Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

Schedule​

UPDATE#​	DATE​
Update 89​	2nd October 11:30 PM​
Update 90​	7th October 11:30 PM​
Update 91​	11th October 11:30 PM​
Update 92​	15th October 11:30 PM​
Update 93​	20th October 11:30 PM​

 

[LionHeart007]

Are BC main bhul hi gaya tha ki review dene ka kaha tha. Sham ko dekhta hu

10k, jis din Salty~Otaku 30k ka update dede usi din 10k ka review aayega

Salty~Otaku be like : Tu rehne de Bhai... Aise hi thk hai...

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Finally... Second run complete ho gaya story ka ek baar fir start se end Tak.... Huh... Ek update se ek point note karta toh 88 point ho jate jiske sawaal abhi nahi pta magar poori koshish ki hai kam se kam writer ko pareshan karne ki.... Hmmm 56 points hai jispe thoda dhyan dena hoga thodi der baad woh sab post kar dunga... 2 se 3k hone wala hai... Toh reader's bhi Bane rahe padhne ke liye... Story ke kuch valuable point ko jiss ko hum bhool gye yaa abhi khulasa ho chuka hai padne ko milega...

 

[Priyayadav]

bahut achi story hai.

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Salty~Otaku Toh iss review ko hum past se start karenge update no.1 se kuch point present se link karenge kuch aane waale future mai humko dekhne ko milega saath hi kuch sawaal aur kuch blunders jo writer sahab se hui hai... Itni badi story likhe likhe ho jaati hai.... Thoda bhut chalta hai... Toh chaliye shuru karte hain....

1:-Aarav urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha...
( Jo ki abhi Urvi Doctor ban chuki hain )

2:- Aarav ko past mai uski maa use chod kar chali gayi thi...
( Lekin Avinash ne uski maa ko kaha tha ki aarav aur urvi ko woh uski maa ki hatya ka jimmedar samjhe... )

3:- Urvi ki best friend Kirti...
( Character start mai tha abhi missing hai... Baad mai kahi iska jikar tak nahi hua... )

4- Ek aadmi jo kankal ban chuka tha uske pass se aarav ko healing potion milta saath hi ek chitthi jisme stone manarch ko jaan se maar Dene ko kaha hai... Koi dushmani yaa dhokha diya gaya hoga..
( Aadmi ke baare mai abhi kuch pta nahi uski stone monarch se kya dushmani thi... Magar jaha tak lagta hai uski maut ke peeche stone monarch ka hath tha... Aarav ne stone monarch se dushmani bhi le li hai... Ab yeh aarav kyun kar raha hai... ?? Aage kya hoga abhi khulasa nahi hua... )


5- Normal users ke pass ek Unique ability hona bhi millions me ek hoti hai... Aarav ke pass 3 hai...
( Abhi aarav ke paas active 5 unique abilities hai jo unlock hai... Baki lock pata nahi... Magar hairaan kar dene ka waali baat hai kisi ke paas ek bhi nahi hoti aarav ke pass itni kaise... Soul binding uske pita se mili will to live uski jinda rehne ki chaah jo woh paida hote time lagbhag mar chuka tha... Aur memonise gaze shayad uski daadi se aur baaki... Baaki ?? )

6- Alpha se Aarav ko Devour mila saath hi uski special Unique ability. Limitless. Growth bhi Active ho gayi thi... Jo ki hidden thi...
( Limitless Growth kaam kaise karti hai abhi bhi confused hoon... Ek tarah se devour ke jaise hai magar usse jayada strong... Iska ek discription de Dena )

7- Aarti another character jisne Aarav ko maafi maangne ko kaha tha Neel se.... Jisse baad mai Aakash ne defend kiya... Magar Aadarsh ne Aarti aur Vansh se kuch baat ki jo pta nhi...
( Yeh Raaz bhi unhi ke saath chala gaya Aarav ke baare mai batya hoga usne Aakash ki kaise help ki... Aadarsh aur Special Aarti itni jaldi Mar gaye??? Abhi body unki mili nahi kisi ko... Kya pata woh bhi chup kar baithe ho Vanshika ke jaise... )

8-Aakash theek hone ke bad jab ghar wapis gaya toh aarav se door hone ke chalte woh emotionless ho gaya tha... Magar jab Aarav ek bar fir wapis aaya toh Aakash ke emotions wapis aa gye... Saath hi aakash apni maa Ko kehta hai Aarav Aur Vanshika ki Jodi kaafi aachi lagti hai... Maa bhi uska ishara samjh kehta haan kaafi aachi lagti hai...
( Aakash Ke baare mai kya hi bolo abhi iska character ke baare mai kuch pata nahi magar. Aarav ke liye jo pyaar aur dedication hai... Ufff dono ka bond Aakash Aarav... )

9- ek baar fir aarav ki hidden ability Limitless Growth ke chalte usne Tasubme se Ki active karna sekh liya jisse. Woh hairaan reh gayi. Koi itni jaldi kaise kar sakta hai magar aarav ko abhi bhi apni ability ke baare me nahi pta...
( Again Limitless Growth ne Aarav ki help ki Uski Ki energy ko Active karne mai... Need description ! )

10- maa ka sapna tha urvi doctor banne intresting yeh baat aarav ne khud urvi ko boli usko hospital mai admit krte waqt...
( Point Clear hai Aarav kyun urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha... Inko kisi ne 3 idiot movie nahi dikhayi kya... BC doctor ki beti doctor... Abhi Urvi Varsha ke saath reh rahi hai uske Doctor hone se jayada shock nahi laga hoga... )

11- Aakash chahta tha Aarav modelling kare usne director Sammy ko majboor Kiya jiske chalte usko Aarav ko shooting ke liye manana pada...
( Ek baar fir se Aakash Aarav... Aakash Aarav ko modelling mai daalna chahta tha... Aarav bhi khush tha )

12- Urvi ke baad Vanshika woh reason thi jiske liye aarav wapas Zinda aana chahta tha...
( Yeh thoda wrong Number tha Aakash ko dhoka diya aarav ne uska dil hi Tut Gaya hoga... Vanshika ke liye ek baar fir jeena chahta tha... Aur aakash ka kya )

13-Aarav ne issabella ko confess kiya ki uske dil me vanshika h...
( Aakash Aarav... Filhaal Vanshika kaha hai koi idea nahi... Magar jald hi mill hi Jani hai last Neel ne shaadi karke use torcher kiya tha jiski photo Aarav ne Vansh ke past mai dekh chuka tha... Aarav kaise wanha tak phunchta hai dekhne layak hoga ? )

14- Jaha sabka kehna tha spirit clan barbaad ho chuka hai... Wahi Daisuke ki maa Myuki ne use btaya ki spirit clan barbaad nahi hua... Bas unhone sabhi clan se khudko door kar liya hai.... WTF??
( Daisuke ki Maa Myuki ka koi na koi relation toh Hai Spirit clan se... Tasubme ne bhi kaha tha Wind clan sahi salamat uske peeche Spirit clan ka bhut bada haath hai )

15-Tasubme ke pita ne waqt aane par Aarav ko clan mai lane ke liye kaha tha... Qyuki woh dekhna chahte the jise Tasubme ne clan ki technique sikhayi hai woh uss kabil hai yaa nahi...
( Hmmm aarav Derek ke paas jarur jayega... Jo filhaal Japan mai Daisuke ke paas hi hai... Kya aarv ko koi test dena padega ?? )

16-wind clan ki pehli meeting mai 4th elder nahi chahti thi ki Daisuke leader bane... Next meeting mai 3rd elder uske jaise baat kar rahi I think yeh blunder hai...
( Yeh blunder hai chup sakta hai... Koi na hota hai... )

17- Jinhoo Ne Yoo-Jung se badla lene ke Vash ko kuch diya... Jisse Vash kisi Bade player ko backstab kar sake... Uske liye unme sabse shaktishali Yoo-Jung thi... Magar jab uska saamna aarav se hua uski power dekh use wanha se bhagna padd gya...
( Jinhoo ne Vansh ko Spirit water ki drops di thi... Jisko usne aarav ko inject kar diya... But Inn sabke peeche Jinhoo tha yeh abhi aarav ko pta kyun nahi... ??? Aarav ne Vansh ki memory check kar chuka hai ab shayad uska agla Target Jinhoo ho sakta hai... )

