Fantasy Veer Singh Raghuwanshi (Restarted) (Completed)

[Acme]

Ok bhai...intejar rahega... Thanks for starting ..

 

[Vinod1368]

Next story will be
Adventure Of karma
Chapter 3
World Beyond The World

Coming Soon
Restarting date will b mentioned after somedays
Regards
Prince2000

Gazab thanx bro

 

[Nadan Dill]

wating new

 

[Jaat boy]

Antariksh Ka Badshah Shan
Ye story me start karo ga thats final abbi parh raha ho dobara
Agle month start ho ge story
Regards
Prince2000

Jldi start kro Bhai wait nhi ho rha

 

[Rohit1988]

Dear Bhai,

Bhai aapko or aapki Family ko meri taraf se Happy Dushara

Jai Shri Ram

God Bless u Bhai

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

Bohat hi zabardast story bhai.
Aapne jitna is story pr kaam kiya hai bohat hi zabardast aur jin incomplete story PR kaam krrahe hai hum dua krte hai k aap unko b complete kare.

 

[Rohan Rathore]

Or aj wo sab wapis apne rajye loot aye jaha veer ke athve pathni un ka intizar kar rahe the
Intro
8th patni…………DIVYA
Umar me in satho se bare the is liye baki sab isse didi kehte the or in ke har baat mante the
Divya…akhir ap ne apna wada pora kiya
Veer…kaise na karta zaban se the mikar nhi sakta tha
Baki satho ja ke divya ke gale lag gai or rone lagi
Divya…bas karo mere behno ab tum sab apne ghar loot aye ho ab rona nhi
Sab ab subkne lage or divya unne shant kara rahe the veer ke nazar jab bahir gai or sare planets ke log waha mojood the apne maharaaj ka swagat karne ke liye
Veer…mere sathiyon ab me loot ayya ho is dafa hume apna adora chora howa kaam pora karna hai kya ap sab mera sath de ge
Or pora planet un ke cheikho se hilne laga jis me khushi jalak rahi the un ke cheikhe sun kar veer ke dost b bahir nikal aye or dharne lage
Un charo ko daikh ke log or b zyada cheikhne lage tabhi veer ke jisam me roshni samane lagi joke un planets ke taqat the tori dair thak us ka jisam chamakne laga or phr shant ho gaya ab us ke jism par shahi libas tha jo ke king ka hota hai
Us ne mur kar apna hath agge kiya apni patnion ke taraf or un par b shahi libas a gaya
Sab mehal ke andar chale gai or veer ke sathi garden me
Veer ne divya ko baho me bhar liya divya be isse ka intizar kar rahe the us ne khas kar veer ke baho me samma gai or rone lagi
Veer…bas karo meri jaan ab me wapis a gaya ho ab rona band karo
Divya…ap nhi jante ap ke bagair me kitni akeli ho gai the
Veer…sab janta ho issi liye to tumare behno ko sath laya ho ab tum kabhi b akele nhi ho ge
Tori dair baad jab divya shant howe to us ne apne anso ponche or veer se alag ho gai phr khuch khas na howa
Agle din pure bramhan me mere anne ke khabar ho gai the or jo jo planet hamre sath tha un sab ke raja mujh se milne drona atte rahe jab sab ponch gai to me apne singhasan par chala gaya or waha kare ho kar bola
Veer…ap sab log yaha aye ap sab ka shukriya ab mere ap logo se yahi anurodh hai ke sab apne apne rajye ke sena ko tayar kare q k agge ik akri yudh abbi baki hai jis me kuch b ho sakta hai is liye hume har waqt hamle ke liye tayar rehna chahye
Me nhi chahta ke mujh se jura koi b rajya ko koi taqleef ho
Ab ap sab mahfil ka annand le
Or me apni ranion ke pass chala gaya aj har rajye ke raj pariwar ayya tha is liye kai ranian or rajkumarian mujhe daikh ke ahhe bhar rahe the
Or meri ranian jal bun rahe the sab ko daikh ke
Veer…aise shakal q bana rahi ho ab sab to daikhe ge na likin hume daikho hum bas ap sab ko daikhte hai
Mere is baat se sab ke chehro par muskaan a gai or ik adda se apne chehre ko jatka diya jaise keh rahe ho veer par dore dalne ka koi faida nhi wo hamara hai
Phr usse shaba me mera meri ranion ke sath dobara vivah howa sab ke mang me mere naam ka sindoor lag gaya or shadi shamparn howe
Phr shaba khatam howe or sab apne apne rajye nikal gai
Me b apne kakash ke taraf nikal gaya jaha mere attho ranian suhagraat ke liye mera intizar kar rahi the
Chale in ko suhaag raat manane daite hai hum chalte hai darti par veer ke family ke pass

