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Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

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7 Years Ago.....,
Manali ~ 12:19 PM



*Click*


Manohar car se baahir aa gaya, January ka maheena tha to upar se aj mosam bohat zada kharab ho raha tha, Jacket me haath daale Manohar car lock karne laga.



Manohar abhi Manali ke outskirts me bane ek restaurant ke baahir tha, Haath jacket ki pocket me daale huwe he Manohar restaurant ke andar chala gaya.


“Yahan bhayia”



Manohar ke andar jaate he usse ek taraf se awaaz di gayi, Manohar ne uss taraf daikha to ek table per Rajesh baitha usse bula raha tha, Manohar seedhe udhar chala gaya.


Rajesh(Grin): Kya khaye gye ap?


Manohar(Frustrated): Yahan main khaane nahi aya! Seedhe batao ke kyu bulaya hai yahan? Mosam daikh rahe ho ke kitna kharab hai baahir?


Rajesh: Kya ho gaya bhayia? Itna bhi kharab mosam nahi hai!!


Manohar: Kitna bhi kharab kyu na ho! Lekin safety sab se pehle hoti hai, Aj tak main ne kisi employee ko bhi aise mosam me delivery karne ke liye nahi bheja, Kitni baar Aa-


Manohar kehte huwe he ruk gaya, Ek pal ke liye usse koi naam yaad aya lekin agle pal he wo naam usse bhool gaya, Manohar khud sochne laga ke wo kya naam lene wala tha?


Rajesh: Sorry Bhayia! Lekin mujhe urgent milna tha, Actually mujhe kuch paiso ki zaroorat thi, Agar ho sake to property me mera hissa mujhe de dete to acha hota.


Manohar: Hissa? Kaisa hissa? Pita Ji, 1 ghar aur 2 dukanen chhod ker gye the hamare liye, donon dukanen to tum pehle he baich chuke ho, Ghar me bhi jo hissa tumhara banta tha tumhe de diya gaya hai, Ab kaisa hissa?


Rajesh: Kaisa hissa kya? Ye ap jo dhandha ker rahe wo Pita Ji ka hai, Mera bhi barabar hissa banta hai iss me!!!


Manohar: Pee ker aye ho kya? Furniture ka kaam main yahan tak le ker aya hu, Ye Pita Ji ka chhoda Business nahi hai, Yahan main khud ye business sambhala hu, Tumhara iss me koi hissa nahi banta, Mere paas Pita Ji ki likhi vasiyat bhi hai,


Rajesh(Angry): Ye ap acha nahi ker rahe Bhayia! Mujhe mera paisa chahiye, Chahe mujhe kuch bhi kyu na karna per jaye!!


Manohar(Furious): Laakhon rupee le chuke ho tum hum se! Abhi bhi tumhe paiso ki bhook hai? Ab to ek phuti kodi tak tumhe nahi du ga.


Manohar ne saaf saaf keh diya, Rajesh usse gusse se daikhne laga, Manohar bhi kuch pal usse daikhta raha, Gehra saans le ker Manohar ne khud ko shaant kiya aur apne wallet me se kuch paise nikal ker Rajesh ki taraf ker diye.


Manohar: Ye Paise rakh lo! Tumhe har maheene kuch paise kharche ke liye bhejta rahu ga, Lekin tumhe khud bhi kuch acha kaam dhoondna ho ga, Main tumhe sirf kharcha de sakta hu, Tumhe khud apni aur apne parivar ki zindagi sudharni ho gi.


Rajesh tha to Manohar ka chota bhi he, Manohar usse tanha me nahi chhod sakta tha, Lekin ye baat Rajesh ko kuch khaas pasand nahi ayi.


Rajesh: Ap ko main bhikhari lagta hu kya? Ye kuch paise de ker khud ko mahan Samajh rahe ho kya?


Manohar(Sigh): Huh, Tumhe jaisa sochna hai soch sakte ho! Lekin ab tumhe kuch bhi de ker barbad nahi karunga.


Ye kehte huwe Manohar khada ho gaya aur bina Rajesh ki koi baat sune baahir chala gaya, Rajesh usse jaate huwe daikhta raha, Manohar waapis apni car me baitha aur waapis ghar ke liye nikal gaya.



Manohar: Huh, Maaf karna Pita Ji! Main chote ki aur sahayata nahi ker sakta, Mera bhi ek parivar hai, Mujhe un ke upar bhi dhayan dena hai ab, Agar mujhse kuch bhool ho gayi ho to kshma ker dena.


Manohar ko bhi taklif ho rahi thi, Rajesh ussi ke haatho khela huwa tha, Usse aise mana karna usse acha nahi lag raha tha, Lekin usse apne parivar ke Baare me bhi sochna tha.


*Vroom*


Manohar ko saamne se ek truck ata dikhayi diya, Usse jaane ke liye raasta dete huwe Manohar ne gadi ko road ke thoda side per ker diya, Lekin agle he pal uss ke rongte khade ho gaye.


Truck bhi side per ho ker Manohar ki taraf ane laga, Manohar ne aur side pee hona chaha, Lekin truck bhi saath he udhar hone laga.


Ek pal ke liye Manohar ke truck ke andar driver hansta huwa dikhayi diya, Ye banda Manohar Manali me rehne wala he ek gunda tha, Manohar ke saamne agle pal he Rajesh ki chhavi aa gayi.


Manohar ke haath wanhi thande per gye, Usse restaurant se nikalte huwe Rajesh ki muskurahat se ehsaas ho gaya ke ye sabhi uss ka he kiya huwa hai, Manohar aankhe band kiye apne ant ke liye taiyar ho gaya.



“Uncle”



Manohar(Gasp): Aarav!!



*Crash*


Truck seedhe car ko urate huwe aage nikal gayi, Ek zor ke jhatke ke saath car ghoomte huwe peeche jaane lagi, Kuch duri per car ulti gir gayi.


Manohar seat belt lagaye huwa tha, Seat ke saath latka ulta uss ka sar phat chuka tha, Manohar ki nazar dhundhli hone lagi, Akhri lamhe uss ke saamne ek he chehra usse dikhayi de raha tha.


Manohar(Whisper): Aarav!!


Manohar ko akhri lamhe Aarav dobara yaad aa gaya, Usse kuch samajh nahi aa rahi the ke wo usse kaise bhool gaya? Usse ab pata bhi nahi tha ke Aarav kahan hai.


Lekin ab ye sochne ka kuch bhi wajha nahi thi, Manohar saamne se aa rahi mrityu swikar ker chuka tha, Usse pata tha ke wo bachne nahi wala, Bina kuch kiye wo sirf purane ache dinon ko yaad karte huwe apni akhri yaadien khubsurat banana chah raha tha.


Manohar(Smile): Kya ker saka aur kya nahi! Ye sab sochne ka samay beet chuka hai, *sigh* Aarav, Ab tumhe he sab kuch sambhalna hai, Akanksha, Urvi aur baki sab ki zimedari ab tum per hai.


Muskurate huwe Manohar ka haath dheela ho ker neeche gir gaya, Manohar apne akhri lamhon bhi khush tha.


*Ka-boooooom*


Car ek bade dhamake ke saath phat gayi, Vatavaran me dhamake ki awaaz goonj gayi, wanhi ye sab juch duri per he Rajesh khara daikhte huwe khush ho raha tha.



****
The Hamta Forest
Near Manali ~ 11:04 AM



*Squeak* *Squeak*


Pedon ke beech chalte huwe Malia jangal ke andar ki taraf badh rahi thi, Zameen per baraf ki teh bani huwi thi, Malia ke paon baraf me dhans rahe the.



Malia abhi hamta forest me thi, Manali se 9 miles ki duri per ye jangal bade pedon se ghira huwa tha, Yahan logo ka ana jaana kam he hota tha, Malia chalte huwe aur gehrai me chali gayi.


*Clang* *Clang*


Malia ko talwaren takrane ki awaaz sunayi dene lagi, Malia samajh gayi ke wo kareeb aa chuki hai, Uss ne aur tezi se aage badhna shuru ker diya, Usse roshni dikhayi dene lagi.


*Wooosh*

*Crash*

*Crunch*


Malia pedon se nikal ker forest ke beech me ek khaali jagha per nikli, Baahir ate he usse hava me peeche ati huwi Akanksha dikhayi di, Akanksha peeche seedhe ek ped se takra gayi.


Ek zordar cheekh ke saath Akanksha wanhi neeche gir gayi, Akanksha ki saanse bhaari ho chuki thi aur wo dard se karah rahi thi, Uss ke sharir per bhi kuch ghav ban chuke the.


“Kitni baar tumhe batana ho ga? Apni hip rotation per dhayan do, Agar tumhari hip rotation sahi nahi ho gi to tumhare attack kisi kaam ke nahi hai”


Wanhi ek taraf se Malia ko Aarav ki awaaz sunayi di, Aarav haath me ek wooden sword pakde khara huwa tha, Uss ke saamne ek aur wooden sword toot ker giri huwi thi.


