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Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

Who are your two favorite male characters in this story?


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UPDATE 64 ~
(PAST ENEMIES)




Level Up Tower
Floor 28th ~ 9:59 PM


*Slash*


Akansha aage badhte huwe apni sword se skeletons ko tukro me bant rahi thi, Uske saath he Mia aur Malia bhi raasta clear ker rahi thi.


*Gasping*


Mia ki saanse fulne lagi thi, 9th floor per rest karne ke baad wo teeno he lagatar lar rahi thi aur unke saath aye dono ladke sirf bags uthaye chal rahe the.


Ye baat Mia ko irritate bhi ker rahi thi, Uski teekhi nazre baar baar Aarav ko nishana bana rahi thi, Lekin Aarav usse bilkul ignore ker raha tha.


“Duck!!!”


Malia ki awaaz sunte he Mia neeche ho gayi, Neeche hote he uske upar se Malia ka hammer ghooma aur uske peeche se ate skeletons ko todte huwe aage badh gaya.


Malia: Tum theek ho na?


Mia: Yes, Thanks!


Lagbhag sabhi skeletons khatam ho chuke the, Malia ne ek baar check kiya aur sab ko aage badhne ka keh diya, Aarav aur Tarun dono he loot utane lage.


Mia: Umm, Malia! Tumhe nahi lagta ke Aarav ko bhi hamare saath monsters se ladna chahiye? Hum Literally yahan aadhe samay me pohanch sakte the.


Malia: Aarav as a supporter aya hai! Usko payment bhi supporter wali he mile gi, Aise me hum usse ladne ke liye nahi keh sakte.


Mia ke saamne Malia Aarav ko uske naam se pukar rahi thi.


Mia: Lekin kyu? Aarav lar sakta hai, Ye hum ne last time daikh liya tha, Aisa bhi nahi hai ke hum teeno pura tower khud se climb ker sakti hai, Hamay aur bhi fighters chahiye.


Malia: Uski zaroorat nahi hai! Aarav abhi sirf Akansha ko train ker raha hai, Lekin agar baat bigadne lagi to Aarav beech me zaroor aye ga.


Aarav ne ye story apni condition chupane ke liye banayi thi, Lekin ye sach bhi tha ke Aarav Akansha ko train ker raha tha, Mia ko bhi Akansha ke andar kaafi changes dikh rahe the.


Last time helpless dikhne wali Akansha ab lar rahi thi aur saath me improve bhi ker rahi thi.


Lekin wanhi dusri taraf Mia ko Tarun bhi kaafi alag lag raha tha, Lekin usme kuch bhi positive change nahi dikh raha tha, Mia ne pehle bhi Tarun ke saath kuch raids ki huwi thi.


Lekin pehli baar usse Tarun itna shaant daikhne ko mil raha tha, Lekin Mia ka uske saath kuch lena dena nahi tha wo sirf usse observe ker rahi thi.


“Akansha”


Akansha ko pukarte huwe Aarav uske paas chala gaya, Akansha bhi ruk ker usko daikhne lagi.


Akansha: Kya huwa?


Aarav ne bina kuch kaahe uske kandhe per haath rakh diya, Akansha ke gaal ek dum se tamatar ki tarha laal ho gye, Uski aankhe khul gayi.


Akansha sab ki taraf daikhne lagi, Teeno unhi dono ko daikh rahe the, Ye daikh ker Akansha aur bhi laal ho gayi.


Akansha(Flustered): A-Aarav, Y-Y-Ye kya ker-


Aarav: Shhh ~


Aarav ne usse chup rehne ke liye kaha aur uske kandhe se kapra hata ker daikhne laga, Akansha ke kandhe per ek ghav bana huwa tha.


Aarav: Ye kya hai?


Akansha(Frowns): Y-Ye larte samay shayad-


Aarav: Tumhe kitni baar batana ho ga? Khud ko itna push nahi karo, Sirf larna he important nahi hai, Larte huwe khud ko bhi bachane ki koshish kiya karo.


Aarav ne bag se ek healing potion nikala aur Akansha ko de diya, Akansha ne sar neeche kiye potion le ker pee liya.


Akansha ko potion dene ke baad Aarav ne kuch aur Recovery potion nikale aur bakiyo ko bhi de diye, Phir loot uthane ke baad sabhi aage badhne lage.



Raaste me unhe kuch aur skeletons mile, Lekin unhe kuch khaas dikat nahi huwi aur kuch he chalne ke baad 29th Floor ke liye gate unke saamne aa gaya.


Akansha: Finally!