Yaha aj veer ke ghar me kohram macha howa tha ik sath do do dead bodies ghar me pare the ik veer ke to dosri komal ke
Sunita or ramesh to bilkul zinda lash ke tarah waha bethe the unne kisi se koi wasta nhi tha khon a raha hai khon ja raha hai unne kuch pata nhi tha wo to bas ankhain phare apne bacho ke dead bodies ko daikh rahe the
Kal thak sab kitne khush the or aj un ka khushion se kilkilata ghar ujar gaya tha
C.dada g or c.dadi mehmano ko sambhal rahe the ansoo un ke ankhon me b the
Dada g b bilkul khamosh ho ke ik jaga baithe howe the
Sare behne un ke bodies ke irdgird baithe howe the or ro rahe the
Yahi haal veer ke bua ka b tha ajit or sukhdev chacha b un dono ke antim sanskar ke tayari me lage howe the
Phr waqt a gya antim sanskar ka jaise he bodies ko utaya gaya tab he theen body ko jatka laga or wahi zameen pe gir gai
Ye or koi nhi tha dada g ramesh or sunita the dadi ab thak sab pe nazar rakhi howe the jaise he ye howa wo harkat me a gai un ka family doctor b waha mojood tha
Sab lod dar gai the doctor jaldi se un ke pass poncha or un ke nabz check ke
Doctor…inne hospital le ke janna pare ga in ke dimagh ye sadma bardasht nhi kar pa raha hai
Dadi…kahi le jane ke zarorat nhi hai inne in ke room me le jao
Doctor…par bhabhi
Dadi…hai mujhe mat sikha samjha jo kaha hai wo kar
Dadi ne karakh awaz me kaha sab unne room me le gai us ke baad sab bodies le jane lage tab he dadi ne tijori se 3 locket nikale pehla dada g ko pila diya
Jab waha se free howe to ramesh ke room me ponche or sunita ko wo pani pilla diya or us ke baad ramesh ko or wapis haal me a gai
Baki log b sham koa gai un ka antim sanskar kar ke sab udas lag rahe the sab a ke khamoshi se hall me baith gai
Tabhi dadag b kamre se nikal aye or ramesh or sunita ko b hosh a gaya
Un theno ke ankho me b ansoo the
Ramesh…ho gaya antim sanskar
Ajit…g bhai
Dada g…pata nhi kis ke nazar lag gai mere pariwar ko
Sunita…hum ne yaha a ke he galat kiya nanital me hum bht khush the us din agar me komal ke baat maan leti to aj ye sab na hota
Ramesh ne kuch nhi kaha kahi na kahi wo b yahi soch raha tha
Dada g…shaid tum sahi keh rahi ho bahu mere swarth ne is ghar ko jahanum bana diya agar me tume na rokta to shaid aj halat kuch or the
C.dada g…ab jo ho gaya usse badla nhi ja sakta is liye in bato ko yahi khatam kar do
Tabhi waha nanag ke family b a gai maa unne daikte he door ke un ke gale laag gai or rone lagi
Nanag …nhi beti rote nhi hai bas shant ho ja
Sunita…papa me barbaad ho gai mere dono bache mujhe chor ke chale gai mere kholh khali ho gai
Nana g ke ankhon me b ansoo a gai veer unne b bht aziz tha pore khandan ka chiragh tha wo
Nana g…janta ho beta wo mujhe b bht aziz tha par niyati ke age hum bebas hai
Dadi sochne lagi jo khud niyati ko badalne ke taqat rakta ho usse niyati kya keh sakti hai bala
Inne aise he rehne daite hai wapis chalte hai apne hero ke pass
Agle subah jab sab utte to sab ka chehra kila howa tha q k aj in kr mang me veer ke naam ka sindor tha or raat ko us ne sab ko un ka maqam de diya tha
Tabhi veer fresh ho ke bahir aya
Veer…haan to mere dil ke tukro kaisa lag raha hai
Divya…jis ka pyar us ke pas ho unne kaisa lagta hai
Komal…aisa lagta hai sare jahan ke khushian hume mil gai ho
Veer…chalo sab jaldi se fresh ho jao phr nashta b karna hai
Sab fresh ho ke nashta karne lage nashte ke baad hum sab shaba me chale gai
Veer…bataye mantri g aj shaba q bulai gai hai
Mantri…maharaaj jab se ap ke wapis lotne ke khabar peli hai wo sare desh jo kali shaktion se jore hai unno ne kali shaktion se rishta thor diya hai or sahaita ke liye hum se madad mangi hai
Veer…madad zaroor mile ge unne jino ne un se nata thor diya hai dand unne mile ga jo ab thak un ke sath hai
Mantri…g maharaaj humare guptcharo ne pata lagaya hai ke dark lord apne malik se or shaktian mangne gaya hai ap ko marne ke liye
Veer…wo choti machli hai us se hume koi khatra nhi hai intizar hai to us ke malik ka ke wo kab azad ho ga is dafa usse aise mout do ga ke dobara janm nhi le pai ga
Mantri…us ke azad hone ka same nazdeek hai maharaaj
Veer…usse ka to intizaar hai apni sare sena ko abyass karai ab ant nazdeek hai
Mantri…jaise ap ke agya maharaaj
Veer…or baki sab planets par b sandesh bej de ta ke wo b is yudh ke liye khud ko tayar kar le is dafa kali shaktion ko jhar se ukarna hai
Mantri…g maharaaj
Veer…shaba samapth
Or sab log apne kamo me lag gai me apni ranion ke sath wapis chal para
Veer…is dafa ap me se koi mere sath nhi jai ga or is baat par koi behes nhi ho ge
Sakshi…samjh sakte hai last time agar hum na hote to yudh ka nateja kuch or hota
Komal…thek hai hume manzoor hai
Vidhi…ab ye yudh kab ho ga
Veer…bht jald is se pehle ke wo hamari taraf yudh le ke aye hum un ke taraf he yudh le ke chale jai ge
Soma…likin wo sword wo kaha hai
Veer…usse unicorn ne kahi chupa diya hai kaha me b nhi janta or janna b nhi chhta
Lucy…agr un ke pas wo nhi ho ge to phr tumara mukabla karna un ke liye namumkin ho ga
Veer…nhi aisa nhi hai wo qaid zaroor hai likin us ne apni shaktian zaroor barai ho ge or hazaro saal ho gai ab wo kitna taqatwar ho ga mujhe b andaza nhi hai is ka
Monika…ap sahi keh rahe hai dushman ko kabhi kamzoor nhi samjhna chahye is liye piri tayari kar ke jana chahye
Soniya…haan ye darti nhi hai or na he wo insan wo shetan hai kali shaktion ka malik
Veer…darti se yaad aya pta nhi waha kya haal ho ga
Komal…haan pata nhi maa or papa kaise ho ge
Veer…waise to dadi ko me ne sab samjha diya tha is liye kisi ko jani nuksan nhi ho ga
Komal…kya kab dadi ko kab bataya ap ne
Veer…are haan tume is bare me nhi bataya jab me ghar se nikla tb dadi ne mujhe pakar liya or apni kasam de ke sab pata kar liya mujhe se
Komal…chali phr thek hai dadi sab smbhal le ge
Veer…thek hai me zara sena ko daikh lo ke abyas kaise ja raha hai
Or unne waha chor kar practicr area me chala gaya jaha sanik abyas kar rahe the sab mujhe daikh ke ruk gai
Veer…1 gante me sare planets ke sena ko yaha bulao
Mera itna kehna tha sab idarudar bhag gai me wahi ik ganta intizar kiya is waqt mere nazro ke samne ik wishal sena kare the
Veer…jo jo panch tatwa me koi b shakti istimal kar sakte hai wo right side pe ho jai or jo nhi kar sakte wo left side pe
Tabhi sena do hiso me taqseem ho gai adhe se zyada sena left side me the
Veer…ab suno me apni shakti se tum sab ke kudli jagrit kar do ga jis se tume andaza ho jai ga ke tum khon sa tatwa istimal karte ho is ke baad har subah tum sab dihan laga ke apni shakti barao ge tum sab ko itna taqatwar banna ho ga ke agar kabhi dushman ke waja se marne lago to kam az kam 10 ko mar ke maro
