Fantasy Veer Singh Raghuwanshi (Restarted) (Completed)
- Thread starterPrince2000
- Start date
- 789,497
- 307
- 2,273
- 123
Update 5
Ye mela 3 din rehna tha 24 hours tabhi me ne daikha ke gaon me 2 gariyan enter howe me pehchan gaya ke mere pariyan ponch gai hai
Or issi ke sath ik mini bas b waha ponche jis me se mere friends ka tola nikla
Pariyon ke pehle gari se sam lucy vidhi or soma nikle jab ke dosri gari se moni or soni
(SAM ka sun ke itna heran na hoye ye wahi clone hai jo subah portal se chala gya tha)
Ab agge
Sam…chalo pariyon mela a gaya hai ab enjoy karo
Lucy…likin bhai agar dada ya dadi ne daikh liya to
Sam…to kya hum ne koi chori ke hai kya jo sab se chupte pire aram se enjoy karo
Moni…thek keh rahe hai bhai ap b hamare sath chalo bhai
Or hum lag gai mele me gomne
Veer…ao dosto kaise ho raste me koi taqleef to nhi howe
Taniya…bewafa besharam yaha a ke rehne lage ho or hume bataya b nhi
Veer…sorry yaar sab kuch achanak ho gaya os liye batane ka time nhi mila
Jatin…waisa aj mera first experience hai mele ka
Arman…haan haan hum to har roz mele me jate hai na
Tiya…ab jagro maat yaha enjoy karne aye hai jagarne nhi
Veer…Kaise ho tiya kafi kobsuraat ho gai ho
Taniya…or me
Veer…are tume daikh ke to parian b sharma jai
Taniya apne tareef sun ke sharma gai
Komal…bhai chalo sab wait kar rahe hai
Or hum sab ghar walo ke pass ponch gai me ne sab friends ko ghar walo se milaya or mele me gomne lage
Udhar sam b sab ke sath ghom raha tha hum koshish kar rahe the k komal or moni ka takra na ho jai likin ik he gaon me ik he mele me jab gom rahe ho or takra na ho aisa hona mushkil hai or jo hona hota hai wo ho kar rehta hai
Issi tarah taniya ne sam daikh liya
Taniya…are ye wahi larka nhi hai jis se mall me hamara jagrah howa tha
Taniya ke itna kehne se sab ke nazar sam pe chali gai dada g or dadi ke b likin komal ke nazar moni pe ja kar roki
Dada g…are ye to sameer beta hai chalo mil ke atte hai
Dadi b sam ko daikh ke kafi confuss dikh rahi the wo kabhi veer ko to kabhi sam ko daikh rahe the
Dada g…are sam baita kaise ho
Sam…namste dada g ap kaise hai
Dada g…me to bilkul thek ho or betian b aye hai tumare sath
Sab ne jaldi se dada g or dadi ke pair chuwe
Dada g n dadi…khush raho
Kavita or maya sam ko daikh ke dar gai the baki larkion ke ankhon me b khoof tha
Sam ne dada dadi ke bad pore pariwar ko namaste kiya likin baro ke ilawa kisi ne jawab na diya
Ram…sam beta tum karte kya ho
Sam…ap ko sab pata hai phr ye q poch rahe hai
Sab ko wo waqya yaad a gaya or sab ke rooh kamp gai
Ramesh…pita g kya yahi wo sam hai
Dada g…haan beta yahi hai
Ramesh…beta kya tum hamare sath ghar chal skte ho ap se baat karne hai
Sam…q nhi me to bas apne behno ko mela gumane ayya tha
Itne me komal moni ke samne ja ke kare ho jate hai or apna hath age barate hai milane ke liye moni b muskura ka hath milate hai likin agle pal us ke honto se muskan gaib ho jati hai
Q k hath milate he komal ne us ka hath dabaya tha to moni ne b dabao bara diya jis ke waja se us ke honto se muskan gaib ho gai
Komal…ap se milne ka kab se intizar kar rahi the akhir kar ap mil he gai
Moni…me ne b socha zyada intizar na karwao is loye milne chale aye
Moni ne muskurate howe kaha
Komal…kahi akele me mele yaha pe kafi log hai
Moni…q nhi agar ap ko jaga pata ho to bata de mil lete hai
Veer…komal tum janti ho inne
Komal…bhai ap se baat karne hai
Komal ne veer ko kaha or side me le gai
Veer…haan sweety bolo
Komal…bhai mujhe moni se fight karne hai
Veer…What???tum janti ho wo tumara mukabla nhi kar sakti
Komal…nhi bhai ik bar pehle hamara samna ho chuka hai us ke ik laat se mujhe pata chal gaya tha ke she is fully trained
Veer…likin wo ik coincidence b ho sakta hai
Komal…nhi bhai us waqt me bilkul satark the likin us ke speed or angle aise the ke me khud ko bacha na pai is liye me us se fight karna chahte ho
Veer…but sweety karo ge kaha sare ghar wale mojood hai or ik pal ke liye wo hame akela nhi chor rahe
Komal…isliye to ap ko keh rahe ho plz bhai plzzzzzzz