Akansha: Ker to rahi hu! Lekin ye baraf movement me mushkil ker rahi hai, Ap bhi newbie ki tarha treat kariye na, Lekin ap ko to puri takat lagani hai, Meri sword bhi tor di ap ne.


Aarav(Sigh): Kisi Portal ke andar tumhe tumhari choice ki location nahi mile gi! Agar halki baraf tumhe tumhara best dene se rok rahi hai to tum weak ho, Ab rona band karo aur dusri sword le ker ao!!


Akansha muh phulate huwe uth gayi, Usse ghav bane the, Lekin Aarav usse puchkar nahi raha tha wo usse strictly train ker raha tha, Akanksha sword lene chali gayi.


Malia: Ap ko nahi lagta ke ap zada sakhti ker rahe ho? Usse seekhne ke liye samay chahiye ho ga.


Aarav: Ye duniya aise nahi chalti! Har baar ap logo ko blame nahi ker sakte burayi ke liye, Kayi baar ap khud kamzoor hote ho uss burayi ko rok na pane ke liye.



Aarav wanhi ek pathar per baith gaya, Aarav ne ye jagha khaas training ke liye select kari thi, Yahan log kam ate the aur usse seekhane me bhi madad mil rahi thi.


Aarav: Sab kuch sahi se ho gaya na? Kanhi kuch pareshani to nahi ayi kya?


Malia: Sab kuch plan ke according he huwa hai! Kal subha se police Rajesh aur Rahul ki talash ker rahi thi, Hamara paisa saath bhejne ka plan sahi tha, Police ko bhi ye ek lutne ka case he lag raha hai.


Aarav: Sushmita ne bhi sab kuch wohi kaha na?



Malia: Yes, Usse jaise ap ne orders diye the unhi ko follow karte huwe uss ne sab kuch kaha hai! Main ne wanha ruk ker sab kuch khud daikha hai.


Aarav ne Sushmita se police ko ye kehne ke liye keh diya tha ke unhe raat ko luteron ne pakad liya tha, Rajesh aur Rahul ne unse ladna chaha to unhe wo pakad ker saath le gye.


Aarav ne janbujhkar pure paise bag me Rajesh ko diye the, Aise ye luteron ka bhi confirm ho gaya aur Aarav ko bina kisi dikkat ke paise bhi waapis mil gye.



Malia: Sushmita ko main ne band ker diya hai! Usse abhi bhi taklif ho rahi hai, Usse abhi bhi ap ko apna malik nahi kehna, Agar ap kahe to Akanksha ko badla lene ke liye Sushmita de deti hu?


Aarav(Sigh): Huh, Akanksha abhi bohat nadan hai! Usse koi badla nahi chahiye, Lekin hum sushmita ko jaane bhi nahi de sakte, Usse ab hamesha ek gulam ki tarha he rehna ho ga, Agar Akanksha ko kabhi badla lena hoga to wo le le gi.


Malia: Waise ap ne usse Manohar ke Baare me bata diya kya?


Malia ki baat per Aarav ne nahi me sar hila diya, Usse abhi Akanksha ko Manohar ke baare me batana pointless lag raha tha, Ye sirf usse aur dukh dene wala tha.


Akanksha: Bhayia ye last sword thi! Ab hamay nayi banani ho gi.


Akanksha ne waapis ate huwe kaha, Subha se Aarav ne Akanksha ki bohat swords tor di thi, Unhe pata bhi nahi laga kab swords khatam ho gayi hai.


Aarav: Baaki hum kal Training kare gye! Ab samay aa gaya hai, Hum ab waapis apne ghar me ja sakte hai.


Akanksha ek pal ke liye tham gayi, Unhe un ke ghar waapis mil gye the, Lekin abhi tak wo waapis nahi gye the, Lekin ab usse waapis jaana he tha.


Akanksha(Nods): Hmm, Okay!




****
Aarav's Old House
Manali ~ 2:49 PM



“Bhayia jaldi chalo na! Mummy daante gi aj bhi samose khaate huwe school se waapis ane ke liye late ho gye,”


Ek bachi apne bhai ko kheenchte huwe le ker ja rahi thi, Uss ka bhai maze se haath me samose pakde kha raha tha, Ye sab wanhi khada Aarav daikh raha tha.


Tinkerbell: [Oh so cute! Ye sab daikh ker tumhe bhi apna bachpan yaad aa raha hai kya?]


Aarav ko bachpan yaad tha, Aise he wo aur Urvi school se waapis ghar aya karte the aur saamne ghar me jaya karte the, Aarav ye sab yaad karte huwe apne Emotions ko feel karna chahta tha.



Lekin sach me uss ke Emotions sabhi band ho chuke the, Aarav ke liye wo sirf ek memory ki tarha tha, Usse kuch bhi mehsoos nahi ho raha tha.


Aarav raaste me Akanksha ko Manohar ke ghar chhodte huwe yahan aya tha, Aarav usse samay de raha tha uss ki yaadon ko sametne ke liye.


Aarav: Ab hamay andar chalna chahiye! Yahan khade rehne se kuch bhi nahi hone wala.


Aarav apne kadam aage badhane laga, Usse ab ehsaas ho raha tha ke Infinte Prison me uss ne sirf waqt nahi, Apni insaniyat bhi kho di hai, Ab uss ke liye ye yaadien sirf ek memory ki tarha thi.


Aisi memory jis ke saath kuch bhi feelings nahi thi, Unhe sirf yaad rakha gaya tha, Aarav ghar ke darwaze per aya aur pocket se chabi nikalte huwe darwaza kholne laga.


“Ap ne ye ghar khareeda hai kya?”


Abhi Aarav darwaza khol ker andar jaane he wala tha ke usse peeche se ek aurat ki awaaz ayi, Aarav ne peeche ghoom ker daikha to Aunty khadi huwi thi dikhne me 45-50 ke kareeb umar thi uss ki.


Aarav: Haan Ji! Lekin ap kon?


Aurat muskurate huwe Aarav ke paas aa gayi, Usne haath me sabziye pakdi huwi thi, Bazaar se raaste me wo yahan ruki thi.


Aurat: Mera naam sudha hai! Yanhi paas me rehti hu main, Actually mere paas bhi ghar ki chabi hai usse he lautane ayi hu.


Sudha ne ghar ki chabi apne saath latki ek potli se nikalte huwe Aarav ko de di, Aarav ko ye Aurat yaad nahi thi.


Sudha: Manohar bhayia ne ye ghar hamay rehne ke liye diya tha! Tab hamare paas rehne ke liye koi jagha nahi thi, Unhone kiraya bhi nahi maanga aur sirf badle me ghar saaf rakhne ke liye kaha, Unhe ye ghar bohat pyaara tha, Kehte the ke un ke bacho ka ghar hai ye, Aksar shuruwati dino me wo yahan aya bhi karte the.


Aarav ko ab sudha naam yaad aya tha, Ye manohar ke ek dost ki patni ka naam tha, New York jaane se pehle Manohar ne usse bataya tha ke uss ka dost ek bimari ke chalte mar gaya tha.


Aarav ke yahan jaane ke baad Manohar ne unhe ye ghar de diya tha, Aise ghar ki rakhwali bhi ho rahi thi aur un becharon ko rehne ke liye ghar bhi mil gaya tha.


Aarav: Sirf shuruwati dino me? Uss ke baad kya huwa?


Sudha: Mujhe nahi pata lekin ekdum se unhone apne bacho ke baare me baat karni band ker di! Jaise unhe wo yaad he nahi rahe ho, Un ki zindagi tak unhone hamay koi pareshani nahi hone di, Lekin un ke bhai ne kiraya bohat zada maang liya, Hamay 4 maheene pehle ghar se nikalna per gaya, Lekin main ne chabi apne paas he rakhi aur kabhi kabhi chupke se ghar saaf karti rehti hu.


Sudha ne akhri baat hanste huwe kahi, Jaise wo apni koi shararat bata rahi ho, Sudha ki tab ek aur beti huwi thi, Aarav ko ehsaas ho gaya ke abhi daikhe bache Sudha ke he the.


Aarav: Yahan kiraya bohat zada ho ga na? Phir bhi ap yanhi ruki huwi ho?


Sudha(Smile): Ye ghar mere bacho ki yaadon se bhara huwa hai! Chah ke bhi ghar se zada dur nahi ja saki, Lekin ab kiraya itna badh gaya hai ke dusra ghar bhi chhodna pare ga.


Sudha ne muskurate huwe baat shuru ki lekin khatam karte huwe uss ke chehre per udaasi aa gayi, Ye ghar sirf Aarav ki yaadien nahi sambhale huwa tha.


Aarav ne chabi ko waapis Sudha ke haath me pakda diya, Sudha ye daikh ker heraan ho gayi.


Aarav(Smile): Abhi main bhi yahan rehne nahi wala! Shayad kuch saal tak yahan ane wala hu, Lekin agar tab tak ap dobara ghar ka khayal rakhe gi to mujhe khushi ho gi.


