayegi( insano se alag tarah se hoti hai shaadi aap isko shaadi nahi bol sakte par ek rasam bol sakte ho) jisse unke relation toh or acche ho jayenge par mehra family ki power or bad jayegi kyun ke abhi dekha jaye toh kriti sabse powerful thi Aggarwal family me or abhi khud ko khoon pine se control or acche se kar le toh or bhi powerful ho sakti hai. Yeh baat mehra family ko bhi pata thi isaliye woh kriti ko apane sath apane pack ke lena chahte the usse unhen lagta tha ke woh sabse jyada powerfull ho jayenge fir jo chahe wohnkar sakte hai. Or Rajveer ko isi baat ka dar tha ke na chahte hue bhi unka sath dena padega Rajveer ko kyun ke beti saval tha.
Or Rajveer ko pata tha ke kahi na kahi kriti or Vikrant ek dusre ko like karte hai yeh sab Vikrant ka khel tha woh bhi janta tha Rajveer usse uski beti door ho jaye usse pehle use kuch karna hoga.

Abhi jaise bhi karke usko pendent chahiye tha apne paas or abhi family me woh kaam kriti hi kar sakti thi woh usne soch liya tha kyun ke kriti jo ek baat soch le woh karke rehti thi. Or Rajveer ne soch liya yeh kaam toh kriti hi karegi.
Aese kriti apne papa ki sab baat manti thi par uske kaam karne ka tarika alag tha kuch bhi ho jaye bas kaam ho jana chahiye yeh soch rakhi thi kriti usse dusron logo se kuch lena dena nahi tha apne family ke alava.

Family me sabhi ab janvar ke khun se apni pyaas buja lete the kabhi kabhi blood bank se insani khoon bhi chori kar lete the par ho sakte utna muder se door rehte the or sab apne aap ko acchi tarah control kar sakte the. bas kriti ke alava woh abhi bhi garam khoon piti thi or direct insan ke andar se kabhi kabhi out of control bhi ho jati thi jisse dar se uska bhai uske sath rehta tha jab usko garam khoon pina hota tha kyun ke out off control hoke kisi insan ko maar na de par ab accha control karna sikh gai thi woh or kuch jyada hi powerful thi.

Abhi Rajveer ne apne family walo ko khabar kar di thi ke apna next target kya hai. Or kriti ko samja dia ke usko kisi bhi haal me yeh kaam pura karna hai woh khus thi kyun ke usko khud pe bharosa tha ke woh kuch bhi kaam kar sakti thi.

Kriti - koi baat nahi aap sab mujhe chodd dijiye me pendent kuch dino me hi aapke hatho me de dungi

Itna confident dekh ke Rajveer bhi khus tha usko kriti pe bharosa tha bas confident overconfident na ban jaye.

Rajveer - tum toh bahut confident ho khud pe beta par kuch batavogi ke yeh kaam tum karogi kaise

Kriti - woh aap mujh pe chod dijiye mujhe pata hai mujhe kya karna or aapke hisab se woh ek insan hi hai bas dekh ye usse me pendent fatak se le lungi

Rajveer- tum samjo nahi tumhen lena nahi hai pendent woh samne se dena chahiye

Kriti- ha jo bhi ho kuch dino me woh samne se pendent. Mujhe pata hai insano ko kya chahiye.
Woh man me soch rahi thi ke ek ladke ko bas ek khubsurat ladki mil jaye or uper se paiso wali toh uski toh lottery lag jayegi bas mujhe bhi bas yahi karna hai bas aese hi insan chutiye jaldi hi bante hai.

Toh dosto yeh tha aaj ka upadte isme romance bhi hi ga halaki yeh sex story nahi hai par isme thoda bahut sex hoga or bahut galiya bhi hogi jisko pareshani ho woh bata dijiye
Fentastik update bhai
 
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