18-according to vanshika Vash pehle theek tha... Aur Uski Ek servent thi Jiska naam Beatrice tha... Fir ek din Vanshika ne Vansh ko Beatrice ke sath dekh liya... Uske baad uske Dad ne Beatrice ko kuch paise dekar door kar diya... WTF??? Beatrice ???
( Ho sakta hai do alag alag character ho... Naam same ho... Jaise story mai do Priya thi... But kaafi shocking cheez thi abhi Beatrice ka pata hone ke baad past mai usne kya Kiya... Agar kuch aisaa hai toh Writer sahab explanation chahiye isper... Haan Beatrice 22 saal ki jarur thi jab woh dubara aarav se mili thi... Jo soch raha hoon waisa na ho bas... )

19- Ek aur blunder aarav hexagon se ladne se pehle speech deta hai usme apne pita ka naam abhinav Arya bolta hai Avinash* ki jagh... Aur baad me bhi Ezra Abhinav Abhinav karti. H.... Kaafi confusing h new readers k liye character ka naam hi change kar diya... Perticular update mai...
( Yeh blunder bada hai usko jaake edit kar do kaafi confusing tha dusra naam.. )

20-soo-hyun fire clan se hai jisne Avinash ki madat ki... Jinho starting se hi dalla tha. Yeh toh pata padd hi gya... ELA ek actress thi...
( Soo-hyun , Jinhoo aur ElA abhi inke baare mai kuch nahi pata present mai... )

21- Avinash ne marne se pehle soo-hyun ki power ko apni forbidden technique se seal kar diya...
( ELA ne bhi dhoka diya, Soo- Hyun ki power seal hai... Aare waale arc mai Fire clan se ladai Tay hai )

22- Na-ri joki 4th elder thi usme Yoo-Jung ki Maa ko baazaru kaha sath hi uski behen Yoo-ri par bhi humla kar diya... Toh shayad iss wajah se dono fire clan se alag thi...
( Fire clan iska Raaz toh poora Arc deserve karta hai kaafi saare galat kaamo mai involve hai... Soo-hyun possibly fire clan leader ho sakta hai... Aur aisa dekhe toh Yoo-Jung Soo-hyun ki beti... )

23-Aarav ko jab chain se pakad kar world se expelled kiya jaa raha tha toh usko Slime aur Alpha ki woh. Yaadein dikhti hai jo usne pehle kabhi dekhi nahi thi... Jo lock thi...
( Ab yeh Raaz abhi tak saamne nahi aaya slime aur Alpha ki kon si Yaadein aarav ne dekhi thi ?? )

24- earth par aate hi aarav ke 75% stats seal kar diye gye... Aur saath hi mother spirit se contract sign hone ke baad woh system ke purane incharge jinhone aarav ko infinity prison me bheja saath hi... Aarav ke stat seal kiya unse disconnect hoke ab mother spirit uski manager ban chuki hai...
( Ab koi dubara aarav ko control yaa dubara prision mai nahi bhej sakta... Qki Ab Aarav ka manager khud spirit hai... Jisse woh sabhi ke system se alag ho gyaa hai... Jinhone usko saza di thi )

25-Mia ko dekh kar Aarav ko kisi purani party member ki yaad aa jati h lekin kiski... ???
( Mia , Michael ki beti purani party ki member??? Kon ho sakti hai... Ab Mia Aarav ki guild join karne waali hai... Iss character ka bhi Raaz jald khul jayega.. )

26- Meera ne sabko sujhaav diya Aarav ko uska beta aanouce karne ke liye....
( And guess what shit gone real... But kaise... Pehli meeting mai Aarav ko beta bana kar introduce karna... Meera mist clan se thi... But shayad woh Aarav aur veer ke connection ke baare mai jaanti thi... Usko ghar mai rookne ke liye usne aisa kiya... Baad mai Kunal ne bhi usse kaha ki hue Aarav ko veer ke baare mai bata dena chahiye... Ab veer ki story dekhne ko milegi lagta hai... )

27-Aarav Veer ke bunker jo usne aarav liye banaya tha waha phunch gya... Wanha use pta chala Veer ne khud ka naam Batman rakha aur uske jaise hi Den Aarav ke liye taiyar ki thi... Saath Mai Aarav ke haath ek file aati hai... Corpse naam se... The Kid who supposed to be die... ??
( Aarav ne veer ko pehli baar Batman keh bulaya tha... But yeh Aakash aur Aarav ke beech kyun aa raha hai... love triangle... Again the same file jiska kitni baar jikar ho chuka h... Aarav ne Varsha ka past dekhne se pehle yeh file padh li hogi... Isliye woh jayada hairaan nahi hua jaise use sab pata tha... Isme Aarav ke janam waali baat hi hogi )

28- Aarav ne Micheal ko Tower ke bahar barrier banane ka promise Kiya woh bhi ek saal ke ander...
( Yeh kaam karne Aarav Dubara ek baar Mumbai jayega association tower... Aage aane waale update mai dekhne ko milega... )

29- Aarav ko skeleton ke pass se ek book bhi mili thi jisse rune enclave karke woh mana stone ko battle stone yaa kuch aur bana sakta tha... Jo kaam stone monarch karta tha...
( Stone monarch... Abhi iske baare mai jayada nahi pata but aarav ka dushman ban chuka hai toh Fire clan ke baad agla no. Isi ka hona hai... )

30- Ishika ki soul damage h usko cure krne k liye aarav ko uske sath kuchi ku karna padega... Magar bina kisi bond ke aarav karna ni chahta...
( Ishika abhi hospital mai hai... Aarav opposite sex ki soul ko purify kar sakta hai... But ishika kya iske liye taiyar hogi... Isliye aarav unke beech bond banne ka wait kar raha hai... )

31- Soul clan barbaad hote time Aarav ki bua ko ek beti Hui thi...
( Iske baare mai abhi kuch bhi pata nahi hai... Ek Random guess karun toh yeh Aakash ki wife Saanvi ho sakti hai... Woh bhi soul binding use kar sakti hai )

32- Aarav ke pass do core hai.. jiski wajah se woh 25 saal ke baad bhi soul purifier hone ke baad bhi survive kar saka hai... Qkuki uske dono core power equally divide kar rahe the...
( Note karne waala point nahi nahi toh Varsha ne toh sab baad ke liye chod diya tha... Jo hoga dekha jayega... Isliye Aarav 25 ke baad bhi survive kar gaya hai... )

33- wind clan ki ek branch Paris mai bani hai jiska leader George hai...
( Paris = France Jaha Varsha ke saath Saath Aarav aur Aakash ne bhi New syani mention bana chuka hai... George?? Aage pata chalega )

34- Clan meeting mai sab leader Spirit clan ko khatam kar dena chahte the magar Tasubme ne sab ko saaf keh diya ki jo bhi spirit clan ke against jayega usko Wind clan se saamna karna padega... Jisse sun sab sant ho gye... Wohi Fire Clan leader chup kar sab sun raha tha aur sabki haalat par hass bhi raha tha...
( Confirm hai yeh chup kar sunne waala aur koi nahi Soo-hyun hi hai... Uski power seal hai shyad isliye chup raha ho... Magar ab cheezen saaf hai story Fire clan mai jaane waali hai... Jaha aarav bhi lawful banker Micheal aur association ki bhi madat karega... )

35- Barbie Darkness Clan ka leader candidate tha... Jisse Aakash ne uske clan se Haanah ke saath bachaya...
( Iski story abhi saamne aayi nahi hai... Possibly Hannah aarav ko sab btayegi... )

36- Elite Group ne Aakash aur Veer par humla kiya tha... Jiske baad undono ne uske half masters ko maar diya saath hi aakash ne leader ko bhi maar diya...
( Elite Group abhi tak nahi pata chala iske peeche kon hai mastermind... Saath hi aakash ne leader ko maar diya... Aage dekhna hoga isko bhi )

37- Tarun ke liye Uske pita jo Duniya me sabse shaktishali ban sate the unhone apni power chod di...
( Shayad Yaha Mother spirit ki baat kaha Tarun ne... Jo Shubham ne Tarun ke ander seal kar di thi )

38- Tasubme ko 5 spirit clan ke users ke baare mai pata hai 6 th uske hisaab se aarav hai...
( Tasubme 5 spirit clan user kon ho sakte hai... Maybe wohi ho jinhone wind clan ki madad ki thi... )