Mere baat sunte he sab ka josh bhara shor shuru ho gaya
Veer…merr saniko kali shaktio se larna punne ka kam hai or is me marne wale sidha swarg me jate hai is liye jab b moka mile aise shaktio se larne ka kabhi peche mat hatna q k yaha ke maoo ne shero ko janam diya hai jo yudh se kabhi peche nhi hatte
Sare senik apna pair darti pe mar ke apna josh dikha rahe the jis se darti hilna lagi
Me ne hath utha ke sab ko shant kiya
Veer…ab apne ankhain band kar lo me apni taqat se tumare khundli jagrit karne wala ho
Sab ne apni ankhin band kar le me ne b or apni khudli ko jagrit kar ke sena me pella diya jis se sab ke shakti jagrit ho gai taqreban mujhe adha ganta lag gaya q ke mere sena bht zyads the
Itna zyada taqat use karne se me b thak gaya tha
Veer…lo mere jawano me ne apna kaam kar diya ab baki tum par hai ke tum kitna apni shakti kob harate ho hamesha anya ke khilaf awaz utha yaha thak ke mujhe galat karta daiko to mere khilaf b awaz utao
Ab sab dihan lagao or apni shakti ko taqatwar banao
Ye keh ke me wapis mahel me ag aya
Jaha satho divya ko darti ke kahaniyan suna rahi the me jab kamre me gussa to kisse ne mere taraf daikha b nhi
Me herat se sab ko daikne laga maharaaj tha yaar tori izat to milne chahye na likin me janta tha agar kuch baat ke to mere khair nhi beshak shetan se larne ke tayari kar raha tha magar biwion se larne ke galti kabhi mat karna bht marti hai yaar
Un ko aise he rehne daite hai or wapis chalte hai darti pe
Sab log wapis haveli a gai the jaha sadhu baba pehle se mojood the sab gariyon se utar aye or unne pranam kiya
Baba…kar aye us ka antim sanskar
Dada g(dukh bare awaz me)…g baba
Baba…hahahaha murakh ho jo is ke rachaye jaal ko samjh na pai
Dadi…baba ap se kuch chupa nhi hai kripya hume or dukhi na kare
Baba…hahahaha janta ho janta ho tum b to sab janti ho khair me age kuch nhi bolo ga warna mujhe us se khon bachye ga
Or hanste hanste waha se chale gai
Sunita…ma baba kya keh gai hai kya ap ko pata hai pr hume nhi
Ramesh…haan maa bolo na or kaisa kiase jaal ke baat kar rahe the
Dadi…are mujhe se kya pochte ho ja ke usse se pocho mera dimgh khane a jate ho
Or gusse me andar chali gai
C.dada g…bhai ye bhabhi ko kya ho gaya hai
Dada g…pata nhi likin kuch to hai jo isse pata hai or hume nhi or wo veer se jura he kuch hai
Ajit…haan pita g mujhe ab yaad a raha hai ke veer or komal ke dead bodiea jab ghar aye the sab ro rahe the likin maa shant ik jaga baithe the
Sukhdev…haan wo ik dafa b nhi royi jaise kuch howa he na ho
Dada g…kuch to hai veer or komal ke bodies to hum ne khud daikhe the ab wo phr jevet to nhi ho sakte phr ye itne shant q hai
Nana g…bahgewan tum to us ke sahili ho zara pata to karo ke majra kya hai
Nani…thek hai kuch karti ho
Or andar chali gai
Nana g…chale sab pata lag jai ga tension mat le andar chalte hai
Or sab andar ke taraf bhar gai sab hall me ja ke baith gai
Ramesh…pita g pata nhi q jis din veer ko le jaya gaya me behosh ho gaya tha or jab hosh aya to apne andar kuch badlao mehsoos kar raha ho
Sunita…ap b me samjhe sirf me he ye mehsoos kar rahi ho
Dada g…tum dono nhi ho me b mehsoos kar raha ho pehle to laga borra ho gaya ho is liye aisa lag raha hai
Ajit…ab to pakka he kuch masla hai q k is me b maa shamil hai
Dada g…kya mtlb
C.dada g…ap theno ke behosh hone ke baad doctor ne ap ko hospital admit karne ka kaha likin maa ne inkar kar diya or sham ko jab hum aye to ap sab thek the jab ke doctor ne condition serious batai the
Ab sab soch me parh gai ke akhir chakkar kya hai
Dada g…agar shuru se daikha jai to wahi se kuch garhbar lag rahi hai
Sunita…kaha ke bat kar rahe hai ap pita g
Dada g…veer or aditya ke behes ke baat kar raha ho
Ramesh…likin wo batain to hum sab ne sunni
Dada g…haan suni likin mujhe aisa laga jaise hume sunnane ke liye he wo batain ke gai ho
Ramesh…likin unne to pata he nhi tha ke hum a gai hai
Dada g…janta ho beta likin tum dono gusse me the is liye tum ne veer ke ankhon me nhi daikha waha daar nhi tha waha srf dard tha
Sunita…ab in bataon ka kya faida mere dono bache to chale gai hai na
Or rone lagi baki sab b khamosh ho gai likin dada g kuch gehri soch me dobbe howe the jaise kuch un se chut raha hai in sab bato me or wo wahi khari dond rahe the
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Me ja ke fresh howa or dihan me baith gaya abbi mujhe baithe kuch he pal howe the ke ik darawna chehra mere samne ayya jisse daikh ke me muskura diya
Veer…tera he intizar tha kali duniya ke rakwale
Haan dosto ye koi nhi shetan tha
Shetan…bas kuch he waqt reh gaya hai phr to mare ga mere he hatho
Veer…ye tera khwab he rahe ga shetan pecli bar b koshish ke the likin nakam he raha
Shetan…us waqt me or aj me bht farak hai is bhar me khud apne hatho se tume moot do ga
Veer…phr jaldi a mujhe b apne hathos e tujhe khatam karna hai hatho me bht khujli ho rahi hai
Shetan…ye jo tere chehre pe halki se muskan hai na samjh raha ho us ko
Veer…are mamo zyada dimgh kharab mat kar ye bata kab a raha hai
Shetan…jis din ayya wohi year akhri din ho ga
Or me hansne laga or wo chala gaya phr me ne dihan thor diya or jaise he ankhain kole chownk gaya
Meri atho ranian ghor se mujhe daikh rahe the
Veer…kya howa aise kya daikh rahe ho sab
Divya…ye itne darawne muskan jo ap ke chehre pe the aj se pehle nhi daikhe
Veer….acha wo wo to apne porane jani dushman se mulakat kar raha tha to a gai ho ge chehre pe
Komal…kab azad ho raha hai
Veer…agar mera anuman sahi raha to ik mahina hai abbi hamare pass
Sakshi…or hamari tayari kaise hai
Veer…adbhud
Soniya…wah phr to maza a jai ga
Monika…kya faida hum to ho ge nhi
Soma…to kya howa hamara dushman to khatam ho jai ga na
Phr aise he batain hoti rahi
Divya…waise me ik baat pochna chahti ho
Sab ka dihan divya pe chala gaya
Veer…tum kab se ijazat lene lagi pocho jo pochna hai
Divya…shetan ko marne ke baad ap kya kare ge
Veer…matlab khul ke batao
Divya…mera matlab hai ke yudh ke baad ap yahi rahe ge ya wapis darti pe chale ge hamare sath
Sab ye sun ke veer ke taraf daikhne lage q k divya ko chor kar sab ka taluk darti se tha
Veer…daikho ga agar yaha pe sab sahi raha to shaid wapis chale abbi me ne is bare me socha nhi hai filhal mera sara dihan shetan pe hai
Komal…waise yahan pe phr kuch karne ko ho ga nhi jab burai ke jhar he khatam ho jai ge to kali shaktian khair khatam to nhi ho ge likin kam zaroor ho jai ge
