Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

Schedule​

UPDATE#​	DATE​
Update 117 ​	November 28th 11:30 PM​
Update 118​	December 6th 11:30 PM​
Update 119​	December 10th 11:30 PM​
Update 120​	December 14th 11:30 PM​
Update 121​	December 19th 11:30 PM​

 

[Salty~Otaku]

lekin Urvi k un dreams ka kya chakkar hai jo usse baar baar aa rhe hain...
jisme woh hamesha dar jaati hai....
kahin unka reality k Saath koi relation to nhi....

Aage chal ker ap ko pata chal jaye ga Update ki har cheez ka kuch na kuch link hai abhi ke liye wo Sadharan shabd lag sakte hai lekin aage chal ker in se jurne wali kahani bohat romanchak hone wali hai

khair Akash ka into ek ache ladke k tor pr karwaaya gaya hai jo k ek behtareen businessman bhi hai or ek responsible family person bhi ..
saath hi woh soft heart bhi hai....
or uski mom bhi ek soft and kind hearted women hain jo apne bacchon k saath dusron ki bhi care krti hai...

Update 14 me Family Introduction bhi ho jaye ga jis se sab kuch aur bhi clear ho jaye ga!

Tsubame ne sahi se band baja di Arav ki hahahaha ...
usse lag rha tha k koi normal human usse hara nhi sakta lekin bechaare ko munh ki khaani padi....

Kisi ko kuch banane ke liye pehle torna zaroori hai

Bhai maze ka update tha

Arav or urvi New York pohonch chuke hain lekin urvi ki tbyt phir se kharaab ho gyiii hai...

lekin Urvi k un dreams ka kya chakkar hai jo usse baar baar aa rhe hain...
jisme woh hamesha dar jaati hai....
kahin unka reality k Saath koi relation to nhi....

khair Akash ka into ek ache ladke k tor pr karwaaya gaya hai jo k ek behtareen businessman bhi hai or ek responsible family person bhi ..
saath hi woh soft heart bhi hai....
or uski mom bhi ek soft and kind hearted women hain jo apne bacchon k saath dusron ki bhi care krti hai...

Vansh se to ulte hi hain ye sab....

Tsubame ne sahi se band baja di Arav ki hahahaha ...
usse lag rha tha k koi normal human usse hara nhi sakta lekin bechaare ko munh ki khaani padi....

no doubt k Daisuke ne Tsubame ko hi kyun chuna to train Arav...
bcz she is really very good in her field....
uski fighting jo k abhi kuch khaas nhi dekhne ko mili lekin Aarav ki haalat se andaaza laagaya jaa skata hai k kaafi behtareen hai...

or woh strictly Arav ko train kare gi jo maze ka hoga....

Ab Vanshika madam e Arav ko bulaya hai to dkehte hai kya hota hai aage...

ap ne update ka review choora nahi agle ke saath pichle update ka bhi review dia ek writer ke liye iss se bara inaam kuch nahi hota !

 

[Salty~Otaku]

ye Vanshika to kaafi ziddi or arrogant behave kr rhi hai

These Rich Kids

lekin wahan us party m Vanshika ne usse Lydia khaathon phansa kr khud Neel k samne chi gyii khud phanse k liye ...

Waise us ko phansna kehna sahi nahi ho ga shayad

Wo to Arav ne sahi time pr pohonch kr usse bacha liya lekin uski chamakti aankhen sabne dekh li or us se dar bhi lagne laga sabko....
Arav ne sabse bachaane k liye eyes to close kr lii lekin woh khud kaafi dara or shock m tha...

Us ki ankho ki wajha se dar nahi tha ulta uss ke dar ki wajha se waisi ankhe thi uss ki, Jaise ek Janwar jab kisi bhi Attack ke liye tayar hota hai to wo alert rehta hai, Waise he Aarav bhi ane wale halato se dar ker chaukana tha jis ka saboot uss ki ankhe thi

or phir Arav ko dara huwa dekh kr usne jaise usse console kiya or phir usse himmat dene k liye Arav ko hug krna yo Arav ko bhi ajeeb hi laga ..

Ju next Update parho Hug aur Console ko aur daikhne ke liye

or Neel shayad uska bf tha ya kuch kr ye go aage chal kr hi maloom ho ga...

Ye Update 13 me pata chal jaye ga!

baaki ye Akash to kaafi sanki nikla...
pichle update m jitna sincere or kind laga is update m us ka more than 100% ulat tha....
kaise usne 6 logon ko maar diya...

Main khud likhte huwe soch raha tha ke Akash ki ye personality shock hone wali hai jinho ne uss ko last update me Kind Hearted samjha tha

or ye Akash to lagta hai jaise Arav ko aoni personal property samajh rha hai, jisse usne khareed liya hai...