Veer…ok me kuch karta ho
Veer ko jis baat ka andesha tha or jis wo bachne ka prayas kar raha tha wahi howa ab veer ne socha ik bar samna kara he do
Wo wapis ghar walo ke pass chala gaya to daikha ke moni or sam alag ho kar kuch baat kar rahe hai
Veer…dada g ap sab ke sath agge jai mujhe or komal ko kuch kam hai khatam kar ke ap ko join karte hai
Dada g…are kam mujhe batao me karwa daita ho
Veer…nhi dada g wo me kar do ga bus tora time chahye
Dada g…thek hai beta
Or sare ghar wale agge nikal gai
Sam…komal ap janti hai jo mall me howa wo ik misunderatanding thi phr ye fight
Komal…us ka is fight se koi lena dena nhi hai
Sam…likin shuru to usse se howa tha na
Komal…haan likin wo baat uder he khatam ho gai the
Sam…to phr fight
Komal…in short words me khud ko parakna chahte ho ap ke behen se lar kar
Sam…veer ap he isse samjhaye
Veer…me ne bht koshish kelikin nhi kar saka
Sam…to ab kya kare
Veer…agr ap ke behan tayar hai to ik fight kara dete hai waise b hum hoon ge sath me agar baat hath se nikalne lage to fight rook de ge
Sam…moni tum kya kehti ho
Moni…mujhe koi aitraz nhi hai bhai
Sam…thek hai to jaga kaha hai
Veer…chalye mere sath
Or sab veet ke sath chal pare jungle me kafi andar kane ke baad ik nadi a gai us nadi ke sath chalte chalte tora age gai the ik khali jaga a gai jo bilkul flat thi
Veer…ye jaga sahi ho ge waise b yaha koi atta kaya nhi hai
Veer srf komal ko sath laya tha jab ke sam apni pancho behno ke sath tha
Sam…thek hai moni jao
Veer…komal
AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE
Guys plz mere comments me me date bata daita ho ke agla update kab aye ga jo ke kuch log nhi parte or update ke request karte hai so plz is yarah na kare q k jaldi me update likne se bht kuch miss ho jaya kare ga jo ke na ap ko pasand aye ga na mujhe
Thank u
Ye mela 3 din rehna tha 24 hours tabhi me ne daikha ke gaon me 2 gariyan enter howe me pehchan gaya ke mere pariyan ponch gai hai
Or issi ke sath ik mini bas b waha ponche jis me se mere friends ka tola nikla
Pariyon ke pehle gari se sam lucy vidhi or soma nikle jab ke dosri gari se moni or soni
(SAM ka sun ke itna heran na hoye ye wahi clone hai jo subah portal se chala gya tha)
Ab agge
Sam…chalo pariyon mela a gaya hai ab enjoy karo
Lucy…likin bhai agar dada ya dadi ne daikh liya to
Sam…to kya hum ne koi chori ke hai kya jo sab se chupte pire aram se enjoy karo
Moni…thek keh rahe hai bhai ap b hamare sath chalo bhai
Or hum lag gai mele me gomne
Veer…ao dosto kaise ho raste me koi taqleef to nhi howe
Taniya…bewafa besharam yaha a ke rehne lage ho or hume bataya b nhi
Veer…sorry yaar sab kuch achanak ho gaya os liye batane ka time nhi mila
Jatin…waisa aj mera first experience hai mele ka
Arman…haan haan hum to har roz mele me jate hai na
Tiya…ab jagro maat yaha enjoy karne aye hai jagarne nhi
Veer…Kaise ho tiya kafi kobsuraat ho gai ho
Taniya…or me
Veer…are tume daikh ke to parian b sharma jai
Taniya apne tareef sun ke sharma gai
Komal…bhai chalo sab wait kar rahe hai
Or hum sab ghar walo ke pass ponch gai me ne sab friends ko ghar walo se milaya or mele me gomne lage
Udhar sam b sab ke sath ghom raha tha hum koshish kar rahe the k komal or moni ka takra na ho jai likin ik he gaon me ik he mele me jab gom rahe ho or takra na ho aisa hona mushkil hai or jo hona hota hai wo ho kar rehta hai
Issi tarah taniya ne sam daikh liya
Taniya…are ye wahi larka nhi hai jis se mall me hamara jagrah howa tha
Taniya ke itna kehne se sab ke nazar sam pe chali gai dada g or dadi ke b likin komal ke nazar moni pe ja kar roki
Dada g…are ye to sameer beta hai chalo mil ke atte hai
Dadi b sam ko daikh ke kafi confuss dikh rahi the wo kabhi veer ko to kabhi sam ko daikh rahe the
Dada g…are sam baita kaise ho
Sam…namste dada g ap kaise hai
Dada g…me to bilkul thek ho or betian b aye hai tumare sath
Sab ne jaldi se dada g or dadi ke pair chuwe
Dada g n dadi…khush raho
Kavita or maya sam ko daikh ke dar gai the baki larkion ke ankhon me b khoof tha