Veer…abbi ye baat kabal az waqt ho ge is par baad me baat kare ge phr isse tarah apni patnion se masti karna or apne saniko ke shakti barane me laga howa tha
Shetan ke azaad hone se ik din pehle har planat ke sainko ko veer ne portal ke zariye apne planet pe bulawa liya yha jis me us planet ke raja b the or parion ke maharani b devil b mojood tha warewolf,pishaj,danav,naag or paristan b mojood tha
Veer sab se oper khara tha us se neche har planet ke raja rani or phir sena khari the sab ka dihan veer ke taraf tha
Veer…mere bahadur sathion ik yudh hum sab ke pratiksha kar raha hai or ye yudh hamara akhri yudh sabit ho sakta hai likin us se pehle jaan le ke agar jeet gai to khushian hamara intizar kare ge likin haar ka parinam bht bayanak hai hamare patnian hamare bache sab us ke ghulam ban jai ge is liye or har raat koin a koi us ke baint chare ga
Is liye haar ko apne dil se nikal do or sirf jeet ka socho agar yudh kaa khri senik b ho to apni akhri sans thak wo lare agar tum logo ko larne ke waja chahye josh chahye to apne biwi bacho ko yaad kar lo or ye yudh un ke liye laro
Mere bato se sab josh me chillane lage or apna pair darti pe marne lage
Veer…to chalye prastan karte hai yudh bomi ke taraf
Or isse ke sath me ne bht bhara portal khol diya or sab se pehle me us me chala gaya mere bad har raja or rani sahiba or us ke bad har sena us me dakhil ho gai hum sedha dark world jaha ke sena ko pehle he hamare anne ke khabhar ho chuki the or b tayar khari the
Dark world ke sena b vishal the likin hamari sena baki planets ke waja se bht bhar gai the
Dark lord b apni shaktian bhara kar wapis a gaya tha likin us ke liye devil he kafi tha
Hame in choti machliyon se koi matlab nhi tha hamara target abbi ayya nhi tha
Tabhi waha kale badal tezi se barhne lage sath gharaj rahe the me samjh gaya ke wo azad ho raha hai tabhi pora dark world hilne laga or ue sirf dark world nhi pora brahman hilne lag gaya tha
Tabhi me ne apna pair neche mara to dark world hilna ruk gaya or sath he ik damaka howa dark sena ke samne or shetan ik bayanak cheikh ke sath waha ponch gaya
Likin herat ka jatka tab laga jab us ke beti ko us ke sath daikha me ne mahsoos kiya ke jab shetan waha poncha to us ke sena ke taqat bhar gai the q k un ka sorce of power he shetan tha
Shetan…akhir kar aj me tume apne hatho se khatam kar sako ga
Veer…jagte howe khwab daikhna acha nhi hota ye khawab na tera pehle pora howa tha na ab ho ga
Shetan…daikte hai HAMLAAAAA
Or isse ke sath us ke sena agge bhari likin me ne apni sena ko hath rokh ke rokhe rakha
Veer…dosto bahir ao pehle tumare bhari
Or isse ke sath dono tigers or dragon darte howe bahir aye or hamla kar diya
Dragon ne asman se aag ugalni shuru kar de or tiger demons ke cher phar karne lage
Likin tadad zyada the is liye wo theno jitna kar sakte the utna kar rahe the
Veer…aag ke shakti wale aag bharsao
Veer ke kehne se us ke sena se ik toli nikli or aag ke gole barsane lagi
Veer…hawa ke shakti wale aag ko hawa de
Ik or toli agge aye or apni shakti se aag ko hawa de ke pelane lage jis se demons jalne lage likin phr b aag ko phr kar rahe the
Veer…warewolf hamla
Itna kehte he un ke sena warewolf me tabdeel howe or danav par akarman kar diya
Shetan ye sab daikh raha tha sath me us ke beti b
Me ne devil ko apne pass bolaya or usse kya karna hai bata diya
Devil baki rajao ke pass gaya or un ko bata diya kya karna hai
Shetan waha kara ho kar apni sena ko marta howa daikne laga us se zyada wo na daikh saka or khud agge bharne laga
Us ko agge bharta daikh ke mere honto pe muskan a gai or me b agge bhar gaya
Idhar devil ne sena ko hamle ka adesh de diya or sare sena demon par toot pare or yudh ne apna pora roop le liya
Likin raja or rani apni jaga kare rahe un ke nazar demon lord or shetan ke beti pe tha
Shetan or me amne samne kare the or pehel shetan ne ke or ik laat mujhe mare jis se me kai foot peche chala gaya likin gira nhi
Me ne usse daikha or apni speed se us ke pass poncha or me b rakh ke ik laat usse mar de wo b peche ja ke gira
Wo phr khara howa or aag se mujh par hamla kiya me ne apne samne pani ke dewar kare kar de
Shetan apne war khali jata daikh ke or b gusse se pagal ho gaya or apne hath age kiye jis me talawar a gai
Me b apne hath peche le gaya jis se mere dono talawar mere peth pe a gai or nikal liya ab shuru howe hamare talwar se larai wo b talwar bazi me mujh se kam na tha hum dono ik dosre ko takar ka mokabla de rahe the
Tabhi shetan ke beti ne harkat ke ye daike ke rani or raja b harkat me a gai q k me ne unne kaha tha ke un ka target wahi hai or devil ka dark lord
Wo chalte chalte mere peche a gai baki sab us ke taraf daikh rahe the
Rani ne apni chari nikal le s.beti ne jab mera dihan larai ke taraf daikha to peche se mujh par hamla kar diya
Par jab thak wo mujh thak ponchti rani ne energy ball se us par hamla kar diya jo sedha ja ke usse laga wo is hamle ke liye bilkul tayar nhi the is liye kafi chut lagi usse
Wo utte or ghura ke us tarf daikha jaha se hamla howa tha
Waha is waqt char log khare the jo us ke taraf he bhar rahe the
Warewolf…beti to baap se b do hath agge hai peth pe waar wahhh
S.beti…hath jao mere samne se us ke marne ke baad is yudh ke koi zarorat he nhi rahe ge
Rani…likin hum to yudh he chahte hai ke phr kabhi yudh ke zarorat he na pare
S.beti kare howe or un par hamla kar diya likin wo akele the or ye char jo is ne pechle yudh me veer ke patnion ke sath kiya tha wo aj is ke sath ho raha tha ik ke taraf jati to dusra hamala karta dosre ke taraf jati to tesra s.beti zyada time tik na pai or charo ne mil kar usse tukre tukre kar dala akir me rani ne agg se us ko rakh me tabdeel kar diya
Idar demon lord ye sab daikh ke pareshan ho gaya wo samjh gaya tha ke wo harne wale hai is liye wha se bhagne laga likin devil ne to us pe nazar rakhe howe the jaise he wo bhagne laga devil us ke samne a gaya
Devil…are sarkar itne b kya jaldi hai hum se to milte jao
DL…daikho mujhe jane do me marna nhi chahta
Devil…ye to yudh se pehle sochna chahye tha na ab time khatam ho chuka hai
Isse ke sath devil us pe japta or us ke dono hath pakar kar ukar diye us ke ik dard bhari cheikh yudh bomi me gunj gai devil yahi nhi roka phir us ke dono phir pakar liye or bech me usse cher dala or penk diya
Devil…sala demon chutiya kahi ka
Or hell fire painkh diya us pe jis se wo b rakh me tabdeel ho gaya