39- Evil God heart ko fill krne ke baad aarav ke status 34% unlock ho gye the saath hi dono core ko aarav ek saath use kar sakta hai...
( Yeh stat unlock kaafi confusing hai... 34+ 30= 64 % stats abhi aarav ke unlock hone chahiye... )

40- System Bazar ke monarch aarav ko 70% discount par saaman offer kiya but what cost??
( Iska abhi pta nahi... But Aarav ne deniy nahi kiya dekhte hai aarav se kaise madad leta hai )

41- protector guild Leader ko Aarav Arya naam se sapne aa rahe hai usne yeh baat Daisuke se cmfm ki... ??
( Sapne kiss tarah ke... Kunle Andrew ka beta... Jisko aarav ne apni family ko protect karne ke liye kaha tha ab aap oh har kisi ko protect kar raha hai... Isko bhi jara Limelight mai daalo... )

42- Spirit Clan ke kuch members ne Wind clan ka saath diya tha... Unki wajah se wind clan sahi salamat hai... ??
( Yeh flashback shayad Tasubme Aarav ko batayegi... Wahi sab cheezen clear hongi... )

43- Barbie ne Kunal ko bataya ke veer ke Marne waalon ka badla uska nahi hai... ?? Uske peeche Elite group tha na... ??
( Elite Group aakhir hai kon yeh... Isse bhi aarav ko badla lena hai.. isne aadmi bheje the Vansh ke pass hospital mai... )

44- Barbie aur Doc ka conversation Barbie ka usko khna dena... Saath me woh saf jahir kar deti h uski shaadi ho chuki h aur seen mai bacchi ko bhi dikhaya gaya hai...
( Aur woh Doc aur koi Nahi Urvi hai... Shaadi bacchi ?? Ab varsha yaa suhani ki ho nahi sakti bachi Urvi... Aarav kaise react karega... Jab use iss baare mai pata chalega... )

45- Kisi Aurat ne Vansh ko madad ki thi Aarav aur uski family ka naam deathpool mai daalne ke liye....
( Elite Group se koi ho sakta hai... Jiska aarav pata laga hi lega... Yaa koi aur hai iske peeche ?? )

46- Eliss aur Barbie ka kuchi ku tha Hannah ne Aakash se madat maangi thi syad... Vansh ne Hannah ko help ke badle Barbie ko free karne ka promise Kiya tha...
( Eliss yeh shayad wohi hai na Aadarsh ki assistant... Yeh story bhi Hannah aarav se discuss karegi )

47- Mohan Arora toh kaafi Shareef nikla usne Varsha ko saaf sabdo mai keh diya results chahiye no matter what cost... Uske liye Baccho ko cheed faad do yaa khud baccha paida Karo... WOW*
( Don't tell me ki Elite Group iska ho sakta hai... Just sochne ke liye bol diya baaki Arora Family full Villian wives aa rahi hai.. )

48- France mai Bharat ka koi friend rehta tha jisko usne leader ki beti de diya...
( Iska mai pakka nahi keh sakta but mera shakkk kaafi had tak Saanvi par jaa raha hai... Uski story sunker bhi aisa hi laga... )

49- Singh family ne Ankush ki madat ki unki band factory mai Lab banane ke liye...
( Possibly yeh wohi factory hai jo Veer ne aarav ke liye banayi thi usme Kaafi saare equipment ke saath rooms the... Medical rooms bhi... )

50*- Aakash ke power se soul manarch aarav bhi chonk gaya... Saath hi uske hath par koi symbol bana diya....
( Hmmm yeh aage dekhna Banta hai Aakash kiss hadd tak powerfull ho chuka hai... aarav ke puchne par usne nahi btaya ki woh akela Domain ke ander kaise aa gaya... Monarch bhi use amder dekh chonk gaya tha... )

abhi tak ki story ko ek review mai cover nahi kar sakta tha but jo bhi points mere dimaag mai aaye woh likh diye hai... Samar_Singh mera ho gya aap apna dekh lo.. Salty~Otaku iska reply ke liye bhi 2 din diye tumko...
baaki Waiting for next update...

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Salty~Otaku Toh iss review ko hum past se start karenge update no.1 se kuch point present se link karenge kuch aane waale future mai humko dekhne ko milega saath hi kuch sawaal aur kuch blunders jo writer sahab se hui hai... Itni badi story likhe likhe ho jaati hai.... Thoda bhut chalta hai... Toh chaliye shuru karte hain....

1:-Aarav urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha...
( Jo ki abhi Urvi Doctor ban chuki hain )

2:- Aarav ko past mai uski maa use chod kar chali gayi thi...
( Lekin Avinash ne uski maa ko kaha tha ki aarav aur urvi ko woh uski maa ki hatya ka jimmedar samjhe... )

3:- Urvi ki best friend Kirti...
( Character start mai tha abhi missing hai... Baad mai kahi iska jikar tak nahi hua... )

4- Ek aadmi jo kankal ban chuka tha uske pass se aarav ko healing potion milta saath hi ek chitthi jisme stone manarch ko jaan se maar Dene ko kaha hai... Koi dushmani yaa dhokha diya gaya hoga..
( Aadmi ke baare mai abhi kuch pta nahi uski stone monarch se kya dushmani thi... Magar jaha tak lagta hai uski maut ke peeche stone monarch ka hath tha... Aarav ne stone monarch se dushmani bhi le li hai... Ab yeh aarav kyun kar raha hai... ?? Aage kya hoga abhi khulasa nahi hua... )


5- Normal users ke pass ek Unique ability hona bhi millions me ek hoti hai... Aarav ke pass 3 hai...
( Abhi aarav ke paas active 5 unique abilities hai jo unlock hai... Baki lock pata nahi... Magar hairaan kar dene ka waali baat hai kisi ke paas ek bhi nahi hoti aarav ke pass itni kaise... Soul binding uske pita se mili will to live uski jinda rehne ki chaah jo woh paida hote time lagbhag mar chuka tha... Aur memonise gaze shayad uski daadi se aur baaki... Baaki ?? )

6- Alpha se Aarav ko Devour mila saath hi uski special Unique ability. Limitless. Growth bhi Active ho gayi thi... Jo ki hidden thi...
( Limitless Growth kaam kaise karti hai abhi bhi confused hoon... Ek tarah se devour ke jaise hai magar usse jayada strong... Iska ek discription de Dena )

7- Aarti another character jisne Aarav ko maafi maangne ko kaha tha Neel se.... Jisse baad mai Aakash ne defend kiya... Magar Aadarsh ne Aarti aur Vansh se kuch baat ki jo pta nhi...
( Yeh Raaz bhi unhi ke saath chala gaya Aarav ke baare mai batya hoga usne Aakash ki kaise help ki... Aadarsh aur Special Aarti itni jaldi Mar gaye??? Abhi body unki mili nahi kisi ko... Kya pata woh bhi chup kar baithe ho Vanshika ke jaise... )

8-Aakash theek hone ke bad jab ghar wapis gaya toh aarav se door hone ke chalte woh emotionless ho gaya tha... Magar jab Aarav ek bar fir wapis aaya toh Aakash ke emotions wapis aa gye... Saath hi aakash apni maa Ko kehta hai Aarav Aur Vanshika ki Jodi kaafi aachi lagti hai... Maa bhi uska ishara samjh kehta haan kaafi aachi lagti hai...
( Aakash Ke baare mai kya hi bolo abhi iska character ke baare mai kuch pata nahi magar. Aarav ke liye jo pyaar aur dedication hai... Ufff dono ka bond Aakash Aarav... )

9- ek baar fir aarav ki hidden ability Limitless Growth ke chalte usne Tasubme se Ki active karna sekh liya jisse. Woh hairaan reh gayi. Koi itni jaldi kaise kar sakta hai magar aarav ko abhi bhi apni ability ke baare me nahi pta...
( Again Limitless Growth ne Aarav ki help ki Uski Ki energy ko Active karne mai... Need description ! )

10- maa ka sapna tha urvi doctor banne intresting yeh baat aarav ne khud urvi ko boli usko hospital mai admit krte waqt...
( Point Clear hai Aarav kyun urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha... Inko kisi ne 3 idiot movie nahi dikhayi kya... BC doctor ki beti doctor... Abhi Urvi Varsha ke saath reh rahi hai uske Doctor hone se jayada shock nahi laga hoga... )

