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Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

Who are your two favorite male characters in this story?


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Salty~Otaku

ᴺᵒ ᴹᵃᵗᵗᵉʳ ᵂʰᵃᵗ ᴵ’ᵐ ᶜˡᵒᶜᵏⁱⁿᵍ ᴼᵘᵗ ᴮʸ ˢⁱˣ
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To wo real soul monarch the jinhone avinash ko soul monarch banaya urvi ko bachaya or wo or koi nahin arav ke par par dadaji the
Yup ~

ab shayd urvi ki memories usko milne ke bad usko sab yad aa jaye ir wo arav ko pehchan le dekhte han ki rakshabandhan arav ke liye kaisa jata ha
I'm Salty~Otaku :VQ: Mujhse ache ki Umeed na lagana :D

Idhar varsha akash ke sath rah rahi thi mujhe to laga tha ye akash mar war gaya hoga lekin ye to jinda nikla
Akash...Seriously? :redface:
lekin varsha abhi to mafi ke kabil nahi ha dekhte han ki rakshabandhan ke din kya hota ha
Varsha ne technically sirf Aarav ke saath he bura kiya tha :anyahide:

Uske intentions Aarav ko hurt karne ke bhi nahi the! Lekin usne Aarav ko phir bhi hurt kiya hai, Lekin Urvi ke saath usne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya :roll:

Idhar last me pure singh parivar ne ayush ko nahi pahchana lekin tanu ne pahchan liya
Kyu ke mostly logo ko pata hai! Sivaye Kunal ke mata pita aur Priya ke baaki sab ko he pata tha :D

Baakiyo ko shaq nahi huwa! Lekin Tanu ko ho gaya, Usne confirm karne ke liye fluffy ka naam galat liya tha :approve:
 

Salty~Otaku

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Kya hi Arc chal raha hai... Ek se badh kr ek raaz saamne aa rahe hain...
Ye Arc tha he sab raaz khulne ke liye! Ye filler type updates hone the, Lekin usko ek Arc ka roop de ker story bhi progress ker rahi hai :approve:
Monarch bhai Arav hai... Zoul monarch
Ancestor of Arav....
Uske hints diye the, Ab kisi ne pick nahi kiye to main kya ker sakta hu :catshrug:

Or Ezra ka student Barbie ka Ancestor...
Ye aage clear ho ga, Bohat lambi khichdi bane gi :D

Urvi to hai pr woh Urvi nhi hai...
Matlab body to Urvi ki hai pr usme pehle waali Urvi nhi hai...
Exactly :yo:
Or jahan tak baat un memory fragments ki hai to Shayad Arav selfish naa bante huwe unka use nhi Kare ga...
Exactly :D

Atleast tab tak to nahi jab tak koi emergency naa ho jaye or koi doosra option nhi bache....
Tab tak ke liye bhi umeed nahi rehne di :notme:
ARAV is Urvi k saath new memories banaane ki try kare ga jisme woh uska Acha Bhai or protector ban sake....
Protector :approve: Bhai :noo:

Tanu to sachme Arav se kaafi zeyaada attach ho gyiii hai...
Ayush ko koi family waala pehchaan nhi paaya pr uske kuch hi pal m pehchaan liya k ye Arav nhi hai...
Yup :approve:
Haan lagta bhi hai k zabardasti hi ye update diya gaya hai😂
Ye raaz kon khol raha hai :esc:
 

Salty~Otaku

ᴺᵒ ᴹᵃᵗᵗᵉʳ ᵂʰᵃᵗ ᴵ’ᵐ ᶜˡᵒᶜᵏⁱⁿᵍ ᴼᵘᵗ ᴮʸ ˢⁱˣ
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Itni badi story likhe likhe ho jaati hai.... Thoda bhut chalta hai... Toh chaliye shuru karte hain....
Bohat huwi hai, Mostly spelling mistakes aur repeated words ki ho gi :redface:

1:-Aarav urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha...
( Jo ki abhi Urvi Doctor ban chuki hain )
Kyu ke tab Aarav ke paas Varsha ki sirf achi memories he thi! Usko Varsha ka sach Avinash ke marne ke baad pata laga tha :declare:
Aarav ko past mai uski maa use chod kar chali gayi thi...
( Lekin Avinash ne uski maa ko kaha tha ki aarav aur urvi ko woh uski maa ki hatya ka jimmedar samjhe... )
Kinda :approve: Ye he kaaran tha ke Avinash Aarav aur Urvi se duri bana saka :declare:

Urvi ki best friend Kirti...
( Character start mai tha abhi missing hai... Baad mai kahi iska jikar tak nahi hua... )
Uska character Shuruaat ke liye he tha! Uska abhi bhi role bana sakta tha, Lekin ye karta to Readers ke liye mushkil ho jata aur story bina baat ke khinch jaati aur uske character se kisi ka utna connection tha bhi nahi to zaroorat he nahi huwi :good:

Ek aadmi jo kankal ban chuka tha uske pass se aarav ko healing potion milta saath hi ek chitthi jisme stone manarch ko jaan se maar Dene ko kaha hai... Koi dushmani yaa dhokha diya gaya hoga..
( Aadmi ke baare mai abhi kuch pta nahi uski stone monarch se kya dushmani thi... Magar jaha tak lagta hai uski maut ke peeche stone monarch ka hath tha... Aarav ne stone monarch se dushmani bhi le li hai... Ab yeh aarav kyun kar raha hai... ?? Aage kya hoga abhi khulasa nahi hua... )
Uski details aage Stone Monarch ke saath he aye gi, Abhi agar kuch batata to tab tak sab kuch he bhool jana tha :D

Aarav ne dushmani leni chahi nahi thi! Lekin agar stone monarch ab khud taange failaye baitha to kya he kiya ja sakta tha :notme: Aarav ne ek tarha se uska challenge accept kiya hai.
Normal users ke pass ek Unique ability hona bhi millions me ek hoti hai... Aarav ke pass 3 hai...
( Abhi aarav ke paas active 5 unique abilities hai jo unlock hai... Baki lock pata nahi... Magar hairaan kar dene ka waali baat hai kisi ke paas ek bhi nahi hoti aarav ke pass itni kaise... Soul binding uske pita se mili will to live uski jinda rehne ki chaah jo woh paida hote time lagbhag mar chuka tha... Aur memonise gaze shayad uski daadi se aur baaki... Baaki ?? )
Aarav ne Devour ka tab Use kiya tha jab usne Aakash aur Veer ke andar se unke bhaiyon ki soul devour ki thi aur Limitless Growth ke saath he Aarav ka janam huwa tha aur baaki abilities Aarav ne Devour ke saath Infinity prison ke monster's se li thi :declare:

Ye he kaaran tha ke Aarav ki original abilities ke sivaye baaki sab destroy ho gayi thi :approve:

Aarti another character jisne Aarav ko maafi maangne ko kaha tha Neel se.... Jisse baad mai Aakash ne defend kiya... Magar Aadarsh ne Aarti aur Vansh se kuch baat ki jo pta nhi...
( Yeh Raaz bhi unhi ke saath chala gaya🤣🤣 Aarav ke baare mai batya hoga usne Aakash ki kaise help ki... Aadarsh aur Special Aarti itni jaldi Mar gaye??? Abhi body unki mili nahi kisi ko... Kya pata woh bhi chup kar baithe ho Vanshika ke jaise... )
I don't remember that scene! Lekin agar likha tha to Aarav ke udhar hone ke baare me he bataya ho ga, Kyu ke Aakash pehle se jaanta tha ke Aarav kyu aya hai aur Vanshika ko kuch batane ka kuch reason nahi tha.

Aarti ka character bhi story ke liye necessary nahi tha to usko offscreen he uda diya, Uska role sirf first Arc me he tha :approve:

Aakash theek hone ke bad jab ghar wapis gaya toh aarav se door hone ke chalte woh emotionless ho gaya tha... Magar jab Aarav ek bar fir wapis aaya toh Aakash ke emotions wapis aa gye... Saath hi aakash apni maa Ko kehta hai Aarav Aur Vanshika ki Jodi kaafi aachi lagti hai... Maa bhi uska ishara samjh kehta haan kaafi aachi lagti hai...
( Aakash Ke baare mai kya hi bolo abhi iska character ke baare mai kuch pata nahi magar. Aarav ke liye jo pyaar aur dedication hai... Ufff dono ka bond Aakash ❤️ Aarav... )
Aakash aur Aarav ka character 3 idiots ke Rancho aur Farhan ki tarha daikh rahe ho kya? :laugh:

