Romance Vanita aur Kabadiwale ki love story

[dang091]

bas bhai ye story bij mein chod k mat janaa aur jaise pyaar se pura starting diye ho waise hi rakhna ye nhi bohat female character dal do Vanita ko sbse chudwa do aise Mt karna aaram se manohar k Vanita se setting karao pehele ache se usko manohar se chudwa phir aage ka aaram se dekhna........

I will complete this story.

 

[HusnKiMallika]

Hello everyone, Aaj main apke liye ek story likhne ja raha hoon. Ye story Yahan likhi gyi kyi stories se inspired hai. Ye kahani ek aise pyaar ki hai jo asambhav sa lagta tha..par sambhav huya, Aur kaise pyaar andha kar deta hai, pyaar mein hum kuch faisle aise kar jaate hain jo sahi hote huye bhi galat hote hain aur jiska asar kyi zindagion par hota hai. Aur ek baat.. main koi lekhak nhi hoon bass apne shounk se likh rha hoon, agar apko pasand aye to comment zaroor kre, lekin agar kuch thik na lagge fir bhi main chahunga ke aap mujhe batayein.


Ye kahani hai Jammu ke ek pariwaar ki eklauti ladki Vanita ki. Jisne abhi abhi 12th ke exam diye hain aur kuch hi din pehle 18 ki huyi hai. Vanita bala ki khoobsurat aur dikhne mein behadd masoom c hai, hassmukh chehra, Gora rang, rasile gulabi honth, kadd 5 foot 4 inch, slim lekin sudol jism. uske badan murde ki bhi kaamvasna jga de. Vanita ek kachi-kali thi, Wo Jammu ke ek girls school mein padti thi aur abhi abhi usne 12th ke exam diye the aur 18 ki huyi thi, par dikhne me uski age 18 se bhi kamm lgti thi. Vanita study mein bohot tez thi aur ghar ke kaam mein bhi. Vanita ka kabhi koi boyfriend nhi tha, uska dhyaan apni family aur study mein hi tha.


Vanita ke ghar mein Uske papa Pranav Singh aur uski daadi thi. Uske papa civil Engg. the. Pichle saal Vanita ki maa ka dehant ho gya tha. Vanita ek sidhe-sadhe, bohot ache aur izzatdaar pariwar se thi. Maa ke dehant ke baad ghar ki responsibilty bohot ache se nibha rhi thi. Vanita apni daadi se bohot pyaar krti thi, uski daadi ko bina kaan ki machine lgye sunta nhi tha aur nazar bhi kamm thi. Vanita ki daadi kuch mahine unke ghar aur kuch mahine Vanite ke chacha ke ghar rehti thi. Aaj kal Vanita ki daadi unke chacha ke ghar gyi thi. To Vanita din mein ghar pe akeli hoti thi.


Kuch hi din pehle Vanita ke papa ne useke birthday par usse scooty gift ki thi. Vanita scooty ko lekar behadd khush thi. Vanita ko friends ke saath faltu gumna firna itna pasand nhi tha usse ghar mein rehna hi pasand tha, lekin fir bhi wo khush thi ke abh scooty pe kahi bhi aa ja sakti hai, aur usse ab papa se kuch mangavne ki zaroort nhi wo abh khud hi bazaar ja sakti hai. Vanita ke papa ko Vanita par pura bharosa tha ke unki bachi bohat hi samjhdaar hai aur wo bhi kabhi Vanita ko rokte-tokte nhi the.


Vanita ka ghar shehar se thoda bahar tha, isi liye aas paas traffic bohot hi kamm tha. Jab bhi Vanita ghar se bahar nikalti, uski khoobsurti har ek ko apni aur aakarshit krti. Buddha ho ya jawaan sabki nazar bss us par hoti. Lekin Vanita kisi ko bhav nhi deti thi. Papa ki Pari jo thi.


Lekin wo kehte hain na ke pyaar andha hota hai. kya pta kon pyaar mein andha ho jaye.


Vanita ke ghar ke thodi hi dur ik kabaadiwala rehta tha, Manohar laal. Uska chhota sa ghar tha aur usi ghar ke bahar wale kamre ko usne kabaad ka store bna rkha tha. Manohar laal ki umaar lagabhag 55 saal thi, Manohar sanwale rang ka, hatta-katta insaan tha. uska kadd 5” 8’ tha. uske sir par baal bohot kamm the lagh-bhag ganja tha, dekhne mein wo chor-uchakka zada lagta tha par chor nhi tha. Manohar paan bidi ka shounkeen tha. Abb greeb ke aur kya shounk ho skte hain. Pariwaar uska tha nhi, lekin fir bhi apni mauj mein jeene wala insaan tha. Din bhar gali muhalle mein ghoom kar kabaad ikatha krta fir use bech kar kuch paise bna leta. yahi uski life thi. Manohar ki ek khasiyat thi, wo tha uska hamesha attam vishwas se jeena aur khush rehna.



Ek din Manohar laal Vanita ke ghar ke paas apna jholla liye ghoom rha tha. Tabhi Vanita ko usne pehli baar dekha aur dekhta hi reh gya, kuch pal ke liye jaise sab kuch thamm sa gya. bass wo Vanita ko dekhe ja rha tha. Vanita apni scooty se ghar ka kuch samaan bazaar se leke ayi thi. Us din Vanita salwaar suit mein thi, Usne sirf ankhon mein kajal lagya tha, aur koi make up ki usse zaroort bhi nhi thi.