Sam ne dada dadi ke bad pore pariwar ko namaste kiya likin baro ke ilawa kisi ne jawab na diya
Ram…sam beta tum karte kya ho
Sam…ap ko sab pata hai phr ye q poch rahe hai
Sab ko wo waqya yaad a gaya or sab ke rooh kamp gai
Ramesh…pita g kya yahi wo sam hai
Dada g…haan beta yahi hai
Ramesh…beta kya tum hamare sath ghar chal skte ho ap se baat karne hai
Sam…q nhi me to bas apne behno ko mela gumane ayya tha
Itne me komal moni ke samne ja ke kare ho jate hai or apna hath age barate hai milane ke liye moni b muskura ka hath milate hai likin agle pal us ke honto se muskan gaib ho jati hai
Q k hath milate he komal ne us ka hath dabaya tha to moni ne b dabao bara diya jis ke waja se us ke honto se muskan gaib ho gai
Komal…ap se milne ka kab se intizar kar rahi the akhir kar ap mil he gai
Moni…me ne b socha zyada intizar na karwao is loye milne chale aye
Moni ne muskurate howe kaha
Komal…kahi akele me mele yaha pe kafi log hai
Moni…q nhi agar ap ko jaga pata ho to bata de mil lete hai
Veer…komal tum janti ho inne
Komal…bhai ap se baat karne hai
Komal ne veer ko kaha or side me le gai
Veer…haan sweety bolo
Komal…bhai mujhe moni se fight karne hai
Veer…What???tum janti ho wo tumara mukabla nhi kar sakti
Komal…nhi bhai ik bar pehle hamara samna ho chuka hai us ke ik laat se mujhe pata chal gaya tha ke she is fully trained
Veer…likin wo ik coincidence b ho sakta hai
Komal…nhi bhai us waqt me bilkul satark the likin us ke speed or angle aise the ke me khud ko bacha na pai is liye me us se fight karna chahte ho
Veer…but sweety karo ge kaha sare ghar wale mojood hai or ik pal ke liye wo hame akela nhi chor rahe
Komal…isliye to ap ko keh rahe ho plz bhai plzzzzzzz
Veer…ok me kuch karta ho
Veer ko jis baat ka andesha tha or jis wo bachne ka prayas kar raha tha wahi howa ab veer ne socha ik bar samna kara he do
Wo wapis ghar walo ke pass chala gaya to daikha ke moni or sam alag ho kar kuch baat kar rahe hai
Veer…dada g ap sab ke sath agge jai mujhe or komal ko kuch kam hai khatam kar ke ap ko join karte hai
Dada g…are kam mujhe batao me karwa daita ho
Veer…nhi dada g wo me kar do ga bus tora time chahye
Dada g…thek hai beta
Or sare ghar wale agge nikal gai
Sam…komal ap janti hai jo mall me howa wo ik misunderatanding thi phr ye fight
Komal…us ka is fight se koi lena dena nhi hai
Sam…likin shuru to usse se howa tha na
Komal…haan likin wo baat uder he khatam ho gai the
Sam…to phr fight
Komal…in short words me khud ko parakna chahte ho ap ke behen se lar kar
Sam…veer ap he isse samjhaye
Veer…me ne bht koshish kelikin nhi kar saka
Sam…to ab kya kare
Veer…agr ap ke behan tayar hai to ik fight kara dete hai waise b hum hoon ge sath me agar baat hath se nikalne lage to fight rook de ge
Sam…moni tum kya kehti ho
Moni…mujhe koi aitraz nhi hai bhai
Sam…thek hai to jaga kaha hai
Veer…chalye mere sath
Or sab veet ke sath chal pare jungle me kafi andar kane ke baad ik nadi a gai us nadi ke sath chalte chalte tora age gai the ik khali jaga a gai jo bilkul flat thi
Veer…ye jaga sahi ho ge waise b yaha koi atta kaya nhi hai
Veer srf komal ko sath laya tha jab ke sam apni pancho behno ke sath tha
Sam…thek hai moni jao
Veer…komal
AJ KE LIYE ITNA HE
Guys plz mere comments me me date bata daita ho ke agla update kab aye ga jo ke kuch log nhi parte or update ke request karte hai so plz is yarah na kare q k jaldi me update likne se bht kuch miss ho jaya kare ga jo ke na ap ko pasand aye ga na mujhe
Thank u
aka3829
Prime
- 3,369
- 12,318
- 159
Mene aapko suggestion diya tha ki fight mat karwana aur komal ko sab sach bata do ki sam aur veer ek hi bande ke 2 naam he
Arjun Singh 72
Well-Known Member
- 8,137
- 15,023
- 143
Awesome fabulous update
Bhai story main pic bhi upload Karo
Jayeda maza aayega agar anhi aata to bhai kisi se
Help le lo jise story aur badiya ho jayege
Bhai story main pic bhi upload Karo
Jayeda maza aayega agar anhi aata to bhai kisi se
Help le lo jise story aur badiya ho jayege