Yudh me b in ke sena ko zyada nuksan nhi ho raha tha sab ik dusre ke madad kar rahe the jis se shetan ke sena adhe se zyada khatam ho gai the or veer ke sena me jo healer the wo zakhmion ke madad kar rahe the jis se jani nuksan na ke barabar tha
Or yaha shetan or veer ke yudh ne zor pakarna shuru kar diya shetan b gayal ho chuka tha or veer b likin dono he takne ka naam nhi le rahe the
Dono ik dusre pe jan lewa war kar rahe the or waha shetan ke sena pore tarah khatam ho chuki the or sab ab ik circle me in ka yudh daikh rahe the
Akir me dono ne ik powerful war ik dusre pe kiya or dono ke talwar apas me taqrai jis ke shockwave se dono ik dusre se door ja gire
Dono he kafi zakhmi ho chuke the likin phr b khare ho gai
Shetan…bas bht howa mera samrajye to khatam kar diya tum ne likin me tume or tumare is sena ko b zinda nhi choro ga
Isse ke sath us ne apne dono hath upper kiye or har taraf se kali shakti uper jama hone lagi me kuch samjh nhi pa raha tha q k ye mere liye bilkul naya tha
Shetan…ab tum sab mere sath yahi maro ge
Us ka itna kehna kafi tha mujhe ye samjhane ke liye ke wo karna kya chahta hai me muskura diya
Me ne b apne hath oper kiya to mere jisam par ARMOUR OF GOD a gaya jis se ik lamhe ke liye pora dark world he chamak utha
Me ne apne hath oper kiye to mere sena se he white urja mere hatho me jama hone lage mere sena ko samjhte dair nhi lagi or sab ne apne hath utha diya or khushi se apni urja mujhe daine lage or tore he dair me mera urja ball shetan se dugna ho gaya meri sena ab b apni urja mujhe de rahe the
Veer…bht howa khel khud ab khel khatam
Or me ne apna energy ball us ke taraf paink diya shetan dar gaya or apna energy ball dar ke mare mere taraf paink diya
Jaise he dono energy ball ik dosre se takraye us se shockwaves nikalne lagi or mere sena ko nuksan ponchane lagi
Me ne apni demon mani ke shield activate ke or usse pela diya jis ke andar me shetan or wo energy balls the mere energy ball ke urja zyada the is liye wo black ball ko apne andar sukne laga
Shetan or b sehem gya or us ne energy ball ko udar chor kar mujh par hamla kar diya talwar se usse aisa karte daikh ke me ne energy ball ko eshara kiya or wo us ke samne a gaya or bichara white urja ke waja se wahi pe vaporize ho gaya
Or me wahi baith gaya or lambi lambi sanse lene laga or wo sheild b me ne khatam kar de or sab log yudh me kamyabi ka jashan manane lage me b un ko daikh ke muskurane laga
Sare raja or rani mere pass ponch gai
Devil…or be akhir jeet he gaya na to
Veer…or kya yar ye yudh to hona he tha ik ke har nishit the
Devil…chal wapis chalte hai abbi ik zarori kam baki hai
Veer(chonkte howe)…khon sa kam??
Devil…are khud to aath aath shadiyan kar le ab me ik b na karo
Anamika…kya mtlb hai tera kitni shadi karni hai to ne
Devil…are nhi janeman srf veer ko samjha raha tha
Veer…ohhh to lella maan gai
Devil…haar yaar bht menate kar rahi the ke apna bana lo to me ne kaha thek hai
Ye sun ke anamika ke ankhon se angare barasne lage
Veer…chal chor in bato ko tum dono ke shadi mere planet pe ho ge
Or me ne phr ik bhara portal khol diya jis se sab wapis apne planet ponch gai jaha pe sab hamara besabri se intizar kar rahe the
Mere ranion ka chehra mujhe daikhte he khil gaya or sab log apne pariwar walo se milne lage
Wo din aise he khushion bhara guzar gaya
Phr kuch dino baad devil or anamika ke shadi hamare he planet par howe kafi dhomdham se devil or anamika ke shadi howe
Devil bht sharma raha tha shadi ke baad dono mere samne ik gutne pe jhuk gai
Veer…are utha yaar to kab se formalitiea nibhane laga
Devil…kya karo yaar joru ka kaha manna partha hai ye isse ne kaha tha
Veer…chal chor ye sab hamesha anamikha ko khush rakhna gusse ke tez hai likin dil ke ache hai
Devil…janta ho ke dil ke ache hai tabhi to hamara dil b chura liya
Devil ke is baat pe anamika sharma jati hai
Phr me ne portal khol diya or wo dono paristan chale gai
Me ne unne roka likin devil ne kaha ke nai zindagi ke shuruwat apne planet se kare ge to me ne zyada zor na diya or phr sab apne zindagi me magan ho gai
Divya…ab kya socha hai
Kai dino baad akhir divya ne wahi sawal dobara dohra diya
Veer…ab yaha kuch hai nhi soch raha ho wapis darti pe chale jai yaha pe sab mantri ke hawale kar daite hai koi masla howa to kabhi b wapis a sakte hai
Komal…ap bilkul sahi keh rahe hai phr kab chalna hai
Veer…bas kal nikalte hai yaha ka kam khatam kar ke
Phr me shaba me chala gaya mujhe daikhte he sab khare ho gai me ja ke apne singasan par baith gaya mere baithte he sab baith gai
Veer…mere mantrion ab thak jo sab se bhara khatra mandra raha tha wo ab nhi raha or planets ka kam b ache se chal raha hai ab me yaha raho ya na raho koi farak nhi partha is liye ab yaha ka sab kuch maha mantri sambale ge jab b yaha meri zarorat ho ge me a jao ga meri nazar hamesha rahe ge yaha par
Mantri…jaise ap ke agya maharaaj
Veer…jab b koi vishesh masla ho us me mahaguru se anumati ke baad heagge baraya jai
Mahaguru…g maharaaj
Veer…shaba samapt
Me wapis apne kaksh me gaya jaha sab bethi howe the
Veer…thek hai maharaniyo jane ke tayari karo kal pehle kiran ke satg hum yaha se chale jai ge
Komal…likin bhai jai ge kaha hum to duniya ke liye maar chuke hai
Veer…haan hum apni zindagi nai serre se shuru kare ge
Komal…or hamare pariwar ka kya ho ga
Veer…ab ik dam waha nhi ja sakte pehle darti pe chalte hai phr soche ge
Divya…ye sahi rahe ga
Phr raat ko khana khane ke baad hum sab so gai or agle subah sab tayar ho gai or hum portal khol kar sedha delhi ponch gai haveli ke gate pe
Veer…soni ja ke ring le ao
Soni andar bhag gai
Divya…ring q
Moni…didi ye ik shapit haveli hai hum sab ka to thek hai likin ap ko to chahye na
Divya…kyyyaaaaa yaha bhoot hai
Soma…haa didi
Tabhi soni ring le ke wapis a gai or divya ko pehna de or sab haveli me chale gai
Soni…to plan kya hai
Veer…tum pancho poncho apne kaam pe minni ko me bata do ga waha mousa g b akele hai unne b madad chahye rustum ko b bool do ga is liye vidhi ja ke dobara agency sambalo
Vidhi…jaise ap kahe
Komal…or me kya karo ge
Veer…tum divya or sakshi ke sath shopping pe jao tab thak me apne empire ka paperwork kar lo
Me agge bhar ke komal ke face pe hath pera to us ka face he change ho gaya
Phr me ne minni ko phone kiya or apne wapis anne ka bata diya or usse wapis london janne ka kaha waha uncle akele business nhi sambhal pa rahe the
Minni…haan wo papa ka phone aya tha mujhe par tum ne ye zimidari de de the
