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Update 58
Mehak 6:30 vje uthya ta ohne apni halt dekhi te jaldi nal underwear pa ke apne kamre vich chala gya. Oh kamre vich janda hi fir nanga ho gya te ohnu raat wali ghatna chete aa gyi. Kive ohdi maa lun chung rhi ci oh bi apne gharwale de kol hi. Fir ohne lun te dekhya bi lipstick de nishan ne ta ohne sochia bi raat ta mummy ne lipstick layi ni ci matlab aaj svere fir mummy mere lun nu chat ke te kiss karke gyi aa. Ena sochde hi ohda lun khada ho gya. Fir oh nahaun lyi bathroom vich chala gya te nha ke thale aa gya. Jad nu satveer bi hall vich baitha ci te lakhveer ohde kol hi baithi ci. Lakhveer ne mehak nu dekh ke smile pass kri te mehak ne smile pass krke ik akh mar diti. Eh dekh lakhveer ne mooh thale kar lya. Mehak bi kol baith ke chah pin lag gya.
Satveer : mehak rat fir neend sahi aa gyi pehla ta tenu garmi lag rhi ci.
Eh sun lakhveer te mehak ne ik duje wal dekhya te has pye.
Mehak : hnji daddy fir ta aram nal so gya ci mein.
Lakhveer : kdo putt menu ta pta ni.
Satveer : lakhveer jad tu kele da juice pin gyi ci odo di gal aa.
Lakhveer eh sunke has pyi te mehak wal dekh ke bullan te jeeb feri.
Mehak : hnji mummy jad tusi juice pi rhe ci odo di gal aa.
Lakhveer : menu bi pehla neend nhi aa rhi ci par jdo mein juice pita ta didh bhar gya ta fir menu boht vdia neend ayi.
Mehak : hnji mummy mein parso pita ci raat nu juice pi ke menu bi vdia neend aa gyi. Fir mein sochia bi roj raat nu juice rehn dine aa fir pin di adat pai jandi aa. Ta mein kal raat chad dita.
Eh sun lakhveer sharma gyi te ohdi fuddi bilkul gilli ho gyi.
Lakhveer : nhi putt juice ta roj hi pina chahida fir ki aa juice pin di adat ta changi gal aa. Chal aaj raat nu ikhathe hi pivange apan juice.
Eh kehke lakhveer ne mehak nu akh mar diti te mehak ne bi akh mar ke smile pass kri. Fir mehak college chala gya. Clg jan to pehla lakhveer boli.
Lakhveer : mehak putt aaj medical to neend di goli lai ayi ik.
Mehak : ok mummy.
Fir mehak clg chala janda te lakhveer ghar de kam karn lag jandi aa. Mehak 3 vje clg to aunda te lakhveer suti pyi ci ta mehak ap hi roti kha ke so gya. Fir mehak 6:30 uthya te lakhveer rasoi vich ci. Mehak sidha bahr chala gya te raat di planning karn laga.
Mehak : aaj raat ta boht lambi hovegi. Aaj mummy mera lun chungegi te mein maa di fuddi vich jeeb ferunga.
Fir 8 vje mehak ghar aa janda te roti khan lyi sab baith jande ne. Roti khande time lakhveer mehak nu ishara kardi hai bi oh goli le ke aya. Mehak haa vich sir hila dinda. Fir roti kha ke mehak kamre vich ja ke lakhveer nu goli den lyi rasoi vich chala janda.
Mehak : aah lo mummy.
Lakhveer goli fad ke dudh vich mila dindi hai te fir mehak nu kehndi hai.
Lakhveer : ja putt apne daddy nu fda de dudh.
Mehak : mummy menu ni lagda aaj menu neend aau is lyi aaj menu sari raat hi juice pina paina.
Eh sun lakhveer sharma jandi hai te mehak nu kehndi aa.
Lakhveer : putt aaj ta mein boht juice banaya chahe sari raat pi jayi eh ni mukda.
Mehak dudh le ke daddy kol aa janda te dudh satveer nu fda dinda. Satveer dudh pi ke kamre vich jan lagda ta lakhveer kehndi aa.
Lakhveer : mehak de papa meri gal suno tusi aaj ik side te pai jayio menu side te neend ni aundi te mein aaj vichale sona aa.
Satveer : chal thik aa.
Fir satveer ja ke so janda. Fir lakhveer kamre vich chali jandi hai te sare kapde lah ke nangi ho ke vichale so jandi hai. Adhe ghante bad mehak aunda hai te light band karke gate band kar dinda hai. Kamre vich hanera ho janda hai. Mehak bi sare kapde lah dinda hai te nanga ho ke bed te pai janda hai. 5 mint bad mehak bolda hai.
Mehak : mummy so gye.
Lakhveer : nhi putt.
Mehak : hun fir mummy daddy dekho kive gharade mar rhe ne. Ethe maa putt nu neend ni aa rhi.
Lakhveer : putt menu lagda juice pi ke hi neend aau.
Mehak 6:30 vje uthya ta ohne apni halt dekhi te jaldi nal underwear pa ke apne kamre vich chala gya. Oh kamre vich janda hi fir nanga ho gya te ohnu raat wali ghatna chete aa gyi. Kive ohdi maa lun chung rhi ci oh bi apne gharwale de kol hi. Fir ohne lun te dekhya bi lipstick de nishan ne ta ohne sochia bi raat ta mummy ne lipstick layi ni ci matlab aaj svere fir mummy mere lun nu chat ke te kiss karke gyi aa. Ena sochde hi ohda lun khada ho gya. Fir oh nahaun lyi bathroom vich chala gya te nha ke thale aa gya. Jad nu satveer bi hall vich baitha ci te lakhveer ohde kol hi baithi ci. Lakhveer ne mehak nu dekh ke smile pass kri te mehak ne smile pass krke ik akh mar diti. Eh dekh lakhveer ne mooh thale kar lya. Mehak bi kol baith ke chah pin lag gya.
Satveer : mehak rat fir neend sahi aa gyi pehla ta tenu garmi lag rhi ci.
Eh sun lakhveer te mehak ne ik duje wal dekhya te has pye.