Gate daikh ker Akansha ne sakoon ka saans liya, Sabhi gate ke andar jaane lage, Sirf Malia aur Aarav peeche reh gye.


Aarav: Nervous?


Malia(Nod): Hmm ~


Aarav: I can understand! Yahan tum ne kitne samay bitaya hai, Ab waapis ana kuch weird to lage ga he.



Aarav normally itni baate nahi karta, Lekin uske emotions waapis ane ke baad usne baate karni shuru ker di thi, Ye daikh ker Malia ko khushi bhi huwi ke uske master ko uski itna chinta hai.


Aarav: Let's go!


Aarav aur Malia dono ek saath gate ke andar chale gye, Gate ke dusri taraf ate he dono ruk gye, Unke saamne kuch log Tent lagaye baithe huwe the.


Aarav: Ye sab kya hai?


Mia: 29th Floor ka guardian ab yanha nahi hai! Ek naya guardian decide hone tak kuch player's yanha camp karne wale hai.


Aarav: Lekin micha- Mera matlab Association Leader ke paas to guardian banane ke liye aur bhi beast hai na? Phir decide karne me itna samay?


Malia: Aise kisi ko bhi guardian nahi bana sakte! Guardian ko pehle tower se accept hona padta hai.


Aarav: Accept?


Malia: Yes, Guardian banane ka idea sirf Association Leader ka nahi tha! Ye tower ki ek requirement bhi thi, Har guardian ko tower ke andar kuch special power bhi milti hai, Lekin uske liye pehle ek suitable guardian bhi hona chahiye.


Aarav: Special Powers?


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Level Up Tower
Player's Association Building ~ 8:39 PM




“Sir!”


Caroline ne peeche se Michael ko pukara to Michael ne uski taraf daikha, Caroline ke chehre per fikar ke bhav the.


Aarav ke jaane ke baad bhi Michael udhar he khara huwa tha, Lekin sirf Michael he nahi, Charcoal bhi udhar he neeche baitha huwa tha.



Gusse se bhare rehne wala Charcoal bilkul shaant baitha huwa tha, Michael ne usko aise pehli baar daikha tha.



Caroline(Hesitating): Sir! Ap theek hai na?


Caroline ne hickichate huwe pucha, Alag bartav karne wala aj sirf Charcoal he nahi tha, Caroline ne Michael ko bhi pehli baar itna tense daikha tha.


Michael(Sigh): Huh! Yup, I'm alright.


Michael ne chehre per ek feeki muskurahat sajaye kaha.


Caroline: I'm sorry Sir! Ye sab mere kaaran huwa hai, Agar main ne ap ko pehle he Aarav ke baar-


Michael: Nahi! Tumhare pehle batane se bhi kuch bhi badalne wala nahi tha.


Caroline: Lekin-


Michael: Caroline! Tumhe pata hai kya ke Charcoal kahan se aya hai?


Michael ne charcoal ki taraf daikhe huwe sawal kiya, Caroline bhi achanak aye sawal se heran ho gayi.


Caroline: Nahi sir! Hum ne pehli baar charcoal ko ap ke saath he daikha tha.


Michael: Hmm! Charcoal ko main level up tower se nikal ker laya tha, Lekin pehli baar charcoal ko main level up tower nahi, Balki Tutorial tower me mila tha.



Caroline: Huh?


Michael: Haan, Tutorial tower! Charcoal tutorial tower ke guardian Hexarion ka bacha hai.


Caroline ye pehli baar sun rahi thi, Usse andaza tha ke Charcoal khaas hai, Lekin itna khaas hai ye usse bhi nahi pata tha.


Michael: Tum ne suna he ho ga ke last party ki last fight Hexarion se huwi thi?


Caroline(Nod): Yes! Aur Yoo-Jung ne Hexarion ko khatam kiya tha.


Michael(Smirk): Lekin mujhe aisa nahi lagta!


Caroline(Shocked): What? Lekin kyu?


Caroline ke chehre per herani ke bhav aa gye, Yoo-Jung ka naam ab bohat karanon se famous tha, Lekin uska asli naam shuru dragon slayer ke title se huwa tha.


Lekin Michael uske title ko bilkul jhoota keh raha tha, Ye Caroline ke liye ek bada shock tha.


Michael: Dragons ek bohat special species hai! Sabhi dragons ek dusre se bilkul alag hote hai, Lekin unke andar ek baat samany hai.


Caroline: Kya?


Michael: Fearless! Sabhi dragon nidar hote hai, Badi se badi chunauti ke saamne bhi Dragons kabhi nahi darte.