11- Aakash chahta tha Aarav modelling kare usne director Sammy ko majboor Kiya jiske chalte usko Aarav ko shooting ke liye manana pada...
( Ek baar fir se Aakash Aarav... Aakash Aarav ko modelling mai daalna chahta tha... Aarav bhi khush tha )

12- Urvi ke baad Vanshika woh reason thi jiske liye aarav wapas Zinda aana chahta tha...
( Yeh thoda wrong Number tha Aakash ko dhoka diya aarav ne uska dil hi Tut Gaya hoga... Vanshika ke liye ek baar fir jeena chahta tha... Aur aakash ka kya )

13-Aarav ne issabella ko confess kiya ki uske dil me vanshika h...
( Aakash Aarav... Filhaal Vanshika kaha hai koi idea nahi... Magar jald hi mill hi Jani hai last Neel ne shaadi karke use torcher kiya tha jiski photo Aarav ne Vansh ke past mai dekh chuka tha... Aarav kaise wanha tak phunchta hai dekhne layak hoga ? )

14- Jaha sabka kehna tha spirit clan barbaad ho chuka hai... Wahi Daisuke ki maa Myuki ne use btaya ki spirit clan barbaad nahi hua... Bas unhone sabhi clan se khudko door kar liya hai.... WTF??
( Daisuke ki Maa Myuki ka koi na koi relation toh Hai Spirit clan se... Tasubme ne bhi kaha tha Wind clan sahi salamat uske peeche Spirit clan ka bhut bada haath hai )

15-Tasubme ke pita ne waqt aane par Aarav ko clan mai lane ke liye kaha tha... Qyuki woh dekhna chahte the jise Tasubme ne clan ki technique sikhayi hai woh uss kabil hai yaa nahi...
( Hmmm aarav Derek ke paas jarur jayega... Jo filhaal Japan mai Daisuke ke paas hi hai... Kya aarv ko koi test dena padega ?? )

16-wind clan ki pehli meeting mai 4th elder nahi chahti thi ki Daisuke leader bane... Next meeting mai 3rd elder uske jaise baat kar rahi I think yeh blunder hai...
( Yeh blunder hai chup sakta hai... Koi na hota hai... )

17- Jinhoo Ne Yoo-Jung se badla lene ke Vash ko kuch diya... Jisse Vash kisi Bade player ko backstab kar sake... Uske liye unme sabse shaktishali Yoo-Jung thi... Magar jab uska saamna aarav se hua uski power dekh use wanha se bhagna padd gya...
( Jinhoo ne Vansh ko Spirit water ki drops di thi... Jisko usne aarav ko inject kar diya... But Inn sabke peeche Jinhoo tha yeh abhi aarav ko pta kyun nahi... ??? Aarav ne Vansh ki memory check kar chuka hai ab shayad uska agla Target Jinhoo ho sakta hai... )

18-according to vanshika Vash pehle theek tha... Aur Uski Ek servent thi Jiska naam Beatrice tha... Fir ek din Vanshika ne Vansh ko Beatrice ke sath dekh liya... Uske baad uske Dad ne Beatrice ko kuch paise dekar door kar diya... WTF??? Beatrice ???
( Ho sakta hai do alag alag character ho... Naam same ho... Jaise story mai do Priya thi... But kaafi shocking cheez thi abhi Beatrice ka pata hone ke baad past mai usne kya Kiya... Agar kuch aisaa hai toh Writer sahab explanation chahiye isper... Haan Beatrice 22 saal ki jarur thi jab woh dubara aarav se mili thi... Jo soch raha hoon waisa na ho bas... )

19- Ek aur blunder aarav hexagon se ladne se pehle speech deta hai usme apne pita ka naam abhinav Arya bolta hai Avinash* ki jagh... Aur baad me bhi Ezra Abhinav Abhinav karti. H.... Kaafi confusing h new readers k liye character ka naam hi change kar diya... Perticular update mai...
( Yeh blunder bada hai usko jaake edit kar do kaafi confusing tha dusra naam.. )

20-soo-hyun fire clan se hai jisne Avinash ki madat ki... Jinho starting se hi dalla tha. Yeh toh pata padd hi gya... ELA ek actress thi...
( Soo-hyun , Jinhoo aur ElA abhi inke baare mai kuch nahi pata present mai... )

21- Avinash ne marne se pehle soo-hyun ki power ko apni forbidden technique se seal kar diya...
( ELA ne bhi dhoka diya, Soo- Hyun ki power seal hai... Aare waale arc mai Fire clan se ladai Tay hai )

22- Na-ri joki 4th elder thi usme Yoo-Jung ki Maa ko baazaru kaha sath hi uski behen Yoo-ri par bhi humla kar diya... Toh shayad iss wajah se dono fire clan se alag thi...
( Fire clan iska Raaz toh poora Arc deserve karta hai kaafi saare galat kaamo mai involve hai... Soo-hyun possibly fire clan leader ho sakta hai... Aur aisa dekhe toh Yoo-Jung Soo-hyun ki beti... )

23-Aarav ko jab chain se pakad kar world se expelled kiya jaa raha tha toh usko Slime aur Alpha ki woh. Yaadein dikhti hai jo usne pehle kabhi dekhi nahi thi... Jo lock thi...
( Ab yeh Raaz abhi tak saamne nahi aaya slime aur Alpha ki kon si Yaadein aarav ne dekhi thi ?? )

24- earth par aate hi aarav ke 75% stats seal kar diye gye... Aur saath hi mother spirit se contract sign hone ke baad woh system ke purane incharge jinhone aarav ko infinity prison me bheja saath hi... Aarav ke stat seal kiya unse disconnect hoke ab mother spirit uski manager ban chuki hai...
( Ab koi dubara aarav ko control yaa dubara prision mai nahi bhej sakta... Qki Ab Aarav ka manager khud spirit hai... Jisse woh sabhi ke system se alag ho gyaa hai... Jinhone usko saza di thi )

25-Mia ko dekh kar Aarav ko kisi purani party member ki yaad aa jati h lekin kiski... ???
( Mia , Michael ki beti purani party ki member??? Kon ho sakti hai... Ab Mia Aarav ki guild join karne waali hai... Iss character ka bhi Raaz jald khul jayega.. )

26- Meera ne sabko sujhaav diya Aarav ko uska beta aanouce karne ke liye....
( And guess what shit gone real... But kaise... Pehli meeting mai Aarav ko beta bana kar introduce karna... Meera mist clan se thi... But shayad woh Aarav aur veer ke connection ke baare mai jaanti thi... Usko ghar mai rookne ke liye usne aisa kiya... Baad mai Kunal ne bhi usse kaha ki hue Aarav ko veer ke baare mai bata dena chahiye... Ab veer ki story dekhne ko milegi lagta hai... )

27-Aarav Veer ke bunker jo usne aarav liye banaya tha waha phunch gya... Wanha use pta chala Veer ne khud ka naam Batman rakha aur uske jaise hi Den Aarav ke liye taiyar ki thi... Saath Mai Aarav ke haath ek file aati hai... Corpse naam se... The Kid who supposed to be die... ??
( Aarav ne veer ko pehli baar Batman keh bulaya tha... But yeh Aakash aur Aarav ke beech kyun aa raha hai... love triangle... Again the same file jiska kitni baar jikar ho chuka h... Aarav ne Varsha ka past dekhne se pehle yeh file padh li hogi... Isliye woh jayada hairaan nahi hua jaise use sab pata tha... Isme Aarav ke janam waali baat hi hogi )

28- Aarav ne Micheal ko Tower ke bahar barrier banane ka promise Kiya woh bhi ek saal ke ander...
( Yeh kaam karne Aarav Dubara ek baar Mumbai jayega association tower... Aage aane waale update mai dekhne ko milega... )

29- Aarav ko skeleton ke pass se ek book bhi mili thi jisse rune enclave karke woh mana stone ko battle stone yaa kuch aur bana sakta tha... Jo kaam stone monarch karta tha...
( Stone monarch... Abhi iske baare mai jayada nahi pata but aarav ka dushman ban chuka hai toh Fire clan ke baad agla no. Isi ka hona hai... )