Manohar jis tarah se usse dekh rha tha aisa lagg rha tha jaise usne kisi pari ko dekh liya ho. Vanita ne apni scooty ghar andar ki aur gate band kr diya. Tabhi jaise Manohar hosh mein aya. ussne socha ye kya houya? larkiya ton ussne pehle bhi dekhi thi, par aaj kuch alag ehsaas tha. Manohar laal soch rha tha ke wo larki bohot kamm umar ki lagti hai, use bura bhi lgga ke wo uss larki ke dada ki age ka hoga. Vanita ko iss nazar se dekhne ke liye usse thoda bura bhi lagg rha tha. Vanita ke husan ko apne dil me samaye wo apne ghar ki or chal diya.



Par reh reh kar Manohar ke mann mein Vanita ka masoom chehra ghoom rha tha. Wo baar baar koshish krta ke Vanita uske mann mein na aye par fir bhi uska dil usse baar baar dekhne ka kar rha tha. Abb chahe koi kuch soche par kya ye pehli nazar ka pyaar tha? ya bss ek aakarshan? lekin Hawas to nhi thi. Manohar greeb tha par dil ka bura nhi tha. Ummar ke difference ki wajah se Manohar ko bura bhi lagg rha tha ke uss larki ki khubsoorti use itna aakarshit kr rhi hai. Par dil to dil hai…aur pyaar andha bhi hota hai.


Agle din na chahte huye bhi Manohar laal Vanita ke ghar ke paas gya, wo apna jholla uthyae Vanita ke ghar ke aas paas chakkar lga rha tha. Uss area ke log Manohar ko jante the or usse imaandar insaan mante the, to kisi ko Manohar par koi shakk bhi nhi tha. Bas wo uss hoor pari ki ek jhalak pana chahta tha. Bohot time ho gya usse chakkr lgaate lekin usse Vanita nhi dikhi. Tabhi Manohar ki kismat ne uska saath diya. Vanita kuch kaam se chatt par gyi. Tabhi Manohar laal ne dusri baar vanita ko dekh, fir se whi ehsaas, jaise waqt thamm sa gya ho. Manohar mann mein soch rha tha ke bhagwaan ne kya hussan diya hai. Vanita 2min ke liye hi chatt par ayi thi, par ye 2min Manohar ke liye kaafi the. Vanita ne Manohar ko apni aur dekhte dekha, wo bhi soch rhi thi ke ye kabaadiwala bhuddha kaise tak-taki lagake usse dekh rha hai. Vanita ne apna chehra dusri aur kr liya aur Manohar ko nazar-andaaz krte huye chali gyi. Vanita 12th ke exam ke baad ghar par hi rhti thi, abhi uska result nhi aya tha.



Ab ye roz ka kaam ho gya, Manohar har roz Vanita ke ghar ke chakkar lgatta aur usse dur se hi dekh kar khush ho jata. Manohar laal dil hi dil mein Vanita ko chahne lgga tha. Vanita apne aap mein mast thi, Vanita ne kyi baar Manohar laal ko apne ghar ke paas dekha tha, Vanita soch rhi the abb ye buddha bhi uspe line maar rha hai. lekin kabadiwale par wo kyu dhyaan deti ?, Usse to Manohar shakal sekoi chor uchakka lgga tha. Lekin usse kya ptta tha ke uske baap se zada umar ka ek kabadiwala usse dil hi dil mein chahta hai.



Pichle kyi dino se Manohar laal Vanita ke husan ka deedar kr rha tha. Shayad usse pyaar tha iss nazuk pari se. Sundar larkiyion ke diwaane bohot hoten hain, isme kya badi baat hai. Par Manohar laal ke liye badi baat thi. Manohar laal samaaz ke nichle tabke se tha, uper se garib, badsurat aur buddha bhi. Saari batein uske pyaar ke raste mein diwaar ban ke khadi thi. Ek baat Manohar ko dusron se alag bnati thi aur wo tha uska ashawadi hona. Usne Vanita se baat krne ka faisla liya. Ab chahe jo bhi ho ab wo apne bass dil ki sunega. Ab hum jo bhi soche, par kya pyaar ki koi umar hoti hai? kya kisi buddhe ko pyaar nhi ho skta? ho sakta hai... aur Manohar ko hua bhi.

Bahut acchi shuruwat kahaani ki ..

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Waiting bro

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Bhai age kam kardo

 

[Kung lee]

Waiting 4 update dang bro

 

[dang091]

Ajj kal to Manohar laal ki raaton ki neend udd gyi thi. bistar par bas karwate badlta rehta, uske dilo dimag par bass Vanita hi chhai thi, uska gora rang, gulaabi honth, pyara sa chehra, uska kaamseen badan… Manohar ko dewaana bna rha tha, Manohar jaise fir se jwaan ho gya tha. Wo ye soch rha tha ke kaise wo Vanita se baat kre, lekin samjh nhi aa rha ta ke kya kre.


Manohar roz uske ghar ke paas se guzarta. Ek din Vanita apne ghar ke gate par hi thi, aur Manohar ne dekha to tezi se Vanita ke ghar ki aur bhadda, abb wo Vanita se kuch hi duri par tha. ajj usne Vanita ko aur nazdeek se dekha aur Vanita ke husan ka jaadu Manohar par chha gya. Manohar ne himmat krke Vanita ko awaaz lgayi..