Caroline: Aisa kyu?



Michael: Dragons ek soch ke saath aage badhte hai! Kuch bhi unki Maa Hexarion se zyada shaktishali nahi hai, Unhe kuch bhi hexarion se zyada nahi darata.


Caroline(Thinking): Hmm!


Michael: Lekin ab agar ek din wohi shaktishali hexarion kisi ke haath maara jaye to Dragons ka kya reaction ho ga?


Dragons ke liye Hexarion sab se zyada shaktishali tha, Lekin agar koi ussi hexarion ko hara de to unke liye wo shakhs shaktishali ban jaye ga, Ye baat Caroline bhi samajh sakti thi.


Michael: Main ne ek baar ye theory test bhi karni chahi thi! Bohat kehne ke baad ek baar Yoo-Jung ko charcoal ke saamne kiya tha, Kyu ke Charcoal Hexarion ki maut ke samay tower me he tha to mujhe laga ke wo Yoo-Jung ko pehchan le ga, Lekin uska reaction kuch bhi alag nahi tha.


Michael ne Hexarion ki taraf daikh aur aage kehna shuru kiya.



Michael: Lekin aj ka Charcoal ka reaction bilkul he alag tha! Bilkul waisa reaction jo main ne Yoo-Jung ke liye expect kiya tha, Agar mera shak sahi hai to Hexarion ko maarne wali Yoo-Jung nahi Aarav tha.


Caroline(Gasp): Huh!


Caroline ladkhadate huwe peeche ho gayi, Usse ek bada dhachka laga tha, Michael bhi kam heraan nahi tha, Uske bhi hosh ude huwe the.


Caroline: A-Ab hamay kya karna chahiye?


Michael(Sigh): Huh! I don't know, Hamay nahi pata ke Aarav kya chahta hai, Lekin uska kuch to Aim hai, He's busy building his own army right now! Uske kuch warrior's taiyar bhi hai, Kuch he samay me uski Army taiyar ho jaye gi aur phir, we're gonna have a massive war on our hands.


Caroline(Frowns): War?


Michael(Nod): Yes, War! Lekin ye War koi sadharan War nahi hone wali, Abhi Aarav utna strong nahi hai, Lekin hamay koshish karni chahiye ke uski jung me hum uske saamne na ho, Uske liye hamay abhi uska saath dena ho ga jab usse hamari zaroorat hai.


Caroline: Lekin sir ye to gala-


Michael: Galat hai? Shayad haan, Lekin agar ye karne se dharti ka santulan bana reh sakta hai to main ye galat rah chalne ke liye bhi taiyar hu.


Caroline: (Silence)



Michael(Sigh): We can't afford to make him our enemy, seriously! It's just not gonna end well for us.


****

Miracle Hospital
Mumbai ~ 7:47 PM



“Yes! Aarav Singh”


Miracle hospital me Vansh ek office me baitha huwa tha, Abhi doctor kamre me nahi tha, Vansh kisi se phone per baat ker raha tha.


Vansh: Main ne uski history pata lagane ki bohat koshish ki hai! Lekin mere haath kuch bhi khaas nahi laga.......Kya matlab ke ye tumhara kaam nahi hai?......Uske paas meri tarha he inventory hai, Hum usko underestimate nahi ker sakte......Fuck You!......Umm, I'm sorry lekin kya please tum log mere liye ye ker sakte ho?......Yes, Sirf ek baar ye usse bata do, Uske baad sab sahi ho jaye ga....Hmm, Theek hai.....Thank You, Bye!


Vansh ne call disconnect ki aur chair per peeche ho ker baith gaya, Uske chehre chirchira pan dikhayi de raha tha, Ab tak uski aankhe ke saamne Aarav ki inventory ka drishya dikh raha tha.


Inventory he to Vansh ko bakiyo se alag banati thi, Lekin ab kisi aur ke paas bhi waisi he powers daikh ker usse gussa ana banta tha.


Vansh(Frustrated): Fuck! Kon ho tum Aarav Singh?


*Click*


Abhi Vansh apni socho me he dooba huwa tha ke darwaza khula aur ek lady lab coat pehne huwe andar aa gayi, Usko daikhte he Vansh ke chehre per rahat ke bhav aye.


Lady bina Vansh ko daikhe seedhe apni seat per baith gayi aur Vansh ki file ko daikhne lagi.


Lady: Long time Mr.Vansh! Hamara last session I think 8 saal pehle huwa tha?