Sudha ka haath kanpane laga, Usse kuch samajh nahi aa rahi thi ke Aarav kya kehna chahta hai, Aarav ne uss ka haath band ker diya.


Aarav: Ap dobara yahan apne bacho ke saath reh sakti ho! Ap ko kiraya dene ki bhi zaroorat nahi hai.


Sudha ki aankho me ansoo aa gye, Ek samay per Manohar ne usse bachaya tha, Ab usse dobara lag raha tha ke Manohar uss ke saamne khara huwa hai.


Sudha(Sob): Tum he ho na Aarav? Hahaha, Manohar bhayia sahi kehte the, Tumhara dil bhi un ki tarha he komal hai, Tumhara dhanyavad!!


Sudha ke chehra khushi se khil utha tha, Khushi ke ansoo uss ki aankho se beh rahe the, Haath me chabi pakde wo waapis apne ghar ki taraf apne bacho ko khushkhabri sunane chali gayi.


Tinkerbell: [Kuku (⁠◡⁠ ⁠ω⁠ ⁠◡⁠)! Emotions ke bina bhi tum cute behave ker sakte ho, Tumhe Emotions ki kya he zaroorat hai?]


Aarav: Shut Up!


Aarav darwaza kholte huwe ghar ke andar chala gaya, Sudha sach keh rahi thi, Andar sab kuch waise ke waise he tha, Manohar ne kuch bhi badalne nahi diya tha.



[You've successfully helped one of your servants seek revenge! Your bond with her has grown stronger. As a reward, the System Bazaar has granted you 100 bazaar points for this achievement]


Aarav ke saamne ek notification aa gaya, Akanksha ko uss ka sab kuch waapis mil chuka tha, Usse ab Aarav per aur bhi bharosa ho gaya tha, System Bazaar ne usse ye achievement puri karne per Reward diya tha.


Aisi he aur bhi achievements bhi thi, Lekin un me se koi bhi Aarav ko show nahi ho rahi thi, Sabhi Achivements Aarav ko bina kuch pata lagaye puri karni thi.



[System Bazaar also has a discount offer! It's a limited-time deal that System Bazaar is giving you]


[Unsealing System]


[Approximately 75% of your stats were sealed, which means they were made inaccessible or restricted. As a result, your stat points became unusable because you couldn't Use them. However, now you have the option to acquire a new Level Up System]


[Instead of receiving stat points with each level up, this Level Up System will gradually unlock 0.25% of your sealed stats. Once all of your sealed stats are completely unlocked, you will be able to revert back to using your previous level up system]


[Original Price: 3000 Bazaar Points]


[90% Discount Price: 300 Bazaar Points]


[Current Points: 360 Bazaar Points]


[(
Purchase) ~ (Cancel)]



Tinkerbell: [Ye kahan se aa gaya? Main ne kitna dhoonda lekin mujhe aisa kuch nahi mila tha]


Aarav ke stats seal hone ke baad usse level Up karne per stats points mil rahe the, Lekin wo unhe kanhi bhi daal nahi sakta tha.


Lekin ab usse ek naya level up system mil raha tha, Ye usse stats points nahi de raha tha, Har Level Up hone per sealed stats me se 0.25% Stats unlock ho rahe the.


300 Level Up hone ke baad Aarav ke sabhi Stats unlock ho sakte the, Uss ke baad Aarav apne stats points ko waapis Use ker sakta tha.


Tinkerbell: [Hum ye lene wale hai na? Aisi offer dobara nahi aye gi]


Aarav: Ofcourse! Kyu ke kisi ki wajha se mere sabhi stats seal ho gye the.


Aarav ne sarcastic hote huwe kaha aur usse purchase ker liya, Agle he pal uss ke saamne system window khul gayi aur new feature install hone laga.



[Congratulations! You've just bought the Unsealing System]


Aarav: Mera full status dikhao!

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Tinkerbell ne Aarav ko status window khol di, Aarav usse dhayan se check karne laga, Bohat kuch badal chuka tha, Aarav ka level 50 ho chuka tha, Lekin un stats points ka abhi koi kaam nahi tha.


Sushmita bhi Aarav ke servant's me aa chuki thi, Lekin bakiyon se alag wo ek Slave thi, Usse Aarav kaise bhi treat ker sakta tha.


Tinkerbell: [Ye trip to hamare bohat kaam ko rahi! Ab tum apni purani shaktiyon ko waapis la sakte ho, Lekin 300 Level Easy nahi ho gye, Har level up ke saath Exp bhi badh rahi hai]


Har Level Up ke saath agle level ke liye 100 Exp badh rahi thi, Abhi ke level up ki speed aage chal ker kam hone wali thi, Abhi ke liye Aarav ne uss baare me aur nahi socha.

“Darling! Kaisi lag rahi hu main?”


Aarav ke peeche se awaaz ayi to Aarav dobara ghooma, Aarav wanhi tham gaya uss ke saamne Akanksha ek laal rang ka suit pehne khari huwi thi, Halke make up ke saath Akanksha kayamat lag rahi thi.


Lekin Aarav ye daikh ker nahi thama tha, Usse ye dress abhi bhi yaad thi, Ye dress Urvi ne banayi thi.




****
13 Years Ago....,
Manohar's House ~ 7:54 AM



Manohar: Akanksha! Khana kyu nahi kha rahi? School ke liye late ho jao gi.


Manohar ne table per baithte huwe Akanksha se pucha jo table per muh banaye baithi huwi thi, Manohar ke saval per Akanksha usse gusse se daikhne lagi.


Akanksha(Glare): Ap nahi pata kya ke main kyu gussa hu?


Manohar ne kandhe uchkate huwe naa me sar hila diya, Akanksha ka chehra rone wala ho gaya, Usne kuch bhi nahi kaha aur chup ker ke baithi rahi.


*Knock-Knock*


Manohar: Muh banana band karo aur baahir daikho kon aya hai! Mujhe dukan ke liye late ho raha hai.


*Huh*


Akanksha ka mood aur bigad gaya, Muh banaye kursi se uth ker wo darwaza kholne chali gayi.


Akanksha(Mumble): Sabhi gande log hai! Kisi ko bhi mujhse pyaar nahi hai, Kisi ko yaad bhi nahi hai ke aj kya hai.


Akanksha badbadate huwe darwaza kholne lagi, Usse bohat bura lag raha tha, Lekin darwaza kholte he Akanksha chaunk gayi.


*Pop*


“Happy Birthday Akanksha!!”


Akanksha ke saamne Aarav aur Urvi haatho me party popper liye khade huwe the, Un ke peeche he Avinash haath me kuch plastic bag pakde khada huwa tha.


Akanksha(Sobbing): Ap sab ko yaad tha?


Manohar: Yaad kaise nahi hota? Aj ke din he to hamay hamari gudiya mili thi, Hum ye din kaise bhool sakte the?


Peeche se Manohar ki awaaz sun ker Akanksha ghoom gayi, Uss ke saamne uss ke Maa aur Papa haath me birthday cake liye khade huwe the, Akanksha khushi se rone wali ho gayi.


Akanksha: Bohat gande ho ap sabhi! Itna kon tang karta hai?


Akanksha ansoo saaf karte huwe boli, Ye daikh sabhi hansne lage, Urvi aur Aarav ne usse side se gale laga liya.


Urvi: Hum sab to thode maze le rahe the! Kal raat tumhe wish nahi ker sakte the kyu ke aj tumhara exam tha aur tumhe jaldi uthna tha, Lekin tumhe aise he Exam ke liye udaas ker ke nahi bheje gye, Papa!!



Avinash ne Urvi ki baat sun ker usse ek bag pakda diya, Urvi aur Aarav ne mil ker usse Akanksha ke haatho me pakda diya.


Urvi: Ye hamari taraf se tumhare liye gift hai! Ek baar pehan ke check ker lo ke sahi hai na, Ye meri first try hai kuch silayi karne ki, Aarav ne bhi meri bohat madad ki hai, Ek baar try ker lo.


Akanksha: Thank You Di! Main abhi pehan ker dikhati hu.


Urvi: Arrey abhi school dress pehn-


Urvi ki baat sune bina he Akanksha andar bhaag gayi, Ek pal pehle murjhaya huwa chehra ap khil utha tha, Sabhi log wanhi baith ker Akanksha ka intezar karne lage.


Akanksha: Urvi Di! Suit to bohat acha hai, Lekin ye thoda loose lag raha hai.


Akanksha baahir ayi to suit sach me bada tha, Urvi ne bina size ke suit siya tha, Usse shak bhi tha ke uss se bada ban raha hai Lekin pehli baar ki wajha se usse utna andaza nahi tha.


Urvi: Ye to bohat bada ho gaya! Aisa karo ye mujhe dena main shaam tak sahi ker du gi.


Akanksha(Giggle): Nahi! Ab ye suit aise he rahe ga, Jab darling se meri shadi ho gi tab ye suit mere pura aa jaye ga.