Veer…tori dair me charo tumare pass ponch jai ge power of attorny unne de ke tum nikal janna q k waha ka kaam b jarori hai
Minni…thak hai bhai
Phr rustum ko phone kiya or wapis anne ka bata diya or keh diya ke ab delhi me agency vidhi sambhal le ge ab
Wob tension free ho gaya phr negi uncle ko phone kiya or kamna or preety ko wapis bolane ko kaha jo ke unno ne usse waqt kar diya
Sab kuch waisa kar diya jo jane se pehle tha reh gaya to srf mera pariwar chal ke daikte hai waha kya ho raha hai
Sab log phr se apne apne kamo me mashghol ho gai ab koi kab thak matam kar sakta hai srf sunita the jo kabhi kabhi dono ko yaad kar ke ansoo bahati the
C.dada g…kya baat hai bhaiya ap din ba din jawan hote ja rahe hai
Dada g…haan yaar pehle ye mujhe mera wahim laga likin ab jisam me nai taqat mehsoos kar raha ho
C.dada g…mujhe b is ka raaz bata de
Dada g…are chote mujhe pata hota to kya nhi batata
Tabhi dadi waha a gai
Dadi…kya bate ho rahe hai bhaion me
C.dadi…kuch nhi bhabhi me bhai se keh raha tha ke wo ab jawan hote ja rahe hai or ab agar ap ko gour se daiko to ap me b mujhe changes nazar a rahe hai
Dadi…chup kar badmash apni bhabhi pe line mar raha hai
Dadi ke kehne se c.dada g jhemp gai likin unne pata tha ke wo sach keh rahe hai q k abbi c.dada g or c.dadi ko wo pani nhi pilaya tha
Veer…meri pyari dadi kaise hai
Ik dam se dadi ka chehra khil utta or wo utt ke jaldi se apne kamre me chali gai dada g ne ye sab note kar liya un ke chehre ka ik dam khilna or phr jaldi se uth kar chale jana
Dadi(man me)…kaise hai mer pota or kaha hai to
Veer…ider delhi me he ho
Dadi…kya kab poncha or apna karye khatam kiya ya nhi
Veer…haan dadi khatam ho gaya or aj he poncha ho
Dadi…kab mil rahe ho apni dadi se 6 mah ho gai hai
Veer…bht jld milo ga dadi ab mare log aise to jevet nhi hote na
Dadi…jante jante ho bate bannana koi tujh se sekhe
Veer…hahahaha kya karo dadi bannane parte hai apni 8 patnion ko sambalne ke liye bate bannane ane chahye na
Dadi…kya to ne shadi kar le or wo b 8
Veer…wo bht lambi kahani hai dadi fursat me sunao gab as yahi kehna tha ke me wapis a gaya ho
Dadi…hamesha khush raho mere laal jaldi mujh se milna
Veer…g dadi chalta ho
Or rabta khatam ho gaya jab dadi ne ankhain kholi to shocked ho gai dada g herat se unne daikh rahe the
Dadi…kya howa g aise q daikh rahe hai
Dadi ne confidence se pocha q k unne pata tha wo man me veer se baat kar rahe the is liye dada g ko un ka pata nhi ho ga
Dada g…tum waha se ik dam q uth aye or kab se daikh raha ho tumare chehre ke expression har pal badal rahe the tum kar kya rahe the
Dadi…bude ho ke satya gai hai ap taqawat ho gai the is liye yaha chali aye ab chale bahir
Us ke baad qo bahir a gai likin dada g ke chehre par shaq saaf nazar a raha tha
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Veer ne apni sare concentration D group pe laga de or haveli ko chor ke ik bara mahel numa ghar le liya duniya ke liye jaha wo apni raniyo ke sath reh raha tha
Veer ne apna chehrab badal liya tha q ke ye zarori tha sath me komal ka b bech bech me wo dadi se b baat kar leta tha
Abbi thak dadi ke ilawa us ke pariwar me kissi ko veer ka pata nhi tha or d agency b apna kaam khoob ache se kar rahe the ab devil ke sign d agency apne kaam ke jaga pe chor daite the jis se devilk a khoof logo ke dil me badastoor kaim tha
6 mahine ho gai the wapis aye howe or veer ke atho patnio ka chatha mahina chal raha tha aj wo dadi ko b chupa ke apne ghar le ayya
Jaise he sab ne dadi ko daikha sab jaldi se un ka ashirwad lene lagi dadi ne sab ko ashirwad diya phr sab hall me baith gai
Dadi…waise ab kya socha hai kya karna hai sunita aj b tum dono ko yaad kar ke roti hai
Ye sun ke veer or komal ke dil me ik taiz dard howa or un ke ankain b num ho gai
Veer…jo me ne kiya tha aj wo mujh pe he bari parh raha hai ab kaise wapis ao mujhe samjh nhi a raha
Dadi…ik bhar us se baat kar le jaise mujh se kiya karta tha or raste to nikal he atte hai
Komal…dadi sahi keh rahe hai ik bar ap ko baat kar leni chahye
Veer…thek hai dadi jab ap ghar ponche ge thab thak me un se baat kar chuka ho ga
Phr dadi atho se baat karne me lag gai wo sham hone se pehle nikal gai uder sunita apne kamre me me apne bacho ko yaad kar ke ro rahi the
Veer…kya howa maa q ro rahi ho
Jaise he sunita ne veer ke awaz suni wo uchal pare or idar udar daikhne lagi or phr rone lagi
Veer…kya dond rahi ho maa
Sunita…veer kaha ho mere bache
Veer…maa me to ap ke dil me ho ap mujhe bahor q dond rahi hai
Sunita…tume to me sun sakti ho likin mere bache mujh se naraz hai wo mujh se baat b nhi kar rahi
Komal…ye ap se kis ne keh diya maa ke me ap se naraz ho bala bache apni maa se kabhi naraz ho sakte hai
Sunita…tum dono kya chale gai humari to khushian he lut gai
Veer…hum kahi nhi gai maa beshak ap hume nhi daikh sakti likin apne ankhain band kar ke hume mehsoos kar sakte hai
Ye sunte sath he sunita ne apni ankhain band kar de or veer ne apni shakti se un ke dimagh me apne planet me un sab ke tasveere daal de jise daikhte he un ke honto pe muskurahat cha gai phr herat se
Sunita…beta ye baki khon hai
Veer…ye sab ap ke baho hai maa
Sunita…kya komal samet
Veer…haan maa
Sunita…kya ue swarg hai
Veer…nhi maa ye swarg nhi hai ye mera rajye hai
Sunita…kya me samjhe nhi tumara to
Veer…me samjh raha ho maa ap kya kehna chate hai yahi na ke me mar chuka ho likin ye sach nhi hai
Sunita ye sunte he mare khushi ke rone lagi
Sunita…matlab tum dono zinda ho
Veer…haan maa hum dono zinda hai
Sunita…likin ye kaise sambhav hai lagta hai me pagal ho jao ge me ne tum dono ka mrit shareer apni ankhon se daikha hai
Veer…kabhi kabhi ankhon daikha b sach nhi hota maa wo hum he the likin phr b hum nhi the
Phr veer ne apni shakti se sunita ko wo drishye dikai ke kaise us ne apna clone bana ke us ka accident karwa diya or komal ka b dikaya
Sunita ko to aisa laga ke mare khushi ke us ke jaan nikal jai ge
Sunita…bacho apni maa par taras khao or wapis a jao me apni baho me tume bharna chahti ho
Veer…hum bht jald ap se mile ge waise dadi humare bare me sab janti hai
Ye sunte he sunita ko jatka laga
Sunita…kyaaa tabhi wo aisa react kar rahi the jaise kuch howa he nhi
Veer…hahahaha haa maa aisa he hai acha maa ab chalta ho bht jald phrb aat kare ge
Or rabta khatam ho gaya or wo hansne lagi
Sunita…hahahahahaha mere bache zinda hai hahahahahaha
Tabhi ramesh kamre me gusta hai or sunita ko aisa hansta howa daikh ke herat se unne daikne lagta hai