Vansh: Haan ji! Uske baad se main ne ap ko dhoondne ki bohat koshish ki, Lekin kisi ko bhi nahi pata tha ke ap kahan hai.


Lady: Yeah, Actually mera kaam he kuch aisa hai! Yahan bhi ek khaas request per ayi hu.


Vansh ke saamne baithi Lady ek bohat badi doctor thi, Lekin usko khaas uske patients banate the, Lady ke mostly patients Player's the, Ek tarha se Lady ek Player Specialist bhi thi.


Lekin kisi ko bhi uska naam ya kuch bhi personal information nahi pata thi, Ye uski security ke liye kiya gaya tha, Aisi khaas doctor ko bohat khatra hota tha.


Lady: Vansh Sayani! Main ne tumhara case padha hai, Tum hallucinate karte ho?


Vansh(Nod): Yes, Main pichle 10 saal se in hallucinations ke karan se sakoon se soo bhi nahi saka hu! Har pal aisa lagta hai ke mujhe bhaagna ho ga, Jaise main ek shikar hu aur mujhe shikari se bachna ho ga, Pichle 10 saal se main bhaag raha hu, Mujhe ye bhi nahi pata ke main kis se bhaag raha hu, Lekin main bhaag raha hu.


Lady: Hmm! Ye sab tumhare upar huwe assassination attempt ke baad shuru huwa hai?


Vansh(Nod): Yes!


Lady: Lekin tumhara kehna hai ke tumhe 10 saal pehle huwe attack ke baare me kuch bhi yaad nahi hai?


Vansh(Nod): Yes!


Lady: Ye shayad ussi attack se related hai! Lekin main heraan hu ke ek Player ko aise dara dene wala insaan kitna bhayankar ho sakta hai.


Vansh: Huh? Kya matlab?


Lady: Vansh tumhe pata hai na ke Player's ki intelligence normal human se zyada hoti hai! Unka mind bade se bada pressure bhi endure ker sakta hai, Lekin agar ek player aise kisi se dar raha hai to saamne wala ek sadharan vyakti nahi ho sakta, Tumhe aisa trauma dene wala Vyakti kitna shaktishali ya kahu ke bhayankar ho sakta hai ye hum soch bhi nahi sakte.


Vansh ki pride hurt ho rahi thi, Lekin ye sach bhi tha ke usse dar lag raha tha, Aisa kyu tha ye usse bhi nahi pata tha, Lekin ab wo aur bardasht nahi ker sakta tha.


Lady: Ye tumhari daily life per kya asar ker raha hai? Like kuch khaas dikkat?


Lady ke sawal per Vansh kuch kehna chah raha tha, Lekin wo bol nahi paa raha tha, Uski halat Lady ache se parakh sakti thi.


Vansh ka sharir bohat kamzor dikh raha tha, Uski halat kuch khaas achi nahi thi aur agar aise he chalta to ye uske liye aur bhi dikkaton ko janam de sakta tha.


Lady: Vansh, I'm sorry! Lekin mujhe nahi lagta ke yanha main kuch ker sakti hu, Ye dar tumhe khud he khatam karna ho ga, Uske liye main tumhari help ker sakti hu, Lekin ant me ye dar khatam karne wale tum khud he ho gye.


Vansh: Lekin kuch to ker sakti hai na ap?


Lady: I'm sorry Vansh! Lekin tumhe abhi apni family ke saath samay bitana chahiye, Tumhare saath tumhari wife ayi hai na? She's really beautiful.


Vansh(Nod): Yes, Uske sivaye meri family me aur koi bhi nahi hai! 10 saal pehle pura Sayani parivar khatam ho gaya tha, Lekin ab main apni wife ko khona nahi chahta aur uske liye mujhe ye bimari khatam karni ho gi.


Lady: Good! Main tumhe kuch training batati hu, Ye mostly player's ka mind clear karne me madad karti hai, Ye tumhare liye first step ho ga.


****

Level Up Tower
Floor 61 ~ 10:45 AM



“Huh?”


Aarav ki party 61 Floor tak aa gayi thi, 50th floor ke baad orange level ke monsters ane shuru ho gye the, Lekin Mia ke saath hone se wo bina kisi badi dikkat ke aage badh rahe the.


Lekin ye sirf Mia ke liye possible nahi tha, Usme ek bada haath Aarav ke potions ka bhi tha, Full Recovery jaise khaas potions Aarav bina soche baant raha tha.


Shuruaat me Mia ko ye normal laga, Lekin itne potions Aarav ke paas hona he ek badi baat thi, Mia ko kuch bhi action lene se roka gaya tha, Usko sirf observe karne ke order diye gye the.