Mehak : hnji daddy fir ta aram nal so gya ci mein.
Lakhveer : kdo putt menu ta pta ni.
Satveer : lakhveer jad tu kele da juice pin gyi ci odo di gal aa.
Lakhveer eh sunke has pyi te mehak wal dekh ke bullan te jeeb feri.
Mehak : hnji mummy jad tusi juice pi rhe ci odo di gal aa.
Lakhveer : menu bi pehla neend nhi aa rhi ci par jdo mein juice pita ta didh bhar gya ta fir menu boht vdia neend ayi.
Mehak : hnji mummy mein parso pita ci raat nu juice pi ke menu bi vdia neend aa gyi. Fir mein sochia bi roj raat nu juice rehn dine aa fir pin di adat pai jandi aa. Ta mein kal raat chad dita.
Eh sun lakhveer sharma gyi te ohdi fuddi bilkul gilli ho gyi.
Lakhveer : nhi putt juice ta roj hi pina chahida fir ki aa juice pin di adat ta changi gal aa. Chal aaj raat nu ikhathe hi pivange apan juice.
Eh kehke lakhveer ne mehak nu akh mar diti te mehak ne bi akh mar ke smile pass kri. Fir mehak college chala gya. Clg jan to pehla lakhveer boli.
Lakhveer : mehak putt aaj medical to neend di goli lai ayi ik.
Mehak : ok mummy.
Fir mehak clg chala janda te lakhveer ghar de kam karn lag jandi aa. Mehak 3 vje clg to aunda te lakhveer suti pyi ci ta mehak ap hi roti kha ke so gya. Fir mehak 6:30 uthya te lakhveer rasoi vich ci. Mehak sidha bahr chala gya te raat di planning karn laga.
Mehak : aaj raat ta boht lambi hovegi. Aaj mummy mera lun chungegi te mein maa di fuddi vich jeeb ferunga.
Fir 8 vje mehak ghar aa janda te roti khan lyi sab baith jande ne. Roti khande time lakhveer mehak nu ishara kardi hai bi oh goli le ke aya. Mehak haa vich sir hila dinda. Fir roti kha ke mehak kamre vich ja ke lakhveer nu goli den lyi rasoi vich chala janda.
Mehak : aah lo mummy.
Lakhveer goli fad ke dudh vich mila dindi hai te fir mehak nu kehndi hai.
Lakhveer : ja putt apne daddy nu fda de dudh.
Mehak : mummy menu ni lagda aaj menu neend aau is lyi aaj menu sari raat hi juice pina paina.
Eh sun lakhveer sharma jandi hai te mehak nu kehndi aa.
Lakhveer : putt aaj ta mein boht juice banaya chahe sari raat pi jayi eh ni mukda.
Mehak dudh le ke daddy kol aa janda te dudh satveer nu fda dinda. Satveer dudh pi ke kamre vich jan lagda ta lakhveer kehndi aa.
Lakhveer : mehak de papa meri gal suno tusi aaj ik side te pai jayio menu side te neend ni aundi te mein aaj vichale sona aa.
Satveer : chal thik aa.
Fir satveer ja ke so janda. Fir lakhveer kamre vich chali jandi hai te sare kapde lah ke nangi ho ke vichale so jandi hai. Adhe ghante bad mehak aunda hai te light band karke gate band kar dinda hai. Kamre vich hanera ho janda hai. Mehak bi sare kapde lah dinda hai te nanga ho ke bed te pai janda hai. 5 mint bad mehak bolda hai.
Mehak : mummy so gye.
Lakhveer : nhi putt.
Mehak : hun fir mummy daddy dekho kive gharade mar rhe ne. Ethe maa putt nu neend ni aa rhi.
Lakhveer : putt menu lagda juice pi ke hi neend aau.
Update 59
Apni maa de mooh vicho juice sunde hi mehak uthya te ohne maa de uper to chadar lah diti. Lakhveer bed te nangi pyi ci par hanere vich kuch ni dikh riha ci. Mehak apni maa de sir kol ja ke godiyan sahare khada ho gya te ohda lun maa de sir te lagya. Lun lagde hi lakhveer ne lattan khol ditiyan te fuddi khul gyi. Fir mehak ne apna hath fuddi val nu karya te 5 second vich hi ohda hath maa di fuddi te takraya. Jis karn lakhveer di siski nikal gyi.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhhh.... Ooooohhhhhhh.... Putt.
Ena kehnde hi lakhveer ne sir magar nu krke mehak da lun mooh vich paun lagi par lun mooh vich na pya te oh side to hi lun nu chusan lagi.
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Apne lun te maa da mooh lagya dekh hi mehak di siski nikal gyi.
Mehak : iooooooohhhhh..... Mummy.
Mehak maa di fuddi te ungal fer riha ci te lakhveer putt de lun te bull te jeeb fer rhi ci. Do mint tak edan hi dono ik duje nu sehlaunde rhe. Fir mehak hauli dene thale nu jan laga. Odher lakhveer ne bi mehak da lun hath vich fad lya. Mehak da mooh maa di fuddi kol ruk gya. Ohne ik garm saah fuddi te uper chadya te jis nal lakhveer ne lun nu ghut lya. Fir mehak ne jeeb kad ke fuddi te feri ta lakhveer ne bi jeeb kad ke lun te feri. Fir edan hi 5 mint tak putt maa di fuddi te te maa putt de lun te jeeb ferde rhe. Fir lakhveer to riha na gya te ohne putt da lun mooh vich pa lya te chuppe marn lagi. Odher mehak bi maa di fuddi te tut ke pai gya. Ohne fuddi dono hathan nal kholi te jeeb fuddi de vich feran laga. Jis nal lakhveer saroor vich aa gyi te ohde mooh vicho mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......... Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... Uuuuuummmmmmmmmm.................. Fach fach........ Di awaz aa rhi ci. Mehak ta aaj maa di fuddi jeeb nal hi kholan nu firda ci. Oh ta fuddi nu chat ke pagal ho chala ci. Lakhveer to riha na gya te ohne lun mooh vicho bahr kad lya te uchi uchi siskiyan marn lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhhhh........ Ooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh....... Ssssssss...... Mmmmmmmm....... Ooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....... Hauli hauli............ Mmmmmm..... Ooooooohhhhhhhhh...... Aaaahhhhhhhh...... Rabba hauli please..