Akanksha ki baat sun ker ek pal ke liye sabhi chaunke, Lekin agle he pal sabhi hansne lage, Aarav thoda embarrassed ho raha tha Lekin usse bhi hansi aa rahi thi Akanksha ke bachpane per, Avinash bhi ye sab kuch daikh ker hans raha tha.




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Present.....,




Akanksha(Chuckle): Kahan kho gye, Darling? Bataye na kaisi lag rahi hu?


Aarav: Khubsurat lag rahi ho!


Aarav ke muh se tareef sun ker Akanksha khush ho gayi, Uss ke gaalo per laali aa gayi, Haath peeche kiye Akanksha dheeme se chalte huwe Aarav ke paas aa gayi.


Akanksha Aarav ki aankho me aankhe daal ker daikhne lagi, Usse sharam bhi aa rahi thi, Aarav uss per he nazar banaye rakhe huwa tha.


Akanksha(Whisper): Ab to mujhe ye suit pura aa gaya hai! Ab se ap mere ho gye ho darling!!


Akanksha ne dheeme se Aarav ko pakda aur usse apni taraf kheencte huwe thoda neeche ker diya, Aarav ka chehra neeche Akanksha ke chehre ke saamne aa gaya, Akanksha ki saanse tez hone lagi.


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Akanksha ne thoda uthte huwe apne honto ko Aarav ke honto per rakh diya, Aarav ke honto ko chumte huwe wo peeche ho gayi, Uss ki aankhe aur bhi nasheeli ho gayi thi.


Akanksha: Ap ko mark ker diya hai main ne! Ap ko agar koi aur pasand bhi hai to ye mark yanhi rahe ga, Aj se ap mere bhi ho gye ho.


Akanksha muskurate huwe nazre jhuka ker bhaag gayi, Uss ne bohat himmat ker ke ye kiya tha, Aarav usse bhaagte huwe daikhta raha.


Usse kuch samajh nahi aa rahi thi ke ye kya huwa, Aarav ne apne honto ko chu ker daikha to wahan Akanksha ke lipstick ke nishan the.


Tinkerbell(Giggle): [Umm, Bachi badi ho gayi hai! Usse ab bhayia nahi Sayian chahiye]


Aarav: Shut Up!


*Ring*


Ekdum se Aarav ke phone per kisi ki call ane lagi, Aarav ne check kiya to screen per Tanu ka naam flash ho raha tha, Aarav me call utha li.


Aarav: Hello!


Tanu(Nervous): Umm, Tanu baat ker rahi hu!


Aarav: Haan mere paas number save hai! Kaise call ki?


Tanu: Ap kab tak waapis aa rahe hai? Actually hum fluffy ke saath baahir jaana chah rahe the, Lekin wo ghar se baahir he nahi ata, Shayad ap ke saath he baahir aye ga.


Aarav ne baby kitsune ko baahir nikalne se roka huwa tha, Usse baahir agar koi pehchan leta to issue ho sakta tha, Aarav usse baahir nikalne dene se pehle Artifact ko check karna chahta tha.


Wanhi Tanu abhi hickicha rahi thi, Usse abhi bhi ye sab thoda weird lag raha tha, Lekin usse apne new Pet ke saath baahir jaane ka bhi mann tha.



Aarav: Aj waapis ane wala hu! Hum kal usse baahir ghoomane le jaye gye.


Tanu: Haan ye sahi hai! Okay bye.


Tanu ne foran call band ker di, Usse itni baat ker ke he ajeeb lag raha tha, Aarav ne bhi apna dhayan kaam per lagana sahi samjha aur andar ki taraf chala gaya.


Avinash ke purane kamre me ane ke baad Aarav sabhi deeware dhayan se daikhne laga, Jaise wo kuch dhoond raha ho, Agle he pal usse wo mil he gaya.


Aarav deewar ke kone ke paas chala gaya, Wahan deewar ka rang thoda alag tha, Aarav ne apne haath se he wahan se thodi deewar tod di, Andar ek safe ki tarha kuch bana huwa tha.


Aarav ne zor lagate huwe usse khola to andar ek kitab rakhi huwi thi, Aarav ne usse baahir nikal liya, Kuch pannon wali ye ek bareek kitaab thi.


Tinkerbell: [Ye he kitab hai kya jis ke liye tum yahan aye ho?]



Aarav(nods): Haan, Ye he kitab he jise nasht hona tha! Lekin Papa ne ye hamare liye yahan chupa di thi, Spirit Clans secret techniques!!
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[Aj ke liye itna he Ye update 5K words ka tha aur issi ke saath Manali trip khatam hoti hai, Umeed karta hu ap ko Update pasand aye ga, Hamara target wohi hai 80 Likes, Milte hai agle Update per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
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Rajesh Cafe

Manali ~ 3:32 PM


*Thwack!*

*Thwack!*


Rajesh cafe ke counter per baitha haath me tv remote maarte huwe usse chalane ki koshish ker raha tha, Lekin battery khatam hone se remote chal nahi raha tha.


Customer: Kya ho gya Rajesh? Kyu remote todne per lage huwe ho?


Ek Customer chai ke paise dene counter per ate huwe bola, Ye customer wanhi paas rehne wala tha.


Rajesh(Frustrated): Har cheez me 2 numbery ho rahi hai! Abhi kuch din he huwe hai cell daale ab khatam bhi ho gye, Saali har cheez kharab ho rahi hai.


Customer: Baat sirf remote ki nahi lagti! Kuch huwa hai kya?


Rajesh: Tumhe to sab pata he hai! Ye jhud halat daikh lo Cafe ki, Customer ke naam per ye tum 4-5 Log he ate ho.


Customer ne ek baar andar nazar dali to wahan sach me itne log nahi the, Rajesh ne sab kuch ker ke daikh liya tha lekin uss ke customer ban he nahi rahe the.



Customer: Ye dukan bhi to tum yahan factoriyon ke paas banaye ho! Yahan to aise he customer mile gye na? Tumhari dusri dukan sahi thi, Jahan Manohar kaam kiya karta tha, Usse baichna nahi chahiye tha tumhe.


Rajesh(Sigh): Andha ho gaya tha! Uss samay dukan ache paiso per bik rahi thi to baich di aur socha yahan cafe bana lu ga, Lekin ulti mere gale he per gayi ye hoshiyari.



Rajesh ne commercial area ki dukan baich di thi, Kyu ke usse wahan zada paise mil rahe the ye wali dukan se, Lekin yahan Cafe ka business utna sahi nahi baitha, Dusri dukan se aye paise ye Cafe set karne me lag gye.


Customer: Ye he to galti ker di! Ab daikha kya wo dukan kitni achi chal rahi hai, Ye bhi chal jaati lekin tumhari kuch baate yahan chal rahi hai ke tum ne Akanksha ko raat ke andhere me ghar se nikal diya, Tumhe samajhna chahiye tha ke tumhare bhai ki log yahan respect karte hai, Unhe to tum se khunas ho gi he.


Rajesh(Frustrated): Ye sab uss haramjadi ki wajha se he huwa hai! Usse khaane ke liye khana aur sab kuch milta tha, Lekin ghar se bhaag ker uss ne meri izzat rond ker rakh di.


Rajesh Akanksha ka naam sun ker he gusse me aa gaya, Wahan ke logon me uss ki kuch izzat nahi rahi thi, Manohar ne ek samay guzara tha wahan logon ko to bura lagna he tha Akanksha ke saath un ka bartav.



“Come Madam! Ye...Mera matlab...This is the shop”



Rajesh ne baahir daikha to uss ke paas ka he ek Property dealer Fareed uss ki dukan me aa raha tha, Lekin Rajesh ka dhayan uss ke saath ayi foreigner ladki ne apni taraf kheencha tha.


Khubsurat videshi ladki upar se uss ke kapde dikhne se he mehnge lag rahe the, Usse daikhte he Rajesh bhi counter ke peeche se baahir nikal aya.



Rajesh: Fareed ye kon hai? Tourist Guide kab se ban gye tum?


Rajesh ko daikhte he fareed ne ladki ko wanhi rukne ke liye kaha aur khud Rajesh ko pakdte huwe andar le gaya.


Fareed: Usse Hindi ati hai dhayan se bolo kuch bhi! Usse yahan tumhare liye laya hu main.


Rajesh(Puzzle): Mere liye kaise? Kanhi ye wo to nahi?



Fareed: Havas ko buddhi se baahir nikal liya karo! Tum ne mujhe ye dukan bikwane ke liye kaha tha na? Ye dukan he nahi tumhara sab kuch khareedne ayi hai.


Rajesh: Sab kuch! Lekin wo kyu? Ye to yahan ki lagti bhi nahi hai mujhe.


Fareed(Smile): Ye he to baat hai! Usse hamara sehar pasand aa gaya hai, Uss ka kuch likhe ka kaam hai, Usse yahan apna kaam set karna hai aur uss ki team ker liye kuch ghar chahiye, Ye paisa bhi zada de gi.