Iss ka Raaz bhi aage ja ker khul jaye ga!

khair ab aage kya hoga ye kaafi interesting or mazedaar hone walaa hai....

kaafi intense or thrilling type update tha bhai ..
maza aaya padh kr...
agle update ka intezaar rhe gaa...

Ap ko pasand aya ye sun ker he bohat acha laga, Koshis rahe gi aage bhi aise he Ap ko thrilling Update de saku

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Scene thora peeche ker ke ap ne aur bhi clearly explain ker dia jo pichle update me nahi tha....Aur main soch he raha tha ke Bear ka kia huwa ho ga

Main to ye lagbhag bhool he gaya tha Ye soch ker he ye scene likha tha lekin kisi ne point out he nahi kia abhi tak ap ne ker dia

Aarav ka dar main sirf parhne se mehsoos ker paa raha hu.....Itni mushkil se jeeta ab ye kia ho gya????????

Ye ek success he hai ek writer ke liye!!!

Mujhe andaza hai Player status aur Cards banana kitna mushkil kaam hai...Lagta hai sirf kuch words he to likhe hai lekin Design pasand karna upar se ap ne Prowess ke hisaab se Symbol bhi lia hai jo dhoondna aur decide karna kitna mushkil huwa ho ga wo ap ke ilawa koi nahi jaan sakta

Mehnat to bohat lagi thi lekin mere lazy hone ki wajha se main ne pehle edit karne start nahi kiye aur last me ek saath sab edit kiye the jis ne body per bohat zada pressure daal dia tha, Lekin ab theek hai

Yoo Jung har Update ke baad meri aur bhi fav hoti jaa rahi hai....Sirf Arav special nahi hai yoojung bhi kamal ki hai....Yoojung ka character ek main character hone wala hai mujhe aisa lag raha hai

Ye to main ne socha bhi nahi tha....Aisi situation me bhi Yoojung bohat ache se situation samajh gayi jo daisuke bhi samajh nahi

Akhir 70 Intelligence point hai uss ke itna to expect ker he sakte hai uss se

Ye kia tha....Action scene ke beech me Achanak romance ???? Main to Arav ko Yoojung ke saath jor raha tha ju ne Isabelle ke saath tanka bhira dia....Aur ye Isabelle ko kia ho gya wo to aise arav per char gayi jaise maheeno ka bhooka khana daikh table per charhta hai

Iss story me Harem bhi hai matlab 1 se zada gopiya milne wali hai Aarav ko Abhi adultery slow hai lekin aage chal ker barsat hone wali hai naya Arc iss se bohat alag hone wala hai

Even mujhe samajh nahi ayi kia huwa hai....Lekin Vansh ka pehli baar koi faida dikha hai mujhe warna to mujhe bilawajah he lagne laga tha ye

Vansh sardard Character hai lekin phir bhi important character hai

Ye sahi tha guru....Sach me hansi aa gayi ye parh ker

Ye scene likha he hansne ke liye tha

Bilkul Alpha ek leader hai jo kisi ki bhi madad nahi chahta khud he leader ki tarha upar rehna chahta hai....To wo apni pride ke chalte kaise bardasht ker sakta hai ke koi uss per daya dikhaye

Ap Update pura parhne ke baad review nahi likh rahe kia?

Fuck....Ye will to live to bohat kaam ki nikli apni tarha ek new Unique Ability he bana di....Jaise daisuke ne kaha tha Unique Ability bohar Rare hai aur apne Arav ke paas 2 Unique Ability hai

Yes! Aur aage chal ker ye aur bhi bohat zada kaam ane wali hai

Ok ok....Ab samajh aa gayi Aarav kiu Isabelle se Mana kheench raha tha....300 Mana chahiye tha Arav ko aur Isabelle ke paas jo stone hai uss me 600 something Mana hai to uss se Arav ability on ker saka

Sahi Jawab, Aur ye ap jeete 7 Crore

Aila....Hamara alpha to softy nikla ab iss ka kia raaz hai jo Alpha ne Arav ko apna waaris he bana lia???

Ye konsi Ability hai??? 3 Unique Ability upar se 1 hidden hai

Ye aage ja ker pata chale ga :

Ye kahan se Mana le raha hai Arav ....Ye haath khud he nikal gye mission per...Daikho jo bhi hai londa hai to apna pura londa he

Har Virgin ka ye he reaction hona tha

Bohat maze ka Update tha... Bohat kuch naya daikhne ko mila...Kuch emotional to kuch funny sab balance tha lekin long update main sirf 20k Words ka maanta hu kiu Werewolf ab batao dono me se pehle kon 20K words ka update de raha hai

Wo he de paye gye 20 hazar shabdo ka update hamari to 9 hazar me he phat lo

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Scene thora peeche ker ke ap ne aur bhi clearly explain ker dia jo pichle update me nahi tha....Aur main soch he raha tha ke Bear ka kia huwa ho ga

Aarav ka dar main sirf parhne se mehsoos ker paa raha hu.....Itni mushkil se jeeta ab ye kia ho gya????????