Mehak rukan da naam ni le riha ci. Ohne maa diyan lattan uper chak lyian. Fir oh apna hath apne lun kol le ke gya te lun fad ke maa de bullan uper ghisaun laga. Lakhveer ne odo hi bull khol dite te mehak ne porra lun hi apni maa de mooh vich pa dita. Lun Lakhveer de gal tak chala gya.
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Poora lun maa de mooh vich jande hi mehak fir to maa di fuddi nu sehlaun te chatan laga. Hun oh lun nu hauli hauli maa de mooh vich ander bahr kar riha ci te nal hi fuddi chat riha ci.
Mehak maa de mooh vich lun hila riha ci te nal hi maa di fuddi chat riha ci. Lakhveer lun da swad laindi nal hi mmmmmmmm...... Uuuummmmmmmmmm..... Fach........ Fach......... Diyan awazan mooh vicho kad rhi ci. Fir mehak ne fuddi nu mooh vich ghutan lag gya te zor nal chusan laga. Te nal hi lun di speed maa de mooh vich tej kar diti.
Is nal lakhveer nu boht hi jwada mza aun laga te ohne apniyan lattan mehak de gal kol pa ke ohnu fuddi uper daban lagi. Jis nal mehak bi fuddi de uper mooh dba ke chusan laga. Fir 5 mint mehak edan hi maa di fuddi vich jeeb ferda riha te nal hi maa da mooh mote lun nal chod da riha. Fir lakhveer ne mehak de lak nu fadya te fuddi nu chuk ke mehak de mooh te feran lagi jis te mehak samj gya bi maa jhadan wali aa ta ohne lun di speed hor tej kar diti te fuddi nu jor jor nal chusan laga. Jdo lakhveer jhadan de nede ayi ta ohne apne hath putt de tatteyan te rakhe te sir chak ke lun nu chungna shuru kar dita te tatte sehlaun lagi. Lakhveer di fuddi putt de mooh vich jhad gyi te mehak bi tej tej lun mooh vich ander bahr karn laga te oh bi maa de mooh vich jhad gya. Dona ne ik duje da pani pita te saaf karke mehak thale utarya te maa de mooh vicho fachhhhhhh....... Di awaz nal lun bahr aa gya. Te mehak maa de nal pai gya. Dona ne ik duje nal koi gal ni kri. Adha ghanta dono edan hi pye rhe. Fir lakhveer uthi te oh mehak de mooh uper baithan lagi. Mehak ne bi jeeb bahr kad lyi te lakhveer putt de mooh te fuddi ragdan lagi.
Mehak bi jeeb nu ander tak feran laga. Eh dekh lakhveer nu saroor chad gya te oh bolan lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhh.... Ooooooohhhhhhh.... Mmmmmmmmm.... Ander tak ferde sssssshhhhhhhhh..... Tej hor tej aaaahhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhh......
Lakhveer poori speed nal mehak de mooh uper fuddi ghisaun lagi te ohne bed di dho nu fadya te tej tej apne putt de mooh te age piche hon lagi jive koi ghode de uper swari karda hunda.
Lakhveer eni tej fuddi ragad rhi ci bi bed bi poora hil riha ci te satveer bi bed de uper pya ci. Par dona nu koi dar nhi ci kyoke satveer nu neend di goli diti ci te ohnu kuch ni pta ci bi ohda munda ohdi hi gharwali di fuddi ohde bed te hi chat riha ci.
Lakhveer : aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh........ Ooooohhhhhhhh... .edan hi hor tej aaaaahhhhhhhhh....... Mmmmmm..... Oooooohhhhhhhhhhhh...... Jeeb fer ander tak chat ja ehnu aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh..........
Mehak bi ander tak jeeb fer riha ci. Fir lakhveer to riha na gya te oh edan hi mehak de uper pai gyi te ohda lun mooh vich pa ke chuppe marn lagi. Jini speed nal oh fuddi mooh te ragad rhi ci oni hi speed nal putt da lun chung rhi ci.
Dono jane kise alag hi duniya vich ud rhe ci. Maa diyan akhan putt da lun mooh vich hon krke band ci te putt diyan akhan maa di fuddi mooh vich hon krke band ci. Lakhveer mehak de chuppe mar rhi ci te mehak maa di fuddi vich jeeb fer riha ci. Fir mehak ne jeeb bahr kadi te ungli nu fuddi de vich feran laga.
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Apne putt di ungli fuddi vich painde hi lakhveer jive mast gyi ohne bullan nu lun uper hor ghut lya te tej tej chuppe marn lagi te nal hi fuddi nu age piche karn lagi.10 mint edan hi dono ik duje nu maze de rhe ci. Fir lakhveer jhadan de nede aa gyi ta ohne hath magar nu kre mehak de sir nu fad ke fuddi te dba dita te fuddi nu mehak de mooh uper ragdan lagi. Mehak nu bi pta lag gya bi maa jhadan wali aa ta ohne jeeb fuddi vich bad diti te fuddi nu mooh nal band kar dita. Lakhveer apne putt de mooh vich jhadan lagi te nal hi mehak de tatte ghut dite te lun nu tej tej chungan lagi. Mehak to bi jyada time riha na gya te oh bi maa de mooh vich jhad gya.
Thoda maal lakhveer de hathan te lagya te oh chat gyi. Fir ohne lun nu chat ke saaf karya te fir nal hi pai gyi. 15 mint dono edan hi pye rhe. Fir mehak ne phone te time dekhya ta 2vaj chuke ci. Matlab dona nu takriban 4 ghante ho chukke ci. Fir mehak ne apne sare kapde chukke te apne kamre nu chala gya. Lakhveer bi bullan te lage mehak de maal nu chat rhi ci. Oh aaj boht khush ci. Aaj ohnu boht hi jyada mza aya ci.
Lakhveer : thank u mehak putt menu eni khushi den lyi. Je tu na hunda ta mein edan hi suki mar jana ji. Thank u meri ander di agg ik war fir jagaun lyi. Eh fuddi bi tenu milegi par eh eni cheti nhi mil sakdi. Eh bi tenu kamauni pavegi.