Fareed ki baat sun ker Rajesh khush ho gaya, Usse to pehle he sab kuch baich ker Manali se jaana tha, Lekin ab usse mote paise ate bhi dikhayi de rahe the.


Fareed: Ye Madam tumhari purani dukan bhi uss ke malik se khareed ayi hai! Uss ka kaam bhi set tha, Lekin itna paisa daikh ker usse baichne ke liye sochna he nahi para, Main ne samay per madam ko apne saath le liya aur yahan le aya hu, Ab aage tumhe saath dena ho ga.


Rajesh: Zaroor! Unhe baahir kyu khade kiya hai? Andar ane ke liye kaho.



Rajesh ki baat sun ker Fareed usse andar laane ke liye chala gaya, Rajesh ne ek kapda uthaya aur ek kursi table saaf karne laga, Ladki andar aa ker dukan daikhne lagi.



Rajesh: Come Come! This is my shop, Very good, Very Big, You like it.



Ladki(Chuckle): Ap hindi me baat ker sakte ho! Mujhe Hindi ati hai.



Rajesh: Hahaha, Sorry! Mujhe yaad he nahi raha, Ap aye baithiye, *Shout* Chotu madam ke liye kuch khaane ke liye le ker aa.


Rajesh ne andar dukan me kaam karne wale larke ko awaaz dete huwe kaha, Ladki dukan ko dhayan se daikhti rahi.


Ladki: Ye dukan bhi achi hai! Lekin ek Problem ho gi Mr.?


Rajesh: Rajesh! Kaisi problem?


Ladki: Paise mere paas sirf dollar cash me ho gye! Lekin mujhe ye sab jaldi chahiye to thoda issue ho sakta hai.


Rajesh(Grin): Ye konsa issue huwa? Ap cash do bhale gold do, Lekin thode paise zyada lag sakte hai.


Ladki: Haan paise zyada lag jaye koi baat nahi! Lekin mujhe kal tak dukan aur ghar chahiye, Agent bata rahe the ke ap ke ghar bhi khareed sakti hu, Kya hum unhe bhi abhi daikh sakte hai kya?


Rajesh: Yeah, Yeah! Ek minute main savari rok du ap ko, hum abhi ghar bhi daikh ate hai.


Upar ke paiso per haan hote he Rajesh khush ho gaya, Ladke ko dukan band karne ka keh ker wo ghar jaane ke liye taiyar hone laga.



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Manohar's House
Manali ~ 4:16 PM



*Fap*

*Fap*

*Fap*


Kamre ke darwaze ko lock ker ke ek ladka bed ke upar baitha apne lund ko hilate huwe muth maar raha tha, Ladke ka sharir bilkul kamzoor tha, Itna kamzoor ke uss ke sharir ki sabhi hadiye dikhayi de rahi thi.


Ladke ne haath me ek panty pakdi huwi thi, Usse naak ke paas ker ke sunghte huwe apne chote se lund ko hila raha tha, Uss ki saanse tez chal rahi thi.



Ladka(Moan): Ughh....Akki....Zor se aur zor se! Tez karo aur bhi tez karo.....huh!!!



Ladke ne takiye ke upar mobile rakha huwa tha, Screen per Akanksha ki tasveer ayi huwi thi, Tasveer me Akanksha ke kapde uss me sharir se chipke huwe the, Ye tasveer uss ke naha ker baahir ate huwe li gayi thi.


*Knock-Knock*



“Rahul! Andar kya ker raha hai? Rahul *Knock-Knock* Darwaza khol abhi ke abhi”



Kamre ke baahir darwaza khatkhatate huwe ek aurat ki awaaz ayi, Lekin andar Rahul uss ki awaaz ko ansuna karte huwe apne lund ko hilane me laga raha.


*Knock-Knock*


“Rahul!! Darwaza kholta hai ya main kisi se todne ke liye kahu?”


*Fap*

*Fap*

*Fap*


Rahul(Moaning): Akkki! Mera hone wala hai....Aise he tez...hnghh....Ughhh...Aghhh


Rahul wanhi bed ke upar baitha panty me jharne laga, Baahir se awaaze ati rahi lekin rahul badalon ke upar kanhi ghoom raha tha, Puri tarha se paani nikal dene ke baad Rahul bed se utra aur panty ko wanhi bed ke neeche chupa ker tissue se apna lund saaf karne laga.


“Rahul!”


Rahul(Shout): Arrey aa raha hu! Kitna chilane wali ho aj?


Rahul ne bed se uthate huwe pant pehni aur apna mobile uthate huwe darwaza khol diya, Baahir ek aurat chehre per black mask lagaye gusse se usse daikh rahi thi.


Rahul: Kya hai Mummy! Sone bhi nahi de sakti ho kya tum ab?


Sushmita: Sab pata hai mujhe jo tu soo raha tha! Apni sehat daikh raha hai kya? Sukh ker kaanta ho gaya hai, Lekin tu apni harkate nahi sudhare ga?


Rahul kamre se nikalte huwe Lounge me aa ker sofe per baith gaya, Rahul Sushmita aur Rajesh ka akela beta tha, Lekin wo bohat zada kamzoor tha.


Sushmita: Bhaag kahan raha hai? Bata de kab ye sab kaam chhode ga?



Rahul(Furious): Kaha to tha ke meri Akanksha se shadi karwa do! Lekin nahi ap ko to apni akar dikhani thi, Abhi agar wo yanha hoti to mujhe haath se kaam-



Sushmita: Bakwas band ker tu apni! Maa ke saamne kya bol raha hai kuch akal hai kya? Sab janti hu ke tu kaise chupke se usse daikhta raha hai, Lekin uss Manohar ki beti ko to mujhe maza chakhana he tha.



Rahul: Kya bol raha hu? Mujhe bhi sab pata hai ke ye face mask kyu lagaye jaate hai, Abhi bhi ap khud ko koi haseena samajhti ho, Lekin buddhi ho gayi ho ap!!


Sushmita: Ek rakh ker du gi na sab bakwas band ho jaye gi! Abhi bhi haseen hu main, Pata nahi meri akal per kya parda per gaya tha ke tere ganje baap se shaadi ke liye haan keh di.


Sushmita ka sharir bhara huwa tha, Uss ki sundarta bhale he kam ho lekin uss ke sharir ka har ang usse aakarshak mahila banata tha.


*Knock-Knock*


Baahir darwaze per knock huwi to sushmita Rahul ko wanhi baithe chhodte huwe darwaza kholne chali gayi.


Sushmita: Kon hai?


Rajesh(Outside): Sushmita darwaza kholo! Kuch mehman aye hai.


Rajesh ki awaaz sun ker Sushmita ne darwaza khol diya, Saamne apne pati ko sundar videshi ladki ke saath khade daikh ker wo chaunk gayi.


Sushmita: Ye kon hai Rajesh?


Ladki: Mera naam Anna Faris hai!


Anna ne khud aage haath badhate huwe kaha, Sushmita ne uss se haath mila liya, Lekin Anna ki khubsurati daikh usse andar he andar jalan bhi ho rahi thi.


Rajesh: Ab hamay andar ane do gi kya? Sab yanhi to nahi bata du ga na ab?


Rajesh ki baat sun ker Sushmita saamne se hat gayi, Dono ghar ke andar aa gye, Anna pure ghar ko daikhne lagi, Utne me Rajesh Sushmita ko side per le gaya.


Sushmita(Whisper): Ye kis ladki ko ghar le aye ho tum?



Rajesh: Batata hu meri Maa sabar ker! Ye ladki yahan kuch ghar aur dukanen khareedne ayi hai, Fareed ne mujhe bataya ke hamari market wali dukan bhi ye khareed chuki hai, Ladke bhej ker main ne pata bhi karwa liya, Asli rate se dugani keemat me dukan khareed ker ayi hai ye ladki, Agar hum yahan ka sab kuch Anna ko bech de to hum waapis mumbai me acha business shuru ker sakte hai.



Rajesh ki baat sun ker Sushmita bhi Khush ho gayi, Usse to pehle he yahan se nikalna tha, Yahan ke sabhi log Usse pasand nahi karte the, Lekin ab usse paisa bhi mil raha tha aur yahan se chhutkara bhi mil raha tha.



“Main ye ghar nahi chhodne wala! Kal ko agar Akki waapis ayi to main kaise milu ga uss se? Main nahi jaane wala”


Un dono ki baate paas khare Rahul ne sun li aur gusse se paon patakte huwe apne kamre me chala gaya, Rajesh ko gussa ane laga.


Rajesh: Samjha do apne ladle ko! Agar uss ne kuch harkat ki to mujhse bura koi nahi ho ga.


Sushmita: Ap Anna ko ghar dikhayen! Rahul khud he bhook lagne per baahir aa jaye ga.


Rajesh apna mood sahi karte huwe waapis Anna ke paas chala gaya, Anna ghar ko daikh ker khush ho rahi thi, Manohar ne apne ghar ko bohat ache se sajaya huwa to aur best quality ka furniture bhi lagwaya huwa tha.


