Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

Bhai sex seen jabardast tha maja a gya jabardast update tha ye Banda koun hai jiske liye alpha presense active ho gya
Vansh ka kya drama hai Bhai smjh nhi a Raha hai or veer ne koun sa card Diya hai

Main Sex scene me utna acha nahi hu, Lekin kitni koshish ker sakta tha ker ke likha, Time ke saath iss me bhu better ho jau ga

 

[Salty~Otaku]

first time sex in the story, short but good.

Thoda sex kam hota to ar story jyada mja a jata
Par best tha

Short tha ya Zada Anyways

 

[Salty~Otaku]

After so many tries today review is posting

Kia huwa tha

Time to meet with player
intresting to watch what happend between

Jang daisuke and aarav done their best in darkvale and get reward

Yup

You introduce veer so veer also have a system?

When did I introduce him as a player?

Aarav gained unique powers
why aarav is special is anything in past

It can be anything Past or jus some good luck it can be anything

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Behtrin bhai hamesa ki trha
Bhai aapne kha tha ki sab mein kuch khaas hai esiliye players chuna gya hai lakin arrav mein to abhi tak koi khas baat ya koi khaas pariwar se to nahi dikha hai

Aarav me kuch khaas kiu nahi dikha Sab kuch to khaas hai us ka Like Unique Abilities hardworking+ Intelligent

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Nice update...bhai

nice update

Nice update

Mazedaar update tha Bhai . Congrats . Eagerly waiting for your upcoming exciting update

first time sex in the story, short but good.

Zabardast update bhai keep posting

Bahut badiya Bhai super mind blowing update nice update

Shandar update bhai..

Awesome update

bahut hi badia update

Awesome update Bhai

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Waow padne mai maja a Raha he .keep writing .bdw bola tha bro flower barte jayega so aap Khali likhte jao

Yup! Umeed hai Aage bhi aise he saath milta rahega

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Ny
Nyc story bhai
Sarri updates pdhi h
Acha chl rha h
Keep going

 

[Salty~Otaku]

What a fantastic story.

sabhi 30 update padh liye. Mind blowing story. Ek aur system par base story padhkar maja aa gya.

No doubt you are a manga and Anime lover. Story se hi puri vibe aa rahi hai anime ki.

Koshis puri hai ke aise he feeling ati rahe

Story ki baat karu to writing style acha hai. Story samjhne me koi pareshani nahi hoti. Jabki itne character ke naam, system aur abilities sab kuch hai isme. Bas kahi kahi par kuch words missing yaa repeated aate hai, but that's not a big problem so it's can be ignored, uska affect story par nahi padta.

Repeated words ka reason to clear hai kiu ke main itna Chat karne wala nahi hu, So mujhe Words ate hai lekin likhne me thori dikkat ati hai, Samay ke saath naye shabd seekhta jau ga aur better hota rahu ga

Characters ke perspective se baat karu to abhi kisi ke bare me kuch kehna mushkil hai. Abhi bhi jyatatar character kind of mysterious hai. Akash, Veer, Aarav, yu Jung(Japanese name bhul jata hu, so guess it), Daisuke, tsubame and more.

I know problem honi thi, Lekin ap ne Tsubame ka naam sahi le lia wo he kamal ki baat hai, Yahan Literally Tsubame ko sabhi kuch aur he likh rahe the Baki character aur Skill Guide ban jaye gi to easy ho ga sab kuch

Kya jisne Ezra ko bheja vahi morach hai jiska jikr uss dead skeleton ke letter me tha. Yaa koi aur.

Agar Update 30 per reply karta to main kehta ke wait karo lekin abhi agar ap current Update per ho to koi issue nahi hai, Dono Monarch's alag alag hai, Skeleton wala Monarch Stone Monarch tha wanhi Ezra ko Soul Monarch ne bheja tha.

Aur Akash kyu Aarav me itna intersted hai. Kya sirf system ke liye, yaa koi aur baat hai. Starting me lagta hai ki akash sirf aarav ko apne liye use karna chahta hai but baad me laga jaise unke bich koi rishta hai, akash aarav ko bachapan se janta hai. Kya iss relation ka connection aarav ki maa hai. Pta nahi.

Aarav aur Aakash ke beech ka relation ka kuch hint main ne story me dia tha, Lekin wo kuch zada he kamzoor tha shayad ke koi Pick nahi ker paya usse, Lekin aage wale Arcs me sab kuch clear ho jaye ga.

And I don't know why mujhe Aarav se kind of Eren Jaeger (AOT) ki vibe aa rahi hai, jaise abhi jitna positive character vo hai utna hi evil aage jakar banega.
I hope aisa naa ho.

Mast update
Keep updating

Again and for such a amazing review, Umeed hai ap aage bhi aise he saath bane raho gye

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Amazing story
fantastic characters
awesome writing style

totaly fabulous
keep posting bro

and

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Fantastic update

Shandar update bro

Nice update bro

Ding keep posting

Superb

Mast update tha Bhai mja aa gya agle update ka intezar rahega