Ena kehke ohne fuddi te hath ferya te fir odan hi nangi so gyi. Mehak bi kamre vich janda hi so gya.
Apni maa de mooh vicho juice sunde hi mehak uthya te ohne maa de uper to chadar lah diti. Lakhveer bed te nangi pyi ci par hanere vich kuch ni dikh riha ci. Mehak apni maa de sir kol ja ke godiyan sahare khada ho gya te ohda lun maa de sir te lagya. Lun lagde hi lakhveer ne lattan khol ditiyan te fuddi khul gyi. Fir mehak ne apna hath fuddi val nu karya te 5 second vich hi ohda hath maa di fuddi te takraya. Jis karn lakhveer di siski nikal gyi.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhhh.... Ooooohhhhhhh.... Putt.
Ena kehnde hi lakhveer ne sir magar nu krke mehak da lun mooh vich paun lagi par lun mooh vich na pya te oh side to hi lun nu chusan lagi.
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Apne lun te maa da mooh lagya dekh hi mehak di siski nikal gyi.
Mehak : iooooooohhhhh..... Mummy.
Mehak maa di fuddi te ungal fer riha ci te lakhveer putt de lun te bull te jeeb fer rhi ci. Do mint tak edan hi dono ik duje nu sehlaunde rhe. Fir mehak hauli dene thale nu jan laga. Odher lakhveer ne bi mehak da lun hath vich fad lya. Mehak da mooh maa di fuddi kol ruk gya. Ohne ik garm saah fuddi te uper chadya te jis nal lakhveer ne lun nu ghut lya. Fir mehak ne jeeb kad ke fuddi te feri ta lakhveer ne bi jeeb kad ke lun te feri. Fir edan hi 5 mint tak putt maa di fuddi te te maa putt de lun te jeeb ferde rhe. Fir lakhveer to riha na gya te ohne putt da lun mooh vich pa lya te chuppe marn lagi. Odher mehak bi maa di fuddi te tut ke pai gya. Ohne fuddi dono hathan nal kholi te jeeb fuddi de vich feran laga. Jis nal lakhveer saroor vich aa gyi te ohde mooh vicho mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......... Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... Uuuuuummmmmmmmmm.................. Fach fach........ Di awaz aa rhi ci. Mehak ta aaj maa di fuddi jeeb nal hi kholan nu firda ci. Oh ta fuddi nu chat ke pagal ho chala ci. Lakhveer to riha na gya te ohne lun mooh vicho bahr kad lya te uchi uchi siskiyan marn lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhhhh........ Ooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh....... Ssssssss...... Mmmmmmmm....... Ooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....... Hauli hauli............ Mmmmmm..... Ooooooohhhhhhhhh...... Aaaahhhhhhhh...... Rabba hauli please..
Mehak rukan da naam ni le riha ci. Ohne maa diyan lattan uper chak lyian. Fir oh apna hath apne lun kol le ke gya te lun fad ke maa de bullan uper ghisaun laga. Lakhveer ne odo hi bull khol dite te mehak ne porra lun hi apni maa de mooh vich pa dita. Lun Lakhveer de gal tak chala gya.
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Poora lun maa de mooh vich jande hi mehak fir to maa di fuddi nu sehlaun te chatan laga. Hun oh lun nu hauli hauli maa de mooh vich ander bahr kar riha ci te nal hi fuddi chat riha ci.
Mehak maa de mooh vich lun hila riha ci te nal hi maa di fuddi chat riha ci. Lakhveer lun da swad laindi nal hi mmmmmmmm...... Uuuummmmmmmmmm..... Fach........ Fach......... Diyan awazan mooh vicho kad rhi ci. Fir mehak ne fuddi nu mooh vich ghutan lag gya te zor nal chusan laga. Te nal hi lun di speed maa de mooh vich tej kar diti.
Is nal lakhveer nu boht hi jwada mza aun laga te ohne apniyan lattan mehak de gal kol pa ke ohnu fuddi uper daban lagi. Jis nal mehak bi fuddi de uper mooh dba ke chusan laga. Fir 5 mint mehak edan hi maa di fuddi vich jeeb ferda riha te nal hi maa da mooh mote lun nal chod da riha. Fir lakhveer ne mehak de lak nu fadya te fuddi nu chuk ke mehak de mooh te feran lagi jis te mehak samj gya bi maa jhadan wali aa ta ohne lun di speed hor tej kar diti te fuddi nu jor jor nal chusan laga. Jdo lakhveer jhadan de nede ayi ta ohne apne hath putt de tatteyan te rakhe te sir chak ke lun nu chungna shuru kar dita te tatte sehlaun lagi. Lakhveer di fuddi putt de mooh vich jhad gyi te mehak bi tej tej lun mooh vich ander bahr karn laga te oh bi maa de mooh vich jhad gya. Dona ne ik duje da pani pita te saaf karke mehak thale utarya te maa de mooh vicho fachhhhhhh....... Di awaz nal lun bahr aa gya. Te mehak maa de nal pai gya. Dona ne ik duje nal koi gal ni kri. Adha ghanta dono edan hi pye rhe. Fir lakhveer uthi te oh mehak de mooh uper baithan lagi. Mehak ne bi jeeb bahr kad lyi te lakhveer putt de mooh te fuddi ragdan lagi.
Mehak bi jeeb nu ander tak feran laga. Eh dekh lakhveer nu saroor chad gya te oh bolan lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhh.... Ooooooohhhhhhh.... Mmmmmmmmm.... Ander tak ferde sssssshhhhhhhhh..... Tej hor tej aaaahhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhh......
Lakhveer poori speed nal mehak de mooh uper fuddi ghisaun lagi te ohne bed di dho nu fadya te tej tej apne putt de mooh te age piche hon lagi jive koi ghode de uper swari karda hunda.
Lakhveer eni tej fuddi ragad rhi ci bi bed bi poora hil riha ci te satveer bi bed de uper pya ci. Par dona nu koi dar nhi ci kyoke satveer nu neend di goli diti ci te ohnu kuch ni pta ci bi ohda munda ohdi hi gharwali di fuddi ohde bed te hi chat riha ci.