Lekin abhi Aarav se badi paheli ek aur Mia ke saamne khari huwi thi.


Mia: Strange! Hamay 61 floor per aye kaafi samay ho gaya hai, Lekin yanha hamay ek bhi orc dikhayi nahi de raha.


Malia: Ho sakta hai kisi ne hum se pehle he ye floor clear kiya ho? Orc's ke dobara summon hone me samay lage ga, Ye hamare liye acha hai, Hum bina lare aage badh sakte hai.


Mia santusht to nahi thi, Lekin abhi wo association ke saath nahi Malia ki party ki member thi, Uske liye abhi tower climb karna zaroori tha.


Mia: Hmm, Let's go!


Sabhi aage badhne lage, Lekin agle floors per bhi sab kuch same he tha, Ek bhi orc unse larne ke liye nahi aya, Ab Mia ko chinta hone lagi thi.


Lekin Mia kuch bhi keh nahi rahi thi, 69th floor aa gaya, Lekin orc se larna to baad ki baat hai unhen koi orc dikhayi bhi nahi diya.


Mia: Something's not right! Hamay Association ko inform karna chahiye, Yahan kuch to gadbad huwi hai.


Akansha: Lekin aage 30 he Floor rehte hai! Ab itna aage ane ke baad waapis jaana sahi nahi ho ga.


Mia: Lek- Huh! Theek hai, Lekin agar aage bhi aisa huwa to hum waapis jaye gye, Malia, Please?


Malia(Sigh): Theek hai! Agar aage bhi kuch issue huwa to hum 80th Floor se waapis chale gye, Ab theek hai?


Mia(Nod): Thanks!


69th Floor bhi pura khaali tha to unhe aage badhne me kuch bhi dikkat nahi huwi aur wo sabhi seedhe 70th Floor yaani boss room ke saamne aa gye.


Sab ladne ke liye taiyar ho gye, Malia sab se aage khari huwi aur uske left aur right per Mia aur Akansha khadi ho gayi, Malia ne ishara kiya aur sabhi gate ke andar chale gye.


“What the Fuck????”


Mia ki ek gusse se bhari awaaz boss room me fail gayi, Floors ka to Mia samajh sakti thi, Lekin 70th floor per unhe boss bhi kanhi nahi dikh raha tha, Itna he nahi unke saamne aage ka gate bhi khula huwa tha 71st floor ke liye.


Mia(Frustrated): Ye sab ho kya raha hai?


Mia ki samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha tha, Usko abhi association ko inform karna chahiye tha, Lekin gate already set ho chuka tha, Usko 71st floor jaana he padne wala tha.


Mia: Hamay yanha se nikalna ho ga! Tower me kuch error hai, Hamay tower ko kuch samay ke liye band karna ho ga, Malia?


Malia: Theek hai? Hum waapis jaye gye.


Malia ne bhi hami bhar di, Ab unhe jald se jald 80th floor tak jana tha, Ab ki baar Mia ne khud lead sambhal li, Malia ne bhi usse roka nahi aur uske saath 70th floor se nikalne lagi.


Mia: Wait!


Mia ke aage badhte kadam ek dum se ruk gye, Usne ghoomte huwe upar daikha to upar ceiling ke andhere me orc's latak rahe the.


Mia: Hamare Upa-


*Grrrrooowwr*


Mia kuch keh sakti ke uske pehle he ek unchi dahar ke saath boss orc zameen pharte huwe baahir aa gaya, Mia uchalte huwe peeche ho gayi.


Mia Akansha aur Malia teeno ladne ke liye taiyar ho gayi, Unke saamne bohat zyada orc's khare the to unhe Aarav aur Tarun kanhi bhi dikhayi nahi de rahe the.


*Thump*


Ek orc haath me badi shield pakde unki taraf bhagte huwe aya, Unke side per bade pathar hone se unke paas dodge karne ke liye koi raasta nahi tha, Unhe uska attack saamne se block he karna padne wala tha.


Malia: Dono mere peeche ho jao!


Malia ne hammer nikalte huwe seedhe Orc ki shield per attack kiya, Orc to peeche gaya he lekin saath he uske pressure se teeno bhi peeche push hote huwe gate se baahir gir gayi.


Mia: Fuck!!! Ye ho kya raha hai?


Akansha(Trembling): A-aarav?


Akansha ki ladkhadati huwi awaaz ne Mia ka dhayan uski taraf kheench liya, Aarav aur Tarun abhi bhi andar the, Lekin ab un teeno me se koi waapis bhi nahi ja sakta tha.