30- Ishika ki soul damage h usko cure krne k liye aarav ko uske sath kuchi ku karna padega... Magar bina kisi bond ke aarav karna ni chahta...
( Ishika abhi hospital mai hai... Aarav opposite sex ki soul ko purify kar sakta hai... But ishika kya iske liye taiyar hogi... Isliye aarav unke beech bond banne ka wait kar raha hai... )

31- Soul clan barbaad hote time Aarav ki bua ko ek beti Hui thi...
( Iske baare mai abhi kuch bhi pata nahi hai... Ek Random guess karun toh yeh Aakash ki wife Saanvi ho sakti hai... Woh bhi soul binding use kar sakti hai )

32- Aarav ke pass do core hai.. jiski wajah se woh 25 saal ke baad bhi soul purifier hone ke baad bhi survive kar saka hai... Qkuki uske dono core power equally divide kar rahe the...
( Note karne waala point nahi nahi toh Varsha ne toh sab baad ke liye chod diya tha... Jo hoga dekha jayega... Isliye Aarav 25 ke baad bhi survive kar gaya hai... )

33- wind clan ki ek branch Paris mai bani hai jiska leader George hai...
( Paris = France Jaha Varsha ke saath Saath Aarav aur Aakash ne bhi New syani mention bana chuka hai... George?? Aage pata chalega )

34- Clan meeting mai sab leader Spirit clan ko khatam kar dena chahte the magar Tasubme ne sab ko saaf keh diya ki jo bhi spirit clan ke against jayega usko Wind clan se saamna karna padega... Jisse sun sab sant ho gye... Wohi Fire Clan leader chup kar sab sun raha tha aur sabki haalat par hass bhi raha tha...
( Confirm hai yeh chup kar sunne waala aur koi nahi Soo-hyun hi hai... Uski power seal hai shyad isliye chup raha ho... Magar ab cheezen saaf hai story Fire clan mai jaane waali hai... Jaha aarav bhi lawful banker Micheal aur association ki bhi madat karega... )

35- Barbie Darkness Clan ka leader candidate tha... Jisse Aakash ne uske clan se Haanah ke saath bachaya...
( Iski story abhi saamne aayi nahi hai... Possibly Hannah aarav ko sab btayegi... )

36- Elite Group ne Aakash aur Veer par humla kiya tha... Jiske baad undono ne uske half masters ko maar diya saath hi aakash ne leader ko bhi maar diya...
( Elite Group abhi tak nahi pata chala iske peeche kon hai mastermind... Saath hi aakash ne leader ko maar diya... Aage dekhna hoga isko bhi )

37- Tarun ke liye Uske pita jo Duniya me sabse shaktishali ban sate the unhone apni power chod di...
( Shayad Yaha Mother spirit ki baat kaha Tarun ne... Jo Shubham ne Tarun ke ander seal kar di thi )

38- Tasubme ko 5 spirit clan ke users ke baare mai pata hai 6 th uske hisaab se aarav hai...
( Tasubme 5 spirit clan user kon ho sakte hai... Maybe wohi ho jinhone wind clan ki madad ki thi... )

39- Evil God heart ko fill krne ke baad aarav ke status 34% unlock ho gye the saath hi dono core ko aarav ek saath use kar sakta hai...
( Yeh stat unlock kaafi confusing hai... 34+ 30= 64 % stats abhi aarav ke unlock hone chahiye... )

40- System Bazar ke monarch aarav ko 70% discount par saaman offer kiya but what cost??
( Iska abhi pta nahi... But Aarav ne deniy nahi kiya dekhte hai aarav se kaise madad leta hai )

41- protector guild Leader ko Aarav Arya naam se sapne aa rahe hai usne yeh baat Daisuke se cmfm ki... ??
( Sapne kiss tarah ke... Kunle Andrew ka beta... Jisko aarav ne apni family ko protect karne ke liye kaha tha ab aap oh har kisi ko protect kar raha hai... Isko bhi jara Limelight mai daalo... )

42- Spirit Clan ke kuch members ne Wind clan ka saath diya tha... Unki wajah se wind clan sahi salamat hai... ??
( Yeh flashback shayad Tasubme Aarav ko batayegi... Wahi sab cheezen clear hongi... )

43- Barbie ne Kunal ko bataya ke veer ke Marne waalon ka badla uska nahi hai... ?? Uske peeche Elite group tha na... ??
( Elite Group aakhir hai kon yeh... Isse bhi aarav ko badla lena hai.. isne aadmi bheje the Vansh ke pass hospital mai... )

44- Barbie aur Doc ka conversation Barbie ka usko khna dena... Saath me woh saf jahir kar deti h uski shaadi ho chuki h aur seen mai bacchi ko bhi dikhaya gaya hai...
( Aur woh Doc aur koi Nahi Urvi hai... Shaadi bacchi ?? Ab varsha yaa suhani ki ho nahi sakti bachi Urvi... Aarav kaise react karega... Jab use iss baare mai pata chalega... )

45- Kisi Aurat ne Vansh ko madad ki thi Aarav aur uski family ka naam deathpool mai daalne ke liye....
( Elite Group se koi ho sakta hai... Jiska aarav pata laga hi lega... Yaa koi aur hai iske peeche ?? )

46- Eliss aur Barbie ka kuchi ku tha Hannah ne Aakash se madat maangi thi syad... Vansh ne Hannah ko help ke badle Barbie ko free karne ka promise Kiya tha...
( Eliss yeh shayad wohi hai na Aadarsh ki assistant... Yeh story bhi Hannah aarav se discuss karegi )

47- Mohan Arora toh kaafi Shareef nikla usne Varsha ko saaf sabdo mai keh diya results chahiye no matter what cost... Uske liye Baccho ko cheed faad do yaa khud baccha paida Karo... WOW*
( Don't tell me ki Elite Group iska ho sakta hai... Just sochne ke liye bol diya baaki Arora Family full Villian wives aa rahi hai.. )

48- France mai Bharat ka koi friend rehta tha jisko usne leader ki beti de diya...
( Iska mai pakka nahi keh sakta but mera shakkk kaafi had tak Saanvi par jaa raha hai... Uski story sunker bhi aisa hi laga... )

49- Singh family ne Ankush ki madat ki unki band factory mai Lab banane ke liye...
( Possibly yeh wohi factory hai jo Veer ne aarav ke liye banayi thi usme Kaafi saare equipment ke saath rooms the... Medical rooms bhi... )

50*- Aakash ke power se soul manarch aarav bhi chonk gaya... Saath hi uske hath par koi symbol bana diya....
( Hmmm yeh aage dekhna Banta hai Aakash kiss hadd tak powerfull ho chuka hai... aarav ke puchne par usne nahi btaya ki woh akela Domain ke ander kaise aa gaya... Monarch bhi use amder dekh chonk gaya tha... )

abhi tak ki story ko ek review mai cover nahi kar sakta tha but jo bhi points mere dimaag mai aaye woh likh diye hai... Samar_Singh mera ho gya aap apna dekh lo.. Salty~Otaku iska reply ke liye bhi 2 din diye tumko...
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Abhi complete reply dena ka time nahi hai! Uske liye ap ko wait karna ho ga

Lekin main kuch points clear karu ga

18-according to vanshika Vash pehle theek tha... Aur Uski Ek servent thi Jiska naam Beatrice tha... Fir ek din Vanshika ne Vansh ko Beatrice ke sath dekh liya... Uske baad uske Dad ne Beatrice ko kuch paise dekar door kar diya... WTF??? Beatrice ???
( Ho sakta hai do alag alag character ho... Naam same ho... Jaise story mai do Priya thi... But kaafi shocking cheez thi abhi Beatrice ka pata hone ke baad past mai usne kya Kiya... Agar kuch aisaa hai toh Writer sahab explanation chahiye isper... Haan Beatrice 22 saal ki jarur thi jab woh dubara aarav se mili thi... Jo soch raha hoon waisa na ho bas... )

They're not same! Ye bhi naam 2 baar Use ho gaya hai, Uska reason main de chuka hu.

Actually me mujhe kuch tip of the tongue ki tarha ka hai! I'm not sure why, but it is what it is, Hota kya hai ke sometimes I can't remember something I said or wrote before.

Maybe you've noticed that I sometimes use the same words over and over in my story! that's because a lot of the time I can't recall the right words, so I end up choosing repeated ones.