Mujhe andaza hai Player status aur Cards banana kitna mushkil kaam hai...Lagta hai sirf kuch words he to likhe hai lekin Design pasand karna upar se ap ne Prowess ke hisaab se Symbol bhi lia hai jo dhoondna aur decide karna kitna mushkil huwa ho ga wo ap ke ilawa koi nahi jaan sakta


Yoo Jung har Update ke baad meri aur bhi fav hoti jaa rahi hai....Sirf Arav special nahi hai yoojung bhi kamal ki hai....Yoojung ka character ek main character hone wala hai mujhe aisa lag raha hai

Ye to main ne socha bhi nahi tha....Aisi situation me bhi Yoojung bohat ache se situation samajh gayi jo daisuke bhi samajh nahi


Nice idea...Yoo jung agar strategist hai to Daisuke ek leader ki tarha hai jo situation samajh ate he action leta hai dono ka combination kamal ka hone wala hai

Ye kia tha....Action scene ke beech me Achanak romance ???? Main to Arav ko Yoojung ke saath jor raha tha ju ne Isabelle ke saath tanka bhira dia....Aur ye Isabelle ko kia ho gya wo to aise arav per char gayi jaise maheeno ka bhooka khana daikh table per charhta hai

Even mujhe samajh nahi ayi kia huwa hai....Lekin Vansh ka pehli baar koi faida dikha hai mujhe warna to mujhe bilawajah he lagne laga tha ye

Ye sahi tha guru....Sach me hansi aa gayi ye parh ker

Bilkul Alpha ek leader hai jo kisi ki bhi madad nahi chahta khud he leader ki tarha upar rehna chahta hai....To wo apni pride ke chalte kaise bardasht ker sakta hai ke koi uss per daya dikhaye




Progress barh bhi rahi hai Nice

Fuck....Ye will to live to bohat kaam ki nikli apni tarha ek new Unique Ability he bana di....Jaise daisuke ne kaha tha Unique Ability bohar Rare hai aur apne Arav ke paas 2 Unique Ability hai

Ok ok....Ab samajh aa gayi Aarav kiu Isabelle se Mana kheench raha tha....300 Mana chahiye tha Arav ko aur Isabelle ke paas jo stone hai uss me 600 something Mana hai to uss se Arav ability on ker saka



Aila....Hamara alpha to softy nikla ab iss ka kia raaz hai jo Alpha ne Arav ko apna waaris he bana lia???

Ye konsi Ability hai??? 3 Unique Ability upar se 1 hidden hai

Ye kahan se Mana le raha hai Arav ....Ye haath khud he nikal gye mission per...Daikho jo bhi hai londa hai to apna pura londa he


Har Virgin ka ye he reaction hona tha

Bohat maze ka Update tha... Bohat kuch naya daikhne ko mila...Kuch emotional to kuch funny sab balance tha lekin long update main sirf 20k Words ka maanta hu kiu Werewolf ab batao dono me se pehle kon 20K words ka update de raha hai

Sorry pehle Reply nahi de saka! Update likhne me busy tha aur abhi pichle update ke baare me parhna mushkil tha, Ab Update likh lia to Reply de dia , Umeed hai ap ko bura nahi laga ho ga, Kiu ke iss ke baad ap ne review nahi dia to laga ap gussa ho gye ho

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bus kuch log hote hai aise jo khud to story likh nahi paate bus writer ko bhi demotivate ker ke story chorr ker bhaagne per majboor ker dete hai

Aisi baat nahi hai, Story choru ga to nahi bus Update ki speed slow ya fast ho sakti hai

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Deserve karta hai banda

 

[Damha]

Mehnat to bohat lagi thi lekin mere lazy hone ki wajha se main ne pehle edit karne start nahi kiye aur last me ek saath sab edit kiye the jis ne body per bohat zada pressure daal dia tha, Lekin ab theek hai

Apna khayal rakhne ka men

 

[Damha]

Wo he de paye gye 20 hazar shabdo ka update hamari to 9 hazar me he phat lo

Lazy Writer logiss

 

[Damha]

Sorry pehle Reply nahi de saka! Update likhne me busy tha aur abhi pichle update ke baare me parhna mushkil tha, Ab Update likh lia to Reply de dia , Umeed hai ap ko bura nahi laga ho ga, Kiu ke iss ke baad ap ne review nahi dia to laga ap gussa ho gye ho

Apan ko bura wura nahi laga.....Apan bus aj kal lounge me time de raha to SS me bohat kam ata time milte he parhu ga aur review de du ga

 

[king1969]

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