Manohar - “ Suniye memsahab”

Vanita. - “ Ji” ?

Manohar- “ Agar ghar me koi raddi ka samaan hai to aap le ayie”

Vanita. - “nhi bhaiya, abhi to nhi hai”

Manohar - “ thik hai, koi baat nhi, lekin agar aapko purna samman dena ho to aap mujhe bta dena, main aksar yahan atta rehta hoon, meri dukaan bhi paas mein hi hai.”

Vanita. - “ thik hai, jab hoga to bta denge.”


Itna keh kar Vanita ne ghar ka gate band kr diya. Manohar bhi wahan se chla gya. Vanita abb soch rhi thi ke ye buddha uske piche hi padd gya, pehle to roz dekhta hi tha ajj ussne mujhe bula bhi liya. Vanita ko aaj takk kisi larke ne touch bhi nhi kiya tha aur idhar ye bhuddha usske paas ana chahta hai. Wo soch rhi thi ke apne papa se baat kre, ke ye bhuddha ghar ke aas paas hi ghumta rehta hai. Manohar laal asal mein Jammu ka nhi tha wo yahan 25 saal pehle uttar-Pardesh ke kissi chhote gaon se aya tha, nichle vargg ka hone ke karn uske gaon mein uss par kyi atyachar huye the, issi liye wo gaon chhod yahan aa gya tha.


Manohar dhire dhire apni manjil ki or badd rha tha. Aaj usne pehla kadam utha liya tha. Vanita se baat jo ki thi. Vanita ek friendly nature ki larki thi, par esse hi kisi se baat bhi nhi krti thi. Ajj Manohar ki khushi ka thikkana nhi tha, usne pehli baar Vanita se baat jo ki thi, chahe thodi c hi shi, Usne kuch khaas baat to nhi ki thi, lekin aisa humein lgta hai, uske liye khaas thi. kabhi kabhi ye chhoti chhoti baatien aage chal kar baddi baaton ke liye zameen tyaar krti hain. Isi liye aaj usse puri duniya hi khubsuraat lgne lggi thi.


Manohar laal apne ghar par apne bed pe leta soch rha tha ke usse kya krna chaiye? Wo apne aap se swaal kr rha tha. lekin kuch soojh bhi nhi rha tha. kabhi apne halaton ke bare mein sochta or kabhi samaj ke. Lekin Vanita uske dil mein bss chukki thi. Wo aise hi Vanita ke khayaalon mein so gya. Subah utha to pehla khyaal usse vanita ka aya. Usne apni aadhi se jada zindagi akele bitaai thi, uski zindagi ka koi maksad nhi tha, wo bass apni mauj mein jeeta tha. Par abb jaise usse uski zindagi ka maksad mil gya tha. Vanita ko paane ka. Manohar laal bss ye soch rha tha ke kissi trah se vanita se thodi jaan pehchaan ho jaye.


Wo kehte hain na ke aap apni manzil ki aur bhadte rhe, to kismat bhi apka saath zaroor degi. Manohar laal itne dino se Vanita ke ghar ke chakkr lga rha tha, to usse Vanita ke papa ka bhi pta tha, ussne ghar aate jaate unhe dekha tha. Ek din kya huya ke Manohar laal road par chal rha tha ke usne Vanita ke papa Pranav ko dekha, wo kissi dukaan se smaan leke apni gaadi ki taraf ja rhe the, tabhi unka wallet jeb se gir gya lekin Vanita ke papa ko pta nhi chla. Manohar ne dekh liya tha. Manohar laal ne Pranav Singh ko awaaz lgai..

Manohar:- “bhai sahab!! suniye!!”


Vanita ke papa ne piche mud ke dekha.


Manohar:- “Bhai Sahab, apka batua gir gya hai.”

Manohar laal ne unka wallet utha ke unhe de diya. Pranav Singh dil ke bohot achhe insaan the. Unke office mein bhi unki bohot izzat thi. Vanita ke papa ko Manohar laal ki imaandari dekh kr bohot achha lgga. Unhone socha ke agar koi aur hota to unhe btata hi nhi, kyunki unke wallet mein kafi cash tha. par iss gareeb ne paiso ka lalach nhi kiya.


Pranav Singh:- “arre dhanywaad tumhara, pta nhi kaise girr gya.”


Unhone Manohar laal ko khush ho kar kuch paise dene chahe, lekin Manohar ne manna kar diya.


Pranav Singh:- “rakhlo bhai, koi baat nhi.”


Manohar:- “nhi nhi..sahab, main apna kaam krta hoon aur mehnat ka khata hoon, mujhe apke paise nhi chahiye.”


Pranav Singh ke lakh kehne par bhi Manohar ne paise nhi liye. lekin usen kaha ke agar unke ghar mein raddi ka samaan hai to wo le jayega, aur ussi ki kamaai ka khayega. Vanita ke papa ko bohot achha lagga ke ye chahe gareeb hi sahi par imaandaar aadmi hai. Manohar ne unhe apne kaam aur uski dukaan ke baare mein bataya. Ye dusra kaddam tha apni manzil ki or. kyunki wo chahta tha ki agar Vanite ke papa se uski jaan-pehchaan ho jaye to Vanita se baat krna asaan ho jayega.