Rajesh(Smile): Kaisa laga ap ko hamara ye chota sa ghar?


Anna: Bohat acha ghar hai! Main ye ghar aur dukan dono khareedne ke liye taiyar hu, Fareed ne mujhe dusra ghar bhi dikhaya hai, Kya wo bhi main khareed sakti hu kya?


Rajesh: Jahan sabhi samaan rakha huwa hai? Haan zaroor khareed sakti hai, Lekin wo ghar kyu chahiye? Wo to chota sa ghar hai.



Anna: Mujhe bhi ek alag ghar chahiye seprate work ke liye! Wo ghar perfect hai, Agar ap taiyar hai to hum kal he sab paperwork complete ker lete hai aur paiso ki baat ap Fareed se ker sakte hai.


Rajesh: Okay Okay! Main Uss se ker lu ga baat, Lekin ap sach me ye sab khareedne wali ho na?


Rajesh ko abhi bhi vishwas nahi ho raha tha, Aise he ek din Achanak usse sab kuch baichne ke liye koi mil gaya, Cafe ki to utni value bhi nahi thi, Lekin Fareed ka kehna tha ke wo usse market rate se bohat zada dilwa de ga.


Anna(Smile): Ap chinta nahi kariye! Kal ap ke saamne paise pehle aye gye, Uss ke baad sabhi paperwork ho ga


Rajesh(Smile): Ap kal mujhe call ker dena! Ye mera card rakhiye.


Rajesh ne apna Card nikal ker Anna ko de diya, Anna ne usse pakad ker apne paas rakh liya, Utne me Sushmita chaye aur kuch biscuits le ayi, Unhe khaate huwe Anna ne sab cheezo ke related kuch baate ki.


Anna: Theek hai main chalti hu! Ab kal mile gye, Ap apne sabhi papers ready rakhna, Hamari taraf se aj sab kuch taiyar ho jaye ga.



Chaye peene ke baad Anna ne uthte huwe kaha, Rajesh aur Sushmita usse baahir tak chhod aye, Rajesh ne usse chhod ker ane ki offer ki lekin Anna khud se chali gayi.




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Furniture Lane
Manali ~ 8:34 PM



*Tuck*

*Tuck*

*Tuck*


Raat ka andhera furniture lane me chane laga tha, Kuch dukanen band bhi honi shuru ho gayi thi, Wanhi kuch dukanon ke baahir log khare apne furniture per kaan ker rahe the to kuch log apna kaam karne ke baad apne haath saaf karne lage huwe the.


Anna beech me seedhe chalti huwi aage badh rahi thi, Log apna kaam chhod ker usse daikh bhi rahe the, Anna un sab ko nazarandaz karte huwe ek shop ke paas aa ker ruk gayi.


Ye Manohar ki purani dukan thi, Shutter giraya huwa tha, Lekin uss per lock nahi laga tha, Anna ne aage ho ker shutter uthaya aur andar chali gayi.


Andar aa ker Anna ne shutter waapis neeche ker diya, Dukan ke andar light chal rahi thi, Ye Manohar ki purani dukan thi, Anna andar ki taraf chali gayi.



Anna: Ap ka diya huwa kaam pura ho gaya hai! Rajesh kal sabhi papers sign ker de ga.


Anna ke saamne daikhte huwe kaha, Uss ke saamne he ek kursi ke upar Aarav baitha huwa tha, Uss ke paas he Real Estate Agent Fareed baitha huwa tha.


Un ke paas he ek taraf Akanksha khari ek kone me rakhi chair ko daikh rahi thi, Ye he wo jagha thi jahan uss ke Papa baitha karte the, Akanksha ki aankhe bheegi huwi thi lekin wo khud ko rone se rok rahi thi.


Fareed(Smile): Ye acha ho gaya! Rajesh ko kuch shak bhi nahi huwa, Main ne sabhi Papers bhi taiyar ker liye hai, Kuch din ka process hai aur sab kuch Akanksha beti ke naam ho jaye ga.


Akanksha ne apna naam Anna Faris me badalwa diya tha, Faris Zoe ka surname tha, Ye uss ne apne chacha se bachne ke liye kiya tha, Ye he uss ke liye acha ho gaya, Aarav ne Malia ko Anna ke naam ke saath wahan bhej diya tha.


Fareed Manohar ka ek purana Customer aur dost tha, Uss ki madad se unhone ye plan banaya aur Malia ko Rajesh se introduce karwa diya.


Aarav ne apne paas rakhe bag ke andar se kuch Paise nikal ker Fareed ke saamne rakh diye, Fareed paise daikh ker khush ho gaya lekin wo khud ko unhen uthane se rok raha tha.


Fareed: Arrey ye kya ker rahe ho? Ye sab main ne sirf Akanksha beti ko uss ka sab kuch wapis dilwane ke liye kiya hai, Paise leta acha thodi lagu ga.



Aarav: Ap ye paise deserve karte ho! Ab har koi to kisi ke liye ye sab nahi karta na? Hume ap ki achayi per pura bharosa hai, Lekin ye hamari taraf se ek uphar ke roop me rakhe le ap.


Aarav ne paise uss ki taraf khiskate huwe kaha, Ab saamne se ati lakshmi ko to Fareed bhi mana nahi karne wala tha, Uss ne aage ho ker paise pakad he liye.




[Alpha Presence Activated]



Aarav: Lekin yaad rakhiye ga! Kisi ko bhi ye sab pata nahi chalna chahiye, Mujhe ap per pura bharosa hai, Lekin ye bharosa tutna nahi chahiye.


Aarav ne halki presence se usse pressure me daal diya, Lekin utne me he Fareed ki phatne lagi, Paise uthate huwe wo baahir bhaag gaya.


Aarav usse jaate huwe daikhta raha, Uss ke peeche he ek titli urte huwe baahir chali gayi, Aarav ko uss per bharosa tha lekin wo koi risk nahi le raha tha.


Aarav: Ab tum rest ker sakti ho! Kal se tumhe bohat kaam karna hai.


Malia khari ho gayi, Aarav ko abhi bhi uss ke chehre per laali dikhayi de rahi thi, Aarav shuru me to usse normal reaction samajh raha tha lekin ab usse ye kuch alag lagne laga tha.


Aarav ke orders follow karte huwe Malia wanhi rakhe bed per lait ker rest karne lagi, Uss ki body ab human body thi, Kitsune ki body ki tarha ye body bina thake kaam nahi ker sakti thi, Body ko proper rest chahiye hota tha.


Lekin ye Malia ko khud kabhi kabhi samajh nahi ati, Usse wanhi araam karte chhodte huwe Aarav wanhi khadi Akanksha ke paas chala gaya, Akanksha ke saath khade hote huwe wo bhi ussi kone ki taraf daikhne laga.


Akanksha(Breaking): Hume ye sach me karna chahiye kya? Bhayia Papa ko apne bhai se bohat pyaar tha, Unhe ye daikh ker acha nahi lage ga.


Aarav: Last decision tumhara he hai! Tum unhen maaf ker sakti ho, Lekin kya tumhe sach me lagta hai ke wo shakhs tumhari daya deserve karta hai?


Akanksha koshish ker rahi thi bada dil karne ki, Lekin usse bohat gehre zakhm mile the, Usse agar un per kuch aa rahi thi to wo daya nahi sirf Krodh tha, Lekin apne Papa ke liye wo unhen maaf bhi karna chahti thi.


Aarav ne usse kandhe se pakadte huwe apne saath laga liya, Akanksha ka sabar ka bandh bhi toot gaya aur wo rone lagi, Aarav usse thaame khamosh khada raha.


Akanksha(Sobbing): Main nirnay nahi le sakti bhayia! Kya galat kiya tha main ne? Chacha ji mujhe apne bhai ki bachi samajh ker thoda pyaar to sakte the na? Phir kyu mujhe ye nirnay lene per majboor ker rahe hai wo? Akhir kya zaroorat thi Papa ko itne kharab mosam me baahir jaane ki? Akhir kyu?




Akanksha buri tarha se roo rahi thi, Lekin usse thaame khada Aarav ek gehri soch me doobne laga tha-


Aarav: Akanksha! Manohar Uncle ki death kaise huwi thi?


Aarav ne Akanksha ko apne saamne khade karte huwe pucha, Akanksha yun Achanak Aarav ko aise daikh ker chaunk gayi, Lekin Aarav bilkul serious ho ker uss se puch raha tha.


Akanksha: Un ka accident huwa tha! Uss din mosam bohat kharab tha, Saamne se aa rahe ek truck ne un ki Car ko hit ker diya, Investigation huwi thi truck driver nashe me tha aur usse saza bhi mili hai.




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Manohar's House
Manali ~ 10:33 PM



*Click*


Sushmita darwaza kholte huwe apne bedroom me aa gayi, Uss ke saamne he Rajesh cupboard khole documents baahir nikal raha tha.


Sushmita(Smile): Rajesh! Hum sach me ameer hone wale hai kya?