Sometimes I even forget if I've used a name for a character before or not! So I really appreciate it if you point out little things like that to me.

Writing is fun for me! Likhna ek tarha se mere liye practice ki tarha hai.

It's not anything serious! it's just a part of my life now

Actually main ye story likh raha hu ye he bohat badi baat hai Naam bohat kam yaad rehte hai.


Characters ke naam ke liye kisi se help maangi to usne Beatrice suggest kiya aur main bhi bhool gaya ke ye Naam story me already Used hai

( Iske baare mai abhi kuch bhi pata nahi hai... Ek Random guess karun toh yeh Aakash ki wife Saanvi ho sakti hai... Woh bhi soul binding use kar sakti hai )

Random Guess?

40- System Bazar ke monarch aarav ko 70% discount par saaman offer kiya but what cost??
( Iska abhi pta nahi... But Aarav ne deniy nahi kiya dekhte hai aarav se kaise madad leta hai )

System Bazaar Points

6- Alpha se Aarav ko Devour mila saath hi uski special Unique ability. Limitless. Growth bhi Active ho gayi thi... Jo ki hidden thi...

Alpha se Aarav ko devour nahi mila, Ye bhi Aarav ke paas bachpan se tha.

Remember Aarav ne bacchon ki soul ko devour kiya tha?

( Limitless Growth kaam kaise karti hai abhi bhi confused hoon... Ek tarah se devour ke jaise hai magar usse jayada strong... Iska ek discription de Dena )

Devour ek tarha se target ko puri tarha se khaane ke liye hai, Like unki memories prowess and all that.

Limitless Growth ability and Devour ability work together like a vacuum! Devour is like a suction pump, and Limitless Growth is like the bag in the vacuum where all the “suction” is stored.

But that bag is literally limitless - it can store an unlimited amount! I won't tell you any more about it now, you'll see it in the upcoming updates.

Salty~Otaku Toh iss review ko hum past se start karenge update no.1 se kuch point present se link karenge kuch aane waale future mai humko dekhne ko milega saath hi kuch sawaal aur kuch blunders jo writer sahab se hui hai... Itni badi story likhe likhe ho jaati hai.... Thoda bhut chalta hai... Toh chaliye shuru karte hain....

1:-Aarav urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha...
( Jo ki abhi Urvi Doctor ban chuki hain )

2:- Aarav ko past mai uski maa use chod kar chali gayi thi...
( Lekin Avinash ne uski maa ko kaha tha ki aarav aur urvi ko woh uski maa ki hatya ka jimmedar samjhe... )

3:- Urvi ki best friend Kirti...
( Character start mai tha abhi missing hai... Baad mai kahi iska jikar tak nahi hua... )

4- Ek aadmi jo kankal ban chuka tha uske pass se aarav ko healing potion milta saath hi ek chitthi jisme stone manarch ko jaan se maar Dene ko kaha hai... Koi dushmani yaa dhokha diya gaya hoga..
( Aadmi ke baare mai abhi kuch pta nahi uski stone monarch se kya dushmani thi... Magar jaha tak lagta hai uski maut ke peeche stone monarch ka hath tha... Aarav ne stone monarch se dushmani bhi le li hai... Ab yeh aarav kyun kar raha hai... ?? Aage kya hoga abhi khulasa nahi hua... )


5- Normal users ke pass ek Unique ability hona bhi millions me ek hoti hai... Aarav ke pass 3 hai...
( Abhi aarav ke paas active 5 unique abilities hai jo unlock hai... Baki lock pata nahi... Magar hairaan kar dene ka waali baat hai kisi ke paas ek bhi nahi hoti aarav ke pass itni kaise... Soul binding uske pita se mili will to live uski jinda rehne ki chaah jo woh paida hote time lagbhag mar chuka tha... Aur memonise gaze shayad uski daadi se aur baaki... Baaki ?? )

6- Alpha se Aarav ko Devour mila saath hi uski special Unique ability. Limitless. Growth bhi Active ho gayi thi... Jo ki hidden thi...
( Limitless Growth kaam kaise karti hai abhi bhi confused hoon... Ek tarah se devour ke jaise hai magar usse jayada strong... Iska ek discription de Dena )

7- Aarti another character jisne Aarav ko maafi maangne ko kaha tha Neel se.... Jisse baad mai Aakash ne defend kiya... Magar Aadarsh ne Aarti aur Vansh se kuch baat ki jo pta nhi...
( Yeh Raaz bhi unhi ke saath chala gaya Aarav ke baare mai batya hoga usne Aakash ki kaise help ki... Aadarsh aur Special Aarti itni jaldi Mar gaye??? Abhi body unki mili nahi kisi ko... Kya pata woh bhi chup kar baithe ho Vanshika ke jaise... )

8-Aakash theek hone ke bad jab ghar wapis gaya toh aarav se door hone ke chalte woh emotionless ho gaya tha... Magar jab Aarav ek bar fir wapis aaya toh Aakash ke emotions wapis aa gye... Saath hi aakash apni maa Ko kehta hai Aarav Aur Vanshika ki Jodi kaafi aachi lagti hai... Maa bhi uska ishara samjh kehta haan kaafi aachi lagti hai...
( Aakash Ke baare mai kya hi bolo abhi iska character ke baare mai kuch pata nahi magar. Aarav ke liye jo pyaar aur dedication hai... Ufff dono ka bond Aakash Aarav... )

9- ek baar fir aarav ki hidden ability Limitless Growth ke chalte usne Tasubme se Ki active karna sekh liya jisse. Woh hairaan reh gayi. Koi itni jaldi kaise kar sakta hai magar aarav ko abhi bhi apni ability ke baare me nahi pta...
( Again Limitless Growth ne Aarav ki help ki Uski Ki energy ko Active karne mai... Need description ! )

10- maa ka sapna tha urvi doctor banne intresting yeh baat aarav ne khud urvi ko boli usko hospital mai admit krte waqt...
( Point Clear hai Aarav kyun urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha... Inko kisi ne 3 idiot movie nahi dikhayi kya... BC doctor ki beti doctor... Abhi Urvi Varsha ke saath reh rahi hai uske Doctor hone se jayada shock nahi laga hoga... )

11- Aakash chahta tha Aarav modelling kare usne director Sammy ko majboor Kiya jiske chalte usko Aarav ko shooting ke liye manana pada...
( Ek baar fir se Aakash Aarav... Aakash Aarav ko modelling mai daalna chahta tha... Aarav bhi khush tha )

12- Urvi ke baad Vanshika woh reason thi jiske liye aarav wapas Zinda aana chahta tha...
( Yeh thoda wrong Number tha Aakash ko dhoka diya aarav ne uska dil hi Tut Gaya hoga... Vanshika ke liye ek baar fir jeena chahta tha... Aur aakash ka kya )

13-Aarav ne issabella ko confess kiya ki uske dil me vanshika h...
( Aakash Aarav... Filhaal Vanshika kaha hai koi idea nahi... Magar jald hi mill hi Jani hai last Neel ne shaadi karke use torcher kiya tha jiski photo Aarav ne Vansh ke past mai dekh chuka tha... Aarav kaise wanha tak phunchta hai dekhne layak hoga ? )

14- Jaha sabka kehna tha spirit clan barbaad ho chuka hai... Wahi Daisuke ki maa Myuki ne use btaya ki spirit clan barbaad nahi hua... Bas unhone sabhi clan se khudko door kar liya hai.... WTF??
( Daisuke ki Maa Myuki ka koi na koi relation toh Hai Spirit clan se... Tasubme ne bhi kaha tha Wind clan sahi salamat uske peeche Spirit clan ka bhut bada haath hai )

15-Tasubme ke pita ne waqt aane par Aarav ko clan mai lane ke liye kaha tha... Qyuki woh dekhna chahte the jise Tasubme ne clan ki technique sikhayi hai woh uss kabil hai yaa nahi...
( Hmmm aarav Derek ke paas jarur jayega... Jo filhaal Japan mai Daisuke ke paas hi hai... Kya aarv ko koi test dena padega ?? )

16-wind clan ki pehli meeting mai 4th elder nahi chahti thi ki Daisuke leader bane... Next meeting mai 3rd elder uske jaise baat kar rahi I think yeh blunder hai...
( Yeh blunder hai chup sakta hai... Koi na hota hai... )