*Ahhhhhhh*


Abhi wo kuch sochte ke unke saamne gate dobara khula aur andar se Tarun hava me urte huwe baahir gir gaya.


Malia: Tarun?


Teeno bhaagte huwe Tarun ke paas chali gayi, Tarun ka kandha ghayal tha aur uske sharir bhi bhi ghav bane huwe the.


Akansha(Shivering): Tarun! Aarav kidhar hai?


Tarun(Gasping): Boss! Boss unke beech phanse huwe hai, Sabhi Orc's boss ko he nishana bana rahe hai, Jaise unke liye he Orcs ne ambush kiya ho, Unhone mauka milte he mujhe baahir phenk diya, Lekin khud Orc's ke haatho pakde gye.


Tarun muthi bheenche gusse se bol raha tha, Ek baar dobara uske karan se Aarav khatre me tha, Lekin Tarun se zyada halat kharab Akansha ki ho rahi thi.


[Level up tower got locked by a Guardian! Now, players who are inside can only get out by reaching the 100th floor or waiting for the tower to unlock. Sorry for the trouble it may cause]


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Veer's House
Mumbai ~ 11:19 PM



*Hmmm ~ Hmm ~ Hmmmm ♪♪*


Tanu bed per laiti Gungunate huwe haath me pencil pakde ek book me kuch bana rahi thi, Uske chehre per ek meethi si muskurahat saji huwi thi.


Uske paon hava me lehra rahe the, Uske saath he fluffy(Baby Kitsune) bhi bed per he laita huwa tha, Tanu puri tarha book per focus ho ker laiti huwi thi.



*Yawn*


Tanu ke haath ruke aur usne uthte huwe angrayi li aur book ki taraf daikhne lagi, Ye tanu ki sketch book thi, Yahan Tanu apne family members ke sketch banaya karti thi.


Lekin ab ki baar uske sketch me kuch naya tha, Tanu ki adhi se zyada sketch book Veer ke sketches se bhari huwi thi, Lekin ab ki baar usne khud ke aur veer ke saath Aarav ko bhi banaya tha.


Tanu ne ye bana to li thi, Lekin ab usse ek baar dobara daikhne per usko sharam aa rahi thi, Abhi kuch din pehle he wo Aarav ko reject ker rahi thi, Lekin ab wo khud he usse sketch book me bhi add ker rahi thi.


Tanu(Blush+Annoyed): Unghhhh! Ye main kya ker rahi hu?


Tanu bed per lait gayi aur apna muh takiye me chupane lagi, Usko aise daikh ker Fluffy uske paas aa gaya, Tanu ne thora sar uthate huwe usse daikha aur usko pakad ker lait gayi.


Tanu: Fluffy main pagal to nahi ho rahi kya? *Sigh* Lekin main ye sirf Veer bhayia ke liye ker rahi hu, Unke kehne per Aarav ko ek chance dena chah rahi hu *Angry* Lekin Aarav hai ke unhe kuch farak he nahi padta, Kam se kam kuch samay to de na, Lekin unhe business meeting's attend karni hai, Huh ~



Tanu ne muh banate huwe kaha, Lekin uska mood zyada der nahi bana, Uski nazar ek baar dobara sketch per chali gayi.


Tanu(Sigh): Huh, Unhe aur kitna samay lage ga?
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[Aj ke liye itna he, Ye update 4.3K+ words ka tha, Mostly ye break ke baad ek light update tha, Aage ab story khulni shuru ho gi, Umeed hai ap ko update pasand aye ga, Target hamara wohi hai 90 likes ke liye, Milte hai agle Update per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]
 

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fantastic update

Rongte khare ho gaya tha kuch moment me. Bahot romaanchak aur majedaar update tha bhai. Next update ka intajaar rahegaa bhai 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Bro apne apni story shuru ki or uspe 3,4 update ke baad aapne update nhi diye or naa hi karan bataya
Or app salty- Otaku bro se 1 din late hone par aapko itni samasya ho rhi hai

Apko likhne se pehle apne aap ke bare main ek baar soochna cahiye

Super duper awesome update luvd it pls do cont asap

Nice 1
Barbie or Hannah ki conversation se kafi kuch pata chala

Michael ne Arav ka woh rup dekha jo usne socha nhi tha lekin us look k dekhne k baad wahan kya kya hua yeh apne nhi dikhaya

Deepak ab yeh kon hai or kyu Arav ka dushman hai pata nhi

Bhai mujhe update ko late Dene se problem nahi hai time schedule naa dene ki baat kahi hai bhai kyuki reader ko waiting karne me dikkat nahi hai lekin time se update naa dene par salt-Otaku bhai ko reader ki rudly bhari chats ko face karna padta hai ...aur maine sirf Advice diya salt- Otaku bhai ko.,..
Aur rahi meri story ki baat to vo main kisi personal reasons ke kaaran chhodna pada bhai

Nice update

Awesome update

Ding 👍🤯 nice update keep posting

Msst update

Heavily loaded update. The title 'Lawful Evil', an oxymoron, itself is very interesting.