Aakash actual me autistic tha, Usko ab tak Aarav ke sivaye kisi ko haath lagate bhi daikha hai kya? Sirf uss moment ko chhod ker jab usne Literally Vansh ki gaand maar di thi :D
ek baar fir aarav ki hidden ability Limitless Growth ke chalte usne Tasubme se Ki active karna sekh liya jisse. Woh hairaan reh gayi. Koi itni jaldi kaise kar sakta hai magar aarav ko abhi bhi apni ability ke baare me nahi pta...
( Again Limitless Growth ne Aarav ki help ki Uski Ki energy ko Active karne mai... Need description ! )
Limitless Growth puri tarha se Aarav ke control me nahi hai! Lekin Aarav ke andar kabhi kabhi kisi bhi prakar ki energy ka overload hone se bachati hai...Kyu ke extra energy udhar nikal jaati hai :declare:
maa ka sapna tha urvi doctor banne intresting yeh baat aarav ne khud urvi ko boli usko hospital mai admit krte waqt...
( Point Clear hai Aarav kyun urvi ko doctor banana chahta tha... Inko kisi ne 3 idiot movie nahi dikhayi kya... BC doctor ki beti doctor... Abhi Urvi Varsha ke saath reh rahi hai uske Doctor hone se jayada shock nahi laga hoga... )
Clan Leader ka beta bhi to Clan Leader bana hai, Ye duniya aise he chalti hai babu moshai :sigh: Hum khud baap ka dhandha sambhalne ko baithe hai :laughing: I'm stuck in matrix :drown:
Aakash chahta tha Aarav modelling kare usne director Sammy ko majboor Kiya jiske chalte usko Aarav ko shooting ke liye manana pada...
( Ek baar fir se Aakash ❤️ Aarav... Aakash Aarav ko modelling mai daalna chahta tha... Aarav bhi khush tha )
Ye :turngay: lover kab se ho gye ap? :redface: Lekin Aakash ke liye to ho bhi sakte ho :blush:
Urvi ke baad Vanshika woh reason thi jiske liye aarav wapas Zinda aana chahta tha...
( Yeh thoda wrong Number tha Aakash ko dhoka diya aarav ne uska dil hi Tut Gaya hoga... Vanshika ke liye ek baar fir jeena chahta tha... Aur aakash ka kya 💔 )
Aakash confession me late ho gaya tha :verysad: Uske batane ke time tak to uski behan per dil haar gye the :sigh2:
13-Aarav ne issabella ko confess kiya ki uske dil me vanshika h...
( Aakash 💔 Aarav... Filhaal Vanshika kaha hai koi idea nahi... Magar jald hi mill hi Jani hai last Neel ne shaadi karke use torcher kiya tha jiski photo Aarav ne Vansh ke past mai dekh chuka tha... Aarav kaise wanha tak phunchta hai dekhne layak hoga ? )
Soon ~
Jaha sabka kehna tha spirit clan barbaad ho chuka hai... Wahi Daisuke ki maa Myuki ne use btaya ki spirit clan barbaad nahi hua... Bas unhone sabhi clan se khudko door kar liya hai.... WTF??
( Daisuke ki Maa Myuki ka koi na koi relation toh Hai Spirit clan se... Tasubme ne bhi kaha tha Wind clan sahi salamat uske peeche Spirit clan ka bhut bada haath hai )
Explained :yo:
Tasubme ke pita ne waqt aane par Aarav ko clan mai lane ke liye kaha tha... Qyuki woh dekhna chahte the jise Tasubme ne clan ki technique sikhayi hai woh uss kabil hai yaa nahi...
( Hmmm aarav Derek ke paas jarur jayega... Jo filhaal Japan mai Daisuke ke paas hi hai... Kya aarv ko koi test dena padega ?? )
Aur tab Aarav ke clan ke baare me kisi ko pata nahi tha :dazed:

Ab ek clan Leader dusre clan ko kyu Join kare ga? :?:
wind clan ki pehli meeting mai 4th elder nahi chahti thi ki Daisuke leader bane... Next meeting mai 3rd elder uske jaise baat kar rahi I think yeh blunder hai...
( Yeh blunder hai chup sakta hai... Koi na hota hai... 😁 )
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Jinhoo Ne Yoo-Jung se badla lene ke Vash ko kuch diya... Jisse Vash kisi Bade player ko backstab kar sake... Uske liye unme sabse shaktishali Yoo-Jung thi... Magar jab uska saamna aarav se hua uski power dekh use wanha se bhagna padd gya...
( Jinhoo ne Vansh ko Spirit water ki drops di thi... Jisko usne aarav ko inject kar diya... But Inn sabke peeche Jinhoo tha yeh abhi aarav ko pta kyun nahi... ??? Aarav ne Vansh ki memory check kar chuka hai ab shayad uska agla Target Jinhoo ho sakta hai... )
Aarav ko pata hai, Usko ye bhi pata hai ke usko kyu CWD di gayi thi :approve:
18-according to vanshika Vash pehle theek tha... Aur Uski Ek servent thi Jiska naam Beatrice tha... Fir ek din Vanshika ne Vansh ko Beatrice ke sath dekh liya... Uske baad uske Dad ne Beatrice ko kuch paise dekar door kar diya... WTF??? Beatrice ???
( Ho sakta hai do alag alag character ho... Naam same ho... Jaise story mai do Priya thi... But kaafi shocking cheez thi abhi Beatrice ka pata hone ke baad past mai usne kya Kiya... Agar kuch aisaa hai toh Writer sahab explanation chahiye isper... Haan Beatrice 22 saal ki jarur thi jab woh dubara aarav se mili thi... 🤞 Jo soch raha hoon waisa na ho bas... )
Aj edit karta hu :redface: Uska naam (Claudia) Rakh raha hu, Ek baar confirm ker dena ke ye naam already Used to nahi hai kya⁉️
Ek aur blunder aarav hexagon se ladne se pehle speech deta hai usme apne pita ka naam abhinav Arya bolta hai Avinash* ki jagh... Aur baad me bhi Ezra Abhinav Abhinav karti. H.... Kaafi confusing h new readers k liye character ka naam hi change kar diya... Perticular update mai...
( Yeh blunder bada hai usko jaake edit kar do kaafi confusing tha dusra naam.. )
Kyu ke main khud confuse ho gaya tha! Avinash ka naam shuru me Abhinav he socha tha, Lekin Avinash better sound kiya to change ker diya, Lekin edit baad me karne ka soch ker bhool he gaya :laugh:
soo-hyun fire clan se hai jisne Avinash ki madat ki... Jinho starting se hi dalla tha. Yeh toh pata padd hi gya... ELA ek actress thi...
( Soo-hyun , Jinhoo aur ElA abhi inke baare mai kuch nahi pata present mai... )
Vansh ka End abhi huwa hai, Uske beech me ye teeno ate to khichdi ban sakti thi, Unko ye he soch ker mention nahi kya aur unka character aisa nahi hai ke unko bhula diya jaye :approve:
Avinash ne marne se pehle soo-hyun ki power ko apni forbidden technique se seal kar diya...
( ELA ne bhi dhoka diya, Soo- Hyun ki power seal hai... Aare waale arc mai Fire clan se ladai Tay hai )
Maybe or Maybe Not :notme:
Na-ri joki 4th elder thi usme Yoo-Jung ki Maa ko baazaru kaha sath hi uski behen Yoo-ri par bhi humla kar diya... Toh shayad iss wajah se dono fire clan se alag thi...
( Fire clan iska Raaz toh poora Arc deserve karta hai kaafi saare galat kaamo mai involve hai... Soo-hyun possibly fire clan leader ho sakta hai... Aur aisa dekhe toh Yoo-Jung Soo-hyun ki beti... )
Ye Arc kya howe hai? Ek update me he nipta diya :hippi:
Aarav ko jab chain se pakad kar world se expelled kiya jaa raha tha toh usko Slime aur Alpha ki woh. Yaadein dikhti hai jo usne pehle kabhi dekhi nahi thi... Jo lock thi...
( Ab yeh Raaz abhi tak saamne nahi aaya slime aur Alpha ki kon si Yaadein aarav ne dekhi thi ?? )
Unko bhi unki duniya se nikala gaya tha aur uske beech wo kanhi gye the! Wo Infinite prison he thi, Aarav unko pehle daikh nahi saka tha.

Lekin Aarav khud udhar chala gaya to usko access bhi mil gaya, Aise he Avinash ki Monarch time ki kuch memories bhi lock hai samay ane per usko unka access bhi mil jaye ga :approve:
Mia ko dekh kar Aarav ko kisi purani party member ki yaad aa jati h lekin kiski... ???
( Mia , Michael ki beti purani party ki member??? Kon ho sakti hai... Ab Mia Aarav ki guild join karne waali hai... Iss character ka bhi Raaz jald khul jayega.. )
Uski purani party ne Mia ki tarha cold kon thi? :hint:
Meera ne sabko sujhaav diya Aarav ko uska beta aanouce karne ke liye.... 🤔
( And guess what shit gone real... But kaise... Pehli meeting mai Aarav ko beta bana kar introduce karna... Meera mist clan se thi... But shayad woh Aarav aur veer ke connection ke baare mai jaanti thi... Usko ghar mai rookne ke liye usne aisa kiya... Baad mai Kunal ne bhi usse kaha ki hue Aarav ko veer ke baare mai bata dena chahiye... Ab veer ki story dekhne ko milegi lagta hai... )
Kyu ke Meera ko Aarav ki sachai ka pata tha, Usne he Veer ko udhar bheja tha :approve:

Obviously Meera Aarav ke andar apne dusre bete ki soul ko feel ker sakti thi :dazed:
27-Aarav Veer ke bunker jo usne aarav liye banaya tha waha phunch gya... Wanha use pta chala Veer ne khud ka naam Batman rakha aur uske jaise hi Den Aarav ke liye taiyar ki thi... Saath Mai Aarav ke haath ek file aati hai... Corpse naam se... The Kid who supposed to be die... ??
( Aarav ne veer ko pehli baar Batman keh bulaya tha... But yeh Aakash aur Aarav ke beech kyun aa raha hai... 😒😒 love triangle... Again the same file jiska kitni baar jikar ho chuka h... Aarav ne Varsha ka past dekhne se pehle yeh file padh li hogi... Isliye woh jayada hairaan nahi hua jaise use sab pata tha... Isme Aarav ke janam waali baat hi hogi )
Veer ne bhi usko sab nahi bataya tha! Kyu ke usko bhi batane ki permission nahi thi, Aakash aur Veer dono he chahte the ke Aarav sab kuch Varsha ke through he jaane :approve:



Aarav ne Micheal ko Tower ke bahar barrier banane ka promise Kiya woh bhi ek saal ke ander...
( Yeh kaam karne Aarav Dubara ek baar Mumbai jayega association tower... Aage aane waale update mai dekhne ko milega... )
Soon ~ Hint to de he diya hai :roll:
Aarav ko skeleton ke pass se ek book bhi mili thi jisse rune enclave karke woh mana stone ko battle stone yaa kuch aur bana sakta tha... Jo kaam stone monarch karta tha...
( Stone monarch... Abhi iske baare mai jayada nahi pata but aarav ka dushman ban chuka hai toh Fire clan ke baad agla no. Isi ka hona hai... )
:approve:
Ishika ki soul damage h usko cure krne k liye aarav ko uske sath kuchi ku😘😘 karna padega... Magar bina kisi bond ke aarav karna ni chahta...
( Ishika abhi hospital mai hai... Aarav opposite sex ki soul ko purify kar sakta hai... But ishika kya iske liye taiyar hogi... Isliye aarav unke beech bond banne ka wait kar raha hai... )
Very Soon :blush:
Soul clan barbaad hote time Aarav ki bua ko ek beti Hui thi...
( Iske baare mai abhi kuch bhi pata nahi hai... Ek Random guess karun toh yeh Aakash ki wife Saanvi ho sakti hai... Woh bhi soul binding use kar sakti hai )
Yup :approve:
Aarav ke pass do core hai.. jiski wajah se woh 25 saal ke baad bhi soul purifier hone ke baad bhi survive kar saka hai... Qkuki uske dono core power equally divide kar rahe the...
( Note karne waala point nahi nahi toh Varsha ne toh sab baad ke liye chod diya tha... Jo hoga dekha jayega... Isliye Aarav 25 ke baad bhi survive kar gaya hai... )
Aarav bach gaya hai! Lekin 2 core ke kaaran nahi, Usko bhi explain karta hu :sigh:
wind clan ki ek branch Paris mai bani hai jiska leader George hai...
( Paris = France Jaha Varsha ke saath Saath Aarav aur Aakash ne bhi New syani mention bana chuka hai... George?? Aage pata chalega )
:?:
Clan meeting mai sab leader Spirit clan ko khatam kar dena chahte the magar Tasubme ne sab ko saaf keh diya ki jo bhi spirit clan ke against jayega usko Wind clan se saamna karna padega... Jisse sun sab sant ho gye... Wohi Fire Clan leader chup kar sab sun raha tha aur sabki haalat par hass bhi raha tha...
( Confirm hai yeh chup kar sunne waala aur koi nahi Soo-hyun hi hai... Uski power seal hai shyad isliye chup raha ho... Magar ab cheezen saaf hai story Fire clan mai jaane waali hai... Jaha aarav bhi lawful banker Micheal aur association ki bhi madat karega... )
Soo-Hyun Yoo-Jung ka baap nahi hai :buttkick: Ye mistake huwi bhi kaise sab ko? :redface:
Barbie Darkness Clan ka leader candidate tha... Jisse Aakash ne uske clan se Haanah ke saath bachaya...
( Iski story abhi saamne aayi nahi hai... Possibly Hannah aarav ko sab btayegi... )
Aage aye gi :approve:
Elite Group ne Aakash aur Veer par humla kiya tha... Jiske baad undono ne uske half masters ko maar diya saath hi aakash ne leader ko bhi maar diya...
( Elite Group abhi tak nahi pata chala iske peeche kon hai mastermind... Saath hi aakash ne leader ko maar diya... Aage dekhna hoga isko bhi )
Soon ~
Tarun ke liye Uske pita jo Duniya me sabse shaktishali ban sate the unhone apni power chod di...
( Shayad Yaha Mother spirit ki baat kaha Tarun ne... Jo Shubham ne Tarun ke ander seal kar di thi )
Aage explain karunga :approve:
protector guild Leader ko Aarav Arya naam se sapne aa rahe hai usne yeh baat Daisuke se cmfm ki... ??
( Sapne kiss tarah ke... Kunle Andrew ka beta... Jisko aarav ne apni family ko protect karne ke liye kaha tha ab aap oh har kisi ko protect kar raha hai... Isko bhi jara Limelight mai daalo... )
Usne sirf excuse banaya tha :redface: Usko Aarav ke baare ke janana tha :approve:

Barbie ne Kunal ko bataya ke veer ke Marne waalon ka badla uska nahi hai... ?? Uske peeche Elite group tha na... ??
( Elite Group aakhir hai kon yeh... Isse bhi aarav ko badla lena hai.. 🤔🤔 isne aadmi bheje the Vansh ke pass hospital mai... )
Elite Guild ka ek member Aarav ke paas bhi hai :notme:
Kisi Aurat ne Vansh ko madad ki thi Aarav aur uski family ka naam deathpool mai daalne ke liye....
( Elite Group se koi ho sakta hai... Jiska aarav pata laga hi lega... Yaa koi aur hai iske peeche ?? )
Maybe or Maybe not
Eliss aur Barbie ka kuchi ku tha Hannah ne Aakash se madat maangi thi syad... Vansh ne Hannah ko help ke badle Barbie ko free karne ka promise Kiya tha...
( Eliss yeh shayad wohi hai na Aadarsh ki assistant... Yeh story bhi Hannah aarav se discuss karegi )
Yup :approve:
Mohan Arora toh kaafi Shareef nikla usne Varsha ko saaf sabdo mai keh diya results chahiye no matter what cost... Uske liye Baccho ko cheed faad do yaa khud baccha paida Karo... WOW*
( Don't tell me ki Elite Group iska ho sakta hai... Just sochne ke liye bol diya baaki Arora Family full Villian wives aa rahi hai.. )
Maybe or Maybe not :D
Singh family ne Ankush ki madat ki unki band factory mai Lab banane ke liye...
( Possibly yeh wohi factory hai jo Veer ne aarav ke liye banayi thi usme Kaafi saare equipment ke saath rooms the... Medical rooms bhi... )
Veer ne usko gift ki hai, Usme upgrade karne ke baad, Kyu ke Veer usko purani yaadon ke roop me de raha tha :declare:
Aakash ke power se soul manarch aarav bhi chonk gaya... Saath hi uske hath par koi symbol bana diya....
( Hmmm yeh aage dekhna Banta hai Aakash kiss hadd tak powerfull ho chuka hai... aarav ke puchne par usne nahi btaya ki woh akela Domain ke ander kaise aa gaya... Monarch bhi use amder dekh chonk gaya tha... )
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abhi tak ki story ko ek review mai cover nahi kar sakta tha but jo bhi points mere dimaag mai aaye woh likh diye hai... Samar_Singh mera ho gya aap apna dekh lo.. Salty~Otaku iska reply ke liye bhi 2 din diye tumko... 😁😁
baaki Waiting for next update...
Time liya, Kyu most cheeze Updates me clear ho gayi thi, Ab 2-2 baar ek he cheez kyu explain karu ga :dazed:

Baaki ye reply na deta to update me 500 ya 1000 Words likh deta, Readers ab ap ka gala pakad sakte hai agar update late huwa to... Sayonara :ciao:
 

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Bohat huwi hai, Mostly spelling mistakes aur repeated words ki ho gi :redface:
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Kyu ke tab Aarav ke paas Varsha ki sirf achi memories he thi! Usko Varsha ka sach Avinash ke marne ke baad pata laga tha :declare:
Yup relatable..
Kinda :approve: Ye he kaaran tha ke Avinash Aarav aur Urvi se duri bana saka :declare:
But the thing is... Avinash ki Maa ne Aarav aur Urvi ko uski Maa ka hatyara Avinash ko nahi banaya... 🤔 Jo ki aachi baat hi thi...
Uska character Shuruaat ke liye he tha! Uska abhi bhi role bana sakta tha, Lekin ye karta to Readers ke liye mushkil ho jata aur story bina baat ke khinch jaati aur uske character se kisi ka utna connection tha bhi nahi to zaroorat he nahi huwi :good:
Yup.. 🤧
Uski details aage Stone Monarch ke saath he aye gi, Abhi agar kuch batata to tab tak sab kuch he bhool jana tha :D
Very exciting to know about that Crap Skeleton story... 😁😁
Aarav ne dushmani leni chahi nahi thi! Lekin agar stone monarch ab khud taange failaye baitha to kya he kiya ja sakta tha :notme: Aarav ne ek tarha se uska challenge accept kiya hai.