17- Jinhoo Ne Yoo-Jung se badla lene ke Vash ko kuch diya... Jisse Vash kisi Bade player ko backstab kar sake... Uske liye unme sabse shaktishali Yoo-Jung thi... Magar jab uska saamna aarav se hua uski power dekh use wanha se bhagna padd gya...
( Jinhoo ne Vansh ko Spirit water ki drops di thi... Jisko usne aarav ko inject kar diya... But Inn sabke peeche Jinhoo tha yeh abhi aarav ko pta kyun nahi... ??? Aarav ne Vansh ki memory check kar chuka hai ab shayad uska agla Target Jinhoo ho sakta hai... )

18-according to vanshika Vash pehle theek tha... Aur Uski Ek servent thi Jiska naam Beatrice tha... Fir ek din Vanshika ne Vansh ko Beatrice ke sath dekh liya... Uske baad uske Dad ne Beatrice ko kuch paise dekar door kar diya... WTF??? Beatrice ???
( Ho sakta hai do alag alag character ho... Naam same ho... Jaise story mai do Priya thi... But kaafi shocking cheez thi abhi Beatrice ka pata hone ke baad past mai usne kya Kiya... Agar kuch aisaa hai toh Writer sahab explanation chahiye isper... Haan Beatrice 22 saal ki jarur thi jab woh dubara aarav se mili thi... Jo soch raha hoon waisa na ho bas... )

19- Ek aur blunder aarav hexagon se ladne se pehle speech deta hai usme apne pita ka naam abhinav Arya bolta hai Avinash* ki jagh... Aur baad me bhi Ezra Abhinav Abhinav karti. H.... Kaafi confusing h new readers k liye character ka naam hi change kar diya... Perticular update mai...
( Yeh blunder bada hai usko jaake edit kar do kaafi confusing tha dusra naam.. )

20-soo-hyun fire clan se hai jisne Avinash ki madat ki... Jinho starting se hi dalla tha. Yeh toh pata padd hi gya... ELA ek actress thi...
( Soo-hyun , Jinhoo aur ElA abhi inke baare mai kuch nahi pata present mai... )

21- Avinash ne marne se pehle soo-hyun ki power ko apni forbidden technique se seal kar diya...
( ELA ne bhi dhoka diya, Soo- Hyun ki power seal hai... Aare waale arc mai Fire clan se ladai Tay hai )

22- Na-ri joki 4th elder thi usme Yoo-Jung ki Maa ko baazaru kaha sath hi uski behen Yoo-ri par bhi humla kar diya... Toh shayad iss wajah se dono fire clan se alag thi...
( Fire clan iska Raaz toh poora Arc deserve karta hai kaafi saare galat kaamo mai involve hai... Soo-hyun possibly fire clan leader ho sakta hai... Aur aisa dekhe toh Yoo-Jung Soo-hyun ki beti... )

23-Aarav ko jab chain se pakad kar world se expelled kiya jaa raha tha toh usko Slime aur Alpha ki woh. Yaadein dikhti hai jo usne pehle kabhi dekhi nahi thi... Jo lock thi...
( Ab yeh Raaz abhi tak saamne nahi aaya slime aur Alpha ki kon si Yaadein aarav ne dekhi thi ?? )

24- earth par aate hi aarav ke 75% stats seal kar diye gye... Aur saath hi mother spirit se contract sign hone ke baad woh system ke purane incharge jinhone aarav ko infinity prison me bheja saath hi... Aarav ke stat seal kiya unse disconnect hoke ab mother spirit uski manager ban chuki hai...
( Ab koi dubara aarav ko control yaa dubara prision mai nahi bhej sakta... Qki Ab Aarav ka manager khud spirit hai... Jisse woh sabhi ke system se alag ho gyaa hai... Jinhone usko saza di thi )

25-Mia ko dekh kar Aarav ko kisi purani party member ki yaad aa jati h lekin kiski... ???
( Mia , Michael ki beti purani party ki member??? Kon ho sakti hai... Ab Mia Aarav ki guild join karne waali hai... Iss character ka bhi Raaz jald khul jayega.. )

26- Meera ne sabko sujhaav diya Aarav ko uska beta aanouce karne ke liye....
( And guess what shit gone real... But kaise... Pehli meeting mai Aarav ko beta bana kar introduce karna... Meera mist clan se thi... But shayad woh Aarav aur veer ke connection ke baare mai jaanti thi... Usko ghar mai rookne ke liye usne aisa kiya... Baad mai Kunal ne bhi usse kaha ki hue Aarav ko veer ke baare mai bata dena chahiye... Ab veer ki story dekhne ko milegi lagta hai... )

27-Aarav Veer ke bunker jo usne aarav liye banaya tha waha phunch gya... Wanha use pta chala Veer ne khud ka naam Batman rakha aur uske jaise hi Den Aarav ke liye taiyar ki thi... Saath Mai Aarav ke haath ek file aati hai... Corpse naam se... The Kid who supposed to be die... ??
( Aarav ne veer ko pehli baar Batman keh bulaya tha... But yeh Aakash aur Aarav ke beech kyun aa raha hai... love triangle... Again the same file jiska kitni baar jikar ho chuka h... Aarav ne Varsha ka past dekhne se pehle yeh file padh li hogi... Isliye woh jayada hairaan nahi hua jaise use sab pata tha... Isme Aarav ke janam waali baat hi hogi )

28- Aarav ne Micheal ko Tower ke bahar barrier banane ka promise Kiya woh bhi ek saal ke ander...
( Yeh kaam karne Aarav Dubara ek baar Mumbai jayega association tower... Aage aane waale update mai dekhne ko milega... )

29- Aarav ko skeleton ke pass se ek book bhi mili thi jisse rune enclave karke woh mana stone ko battle stone yaa kuch aur bana sakta tha... Jo kaam stone monarch karta tha...
( Stone monarch... Abhi iske baare mai jayada nahi pata but aarav ka dushman ban chuka hai toh Fire clan ke baad agla no. Isi ka hona hai... )

30- Ishika ki soul damage h usko cure krne k liye aarav ko uske sath kuchi ku karna padega... Magar bina kisi bond ke aarav karna ni chahta...
( Ishika abhi hospital mai hai... Aarav opposite sex ki soul ko purify kar sakta hai... But ishika kya iske liye taiyar hogi... Isliye aarav unke beech bond banne ka wait kar raha hai... )

31- Soul clan barbaad hote time Aarav ki bua ko ek beti Hui thi...
( Iske baare mai abhi kuch bhi pata nahi hai... Ek Random guess karun toh yeh Aakash ki wife Saanvi ho sakti hai... Woh bhi soul binding use kar sakti hai )

32- Aarav ke pass do core hai.. jiski wajah se woh 25 saal ke baad bhi soul purifier hone ke baad bhi survive kar saka hai... Qkuki uske dono core power equally divide kar rahe the...
( Note karne waala point nahi nahi toh Varsha ne toh sab baad ke liye chod diya tha... Jo hoga dekha jayega... Isliye Aarav 25 ke baad bhi survive kar gaya hai... )

33- wind clan ki ek branch Paris mai bani hai jiska leader George hai...
( Paris = France Jaha Varsha ke saath Saath Aarav aur Aakash ne bhi New syani mention bana chuka hai... George?? Aage pata chalega )

34- Clan meeting mai sab leader Spirit clan ko khatam kar dena chahte the magar Tasubme ne sab ko saaf keh diya ki jo bhi spirit clan ke against jayega usko Wind clan se saamna karna padega... Jisse sun sab sant ho gye... Wohi Fire Clan leader chup kar sab sun raha tha aur sabki haalat par hass bhi raha tha...
( Confirm hai yeh chup kar sunne waala aur koi nahi Soo-hyun hi hai... Uski power seal hai shyad isliye chup raha ho... Magar ab cheezen saaf hai story Fire clan mai jaane waali hai... Jaha aarav bhi lawful banker Micheal aur association ki bhi madat karega... )

35- Barbie Darkness Clan ka leader candidate tha... Jisse Aakash ne uske clan se Haanah ke saath bachaya...
( Iski story abhi saamne aayi nahi hai... Possibly Hannah aarav ko sab btayegi... )