Jis tarah se Veer (now Aarav) ke kamre ke saamne se nikalte samay Tanu ke kadam apne aap ruk gaye the, jis tarah se Ishika ke gaalon me lali cchha gayi thi, Tanu aur Ishika ne ab Aarav ko accept kar liya hai. Lagta hai ki jahan Tanu Aarav ke jeevan me Urvi ki kami ko pura karegi, wahin Ishika ek bahan, ek premi, ek business partner ka role karegi. Lekin dekhte hain ki Meera se kab tak Ishika ki bhanvaye chhupi rehti hain.

Michael aur Aarav ki baatcheet kafi dilchasp thi, bilkul frank, negotiations ek equal level par. Yeh bhi pata chala ki Rogue Players apna gut bana kar apni powers misuse kar rahe hain. Aarav ka Charcoal ko bade style se control kar dena, Michael bhi hil kar reh gaya. Parr kya punch line maari hai,,, wah.. wah.. wah..

<Aarav: Sach he kehte hai! Beware of the old man in a profession where men usually die young.>

Waise Michael ka main purpose to tha ki weh Aarav ko uski aukat dikha de, lekin aakhir me khud shock me chala gaya. Hahaha...

Barbie aur Hannah ka raaz khula, jahan Hannah chahti hai ki uska bhai Akash se azaad ho jaye, wahin Barbie loyal hai. Ek baat aur saamne aayi, Elite Group. Shayad Jinhoo hi unka leader tha. Lagta hai ki weh Player's Association ko bhi control karna chahte hain. Agar Akash ne unme se Aadhe ko maar diya, unke leader ke saath, to jarur weh bhi player raha hoga.

Ab ye Deepak ka kya locha aa gaya hai, aur Blue Moon Project ki key... Suspense...

Khair, ab to The Wolves (Aarav ki Guild) Level Up Tower me enter ho hi gayi hai, dekhte hain ki aage kya hoga.

Excellent update.

Fantastic mind-blowing super update



Nice update

Awesome update Bhai 😊☺️

Awesome update Bhai 😊☺️

Shandar update bro

Mast update dia hai bhai....

Very good update bro

Awesome update

Mujhe laga tha ki Hannah apne bhai Barbie se Aarav ke baare me jarur baat karegi, aur kya Barbie ko Aarav ki yaad hai ki nahi. Par usne to kuch pucha hi nahi, halanki pehle ek update me aaya tha ki weh soch rahi hai ki weh apne bhai ko Aarav ke baare me bataye ya nahi. Balki mujhe to laga tha ki weh Barbie se isi liye milne gayi hai.


Nice update bro

प्रतीक्षा है

Awesome. Wetting for next update

Bhai update bahot besabri se intajaar kar raha hu bhai. Jaldi do naa bhai 🙏🙏

Don't worry brother
Focus on your studies
We can wait , exam can't
Ha judai thori lambi hai par..shh lenge thora:sad:

Amazing story

Ye gaya ek aur writer

Kidhar ho bhai 🥺

Hello Brother
Hope your studies are going well

Just wanted to ask , What's the update about your USC short story??

Waiting for next update bhai....
Ummid hai aapka exam sahi se hoga..... Or intejar rehega story ka next update

waiting for update bro


hii dear how are you




प्रतीक्षा है

I.....n......t.....e......z......a......a.......r...

Are bhai exam ab to khatm ho gye honge...... Bich me ek baar bhi visit nahi Kiya kya website pe.....

Expecting your speedy return back to resume your Superb story ✍️ from where you left it for the sake of your exams. Hope you are almost done with your exams dear bro 👍. Eagerly 👁️ & anxiously 😨 awaiting your amazing updates ✍️, dear bro 😚😚😚😚😚😚

Your kind reply in this regard shall be highly appreciated 😳, please,.dear bro 👍.

Bhai kab tak

Bro aur kitna wait kare

Bhai waiting yaar Diya hua time period bhi bhut agge ho gya h ab to update kardo kuch bhi information dedo

Good to know you are back...