Rajesh ne uss ki taraf daikha aur muskura diya, Sushmita peeche se aa ker uss ki kamar se lag gayi aur apne haath uss ki chhati per fairane lagi.


Rajesh: Kya ker rahi ho? Abhi mujhe sabhi kagzat nikalne do, kal kaam aye gye.


Sushmita(Whisper): Ye kal ker lena! Lekin abhi mujhe tumhare paas rehne ko dil chah raha hai.


Rajesh ko bhi garmi nikale bohat samay ho gaya tha, Documents wanhi chorte huwe wo bhi ghoom gaya aur apni biwi ko chumne laga, dono khisakte huwe peeche bed per chale gye.



Rajesh(Whisper): Rahul kahan hai?


Sushmita: Usse mana ker ayi hu! Abhi thoda gusse me hai, Lekin jaane ke liye maan gaya hai wo.


Sushmita ne haath neeche le jaate huwe Rajesh ki pant utar di, Rajesh ka 5 inch ka lund baahir aa gaya, Susmita usse haath me pakad ker hilane lagi.



Rajesh(Moan): Ye nahi karo Please! Seedhe andar le lo.


Sushmita ne bina kuch kahe apni shalwar ko utaar diya, Neeche uss ne kuch bhi nahi pehna tha, Rajesh ka lund apni chut per set karte huwe wo usse ek baar me andar le li.


Sushmita(Moan): Ahhh...Ugh...Huh!


*Thap*

*Thap*

*Thap*


Sushmita tezi se upar neeche hone lagi, Neeche Rajesh ki saanse tez hone lagi, Sushmita ko abhi 2 minute he huwe the uchalte huwe ke Rajesh ne lambi saanse lete huwe paani chhod diya.


*Gasping*


Rajesh aankhe band kiye lambi saanse lene laga, Usse pata tha ke Sushmita abhi santusht nahi huwi, Ye he wajha thi ke un ke beech sex kam ho gaya tha.


Rajesh ne thodi aankhe khol ker daikha to sushmita muskura rahi thi, Bina kuch kahe rajesh ke upar se uthte huwe wo bathroom chale gayi.


Rajesh(Smile): Sahi kehte hai log! Paisa badi kutti cheez hai, Saala gadhe ko bhi baap bana sakta hai.


Rajesh hans diya ye sochte huwe, Usse pata tha ke Sushmita bathroom me paani nikalne gayi hai, Kuch der baad he sushmita bhi baahir aa gayi, Rajesh ne bhi bathroom ja ker khud ko saaf kiya aur waapis aa ker Sushmita ke saath bistar per lait ker soo gaya.


Subha huwi aur Rajesh sabhi documents le ker intezar karne laga, Sushmita ne usse aur rahul ko nashta de diya, Rahul ka abhi bhi muh bana huwa tha.


11 baje ke kareeb Fareed ki call ayi, Sabhi documents lete huwe sub-registrar ke office me chala gaya, Usse wahan Anna aur Fareed khade dikh gye, Lekin un ke saath ek aur bhi naya chehra tha.


Anna ne usse pehle ek taraf le jaate huwe paise dikhaye, Ye ek private room tha, Anna ki request per usse diya gaya tha, Rajesh ne dhayan se sabhi note check karte huwe gin liye.


Usse asli aur nakli dollar bills ki pehchan thi, Sabhi note check karne ke baad uss ki aankho me chamak aa gayi, Ye sabhi uss ka hone wala tha.


Anna ne sabhi Papers taiyar kiye huwe the, Sabhi necessary stamps aur baaki sab kuch, Due aur Furniture sabhi Anna khud bharne wali thi, Registrar ke paas ja ker unhone sabhi property transfer ka process shuru ker diya.


Rajesh ne khushi se sab Papers sign ker diye, Rajesh ka kaam aj he pura hone wala tha, Shaam ke 5 baj gye pura process khatam hote huwe.


Fareed: Mubaraka Rajesh Bhai! Ab to ameer insaan ban gye ho ap bhi.



Fareed ate huwe Rajesh ke gale lag gaya, Market rate se dugana paisa kama liya tha Aj Rajesh ne, Upar se sabhi furniture aur baki sab bhi saath bik gaya tha, Tax ki bhi usse koi chinta nahi thi.


Rajesh: Sach me yaar tu ne khush ker diya! Ek minute ruk.


Rajesh ne bag me se kuch paise nikal ker Fareed ke haath me de diye, Fareed ki fees aur upar 20,000 Rajesh ne usse de diya.


Rajesh: Ye rakh apne paas aur bacho ko kuch khila dena! Agar kabhi tujhe zarorat ho to mujhe batana, Kal Delhi waapis jaane wala hu, Wahan kabhi bhi aye to mere paas he rukna.



Fareed: Haan, Ap to Delhi se ho na? Ap ka to wanhi waapis jaane ka dil chahe ga na!! *Laugh*


Rajesh: Haan, Dil to wanhi tha! Sabhi dost aur connection udhar he hai, Yahan to sirf Bhayia ki family sambhalne aya tha, Lekin shayad Akanksha beti ko hum pasand nahi aye.


Fareed: Kya he ker sakte hai! Waise Manohar bhayia ko huwa kya tha.


Rajesh(Hesitate): Umm...wo..! Un ka accident huwa tha na? Yaar pata to hai tumhe, Ek truck wala hit ker gaya tha unhe, Usse saza bhi to huwi thi.



Fareed: Haan, Main bhool he gaya tha! Chale ap late ho rahe ho gye, Waise itne paise dhayan se le ker jaana, Aj kal halat ache nahi hai.



Rajesh: fikar nahi karo! Aj meri gun mere paas hai, Kisi ne agar ye paiso ke baare me socha bhi to, dhiskiyaon!!



Rajesh ne ungliyon se gun ka ishara karte huwe kaha, Fareed bhi hans diya, Lekin un ke peeche he Malia ke saath Aarav khamoosh khada huwa tha.


Tinkerbell: [Ye aadami jhoot bol raha hai!]




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Manali ~ 10:40 PM



Rajesh: Jaldi se baahir samaan car me rakh lo! Hume abhi nikalna hai.


Rajesh paiso se bhara bag dhayan se car me chupate huwe bola, Sushmita aur Rahul bhi apne bag uthaye baahir aa gye, Unhone waise he ghar ko lock laga diya.


Sushmita: Itni raat ko nikalne ki kya zaroorat thi? Hum subha bhi to ja sakte the na?


Rajesh: Abhi bohat se logo ko pata hai kw ghar me kitna paisa hai! Raat ko bina kisi ko bhanak lage nikal jate hai, Kal he pura paisa bank me daal du ga.


Sushmita ko bhi samajh aa gayi, Aage uss ne bhi kuch nahi pucha aur samaan car me rakhne lagi, Un ka zada samaan nahi tha.


Rajesh: Andar check ker liya hai na? Kya pata kuch keemti samaan rakha na reh gaya ho!!


Sushmita: Subha se sab kuch check ker liya hai! Aisa kuch keemti nahi bacha, Bhabhi ki sabhi jewellery bhi rakh li hai.


Sushmita ki baat sun ker rajesh khush ho gaya, Rahul peeche baith gaya, Sushmita Rajesh ke saath passenger seat per baith gayi, Rajesh ne Car aage badha di.


Sushmita: Rajesh ap mujhe wahan ja ker nayi jewellery banwa ker dena! Ye bhabhi ke purane set mujhe pasand nahi hai.


Rajesh: Tumhare liye to puri dukan khareed du ga! Lekin pehle ye paisa safely bank me daalu ga, Halat sach me ache nahi hai.


Rajesh ki baat sun ker Sushmita bhi khush ho gayi, Usse itne samay ke baad aiyashi karne ka mauka mil raha tha, Dono aage baithe future ki baate ker rahe the.



Wanhi un ke peeche baitha un ka beta apni socho me gum tha, Haath me phone pakde Rahul Akanksha ki wohi tasveer daikh raha tha.


Rahul(Whisper): Kitna intezar kiya tumhara! Lekin tumhe mujhse door bhaag ker najane kya milta hai, Lekin ab aur nahi agar tum meri nahi hona chahati to tumhe kisi aur ka hone layak bhi nahi chhodunga.


Rahul ne kuch group aur facebook pages join ker liye, Akanksha ki tasver ko wo un me phaikne wala tha, Lekin ab tak wo khud ko rok raha tha, Ye umeed karte huwe ke shayad Akanksha waapis aa jaye gi.


Lekin ab wo wanha se ja raha tha to wo umeed bhi nahi rahi thi, Rahul ne page kholte huwe picture select ker li aur upload ka button dabane laga.


*Screeeech*


Rajesh ne ekdum se car ki brake laga di, Rahul aage seat se lagte huwe bacha-


Rahul: Papa kya ker rahe hai Ap? Aise ko-


Rahul chilate huwe aage huwa to usse Car ke saamne andhere me koi khada dikhai diya, Kohare ki wajha se vyakti saaf dikh nahi raha tha, Road ke beech me wo vyakti khara tha.