2-3 din baad fir se Manohar ki kismat ne uska saath diya. Manohar ke ghar ke paas hi Parnav Singh ki gaadi puncture ho gyi. Lekin jab Pranav apni gaadi se bahar nikle to unko kisi dusri gaadi ne takkr maar di, aur wo zameen par gir pdde. Kismat se takkar sidhe nhi laggi thi, bss side se gaadi touch ho gyi thi. Aur kismat se Manohar bahar hi baitha chaye pi rha tha. Manohar ne dekha ke ye to Vanita ke papa ki gaadi hai, wo jaldi se utha or unke paas gya. Manohar ne unhe uthaya. Pranav khushkismat the ke unhe zada chot nhi aayi thi. Manohar ne unhe araam se baithaya aur khud uss ne unki gaadi ka tire badla.


Pranav Singh ko bohot achha lgga ke do baar iss aadmi ne unki help ki. Wo usse paise dena chahte the lekin fir se Manohar ne paise nhi liye. Abb Manohar ki jaan pehchaan Pranav se aur badh gyi thi. Manohar Pranav ke zariye Vanita ke paas ana chahta tha.


Pranav jab ghar pouhnche to Vanita unki halat dekh kar bohot preshan ho gyi. Maa ke jaane baad uske papa hi uski zindagi the, unhe chot lgi dekh Vanita bohot darr gyi thi. Fir Pranav ne Vanita ko saari baat btayi, ke kaise uss kabadiwale Manohar ne unki help ki. Pehle Vanita Manohar ko koi chor or cheap type ka bhuddha samjhti thi, lekin aaj ussne usske papa ki help ki thi. Kahi na kahin Vanita ke mann mein Manohar ke liya ek soft corner bann gya tha.


Ek din Pranav ko kisi ne bataya bhi tha ke, Iss kabaadiwale ne apni jaan par khel kr ek aurat ki jaan bachai thi, shayad kuch log uss aurat ko kidnap krna chahte the.


2 din baad Manohar laal Vanita ke ghar paas chakkar lgga rha tha, tabhi usne Pranav Singh ko dekha, wo unke paas gya or unse baat krne lgga. tabhi Vanita bhi bahar ayi, Manohar bss use dekhta hi reh gya. Pranav Singh ne vanita ko awaaz lgai…


Pranav Singh;- “Vanita beta!, baat suno. Ye Manohar laal hain, inka kabaad ka kaam hai, aur yahi paas mein inka ghar hai, agar ghar mein kuch faltu samaan hai to inhe dedo.”


Vanita:- “ ji papa, main kal nikaal dungi agar kuch huya to.”

Manohar jholla uthaye unke gate ke paas khada tha aur seedha Vanita ki ankhon mein dekh rha tha. Vanita ko thoda ajeeb bhi lgga ke bhuddha kaise dekh rha hai, lekin usne zada nhi socha. aaj Manohar ko Vanita ka naam bhi ptta chl gya tha. Thodi der baad Manohar vaps chla gya. Uski khushi ka thikana nhi tha. uske jaane ke baad Pranav Singh ne Vanita ko wo incident ke baare mein bataya ke kaise usne apni jaan par khel kar ek aurat ki jaan bachayi thi. Wo bol rhe the ki chahe ye gareeb hai par insaan acha hai aur aise insaan aaj kal kamm hi hain. Ye sab sunn kar Vanita ko abb Manohar ghatiya insaan nhi lagg rha tha, jaise wo pehle sochti thi., chahe woo dikhne mein kaisa bhi tha aur uske baap se umar mein bada tha, par ussne uske papa ki help ki thi jab unka accident hoya tha.

Manohar ko pta tha ki Vanita ke papa subah 8:30 ke aas paas ghar se office ke liye chle jaate hain, To wo Vanita ke ghar 10-10:30 ke kareeb gya. Usne Vanita ke ghar ki door bell bjai. kuch der mein uske sapno ki paari bahar ayi. use dekhte hi jaise Manohar par kuch jaadu sa ho jata tha. Manohar usse sir se pair takk dekh rha tha, uska jism Manohar ko apni aur kheech rha tha.

Vanita :- ”Ji bhaiya?”

Manohar:- “ wo main samaan lene aya tha, apse kal baat huyi thi na.”

Vanita.:- “ ji, han kuch hai jo maine kal nikala tha, aap rukiye main aati hoon.”


Manohar wahi gate ke paas baith gya. jab Vanita ja rhi thi to Manohar peeche se uske badan ko dekh rha tha. Vanita ne salwaar kurti pehni thi. vanita bohot sexy lagg rhi thi. tight kurti main uske chhote par sudol stan, spaat pet Manohar ki kaamvasna mein aag lgga rhe the. Thodi hi der mein Vanita kuch samaan le ayi aur Manohar ke samne khadi ho gyi. Manohar ne usse saaman liye aur neeche rakh diya. Manohar usse baatein krna chahta tha, wo dhire dhire usse khulna chahta tha.


Manohar:- “Vanita ji, to aap school main padti hain?”

Vanita:- “ abhi 12vi ke exam diye hain, result nhi aya abhi.”

Manohar:- “achaa, to agar apke paas purani kitaabein hain to aap mujhe de sakti hain.”

Vanita:- “han, kuch padi hai, lekin mujhe dhundhni padegi, to main apko kal de dungi.”