Welcome back bro........waiting for new update

Welcome Back Brother:welcome1:
So happy to see you back

Welcome back bro.

welcome back bro

Welcome back brother eagerly waiting for your next update

Welcome bhai... besabri se intejar rahega bhai update ka...

Wlcm bro waiting for your update

Waiting for update

प्रतीक्षा है

कहां हो यार,
जल्दी से कहानी शुरू करो

भाई अगला भाग कब दे रहे हों

Bro update Ka intezaar horaha hai bohat aik saat hi teen char update krdo bro.

Waiting for update bro

It’s ok bhai.....
Aap aaram se update dijiye

Bhai 15 ko bhi kyo de rahe ho time dedeba tab bhi

Bada pata hai tumko bhai writer ke baare mai...😒😒 Ki nahi aayega update...

Maine mostly kaafi story read Kiya hun idher writer aate hai chale jaate hai... Magr mai Salty~Otaku ke baare mai bata sakta hun tumko syad tumne update ek saath padhe honge isliye pta nahi hoga...

Most consistent writer hai jiss din bol diya uss din update dete hain... Woh bhi on time... Saath mai update ki length bhi check kar lo jaakr ek baar...

Hadbadi mat kijiye sabar rakhiye har koi busy ho jata hai time nahi mill pata kabhi kabhi hota hai... Jab update aana chalu ho jayenge uske baad time par nahi aaye toh mujhe tag kijiyega qyuki maine bhi aapko iss thread par pehle nahi dekha.... 😒😒

Jabardast update 🔥 🔥

Awesome update

Ek dam ahi ka Bhai muje pta hai bhai ne bola hai to aaiga zarur

Superb update

Bro pehle salty-otaku bro ne bola ki update exam ke baad eeyega. Exam khatam hue bhi 20 + days ho gaye update 12 ko aana likha tha. Ab 15 ho gya hai bro
Bro jaydatar aap ne dekha hoga jo bhi writer story ko pause karte hai wo story kabhi doobaara shru nhi hoti.
Yahi reason hai bro mera esa kehne ka

Bhai Writer Ki Bhi Apni Personal Life Hai, Kya Bas Ye Story Ke Update Likhne Ka Hi Kaam Reh Gya Hai Kya.
Unko Bhi To Apni Zindagi Me Thoda vyast Rahne Do, 10-11 Mahine Tak Unhone Bina Koi Break Ke Story Ko Badhate Rhe.
Ab Ek Break Liya Hai To Thoda Rest Karne Do.

Aur Kon Kehta Hai Ki Woh Stories Resume Nhi Hoti
Shayad Aapne Is Forum Ki Stories Nhi Padhi Hai
Ya Fir Sirf Incest Aur Adultery Section Ki Hi Stories Padhi Hai.
Aisi Bahut Si Stories Hai Jo Samay Na Hone Se Hold Par Ki Gayi Par Samay Milte Hi Writer Ne Unhe Pura Kiya Aur Wo Bhi Pure Jos Ke Sath.
Aur Hum Hamare Salty Ko Jante Hai Usne 15 Ko Bola To 15 Ko Aayega Aur Nhi Bhi Aaya To Koi Nhi Par Ek Din To Jarur Aayega Jab Read Kar Lenge, Par Story Puri Jarur Hogi.
Aap Reader Ho, Aap Sirf Request Kar Sakte Ho Na Ki Writer Ko Force Kar Sakte Ho Update Dene Ke Liye. Aapki Inn Baato Se Writer Demotivate Ho Kar Updates Ka Samay Badha Dete Hai.
Kam Se Kam Achha Nhi Kehna To Bura To Na Kaho.
Humari Yha Se Koi Earning Nhi Ho Rhi Hai, Hum Bas Apne Hunar Ko Nikharna Aur Tumhara Manoranjan Kar Rhe Hai. Iske Viprit Aap Hmara Hi Moral Down Kar Rhe Hai.
Sabr Rakho Update Jrur Aayega.

Bhai update 🥲



waiting bhai

Update Kahn hai aaj 15 hai

Bhai piche ka msg bhi padh lo writer ne bola hai late night Tak a jaega sab ko kuch na kuch Kam hota hai bhai



Bhai wait ni ho rha ab

Subah uth Gaya but abhi kuch h nahi padhne ko....

Update please Bhai

Kahan hai update


naha aya yar late night

12-15-16 ab aur kitna age jana padega



Koi baat nehin just take your time

Update 64 has been posted Guys!!! :yo:
 
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