Aarav ne Devour ka tab Use kiya tha jab usne Aakash aur Veer ke andar se unke bhaiyon ki soul devour ki thi aur Limitless Growth ke saath he Aarav ka janam huwa tha aur baaki abilities Aarav ne Devour ke saath Infinity prison ke monster's se li thi :declare:
🤔🤔 Bhut saari hai kya... Jaldi se Main page par update kar dena...
Ye he kaaran tha ke Aarav ki original abilities ke sivaye baaki sab destroy ho gayi thi :approve:
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I don't remember that scene! Lekin agar likha tha to Aarav ke udhar hone ke baare me he bataya ho ga, Kyu ke Aakash pehle se jaanta tha ke Aarav kyu aya hai aur Vanshika ko kuch batane ka kuch reason nahi tha.

Aarti ka character bhi story ke liye necessary nahi tha to usko offscreen he uda diya, Uska role sirf first Arc me he tha :approve:
So basically~ yeh Raaz bhi unhi ke saath chala gaya.. 🤣🤣
Aakash aur Aarav ka character 3 idiots ke Rancho aur Farhan ki tarha daikh rahe ho kya? :laugh:
❤️ 3 idiot is love...
Hint:- ( I am civil engineer )
Aakash actual me autistic tha, Usko ab tak Aarav ke sivaye kisi ko haath lagate bhi daikha hai kya? Sirf uss moment ko chhod ker jab usne Literally Vansh ki gaand maar di thi :D
Yup... Aakash ne Jayda maar dhaad nahi ki but... Uski vibes bhi powerful aura consume karti hai... 😊
Limitless Growth puri tarha se Aarav ke control me nahi hai! Lekin Aarav ke andar kabhi kabhi kisi bhi prakar ki energy ka overload hone se bachati hai...Kyu ke extra energy udhar nikal jaati hai :declare:
🤧🤧 It permanent needs to be hidden...
Clan Leader ka beta bhi to Clan Leader bana hai, Ye duniya aise he chalti hai babu moshai :sigh: Hum khud baap ka dhandha sambhalne ko baithe hai :laughing: I'm stuck in matrix :drown:
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Ye :turngay: lover kab se ho gye ap? :redface: Lekin Aakash ke liye to ho bhi sakte ho :blush:
I just clear how thing should be done... Aakash ne aarav ke liye jo kuch abhi tak kiya hai... 😁😁 Yoo~jung aur Vanshika are Far away from their...
Aakash confession me late ho gaya tha :verysad: Uske batane ke time tak to uski behan per dil haar gye the :sigh2:
Can feel it's pain.. 💔
Noted.. ✌️
Explained :yo:

Aur tab Aarav ke clan ke baare me kisi ko pata nahi tha :dazed:

Ab ek clan Leader dusre clan ko kyu Join kare ga? :?:
Seen create Krna kon si badi baat hai... 😁😁Clan join na sahi face off toh definitely possible h... Unless character jivit ho... Kyuki murde aksar baat nahi karte... 🤣🤣
Content ka kuch error aa raha hai! Purana content search nahi ho raha, Ek baar check ker batata hu.
It was... Pehle pta hota update no. Bhi likh deta abhi yaad nhi... 😅😅
Aarav ko pata hai, Usko ye bhi pata hai ke usko kyu CWD di gayi thi :approve:
Yup.. ✌️
Aj edit karta hu :redface: Uska naam (Claudia) Rakh raha hu, Ek baar confirm ker dena ke ye naam already Used to nahi hai kya⁉️
Na yeh naam use nahi hua... But sach mai Claudia Naukrani waala naam hi lag raha hai... 🤣🤣
Kyu ke main khud confuse ho gaya tha! Avinash ka naam shuru me Abhinav he socha tha, Lekin Avinash better sound kiya to change ker diya, Lekin edit baad me karne ka soch ker bhool he gaya :laugh:
✌️ Then do it now.. 😁😁
Vansh ka End abhi huwa hai, Uske beech me ye teeno ate to khichdi ban sakti thi, Unko ye he soch ker mention nahi kya aur unka character aisa nahi hai ke unko bhula diya jaye :approve:
Definitely wanna see that bitch ELA... Maybe or maybe not... ELA was the one who named Aarav's family and friends in Deathpool... Coz... Their is also female... It's just an assumption... 😁😁
Maybe or Maybe Not :notme:
😒 Freking bastard Bach Gaya kya..
Ye Arc kya howe hai? Ek update me he nipta diya :hippi:
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Unko bhi unki duniya se nikala gaya tha aur uske beech wo kanhi gye the! Wo Infinite prison he thi, Aarav unko pehle daikh nahi saka tha.