36- Elite Group ne Aakash aur Veer par humla kiya tha... Jiske baad undono ne uske half masters ko maar diya saath hi aakash ne leader ko bhi maar diya...
( Elite Group abhi tak nahi pata chala iske peeche kon hai mastermind... Saath hi aakash ne leader ko maar diya... Aage dekhna hoga isko bhi )

37- Tarun ke liye Uske pita jo Duniya me sabse shaktishali ban sate the unhone apni power chod di...
( Shayad Yaha Mother spirit ki baat kaha Tarun ne... Jo Shubham ne Tarun ke ander seal kar di thi )

38- Tasubme ko 5 spirit clan ke users ke baare mai pata hai 6 th uske hisaab se aarav hai...
( Tasubme 5 spirit clan user kon ho sakte hai... Maybe wohi ho jinhone wind clan ki madad ki thi... )

39- Evil God heart ko fill krne ke baad aarav ke status 34% unlock ho gye the saath hi dono core ko aarav ek saath use kar sakta hai...
( Yeh stat unlock kaafi confusing hai... 34+ 30= 64 % stats abhi aarav ke unlock hone chahiye... )

40- System Bazar ke monarch aarav ko 70% discount par saaman offer kiya but what cost??
( Iska abhi pta nahi... But Aarav ne deniy nahi kiya dekhte hai aarav se kaise madad leta hai )

41- protector guild Leader ko Aarav Arya naam se sapne aa rahe hai usne yeh baat Daisuke se cmfm ki... ??
( Sapne kiss tarah ke... Kunle Andrew ka beta... Jisko aarav ne apni family ko protect karne ke liye kaha tha ab aap oh har kisi ko protect kar raha hai... Isko bhi jara Limelight mai daalo... )

42- Spirit Clan ke kuch members ne Wind clan ka saath diya tha... Unki wajah se wind clan sahi salamat hai... ??
( Yeh flashback shayad Tasubme Aarav ko batayegi... Wahi sab cheezen clear hongi... )

43- Barbie ne Kunal ko bataya ke veer ke Marne waalon ka badla uska nahi hai... ?? Uske peeche Elite group tha na... ??
( Elite Group aakhir hai kon yeh... Isse bhi aarav ko badla lena hai.. isne aadmi bheje the Vansh ke pass hospital mai... )

44- Barbie aur Doc ka conversation Barbie ka usko khna dena... Saath me woh saf jahir kar deti h uski shaadi ho chuki h aur seen mai bacchi ko bhi dikhaya gaya hai...
( Aur woh Doc aur koi Nahi Urvi hai... Shaadi bacchi ?? Ab varsha yaa suhani ki ho nahi sakti bachi Urvi... Aarav kaise react karega... Jab use iss baare mai pata chalega... )

45- Kisi Aurat ne Vansh ko madad ki thi Aarav aur uski family ka naam deathpool mai daalne ke liye....
( Elite Group se koi ho sakta hai... Jiska aarav pata laga hi lega... Yaa koi aur hai iske peeche ?? )

46- Eliss aur Barbie ka kuchi ku tha Hannah ne Aakash se madat maangi thi syad... Vansh ne Hannah ko help ke badle Barbie ko free karne ka promise Kiya tha...
( Eliss yeh shayad wohi hai na Aadarsh ki assistant... Yeh story bhi Hannah aarav se discuss karegi )

47- Mohan Arora toh kaafi Shareef nikla usne Varsha ko saaf sabdo mai keh diya results chahiye no matter what cost... Uske liye Baccho ko cheed faad do yaa khud baccha paida Karo... WOW*
( Don't tell me ki Elite Group iska ho sakta hai... Just sochne ke liye bol diya baaki Arora Family full Villian wives aa rahi hai.. )

48- France mai Bharat ka koi friend rehta tha jisko usne leader ki beti de diya...
( Iska mai pakka nahi keh sakta but mera shakkk kaafi had tak Saanvi par jaa raha hai... Uski story sunker bhi aisa hi laga... )

49- Singh family ne Ankush ki madat ki unki band factory mai Lab banane ke liye...
( Possibly yeh wohi factory hai jo Veer ne aarav ke liye banayi thi usme Kaafi saare equipment ke saath rooms the... Medical rooms bhi... )

50*- Aakash ke power se soul manarch aarav bhi chonk gaya... Saath hi uske hath par koi symbol bana diya....
( Hmmm yeh aage dekhna Banta hai Aakash kiss hadd tak powerfull ho chuka hai... aarav ke puchne par usne nahi btaya ki woh akela Domain ke ander kaise aa gaya... Monarch bhi use amder dekh chonk gaya tha... )

abhi tak ki story ko ek review mai cover nahi kar sakta tha but jo bhi points mere dimaag mai aaye woh likh diye hai... Samar_Singh mera ho gya aap apna dekh lo.. Salty~Otaku iska reply ke liye bhi 2 din diye tumko...
baaki Waiting for next update...

This arc will answer many more of your questions! Most of your questions will be answered in the upcoming updates.


Some of the answers are even in the next update, so I won't be answering most of them now to avoid spoiling the story.

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Abhi complete reply dena ka time nahi hai! Uske liye ap ko wait karna ho ga

Lekin main kuch points clear karu ga

No worries I know update bhi likhna h aapko abhi...

They're not same! Ye bhi naam 2 baar Use ho gaya hai, Uska reason main de chuka hu.

Samjh gaya tha woh but achanak se Beatrice padkar hang ho gaya tha system...

Actually main ye story likh raha hu ye he bohat badi baat hai Naam bohat kam yaad rehte hai.


Characters ke naam ke liye kisi se help maangi to usne Beatrice suggest kiya aur main bhi bhool gaya ke ye Naam story me already Used hai

Random Guess?

Lag raha h uski story ke saath... Soul binding ability abhi koi aur user nhi aaya saamne...

System Bazaar Points

Mujhe laga kuch aur kaam se aaya tha...

Alpha se Aarav ko devour nahi mila, Ye bhi Aarav ke paas bachpan se tha.

Remember Aarav ne bacchon ki soul ko devour kiya tha?

But uske pack mai use karne ke liye toh Alpha ko jab haraya tab system ne uske liye suitable ability di thi...

Devour ek tarha se target ko puri tarha se khaane ke liye hai, Like unki memories prowess and all that.

Limitless Growth ability and Devour ability work together like a vacuum! Devour is like a suction pump, and Limitless Growth is like the bag in the vacuum where all the “suction” is stored.

But that bag is literally limitless - it can store an unlimited amount! I won't tell you any more about it now, you'll see it in the upcoming updates.

Okies... Aage pta hi chal jayega... Puchta nahi agar card ka discription rehta toh but woh bhi hidden rakha hai abhi... But kaafi hadd tak samjh gaya...

This arc will answer many more of your questions! Most of your questions will be answered in the upcoming updates.


Some of the answers are even in the next update, so I won't be answering most of them now to avoid spoiling the story.

Yuppp lag hi raha hai... Next story jaise chal rahi... Fire clan ki taraf jayegi... Baaki update mai pata chal hi jayega...

 

[Salty~Otaku]

But uske pack mai use karne ke liye toh Alpha ko jab haraya tab system ne uske liye suitable ability di thi...

Uske liye suitable ability mili he to nahi thi! Ye ek tarha se error ke chalte mili thi, Lekin ye error kyu huwa ye aage clear karu ga.

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Waiting

 

[CjB]

Maaja aa gaya

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Lame excuses time


Update itna late kyu huwa?


Ap sab ko main ne bataya tha ke mera kuch stomach issue chal raha hai! It's been getting better, then it's been coming back, and it's just been a mess.

I didn't want to tell you guys about it, but it's been seriously distracting me

I've been trying to write the update, but it's just been a pain in the ass, Literally

Ab main ne socha tha ke Schedule khatam huwa hai to aise he kuch din rest lene ke baad update likh lu ga, Lekin ab tak kuch khaas aaram aya nahi hai.

Update 1.5K Likha tha kal tak, Abhi bhi utna he hai, Kyu ke subha se halat kuch zyada bigad gayi thi, Ab ego per le ker likhne ki koshish to ker lu, Lekin ghanta complete nahi ho ga.

Update delay ker raha hu! Abhi time nahi dunga, Update kal tak ready ho jaye ga, Last part per inform ker du ga, Abhi ke liye, Sayonara!!!