Wanhi uss ke saath he 2 laal aankhe bhi dikh rahi thi-


Rahul(Frightened): Papa, Ye kon hai?


Rajesh(Furious): Kon hai ye mujhe pata nahi karna! Lekin agar ye mere raaste se nahi hata to aj ye yanhi marne wala hai.


*Vroom*


Rajesh ne accelerator dabate huwe gear daalte huwe car aage badha di, Usse abhi kuch aur nahi sujh raha tha, Usse sirf apna paisa bachana tha, Uss ke saath baithi biwi aur beta usse dar ki nazron se daikh rahe the.


Sushmita(Scream): Rajesh!!


Rajesh(Yell): Shut Up!!!


Rajesh bina kuch sune car aage badhata raha, Lekin saamne khara vyakti apni jagha se hil bhi nahi raha tha, Distance kam hote daikh ab Rajesh bhi darne laga tha.


*Pop*


Ekdum se car ke sabhi tyre phat gye, Car ka balance kharab ho gaya, Rajesh ne usse sambhalna chaha per Car ruk he nahi rahi thi.


*Screeeech*


*Booom*


Car seedhe ek ped se takara gayi, Rajesh ka sar steering wheel per laga, Lekin seat belt lage hone se unhe koi bada ghaav nahi aya, Rajesh uthte huwe tezi ke saath car se baahir aa gaya.



Rajesh(Scream): Madarchod!!


*Bang*

*Bang*

*Bang*

*Bang*


Rajesh ne car se nikalte he gun nikalte huwe uss insani saye ki taraf goliyan chalani shuru ker di, Lekin un me se ek bullet bhi usse chhu bhi nahi saki, Ye daikh ker Rajesh bhi chaunk gaya.


Rajesh ka nishana acha tha, Aise andhere me bhi usse nishana lagane me utni dikkat nahi honi thi, Lekin usse vishwas nahi ho raha tha ke ek bhi bullet saye ko nahi lagi.


*Bang*


*Clang*


Rajesh ne ek aur goli chalayi, Lekin ab ki baar us ne dhayan rakha, Usse andhere me ek talwar dikhayi di, Ye daikh ker Rajesh dar gaya ke bullet ko saamne wala ek talwar se rok raha hai.


*Slash*


Ek pal me saamne wala saya gayab ho gaya, Rajesh usse dhoond he raha tha ke usse dard mehsoos hone laga, Rajesh ne aage daikh to uss ka haath cut chuka tha.


Rajesh(Scream): Aghhhhhh....Mera Haath!! Ughhhhhhh.....B-Bachao....Mera haath.



Rajesh wanhi kalayi pakde baith gaya, Haath se dabate huwe wo khoon rokana chah raha tha, Lekin uss ke haath se khoon nikalte ja raha tha.


Rajesh ne upar daikha to usse kaala libas pehne chehre per daravna mask lagaye Aarav khara dikhayi diya, Usse daikhte he Rajesh ki bachi huwi himmat bhi javab dene lagi.


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*Wooosh*


“Ahhhh”

Aarav ke peeche se Sushmita ne ek wrench se usse maarna chaha, Lekin Aarav ne usse araam se dodge karte huwe Sushmita ko baalo se pakad liya.



Rajesh(Crying): Madarchod!! Kya bigada hai hum ne tera? Kyu ker raha hai ye sab?


Aarav ne Sushmita ko wanhi Rajesh ke paas phaink diya, Sushmita bhi buri tarha se seham gayi, Aarav aage hote huwe wanhi baith gaya.


Aarav: Karma! Tere kiye sabhi papon ka Karma hu main, Baith ker apne sabhi papon ke baare me soch le.



Rajesh(Groans): Ughh, Kya bigada hai tera main ne? Kyu ker raha hai ye sab?


Aarav: Apne bhai ko maarte samah socha tha kya? Uss ne kya bigada tha tera?


Ek pal me Rajesh ki aatma kaanp uthi, Usse laga tha ke kisi ko bhi ye nahi pata, Lekin abhi uss ke saamne koi Insan usse ye bata raha tha ke wo pakda gaya hai.


Rajesh: M-Main ne kab-



Aarav: Main yahan court room me nahi baitha! Yahan koi safai nahi deni, Yahan ka judge sirf main hu, Aur tumhe sazaye moat di jaati hai.


Aarav ne apne haatho se gun banate huwe Rajesh ke sar per rakh di, Sushmita aur Rajesh dono heraan ho gye.


Aarav: This is gonna fucking Hurt! Bang.



[Wind Bullet]


*Pop*


Rajesh ke sar ke kisi tarbooz ki tarha chithade ud gaye, Ye daikh Sushmita ki Aankhen khul gayi, Usse itna bada jhatka laga ke uss ki awaaz bhi nahi nikal rahi thi.


*Grooowwwwrrrrr*


Aarav ke peeche Shadow ne dahara to Aarav ne ghoom ker daikha, Car ke andar abhi bhi Rahul chupa huwa tha, Shadow ne danto se usse pakada aur ghasitate huwe Aarav ke paas la ker gira diya.


Rahul ki bhi halat kharab ho gayi thi, Wo Seedhe Aarav ke kadmon me gir gaya.


Rahul(Frightened): Please mujhe mat marna! Please mujhe chhod do, Main kisi ko kuch bhi nahi bataunga, Please mujhe jaane do.


Aarav ne usse dhayan se daikha, Wanhi zameen per uss ka mobile gira huwa tha, Uss per abhi bhi Akanksha ki tasveer Select ki huwi thi.


Aarav(Sigh): Huh! Beta baap se kitna he alag ho sakta tha? Hai to tu bhi uss ka khoon he na.


*Thud*


Aarav ne ek laat Rahul ke muh per maar di, Rahul hava me Uthte huwe wanhi gir kee behosh ho gaya.


Sushmita(Scream): Rahul! Main tumhare paon parti hu, Mere bache ko kuch nahi karna, Usse jaane do.


Sushmita wanhi Aarav ke kadmon me gir gayi, Aarav dobara neeche baith gaya, Sushmita ko baalo se pakarte huwe Aarav ne usse utha diya.



Aarav: tch tch! Tumhe abhi kisi aur ki nahi khud ki chinta karni chahiye, Kyu ke tumhare pati ki tarha tumhe asaan maut nahi dene wala main, Bohat shauk hai na tumhe malkin ban'nne ka? Ab tumhe pata lagne wala hai ke gulam kaise rehte hai.



[Unique Ability (Soul Binding) Activated]


Aarav ne haath aage kiya to uss ke haath se soul thread nikalne laga, Dhaga seedhe sushmita ke gale per bandh gaya.


Sushmita(Chocked): Ugh...Ye kya ker rahe ho? Mera dam ghut raha hai, Ughhhh.


Aarav: Aj se tum meri Slave ho! Agar tum ne kuch bhi hoshiyari karne ki sochi bhi to ye thread tumhe itni takleef de gi ke tumhe maut achi lagne lage gi.


Sushmita wanhi gir ker tarapne lagi, Lekin usse ye takleef sirf mehsoos ho rahi thi, Ye usse maarne wali nahi thi, Soul Clan ki ye sab se secret technique me se ek thi.


Sushmita tarap rahi thi, Ye tarap thread owner ke liye nafrat se kasti thi, Sushmita ke andar abhi Aarav ke liye nafrat bhari huwi thi, Usse uss nafrat ko khatam karna parna tha.


*Grrrr*


Shadow peeche se thoda guraya to Aarav ghooma, Shadow Rahul ke upar khara huwa tha, Uss ke paas circle ban'nna shuru ho gaya tha.


Aarav: Haan, Tumhare waapis jaane ka samay ho gaya hai! Hmm, Aisa karo ye ladka apne saath le jao, Ye ladka agar circle survive ker gaya to tum isse rakh sakte ho.


Aarav ye ek experiment ker raha tha, Usse abhi tak Summoning ki utni knowledge nahi thi, Usse Summoning Ability ko powerful karne ke liye usse aur ache se samajhne ki zaroorat thi.



Shadow ne Aarav ke order follow karte huwe Rahul ke upar claws rakh diye, Circle gehra hota gaya aur agle he lamhe wahan se Shadow ke saath Rahul bhi gayab tha.


“Master!!!”


Malia bhi wahan aa gayi, Uss ke haath me bodi pakdi huwi thi, Aarav ne Sushmita ki taraf daikha to wo behosh ho chuki thi.


Aarav: Rajesh ki body ko yahan se le jao! Tumhe kya karna hai tumhe pata he hai na?


Malia: Yes Master!


Malia ne aage hote huwe Rajesh ko bodi me daala aur usse uthaye wahan se chali gayi, Aarav ne car ke andar se paiso ka bag nikal liya.


Paise nikal ker Aarav Sushmita ke paas chala gaya, Sushmita behosh zameen per giri huwi thi.



Aarav: Uthne ka samay ho gaya hai! Abhi tumhe mere liye bohat kuch karna hai, Taiyar ho jao apni saza ke liye!!
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