Lekin Aarav khud udhar chala gaya to usko access bhi mil gaya, Aise he Avinash ki Monarch time ki kuch memories bhi lock hai samay ane per usko unka access bhi mil jaye ga :approve:
👍 Good stuff to know...
Uski purani party ne Mia ki tarha cold kon thi? :hint:
Yoo~jung Freking Luna... ☠️
Kyu ke Meera ko Aarav ki sachai ka pata tha, Usne he Veer ko udhar bheja tha :approve:

Obviously Meera Aarav ke andar apne dusre bete ki soul ko feel ker sakti thi :dazed:
🤔 Iss angle se socha hi nahi... Mera bhi clan se h toh woh feel kar gayi thi apne bete ki soul ko... 👍
Veer ne bhi usko sab nahi bataya tha! Kyu ke usko bhi batane ki permission nahi thi, Aakash aur Veer dono he chahte the ke Aarav sab kuch Varsha ke through he jaane :approve:
😌 Jo ki theek tha...
Soon ~ Hint to de he diya hai :roll:
Yup waiting...😁
:approve:

Very Soon :blush:

Yup :approve:
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Aarav bach gaya hai! Lekin 2 core ke kaaran nahi, Usko bhi explain karta hu :sigh:
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:?:

Soo-Hyun Yoo-Jung ka baap nahi hai :buttkick: Ye mistake huwi bhi kaise sab ko? :redface:
It was all assumption... Kuch correct hoti hai kuch nahi... 😁😁
Aage aye gi :approve:

Soon ~

Aage explain karunga :approve:

Usne sirf excuse banaya tha :redface: Usko Aarav ke baare ke janana tha :approve:
Ayeeen..😕
Elite Guild ka ek member Aarav ke paas bhi hai :notme:
😒 Ab yeh kon hai...
Maybe or Maybe not

Yup :approve:

Maybe or Maybe not :D
Most suspicious person toh Arora hi h... Elite group ke peeche... It will be very surprising if someone else... 😁😁
Veer ne usko gift ki hai, Usme upgrade karne ke baad, Kyu ke Veer usko purani yaadon ke roop me de raha tha :declare:
🤔 Veer... Noted... Next few update veer ki story dekhne ko milegi... jab tak arc hai forged bonds... 😁😁
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Time liya, Kyu most cheeze Updates me clear ho gayi thi, Ab 2-2 baar ek he cheez kyu explain karu ga :dazed:

Baaki ye reply na deta to update me 500 ya 1000 Words likh deta, Readers ab ap ka gala pakad sakte hai agar update late huwa to... Sayonara :ciao:
Woh sab theek h cheezen mere uper mat daalo... 😒😒.. kuch waiting waale mere peeche pad gye toh ho gya kaam...
 
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But the thing is... Avinash ki Maa ne Aarav aur Urvi ko uski Maa ka hatyara Avinash ko nahi banaya... 🤔 Jo ki aachi baat hi thi...
Avinash ne hatyara banane ko kaha bhi nahi tha, Usne blame karne ke liye kaha tha :approve:
Seen create Krna kon si badi baat hai... 😁😁Clan join na sahi face off toh definitely possible h... Unless character jivit ho... Kyuki murde aksar baat nahi karte... 🤣🤣
Lekin wohi baat ho jaye gi na ke story ko khinch raha hu, Unnecessary scenes ko kitna kam rakh saku utna kam rakhne ki koshish ker raha hu, Kyu ke iske baad 2 aur stories bhi pending per hai.

❤️ 3 idiot is love...
Hint:- ( I am civil engineer )
Main reveal nahi karu ga :shy:
Na yeh naam use nahi hua... But sach mai Claudia Naukrani waala naam hi lag raha hai... 🤣🤣
India nahi tha ke naukar ka naam kamla ya shaanti bai ho ga, Ab naam sochte huwe profession to nahi socha tha na? :laughing: Aur claudia naukarani nahi Vanshika ki caretaker thi, Like a babysitter :declare:
✌️ Then do it now.. 😁😁
Kal karu ga :notme:
Woh sab theek h cheezen mere uper mat daalo... 😒😒.. kuch waiting waale mere peeche pad gye toh ho gya kaam...
Ab to daal di...Btw ye page itna lamba ho gaya hai ke log Update samajh ke confuse ho jaye gye :lol1:
 

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Still waiting :shy:
After reading all updates got busy in work. 2 naye update bhi nahi padhe abhi.
Will give after reading those. Pehle apni story par update dedu 😁😁

Tab tak ek aur update dedo 🤗🙂
 
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After reading all updates got busy in work. 2 naye update bhi nahi padhe abhi.
Will give after reading those. Pehle apni story par update dedu 😁😁

Tab tak ek aur update dedo 🤗🙂
Update 88 ke reviews ka reply de raha tha! Ap ka comment bhi beech me he tha to keh diya :laugh:

Ap apna time le lo aur sab kaam khatam ker lo, Ye story to yanhi per hai jab bhi samay mile tab aa jana.
 
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