Lakhveer : aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh........ Ooooohhhhhhhh... .edan hi hor tej aaaaahhhhhhhhh....... Mmmmmm..... Oooooohhhhhhhhhhhh...... Jeeb fer ander tak chat ja ehnu aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh..........
Mehak bi ander tak jeeb fer riha ci. Fir lakhveer to riha na gya te oh edan hi mehak de uper pai gyi te ohda lun mooh vich pa ke chuppe marn lagi. Jini speed nal oh fuddi mooh te ragad rhi ci oni hi speed nal putt da lun chung rhi ci.
Dono jane kise alag hi duniya vich ud rhe ci. Maa diyan akhan putt da lun mooh vich hon krke band ci te putt diyan akhan maa di fuddi mooh vich hon krke band ci. Lakhveer mehak de chuppe mar rhi ci te mehak maa di fuddi vich jeeb fer riha ci. Fir mehak ne jeeb bahr kadi te ungli nu fuddi de vich feran laga.
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Apne putt di ungli fuddi vich painde hi lakhveer jive mast gyi ohne bullan nu lun uper hor ghut lya te tej tej chuppe marn lagi te nal hi fuddi nu age piche karn lagi.10 mint edan hi dono ik duje nu maze de rhe ci. Fir lakhveer jhadan de nede aa gyi ta ohne hath magar nu kre mehak de sir nu fad ke fuddi te dba dita te fuddi nu mehak de mooh uper ragdan lagi. Mehak nu bi pta lag gya bi maa jhadan wali aa ta ohne jeeb fuddi vich bad diti te fuddi nu mooh nal band kar dita. Lakhveer apne putt de mooh vich jhadan lagi te nal hi mehak de tatte ghut dite te lun nu tej tej chungan lagi. Mehak to bi jyada time riha na gya te oh bi maa de mooh vich jhad gya.
Thoda maal lakhveer de hathan te lagya te oh chat gyi. Fir ohne lun nu chat ke saaf karya te fir nal hi pai gyi. 15 mint dono edan hi pye rhe. Fir mehak ne phone te time dekhya ta 2vaj chuke ci. Matlab dona nu takriban 4 ghante ho chukke ci. Fir mehak ne apne sare kapde chukke te apne kamre nu chala gya. Lakhveer bi bullan te lage mehak de maal nu chat rhi ci. Oh aaj boht khush ci. Aaj ohnu boht hi jyada mza aya ci.
Lakhveer : thank u mehak putt menu eni khushi den lyi. Je tu na hunda ta mein edan hi suki mar jana ji. Thank u meri ander di agg ik war fir jagaun lyi. Eh fuddi bi tenu milegi par eh eni cheti nhi mil sakdi. Eh bi tenu kamauni pavegi.
Ena kehke ohne fuddi te hath ferya te fir odan hi nangi so gyi. Mehak bi kamre vich janda hi so gya.
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Agle din pehla lakhveer uthi. Oh nha dho ke rasoi vich kam karn lagi. Fir mehak uthya te fresh ho ke thale aa gya. Ohne lakhveer nu gd mrng wish kita.lakhveer ne bi gd mrng wish krya. Dono is trah react kar rhe ci jive kush hoyia hi na hove. Dono ik duje nal normal talk kar rhe ci. Raat nu dona ne ik duje di fuddi te lun chung ke pani kadya ci par hun dono ik duje nal maa putt wangu behave kar rhe ci jive kuch bi ni hoyia hunda. Fir mehak clg chala janda hai te lakhveer ghar da kam karn lag pyi. Raat da time ho gya ci. Lakhveer roti pka rhi ci te mehak satveer kol baitha ci. Dono ik dam normal ci. Fir tino baith ke khana khan lag pye.
Lakhveer : putt tu aj apne kamre vich hi pyi ethe tin janiya da aukha ho janda.
Mehak dekhda hi reh gya bi mummy eh ki khi jandi aa. Ohda ta jive marn hi ho gya. Oh bichara sad jiha ho ke roti khan laga. Fir tina ne roti khadi. Lakhveer rasoi vich chali gyi. Fir tine apne kamre vich chale gye. Mehak bi aaj jande hi so gya bi chal ki pta aaj mummy kamre vich hi aa jave. Lakhveer janbuj ke aaj di raat mehak nu tadpauna chaundi ci. Oh bi kamre vich aa ke pai gyi. Ohda bi man kar riha ci bi hune ja ke putt de mooh te baith java te ohda lun chunga. Par aaj ohne apne ap nu msa rokia. Agle din fir normal hi hoyia. Mehak clg chala gya te raat nu roti kha ke uthan lagya ta lakhveer ne dekh ke akh mari te ohde kamre wal ishara kar dita. Mehak samj gya bi aaj maa raat nu ohde kamre vich ayegi. Oh khush ho gya. Oh kamre vich gya te sare kapde lah dite. Raat de 10:30 vje ta kamre da gate khulya te gate band hunde hi light band ho gyi. Kamre vich fir hanera ho gya. Lakhveer hauli dene bed kol ayi te mehak bed te baitha ci.
Lakhveer : ki gal putt suta ni hle.
Mehak : nhi mummy aaj neend hi ni ayi mein fir baith gya.
Fir lakhveer ne mehak nu khada kita te gal la lya. Mehak nu pta laga bi maa bilkul nangi hai te lakhveer nu bi pta lag gya bi mehak bi nanga hi aa.
Lakhveer : koi ni putt hun aa jau neend.
Ena kehnde hi lakhveer bed te kodi ho gyi te mehak nu magar khada dita. Do mint dono edan hi rhe. Kise ne kuch ni kita.
Lakhveer : ki hoyia mehak.
Mehak : nhi kuch ni mummy.
Ena kehnde hi mehak thale baith gya te mooh nu fuddi kol karya te fuddi te thale to le ke uper tak jeeb feri te fir uper to le ke thale tak.