Manohar laal yhi to chahta tha ke jada se jada Vanita se mil skke aur baatein kr skke, baaton baaton mein hi to baat banegi, wo koi mauka chhodna nhi chahta tha. Manohar laal jiss tarah se uski ankhon mein ankhein daal kr baat kr rha tha ye thoda Vanita ko azeeb lgg rha tha, larkiyan mard ki nazar ko foran pehchaan jaati hain. Wo Vanita se idhar udhar ki baatein krne lgga saath saath saaman ko saaf krke apne jholle mein daal rha tha. Vanita ka nature kafi friendly tha, wo bhi baatein krne lggi thi. Vanita ko kuch bura bhi nhi lagg rha tha kyunki uske papa ne pehle hi usse Manohar laal ke bare mein bataya tha ke kaise usne unki help ki thi.


Manohar;- “ Vanita ji, ek baat kahoon? mujhe pdna likhna nhi aata, han thoda bohot hisaab kitaab kr leta hoon par hoon to anpad. agar main bhi school gya hota to aaj kuch aur hota.”


Vanita:- “to aap school kyu nhi gye?”


Manohar:- “ mere maa-baap to chahte the ke main school jayu lekin jab main 7 saal ka tha to wo dono marr gye, kisi gaadi ne unhe kuchal diya, mera ek chacha tha usne mujhe kaam pe lgga diya….school jana bss sapna hi reh gya.”


Pichle saal Vanita ki Maa guzar gyi thi. Isi liye Vanita ko uske dukh ka ehsaas tha. Vanita ko Manohar par bohot tarss aya. lekin usse ek baat acchi lggi ke Manohar ek hasmukh insaan hai. Itni gareebi main bhi wo khush rehta tha.


Vanita:- “ aur apka pariwaar? mera matlab apke biwi bachhe?”


Manohar:- “ jab main 18 ka tha to mere chacha ne meri shaadi krdi, main apni biwi se bohot pyaar krta tha, par bhagwaan ko kuch aur hi manjoor tha, shaadi ke 2 saal baad bacche ko janam dete waqt dono ki maut ho gyi. bss tabse main akela hi hoon .”


Vanita ko ye sun kr uspe aur bhi tars aya. kuch pal ke liye dono chup ho gye. fir Manohar bola…

Manohar:- “thk hai Vanita ji, main chalta hoon, kal aounga, aap samaan nikaal ke rkhna.”

Vanita:- “thik hai, aap kal aa jana.”


Manohar apne ghar ki aur chal diya. wo khush tha ke kal fir wo Vanita se mile ga. Aaj usse ehsaas ho gya tha ke wo Vanita ke dhire dhire aur nazdeek ata jayega. Udhar vanita ko Manohar laal par bohot tars aa rha tha. Vanita bohot emotional thi, use lgga ke papa thik kehte the, sach mein Manohar laal acche insaan hain. Vanita ke mann mein ye baat bhi thi ke Manohar laal ki nazaar uske badan pe thi, usse patta tha ke kahin na kahin Manohar laal uski taraf aakarshit hai. Par har mard sundar larki ko dekhta hai, isme koi buri baat nhi hai, par Manohar ki age ki vjah se Vanita ko thoda azeeb lagg rha tha, kyunki wo usske papa se bada tha.


Idhar raat bhar Manohar Vanita ko paane ke bare mein soch rha tha. Baat thodi ajeeb lagti hai.. Manohar ek kabaadiwala hai, low class, na shakal achhi aur Vanita ke baap se bhi bda tha, par fir wo kaise Vanita ke bare mein soch skta tha. Jo larki abhi abhi 18 ki huyi hai aur itni sundar ke smart se smart larka bhi use dekh kar nervous ho jata tha. Par log ye bhul jaate hai ke larki ko pataane ke liye sirf ameer ya handsome hona hi kaafi nhi; technique or confidence ki zaroorat hai. Manohar ne dunya dekhi thi wo umar mein Vanita se bda tha to zindagi ka anubhav bhi zada tha, Vanita abhi kachi kali thi, usse duniya ka itna experience nhi tha aur yehi baat ka Manohar fayeda otha rha tha. Manohar ko pta tha ke larkiyan bhavook hoti hain (aur Vanita to thodi zada hi thi) bss usse saiyaam ke saath Vanita ko apni baaton mein lana hai.



Aage aane wale updates mein kahani erotic hoti jayegi.

 

[Abhimanyu Roy]

Really? 18 ki ladki aur 55 ka aadmi? Jab 10 saal baad mar jaayega tab wo kya life jiyegi? I know it's just an imaginary story but shouldn't it be a bit practical? Aur agar sirf erotic journey hogi where Vanita and Manohar will just have sex, to alag baat hai. But if you're counting it as a love story, to bahut odd hai.

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Ajj kal to Manohar laal ki raaton ki neend udd gyi thi. bistar par bas karwate badlta rehta, uske dilo dimag par bass Vanita hi chhai thi, uska gora rang, gulaabi honth, pyara sa chehra, uska kaamseen badan… Manohar ko dewaana bna rha tha, Manohar jaise fir se jwaan ho gya tha. Wo ye soch rha tha ke kaise wo Vanita se baat kre, lekin samjh nhi aa rha ta ke kya kre.


Manohar roz uske ghar ke paas se guzarta. Ek din Vanita apne ghar ke gate par hi thi, aur Manohar ne dekha to tezi se Vanita ke ghar ki aur bhadda, abb wo Vanita se kuch hi duri par tha. ajj usne Vanita ko aur nazdeek se dekha aur Vanita ke husan ka jaadu Manohar par chha gya. Manohar ne himmat krke Vanita ko awaaz lgayi..