Ramesh…sunita tum thek to ho na
Sunita khushi se apne pati ko daikhte hai
Sunita…ap ne suna humare bache zinda hai wo abbi zinda hai
Ramesh ko sunita ke dimaghi halat pe shak hone laga
Ramesh…sunita lagta hai tumare tabyat theek nhi hai tum tora aram kar lo
Sunita…me janti ho ap ko is baat pe vishwas nhi ho raha likin aj me ne dono se baat ke hai wo dono zinda hai
Ramesh ne usse janjhor diya
Ramesh…hosh me ao sunita wo dono maar chuke hai
Sunita…ab me ap ko kaise yakeen dilao ke me ne aj apne dono bacho se baat ke hai ik min unno ne kaha tha ke dadi ko sab pata hai chalo maa ke pass un se pochte hai tab ap ko yakeen aye ga
Or sunita ramesh ka hath pakar ke dadi ke pass le jane lagi
Ramesh…ye kya pagalpan hai sunita
Sunita…bas ik bar maa se bat kar lete hai plz meri khatir
Ramesh(thak kar)…thek hai chalo
Or dono dadi ke pass chale jate hai sab hall me baithe howe the sab in ke taraf daikhne lage sunita ramesh ka hath chor kar dadi ke pairon me baith gai
Sunita…maa me ne aj apne dono bacho se baat ke likin ye kehte hai me pagal ho gai ho
Sab herat se sunita ko daikhne lage
Sunita…veer ne kaha tha ap ko sab pata hai ap bataiye kya me pagal ho
Dadi…nhi meri bachi tum sahi ho wo zinda hai or unno ne waqi me tum se baat ke hai
Dadi ke baat sun kar sab pe jaise bomb a gira sab herat se dadi ko daikne lage
Ramesh…maa ye ap kya keh rahe hai
Dadi…wahi jo tum sun rahe ho wo dono zinda hai or ab komal veer ke patni hai
Ye ik or bomb tha sab par dadi ne apni baat jari raki
Dadi…or yahi nhi komal ke ilawa us ke sath patnian or hai or us ke asliyat kya hai tum me se koi nhi janta bas itna jan lo wo sab rasm o riwajo se oper hai us par os duniya ka koi qanon lago nhi hota
Sunita…or maa jo me ne tasveere daikhe
Dadi…wo b sach hai wo waqi me waha ka raja hai or tum ramesh me or tumare pita ab ik shadari naag hai is liye ram ko aisa lagta hai ke hum jawan ho rahe hai ue b veer ke ik shakti hai wo kitna shakti shali hai koi nhi janta wo khud b nhi agar wo chahe sirf ik chuki me is pore darti ko khatam kar sakta hai
Dada g…kaha hai mera pota
Dadi…yahi hai delhi me waha ka kam pora kar ke wo ab yahi rehta hai apni patnion ke sath
Dada g…to chalo abbi jate hai un ke pass
Dadi…ik or baat us ke sare patnian maa banne wali hai
C.dada g…bhabhi koi or shock hai to wo b de de
Dadi…or shock waha ponch ke lage ga
Or sab nikal gai ghar se ik gari me dadi ne mind ke through veer ko bata diya
C.dada g gari chala rahe the is waqt maa dad dada g or dadi the gari me baki kisi ko nhi pata tha is sab ka
Koi adhe gante baad wo ik alishan mahel ke samne rook gai jaha har taraf guard negarani kar rahe the gari daikh ke ik guard gari ke pass aya or dadi ko daikh ke gate kolne ko kaha
Ramesh…ye kuch poche bina he gate q khol raha hai
Dadi…q k subah me yaha a chuki ho
Sab herat se dadi ko daikhne lage c.dada g ne gari agge bhara de
Ramesh jo khamosh beta howa tha ik dam uchal para
Ramesh…yad ayya ye to D group of industries ke malik ka ghar hai
Sab ko jatka laga or gari ja ke darwaze ke samne ruk gai jaha veer khara tha apne asli chehre ke sath
Sunita ne jaise he veer ko daikha wo gari se uthre or bhag kar veer ke gale lag gai
Sunita…to kah chala gaya tha beta mujhe chor kar
Veer ne apni maa ko apni baho me le liya
Veer…ap ko chor kar me kaha jao ga maa hamesha ap ke dil me raho ga
Tab thak sab gari se utar aye
Komal…maa
Sunita ne veer ke peche daikha to waha komal kare the to sunita ne apni bahe pela de or komal dor kar un baho ma sama gai or rone lagi sab ro rahe the likin ye khushi ke ansoo the
Phr veer ke nazar sab par gai to veer age bhara or sab se pehle dada g ke pair chuwe to dada g usse gale laga liya isse tarah c.dada g ne b kiya akhir me veer ramesh ke taraf bhara
Veer…sorry dad kafi takleef de hai ap ko
Likin ramesh ne kuch nhi kaha or khas kar veer ko gale laga liya
Ramesh…nhi beta I m sorry me ne ap pe hath uthaya
Veer…nhi dad plz ap sorry na bole ap mere dad hai ap ko mujhe marne ka pora haq hai chale sab andar chale ap ke bahuwe ap ka intizar kar rahe hai
Sab andar chale gai agle din pore family ko pata chal gaya tha or sab waha a damkhe the phr ik family drama howa
Isse tarah 3 mahine or guzar gai or veer ke sare pathnion ne bacho ko janam diya jis me 7 larkhe or divya ko larki howe the sab normal tha sab kan amkaran b howa (NAME IS NOT IMPORTANT ISLIYE MENSION NHI KIYE)Divya ke beti pore ghar ke ankhon ka tara the
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Sab bache bhare ho gai dada g ab bilkul jawan lag rahe the q k woa b ik shadari naag the c.dada g b ab ik shadari naag the sab bache ab college me ponch gai the veer ne b apne business ko all over the world pela diya tha likin aj b devil zinda tha crime ke khilaf veer ke sare cousins ke shadi ho gai the or sab apni life me khush the neha ne b apna life patner chun liya tha jo usse bht chahta tha aj wo 2 bacho ke maa hai yahi haal milli ka b tha wo aj b komal enterprizes sambhal rahe the mousa g or mousi ab nhi rahi os moke pe veer ne dono ko sambhala dono ik road accident me chal base the
Kayle b aj london ke ik ache lawyer ban chuki the wo aj b milli se milti the qk milli ne usse komal enterprises ka legal adviser bana liya tha
Veer ka aj india me apna ik naam tha ik pehchan the q k porane veer ka chehra kisi ko pata nhi tha or is veer ka sab ko pata tha q k D group of indusrtries ka malik jo tha veer ke ik ishare pe hukumat change ho jati the
Raj mahel ke branch b ab india ke har sheher me mojood the negi uncle ab kafi bore gai the is liye ab un ke betian he sab sambhalti the sath me mardani ke daikhbal b kar rahe the ab usse funds ke zarorat nhi the us ke naam ke maals factories se wo ab ache se manage hor ahe the rustum ne b apni mehnat or kabiliyat se college or universiry ko no 1 pe le ayya jaha ab har ameer student parna chahta tha jinse bare rakam le jati the jis se gareeb students ko free me education de jati the waha ke security kafi tight the is liye raging ka koi waha soch bn hi sakta tha veer me sab kafi ache se mange kiya tha veer ne mardani ke brnches har jaga khol liye ta ke besahara logo ke madad kar sake Saturday or Sunday ye do din veer ne family ko diye howe the os din chahe kitna bara loss q na ho jai woa pni family ke sath he rehta apni patnion or bacho ko ue time daita kabhi kabhi pora pariwar picnic pe vhala jata to kabhi kahi or veer aj ik perfect or khushhaal zindigi guzar raha tha apne family ke sath