Edan jeeb firde hi lakhveer di cheek nikal gyi.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhhhhh....... Ooooohhhhhhhhhhh....... Teri jeeb ne mar dita menu aaaahhhhhhh..... Ssssshhhhhhhhh......... Meri fuddi aaaahhhhhh.....
Fuddi shabad aaj lakhveer ne apne putt kol pehli bar bolya ci jis nal lakhveer te mehak vich ik alag jiha nasha aa gya. Maa de mooh vicho fuddi sunde hi mehak da lun khada ho gya. Oh maa di fuddi zor nal chusan laga. Lakhveer nu bi pta lag gya bi mehak fuddi sunde hi jyada saroor vich aa gya is lyi oh hor tej bolan lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaahhhhhhhh..... Oooohhhhhhhhh... ..meri fuddi kive khul gyi aaj aaaahhhhhh...... Fuddi vich jeeb kive ja rhi aa oooooohhhhhhhhh.... Aaaaaahhhhhhhh...... Meri fuddi aaj ta kive gilli hoyi pyi aa... Eh kehke lakhveer ap hi laal hoyi pyi ci par ohne mehak da dimag kharab kar dita ci.
Mehak maa de mooh vicho ena kuch sunde hi fuddi te tut ke pai gya. Ohne maa nu lak to fadya te fuddi chatan laga.
Oh maa di fuddi nu changi trah chat riha ci. Lakhveer vi bed te ghodi ban ke pyi ci te cheeka te siskiyan mar rhi ci. Oh hath magar lija ke mehak de sir te ferdi te ohnu sir de uper dab di. Edan hi 15 mint mehak ne maa di fuddi chati ta lakhveer tadpdi hoyi bed de vichkar aa gyi te cheeka mardi rhi.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhh.... Oooohhhhhhh.... Rabba meri fuddi aaaahhhhhh..... Changi trah edan hi fer jeeb aaaahhhhhh......
Mehak bi bed de vichkar maa de magar aa ke fuddi chatan laga.
Mehak ne maa di bund hatha vich fadi te jeeb nu changi trah fuddi vich pa dita te tej tej ander buchal lya dita.
Lakhveer : aaaahhhhhh..... Aaaayyyyeeeeeee...... Hhaaayyyyeeeeee....... Meri fuddi jhad chali aaaahhhhhh...... Ooooohhhhhhh.... Bas ruk ja mein jhad chali.
Mehak sunde hi tej tej jeeb feran laga te fuddi nu mooh vich ghut lya. Lakhveer mehak de mooh vich jhadan lagi. Mehak maa di fuddi de ras da ik ik tupka pi gya. Lakhveer bed de uper lambi pai gyi te saah tej tej chal rhe ci. Mehak ne bullan te jeeb feri te sara ras pi gya.
Mehak : tusi kal menu juice ni pilaya is lyi thonu ik saja milu.
Lakhveer : kehri saja hun.
Lakhveer bed te mudi pyi ci. Ohdi bund uper nu ci. Mehak ne maa di bund te hath ferya te fir bund di gali te hath rakh dita te lakhveer diyan akhan band ho gyian. Fir mehak dona hathan nal maa di bund sehlaun lag gya te bund nu khol dita te ik ungutha gali de vich pa dita.
Ungutha bund vich jande hi lakhveer da mooh khul gya te ohde mooh vicho cheek nikal gyi.
Lakhveer : aaaaaahhhhhhh..... Oooooohhhhhhhhhh....... Ssssssss........ Aaaaaahhhhhhh..... Eh ni bahr kad aaaaahhhhhhhh........ Oooooooooohhhhhhh..... Nhi nhi eh ni.
Mehak ne mummy nu edan tadafda dekh ke Ungutha bahr kad lya te ungutha mooh vich pa ke chusan laga. Ohnu boht swad aa riha ci. Lakhveer uth ke age nu ho gyi ci. Mehak ne maa diyan lattan thale di hath pa ke bund to maa nu fad ke bund khol diti te bund te mooh la lya.
Apni bund di gali te putt di jeeb da hamla hunde hi lakhveer pagar ho gyi. Ohne sirhane vich mooh dab lya te cheeka marn lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh...... Ethe ni...... Oooooihhhhhhhhhhhh..... Hayyyyeeeeeeeeee...... Mar gyi mein eh ki aa ethe ni kde kite aaaaahhhhhhhh.......
Eh sun mehak maa bi bund di gali chatan lag gya. Oh gali de uper tej tej jeeb feran laga.
Gali te jeeb lakhveer nu asmaan vich pauncha dindi hai. Oh akhan band krke chadar nu ghut ke fad laindi hai te siskiyan mardi rehndi hai. Mehak apna kam kri janda. Oh maa di bund nu changi trah jeeb nal chat ke gilla kar dinda.
Fir oh dona hathan nal bund nu khol ke jeeb nu gali te rakh ke dba dinda te jeeb halki ji bund vich chali jandi hai te lakhveer bund di gali ghut laindi hai.
Bund ghutde hi mehak di jeeb maa di bund vich fas gyi te mehak bund vichli jeeb nu hilaun laga jis nal lakhveer tadfan lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaahhhhhhhhh...... Hauli aaaahhhhh.... Oooooohhhhhhhh.... Rabba eh ta boht changa aaaahhhhhhhh....... Hauli......
Edan jeeb hilaun nal lakhveer di bund ik bar fir to khul gyi te mehak ne hor jeeb vich pa diti.
Lakhveer : aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..... Hayeeeeeeeee..... Bas kar aaaahhhhhhh.... Rabba meri bund aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh.......
Fir mehak hauli hauli bund de vich jeeb ander bahr karn laga te lakhveer diyan akhan chad gyian ohne zindagi vich pehli bar apni bund chatwai ci. Te aaj ta putt di jeeb bund de vich ja rhi ci. Mehak jeeb nu bund vich paunda te fir bahr kad lainda te fir pa dinda.
Mehak nale ta bund vich jeeb fer riha ci te nale bund nal khed riha ci. Hanere wale kamre vich ik ta mehak di jeeb di awaz aa rhi ci te duji lakhveer diyan siskiyan di awaz aa rhi ci. Mehak di jeeb de nal ohda thuk bi maa di bund vich ja riha ci jo ke lakhveer feel kar rhi ci. Fir adha ghanta edan hi mehak ne maa nu ghodi bna ke bund vich jeeb feri.