Manohar - “ Suniye memsahab”

Vanita. - “ Ji” ?

Manohar- “ Agar ghar me koi raddi ka samaan hai to aap le ayie”

Vanita. - “nhi bhaiya, abhi to nhi hai”

Manohar - “ thik hai, koi baat nhi, lekin agar aapko purna samman dena ho to aap mujhe bta dena, main aksar yahan atta rehta hoon, meri dukaan bhi paas mein hi hai.”

Vanita. - “ thik hai, jab hoga to bta denge.”


Itna keh kar Vanita ne ghar ka gate band kr diya. Manohar bhi wahan se chla gya. Vanita abb soch rhi thi ke ye buddha uske piche hi padd gya, pehle to roz dekhta hi tha ajj ussne mujhe bula bhi liya. Vanita ko aaj takk kisi larke ne touch bhi nhi kiya tha aur idhar ye bhuddha usske paas ana chahta hai. Wo soch rhi thi ke apne papa se baat kre, ke ye bhuddha ghar ke aas paas hi ghumta rehta hai. Manohar laal asal mein Jammu ka nhi tha wo yahan 25 saal pehle uttar-Pardesh ke kissi chhote gaon se aya tha, nichle vargg ka hone ke karn uske gaon mein uss par kyi atyachar huye the, issi liye wo gaon chhod yahan aa gya tha.


Manohar dhire dhire apni manjil ki or badd rha tha. Aaj usne pehla kadam utha liya tha. Vanita se baat jo ki thi. Vanita ek friendly nature ki larki thi, par esse hi kisi se baat bhi nhi krti thi. Ajj Manohar ki khushi ka thikkana nhi tha, usne pehli baar Vanita se baat jo ki thi, chahe thodi c hi shi, Usne kuch khaas baat to nhi ki thi, lekin aisa humein lgta hai, uske liye khaas thi. kabhi kabhi ye chhoti chhoti baatien aage chal kar baddi baaton ke liye zameen tyaar krti hain. Isi liye aaj usse puri duniya hi khubsuraat lgne lggi thi.


Manohar laal apne ghar par apne bed pe leta soch rha tha ke usse kya krna chaiye? Wo apne aap se swaal kr rha tha. lekin kuch soojh bhi nhi rha tha. kabhi apne halaton ke bare mein sochta or kabhi samaj ke. Lekin Vanita uske dil mein bss chukki thi. Wo aise hi Vanita ke khayaalon mein so gya. Subah utha to pehla khyaal usse vanita ka aya. Usne apni aadhi se jada zindagi akele bitaai thi, uski zindagi ka koi maksad nhi tha, wo bass apni mauj mein jeeta tha. Par abb jaise usse uski zindagi ka maksad mil gya tha. Vanita ko paane ka. Manohar laal bss ye soch rha tha ke kissi trah se vanita se thodi jaan pehchaan ho jaye.


Wo kehte hain na ke aap apni manzil ki aur bhadte rhe, to kismat bhi apka saath zaroor degi. Manohar laal itne dino se Vanita ke ghar ke chakkr lga rha tha, to usse Vanita ke papa ka bhi pta tha, ussne ghar aate jaate unhe dekha tha. Ek din kya huya ke Manohar laal road par chal rha tha ke usne Vanita ke papa Pranav ko dekha, wo kissi dukaan se smaan leke apni gaadi ki taraf ja rhe the, tabhi unka wallet jeb se gir gya lekin Vanita ke papa ko pta nhi chla. Manohar ne dekh liya tha. Manohar laal ne Pranav Singh ko awaaz lgai..

Manohar:- “bhai sahab!! suniye!!”


Vanita ke papa ne piche mud ke dekha.


Manohar:- “Bhai Sahab, apka batua gir gya hai.”

Manohar laal ne unka wallet utha ke unhe de diya. Pranav Singh dil ke bohot achhe insaan the. Unke office mein bhi unki bohot izzat thi. Vanita ke papa ko Manohar laal ki imaandari dekh kr bohot achha lgga. Unhone socha ke agar koi aur hota to unhe btata hi nhi, kyunki unke wallet mein kafi cash tha. par iss gareeb ne paiso ka lalach nhi kiya.


Pranav Singh:- “arre dhanywaad tumhara, pta nhi kaise girr gya.”


Unhone Manohar laal ko khush ho kar kuch paise dene chahe, lekin Manohar ne manna kar diya.


Pranav Singh:- “rakhlo bhai, koi baat nhi.”


Manohar:- “nhi nhi..sahab, main apna kaam krta hoon aur mehnat ka khata hoon, mujhe apke paise nhi chahiye.”


Pranav Singh ke lakh kehne par bhi Manohar ne paise nhi liye. lekin usen kaha ke agar unke ghar mein raddi ka samaan hai to wo le jayega, aur ussi ki kamaai ka khayega. Vanita ke papa ko bohot achha lagga ke ye chahe gareeb hi sahi par imaandaar aadmi hai. Manohar ne unhe apne kaam aur uski dukaan ke baare mein bataya. Ye dusra kaddam tha apni manzil ki or. kyunki wo chahta tha ki agar Vanite ke papa se uski jaan-pehchaan ho jaye to Vanita se baat krna asaan ho jayega.


