Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

Schedule​

UPDATE#​	DATE​
Update 117 ​	November 28th 11:30 PM​
Update 118 ​	December 6th 11:30 PM​
Update 119 ​	December 12th 11:30 PM​
Update 120 ​	December 16th 11:30 PM​
Update 121 ​	December 20th 11:30 PM​

 

[Salty~Otaku]

nice start of story. system se related story me bahut kuch likha ja sakta hai depend kerta hai writer ki imagination per. so hopefully ki aap is story ko kafi aage tak le jaoge

Yup likha to bohat kuch ja sakta hai lekin uss ko zada over kare gye to storie ka pura maza kirkira ho jata hai, Aisa nahi na ker sakte ke MC ko bus powers thama de beech me pura logic banana parta hai jis per bohat dhayan dena parta hai, Lekin maza bhi ata hai ye karne me bus ap log saath nibhate rahiye ga

abhi story start hui hai to abhi jyada logon ne isko read nahin kiya hoga per time ke saath aapko aur bhi readers mil jayeinge aur like aur comment bhi bahut mileinge so best of luck bhai

Thanks for encouragement, Umeed karta hu aisa he ho reviews ki lalach nahi hai brother lekin jab koi ap ki banayi art ko appreciate karta hai to uss Art per kaam karne ka mza dugna ho jata hai ye Human nature hai, bus ye he umeed karta hu ke main sab ko ek mazedar storie dene me kamyaab ho pao ga and

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Nice action update

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[Salty~Otaku]

Bro jabardast dhamekdar update bro weting for next update bro

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[Salty~Otaku]

Very nice update
Achhi starting hai keep it up
Bhai story me hum sath to bane rahenge but aap story complete jarur kijiyega

Storie complete zaroor ho gi brother, Ap saath bane rahe gye to storie complete hone ke baad mujhe ye safar yaad rahe ga warna to ye bus ek job ki tarha ho ga jis ko pura karne ke baad insaan un palo ko dobara yaad nahi karna chahe ga and

 

[Salty~Otaku]

nice update mja aa gya

Nice update

Very nice update ab aaya asli maja ab dekhte hai aarav alpha wolf ko kaise harata hai

Nice update very beutiful majs aa gya
Waiting for next update

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Congratulations for new story ...
Your writing style is marvellous .....
Story seems thrilling

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[Salty~Otaku]

Extraordinary update .. let's see wiil Aarav will live or die ???

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bilkul sehmat hu bhai aapki baat se sex story me to kese bhi khich sakte hein me sirf ek suggestion k liye bola tha aap aapka Kam bdia krr rhe ho keep it up

acha laga ap meri madad ker rahe ho aise he saath bane rahiye ga

 

[Salty~Otaku]

The last update was so interesting,jis tariqe se story badh rhi h maza a rha h

 

[Harman11]

Bhai please kya Aaj update do ge