Fir mehak ne maa nu sidhi pa lya te ik bar fir fuddi nu mooh vich pa ke khich lya te chad diti. Jis nal lakhveer cheek pyi. Fir mehak ne maa diyan lattan uper chakiyan te bund te jeeb rakh ke fir bund vich pa diti. Lattan chakan nal bund khul gyi te jeeb tej tej ander bahr jan lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaahhhhh..... Hayeeeeee.... Rabba eni tej nhi nhi aaaghhhhhhhh....... Ooohhhhhh..... Hauli hauli meri bund hayeeeeeeee........
Fir mehak maa di bund vich jeeb feran laga te nal hi fuddi vich ungal ander bahr karn laga. Jis nal lakhveer diyan cheeka pore kamre vich sun rhiyan ci. 15 mint mehak ne edan hi maa di bund chusi te fuddi vich ungal ander bahr kri.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhh..... Mein gyi. Meri fuddi fir to gyi aaaaahhhhhhhhhhh...... Oooooooohhhhhhhhhh...........
Lakhveer ne mehak da sir fadya te ohnu bund to hta ke fuddi uper dba dita te fuddi ohde mooh te rakh ke ragdan lagi. Ik mint vich hi lakhveer apne putt de mooh vich jhad gyi. Mehak sara pani pi gya. Dono bed te lambe pai gye.
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Agle din pehla lakhveer uthi. Oh nha dho ke rasoi vich kam karn lagi. Fir mehak uthya te fresh ho ke thale aa gya. Ohne lakhveer nu gd mrng wish kita.lakhveer ne bi gd mrng wish krya. Dono is trah react kar rhe ci jive kush hoyia hi na hove. Dono ik duje nal normal talk kar rhe ci. Raat nu dona ne ik duje di fuddi te lun chung ke pani kadya ci par hun dono ik duje nal maa putt wangu behave kar rhe ci jive kuch bi ni hoyia hunda. Fir mehak clg chala janda hai te lakhveer ghar da kam karn lag pyi. Raat da time ho gya ci. Lakhveer roti pka rhi ci te mehak satveer kol baitha ci. Dono ik dam normal ci. Fir tino baith ke khana khan lag pye.
Lakhveer : putt tu aj apne kamre vich hi pyi ethe tin janiya da aukha ho janda.
Mehak dekhda hi reh gya bi mummy eh ki khi jandi aa. Ohda ta jive marn hi ho gya. Oh bichara sad jiha ho ke roti khan laga. Fir tina ne roti khadi. Lakhveer rasoi vich chali gyi. Fir tine apne kamre vich chale gye. Mehak bi aaj jande hi so gya bi chal ki pta aaj mummy kamre vich hi aa jave. Lakhveer janbuj ke aaj di raat mehak nu tadpauna chaundi ci. Oh bi kamre vich aa ke pai gyi. Ohda bi man kar riha ci bi hune ja ke putt de mooh te baith java te ohda lun chunga. Par aaj ohne apne ap nu msa rokia. Agle din fir normal hi hoyia. Mehak clg chala gya te raat nu roti kha ke uthan lagya ta lakhveer ne dekh ke akh mari te ohde kamre wal ishara kar dita. Mehak samj gya bi aaj maa raat nu ohde kamre vich ayegi. Oh khush ho gya. Oh kamre vich gya te sare kapde lah dite. Raat de 10:30 vje ta kamre da gate khulya te gate band hunde hi light band ho gyi. Kamre vich fir hanera ho gya. Lakhveer hauli dene bed kol ayi te mehak bed te baitha ci.
Lakhveer : ki gal putt suta ni hle.
Mehak : nhi mummy aaj neend hi ni ayi mein fir baith gya.
Fir lakhveer ne mehak nu khada kita te gal la lya. Mehak nu pta laga bi maa bilkul nangi hai te lakhveer nu bi pta lag gya bi mehak bi nanga hi aa.
Lakhveer : koi ni putt hun aa jau neend.
Ena kehnde hi lakhveer bed te kodi ho gyi te mehak nu magar khada dita. Do mint dono edan hi rhe. Kise ne kuch ni kita.
Lakhveer : ki hoyia mehak.
Mehak : nhi kuch ni mummy.
Ena kehnde hi mehak thale baith gya te mooh nu fuddi kol karya te fuddi te thale to le ke uper tak jeeb feri te fir uper to le ke thale tak.
Edan jeeb firde hi lakhveer di cheek nikal gyi.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhhhhh....... Ooooohhhhhhhhhhh....... Teri jeeb ne mar dita menu aaaahhhhhhh..... Ssssshhhhhhhhh......... Meri fuddi aaaahhhhhh.....
Fuddi shabad aaj lakhveer ne apne putt kol pehli bar bolya ci jis nal lakhveer te mehak vich ik alag jiha nasha aa gya. Maa de mooh vicho fuddi sunde hi mehak da lun khada ho gya. Oh maa di fuddi zor nal chusan laga. Lakhveer nu bi pta lag gya bi mehak fuddi sunde hi jyada saroor vich aa gya is lyi oh hor tej bolan lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaahhhhhhhh..... Oooohhhhhhhhh... ..meri fuddi kive khul gyi aaj aaaahhhhhh...... Fuddi vich jeeb kive ja rhi aa oooooohhhhhhhhh.... Aaaaaahhhhhhhh...... Meri fuddi aaj ta kive gilli hoyi pyi aa... Eh kehke lakhveer ap hi laal hoyi pyi ci par ohne mehak da dimag kharab kar dita ci.
Mehak maa de mooh vicho ena kuch sunde hi fuddi te tut ke pai gya. Ohne maa nu lak to fadya te fuddi chatan laga.
Oh maa di fuddi nu changi trah chat riha ci. Lakhveer vi bed te ghodi ban ke pyi ci te cheeka te siskiyan mar rhi ci. Oh hath magar lija ke mehak de sir te ferdi te ohnu sir de uper dab di. Edan hi 15 mint mehak ne maa di fuddi chati ta lakhveer tadpdi hoyi bed de vichkar aa gyi te cheeka mardi rhi.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhh.... Oooohhhhhhh.... Rabba meri fuddi aaaahhhhhh..... Changi trah edan hi fer jeeb aaaahhhhhh......