2-3 din baad fir se Manohar ki kismat ne uska saath diya. Manohar ke ghar ke paas hi Parnav Singh ki gaadi puncture ho gyi. Lekin jab Pranav apni gaadi se bahar nikle to unko kisi dusri gaadi ne takkr maar di, aur wo zameen par gir pdde. Kismat se takkar sidhe nhi laggi thi, bss side se gaadi touch ho gyi thi. Aur kismat se Manohar bahar hi baitha chaye pi rha tha. Manohar ne dekha ke ye to Vanita ke papa ki gaadi hai, wo jaldi se utha or unke paas gya. Manohar ne unhe uthaya. Pranav khushkismat the ke unhe zada chot nhi aayi thi. Manohar ne unhe araam se baithaya aur khud uss ne unki gaadi ka tire badla.


Pranav Singh ko bohot achha lgga ke do baar iss aadmi ne unki help ki. Wo usse paise dena chahte the lekin fir se Manohar ne paise nhi liye. Abb Manohar ki jaan pehchaan Pranav se aur badh gyi thi. Manohar Pranav ke zariye Vanita ke paas ana chahta tha.


Pranav jab ghar pouhnche to Vanita unki halat dekh kar bohot preshan ho gyi. Maa ke jaane baad uske papa hi uski zindagi the, unhe chot lgi dekh Vanita bohot darr gyi thi. Fir Pranav ne Vanita ko saari baat btayi, ke kaise uss kabadiwale Manohar ne unki help ki. Pehle Vanita Manohar ko koi chor or cheap type ka bhuddha samjhti thi, lekin aaj ussne usske papa ki help ki thi. Kahi na kahin Vanita ke mann mein Manohar ke liya ek soft corner bann gya tha.


Ek din Pranav ko kisi ne bataya bhi tha ke, Iss kabaadiwale ne apni jaan par khel kr ek aurat ki jaan bachai thi, shayad kuch log uss aurat ko kidnap krna chahte the.


2 din baad Manohar laal Vanita ke ghar paas chakkar lgga rha tha, tabhi usne Pranav Singh ko dekha, wo unke paas gya or unse baat krne lgga. tabhi Vanita bhi bahar ayi, Manohar bss use dekhta hi reh gya. Pranav Singh ne vanita ko awaaz lgai…


Pranav Singh;- “Vanita beta!, baat suno. Ye Manohar laal hain, inka kabaad ka kaam hai, aur yahi paas mein inka ghar hai, agar ghar mein kuch faltu samaan hai to inhe dedo.”


Vanita:- “ ji papa, main kal nikaal dungi agar kuch huya to.”

Manohar jholla uthaye unke gate ke paas khada tha aur seedha Vanita ki ankhon mein dekh rha tha. Vanita ko thoda ajeeb bhi lgga ke bhuddha kaise dekh rha hai, lekin usne zada nhi socha. aaj Manohar ko Vanita ka naam bhi ptta chl gya tha. Thodi der baad Manohar vaps chla gya. Uski khushi ka thikana nhi tha. uske jaane ke baad Pranav Singh ne Vanita ko wo incident ke baare mein bataya ke kaise usne apni jaan par khel kar ek aurat ki jaan bachayi thi. Wo bol rhe the ki chahe ye gareeb hai par insaan acha hai aur aise insaan aaj kal kamm hi hain. Ye sab sunn kar Vanita ko abb Manohar ghatiya insaan nhi lagg rha tha, jaise wo pehle sochti thi., chahe woo dikhne mein kaisa bhi tha aur uske baap se umar mein bada tha, par ussne uske papa ki help ki thi jab unka accident hoya tha.

Manohar ko pta tha ki Vanita ke papa subah 8:30 ke aas paas ghar se office ke liye chle jaate hain, To wo Vanita ke ghar 10-10:30 ke kareeb gya. Usne Vanita ke ghar ki door bell bjai. kuch der mein uske sapno ki paari bahar ayi. use dekhte hi jaise Manohar par kuch jaadu sa ho jata tha. Manohar usse sir se pair takk dekh rha tha, uska jism Manohar ko apni aur kheech rha tha.

Vanita :- ”Ji bhaiya?”

Manohar:- “ wo main samaan lene aya tha, apse kal baat huyi thi na.”

Vanita.:- “ ji, han kuch hai jo maine kal nikala tha, aap rukiye main aati hoon.”


Manohar wahi gate ke paas baith gya. jab Vanita ja rhi thi to Manohar peeche se uske badan ko dekh rha tha. Vanita ne salwaar kurti pehni thi. vanita bohot sexy lagg rhi thi. tight kurti main uske chhote par sudol stan, spaat pet Manohar ki kaamvasna mein aag lgga rhe the. Thodi hi der mein Vanita kuch samaan le ayi aur Manohar ke samne khadi ho gyi. Manohar ne usse saaman liye aur neeche rakh diya. Manohar usse baatein krna chahta tha, wo dhire dhire usse khulna chahta tha.


Manohar:- “Vanita ji, to aap school main padti hain?”

Vanita:- “ abhi 12vi ke exam diye hain, result nhi aya abhi.”

Manohar:- “achaa, to agar apke paas purani kitaabein hain to aap mujhe de sakti hain.”

Vanita:- “han, kuch padi hai, lekin mujhe dhundhni padegi, to main apko kal de dungi.”