THE END
THANK U SO MUCH GUYS TO BE WITH ME IN THIS JOURNEY WE WILL MEET AGAIN ON THIS SITE WITH ANOTHER INTERSTING INCOMPLETE STORY THANK U FOR UR SUPPORT
REGARDS
PRINCE2000

Bhaai ab "Koi to rok lo" ko complete kijiye bhai plzzz Prince2000 bhai congratulations for completing the story. Bhot achi thi story. Aisi hi stories likhte rahiye

 

[Suryaa]

Wating bhai
and yaha story pdne waalo si kahana chuga ki meri bhi kuch stories es website par chle rahi hi
me bhai ki tarah expert to nahi hu....par apni taraf si try kar raha hu...so aap sabhi vo stories bhi jarur pdna aur apni comment karna na bhulna
aur jaha mujhe aur dhyan dena chahiye vo bhi batana
My threads are
1. Naam ek Rupe Anek
2. Aaladin- Naam to suna hoga
3. Boss

 

[Mathur]

sorry bhai ki last part mai sath na tha apko pta hi hai exam they BC faad di thi

well puri story padhi hai maine ab review toh bnta hi hai toh aata hai apke regular reader ki taraf se ek maha mega review as kaafi time ki kasar puri karni hai BC

first of all some words for you
sach kahun toh mujhe aisa kabhi nhi lga ki yeh story aap ne nhi start ki hai as mujhe toh jab last part aane vala tha tab pta chla ke aap uncomplete story likhte hain aisa issliye kyunki aap apne aap ko uss writer ke mind set ke equal adjust kar lete hain jiski aap story likhne ja rhe hote hain jo ki awesome hai mtlab kisi aur ke kaam ko pura krna but usme apni chap chodhte huye uss writer ke mind set se compete krna just awesome SAVAGE BC

story ka end part ke ek sath release hone se aur jyada mja aaya its like ek hi flow mai sab chal rha hai jo ki shi bhi hai

miss point jo mujhe ek lga vo main villian ka shi trah se description na hona lga as villian ke shi se description na hone se villian ka part kamjor lga halanki aapne koshish ki hai usse alag alag point par strong bta kar but still mujhe yeh ek miss point lga as jitna bda villian hoga usse se bda hi HERO compare hota hai kyunki VEER ka character kaafi time se chlta aa rha hai issliye hime pta hai ki vo kitna strong yan powerful hai but VILLIAN toh mujhe HERO ke samne majak hi lga

well yeh mera point of view hai jo main har koshish main honest rakhne ki koshish krta hoon

up to the end maine aapki story ko bahut ache se feel kiya hai yeh aapki writing skill ki vajah se hai jo as always awesome hai aapki new story bhi phadunga abhi aur review bhi dunga so vahan par unki baat bhi ho hi jayegi

VEER ka past kaafi awesome lga aur valid reason bhi uski death ka ki aakhir kaise hua hai joh understandable bhi tha

i hope ki aapki har story aise hi gajab rhe jisse main review kar sakun

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR

 

[Prince2000]

sorry bhai ki last part mai sath na tha apko pta hi hai exam they BC faad di thi

well puri story padhi hai maine ab review toh bnta hi hai toh aata hai apke regular reader ki taraf se ek maha mega review as kaafi time ki kasar puri karni hai BC

first of all some words for you
sach kahun toh mujhe aisa kabhi nhi lga ki yeh story aap ne nhi start ki hai as mujhe toh jab last part aane vala tha tab pta chla ke aap uncomplete story likhte hain aisa issliye kyunki aap apne aap ko uss writer ke mind set ke equal adjust kar lete hain jiski aap story likhne ja rhe hote hain jo ki awesome hai mtlab kisi aur ke kaam ko pura krna but usme apni chap chodhte huye uss writer ke mind set se compete krna just awesome SAVAGE BC

story ka end part ke ek sath release hone se aur jyada mja aaya its like ek hi flow mai sab chal rha hai jo ki shi bhi hai

miss point jo mujhe ek lga vo main villian ka shi trah se description na hona lga as villian ke shi se description na hone se villian ka part kamjor lga halanki aapne koshish ki hai usse alag alag point par strong bta kar but still mujhe yeh ek miss point lga as jitna bda villian hoga usse se bda hi HERO compare hota hai kyunki VEER ka character kaafi time se chlta aa rha hai issliye hime pta hai ki vo kitna strong yan powerful hai but VILLIAN toh mujhe HERO ke samne majak hi lga

well yeh mera point of view hai jo main har koshish main honest rakhne ki koshish krta hoon

up to the end maine aapki story ko bahut ache se feel kiya hai yeh aapki writing skill ki vajah se hai jo as always awesome hai aapki new story bhi phadunga abhi aur review bhi dunga so vahan par unki baat bhi ho hi jayegi

VEER ka past kaafi awesome lga aur valid reason bhi uski death ka ki aakhir kaise hua hai joh understandable bhi tha

i hope ki aapki har story aise hi gajab rhe jisse main review kar sakun

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR

Thank u for ur valueable comment yaha pe mujh se ik mistake ho gai the last part me aj me ne khud last part parah hai to mujhe us ka ik part missing laga q k update kafi barah tha more then 75000+ words the is liye wo page us me miss ho gaya and unfortunatly complete karne ke baad sab delete kar diya tha agr wo part miss na hota to im sure a ko villian ka character b utna he powerful lagta
Again thank u
Regards
Prince2000