Mehak bi bed de vichkar maa de magar aa ke fuddi chatan laga.
Mehak ne maa di bund hatha vich fadi te jeeb nu changi trah fuddi vich pa dita te tej tej ander buchal lya dita.
Lakhveer : aaaahhhhhh..... Aaaayyyyeeeeeee...... Hhaaayyyyeeeeee....... Meri fuddi jhad chali aaaahhhhhh...... Ooooohhhhhhh.... Bas ruk ja mein jhad chali.
Mehak sunde hi tej tej jeeb feran laga te fuddi nu mooh vich ghut lya. Lakhveer mehak de mooh vich jhadan lagi. Mehak maa di fuddi de ras da ik ik tupka pi gya. Lakhveer bed de uper lambi pai gyi te saah tej tej chal rhe ci. Mehak ne bullan te jeeb feri te sara ras pi gya.
Mehak : tusi kal menu juice ni pilaya is lyi thonu ik saja milu.
Lakhveer : kehri saja hun.
Lakhveer bed te mudi pyi ci. Ohdi bund uper nu ci. Mehak ne maa di bund te hath ferya te fir bund di gali te hath rakh dita te lakhveer diyan akhan band ho gyian. Fir mehak dona hathan nal maa di bund sehlaun lag gya te bund nu khol dita te ik ungutha gali de vich pa dita.
Ungutha bund vich jande hi lakhveer da mooh khul gya te ohde mooh vicho cheek nikal gyi.
Lakhveer : aaaaaahhhhhhh..... Oooooohhhhhhhhhh....... Ssssssss........ Aaaaaahhhhhhh..... Eh ni bahr kad aaaaahhhhhhhh........ Oooooooooohhhhhhh..... Nhi nhi eh ni.
Mehak ne mummy nu edan tadafda dekh ke Ungutha bahr kad lya te ungutha mooh vich pa ke chusan laga. Ohnu boht swad aa riha ci. Lakhveer uth ke age nu ho gyi ci. Mehak ne maa diyan lattan thale di hath pa ke bund to maa nu fad ke bund khol diti te bund te mooh la lya.
Apni bund di gali te putt di jeeb da hamla hunde hi lakhveer pagar ho gyi. Ohne sirhane vich mooh dab lya te cheeka marn lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh...... Ethe ni...... Oooooihhhhhhhhhhhh..... Hayyyyeeeeeeeeee...... Mar gyi mein eh ki aa ethe ni kde kite aaaaahhhhhhhh.......
Eh sun mehak maa bi bund di gali chatan lag gya. Oh gali de uper tej tej jeeb feran laga.
Gali te jeeb lakhveer nu asmaan vich pauncha dindi hai. Oh akhan band krke chadar nu ghut ke fad laindi hai te siskiyan mardi rehndi hai. Mehak apna kam kri janda. Oh maa di bund nu changi trah jeeb nal chat ke gilla kar dinda.
Fir oh dona hathan nal bund nu khol ke jeeb nu gali te rakh ke dba dinda te jeeb halki ji bund vich chali jandi hai te lakhveer bund di gali ghut laindi hai.
Bund ghutde hi mehak di jeeb maa di bund vich fas gyi te mehak bund vichli jeeb nu hilaun laga jis nal lakhveer tadfan lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaahhhhhhhhh...... Hauli aaaahhhhh.... Oooooohhhhhhhh.... Rabba eh ta boht changa aaaahhhhhhhh....... Hauli......
Edan jeeb hilaun nal lakhveer di bund ik bar fir to khul gyi te mehak ne hor jeeb vich pa diti.
Lakhveer : aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..... Hayeeeeeeeee..... Bas kar aaaahhhhhhh.... Rabba meri bund aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh.......
Fir mehak hauli hauli bund de vich jeeb ander bahr karn laga te lakhveer diyan akhan chad gyian ohne zindagi vich pehli bar apni bund chatwai ci. Te aaj ta putt di jeeb bund de vich ja rhi ci. Mehak jeeb nu bund vich paunda te fir bahr kad lainda te fir pa dinda.
Mehak nale ta bund vich jeeb fer riha ci te nale bund nal khed riha ci. Hanere wale kamre vich ik ta mehak di jeeb di awaz aa rhi ci te duji lakhveer diyan siskiyan di awaz aa rhi ci. Mehak di jeeb de nal ohda thuk bi maa di bund vich ja riha ci jo ke lakhveer feel kar rhi ci. Fir adha ghanta edan hi mehak ne maa nu ghodi bna ke bund vich jeeb feri.
Fir mehak ne maa nu sidhi pa lya te ik bar fir fuddi nu mooh vich pa ke khich lya te chad diti. Jis nal lakhveer cheek pyi. Fir mehak ne maa diyan lattan uper chakiyan te bund te jeeb rakh ke fir bund vich pa diti. Lattan chakan nal bund khul gyi te jeeb tej tej ander bahr jan lagi.
Lakhveer : aaaahhhhh..... Hayeeeeee.... Rabba eni tej nhi nhi aaaghhhhhhhh....... Ooohhhhhh..... Hauli hauli meri bund hayeeeeeeee........
Fir mehak maa di bund vich jeeb feran laga te nal hi fuddi vich ungal ander bahr karn laga. Jis nal lakhveer diyan cheeka pore kamre vich sun rhiyan ci. 15 mint mehak ne edan hi maa di bund chusi te fuddi vich ungal ander bahr kri.
Lakhveer : aaaaahhhhhhh..... Mein gyi. Meri fuddi fir to gyi aaaaahhhhhhhhhhh...... Oooooooohhhhhhhhhh...........
Lakhveer ne mehak da sir fadya te ohnu bund to hta ke fuddi uper dba dita te fuddi ohde mooh te rakh ke ragdan lagi. Ik mint vich hi lakhveer apne putt de mooh vich jhad gyi. Mehak sara pani pi gya. Dono bed te lambe pai gye.
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