Harman11
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Yoo jung...benchod ye to bahut hi jayada hi chuparustam nikali...
Iake pass bahut hi unic ability aur power hai..
Yoo jung ne pahale Aarav ko bachaya tha aur ab Aage ke Sathiyon Ko Bhi bachane ki koshish kar rahi hai
Daisuke..... Unki Tarif jitni ki Jaaye utani kam Khud Ghayal Hote Hue bhi Apne Sathi ko Akele Nahin chhodana inke majbut charcter ko dikhata hai.
Shandar update bhai....
Bhai 1 number ka update hai dil kush krdiya aaj jaldi update dekar
Or kuch kya likhu kuch smj nhi aa rha hai
Nice update
Very nice update bhai akhirkar sabhi sathi mil gye unhe to yoo jung bhi fire clan se belong karti hai slime auraarav ki bonding badhti ja rhi hai aur slime ka level bhi up ho rha hai vansh to sach me chutiya hai use paiso ka ghamand kuch jyada hi hai
Best God arv ko new ability mili hai kuch new dekhne ko mile ga
Bohat hi mast update bhai
Boht e behtareen
Aarav ne kisi tarah Isabelle ko pakad liya girte hue jaise bhi usko bachane ki kosish to karni hogi ushi ke karan to Aarav aaj jinda hai.aur wo khud usko zindagi dene ke karan maut aur zindagi ke bich me jhul rahi hai.Isabelle ke liye ya to usko theek hona chahiye taki wo aage ki zindagi theek se gujaar sake ya fir usko mukt ho jana chahiye.slime ki power badh gayi ek baar fir se idhar yoo jung ke andar ek aur power aag nikalne wali bhi hai.mast update dost
Nice update
Nice update bro
Gajab update
behtreen mere dost..
buhat achi story likhii hai aap nha..
maza aa raha hai phar kar..
aapki story ahista ahista bulid hoo rahii hai..
story ka har character bulid hoo raha hai.
khas kar Aarve ka character.
aise hi likhte jaiyen shukriyaa
Bahut mast update bhai
Fabulous update Bhai![]()
Nice updates recent
Update is brilliant someone suggested this story in werewolf brother I'm quite surprised you are doing good job brother
I have only one request and another readers have also same request if you have started this story so please be consistent with story and complete story
Nice update
Seriously bro.. very much underrated story...
Hopefully it gets what it deserve...
Padh raha hun bhai but I think story line alag hai or it will also achieve fame
Nice update bro
Waiting for next update
Abhi main bhi current update ka wait kar Raha hun story kafi intresting hai bhut jldi hin story top main a jaegi
Ek request ye hai ki consistency bni rahe bs update size acha hai to iske liye complaint nhi hai regular update ayega to story main maja bna rahega bhai
waiting new update bhai ji
Nice update![]()
Aapki story achi hai
Vansh ka charecter thora change hona chahiye ab
kiya akash aur aarav ka bachpan ka taluq hai
tu kiya archana mousi tu nae
aarav is dafa wapis aye ga tu aur zyada powers hoon gi
Purany players ka aur new ka apas main koi competition hoga kiya jaisa jinhoo aur yang ki ankh macholi se lag raha hai
Waiting for next
waiting for adventure in darkvale forest
Yang fire clam se hai aur sensei air clam se hai kiya dono main koi relation hai
Sandar updates waiting for next
Hmesha ki tarh behtareen lajwab update
Bs dekhna ye h ki aarav Isabelle ko kese bachata h uske baad Isabelle kesa react krti h kahani mein in dono k bich ki bonding aage dekhne ko mil skti h baki sb writer shab ki kripa
Bhai ji ab update post kariye bahut time hua
Update bhai
party enjoy karo bhai update kal dena jo jaroori hai pahle wo karo mahfil me khud ko akela na karo waise ye sasur mobile sab kuch to cheen liya
din ya rat
Intezar rahega agle update ka
Waiting for next update
Bro waiting
12 bajne wale hai
update aate hi sab sikayat door aur na aawa to![]()
Bhai time pura ho gya hai ab to update dedo