Manohar laal yhi to chahta tha ke jada se jada Vanita se mil skke aur baatein kr skke, baaton baaton mein hi to baat banegi, wo koi mauka chhodna nhi chahta tha. Manohar laal jiss tarah se uski ankhon mein ankhein daal kr baat kr rha tha ye thoda Vanita ko azeeb lgg rha tha, larkiyan mard ki nazar ko foran pehchaan jaati hain. Wo Vanita se idhar udhar ki baatein krne lgga saath saath saaman ko saaf krke apne jholle mein daal rha tha. Vanita ka nature kafi friendly tha, wo bhi baatein krne lggi thi. Vanita ko kuch bura bhi nhi lagg rha tha kyunki uske papa ne pehle hi usse Manohar laal ke bare mein bataya tha ke kaise usne unki help ki thi.


Manohar;- “ Vanita ji, ek baat kahoon? mujhe pdna likhna nhi aata, han thoda bohot hisaab kitaab kr leta hoon par hoon to anpad. agar main bhi school gya hota to aaj kuch aur hota.”


Vanita:- “to aap school kyu nhi gye?”


Manohar:- “ mere maa-baap to chahte the ke main school jayu lekin jab main 7 saal ka tha to wo dono marr gye, kisi gaadi ne unhe kuchal diya, mera ek chacha tha usne mujhe kaam pe lgga diya….school jana bss sapna hi reh gya.”


Pichle saal Vanita ki Maa guzar gyi thi. Isi liye Vanita ko uske dukh ka ehsaas tha. Vanita ko Manohar par bohot tarss aya. lekin usse ek baat acchi lggi ke Manohar ek hasmukh insaan hai. Itni gareebi main bhi wo khush rehta tha.


Vanita:- “ aur apka pariwaar? mera matlab apke biwi bachhe?”


Manohar:- “ jab main 18 ka tha to mere chacha ne meri shaadi krdi, main apni biwi se bohot pyaar krta tha, par bhagwaan ko kuch aur hi manjoor tha, shaadi ke 2 saal baad bacche ko janam dete waqt dono ki maut ho gyi. bss tabse main akela hi hoon .”


Vanita ko ye sun kr uspe aur bhi tars aya. kuch pal ke liye dono chup ho gye. fir Manohar bola…

Manohar:- “thk hai Vanita ji, main chalta hoon, kal aounga, aap samaan nikaal ke rkhna.”

Vanita:- “thik hai, aap kal aa jana.”


Manohar apne ghar ki aur chal diya. wo khush tha ke kal fir wo Vanita se mile ga. Aaj usse ehsaas ho gya tha ke wo Vanita ke dhire dhire aur nazdeek ata jayega. Udhar vanita ko Manohar laal par bohot tars aa rha tha. Vanita bohot emotional thi, use lgga ke papa thik kehte the, sach mein Manohar laal acche insaan hain. Vanita ke mann mein ye baat bhi thi ke Manohar laal ki nazaar uske badan pe thi, usse patta tha ke kahin na kahin Manohar laal uski taraf aakarshit hai. Par har mard sundar larki ko dekhta hai, isme koi buri baat nhi hai, par Manohar ki age ki vjah se Vanita ko thoda azeeb lagg rha tha, kyunki wo usske papa se bada tha.


Idhar raat bhar Manohar Vanita ko paane ke bare mein soch rha tha. Baat thodi ajeeb lagti hai.. Manohar ek kabaadiwala hai, low class, na shakal achhi aur Vanita ke baap se bhi bda tha, par fir wo kaise Vanita ke bare mein soch skta tha. Jo larki abhi abhi 18 ki huyi hai aur itni sundar ke smart se smart larka bhi use dekh kar nervous ho jata tha. Par log ye bhul jaate hai ke larki ko pataane ke liye sirf ameer ya handsome hona hi kaafi nhi; technique or confidence ki zaroorat hai. Manohar ne dunya dekhi thi wo umar mein Vanita se bda tha to zindagi ka anubhav bhi zada tha, Vanita abhi kachi kali thi, usse duniya ka itna experience nhi tha aur yehi baat ka Manohar fayeda otha rha tha. Manohar ko pta tha ke larkiyan bhavook hoti hain (aur Vanita to thodi zada hi thi) bss usse saiyaam ke saath Vanita ko apni baaton mein lana hai.



Aage aane wale updates mein kahani erotic hoti jayegi.

Update is so amazing Bhai Manohar ko itna jyada mat dikhao ki hawsi lage thoda kam kardo bhai age thodi Kam ho sake toh kardo aur female characters badha sako toh badha dena waise story bahut achhi chal Rahi hai

 

[dang091]

Update is so amazing Bhai Manohar ko itna jyada mat dikhao ki hawsi lage thoda kam kardo bhai age thodi Kam ho sake toh kardo aur female characters badha sako toh badha dena waise story bahut achhi chal Rahi hai

maine 2 updates pehle hi likh diye the, to abb age kam nhi kr skta, fir mujhe uske hisaab se story dobara likhni padegi. but I really appreciate your feedback. thanks

 

[dang091]

Really? 18 ki ladki aur 55 ka aadmi? Jab 10 saal baad mar jaayega tab wo kya life jiyegi? I know it's just an imaginary story but shouldn't it be a bit practical? Aur agar sirf erotic journey hogi where Vanita and Manohar will just have sex, to alag baat hai. But if you're counting it as a love story, to bahut odd hai.

Vanita aur Manohar ki age difference unhe life ke kis moud pe le jayegi ye kahani aage aapko batayegi. This story is about how our decisions which look harmless right now can have a huge effect on our lives in the future.